[General]The source should be type correctly, as in the spacing between koumajou and densetsu. Also, is the name of the game (I think) without any caps in front? If not, please change.
Add levesterz to the tags in all diffs, since he/she contributed a guest diff here.
The hitsounds could still need a little more TLC.
Also, please ask for a timing check, coz I think the timing might be off, especially after around 3'00.
[Normal]0'02''283 -> 0'05''645 - I highly recommend that you follow this pattern, instead of following the piano all the way -->
0'11''167 - Add a note here.
0'19''571 - Add a slider that ends at 0'19''811 here.
0'29''175 - Please align notes [1] to [4] in a straight line.
1'05''069 - Move this note to 1'05''190.
1'14''073 - Move this slider to 1'14''313.
1'19''115 - I suggest that the slider here points another way rather than up, since note [5] from before covers it and makes it hard to see,
like so -->
It's also not a good idea to put a note on top of a next slider, except in special situations.
1'28''719 - How about copying slider [1] from before and pasting it here instead? Just rotate the slider (select slider -> Ctrl+Shift+R ->
check 'selection centre' -> Enter 180 into the field -> OK) and reposition it.
1'36''042 - Move this note to 1'36''162 instead.
1'44''086 - Maybe you should shorten this slider, so that it ends at 1'45''046 instead?
2'05''575 - Shorten this slider, and move it so that it ends the same but starts at 2'05''695 instead.
2'14''818 - Maybe extend this slider by adding one more reverse.
2'16''739 - Start new combo here, and...
2'17''460 - Delete the new combo here.
2'51''434 - This is a weird place to start kiai time. I really think you should delete this kiai and start one at 3'06''680 instead.
2'58''877 - Shorten this slider and move it so that it starts at 2'58''997 instead.
3'07''040 - Same case here, shorten it and start at 3'07''160 and ends at 3'21''806.
3'08''481 - Move this to 3'08''601. I know it fits the timpani being place here, but a regular rhythm is more important in a Normal diff.
3'08''961 - Move this to 3'09''081 aand shorten the slider so that it ends at the same place as before.
3'10''522 - Shorten this slider so that it ends at 3'11''002.
3'25''249 - Move this to 3'25''369.
3'34''493 - I suggest that you add a spinner here that ends at 3'37''134.
Remember to mind the spacing between the notes after moving the notes around.
[Hard]A lot of sliders' ends meeting at the same point is kinda iffy for me, but I'm not sure. Ask another experienced modder for his/her opinion on this.
Also, this feels more like an Insane rather than a Hard...
0'16''449 - I think you should follow the timpani, and use this pattern instead -->
0'22''322 - Move this slider to 0'22'212 instead.
0'22''812 - Start new combo here. I was taught that combos should be kept at most 10 per combo, except for streams.
0'30''015 - Move this to 0'29''895.
0'30''135 - New combo here.
0'36''858 - ^
0'42''620 - ^
1'19''596 - Move this to 1'19''475
1'27''399 - Move this to 1'27''519
1'28''719 - Start new combo here.
2'09''896 - Move this to 2'09''776
2'16''739 - New combo here.
2'18''540 - Delete this note.
2'19''981 - Add a note here.
2'22''382 - Delete the slider here, and then..
2'22''502 - Add a circle here. Start a new combo here also.
2'30''185 - Start new combo here.
2'38''348 - Follow the piano and move [3] and [4] two 1/4 beats backwards.
2'38''828 - Add a note here.
2'49''393 -> 2'51''074 - You should really follow the timpani here.
2'51'314 - Same case as in Normal.
2'51''674 - Move this to 2'51''794.
2'53''234 - New combo here.
I'll stop here, since the timing part after this seems wrong.
[hard ver2]This is a weird name for a diff, consider changing it.
The spacing used here is very random and unintuitive. Try rearranging the notes so that the spacing is more or less equal, with a few jumps and anti-jumps here and there.
0'10''567 - Stack [4] with [2].
0'21''251 - [5] is hidden, try moving it to the left of [4].
0'32''056 - This is quite a cruel jump ( [8] - [10] ). Consider arranging them closer?
0'35''297 - Add a circle here.
1'20''556 - Remove the finish at the end here, it's distracting.
1'21''997 - Remove the finish at the first reverse.
1'32''081 - Please standardize the spacing between sliders from [1] to [5]. And arrange them more nicely.
1'37''003 - Move this to 1'37''123.
1'47''447 - Move this to 1'47''207.
1'47''687 - Add a note here.
1'48''047 - Move this to 1'48'167.
2'11''937 - Start new combo here.
2'20''581 - ^
2'22''502 - ^
2'43''150 - Add a circle here.
2'57''916 - Move this to 2'58''036.
I'll stop here too, for the same reason as Hard.
. will asked someone to double checked again
