SPOILERi think having an ar between 9-10 instead of 9 would be better for this map
Your Best Nightmare
00:26:154 (3,5) - blanket is wrong
00:27:812 (1,2) - blanket is wrong Nah, it's good.
00:28:128 (2,3,4,5) - weird flow? Maybe no, it just feells weird becouse of the curving slider.
00:29:391 (3,4) - blanket is wrong OK, making it more seems like to blanket.
00:31:602 (1,3) - blanket is wrong
00:40:917 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - the stream goes up, but suddenly the next note is below it. weird flow Move some notes so the 00:40:917 (2,9) - can be used as a bit blanked
00:52:917 (4,5,1) - most of the streams so far have been overlaps and triples, having a sudden spaced stream here can cause misreading OK, removed 00:52:917 (5) -
01:02:233 (2,3) - i would recommend some kind of jump here instead of overlaps I have no idea how to jump at that part
01:15:181 (1,2,3,4,5) - i dont think a spaced stream at this timing is a good idea, since mostly its just been overlaps and jumps Hmm, ok.
01:18:970 (4,5,6) - spacing between 4 to 5 is pretty small but 5 to 6 is pretty big, considering its 1/4 Removed (5)
01:20:549 (3,4,5,6,1) - spaced streams at weird timing? Revert to normal stream
01:37:602 (2,3,4) - 2 can be misread. maybe make it a jump? k
01:41:707 (5,6) - overlap Moved (6)
01:42:338 (1,4,5) - overlap No, looks fine
01:44:865 (1,5) - overlap ^
01:46:444 (3,4) - blanket Isn't it already blanket?
01:49:917 (1) - this slider is very easy to break at, since the velocity is so high No, it just a simple slider, the velocity are still the same
01:53:391 (5,6) - blanket Isn't it already blanket?
02:00:812 (4,5,6,7) - weird flow It's normal
02:01:286 (1,2) - spacing between these is very small, and 1 is easy to misread as 1 beat longer than it is No, it's fine
02:02:549 (1,2) - spacing between these is very small, easy to misread ^ ^
02:03:812 (1,2) - 02:02:549 (1,2) same issue ^
02:09:338 (2,3) - very obvious blanket problem here Fixed
02:15:496 (3,4,1) - making 4 a jump would be much better I only move 4 a little bit
02:26:549 (1,2) - blanketing problem. the overlap is fine in this case but the blanket is wrong Fixed
02:30:023 (8,9,10,11,1) - spaced stream, but everything else has mostly been just normal overlap streams/triples. Fixed
02:43:444 (3,5,6,7,8) - this overlap is fine ,but make sure 5 overlaps perfectly with 3 Fixed
02:45:496 (1,2) - flow is weird, and 2 is going out of the playfield OK, making it blanked
02:45:970 (3,4,5,6,7) - the intensity of the song has been fairly high, and i think 6 would be better as a jump k
03:04:444 (1) - theres no beat where the reverse is I didn't wanna waste the playground just for 1 1/2 slider, 3/4 + reverse is much better for me, and the sound seems good for 3/4
03:04:444 (1,1) - this too ^ ^
03:20:865 (6) - NC maybe? k
03:25:917 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - there is no beat at 2, making this overmapped. 03:20:865 (6,7) was ok since there was an echo in the bg ^
03:40:444 (4,5) - why the sudden overlap? its fine, but odd maybe no, it fits with the song
03:57:181 (1,2,3,4,5) - ugly star Changed to squares
03:57:970 (1,2,3,4,5) - ugly star ^
03:57:181 (1,2) - the stars are mapped to the drum in the background, but these 2 beats are not. fixed
Finale
04:01:049 (1) - offset from this section on is wrong. It's clearly fine!
04:04:050 (2) - sliderends should be mapped to a sound with the same strength or less than the slider start. nah, it just fine, making it more playable instead of using circles
04:12:581 (5) - overmap Fixed
04:15:582 (6,7) - slider ends are overmapped No, it's good for some reason
04:26:009 (6,7,8,9,1) - assuming you're mapping to the melody and not the drums this is overmapped I map both of melody and drums if you listen more carefully.
04:40:227 (3,4) - why the weird slider shape? For some reason, one of them are to save some space in the playground
04:43:703 (6,1) - this could blanket better moved sliderend on 6
04:46:546 (1,2) - blanket Fixed
04:47:968 (6) - what sound are you mapping to? Fixed, i didn't notice this before
04:56:657 (1) - the high slider velocity makes it very easy to break here it's still the same velocity you know, just the shape of the slider. try check out Kikoku Doukoku Jigokuraku
04:59:184 (1,2,3,4) - this section has extremely low intensity compared to the rest of the level. consider making the spacing lower The spacing already very low for that part :/
05:01:712 (1,2) - weird flow Thats fine, there are so many beatmaps with that flow
05:06:451 (3,4,5,6,1) - assuming you're mapping to melody, this is overmapped I map both of melody and drums if you listen more carefully.
05:08:505 (3,4) - weird overlap thing? this could be just your mapping choice so do what you will with this overlap It's my style to do this, and i moved the slider a little bit so that didn't overlap other slider.
05:17:510 (3,4,5,6) - possible overmap?
05:34:571 (8,1) - weird flow As i was say in the top.
05:44:761 (1) - kiai time doesnt end along with this spinner k