THX A LOTJosh123uaJ wrote:
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We Were Here:
01:32:307 (2,3,4) - I'd make this and other similar triples have a little bit less spacing since it shares the same spacing as 01:44:950 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) but that part has stronger drum sounds. i used spacing triple in every "is the" vocal so i think it's a stable pattern, needn't make a change
01:35:307 (1) - I don't get why this is the only slider in that song that has an anchor. Maybe have anchors in sliders such as 01:40:450 (1) and 01:54:165 (1) since a strong guitar note is being emphasized by the music.i don't know why either but i think it doesn't matter, because no obvious problem if i still use a slider with a anchor
01:47:736 (2) - Small aesthetic suggestion: Make this blanket more to the last slider's head to make it look a little better. fixed
02:19:450 (2) - Small aesthetic suggestion: Make this more curvy like 02:19:022 (1) to make it a bit more appealing.fixed
03:09:744 (1) - From this point in this song, you don't build up spacing for the 5 note streams anymore. Why is that? because vocal is a little stronger than drum but i still follow drum, so the spacing can be a little more stable than before imo
04:52:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd prefer if this builds up spacing due to increasing volume. fixed
05:27:641 (1,2,3,4) - Make it a back and forth like 05:26:025 (1,2,3,4). I liked the pattern switching that was going on. 05:26:025 (1,2,3,4) - at this piont, 05:26:025 (1,2) - 05:26:429 (3,4) - is the same, 05:26:227 (2,4) - is the same, but 05:27:843 (2,3,4) - at this point, 05:27:843 (2,4) - not the same, 05:28:247 (4) - is lower than 05:27:843 (2) - so i don't use the same pattern like before
05:51:784 (1) - Imo, it feels like the shape doesn't belong here. Vocal is pretty clean here. Same with 06:03:946 (3). fixed
08:11:717 (1,2,3,4) - In this stream, the guitar notes get higher pitched. You only build up space from 08:11:325 (1,2,3,4) while the rest stays the same space. I think for these particular 4 notes, you could be have like .60 spacing and then the next four notes you could have the spacing be .80x and then the last four notes could be 1.0x spacing (just at least build some spacing here for the guitar notes). i think it doesn't matter but this is a nice advice :^)
08:45:951 (3,5,7) - I don't think ncs are rly necessary (idk y, it just feels unnecessary for me) i think a strong vocal need a nc
Holy shit nice songs. I'd really like to see this ranked.