Hi !, 🌀NM or 💑M4M, yours to decide
✨ = Suggestion (Common opinion. No change, no problem)
💧 = Uuhhh? (Something feels wrong around here...)
💥 = Warning !!! (Yu know wat tu du xD )
Here we go...
General
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Hoshi
✨00:18:275 (1,2) - Try to delete (2) then make (1) a reverse, lovelier rhythmic play (like this :03:43:615 (8,9,1) - )
✨00:32:838 (3,2) - Stack miss ?, but me would just grab 00:33:421 (1,2) - so that (2) stacked with it
✨02:10:702 (4) - This can be NC for variety
03:25:266 (4) - ^
✨02:38:955 (9) - I personally (well, most people, me guess xd) don't like it like this. How about like this ?
✨02:54:974 (3,4) - Can please curve them a bit more ? feels neater compared to 02:54:392 (1,2) -
✨02:54:974 (3) - This flow doesn't seemed nice compared to 02:54:683 (2) - . Making 02:54:974 (3) - 's sliderhead at least stacked with 02:55:557 (1) - 's slidertail would much more nicely playable
✨02:59:489 (2,4) - Stack miss
Oke, that's all from me. All e best
✨ = Suggestion (Common opinion. No change, no problem)
💧 = Uuhhh? (Something feels wrong around here...)
💥 = Warning !!! (Yu know wat tu du xD )
Here we go...
✨00:18:275 (1,2) - Try to delete (2) then make (1) a reverse, lovelier rhythmic play (like this :03:43:615 (8,9,1) - )
✨00:32:838 (3,2) - Stack miss ?, but me would just grab 00:33:421 (1,2) - so that (2) stacked with it
✨02:10:702 (4) - This can be NC for variety
03:25:266 (4) - ^
✨02:38:955 (9) - I personally (well, most people, me guess xd) don't like it like this. How about like this ?
✨02:54:974 (3,4) - Can please curve them a bit more ? feels neater compared to 02:54:392 (1,2) -
✨02:54:974 (3) - This flow doesn't seemed nice compared to 02:54:683 (2) - . Making 02:54:974 (3) - 's sliderhead at least stacked with 02:55:557 (1) - 's slidertail would much more nicely playable
✨02:59:489 (2,4) - Stack miss
Oke, that's all from me. All e best