Some suggestions. (haha i lied i ended up modding the whole damn thing cuz I love this map)
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[ General]
[ Striking Fire From The Heart of Man]
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[ General]
- You have two unsnapped slider ends 00:37:413 (2) - 04:38:328 (2) - easiest way to fix this is just remove a reverse. Sound is so fast no player would notice.
- 00:53:841 - Two green points with different volume settings exist here. One should be removed.
[ Striking Fire From The Heart of Man]
- 00:55:286 (1) - This doesn't seem to get very much emphasis aside from an NC so maybe have the direction change here instead of at 00:55:376 (2,3) - ?
- 02:06:337 (1,2) - Spacing seems extremely low for such an intense set of sounds. Perhaps try 3x? // 02:09:228 (1,2) - 01:50:441 (1,2) -
- 02:11:668 (1,1) - Uhh, is this intentional? xD If so I don't see a need for it personally, at least for 02:11:668 (1).
- 02:26:393 (1) - Finish intentional? Doesn't seem to happen at 02:29:307 (1). Perhaps change to a whistle instead. Finishes don't seem to fit the song very much.
- 02:58:050 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I think these are the highest intensity jumps in the map but at 01:18:558 they don't reach nearly this level of spacing. Maybe nerf these a bit?
- 02:59:513 (1) - This is a pretty awkward angle to come into, maybe ctrl+g this? Especially considering the next note is under the reverse. If the 2 were above it it would be okay imo.
- 03:36:915 (4,5) - These stood out to me as kind of unnecessary. In the song there is a background piano that does have constant 1/4 but only blending part of it into the layer you're mapping to feels kind of weird. I think you can remove this or if you really want to keep notes here add a kickslider instead? // 03:37:472 (2,3) -
- 04:37:268 (1,1) - This increase of SV feels very sudden and might be a bit surprising to players. Maybe try to lower the SV of 04:38:859 (1) - a bit more?
- 05:04:740 (1,2,1) - If this DS is intentional it looks kind of out of place, could you possibly make it the same ds as the rest of the stream?
- 05:17:940 (1,2) - I understand the progression but 1 is way weaker than 2, and making them stacked gives them both the same emphasis. I think what might work is if you instead stacked 05:17:760 (7,1) - slightly off like so: http://i.imgur.com/HcQCE4z.png or by just unstacking them and using regular spacing emphasis because what you have now kind of threw me off. The stack anyways forces a stop in movement which is very weird when it only happens on the first set of two and not on the rest, you know?
- 05:32:263 (1,2) - This also caught my ear as the 2 isn't very audible in the song, in fact I'd dare to say it doesn't exist and is just a continuation of the background piano. In which case I'd recommend removing it and extending the 1 instead to cover that note.
- 06:13:611 (4,1) - Spacing increase felt a little too underwhelming when the song picks up much faster. Perhaps space 06:13:521 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - slightly more? Could be said for all the streams here, they felt a little bit weak compared to what the song is doing. You're definitely not afraid of going bonkers like 06:23:095 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - so a little buff wouldn't hurt, right?
- 06:32:714 (1,1,1) - How about, to go with the decrease in pitch, you do something like this: http://i.imgur.com/ZAuFVCK.jpg might be a cool effect considering the downwards spiral has to do with pitch as well (and is pretty damn cool).
- 06:47:882 (3) - This slider whistle is probably a mistake.
- 06:54:770 (1,1) - Might do nicely with a lot more spacing because for me the song is calling for a lot of emphasis on these notes, but the player doesn't really need to move much to hit them.
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