from my queue
01:06:042 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think this is quite too hard..even far more harder than kiai
02:01:528 (7) - tail's sound is strong both in drum and vocal, so I think changing 02:01:382 (6,7) - to slider-circle is better.
03:11:576 (8) - used whistle before and using it again make a bit heavy sound..you can use another sound.
03:50:605 (3) - sound is isn't that high, but spacing is quite large.
04:01:819 (2) - how about ctrl G this? you can emphasize 04:02:256 (3) - 's sound.
05:15:799 (1) - I can't know why you missed this beat.
05:16:382 (5,1,2) - this flow is to linear so 05:16:528 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern's intention isn't fully shown i think.
I thought this map's spacing difficulty change is a bit wrong. sometimes Kiai was far easier than other part, sometimes difficulty was different in parts with same tension of song.
this map is cool tho i like it
good luck~
HOSHI
00:01:965 - I can see you're following vocal, but this is really strong drumbeat. how about at least making 00:01:819 (5) - to 1/2 slider?01:06:042 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think this is quite too hard..even far more harder than kiai
02:01:528 (7) - tail's sound is strong both in drum and vocal, so I think changing 02:01:382 (6,7) - to slider-circle is better.
03:11:576 (8) - used whistle before and using it again make a bit heavy sound..you can use another sound.
03:50:605 (3) - sound is isn't that high, but spacing is quite large.
04:01:819 (2) - how about ctrl G this? you can emphasize 04:02:256 (3) - 's sound.
05:15:799 (1) - I can't know why you missed this beat.
05:16:382 (5,1,2) - this flow is to linear so 05:16:528 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern's intention isn't fully shown i think.
I thought this map's spacing difficulty change is a bit wrong. sometimes Kiai was far easier than other part, sometimes difficulty was different in parts with same tension of song.
this map is cool tho i like it
good luck~