1. Final (6.18 stars, 1495 notes)

Pencil-kun wrote:

hihi, saw your mod request on #modreq,
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For Final

MAP OPINION
pretty streamy map, but very fun! if slider shapes are improved then this can definitely be rankable

my mods may be unexperienced, but mostly its my opinion!! you dont have to apply them if you want! ^^! It's ok
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Final Diff

SPOILER

i think having an ar between 9-10 instead of 9 would be better for this map

Your Best Nightmare
00:26:154 (3,5) - blanket is wrong
00:27:812 (1,2) - blanket is wrong Nah, it's good.
00:28:128 (2,3,4,5) - weird flow? Maybe no, it just feells weird becouse of the curving slider.
00:29:391 (3,4) - blanket is wrong OK, making it more seems like to blanket.
00:31:602 (1,3) - blanket is wrong
00:40:917 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - the stream goes up, but suddenly the next note is below it. weird flow Move some notes so the 00:40:917 (2,9) - can be used as a bit blanked
00:52:917 (4,5,1) - most of the streams so far have been overlaps and triples, having a sudden spaced stream here can cause misreading OK, removed 00:52:917 (5) -
01:02:233 (2,3) - i would recommend some kind of jump here instead of overlaps I have no idea how to jump at that part
01:15:181 (1,2,3,4,5) - i dont think a spaced stream at this timing is a good idea, since mostly its just been overlaps and jumps Hmm, ok.
01:18:970 (4,5,6) - spacing between 4 to 5 is pretty small but 5 to 6 is pretty big, considering its 1/4 Removed (5)
01:20:549 (3,4,5,6,1) - spaced streams at weird timing? Revert to normal stream
01:37:602 (2,3,4) - 2 can be misread. maybe make it a jump? k
01:41:707 (5,6) - overlap Moved (6)
01:42:338 (1,4,5) - overlap No, looks fine
01:44:865 (1,5) - overlap ^
01:46:444 (3,4) - blanket Isn't it already blanket?
01:49:917 (1) - this slider is very easy to break at, since the velocity is so high No, it just a simple slider, the velocity are still the same
01:53:391 (5,6) - blanket Isn't it already blanket?
02:00:812 (4,5,6,7) - weird flow It's normal
02:01:286 (1,2) - spacing between these is very small, and 1 is easy to misread as 1 beat longer than it is No, it's fine
02:02:549 (1,2) - spacing between these is very small, easy to misread ^ ^
02:03:812 (1,2) - 02:02:549 (1,2) same issue ^
02:09:338 (2,3) - very obvious blanket problem here Fixed
02:15:496 (3,4,1) - making 4 a jump would be much better I only move 4 a little bit
02:26:549 (1,2) - blanketing problem. the overlap is fine in this case but the blanket is wrong Fixed
02:30:023 (8,9,10,11,1) - spaced stream, but everything else has mostly been just normal overlap streams/triples. Fixed
02:43:444 (3,5,6,7,8) - this overlap is fine ,but make sure 5 overlaps perfectly with 3 Fixed
02:45:496 (1,2) - flow is weird, and 2 is going out of the playfield OK, making it blanked
02:45:970 (3,4,5,6,7) - the intensity of the song has been fairly high, and i think 6 would be better as a jump k
03:04:444 (1) - theres no beat where the reverse is I didn't wanna waste the playground just for 1 1/2 slider, 3/4 + reverse is much better for me, and the sound seems good for 3/4
03:04:444 (1,1) - this too ^ ^
03:20:865 (6) - NC maybe? k
03:25:917 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - there is no beat at 2, making this overmapped. 03:20:865 (6,7) was ok since there was an echo in the bg ^
03:40:444 (4,5) - why the sudden overlap? its fine, but odd maybe no, it fits with the song
03:57:181 (1,2,3,4,5) - ugly star Changed to squares
03:57:970 (1,2,3,4,5) - ugly star ^
03:57:181 (1,2) - the stars are mapped to the drum in the background, but these 2 beats are not. fixed

Finale
04:01:049 (1) - offset from this section on is wrong. It's clearly fine!
04:04:050 (2) - sliderends should be mapped to a sound with the same strength or less than the slider start. nah, it just fine, making it more playable instead of using circles
04:12:581 (5) - overmap Fixed
04:15:582 (6,7) - slider ends are overmapped No, it's good for some reason
04:26:009 (6,7,8,9,1) - assuming you're mapping to the melody and not the drums this is overmapped I map both of melody and drums if you listen more carefully.
04:40:227 (3,4) - why the weird slider shape? For some reason, one of them are to save some space in the playground
04:43:703 (6,1) - this could blanket better moved sliderend on 6
04:46:546 (1,2) - blanket Fixed
04:47:968 (6) - what sound are you mapping to? Fixed, i didn't notice this before
04:56:657 (1) - the high slider velocity makes it very easy to break here it's still the same velocity you know, just the shape of the slider. try check out Kikoku Doukoku Jigokuraku
04:59:184 (1,2,3,4) - this section has extremely low intensity compared to the rest of the level. consider making the spacing lower The spacing already very low for that part :/
05:01:712 (1,2) - weird flow Thats fine, there are so many beatmaps with that flow
05:06:451 (3,4,5,6,1) - assuming you're mapping to melody, this is overmapped I map both of melody and drums if you listen more carefully.
05:08:505 (3,4) - weird overlap thing? this could be just your mapping choice so do what you will with this overlap It's my style to do this, and i moved the slider a little bit so that didn't overlap other slider.
05:17:510 (3,4,5,6) - possible overmap?
05:34:571 (8,1) - weird flow As i was say in the top.
05:44:761 (1) - kiai time doesnt end along with this spinner k

Pencil-kun wrote:

hihi, dont mind me, but just gonna correct the little offset error in the finale section ^^

while its kind of unnoticable if you slow it down, the timing error is definitely noticable, and the bpm at that section has been set to 189.900, which is weird since its very rare theres a decimal in the bpm. the bpm is wrong basically

Finale BPM Fix

SPOILER

BPM : 190.000 [very rarely will there be songs with decimals in the bpm, unless its something like a song which slowly increases in bpm]
Offset : 241084

theres also a 0.75x inherited slider velocity timing point, which you may want to set the offset to 241084 as well.

hope this helps!!!

Pencil-kun wrote:

hihi, dont mind me, but just gonna correct the little offset error in the finale section ^^

while its kind of unnoticable if you slow it down, the timing error is definitely noticable, and the bpm at that section has been set to 189.900, which is weird since its very rare theres a decimal in the bpm. the bpm is wrong basically

Finale BPM Fix

SPOILER

BPM : 190.000 [very rarely will there be songs with decimals in the bpm, unless its something like a song which slowly increases in bpm]
Offset : 241084

theres also a 0.75x inherited slider velocity timing point, which you may want to set the offset to 241084 as well.

hope this helps!!!

Violet-Fox wrote:

00:26:075 (2,4) - dont hear anything from the song for these to fit if you listen VERY CLOSELY, there is a drum have that beat
00:54:575 (2,5,7,2,4,6) - ^ even i hear some drum beat too, but it have very low vol, so, ok, removed.
01:10:760 (1,2,3,4) - as cool as these look, maybe replace with 1/2 jumps?
03:13:917 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - this is a very random difficulty spike, try to keep the spacing the same as the ones just before It's fine, making the same spacing will make it very weird
the sv doesnt really fit in for the first kiai as the song hasnt finished picking up until the second kiai nah, it'sa bit faster than the other part, so just let it be.

also multi song maps usually have a "/" instead of an "&", so it would be "Your Best Nightmare/Finale" Fixed.

the map is really cool!

max9147 wrote:

00:29:628 (4) - better move this to the start of the next slider nah, there is already a blanket for it, and looks better for me.
01:03:654 (7,8,1) - looks too overmapped, make them closer the SV is kinda fast, so i made the circles more jumpy
01:46:365 (2) - maybe remove this circle? There is a drum sound here
01:52:681 (2) - same ^
02:06:260 (8,1) - make this jump smaller OK

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[General]

- you totally need custom hitsounds, the normal ones do not fit at all I have no idea about custom sound, i'm going to ask somebody else..
- your last kiai section never ends. Fixed
- why "photoshop" is in tags? *UNDERTALE SPOILER ALERT* The name of the flower is flowey, when you reach the end of neutral route, you will fight it. and the name according to fandom is photoshop or omega flowey.
- why don't you use those colors that are seen near the flower? OK
- silence sliderslide sound by adding mute .wav file named "soft-sliderslide" OK


[Final]

00:24:181 - remove finish sound at the end of the slider Fixed
00:28:760 (6) - the second repeat is absolutely unexpected, consider to convert slider into something else Changed to stream
00:34:128 (1) - this slider is really crooked. Fix the shape do something else.
00:29:865 (6) - the only 1/2 slider in this part. I recommend to use previous way of patterns. anh, i think it's fine
00:36:338 (6,7,8,9,1) - why did you change the logic and added just a straight stream? convert (1) to slider
00:40:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nah, this feels so random? What did push you to make it like that? well, (1) slider is blanket-ing 00:40:128 (7) - , and 00:40:917 (2,3,4,5,6) - have 00:41:549 (9) - this blanket
00:42:654 (8) - again double reverse convert to stream again
00:43:917 (7,8,9) - triple instead of slider as it was before. Do you mean a slider, and a circle, if that is your point, ok i'll do it.
00:49:128 (9,10,11,12) - why did you use so many finish sounds changed to clap
00:51:812 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^ it's more fit, becouse it's the end of that part.
00:56:549 (4) - adjust the blanket fixed
00:57:812 (1) - again unexpected double reverse converted to stream
Slider velocity is way too high for such part, doesn't fit at all. Same about spacing. nah, it's kinda a choke or something, still kinda fits, coz in the other parts, that have the same SV and spacing.
01:29:707 (1) - crooked shap, fix it. fixed
01:40:760 (6) - hidden slider reverse it's not really hidden, just stacked with other slider. maybe change that if others have the same issue
01:41:707 (5) - awkward overlap with '3' and fix blanket to follow '4' not really get what you mean, but fixed (4) blanket
01:42:812 (4) - ^ blanket with '5', overlap with '1' this one is kinda hard for me, but fixed
01:43:760 (1) - blanket with '8' wait, isn't that already blanket?
01:44:865 (1) - crooked shape fixed
01:49:917 (1) - no way, this can done much and much better lol but changed that long slider to stream-ish with the bg sound
01:53:075 (4) - fix blanet with '2' (not going to mention blanket stuff, they are really really much) Fixed (ok then i'll try to fix when i found it :p)
02:00:812 (4,5,6) - the spacing is consistent. Also there is no point to use wide streams since it doesn't differ from previous triples ok.
02:11:312 (4,1) - spacing is inconsistent removed 02:10:681 (2) - to make it more consistent.
02:17:075 (3) - awkward overlap with '2' i didn't get whats wrong with this, but do something.
02:49:365 (1) - silence spinners end. Lowered the audio
03:04:444 (1,1) - there are no such musical patterns in tack to use such way of rhythm. errgh, idk why people are have issue with this, i'll try to make it more save space and make it more simple, but that slider is kinda have the beat.
03:27:181 (1) - 1 grid to right lol fixed
04:02:978 (6) - awkward overlap with previous slider (not going to mention overlaps anymore) i ddin't really sure what are you going to say.. i didn't know whether i need to stack, or just move a bit right, but i moved it a bit right
04:27:610 (6) - crooked shape, fix it. (not going to mention crooked stuff anymore) not really crooked, throught, but kinda make it more smoother.

good luck




00:53:154 (1) - spinner must has new comboFixed

CharmCaster wrote:

heyy, i saw you on #modreq and i stalked you too :3 ALSO, take note that these are just some suggestions that you may wanna change but its your choice to change it or nah fuk u for stalk me :p

Here comes the mod!

[General]

1. IMO, slider SV is too high even for this very intense song, but if you still think its okay then ignore this It's ok, the slider is as fast as lightning wtf bad pun
2. You have very unique slider arts in this which is kinda cool but not really aesthetically nice to see to the eye maybe change a bit for some sliders.

[Your Best Nightmare]

1. 00:28:760 (6,7,8,9) - Structure of stream can be improved Moving a bit, so kinda make it curved
2. 00:29:628 (4) - Spacing can be improved here as well.... Well, the circle has blanket.
3. 00:43:523 (4,5,6,7,8) - Circle (8) placing is weird since the spacing was not the same from the previous sliders and circles, move (8) further away from (7) Do something else
4. 00:57:812 (3,4,5,6) - Remove (6), no distinctive sound/beat here, the remaining stream is fine ok, but moved the three circle to prevent missreading.
5. 00:59:075 (3,4,5) - Spacing between (4) and (5) can be improved Fixed
6. 01:03:654 (7,8,1) - Spaced stream? this looks a bit out of a sudden though.... Fixed
7. 01:08:707 (2,3) - we wouldn't know that (3) is immediately after slider (2), theres a high chance of people breaking there since (3) is overlapped by slider (1) Fixed
8. 01:09:181 (5,6,7,8,1) - Remove (8), no distinctive sound/beat here ok, but moved the last circle to prevent missreading.
9. 01:12:654 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above ^, remove (4) ok, but moved the last circle to prevent missreading.
10. 01:15:181 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
11. 01:20:075 (8,9,1) - ^, remove (9), theres no triple here nah
12. 01:20:549 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^, remove (6) ok, but moved the last circle to prevent missreading.
13. 01:23:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - I like this slider art :3 but remove (11), no sound/beat here Aww, thanks :3 but there is a sound, play it with 50%
14. 01:52:128 (5,6,7,8) - Sliderends can be improved? idk how to improve this lol
15. 02:35:391 (1,2) - Spacing can be improved nah
16. 02:37:917 (2,3,4,5,6,10) - I see what you did there, I like the idea lol but spacing of (2) and (10) can be improved i didn't get this .-.
17. 02:40:128 (6,7,8,9,1,5) - Stream structure can be improved and why not overlap slider (5) with the previous circle (1) since its already overlapping each other? nah, it's fine, kinda make it like 1/2 spacing (or something like that)
18. 02:48:970 (6,7,8,9,1) - Move (6) to the right just a little bit and move (1) to the bottom a little bit so it looks more like a straight stream! lol, right :3 fixed.
19. 03:16:917 (2,2,3,4) - You could overlap circle (2) to the stream (2,3,4) to make it look more nicer Fixed
20. 03:44:075 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3) - This spaced stream section is totally out of place, change this.... I think i need to higher the AR,it looks weird with AR 9

Thats it for Your Best Nightmare!

Time for the Finale! no pun intended

[Finale]

1. 04:01:049 (1) - Move (1) to 04:01:084 , it is not to the beat Fixed, i didn't notice this
2. 04:26:031 (6,7,8,9,1) - Remove (9), no distinctive sound/beat here fixed
3. 04:33:847 (6) - ^, remove (6) nah, listen clearly.
4. 04:38:662 (12,13,1) - Sudden spaced stream out of nowhere, players wont know this... moved a bit, so looks shorter.
5. 04:56:505 (8,9,1) - ^ fixed
6. 05:07:636 (4) - Remove (4), no distinctive sound/beat here Listen clearly, there is a sound
7. 05:37:083 (1,2,3) - This is a very big jump for a spaced stream, fix this... fixed
8. 05:38:662 (3,4) - ^ fixed
9. 05:40:873 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Why isn't there a stream here ;-; you should replace the doubles with a full stream to fit into the beat... it already fit with the beat lol

That is all! Good luck in ranking this! Thanks!

ayomikasa wrote:

random irc mod :3

14.59 Rendyindo: Hey, ane online di client sekarang :3
14.59 ayomikasa: :3
14.59 ayomikasa: bentar ya
15.01 *ayomikasa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1088302 toby fox - Your Best Nightmare/Finale [Final]]
15.02 ayomikasa: 00:53:075 (1) - yang ini mending dihapus, karena disini suara berkepanjangan
15.03 ayomikasa: spinner nya tarik ke detik ini tapi akhiran nya tetep sama
15.03 Rendyindo: done.
15.04 ayomikasa: 01:05:075 (1,2,3) - mendingan ini note 1 - 3 semuanya circles
15.04 ayomikasa: ga ada suara yang mendukung buat jadi ini
15.04 Rendyindo: nope, nanti dibilang overmap :/
15.04 Rendyindo: soalnya itu jga udah jadi pattern..
15.04 ayomikasa: :\ ok, bentar aku cari lagi
15.05 ayomikasa: 01:12:733 (2) - ini juga
15.05 ayomikasa: mending hapus
15.05 ayomikasa: terus yang note sebelah kanan diubah letaknya
15.06 Rendyindo: ok, ane ubah jadi jump :3
15.06 ayomikasa: oke
15.09 ayomikasa: 01:54:970 (1) - ini ganti spinner aja
15.09 ayomikasa: rasanya kayak kurang nyambung gitu
15.09 Rendyindo: ok, fixed
15.12 ayomikasa: 03:04:444 (1,1) - 
15.12 ayomikasa: slider nya lebih enak dibuat kayak [http://puu.sh/t6B9n/9ecd745ce7.jpg gini] imo
15.14 Rendyindo: yang ini ane pikir pikir dlu..
15.14 Rendyindo: noted.
15.14 ayomikasa: 03:09:496 (3,4) - yang ini jg ya kalo diterima yang atas
15.15 Rendyindo: ok
15.17 ayomikasa: 03:46:917 (5) - ... wtf
15.17 ayomikasa: masa abis slider jauh langsung strim, keknya itu unrankable deh
15.17 Rendyindo: wkwk, fixed.
15.17 ayomikasa: kalo mau dibalik slider nya, end nya yang nyambung sama strim
15.18 Rendyindo: ok
15.18 ayomikasa: gile spaced stream
15.18 Rendyindo: mungkin dlu waktu ngemap pertama, ane kepencet CTRL+G :3
15.18 ayomikasa: mungkin wkwk
15.18 ayomikasa: 03:58:760 (1) - 
15.18 ayomikasa: hapus terus tarik slider nya (2)
15.19 ayomikasa: *spinner
15.19 Rendyindo: i know :3
15.19 Rendyindo: fixed
15.19 ayomikasa: :3
15.19 Rendyindo: ini mod udah "worth" buat kudosu sih
15.19 Rendyindo: *lumayan buat nambah SP di beatmap :3
15.19 ayomikasa: kalo mau kudos sih gapapa wkwk
15.20 ayomikasa: nanti aku savelog hasil ini
15.20 Rendyindo: nanti post aja di thread chatnya :3
15.20 ayomikasa: ok :3
15.22 ayomikasa: 05:44:741 (1) - ini apus
15.22 ayomikasa: panjangin aja spinner yang pertama
15.22 ayomikasa: sampe end spinner ini
15.23 Rendyindo: imo, bbrp BM jga lakuin hal yang sama kalo lagunya ngefade..
15.23 Rendyindo: jadi tak ikutin aja
15.23 ayomikasa: oke
15.24 Rendyindo: referensinya sih..
15.24 *Rendyindo is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/940378 DM DOKURO - Reality Check Through The Skull]
15.24 ayomikasa: ya, sy jarang liat map std sih wkwk
15.24 ayomikasa: ini aja mod std pertama wkwk
15.24 Rendyindo: wkwk, gapapa, ini udah worth kok :3
15.24 ayomikasa: :3 ini ku pasang di thread mu ya
15.24 Rendyindo: ok :3

wkwkwk lol

Weber wrote:

HI

Final

- Disable countdown Fixed

- Personally I think that a ton of the sliders throughout the difficulty need work:
00:45:023 (6) - idk what should i do. but if you see it, it is kinda make a mirror, for 00:44:549 (3) -
00:56:549 (4) - It is blanket with 00:56:233 (3) - so, what should i do?
01:02:865 (5,6) - (5) is follow up the flow of (6) slider. and end of (6) stacked up with 01:02:549 (4) - beggining.
01:04:444 (1) - Do a bit modification
01:11:391 (3,4) - There is a bit blanket..
01:22:444 (5) - (blanket) hmm, please be more specify..
02:02:549 (1,2) - (2) is following (1) slider flow
02:05:075 (6) - Do something
02:11:312 (3,1) - (3) is following (1), couse (1) is stacked with 02:10:128 (1) -
02:27:181 (2) - and again, it's about blanketing, the slider looks fine, but i might gonna made it more smooth (if you can't see the blanket, see here

00:29:628 (4,5,6) - Flow is super janky here Changed the structure.

01:20:391 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ nah, the 01:20:865 (1,2,3) - is kinda try to make a not perfect triangle, or an arrow. 01:21:338 (4) - is stacked with 01:21:338 (4) - and 01:21:496 (5,6) - is blanketing each other

03:03:812 (4,6) - Note hiding under the end of the slider is almost unreadable k, fixed

03:20:865 (1,2) - These should probably be normal sliders as theres no real sound on the repeat There is, lol listen carefully.

03:44:628 (8,9,10,1,2,3) - Again, super wonky flow It's a bit trying to half jumped stream, due to some patterns that i use with jump stream, but it seems to be ok, couse that isn't too long for a jump stream with this half chill song

I dunno, there are a lot of questionable design choices regarding slider shape/placement that you might want to get a second opinion on sooner rather than later.

GL though Thanks!

Lolinator2000 wrote:

Hi your from my mod queue so im gonna mod your map

Final

00:52:444 (1,2,3,4) Move these notes a bit lower OK
01:09:496 Add Spinner ^
01:13:286 (1) Move slider to x:328 y:216 ^
01:39:812 (1) Move slider to x:220 y:312 Nah, the end of slider is stacked with 01:39:181 (4) -
01:51:023 (8) Add distance snap Do something instead of DS
02:11:391 Add Spinner OK
02:27:812 Add Spinner OK
02:36:023 Move circle to x:328 y:120 x:328 y:124 is better
03:10:760 Add spinner OK
03:27:181 Add spinner OK
04:09:610 Move Notes to x:56 y:148 nah, i use DS in this part
04:58:084 Add distance snap nope.

1. 00:25:917 (1,2,3,4,5) - That part feel weird, since two slider go in a way, and the third one is going on the other way, so please consider changing that, like changing the flow of this move. Do something like "bottom-up-bottom"
2. 00:28:128 (2,3,4,5) - The flow here is quite questionnable, put the stream in an horizontal view.
3. 00:50:865 (3,6) - Blanket here
4. 01:02:865 (5,6) - Fix the blanket too here!
5. 01:24:023 (5,6) - Why those two are in reverse, but not the others?
6. 01:35:470 (5,6) - Fix distance snap here, it's not balanced, and there is no reason to increase the spacing
7. 02:02:549 (1,2) - At least try to change the curb of this slider, to make it equals...
8. 03:43:286 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Good luck to read that easily. At least do a CTRL+G
9. 04:03:610 (1,2) - Give it the same shape for both!
10. 04:20:662 (9) - Blanket with this note 04:20:347 (8) -
11. 04:23:189 (8) - Blanket too
12. 05:17:505 (3,4,5,6,7) - This is anti-flow! Ctrl+G the 5+6
13. That's all for me, I think the end is pretty cool, but the begining needs a lot of rework about flow/aesthetics stuffs. Good luck for it, you have potential!! :3

Pachiru wrote:

1. 00:25:917 (1,2,3,4,5) - That part feel weird, since two slider go in a way, and the third one is going on the other way, so please consider changing that, like changing the flow of this move. Do something like "bottom-up-bottom" ok, fixed
2. 00:28:128 (2,3,4,5) - The flow here is quite questionnable, put the stream in an horizontal view. ^
3. 00:50:865 (3,6) - Blanket here ^
4. 01:02:865 (5,6) - Fix the blanket too here! ^
5. 01:24:023 (5,6) - Why those two are in reverse, but not the others? First of all, saving more space, secondly, it is pretty jumpy, if didn't put any reverse, the player may confused with the beat.
6. 01:35:470 (5,6) - Fix distance snap here, it's not balanced, and there is no reason to increase the spacing moved a bit
7. 02:02:549 (1,2) - At least try to change the curb of this slider, to make it equals... ok, fixed
8. 03:43:286 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Good luck to read that easily. At least do a CTRL+G Nope, its pretty easy to read.
9. 04:03:610 (1,2) - Give it the same shape for both! ok, fixed
10. 04:20:662 (9) - Blanket with this note 04:20:347 (8) - it is already blanket, but move some anchor anyway
11. 04:23:189 (8) - Blanket too ^
12. 05:17:505 (3,4,5,6,7) - This is anti-flow! Ctrl+G the 5+6 ok, fixed
13. That's all for me, I think the end is pretty cool, but the begining needs a lot of rework about flow/aesthetics stuffs. Good luck for it, you have potential!! :3 Thank you! yeah, some part at the beginning kinda have some bad flow, etc. might remap if more people have problems with this.

ColdTooth wrote:

da mod

big ol warning, this is a huge mod, scroll at your own risk

well shit this is a streamy map when most of the notes don't really fit well enough IMO.

Let's first start off with timing. You got the right stuff, but the actual bpm for both Your Best Nightmare and Finale is 190.006. I know it doesn't mean like a whole lot, and I know it says 190 on wiki and other sites, but even decimals can throw off the simplest of timings before the next red line. Forgot the timing, but I'm still damn sure it's 190.006. I'd check really, even if it sounds similar, but I'm just saying. Nope, the timing is preferct, using .006 feels kinda weird.

k let's get into the map incoming lots of nazi modding and small opinions

[General]

You're not very consistent with hitsounding. I'd definitely reccommend sticking with the same rhythm that way noone gets confused and all that jumbled mess. And you're mostly going to want to have put a rhythm on every 3rd beat in each measure (because the beat sounds more 95 bpm than 180 bpm, and you can hear the bass in every 3rd beat). It just feels so... off having to hear spam of claps in random order. I'd definitely fix up the beat. 00:22:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - has a much different clap rhythm than 00:26:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and 00:32:865 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - , along with... 00:28:760 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hmmph, ok then, try to make some "pattern" for hitsounds in some part.

Mmhh.. some hitsounds are receiving too much attention or in this case "overhitsounding". For example 00:51:812 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , these are all freaking finishes. And they're used so damn excessively. Finishes are best used to start or end a combo, or something emphasizing. This is just way too much. It happens quite often too in this map, with the excessive claps in certain parts, not every damn note needs a hitsound. Ok then, i was using any custom hitsound with a bit low effect volume, so ididn't really notice this.

Some hitsounds just don't seem to fit IMO. For example, I get what you're going at with the claps and all at 01:11:075 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - , they are all consistent, but I feel like they don't fit along with the music. I don't hear and emphasizing beat on 90% of these claps, so maybe no hitsounds on some of them and claps on 2 and 4 might work better for this map. Just giving out my insight on that. It's pretty good thrpugh, but still have add some extra at 1/1 so it doesn't feel kinda no hitsound.

You could also lower some of the hitsounds on some part, like 00:54:338 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,1,2,3,4) - , these soft whistles are rather loud. Set it as 40%

Why are some soft parts of the song so fast? Some of it just feels overmapped and that's not a good thing Are you trying to point 00:59:391 - ? ok, i'll convert some slider so it looks easier

I start hearing some real streams at 05:21:926 - I think slider is more comfortable for this time, since it is using wavy sound so, i prefer slider instead of stream..

I'll provide more details down below in the mod.

[Finale]

CS4.5... lmao k lol

Your beginning has a lot of ugly patterns and just forced streams that I never heard often in the game. But then again.. streams are ok I guess in this situation since it's 2017. I awfully agree with the pattern, but for the stream, nah, i used the drum sounds for the stream..

00:22:996 (2) - Silent sound. I'd consider removing and just moving 00:23:075 (3) - in a flowing jump. ok, fixed, and moved

00:23:391 (6,7,8,9) - I don't like how these 4 have much larger space than the rest of these patterns later before the first spinner. I'd considering moving 00:23:233 (4,5,6) - somewhere around x178 y286 ok, but do some modification

00:24:654 (1,2,3) - This alone just doesn't play right for whatever reason. 00:24:812 (2) - isn't blanketing 00:24:654 (1) - properly and 00:24:970 (3) - is barely missing the blanket on 00:24:812 (2) - 's sliderhead. Use 1/16th beat snap divisor to get the max potential of a good blanket. Whoa, fixed.

00:26:154 (3) - The fact that these kinds of sliders start on a blue tick, which is really difficult to follow the music. Another example like this is 00:26:628 (1) - . There's more power on red and white ticks, these don't seem to start on blue ticks. Fixed too, and the notes after it

00:26:391 (5) - Fix blanket on 00:26:154 (3) - 's sliderend. Also, it's a downbeat slider, which is usually frowned upon unless done right. Here it's better off with a clickable note where the sliderend is. Blanketed, but do some modification due to your last mod, which makes me to convert that slider to 1/2

00:26:628 (1) - Yeah this doesn't really fit along with the music considering it starts on a blue tick 1/4th beat after the previous beat. Consider avoiding these as it can be disorienting for players trying to follow the flow. Due to your last mod too, this is note is now kinda fit with the music.

00:27:102 (4) - But you don't use something like this anywhere else except at the end, which really doesn't flow to the music. There's really no point to have an unnecessary jumpspike here. The tempo is the same as anywhere here before the first spinner. I'd remove this note here and make 00:27:181 (5) - two notes instead of a 1/4th slider. That way you can have a tiny stream leading up to 00:27:496 (8) - which flows a lot better than what we have here. Follow the mod, but some slight own modification..

00:27:812 (1) - Fix blanket on 00:27:496 (8) - 's sliderend. (Sorry if I'm being a nazi, it's a habit of mine) Slight move anchor, so kinda looks like its blanket

00:28:444 (3,4,5) - Eh, I think it's nice, but I don't think it's in the right place. 00:28:128 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - plays rather uncomfortably and could use some minor tweakings. You could try ctrl+g and place them all on x342 y118 (according to 00:28:444 (3) - 's placement) and see if that plays much better. Alternatively, you could make sure 00:28:128 (2,5) - stack onto each other, you can change that in the stack leniency, however I think that's frowned upon on certain situations. OK, used that x328 y118 + CTRL+G

00:28:128 (2) - Fix blanket on 00:27:812 (1) - 's sliderbegin Fixed

00:28:760 (6,7,8,9,1) - If you are going to have a stream here, I'd suggest each note having the same spacing equality, it just jumps from .52 to .49 to .55 to .39, which isn't really consistent. Fixed

00:29:391 (3,7) - Parallel better. ^

00:29:391 (3,4,5,6,7) - Holy spread out notes batman. It's fine if the triplet was touching one of them, but it just doesn't play right. They're all so close to each other I think maybe something like this would flow better, assuming you don't change the stream between the two sliders. ^

00:30:891 (4) - Fix blanket on 00:30:654 (3) - 's sliderend ^

00:31:602 (1) - Fix blanket on 00:31:917 (3) - 's sliderend ^

00:32:075 (4) - Fix blanket on 00:32:233 (5) - 's sliderbegin ^

00:31:602 (1,2,3,4,5) - I guess this plays ok. Maybe with small polishing it could look better, but idk what to say about it. i didn't really sure what to polish, but do slight modification

00:33:181 (3) - Eh, is this supposed to blanket 00:32:865 (1) - 's sliderend? Can't really tell. yeah, it should, fixed

00:33:338 (4) - Fix blanket on 00:33:181 (3) - 's sliderend ^

00:33:338 (4,5) - These two don't really go well together. A straight line slider for 00:33:338 (4) - might work but idk Not straight, but curved, blanket with 00:33:338 (4) - is better

00:34:128 (1) - Fix shape. It looks ugly. Not really ugly lol, but fixed

00:34:917 (6) - Fix blanket on 00:34:760 (5) - 's sliderend Not really sure about this one...

00:35:628 (2,3,4) - I would avoid having them so close to each other. It's fine for 00:35:628 (2,3) - although I think 00:35:628 (2) - should stack on 00:35:707 (3) - 's sliderbegin like you have for almost every slider w/ a note above it. If you do stack it properly, you won't have to move 00:36:023 (4) - at all, and it's perfectly blanketed so it's cool ok, stacked

00:36:970 (4,6) - Not parallel. Changed as curved, fix blanket on them

00:38:549 (5) - Fix blanket on 00:38:233 (3) - 's sliderend unless you weren't really going for that. I didn't really do that, but changed the slider.

00:38:470 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Feels rather uncomfortable to play IMO. The stream could use a small fix as it's all not the same spacing. Remove (4) and fix stream spacing

00:39:496 (3) - Doesn't seem to blanket 00:39:181 (1) - 's sliderbegin and it overlaps the stream slightly. Fixed

00:39:654 (4) - Blanket is slightly off on 00:39:812 (5) - 's sliderbegin Fixed

00:40:444 (1) - Fix blanket on 00:40:128 (7) - 's sliderend Fixed

00:41:865 (2) - Fix blanket on 00:41:549 (9) - 's sliderend Fixed

00:42:181 (3,4,5,6,7) - Move away from 00:41:865 (2) - so it doesn't overlap over the slider in an ugly manner. Fixed

00:42:181 (3,4,5,6,7) - On a side note, why is this stream's spacing different from 00:42:654 (8,9,10,11,1) - ? It's the same tempo, so it shouldn't really have less spacing. Due to this, i moved 00:42:181 (3,4,5,6,7) - and move 00:42:654 (8,9,10,11) - so they feel like blanket

00:43:523 (4) - But why? It's the same tempo as all the other mini triplets like 00:38:470 (4,5) - . It should stack on 00:43:602 (5) - really... Fixed

00:43:602 (5,6,7) - It'd probably flow a little better if they were all the same sliders, just with 6 flipped upside down. Fixed

00:45:023 (6) - Fix blanket on 00:45:496 (1) - and try to make the slider flow well with the way 00:44:865 (4,5) - is set up. Just make the slider look something like this or at least stack them

00:45:970 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - So what shape are we going here, pentagon? Diamond? Either way, if it was trying to look like any of those shapes, it's not looking like any of those shapes as it needs cleaning up. I think a diamond shape would work well for 00:46:444 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - , but it needs to look more like a diamond. Also the combos seem inconsistent and that needs to be addressed. 00:46:128 (1) - Remove NC, 00:46:760 (7) - NC, 00:47:075 (1) - Remove NC. More like polygon, i guess..

00:48:338 (3) - Fix blanket on 00:48:023 (1) - and 00:48:654 (5) - 's sliderend. Fixed

00:48:575 (4) - x96 y288 for better flow Fixed

00:48:654 (5,6) - These are not parallel, fix that. Fixed

00:49:128 (9,10,11,12) - None of these sliders seem to fit well with the whole downbeats. It might be because of the hitsounds making it sound like that, but I prefer the white ticks to have sliderbegins and not sliderends, as downbeats aren't the best here. Fixed

00:50:865 (3) - Doesn't seem to blanket 00:51:338 (6) - well. Fixed

00:51:102 (4,5) - Move to x395 y302 for better flow Fixed

00:51:338 (6) - Fix blanket on 00:51:496 (7) - 's sliderbegin I think it is all good.

00:51:733 (8) - Remove, doesn't seem to fit the music in any way.

00:51:812 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Remove ALL finishes here, it's considered spam and they're rather loud for what the music's volume offers. I also see another problem with the squares here. They're not really perfect squares. An easy way to tell that a square like this isn't perfect is moving 00:53:075 (1) - 1/4th beat ahead, and copying 00:52:444 (1) - 's note on 00:53:075 -. You'll find that not ever note in the square is consistent. OK, fixed

00:54:338 (1,2) - Fix blankets ^

00:56:233 (3) - Fix blanket on 00:55:917 (2) - 's sliderend It's fine .-.

00:56:549 (4) - Fix blanket on 00:56:233 (3) - 's sliderbegin OK, fixed

00:57:496 (1) - Stack on 00:56:549 (4) - 's slider end 00:57:496 (1) - Prefer x236 y240 than that

00:57:181 (1) - Remove NC OK

00:57:496 (1) - ^ OK

00:58:444 (1) - ^ OK

00:58:760 (1) - ^ OK

00:58:917 (2) - Stack on 00:58:128 (1) - 's sliderend OK

00:59:233 (4,5) - Fix blankets I didn't really sure get what you mean.

00:59:391 (5) - NC OK

00:59:707 (6) - Fix blanket on 01:00:023 (1) - OK

01:00:023 (1) - Remove NC OK

01:00:496 (4) - Stack on 00:59:707 (6) - 's sliderbegin OK

01:00:970 (2) - Fix blanket on 01:00:654 (1) - 's sliderbegin. Also the sliderend of this specific slider seems to overlap 00:59:707 (6,4) - OK

01:01:286 (3,4,5,6) - Why the large jumps? There's no indication in the song that makes it intense. Make the jump more less

01:03:181 (6) - NC

01:03:654 (7,8,1) - Oddly enough, this isn't the right beat. If you listen closely, there's actually a 1/8th beat here. I suggest removing 01:03:654 (7) - and adding a note at 01:03:773 - . Please don't overmap it, a simple 1/8th triplet won't be too bad as long as they're real close up together or a 1/8th slider repeat would work too. k, then, using repeat slider.

01:03:812 (1) - remove NC

01:04:444 (1,2) - Ugly overlapping here IMO Moved a bit..

01:05:707 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ nah, looks fine

01:06:654 (1) - Remove NC and fix blanket on 01:06:970 (2) - 's end half of the slider I don't really want blanket it, but moved a bit anyway

01:06:970 (2) - Fix blanket on 01:07:286 (3) - 's sliderbegin

01:07:444 (4,6) - Another ugly overlap nah, looks fine

01:07:917 (6) - Fix blanket on 01:07:602 (5) - 's sliderend I didn't want to blanket it, since it will ruin the 01:08:233 (1) - blanket

01:08:233 (1) - Fix blanket on 01:07:917 (6) - 's sliderbegin

01:08:707 (2,3) - See 01:03:654 (7,8,1) - 's note on 1/8ths. Seems like these are the only two cases where 1/8ths are ok

01:12:023 (1,3,5,7) - Doesn't seem to have consistent spacing like 01:12:181 (2,4,6,8) - Moved 01:12:023 (1,5,7) - so looks like the same spacing.

01:13:602 (2,3) - This jump is too excessive for the music. Fixed

01:13:760 (3,4) - Stack

01:13:917 (1) - Fix blanket on 01:13:760 (3) -

01:13:917 (1) - Remove NC too

01:14:549 (1) - Fix blanket on 01:14:865 (2) - 's sliderbegin

01:15:181 (1) - Remove NC

01:15:338 (3,4,5) - Excessive jumps.

01:16:760 (4) - Fix blanket on 01:16:444 (3) - 's sliderbegin

01:17:075 (1,2) - Fix blankets

01:17:549 (2,3) - Unreadable.

01:17:707 (3,4,5,6) - These jumps are just not ok, the music doesn't even feel intense to have these large-ass jumps. Lower jump

01:18:812 (3) - Move this somewhere else as the stack here doesn't like being stacked here

01:18:970 (4) - Fix blanket on 01:18:338 (1) - 's sliderbegin Seems not a prefect time and place for a blanket..

01:19:286 (5) - Fix blanket on 01:18:970 (4) - 's slider

01:19:602 (6) - NC

01:20:233 (1) - Remove NC

01:20:549 (3,4,5) - Fix spacing

01:20:865 (1,2,3,4) - Again, these jumps are way too excessive for a soft part of the song.

01:21:023 (2) - Stack on 01:20:075 (8,9,1) -

01:21:496 (5) - Fix blanket on 01:21:654 (6) - 's sliderbegin

01:21:812 (1) - Remove NC

01:21:970 (2) - x167 y85

01:22:128 (3) - NC

01:22:444 (5) - Fix blanket on 01:22:286 (4,6) - 's sliderends

01:23:075 (7) - Fix shape/blanket

01:23:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Uh... what LOL. First of all, these sliders are way too fast, like mentioned before, and they can be difficult to read the 1/4th repeats at 01:24:023 (5,6) - . Tone down the slider velocity, fix the shape of the whole thing, make it look prettier. Remapped

01:24:654 (7) - Also NC

01:25:286 (1) - Remove NC

01:25:917 (1) - Remove Finish. Although, I'd probably remove the note here in general because the spinner should start where that note is. Seems to fit better w/ the music.

01:27:181 (1,3) - Fix blankets

01:27:970 (6,1) - Not parallel

01:28:444 (1,3) - ^

01:30:970 (1) - Fix blanket on 01:31:128 (2) - 's sliderbegin

01:31:128 (2) - Fix blanket on 01:31:286 (3) - 's sliderend

01:31:286 (3,5) - Fix blanket

01:31:760 (6) - Fix blanket on 01:31:602 (5) - 's sliderend

01:32:865 (5,6,7,8) - With different spacing from each slider, it doesn't really flow all that great. They don't seem to blanket properly, and it could be a little bit unreadable Fix spacing

01:33:812 (3,6,1) - Uhm... stack?

01:34:602 (8) - Fix stack on 01:34:286 (6) - 's sliderend Did you mean, blanket?

01:36:181 (2) - Move this somewhere else other than under 01:35:707 (7) - 's sliderepeat. Doesn't seem to flow all that well and can be rather confusing.

01:36:812 (8,1) - Fix parallel

01:37:760 (3,4,5,6,1) - This whole thing here doesn't look pretty... Moved, changed slider

01:38:865 (2) - Fix blanket on 01:38:549 (1,3) - 's sliderends I think its good.

01:39:023 (3) - Fix blanket on 01:39:181 (4) - 's sliderend

01:39:496 (5) - Fix blanket on 01:39:181 (4) - 's sliderbegin

01:39:812 (1) - 's sliderend should stack on 01:39:181 (4) - 's sliderbegin properly

01:40:286 (3,4,5) - Doesn't flow all that well...

01:41:075 (1) - Fix blanket on 01:40:760 (6) - 's sliderbegin

01:41:391 (3) - Fix blanket on 01:41:549 (4) - 's sliderbegin

01:41:075 (1,4) - Overlapping issue Move these a bit, so doesn't feel strange with 01:41:075 (1) -

- Checkpoint, as per 15/01/2017 -

01:41:707 (5) - Fix blanket on 01:41:549 (4) - 's sliderbegin

01:42:023 (6) - Fix blanket on 01:41:391 (3) - 's slider

01:42:338 (1) - Fix blanket on 01:42:654 (3) - 's sliderbegin

01:43:444 (8) - I don't like this slider ending on a white tick, doesn't feel right, maybe something clickable would work instead

01:43:760 (1) - Fix blanket on 01:43:444 (8) - 's sliderend

01:44:549 (6) - Fix blanket on 01:44:865 (1) - 's slider

01:44:707 (7) - Fix blanket on 01:44:549 (6) - 's sliderend

01:44:865 (1,2,3,4,5) - Oh my god this looks ugly. I don't even know where to begin, the overlapping on 01:44:865 (1,3,4,5) - is just bad and needs polished up.

01:46:128 (1,5) - More overlaps

01:46:444 (3) - Fix blanket on 01:46:681 (4,5) - 's sliderbegin and note

01:47:233 (7) - It would probably be better in flow if the slider was the same as 01:47:075 (6) - , except flipped and ctrl+j and maybe at x400 y176

01:48:654 (1) - Fix blanket? I'd double check

01:49:917 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why did you stop using cla[s, it seems rather inconsisten

01:49:917 (1) - x40 y304

01:50:233 (3) - Fix blanket on 01:50:865 (7) -

01:50:549 (5) - Fix blanket on 01:50:707 (6) -

01:52:128 (5,6,7,8) - Remove. There seems to be another 1/8th starting at 01:52:286 (7) - , but I'm not sure. The first two of these sliders definelty need removed and replaced with 1/4th notes

01:53:075 (4,1) - Parallel these to look better

01:53:707 (1,2,3,4) - Remove. Finishes. Also these don't look all that good when they overlap like that.

01:56:233 (1) - Fix blanket on 01:56:549 (2) - 's sliderbegin

01:57:338 (6) - Stack on 01:56:549 (2) - 's sliderend

01:57:496 (1,2,3) - I like these blankets, they're good. I just think they would look better if they had equal gaps in between the blanket and the note.

01:59:075 (2) - Looks better at x396 y332

01:59:707 (5) - Fix blanket on 02:00:023 (1) - 's sliderend

02:00:023 (1) - Fix blanket on 02:00:338 (2) - 's sliderend

02:00:654 (3,4,5,6) - Shape here needs a bit of work, right now it looks sloppy.

02:01:760 (2) - Blanket 02:02:075 (3) -

02:02:075 (3) - Stack on 02:01:286 (1) - 's sliderend if you're going to

02:02:075 (3,4,5) - Triangle shape doesn't look like an equilateral triangle

02:02:549 (1,2) - Too close to each other. Give these guys some space.

02:03:338 (3,4,5) - Also triangle shape that needs work

---- CHECKPOINT ----

02:03:812 (1) - Fix blanket on 02:04:286 (2) - 's slider

02:05:075 (6,7) - Lower volume.

02:05:075 (6) - Also fix blanket on 02:04:917 (5) -

02:05:707 (7) - damn that's a tight slider

02:05:707 (7,8,1) - Triple here doesn't flow all that well and could use some work. Don't have them spread out like this cause it doesn't fit with the music

02:06:970 (3) - Fix sliderend on 02:05:707 (7) - 's 1st bump

02:06:338 (1) - Fix blanket

02:07:602 (5) - Fix blanket on 02:08:075 (6) - 's sliderend

02:08:549 (7) - Anti-jump doesn't fit here.

02:08:865 (1) - Fix blanket on 02:09:338 (2) - 's slider

02:10:128 (1) - damn thats a tight slider

02:13:917 (1,1,1,1,2,3,4) - Lol why all the finishes, they don't even fit

02:13:128 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Fix hexagon shape

02:15:496 (3,4,1) - inconsistent spacing Nope, its has the same spacing.

02:16:286 (3) - Almost unreadable

02:16:444 (1) - Fix blanket on 02:17:075 (3) - 's sliderend

02:16:760 (2) - ...Is this supposed to be a blanket?

02:17:391 (4) - Fix blanket on 02:17:075 (3) - 's sliderbegin

02:17:707 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,3,5,1,3,5,1,2,3,1,2) - Too many whistles, don't seem to fit

02:22:128 (2) - Blanket a little bit better

02:24:654 (5) - Blanket

02:25:602 (2,1) - Odd overlap

02:27:181 (2) - Fix blanket

CHECKPOINT ;w;

02:29:391 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Inconsistent jumps

02:31:838 (2) - Just stack on 02:31:917 (3) -

02:32:154 (4) - doesn't look clean imo

02:34:444 (2,3) - Not parallel

02:35:391 (1,2) - ^

02:36:338 (6,7,1,2) - Looks ugly with all the overlapping

02:37:286 (4,5) - Not parallel

02:39:654 (3,6) - Stack

02:42:970 (1) - Fix blanket on 02:43:286 (2) -

02:43:444 (3) - Fix stack or move somewhere else Fix stack instead of moving.

02:44:391 (2) - x440 y200

02:45:496 (1) - Try to blanket 02:45:181 (6,7,8) -

02:46:444 (7,8,1) - Slightly off overlapping issue

02:54:338 - Maybe add a spinner?

02:59:391 (1,2,3) - Fix shape or make it like 03:00:023 (1,2,3) -

03:01:602 (1) - Remove NC

03:01:917 (2) - NC

03:01:917 (2) - Fix blanket on 03:01:602 (1) - 's sliderbegin

03:02:549 (5) - Fix blanket on 03:02:391 (4) -

03:03:417 (2) - Fix blanket on 03:03:181 (1) - 's sliderend

03:04:049 (5) - Fix blanket on 03:03:812 (4) - 's sliderend

03:04:444 (1,1) - These don't sound like 3/4th sliders.. more like 3/2nds

03:05:075 (1) - Remove NC

03:06:023 (2) - Fix blanket on 03:06:338 (3) - 's sliderend

03:06:338 (3,4,5) - Song is not intense enough to have a triplet like this

03:07:286 (2) - Unstack

03:07:917 (4) - Fix blanket on 03:08:233 (5) - 's sliderbegin

03:09:496 (3) - Fix blanket on 03:10:128 (4) - 's sliderrepeat

03:21:496 (2) - Fix blanket on 03:20:865 (1) - 's sliderrepeat

03:28:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Fix those unconsistent claps

03:30:812 (2,10) - Downbeats don't fit here

03:31:602 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Very uncomfortable to play IMO

03:33:181 (1) - Remove NC

03:33:496 (3) - NC

03:34:444 (1) - Remove NC

03:36:338 (2) - Fix blanket on 03:36:023 (1) - 's sliderend

03:37:286 (1) - Fix blanket on 03:37:602 (2) -

03:37:760 (3) - x108 y28

03:38:549 (1) - Fix blanket on 03:38:865 (2) - 's sliderbegin

03:39:338 (5) - Fix stack

03:40:128 (2) - Fix blanket on 03:39:812 (1) - 's sliderend

03:40:365 (3,4,5) - Confusing to play, unreadable

03:40:602 (5,1) - Fix up some blankets here

03:41:075 (1,2,3) - But there's no intense part here, it's all the same sound, no need to overmap...

03:43:760 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - It's "readable", but as said in earlier points, this is overmapping because it's literally the same tempo over and over again, you didn't do this before, and you shouldn't really do it here as the tempo is just the same.

03:44:865 (1) - Fix blanket on 03:45:102 (2) -

03:45:812 (6,7,8,9,1) - Fix circle blanket on 03:45:654 (5) -

03:47:391 (1) - Why a 3/4th slider? Should be 1/2th like the rest of your combos

03:47:707 (2) - Fix blanket on 03:47:391 (1) - 's sliderbegin also this poorly overlaps the streams here

03:48:338 (5,6) - Fix blankets

03:48:970 (3) - Fix blanket on 03:48:654 (1) - 's sliderend

03:49:286 (5,6,7) - Fix spacing

03:49:602 (7,8,1) - Another overmapped triplet

03:50:865 (7,8) - A little unreadable

03:51:496 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Just.. no. You didn't do this before with this same tempo, why aren't you consistent?

03:55:917 (5,6,7,8) - See note on 01:52:128 (5,6,7,8) - 's 1/8ths note

03:56:549 (3) - Fix blanket on 03:56:865 (5) - 's sliderend

03:58:760 (1) - Why is there a normal sound at the end of the spinner? Doesn't sound that loud, if anything, a soft sound works better

04:02:347 (4,5,6) - Not a good overlap

04:03:610 (1,2) - Not parallel

04:05:505 (6) - Blanket 04:06:136 (1) - 's sliderbegin

04:06:610 (2) - Fix blanket on 04:06:136 (1) - 's sliderend

04:07:399 (1) - Remove NC to keep NC consistent

04:09:136 (2) - Fix blanket on 04:08:662 (1) - 's sliderend

04:09:610 (3,4,5) - Equilateral triangle works better

04:11:189 (1) - Not the best blanket imo

04:15:610 (6) - Fix blanket on 04:15:926 (7) - 's sliderbegin

04:16:241 (8) - NC and fix blanket on 04:15:926 (7) - 's sliderend

04:17:505 (1) - Remove NC for consistency

04:17:505 (1) - Fix blanket on 04:17:820 (2) - 's sliderbegin

04:18:136 (3) - Fix blanket on 04:17:820 (2) - 's sliderend

04:20:662 (9) - Blanket 04:20:347 (8) - better

04:20:662 (9) - Also this appears to end on a white tick, consider making that tick clickable I don't think so, the slider fits with the song anyway.

04:21:610 (2) - Fix blanket on 04:21:452 (1) -

04:22:241 (4) - Fix blanket on 04:21:926 (3) - 's sliderend

04:22:873 (6,9) - Stack

04:23:820 (10) - NC and fix blanket on 04:23:189 (8) - 's sliderbegin

04:24:452 (1) - Remove NC and fix blanket on 04:24:768 (2) - 's sliderbegin

04:24:768 (2) - Fix blanket on 04:25:084 (3) - 's sliderrepeat

04:25:715 (5) - Fix blanket on 04:25:084 (3) - 's sliderrepeat

04:27:136 (4) - Fix blanket on 04:26:820 (3) - 's sliderbegin

04:26:662 (2,6) - Stack?

04:28:873 (1) - Fix blanket on 04:29:189 (2) -

04:29:347 (3) - Fix blanket on 04:29:662 (4) -

04:29:662 (4,5,6) - Triangle

04:30:136 (1) - Remove NC

04:30:452 (1) - ^

04:30:768 (1) - ^

04:31:399 (1) - Fix blanket on 04:31:084 (3) - . Remove some nodes too, they're not needed

04:32:031 (3,4) - Try to blanket 04:31:399 (1) - 's sliderbegin Did you mean sliderend?

04:32:978 (2) - Fix blanket on 04:32:662 (1,4) - 's sliderends

04:34:241 (2) - Fix blanket on 04:33:610 (5) - 's sliderend, you dont need all of those nodes

04:34:715 (4) - Fix overlapping issue with 04:34:241 (2) -

04:35:189 (1,2,3) - Many blanket issues. Fixies

04:36:926 (3) - Stack on bump

04:37:399 (6) - Fix blanket on 04:37:241 (5) - 's sliderend

04:37:715 (8) - NC for consistency

04:38:505 (11) - Fix blanket on 04:38:347 (10) - 's sliderend

04:38:662 (12) - Fix blanket on 04:38:899 (13) -

04:39:610 (1) - Remove NC and fix blanket on 04:39:452 (3) -

04:40:241 (3) - NC

04:40:557 (4) - x376 y60

04:42:136 (3,2,6) - Stack

04:42:452 (4,3) - ^

04:44:031 (1) - Blanket better

04:44:662 (2) - ^

04:45:294 (4) - NC

04:45:610 (5,1) - Stack

04:46:557 (1) - Blanket 04:47:031 (2) - 's sliderbegin a lil better

04:47:031 (2,3,4,5) - Big spacing into this small spacing. Why no consistency? They all seems to have same spacing .-.

04:47:662 (5) - Fix blanket on 04:47:347 (3) -

04:47:978 - Should be a note here for flow

04:49:084 (1,2) - Should be the same sliders

04:48:610 (4,1) - Blanket

04:50:031 (5) - Fix blanket on 04:50:347 (6) - 's sliderrepeat

04:50:347 (6) - NC

04:50:978 (7) - Fix blanket on 04:51:294 (8) -

04:52:873 (5) - NC0

04:53:347 (6) - Stack on 04:53:978 (8) -

04:53:505 (7) - Fix blanket on 04:54:136 (1) - 's sliderbegin

04:54:136 (1,3) - Fix blanket

04:55:399 (5) - Fix blanket on 04:55:873 (6) -

04:55:399 (5) - NC

04:56:031 (7) - Fix blanket on 04:56:662 (1) - 's sliderbegin

04:58:241 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Shape is off. Well, there really is no shape here. You could try a hexagon here.

05:00:452 (4) - Remove the repeat and extend it as a 2/1 slider

05:01:557 (6) - x488 y160

05:02:031 (2) - Fix blanket on 05:01:715 (1) - 's sliderbegin

05:02:505 (4) - Stack

05:02:662 (1) - Fix blanket on 05:02:347 (3) -

05:02:662 (1) - Remove NC

05:02:978 (2) - NC

05:02:978 (2) - Blanket on 05:03:452 (3) - 's sliderbegin

05:04:241 (1) - Fix blanket on 05:04:873 (3) -

05:05:031 (4) - Fix blanket on 05:04:715 (2) -

05:05:505 (1) - Fix blanket on 05:05:031 (4) - 's sliderbegin. It's also way too close to 05:05:031 (4) - so i'd advise moving it away from that

05:06:768 (1) - slider overlapping slider sections

05:07:399 (3) - Fix blanket on 05:06:768 (1) - 's sliderbegin

----------- CHECKPOINT aaaaaa finally almost done ;w;

05:08:505 (3,4) - aaa more unreadable this

05:08:662 (4) - Fix blanket on 05:08:978 (5) - 's sliderend

05:09:294 (1) - Fix blanket on 05:08:978 (5) - 's sliderend

05:09:768 (2,4) - stack Nope, moved instead

05:11:347 (2) - x196 y28

05:11:505 (3) - Remove. There's no indication here of 1/8ths

05:11:820 (1) - Fix blanket on 05:12:294 (3) -

05:12:452 (4) - Fix blanket on 05:12:768 (5) - 's bump

05:12:768 (5) - Fix blanket on 05:12:452 (4) - 's sliderbegin

05:14:347 (2) - Fix blanket on 05:14:031 (1) - 's sliderend

05:14:820 (1) - Remove NC

05:14:820 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fix star shape. Looks nothing like a star not really, but if i moved it, it will ruin more things

05:15:610 (6) - Remove NC also fix blanket on 05:14:820 (1) -

05:15:926 (7,8) - Blanket issues

05:16:557 (9) - Remove. No indication of 1/8ths

05:17:505 (3,4,5,6) - I don't hear any of this in the song You might not hear anything about this beat, but, let just say it is a new beat, through it still have the same beat, and i used it on the next part, so it will not be sayed as overmap, and also sayed as a pattern.

05:18:768 (4,5,6,7) - ^

05:18:452 (3) - Fix blanket on 05:18:136 (1) - 's sliderend

05:20:662 (1,2,3,4) - Fix square shape

05:21:294 (5) - Fix blanket on 05:21:136 (4) - 's sliderbegin and 05:21:768 (7) - 's sliderend

05:21:926 (1) - Past this point, I mentioned that you can hear the actual streams here, and that is what should've been streamy. Instead you placed a simple 1/1 slider here instead of emphasizing that sweet stream. See above, and i think its not really fit.

05:24:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Too overmapped for what you have mapped so far

05:27:610 (4,5,6,7,5,6,7,8) - I hear 1/1 sliders and red ticks in between each one being a note, not double taps

05:29:820 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Ugly, inconsistent, and overmapped

05:30:610 (7,1) - Not parallel

05:30:768 (1,2) - ^

05:31:399 (3,4,5,6) - See 05:27:610 (4,5,6,7,5,6,7,8) -

05:32:031 (1,2,3) - Same tempo, yet you're still overmapping it.

05:32:662 (1) - Remove NC

05:33:294 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nerf

05:34:557 (8) - NC

05:34:794 (1) - Remove NC

05:35:189 (1) - ^

05:35:505 (1) - ^

05:35:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Overmapped which is why the stars are so high.

05:39:768 (6) - NC

05:39:926 (1) - Remove NC

05:40:873 (4) - NC

05:40:873 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I hear a stream same as above

05:44:741 (1) - Remove this spinner and just extend the first one. Nope, player will get bored.

Well damn, I did not expect this to be a huge mod, as I was only pointing out what needed polishing and what just didn't flow right. The beginning of Your Best Nightmare doesn't really have the right flow, too streamy and too jumpy at the softer parts. Finale was just a jumbled mess of different flows happening all at once, which just didn't feel right IMO. There were a lot of a blankets, and yes I did go full nazi after seeing so many. But I pointed out about 90% of them. I felt like a nice person for helping you out polishing the map. It's not a bad map, it's definitely got potential, I think you have potential. You just gotta find that sweet spot of flow, and it'll be awesome. Yeah, i think i should rather remap some part at Your Best Nightmare, and about the Finale, it's not that what you think, especially the last kiai, the songs really get soo intense, so that's why I make the last kiai pretty intense, but still, i changed some part that really makes the diff jump.

I do apologize heavily if I sounded a little rude in my mod. I wish you best of luck, and here, take a star. It's ok, thanks for the star!

1. 00:23:865 (8) and 00:25:128 (4,5) and 00:35:233 (8,9) - They both represent the same sound, yet one is stacks and the other is a slider. Convert both into a slider of a triple to have map consistency.
2. 00:31:049 (5,6) - The stressed note starts on circle 5, so slider 6 should starts where 5 is.

1. 00:57:812 (7,8,9) and 00:59:075 (6,7) - They both have the same sound, so should be mapped as the same.
2. 01:03:181 (1) - The note doesn't end where the slider ends, so the slider end seems out of place.
3. 01:07:286 (7,8) - The sliders are too long to be recognized as 1/4th sliders.
4. 01:09:023 (4,5,6,7) - These should be either both triple stacks, or a single circle, as the sounds 01:08:865 and 01:09:181 are the same. Listen at 50% speed and without the circles.
5. 01:20:549 (7,8,9) - This triple is not spaced correctly.

1. 01:10:760 - 01:15:812 - This part of the section is just the same 4 parts repeating, with a higher set for the second half. The order and type of objects should stay constant, and only the spacing should change to highlight the raising of the melody.
2. 01:14:154 (2) - This has no note underneath it.
3. 01:15:260 (2) - This has no note underneath it.
4. 01:17:549 (2,4,6) - These objects do not have any notes underneath it.
5. 01:19:917 (2,3,4) - These notes do not have notes underneath. For circle (2), which is the ending of the long note following 01:19:602 (1) , just end the slider on that note.
6. 01:21:496 (5,6) - These notes should not be sliders, as this part of the song is too slow to support them.
7. 01:22:128 (1,2) - These are the same sound as the previous objects, so should receive the same treatment as the others.
8. 01:22:760 (4) - This slider needs to bend as it opposes the direction of rotation. The direction 01:21:496 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) made.
9. 01:23:865 (3) - This slider needs to bend to change the direction of rotation. The direction 01:23:391 (1,2) made.

1. 01:27:181 - 01:37:286 - This part is just 01:27:181 - 01:29:707 repeated 4 times, so the 4 times it repeats, have similar circles representing these parts. Choose your favorite part, and just rearrange the parts to your hearts content. If you are going to do this, change the slider shapes to distinguish between chunks.
2. 01:37:286 - 01:47:391 - To an extent, this section also has it repeating 4 times, but with extra strained notes, raising the intensity. This should closely match the earlier part, but with greater spacing, or with say a triple starting the repeated chunk.

1. 02:02:075 (3,3) - These circles are not mapped to any notes. Maybe extend the slider for the snider end to be where they are right now.
2. 02:10:128 (5,6) - Jumping 90 degrees between slow sliders is really awkward. Rotate slider (6) so the exit of (5) lines up with it's entry.
3. 02:11:312 (7) - This circle seems out of place, due to there being no sound under it, and the fact it is placed so suddenly for the slow section.

1. 02:16:917 (3,4) - This overlap raises the difficulty in a part of a song where nothing is happening.

1. 02:30:023 (7,8,9,10) - 02:32:549 (6,7,8,9) - 02:33:812 (5,6) - These 3 represent the same sounds, even though they are all different.
2. 02:38:707 (10) - The stream hides this circle from view, making it hard to read.
3. 02:49:286 (1) - The last note starts here, so shouldn't the spinner start here instead of a circle delaying it?
4. 02:49:286 (1) - 02:54:338 - Maybe you can cut out this bit by editing the sound file, but this is difficult to do. I don't have anyone to point to so if you can't do it, ignore this point.

1. 03:00:654 (1,2) , 03:01:917 (1,2) , 03:02:549 (4,5) and so many more! Please make the slider tails silent, or have the end where the beat it, because it is making this weird double click where it should not have one.

1. 03:12:023 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This is way too intense for this section. Compare it with 03:48:023 (3,4) and 01:49:602 (6,7) , both examples of way more intense sounds being represented by way smaller jumps. Just make the gaps smaller.
2. 03:20:865 (1,2) - The timing where the reverse should represent is on the white tick, which the reverse arrow plays on the blue tick before it. Just end the slider on the white tick, as a reverse would be inappropriate at representing a long then a short sound.

mindmaster107 wrote:

Before you read my mod, I will point out mainly things you should clean up in the map. The major changes will be written at the heading of the mod.
I understand sometimes you over-map to emphasize notes, but I will point out the ones where it is inappropriate.
You also need to repeat concepts. By concepts, I mean the order, and spacing of objects if the music repeats. This song is full of repeated sections, so this is very relevant to your song.
You also sometimes have good flow. This can trick the player, as a sudden high quality bit of flow, may trick the player into thinking the part after also follows this flow. Either make sure you never have any rotational flow (It's actually called circular flow, but I will call it rotational because it is not always circles.), or remap some bits to accommodate this.
I am putting too much effort for 1 kudosu XD.

[Final]
00:00:023 to 00:22:760 - You can insert a small video of the intro to the flowey fight from the game for the first section. This may help hype the player up. Maybe no, too slow for me to map..

First Flowey section 00:22:760 to 00:45:496
Note that the first section is just 00:22:760 - 00:30:338 repeated 3 times. Try to have the order of circles and sliders the same for the 3 mini-repeating sections of the song. This doesn't mean copy and paste, or use the same types of jumps and techniques, while the latter may help. Since the circles and sliders make sound, having the sounds repeat compliments the song, which is the purpose of mapping.

1. 00:23:865 (8) and 00:25:128 (4,5) and 00:35:233 (8,9) - They both represent the same sound, yet one is stacks and the other is a slider. Convert both into a slider of a triple to have map consistency.
2. 00:31:049 (5,6) - The stressed note starts on circle 5, so slider 6 should starts where 5 is.

Let me explain, having the same pattern of a song doesn't mean that you need to have the same note with before, it is not very creative, and very not cool to see, some part may couse unreadable, and some part make the flow really bad.

00:48:023 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is a slow section, so fast sliders are inappropriate. seriously? you see that I map the drum and bass sound, not the BG sound, the drum and bass sound are much intense, so, I put some sliders, etc there.

First Soul 00:54:338 - 01:09:496
This whole section is alot less intense than the First Flowey Section, so the whole thing should be alot slower than it. The inheriting point at 00:59:391 makes the sliders 1.5 faster than the First Flowey Section, which makes no sense. I know, but that doesn't mean that I can do some jumps, and some 1/4 slider, for the 1.5 SV, i would make the jump consistent with the SV, so the player won't confused

1. 00:57:812 (7,8,9) and 00:59:075 (6,7) - They both have the same sound, so should be mapped as the same. Read above
2. 01:03:181 (1) - The note doesn't end where the slider ends, so the slider end seems out of place. The slider end has a sound, lol, and didn't out of place.
3. 01:07:286 (7,8) - The sliders are too long to be recognized as 1/4th sliders. Converted to circle
4. 01:09:023 (4,5,6,7) - These should be either both triple stacks, or a single circle, as the sounds 01:08:865 and 01:09:181 are the same. Listen at 50% speed and without the circles. I don't think so, the original one feels better.
5. 01:20:549 (7,8,9) - This triple is not spaced correctly. It's fine

Second Soul 01:10:760 - 01:25:917
Like the First Soul fight, the sliders and spacing are too fast for this section. see above

1. 01:10:760 - 01:15:812 - This part of the section is just the same 4 parts repeating, with a higher set for the second half. The order and type of objects should stay constant, and only the spacing should change to highlight the raising of the melody.
2. 01:14:154 (2) - This has no note underneath it. What do you mean? if you think there is no sound about this note, you're wrong
3. 01:15:260 (2) - This has no note underneath it. ^
4. 01:17:549 (2,4,6) - These objects do not have any notes underneath it. ^
5. 01:19:917 (2,3,4) - These notes do not have notes underneath. For circle (2), which is the ending of the long note following 01:19:602 (1) , just end the slider on that note. ^ and that feels weird
6. 01:21:496 (5,6) - These notes should not be sliders, as this part of the song is too slow to support them. It's strong enough for this sliders
7. 01:22:128 (1,2) - These are the same sound as the previous objects, so should receive the same treatment as the others. ^
8. 01:22:760 (4) - This slider needs to bend as it opposes the direction of rotation. The direction 01:21:496 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) made. As I said above, i don't want to make this pretty "pattern-ish" that would make the flow really bad
9. 01:23:865 (3) - This slider needs to bend to change the direction of rotation. The direction 01:23:391 (1,2) made. ^

Second Flowey section 01:27:181 - 01:54:970
Not much is wrong gameplaywise, but I don't know if the weird angles you need to jump with are intentional.

1. 01:27:181 - 01:37:286 - This part is just 01:27:181 - 01:29:707 repeated 4 times, so the 4 times it repeats, have similar circles representing these parts. Choose your favorite part, and just rearrange the parts to your hearts content. If you are going to do this, change the slider shapes to distinguish between chunks.
2. 01:37:286 - 01:47:391 - To an extent, this section also has it repeating 4 times, but with extra strained notes, raising the intensity. This should closely match the earlier part, but with greater spacing, or with say a triple starting the repeated chunk.

See above.

Third Soul 01:56:233 - 02:11:391
Have repeated sections be mapped similarly to reflect music.

1. 02:02:075 (3,3) - These circles are not mapped to any notes. Maybe extend the slider for the snider end to be where they are right now. Drum sound .-.
2. 02:10:128 (5,6) - Jumping 90 degrees between slow sliders is really awkward. Rotate slider (6) so the exit of (5) lines up with it's entry. Technically, it's not really a jump, it is not really that long jump, player still can reach it easily
3. 02:11:312 (7) - This circle seems out of place, due to there being no sound under it, and the fact it is placed so suddenly for the slow section. Removed

Fourth Soul 02:12:654 - 02:27:812
This section has 02:12:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) , which is your exemplar of how to do similar pattern, with variation to give flow, and to maintain readability. This section as a whole is pretty good, apart from:

1. 02:16:917 (3,4) - This overlap raises the difficulty in a part of a song where nothing is happening. CTRL+G ed

Third Flowey section 02:29:075 - 02:54:338
The whole section has fast sliders with slow jumps. This means you have to constantly and randomly speed up and slow down.

1. 02:30:023 (7,8,9,10) - 02:32:549 (6,7,8,9) - 02:33:812 (5,6) - These 3 represent the same sounds, even though they are all different. See above
2. 02:38:707 (10) - The stream hides this circle from view, making it hard to read. Moved
3. 02:49:286 (1) - The last note starts here, so shouldn't the spinner start here instead of a circle delaying it? k
4. 02:49:286 (1) - 02:54:338 - Maybe you can cut out this bit by editing the sound file, but this is difficult to do. I don't have anyone to point to so if you can't do it, ignore this point. didn't get it, ignored.

Fifth Soul 02:55:602 - 03:10:760
This was alot blander than the other soul fights. By bland, I meant it felt too easy to play compared to the other soul bits. This may be because the other soul sections are too hard, or this section is too easy.

1. 03:00:654 (1,2) , 03:01:917 (1,2) , 03:02:549 (4,5) and so many more! Please make the slider tails silent, or have the end where the beat it, because it is making this weird double click where it should not have one. Hmmph, maybe no, all of them have the sounds and double clicking it becouse of the sound, too.

Sixth Soul 03:12:023 - 03:27:181
Same problem as the Fifth soul section. I think having these sections easy is better, as it is supposed to be a moment's relief between the flowey sections, where the real fight is happening.

1. 03:12:023 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This is way too intense for this section. Compare it with 03:48:023 (3,4) and 01:49:602 (6,7) , both examples of way more intense sounds being represented by way smaller jumps. Just make the gaps smaller. I ain't Monstrata, but about this, i think its fine (through the diff spike is at this section)
2. 03:20:865 (1,2) - The timing where the reverse should represent is on the white tick, which the reverse arrow plays on the blue tick before it. Just end the slider on the white tick, as a reverse would be inappropriate at representing a long then a short sound. Feels weird

Fourth Flowey section 03:28:444 - 03:58:760
[list][*]03:33:181 (9,10) - These sliders should be replaced with a stream entry into the slider, starting on where slider (9) starts. This is to match the music, if you listen under 25%, and to match the rest of the section. It should be fine, if other people have the same opinion, i'll change it
[*]03:35:707 (5,6) - Same issue as above /\ ^
[*]03:43:917 (3) - This sudden snap is inappropriate, as the next snap you have to make is 100 degrees, which is really weird to make. nope, looks fine
[*]03:52:760 (3,4,5) - This is placed in such a weird angle. To achive the effect I think you are going for, move 03:52:602 (2) further down and the triple stream further up to have the angles better fit. 03:52:602 (2) - put this lower.


I am not modding the next section as my eyes are hurting too much from the screen brightness. Maybe add a more creative background? nah, keep it black, as the game is.