Beomsan wrote:

真棒

Beomsan wrote:

真棒

sahuang wrote:

[General]

1. 01:01:965 - 01:33:421 - timing line unsnap Fixed
   HP感觉高了点，6-6.5即可。OD倒是可以高一点不过这个无所谓啦 那6.5吧，想想毕竟ex还是别太低

[Hoshi]

1. 开头的NC可以整齐一点？00:01:819 (5,1) - swap, 00:15:945 (5) - NC 好
2. 00:18:275 (1,2) - 这个节奏不好，这边很清晰的有女声vocal应该跟，00:18:566 - 00:18:858 - 00:19:149 - 这三个可以搞一个折返，然后00:18:275 - 一个圈？现在这样有点不知道在跟啥，男声太弱惹
   嗯这个在之前的摸里面也有很多人提到过。这里我的想法是：因为首先本身00:17:110 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 是一个整体梗，如果跟女声的话势必第三个的地方会和前两个的处理不一样，整体性就没有了；此外本段后面接的一段属于缓和段，因此我觉得有必要用一个慢滑条带过去作为过渡，虽然很弱但也做到了让男声部分有一个比较完整的段落结尾；而如果这里跟女声的话男声就会少一句，第一段就不太完整了。与此相反的，我在03:42:159 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 类似段落的处理则选择类似你说的这种方式，在03:43:906 (1) - 的地方跟女声，因为这里后面紧跟的段落是一段带鼓点的女声，相比前面来说激烈程度更甚，且前面男声的部分是增强趋势而非减弱，因此在这里我选择的是大跳+女声部分过渡处理。
3. 00:34:295 (1,3) - swap NC，00:36:916 (6) - NC 好
4. 00:44:780 (5,3) - 这俩稍微错开一点吧，一模一样感觉太难反应
   错开特别显乱，而且看着强迫症要犯了orz
5. 00:50:168 (2,3) - 怎么stack了。。 脑袋进水了……改了
6. 01:08:809 (4,5) - 距离稍大，参考01:06:479 (4,5) - 移到302|273试试看 好的/color]
7. 01:12:886 (6,1,2) - 好难o.o 不过作为一个梗也没什么
8. 01:12:159 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感觉不是很合适，应该从01:12:304 - 开始12 123的NC。。。节奏和01:28:615 (1,2,1,2,3) - 差不多，现在123456两个一组感觉稍强行，音乐我没听出这样的12 12 12节奏
   后面应该还是有点1212的感觉的，前面说实话完全是为了配合后面的梗做出来的orz我把nc的位置调到01:12:450 (1) - 了，前面56算作前一个梗的一部分，主要强调后面的1234出来我试了试感觉还行
9. 01:26:285 (7,1) - 可以swap NC 啊这里的nc有提醒变距梗出现的作用……我觉得还是别swap比较好
10. 01:36:333 (1,2) - 这个间距和前后相比太大了点吧？01:34:295 (2,3) - 才这么点
    看着挺大其实实际1那个滑条不用滑全程，基本在3/4的时候就可以判定300了，所以这样来看距离差不多
11. 01:47:693 (7) - 这次居然没有ctrl+G搞读图梗 实在是不敢再搞事了orz
12. 01:51:479 (5) - NC 好
13. 01:51:916 - 圈？ 加了
14. 01:57:013 (4) - g 这里音调是一致的，我觉得用方向一致的滑条更合曲
15. 03:11:867 (1) - 扭好一点啦 已经尽力扭了呜呜呜QwQ
16. 03:19:149 (3,4,1,2) - 这个anti-flow好难。。。感觉三个4连都凹凸反了233
    这里女声的音调很高，应该算是个小高潮部分了，所以刻意放了一个antiflow的连续单点梗增加一下氛围2333
17. 03:47:256 (3,4) - 间距太小 调整了一下
18. 04:52:935 (4,1) - 可以距离大一点 稍微调整了一下，不敢调太大了因为后面本来就跳太厉害
19. 05:10:702 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 好难，主要是读图困难。 挺想保留这个读图梗的;w;
20. 05:12:304 (4,5) - 音乐也没suggest那么大间距吧orz 改小了一些
21. 05:16:528 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 有点敷衍了事的感觉。。首先这个05:16:382 (6,1,2) - flow太直，往右弯一点为好。其次05:16:528 (1,2,1,2) - 间距没必要差那么多。我是觉得结尾放两个正方形更好看来着
    不其实这里我花的时间可能是最多的，至少梗就换了好几种了。正方形之前试过的，我觉得效果并不是很好（可能因为现在的图正方形三角形梗都用太多了没什么创意了）；最后我选择这样处理一是因为节奏上我觉得确实有那种1212往复的感觉而且后段比前段要激烈，这样直线梗最能直接反应出这种节奏变化；二是因为兼顾ctb（毕竟ctb出身），这个梗在ctb里面是个相当杀人的移动梗，放在最后尾杀我觉得还挺不错的（被炸飞）

拒绝speedrank x.x 不过真的好神啊啊啊 啊啊啊啊求recheck呜呜呜呜QwQ

Lasse wrote:

soft-sliderslide4 gets shown as unused, but 04:22:499 - section uses it so no problem there
I see kwan checked metadata already so that should be fine

00:04:732 (5) - what is this mapped to? pretty sure you wanted this to be on 00:04:877 - for piano lol
lol yea, fixed
00:18:712 (2) - vocal snapping is kinda weird here so this feels really off. male vocal somehow sounds more like it would be on 00:18:761 - or map the other one on white tick?
hmm that's the point...it seems that the male vocal is off the main rhythm here...Okay I decide to add a 1/4 slider in 00:18:858 (2) - as well. Thanks god that weird male vocal is so weak that could also be ignored. Hope it's better this time.
00:41:576 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - great <3
00:46:382 (2) - why is this such a huge jump? No vocal and just basic drum beat doesn't really justify this. and the spacing of surrounding objetcs is much lower so this stands out even though it shouldnt
Yes you're right, decreased the jump already.
00:52:062 (1) - no idea why this is suddenly mapped as reverse slider? it's liek the only one in the whole part
Well not sure if it is my personal feeling, but it seems the snare sound in 00:52:207 - could be heard much clearer than that in 01:48:130 - 03:02:693 - and 04:54:537 (2) - . So I choose to keep it sry
01:09:683 - rhythm on this feels kinda off with how drums and vocals go. maybe http://i.imgur.com/DZvdzpF.jpg or
Okay, fixed as you said
01:20:751 (6,7,1) - sudden drop in spacing doesnt really work here I think. maybe you can rearrange 6/7 ?
Yea okay rearranged this part...Hope it better now.
01:29:343 (1) - how about comboing like http://i.imgur.com/yCejQmd.jpg ? would make the downbeat stand out more and look nice too
Okay, fixed~
01:47:547 (6,7) - just feels so wrong to play with all the movement the pattern before builds up : ( think stacking like http://i.imgur.com/C5cQVJp.jpg would work better with the song if you insist on keeping a stack here.
Okay I renounce the use of stack here. Maybe 1.3x ds would be better?
02:24:974 (4,1,2) - movement here feels so forced because it's kinda linear with so many spacing changes
ummm I think it's okay to play tho sry no fixed here
02:57:887 (1,3,4) - check this with stacking, looks weird ingame. should manually move 02:58:615 (3,4) - to fix
03:20:023 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ autostack kinda breaks your pattern here, really noticeable cause 2-3 gets no followpoint while all others do. maybe you can do a manual stack to left? http://i.imgur.com/WbShU7B.jpg
03:24:683 (1,2,1,2,3) - more of ^
Well I changed the stack leniency to 2 now and it looks much much better ;w;
04:10:848 (4) - higher spacing would really help with reading this rhythm here, like you did on 04:05:751 (3,4) -
Okay increased the space
04:48:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nice! <333
04:58:469 (5) - movement into this slider feels so forced cause it completely breaks everything from before, why not something like http://i.imgur.com/IVhyChH.jpg
Yup fixed~

sure it was only submitted a week ago, but it's a nice map and got quite some mods already, so feel free to call me for a recheck

soft-sliderslide4 gets shown as unused, but 04:22:499 - section uses it

Beomsan wrote:

gratz

nika mika wrote:

很想摸（
然而实力不够……其实是没多少时间仔细摸
如果11月左右还没火没心（肯定火了心了Q了还全是10分）我就跑回来填坑！真的！放鸽子也不敢放S神鸽子！
嘿嘿，给颗星表示诚意
来晚了，GG

Chaoslitz wrote:

可 達 S ! ! ! 呆 呆 超 ! ! !

[Beyond the Horizon]

1. 01:06:625 (5,1,2) - 這兒對比起 01:05:751 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5)一堆的圈, 節奏上我轉折有點大, 試試把01:06:625 (5) - 換2個1/4滑條? (01:08:955 (5,6,1,2) - 就像這兒節奏也挺密)
   这地方其实是故意这样的，虽然说后面01:08:955 (5,6) - 这里和前面很像，但其实后面这个地方vocal和前面是有差别的。我希望能把这种差别做出来；而且这部分我主要都是在根据人声的缓急变化来下物件和决定ds，这里明显是只有一个拉长的人声所以一个1/2滑条完全足够imo ;w;
2. 01:12:741 (3,4,1,2) - 這兒flow怪怪的, 大概是因為01:13:033 (1,2) - 的距離比之前少而且是在來回的方向
   嗯这地方主要也是考虑做出来vocal的缓急变化，所以某些地方的ds会故意被弄大或者缩小;w;确实是难读一些不过我觉得这种变化还是蛮合曲的;w;
3. 01:14:634 (7,1) - 不用overlap吧? 可能讀錯1/4 qwq (例如 01:31:382 (5,1) - )
   嗯你说的对，改掉了~
4. 01:26:285 (7,1) - NC了不stack比較好吧
   嗯，改了
5. 01:36:333 (1,2) - 好像太遠...orz
   其实第二和第三段kiai的这个部分是用的差不多的ds（第一和第四段是一种），个人test的时候感觉那个长滑条其实不用滑到尾就可以紧接着点下一个物件了（好像是od的缘故？不太清楚），所以实际上的距离并没有看上去那么大;w;
6. 01:54:974 (1,2,3,4) - 這兩個跳的對比...有點大
   嗯，改掉了
7. 02:11:139 (3) - 我覺得這變成兩個圈能夠突出02:11:285 這downbeat
   好，改了
8. 02:20:023 - 把那個綠色的break刪掉
   嗯去掉了
9. 02:20:606 (1,2) - ...按pattern應該ctrl+g
   之前竟然没发现XD改了
10. 02:43:906 (1,2,3) - 跟01:06:625 (5,1,2)差不多
    这里倒是改了，因为前后没有什么对比的需要了~
11. 03:37:790 (2,3,4) - Same as 01:54:974 (1,2,3,4)
    嗯调整了一下

把完整的歌詞也放cw啊( 太长了啊ooorz而且我最喜欢的就是这几句话owo前面很多都太啰嗦了啦XD

Karen wrote:

呆呆超放错了icon