big ol warning, this is a huge mod, scroll at your own riskwell shit this is a streamy map when most of the notes don't really fit well enough IMO.
Let's first start off with timing. You got the right stuff, but the actual bpm for both Your Best Nightmare and Finale is 190.006. I know it doesn't mean like a whole lot, and I know it says 190 on wiki and other sites, but even decimals can throw off the simplest of timings before the next red line. Forgot the timing, but I'm still damn sure it's 190.006. I'd check really, even if it sounds similar, but I'm just saying.
Nope, the timing is preferct, using .006 feels kinda weird.k let's get into the map incoming lots of nazi modding and small opinions
[General]
You're not very consistent with hitsounding. I'd definitely reccommend sticking with the same rhythm that way noone gets confused and all that jumbled mess. And you're mostly going to want to have put a rhythm on every 3rd beat in each measure (because the beat sounds more 95 bpm than 180 bpm, and you can hear the bass in every 3rd beat). It just feels so... off having to hear spam of claps in random order. I'd definitely fix up the beat. 00:22:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - has a much different clap rhythm than 00:26:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and 00:32:865 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - , along with... 00:28:760 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
Hmmph, ok then, try to make some "pattern" for hitsounds in some part.Mmhh.. some hitsounds are receiving too much attention or in this case "overhitsounding". For example 00:51:812 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , these are all freaking finishes. And they're used so damn excessively. Finishes are best used to start or end a combo, or something emphasizing. This is just way too much. It happens quite often too in this map, with the excessive claps in certain parts, not every damn note needs a hitsound.
Ok then, i was using any custom hitsound with a bit low effect volume, so ididn't really notice this.Some hitsounds just don't seem to fit IMO. For example, I get what you're going at with the claps and all at 01:11:075 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - , they are all consistent, but I feel like they don't fit along with the music. I don't hear and emphasizing beat on 90% of these claps, so maybe no hitsounds on some of them and claps on 2 and 4 might work better for this map. Just giving out my insight on that.
It's pretty good thrpugh, but still have add some extra at 1/1 so it doesn't feel kinda no hitsound.You could also lower some of the hitsounds on some part, like 00:54:338 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,1,2,3,4) - , these soft whistles are rather loud.
Set it as 40%Why are some soft parts of the song so fast? Some of it just feels overmapped and that's not a good thing
Are you trying to point 00:59:391 - ? ok, i'll convert some slider so it looks easierI start hearing some real streams at 05:21:926 -
I think slider is more comfortable for this time, since it is using wavy sound so, i prefer slider instead of stream..I'll provide more details down below in the mod.
[Finale]
CS4.5... lmao
k lolYour beginning has a lot of ugly patterns and just forced streams that I never heard often in the game. But then again.. streams are ok I guess in this situation since it's 2017.
I awfully agree with the pattern, but for the stream, nah, i used the drum sounds for the stream..00:22:996 (2) - Silent sound. I'd consider removing and just moving 00:23:075 (3) - in a flowing jump.
ok, fixed, and moved00:23:391 (6,7,8,9) - I don't like how these 4 have much larger space than the rest of these patterns later before the first spinner. I'd considering moving 00:23:233 (4,5,6) - somewhere around x178 y286
ok, but do some modification00:24:654 (1,2,3) - This alone just doesn't play right for whatever reason. 00:24:812 (2) - isn't blanketing 00:24:654 (1) - properly and 00:24:970 (3) - is barely missing the blanket on 00:24:812 (2) - 's sliderhead. Use 1/16th beat snap divisor to get the max potential of a good blanket.
Whoa, fixed.00:26:154 (3) - The fact that these kinds of sliders start on a blue tick, which is really difficult to follow the music. Another example like this is 00:26:628 (1) - . There's more power on red and white ticks, these don't seem to start on blue ticks.
Fixed too, and the notes after it00:26:391 (5) - Fix blanket on 00:26:154 (3) - 's sliderend. Also, it's a downbeat slider, which is usually frowned upon unless done right. Here it's better off with a clickable note where the sliderend is.
Blanketed, but do some modification due to your last mod, which makes me to convert that slider to 1/200:26:628 (1) - Yeah this doesn't really fit along with the music considering it starts on a blue tick 1/4th beat after the previous beat. Consider avoiding these as it can be disorienting for players trying to follow the flow.
Due to your last mod too, this is note is now kinda fit with the music.00:27:102 (4) - But you don't use something like this anywhere else except at the end, which really doesn't flow to the music. There's really no point to have an unnecessary jumpspike here. The tempo is the same as anywhere here before the first spinner. I'd remove this note here and make 00:27:181 (5) - two notes instead of a 1/4th slider. That way you can have a tiny stream leading up to 00:27:496 (8) - which flows a lot better than what we have here.
Follow the mod, but some slight own modification..00:27:812 (1) - Fix blanket on 00:27:496 (8) - 's sliderend. (Sorry if I'm being a nazi, it's a habit of mine)
Slight move anchor, so kinda looks like its blanket00:28:444 (3,4,5) - Eh, I think it's nice, but I don't think it's in the right place. 00:28:128 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - plays rather uncomfortably and could use some minor tweakings. You could try ctrl+g and place them all on x342 y118 (according to 00:28:444 (3) - 's placement) and see if that plays much better. Alternatively, you could make sure 00:28:128 (2,5) - stack onto each other, you can change that in the stack leniency, however I think that's frowned upon on certain situations.
OK, used that x328 y118 + CTRL+G 00:28:128 (2) - Fix blanket on 00:27:812 (1) - 's sliderbegin
Fixed00:28:760 (6,7,8,9,1) - If you are going to have a stream here, I'd suggest each note having the same spacing equality, it just jumps from .52 to .49 to .55 to .39, which isn't really consistent.
Fixed00:29:391 (3,7) - Parallel better.
^00:29:391 (3,4,5,6,7) - Holy spread out notes batman. It's fine if the triplet was touching one of them, but it just doesn't play right. They're all so close to each other I think maybe something like
this would flow better, assuming you don't change the stream between the two sliders.
^00:30:891 (4) - Fix blanket on 00:30:654 (3) - 's sliderend
^00:31:602 (1) - Fix blanket on 00:31:917 (3) - 's sliderend
^00:32:075 (4) - Fix blanket on 00:32:233 (5) - 's sliderbegin
^ 00:31:602 (1,2,3,4,5) - I guess this plays ok. Maybe with small polishing it could look better, but idk what to say about it.
i didn't really sure what to polish, but do slight modification00:33:181 (3) - Eh, is this supposed to blanket 00:32:865 (1) - 's sliderend? Can't really tell.
yeah, it should, fixed00:33:338 (4) - Fix blanket on 00:33:181 (3) - 's sliderend
^00:33:338 (4,5) - These two don't really go well together. A straight line slider for 00:33:338 (4) - might work but idk
Not straight, but curved, blanket with 00:33:338 (4) - is better00:34:128 (1) - Fix shape. It looks ugly.
Not really ugly lol, but fixed00:34:917 (6) - Fix blanket on 00:34:760 (5) - 's sliderend
Not really sure about this one...00:35:628 (2,3,4) - I would avoid having them so close to each other. It's fine for 00:35:628 (2,3) - although I think 00:35:628 (2) - should stack on 00:35:707 (3) - 's sliderbegin like you have for almost every slider w/ a note above it. If you do stack it properly, you won't have to move 00:36:023 (4) - at all, and it's perfectly blanketed so it's cool
ok, stacked00:36:970 (4,6) - Not parallel.
Changed as curved, fix blanket on them00:38:549 (5) - Fix blanket on 00:38:233 (3) - 's sliderend unless you weren't really going for that.
I didn't really do that, but changed the slider.00:38:470 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Feels rather uncomfortable to play IMO. The stream could use a small fix as it's all not the same spacing.
Remove (4) and fix stream spacing00:39:496 (3) - Doesn't seem to blanket 00:39:181 (1) - 's sliderbegin and it overlaps the stream slightly.
Fixed00:39:654 (4) - Blanket is slightly off on 00:39:812 (5) - 's sliderbegin
Fixed00:40:444 (1) - Fix blanket on 00:40:128 (7) - 's sliderend
Fixed00:41:865 (2) - Fix blanket on 00:41:549 (9) - 's sliderend
Fixed00:42:181 (3,4,5,6,7) - Move away from 00:41:865 (2) - so it doesn't overlap over the slider in an ugly manner.
Fixed00:42:181 (3,4,5,6,7) - On a side note, why is this stream's spacing different from 00:42:654 (8,9,10,11,1) - ? It's the same tempo, so it shouldn't really have less spacing.
Due to this, i moved 00:42:181 (3,4,5,6,7) - and move 00:42:654 (8,9,10,11) - so they feel like blanket00:43:523 (4) - But why? It's the same tempo as all the other mini triplets like 00:38:470 (4,5) - . It should stack on 00:43:602 (5) - really...
Fixed00:43:602 (5,6,7) - It'd probably flow a little better if they were all the same sliders, just with 6 flipped upside down.
Fixed00:45:023 (6) - Fix blanket on 00:45:496 (1) - and try to make the slider flow well with the way 00:44:865 (4,5) - is set up. Just make the slider look something like
this or at least stack them00:45:970 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - So what shape are we going here, pentagon? Diamond? Either way, if it was trying to look like any of those shapes, it's not looking like any of those shapes as it needs cleaning up. I think a diamond shape would work well for 00:46:444 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - , but it needs to look more like a diamond. Also the combos seem inconsistent and that needs to be addressed. 00:46:128 (1) - Remove NC, 00:46:760 (7) - NC, 00:47:075 (1) - Remove NC.
More like polygon, i guess..00:48:338 (3) - Fix blanket on 00:48:023 (1) - and 00:48:654 (5) - 's sliderend.
Fixed00:48:575 (4) - x96 y288 for better flow
Fixed00:48:654 (5,6) - These are not parallel, fix that.
Fixed00:49:128 (9,10,11,12) - None of these sliders seem to fit well with the whole downbeats. It might be because of the hitsounds making it sound like that, but I prefer the white ticks to have sliderbegins and not sliderends, as downbeats aren't the best here.
Fixed00:50:865 (3) - Doesn't seem to blanket 00:51:338 (6) - well.
Fixed00:51:102 (4,5) - Move to x395 y302 for better flow
Fixed00:51:338 (6) - Fix blanket on 00:51:496 (7) - 's sliderbegin
I think it is all good.00:51:733 (8) - Remove, doesn't seem to fit the music in any way.
00:51:812 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Remove ALL finishes here, it's considered spam and they're rather loud for what the music's volume offers. I also see another problem with the squares here. They're not really perfect squares. An easy way to tell that a square like this isn't perfect is moving 00:53:075 (1) - 1/4th beat ahead, and copying 00:52:444 (1) - 's note on 00:53:075 -. You'll find that not ever note in the square is consistent.
OK, fixed00:54:338 (1,2) - Fix blankets
^00:56:233 (3) - Fix blanket on 00:55:917 (2) - 's sliderend
It's fine .-.00:56:549 (4) - Fix blanket on 00:56:233 (3) - 's sliderbegin
OK, fixed00:57:496 (1) - Stack on 00:56:549 (4) - 's slider end
00:57:496 (1) - Prefer x236 y240 than that00:57:181 (1) - Remove NC
OK00:57:496 (1) - ^
OK00:58:444 (1) - ^
OK00:58:760 (1) - ^
OK00:58:917 (2) - Stack on 00:58:128 (1) - 's sliderend
OK00:59:233 (4,5) - Fix blankets
I didn't really sure get what you mean.00:59:391 (5) - NC
OK00:59:707 (6) - Fix blanket on 01:00:023 (1) -
OK01:00:023 (1) - Remove NC
OK01:00:496 (4) - Stack on 00:59:707 (6) - 's sliderbegin
OK01:00:970 (2) - Fix blanket on 01:00:654 (1) - 's sliderbegin. Also the sliderend of this specific slider seems to overlap 00:59:707 (6,4) -
OK01:01:286 (3,4,5,6) - Why the large jumps? There's no indication in the song that makes it intense.
Make the jump more less01:03:181 (6) - NC
01:03:654 (7,8,1) - Oddly enough, this isn't the right beat. If you listen closely, there's actually a 1/8th beat here. I suggest removing 01:03:654 (7) - and adding a note at 01:03:773 - . Please don't overmap it, a simple 1/8th triplet won't be too bad as long as they're real close up together or a 1/8th slider repeat would work too.
k, then, using repeat slider.01:03:812 (1) - remove NC
01:04:444 (1,2) - Ugly overlapping here IMO
Moved a bit..01:05:707 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
nah, looks fine01:06:654 (1) - Remove NC and fix blanket on 01:06:970 (2) - 's end half of the slider
I don't really want blanket it, but moved a bit anyway01:06:970 (2) - Fix blanket on 01:07:286 (3) - 's sliderbegin
01:07:444 (4,6) - Another ugly overlap
nah, looks fine01:07:917 (6) - Fix blanket on 01:07:602 (5) - 's sliderend
I didn't want to blanket it, since it will ruin the 01:08:233 (1) - blanket01:08:233 (1) - Fix blanket on 01:07:917 (6) - 's sliderbegin
01:08:707 (2,3) - See 01:03:654 (7,8,1) - 's note on 1/8ths. Seems like these are the only two cases where 1/8ths are ok
01:12:023 (1,3,5,7) - Doesn't seem to have consistent spacing like 01:12:181 (2,4,6,8) -
Moved 01:12:023 (1,5,7) - so looks like the same spacing.01:13:602 (2,3) - This jump is too excessive for the music.
Fixed01:13:760 (3,4) - Stack
01:13:917 (1) - Fix blanket on 01:13:760 (3) -
01:13:917 (1) - Remove NC too
01:14:549 (1) - Fix blanket on 01:14:865 (2) - 's sliderbegin
01:15:181 (1) - Remove NC
01:15:338 (3,4,5) - Excessive jumps.
01:16:760 (4) - Fix blanket on 01:16:444 (3) - 's sliderbegin
01:17:075 (1,2) - Fix blankets
01:17:549 (2,3) - Unreadable.
01:17:707 (3,4,5,6) - These jumps are just not ok, the music doesn't even feel intense to have these large-ass jumps.
Lower jump01:18:812 (3) - Move this somewhere else as the stack here doesn't like being stacked here
01:18:970 (4) - Fix blanket on 01:18:338 (1) - 's sliderbegin
Seems not a prefect time and place for a blanket..01:19:286 (5) - Fix blanket on 01:18:970 (4) - 's slider
01:19:602 (6) - NC
01:20:233 (1) - Remove NC
01:20:549 (3,4,5) - Fix spacing
01:20:865 (1,2,3,4) - Again, these jumps are way too excessive for a soft part of the song.
01:21:023 (2) - Stack on 01:20:075 (8,9,1) -
01:21:496 (5) - Fix blanket on 01:21:654 (6) - 's sliderbegin
01:21:812 (1) - Remove NC
01:21:970 (2) - x167 y85
01:22:128 (3) - NC
01:22:444 (5) - Fix blanket on 01:22:286 (4,6) - 's sliderends
01:23:075 (7) - Fix shape/blanket
01:23:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Uh... what LOL. First of all, these sliders are way too fast, like mentioned before, and they can be difficult to read the 1/4th repeats at 01:24:023 (5,6) - . Tone down the slider velocity, fix the shape of the whole thing, make it look prettier.
Remapped01:24:654 (7) - Also NC
01:25:286 (1) - Remove NC
01:25:917 (1) - Remove Finish. Although, I'd probably remove the note here in general because the spinner should start where that note is. Seems to fit better w/ the music.
01:27:181 (1,3) - Fix blankets
01:27:970 (6,1) - Not parallel
01:28:444 (1,3) - ^
01:30:970 (1) - Fix blanket on 01:31:128 (2) - 's sliderbegin
01:31:128 (2) - Fix blanket on 01:31:286 (3) - 's sliderend
01:31:286 (3,5) - Fix blanket
01:31:760 (6) - Fix blanket on 01:31:602 (5) - 's sliderend
01:32:865 (5,6,7,8) - With different spacing from each slider, it doesn't really flow all that great. They don't seem to blanket properly, and it could be a little bit unreadable
Fix spacing01:33:812 (3,6,1) - Uhm... stack?
01:34:602 (8) - Fix stack on 01:34:286 (6) - 's sliderend
Did you mean, blanket?01:36:181 (2) - Move this somewhere else other than under 01:35:707 (7) - 's sliderepeat. Doesn't seem to flow all that well and can be rather confusing.
01:36:812 (8,1) - Fix parallel
01:37:760 (3,4,5,6,1) - This whole thing here doesn't look pretty...
Moved, changed slider01:38:865 (2) - Fix blanket on 01:38:549 (1,3) - 's sliderends
I think its good.01:39:023 (3) - Fix blanket on 01:39:181 (4) - 's sliderend
01:39:496 (5) - Fix blanket on 01:39:181 (4) - 's sliderbegin
01:39:812 (1) - 's sliderend should stack on 01:39:181 (4) - 's sliderbegin properly
01:40:286 (3,4,5) - Doesn't flow all that well...
01:41:075 (1) - Fix blanket on 01:40:760 (6) - 's sliderbegin
01:41:391 (3) - Fix blanket on 01:41:549 (4) - 's sliderbegin
01:41:075 (1,4) - Overlapping issue
Move these a bit, so doesn't feel strange with 01:41:075 (1) - - Checkpoint, as per 15/01/2017 -01:41:707 (5) - Fix blanket on 01:41:549 (4) - 's sliderbegin
01:42:023 (6) - Fix blanket on 01:41:391 (3) - 's slider
01:42:338 (1) - Fix blanket on 01:42:654 (3) - 's sliderbegin
01:43:444 (8) - I don't like this slider ending on a white tick, doesn't feel right, maybe something clickable would work instead
01:43:760 (1) - Fix blanket on 01:43:444 (8) - 's sliderend
01:44:549 (6) - Fix blanket on 01:44:865 (1) - 's slider
01:44:707 (7) - Fix blanket on 01:44:549 (6) - 's sliderend
01:44:865 (1,2,3,4,5) - Oh my god this looks ugly. I don't even know where to begin, the overlapping on 01:44:865 (1,3,4,5) - is just bad and needs polished up.
01:46:128 (1,5) - More overlaps
01:46:444 (3) - Fix blanket on 01:46:681 (4,5) - 's sliderbegin and note
01:47:233 (7) - It would probably be better in flow if the slider was the same as 01:47:075 (6) - , except flipped and ctrl+j and maybe at x400 y176
01:48:654 (1) - Fix blanket? I'd double check
01:49:917 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why did you stop using cla[s, it seems rather inconsisten
01:49:917 (1) - x40 y304
01:50:233 (3) - Fix blanket on 01:50:865 (7) -
01:50:549 (5) - Fix blanket on 01:50:707 (6) -
01:52:128 (5,6,7,8) - Remove. There seems to be another 1/8th starting at 01:52:286 (7) - , but I'm not sure. The first two of these sliders definelty need removed and replaced with 1/4th notes
01:53:075 (4,1) - Parallel these to look better
01:53:707 (1,2,3,4) - Remove. Finishes. Also these don't look all that good when they overlap like that.
01:56:233 (1) - Fix blanket on 01:56:549 (2) - 's sliderbegin
01:57:338 (6) - Stack on 01:56:549 (2) - 's sliderend
01:57:496 (1,2,3) - I like these blankets, they're good. I just think they would look better if they had equal gaps in between the blanket and the note.
01:59:075 (2) - Looks better at x396 y332
01:59:707 (5) - Fix blanket on 02:00:023 (1) - 's sliderend
02:00:023 (1) - Fix blanket on 02:00:338 (2) - 's sliderend
02:00:654 (3,4,5,6) - Shape here needs a bit of work, right now it looks sloppy.
02:01:760 (2) - Blanket 02:02:075 (3) -
02:02:075 (3) - Stack on 02:01:286 (1) - 's sliderend if you're going to
02:02:075 (3,4,5) - Triangle shape doesn't look like an equilateral triangle
02:02:549 (1,2) - Too close to each other. Give these guys some space.
02:03:338 (3,4,5) - Also triangle shape that needs work
---- CHECKPOINT ----
02:03:812 (1) - Fix blanket on 02:04:286 (2) - 's slider
02:05:075 (6,7) - Lower volume.
02:05:075 (6) - Also fix blanket on 02:04:917 (5) -
02:05:707 (7) - damn that's a tight slider
02:05:707 (7,8,1) - Triple here doesn't flow all that well and could use some work. Don't have them spread out like this cause it doesn't fit with the music
02:06:970 (3) - Fix sliderend on 02:05:707 (7) - 's 1st bump
02:06:338 (1) - Fix blanket
02:07:602 (5) - Fix blanket on 02:08:075 (6) - 's sliderend
02:08:549 (7) - Anti-jump doesn't fit here.
02:08:865 (1) - Fix blanket on 02:09:338 (2) - 's slider
02:10:128 (1) - damn thats a tight slider
02:13:917 (1,1,1,1,2,3,4) - Lol why all the finishes, they don't even fit
02:13:128 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Fix hexagon shape
02:15:496 (3,4,1) - inconsistent spacing
Nope, its has the same spacing.02:16:286 (3) - Almost unreadable
02:16:444 (1) - Fix blanket on 02:17:075 (3) - 's sliderend
02:16:760 (2) - ...Is this supposed to be a blanket?
02:17:391 (4) - Fix blanket on 02:17:075 (3) - 's sliderbegin
02:17:707 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,3,5,1,3,5,1,2,3,1,2) - Too many whistles, don't seem to fit
02:22:128 (2) - Blanket a little bit better
02:24:654 (5) - Blanket
02:25:602 (2,1) - Odd overlap
02:27:181 (2) - Fix blanket
CHECKPOINT ;w;
02:29:391 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Inconsistent jumps
02:31:838 (2) - Just stack on 02:31:917 (3) -
02:32:154 (4) - doesn't look clean imo
02:34:444 (2,3) - Not parallel
02:35:391 (1,2) - ^
02:36:338 (6,7,1,2) - Looks ugly with all the overlapping
02:37:286 (4,5) - Not parallel
02:39:654 (3,6) - Stack
02:42:970 (1) - Fix blanket on 02:43:286 (2) -
02:43:444 (3) - Fix stack or move somewhere else
Fix stack instead of moving.02:44:391 (2) - x440 y200
02:45:496 (1) - Try to blanket 02:45:181 (6,7,8) -
02:46:444 (7,8,1) - Slightly off overlapping issue
02:54:338 - Maybe add a spinner?
02:59:391 (1,2,3) - Fix shape or make it like 03:00:023 (1,2,3) -
03:01:602 (1) - Remove NC
03:01:917 (2) - NC
03:01:917 (2) - Fix blanket on 03:01:602 (1) - 's sliderbegin
03:02:549 (5) - Fix blanket on 03:02:391 (4) -
03:03:417 (2) - Fix blanket on 03:03:181 (1) - 's sliderend
03:04:049 (5) - Fix blanket on 03:03:812 (4) - 's sliderend
03:04:444 (1,1) - These don't sound like 3/4th sliders.. more like 3/2nds
03:05:075 (1) - Remove NC
03:06:023 (2) - Fix blanket on 03:06:338 (3) - 's sliderend
03:06:338 (3,4,5) - Song is not intense enough to have a triplet like this
03:07:286 (2) - Unstack
03:07:917 (4) - Fix blanket on 03:08:233 (5) - 's sliderbegin
03:09:496 (3) - Fix blanket on 03:10:128 (4) - 's sliderrepeat
03:21:496 (2) - Fix blanket on 03:20:865 (1) - 's sliderrepeat
03:28:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Fix those unconsistent claps
03:30:812 (2,10) - Downbeats don't fit here
03:31:602 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Very uncomfortable to play IMO
03:33:181 (1) - Remove NC
03:33:496 (3) - NC
03:34:444 (1) - Remove NC
03:36:338 (2) - Fix blanket on 03:36:023 (1) - 's sliderend
03:37:286 (1) - Fix blanket on 03:37:602 (2) -
03:37:760 (3) - x108 y28
03:38:549 (1) - Fix blanket on 03:38:865 (2) - 's sliderbegin
03:39:338 (5) - Fix stack
03:40:128 (2) - Fix blanket on 03:39:812 (1) - 's sliderend
03:40:365 (3,4,5) - Confusing to play, unreadable
03:40:602 (5,1) - Fix up some blankets here
03:41:075 (1,2,3) - But there's no intense part here, it's all the same sound, no need to overmap...
03:43:760 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - It's "readable", but as said in earlier points, this is overmapping because it's literally the same tempo over and over again, you didn't do this before, and you shouldn't really do it here as the tempo is just the same.
03:44:865 (1) - Fix blanket on 03:45:102 (2) -
03:45:812 (6,7,8,9,1) - Fix circle blanket on 03:45:654 (5) -
03:47:391 (1) - Why a 3/4th slider? Should be 1/2th like the rest of your combos
03:47:707 (2) - Fix blanket on 03:47:391 (1) - 's sliderbegin also this poorly overlaps the streams here
03:48:338 (5,6) - Fix blankets
03:48:970 (3) - Fix blanket on 03:48:654 (1) - 's sliderend
03:49:286 (5,6,7) - Fix spacing
03:49:602 (7,8,1) - Another overmapped triplet
03:50:865 (7,8) - A little unreadable
03:51:496 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Just.. no. You didn't do this before with this same tempo, why aren't you consistent?
03:55:917 (5,6,7,8) - See note on 01:52:128 (5,6,7,8) - 's 1/8ths note
03:56:549 (3) - Fix blanket on 03:56:865 (5) - 's sliderend
03:58:760 (1) - Why is there a normal sound at the end of the spinner? Doesn't sound that loud, if anything, a soft sound works better
04:02:347 (4,5,6) - Not a good overlap
04:03:610 (1,2) - Not parallel
04:05:505 (6) - Blanket 04:06:136 (1) - 's sliderbegin
04:06:610 (2) - Fix blanket on 04:06:136 (1) - 's sliderend
04:07:399 (1) - Remove NC to keep NC consistent
04:09:136 (2) - Fix blanket on 04:08:662 (1) - 's sliderend
04:09:610 (3,4,5) - Equilateral triangle works better
04:11:189 (1) - Not the best blanket imo
04:15:610 (6) - Fix blanket on 04:15:926 (7) - 's sliderbegin
04:16:241 (8) - NC and fix blanket on 04:15:926 (7) - 's sliderend
04:17:505 (1) - Remove NC for consistency
04:17:505 (1) - Fix blanket on 04:17:820 (2) - 's sliderbegin
04:18:136 (3) - Fix blanket on 04:17:820 (2) - 's sliderend
04:20:662 (9) - Blanket 04:20:347 (8) - better
04:20:662 (9) - Also this appears to end on a white tick, consider making that tick clickable
I don't think so, the slider fits with the song anyway.04:21:610 (2) - Fix blanket on 04:21:452 (1) -
04:22:241 (4) - Fix blanket on 04:21:926 (3) - 's sliderend
04:22:873 (6,9) - Stack
04:23:820 (10) - NC and fix blanket on 04:23:189 (8) - 's sliderbegin
04:24:452 (1) - Remove NC and fix blanket on 04:24:768 (2) - 's sliderbegin
04:24:768 (2) - Fix blanket on 04:25:084 (3) - 's sliderrepeat
04:25:715 (5) - Fix blanket on 04:25:084 (3) - 's sliderrepeat
04:27:136 (4) - Fix blanket on 04:26:820 (3) - 's sliderbegin
04:26:662 (2,6) - Stack?
04:28:873 (1) - Fix blanket on 04:29:189 (2) -
04:29:347 (3) - Fix blanket on 04:29:662 (4) -
04:29:662 (4,5,6) - Triangle
04:30:136 (1) - Remove NC
04:30:452 (1) - ^
04:30:768 (1) - ^
04:31:399 (1) - Fix blanket on 04:31:084 (3) - . Remove some nodes too, they're not needed
04:32:031 (3,4) - Try to blanket 04:31:399 (1) - 's sliderbegin
Did you mean sliderend?04:32:978 (2) - Fix blanket on 04:32:662 (1,4) - 's sliderends
04:34:241 (2) - Fix blanket on 04:33:610 (5) - 's sliderend, you dont need all of those nodes
04:34:715 (4) - Fix overlapping issue with 04:34:241 (2) -
04:35:189 (1,2,3) - Many blanket issues. Fixies
04:36:926 (3) - Stack on bump
04:37:399 (6) - Fix blanket on 04:37:241 (5) - 's sliderend
04:37:715 (8) - NC for consistency
04:38:505 (11) - Fix blanket on 04:38:347 (10) - 's sliderend
04:38:662 (12) - Fix blanket on 04:38:899 (13) -
04:39:610 (1) - Remove NC and fix blanket on 04:39:452 (3) -
04:40:241 (3) - NC
04:40:557 (4) - x376 y60
04:42:136 (3,2,6) - Stack
04:42:452 (4,3) - ^
04:44:031 (1) - Blanket better
04:44:662 (2) - ^
04:45:294 (4) - NC
04:45:610 (5,1) - Stack
04:46:557 (1) - Blanket 04:47:031 (2) - 's sliderbegin a lil better
04:47:031 (2,3,4,5) - Big spacing into this small spacing. Why no consistency?
They all seems to have same spacing .-.04:47:662 (5) - Fix blanket on 04:47:347 (3) -
04:47:978 - Should be a note here for flow
04:49:084 (1,2) - Should be the same sliders
04:48:610 (4,1) - Blanket
04:50:031 (5) - Fix blanket on 04:50:347 (6) - 's sliderrepeat
04:50:347 (6) - NC
04:50:978 (7) - Fix blanket on 04:51:294 (8) -
04:52:873 (5) - NC0
04:53:347 (6) - Stack on 04:53:978 (8) -
04:53:505 (7) - Fix blanket on 04:54:136 (1) - 's sliderbegin
04:54:136 (1,3) - Fix blanket
04:55:399 (5) - Fix blanket on 04:55:873 (6) -
04:55:399 (5) - NC
04:56:031 (7) - Fix blanket on 04:56:662 (1) - 's sliderbegin
04:58:241 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Shape is off. Well, there really is no shape here. You could try a hexagon here.
05:00:452 (4) - Remove the repeat and extend it as a 2/1 slider
05:01:557 (6) - x488 y160
05:02:031 (2) - Fix blanket on 05:01:715 (1) - 's sliderbegin
05:02:505 (4) - Stack
05:02:662 (1) - Fix blanket on 05:02:347 (3) -
05:02:662 (1) - Remove NC
05:02:978 (2) - NC
05:02:978 (2) - Blanket on 05:03:452 (3) - 's sliderbegin
05:04:241 (1) - Fix blanket on 05:04:873 (3) -
05:05:031 (4) - Fix blanket on 05:04:715 (2) -
05:05:505 (1) - Fix blanket on 05:05:031 (4) - 's sliderbegin. It's also way too close to 05:05:031 (4) - so i'd advise moving it away from that
05:06:768 (1) - slider overlapping slider sections
05:07:399 (3) - Fix blanket on 05:06:768 (1) - 's sliderbegin
----------- CHECKPOINT
aaaaaa finally almost done ;w;05:08:505 (3,4) - aaa more unreadable this
05:08:662 (4) - Fix blanket on 05:08:978 (5) - 's sliderend
05:09:294 (1) - Fix blanket on 05:08:978 (5) - 's sliderend
05:09:768 (2,4) - stack
Nope, moved instead05:11:347 (2) - x196 y28
05:11:505 (3) - Remove. There's no indication here of 1/8ths
05:11:820 (1) - Fix blanket on 05:12:294 (3) -
05:12:452 (4) - Fix blanket on 05:12:768 (5) - 's bump
05:12:768 (5) - Fix blanket on 05:12:452 (4) - 's sliderbegin
05:14:347 (2) - Fix blanket on 05:14:031 (1) - 's sliderend
05:14:820 (1) - Remove NC
05:14:820 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fix star shape. Looks nothing like a star
not really, but if i moved it, it will ruin more things05:15:610 (6) - Remove NC also fix blanket on 05:14:820 (1) -
05:15:926 (7,8) - Blanket issues
05:16:557 (9) - Remove. No indication of 1/8ths
05:17:505 (3,4,5,6) - I don't hear any of this in the song
You might not hear anything about this beat, but, let just say it is a new beat, through it still have the same beat, and i used it on the next part, so it will not be sayed as overmap, and also sayed as a pattern.05:18:768 (4,5,6,7) - ^
05:18:452 (3) - Fix blanket on 05:18:136 (1) - 's sliderend
05:20:662 (1,2,3,4) - Fix square shape
05:21:294 (5) - Fix blanket on 05:21:136 (4) - 's sliderbegin and 05:21:768 (7) - 's sliderend
05:21:926 (1) - Past this point, I mentioned that you can hear the actual streams here, and that is what should've been streamy. Instead you placed a simple 1/1 slider here instead of emphasizing that sweet stream.
See above, and i think its not really fit.05:24:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Too overmapped for what you have mapped so far
05:27:610 (4,5,6,7,5,6,7,8) - I hear 1/1 sliders and red ticks in between each one being a note, not double taps
05:29:820 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Ugly, inconsistent, and overmapped
05:30:610 (7,1) - Not parallel
05:30:768 (1,2) - ^
05:31:399 (3,4,5,6) - See 05:27:610 (4,5,6,7,5,6,7,8) -
05:32:031 (1,2,3) - Same tempo, yet you're still overmapping it.
05:32:662 (1) - Remove NC
05:33:294 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nerf
05:34:557 (8) - NC
05:34:794 (1) - Remove NC
05:35:189 (1) - ^
05:35:505 (1) - ^
05:35:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Overmapped which is why the stars are so high.
05:39:768 (6) - NC
05:39:926 (1) - Remove NC
05:40:873 (4) - NC
05:40:873 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I hear a stream
same as above05:44:741 (1) - Remove this spinner and just extend the first one.
Nope, player will get bored.Well damn, I did not expect this to be a huge mod, as I was only pointing out what needed polishing and what just didn't flow right. The beginning of Your Best Nightmare doesn't really have the right flow, too streamy and too jumpy at the softer parts. Finale was just a jumbled mess of different flows happening all at once, which just didn't feel right IMO. There were a lot of a blankets, and yes I did go full nazi after seeing so many. But I pointed out about 90% of them. I felt like a nice person for helping you out polishing the map. It's not a bad map, it's definitely got potential, I think you have potential. You just gotta find that sweet spot of flow, and it'll be awesome.
Yeah, i think i should rather remap some part at Your Best Nightmare, and about the Finale, it's not that what you think, especially the last kiai, the songs really get soo intense, so that's why I make the last kiai pretty intense, but still, i changed some part that really makes the diff jump.I do apologize heavily if I sounded a little rude in my mod. I wish you best of luck, and here, take a star.
It's ok, thanks for the star!