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kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年10月24日 at 23:32:52

Artist: Koji Wada
Title: re-fly
Tags: Digimon Adventure monster refly Kouji Gyro Zeppeli [_Abhor_] Kencho デジモンアドベンチャー tri.
BPM: 166
Filesize: 5146kb
Play Time: 01:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Abhor's Hard (3.23 stars, 306 notes)
  2. Easy (1.47 stars, 133 notes)
  3. Gyro's Normal (1.95 stars, 190 notes)
  4. Insane (4.47 stars, 425 notes)
  5. Kencho's Nirvana (4.7 stars, 477 notes)
Download: Koji Wada - re-fly
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#2 Ranked
RIP Wada Kouji, we are missing you.
Happy Birthday Gyro！
Diffs
Easy by | Me √
Gyro's Normal by | Gyro Zeppeli √
Abhor's Hard by | [ Abhor ] √
Insane by | Me √
Kencho's Nirvana by |Kencho √

Butter-Fly~tri.Version~here!
Last edited by kanor , edited 55 times in total.
- Angelia
118 posts
Joined August 2013
- Angelia
[nir]

你看着改 别管这个傻逼下面的意见


00:26:446 (1,2,3,4,1) -
↓1以后只有这两个地方有音
00:27:078 (2) -
00:27:349 (3) -

00:35:120 (3) - finish不好听

00:38:012 (1) - ctrl+g

01:03:494 (1) - nc
01:03:856 (3) - nc

01:03:856 (3,4) - 有点远

01:07:199 (4,5,6,7) - 有迷惑性

我只会做in 不会摸其他的
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

- Angelia wrote:

[nir]

你看着改 别管这个傻逼下面的意见


00:26:446 (1,2,3,4,1) -
↓1以后只有这两个地方有音
00:27:078 (2) -
00:27:349 (3) - OK

00:35:120 (3) - finish不好听 这个曲子里有，不放等着被挑X

00:38:012 (1) - ctrl+g 改了之后不合flow,现在的锐角跳也挺好

01:03:494 (1) - nc 这个我NC了呀
01:03:856 (3) - nc 因为我01:06:385 (1,2,3) - 也没NC，就不NC了

01:03:856 (3,4) - 有点远 改了改，不过感觉应该差不多......

01:07:199 (4,5,6,7) - 有迷惑性 改了

我只会做in 不会摸其他的
你只会做I
Ryuusei Aika
Elite Mapper
1,116 posts
Joined January 2016
Ryuusei Aika
来了

General
Source加上 デジモンアドベンチャーtri
Tag写你们能联想到的一切日语英语中文的跟数码宝贝有关的东西
Easy和Hard在01:50:301之后的旋律有点浪费，懒的话可以直接学Normal转到最后，不过Hard建议要是能摆几下的话还是摆几下然后在01:56:084这里再下转盘
尽量统一一下kiai结束时间
hitsound的问题都是主观意见，改不改都无所谓

Easy
kiai忘加了？
00:27:891 (3) - 滑条尾的whistle去掉会好点，这个地方节奏感觉不用下那么密
00:31:506 (4) - 滑条头那个whistle也建议去掉，理由同上
00:32:229 (1) - 叠得有点歪，移到284|223试试
00:55:361 (1) - 这里没包对称，改一下比较好

Normal
00:14:879 (6) - 一直到转盘之前的NC这么改会比较好

00:30:783 (5) - 滑条尾的whistle去掉
00:31:506 (6) - 头跟尾的whistle换一下
00:32:771 (3) - 头加一个whitsle
00:34:217 (6) - ^
（上面四个都是我觉得这么放节奏会好点，因为你这段跟的是vocal，所以在几个人声比较高的地方下whistle会很棒）
01:09:458 加个圈比较好，这里有比较明显的鼓点
01:33:675 (3) - 也是改NC


我觉得我上面说的意思完全就是“我摸不出啥来”

Hard
00:23:012 (3) - 你试试在这里加一个whistle+clap
01:23:193 (2) - 这里是想摆对称？是的话这个移到408|229会好点

Nirvana
Hard cs4 with Nirvana cs3.8?
00:23:012 (4) - 同Hard
00:57:530 (3,4,5,6) - 建议你改成这个样子比较顺手

01:02:229 (1,2,3,4,5) - 间距太大了，改成1.1x的连打会好点
01:03:494 (1) 后面那四个建议改成下面那样的NC，不然可能会读成那个1/4滑条和之后单点之间隔了一半拍，这么改也刚好让NC在副歌开始

01:28:976 (3,4) - Ctrl+G
01:36:345 (2) - UNSNAP
01:47:409 (1) - 蝴蝶很漂亮 ;)

这歌居然没有Rank版的，惊了
GL for Rank :)
Last edited by Ryuusei Aika , edited 2 times in total.
Lobelia
862 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia
有人送摸，羡慕

Neanmoins wrote:

来了
Hard
00:23:012 (3) - 你试试在这里加一个whistle+clap音效Kanor弄的，交给他
01:23:193 (2) - 这里是想摆对称？是的话这个移到408|229会好点好
@Kanor 我这个都是很简单的MOD，你帮我改改就好啦，谢谢~
Last edited by Lobelia , edited 1 time in total.
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

Neanmoins wrote:

来了

General
Source加上 デジモンアドベンチャーtri 好
Tag写你们能联想到的一切日语英语中文的跟数码宝贝有关的东西 这个等等再加，现在我自己也不确定
Easy和Hard在01:50:301之后的旋律有点浪费，懒的话可以直接学Normal转到最后，不过Hard建议要是能摆几下的话还是摆几下然后在01:56:084这里再下转盘 可以，Easy改了，Hard看GDer
尽量统一一下kiai结束时间 OK
hitsound的问题都是主观意见，改不改都无所谓

Easy
kiai忘加了？ 恩，加上了
00:27:891 (3) - 滑条尾的whistle去掉会好点，这个地方节奏感觉不用下那么密 好
00:31:506 (4) - 滑条头那个whistle也建议去掉，理由同上 可以
00:32:229 (1) - 叠得有点歪，移到284|223试试 可
00:55:361 (1) - 这里没包对称，改一下比较好
OK


Nirvana
Hard cs4 with Nirvana cs3.8? 就要 CS3.8 不用 不做图（其实是我自己用不习惯CS4）
00:23:012 (4) - 同Hard OK
00:57:530 (3,4,5,6) - 建议你改成这个样子比较顺手 改了

01:02:229 (1,2,3,4,5) - 间距太大了，改成1.1x的连打会好点 这里刻意放了大间距，后面也有差不多DS的串，就不改了
01:03:494 (1) 后面那四个建议改成下面那样的NC，不然可能会读成那个1/4滑条和之后单点之间隔了一拍，这么改也刚好让NC在副歌开始
好
01:28:976 (3,4) - Ctrl+G OK，跳我一直不是拿的很准怎么跳才舒服><
01:36:345 (2) - UNSNAP 改了
01:47:409 (1) - 蝴蝶很漂亮 ;)
THX<3

这歌居然没有Rank版的，惊了
GL for Rank :)
THX for mod>< :)
顺便求个mu厚不厚呀（｡ò ∀ ó｡）
Last edited by kanor , edited 1 time in total.
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

[ Abhor ] wrote:

有人送摸，羡慕

Neanmoins wrote:

来了
Hard
00:23:012 (3) - 你试试在这里加一个whistle+clap音效Kanor弄的，交给他
01:23:193 (2) - 这里是想摆对称？是的话这个移到408|229会好点好
@Kanor 我这个都是很简单的MOD，你帮我改改就好啦，谢谢~
好
Ryuusei Aika
Elite Mapper
1,116 posts
Joined January 2016
Ryuusei Aika

kanor wrote:

Neanmoins wrote:

来了

General
Source加上 デジモンアドベンチャーtri 好
Tag写你们能联想到的一切日语英语中文的跟数码宝贝有关的东西 这个等等再加，现在我自己也不确定
Easy和Hard在01:50:301之后的旋律有点浪费，懒的话可以直接学Normal转到最后，不过Hard建议要是能摆几下的话还是摆几下然后在01:56:084这里再下转盘 可以，Easy改了，Hard看GDer
尽量统一一下kiai结束时间 OK
hitsound的问题都是主观意见，改不改都无所谓

Easy
kiai忘加了？ 恩，加上了
00:27:891 (3) - 滑条尾的whistle去掉会好点，这个地方节奏感觉不用下那么密 好
00:31:506 (4) - 滑条头那个whistle也建议去掉，理由同上 可以
00:32:229 (1) - 叠得有点歪，移到284|223试试 可
00:55:361 (1) - 这里没包对称，改一下比较好
OK


Nirvana
Hard cs4 with Nirvana cs3.8? 就要 CS3.8 不用 不做图（其实是我自己用不习惯CS4）
00:23:012 (4) - 同Hard OK
00:57:530 (3,4,5,6) - 建议你改成这个样子比较顺手 改了

01:02:229 (1,2,3,4,5) - 间距太大了，改成1.1x的连打会好点 这里刻意放了大间距，后面也有差不多DS的串，就不改了
01:03:494 (1) 后面那四个建议改成下面那样的NC，不然可能会读成那个1/4滑条和之后单点之间隔了一拍，这么改也刚好让NC在副歌开始
好
01:28:976 (3,4) - Ctrl+G OK，跳我一直不是拿的很准怎么跳才舒服><
01:36:345 (2) - UNSNAP 改了
01:47:409 (1) - 蝴蝶很漂亮 ;)
THX<3

这歌居然没有Rank版的，惊了
GL for Rank :)
THX for mod>< :)
顺便求个mu厚不厚呀（｡ò ∀ ó｡）
好啊 :D
CrystilonZ
1,559 posts
Joined January 2013
CrystilonZ
oi
from your queue

[General]
  1. Hitsounds volume is quite low
  2. Where do all the tags go?
    Tags: Digimon Adventure Gyro Zeppeli [_Abhor_]
  3. Timing is off. too early
[Easy]
  1. Please fix blankets yourself. They are pretty obvious that they are off orz.
    ea. 00:42:349 (3) - 00:14:879 (1) - 00:15:602 (2) - etc.
  2. 00:15:602 (2) - I don't recommend putting that strong sound on slider reverse. It should be clickable
  3. 00:43:072 (4,1,2) - this rhythm doesn't fit too well because you skip a lot of strong sounds and land sliders on weaker sounds orz
  4. 01:35:482 (4,1) - blanket them?
[Gyro's]
Okay. uhmm imo this diff relies too much on the vocals
It's not wrong to rely on the vocals, but you need to map the instrument too, or else it will turn out weird
  1. 00:27:711 (8,1) - This gap is really really weird ;__; considering the music is still going.
  2. 00:38:554 (7,8,9) - The rhythm here is also weird. 00:39:096 - and 00:39:458 have very strong sounds but were skipped.
    etc.
[Abhor's]
  1. 00:13:434 (1) - This extended slider does not fit. There's a guitar sound on 00:13:614
  2. 00:39:458 (1) - also this slider. It doesn't follow any dragging sound.
  3. 00:45:693 - This beat here is really strong and should not be skipped.
  4. 01:08:735 (2,3) - I don't see a reason behind this spacing increase here. If you don't have one, stick with the normal DS owo
  5. 01:09:458 (4) - just saying but a small jump here might fit
  6. 01:34:397 (1) - same as 00:13:434 (1) -
    pretty decent diff
[Nirvana]
Okay I will state thing generally here.
Not because it's bad, the pattern ideas are pretty good actually. The thing this diff needs is polishing~ which you can do this yourself~*
The suggestions below apply to all similar patterns in the diff
  1. 00:34:217 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I don't suggest stacking 00:34:940 (1,2,3) - . Because in actual gameplay, it will be spread out and ruin the pattern. Spread them out manually with low DS
  2. 01:02:048 (5,1) - 01:03:313 (1,2) - rip DS. They are very hard to read, especially being near on the timeline
  3. 01:05:662 (2,1) - rip blankets
  4. 01:09:819 (5,7,9) - these patterns will look much nicer with proper blanket
  5. 01:11:265 (1,3,5) - ^
  6. 01:33:313 (2,3,4) - ^
  7. 01:14:428 (1,2) -

    CrystilonZ wrote:

    I don't suggest stacking them. Because in actual gameplay, it will be spread out and ruin the pattern. Spread them out manually with low DS
  8. 01:47:409 (1) - ooh nice monstrata butterfly
GL~
Lobelia
862 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia

CrystilonZ wrote:

[Abhor's]
  1. 00:13:434 (1) - This extended slider does not fit. There's a guitar sound on 00:13:614i think it sounds well to me
  2. 00:39:458 (1) - also this slider. It doesn't follow any dragging sound.ok
  3. 00:45:693 - This beat here is really strong and should not be skipped.it's seems the offset is not really accurate,so sounds a little late?
  4. 01:08:735 (2,3) - I don't see a reason behind this spacing increase here. If you don't have one, stick with the normal DS owook!
  5. 01:09:458 (4) - just saying but a small jump here might fitok
  6. 01:34:397 (1) - same as 00:13:434 (1) -same as the first
    pretty decent diffThank you!


GL~
@Kanor,offset问题有点严重，你看看弄439-445之间看看，我弄得443听起来还可以
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

[ Abhor ] wrote:

CrystilonZ wrote:

[Abhor's]
  1. 00:13:434 (1) - This extended slider does not fit. There's a guitar sound on 00:13:614i think it sounds well to me
  2. 00:39:458 (1) - also this slider. It doesn't follow any dragging sound.ok
  3. 00:45:693 - This beat here is really strong and should not be skipped.it's seems the offset is not really accurate,so sounds a little late?
  4. 01:08:735 (2,3) - I don't see a reason behind this spacing increase here. If you don't have one, stick with the normal DS owook!
  5. 01:09:458 (4) - just saying but a small jump here might fitok
  6. 01:34:397 (1) - same as 00:13:434 (1) -same as the first
    pretty decent diffThank you!


GL~
@Kanor,offset问题有点严重，你看看弄439-445之间看看，我弄得443听起来还可以
改成443了.....忘了是原来随便坐的tming现在纸张了（）
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

CrystilonZ wrote:

oi
from your queue


General
Hitsounds volume is quite low I m afraid that loud hs may make the music a little noisy :(
Where do all the tags go? oh IDK how to make a right tag so it was delayedORz
Code:
Tags: Digimon Adventure Gyro Zeppeli [_Abhor_] OK,fixed it
Timing is off. too early fiexed offest is 443


Easy
Please fix blankets yourself. They are pretty obvious that they are off orz. OK, its my habbit misstake,thx
ea. 00:42:349 (3) - 00:14:879 (1) - 00:15:602 (2) - etc.
00:15:602 (2) - I don't recommend putting that strong sound on slider reverse. It should be clickable revoke it
00:43:072 (4,1,2) - this rhythm doesn't fit too well because you skip a lot of strong sounds and land sliders on weaker sounds orz
Image imo afraid it may add the difficulty of reading beacause the new player cant fit such a thythm...
01:35:482 (4,1) - blanket them? OK




Nirvana
Okay I will state thing generally here.
Not because it's bad, the pattern ideas are pretty good actually. The thing this diff needs is polishing~ which you can do this yourself~*
The suggestions below apply to all similar patterns in the diff
00:34:217 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I don't suggest stacking 00:34:940 (1,2,3) - . Because in actual gameplay, it will be spread out and ruin the pattern. Spread them out manually with low DS OK,got it
01:02:048 (5,1) - 01:03:313 (1,2) - rip DS. They are very hard to read, especially being near on the timeline hahahha its funny,isnt it><
01:05:662 (2,1) - rip blankets fixed it
01:09:819 (5,7,9) - these patterns will look much nicer with proper blanket fixed it, i never notice these place before now ,THX><
01:11:265 (1,3,5) - ^
01:33:313 (2,3,4) - ^
01:14:428 (1,2) -
CrystilonZ wrote:
I don't suggest stacking them. Because in actual gameplay, it will be spread out and ruin the pattern. Spread them out manually with low DS I think the music have such a heavier rhythm, so the DS should be higher and higher
01:47:409 (1) - ooh nice monstrata butterfly >w<

GL~
THX for mod>< Especially for timing! :)
Lobelia
862 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia
既然OFFSET改了，那么
fixed
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 63494
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11988,92952
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 3.299999

[Metadata]
Title:re-fly
TitleUnicode:re-fly
Artist:Koji Wada
ArtistUnicode:和田光司
Creator:kanor
Version:Abhor's Hard
Source:デジモンアドベンチャーtri
Tags:
BeatmapID:1063901
BeatmapSetID:499976

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Gyro Zeppeli
95 posts
Joined January 2014
Gyro Zeppeli

Neanmoins wrote:

来了


Normal
00:14:879 (6) - 一直到转盘之前的NC这么改会比较好 FIX

00:30:783 (5) - 滑条尾的whistle去掉 FIX
00:31:506 (6) - 头跟尾的whistle换一下 FIX
00:32:771 (3) - 头加一个whitsle FIX
00:34:217 (6) - ^ FIX
（上面四个都是我觉得这么放节奏会好点，因为你这段跟的是vocal，所以在几个人声比较高的地方下whistle会很棒）
01:09:458 加个圈比较好，这里有比较明显的鼓点 nope,有意空的，节奏已经很满
01:33:675 (3) - 也是改NC FIX


我觉得我上面说的意思完全就是“我摸不出啥来”
非常感谢！！

CrystilonZ wrote:

Okay. uhmm imo this diff relies too much on the vocals
It's not wrong to rely on the vocals, but you need to map the instrument too, or else it will turn out weird eh..i mapped the vocals and instrument,not only vocals,i will change some yet
00:27:711 (8,1) - This gap is really really weird ;__; considering the music is still going. this gap is main map the instrument :) u know~
00:38:554 (7,8,9) - The rhythm here is also weird. 00:39:096 - and 00:39:458 have very strong sounds but were skipped. uhmm..i will fix it but not now
etc.
thanks
Izzywing
osu! Alumni
2,251 posts
Joined March 2016
Izzywing
hi

Easy

00:14:539 (4,1,2) - When two sliders are blanketing the same circle, it looks nice if the thickness of the gap between the sliders and the circle is the same for both.

00:14:539 (4,2,3) - On that note, the blanket here can be improved

00:17:792 (1,2,3) - Not good flow; an Easy player does not know about slider leniency so they will follow the sliders literally, here you require the players to end the slider and then turn sharply to the right to get the next one, which is hard.

00:25:021 (3,1) - Blanket looks nicer here. Be sure to fix the shapes of 00:27:189 (2,3) - after you make this change

00:40:924 (1,2) - Not good flow for similar reason to above; player has to make a sharp turn from the end of 1 to hit 2 which is not fitting in an Easy.

00:41:647 (2,3) - If you arrange these so that 3 blankets 2, it looks nicer.

00:58:274 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern looks good but does not flow well, same reason as I said before.

01:14:900 (3,1) - This is literally the only 1/2 gap in the entire difficulty, just make a 1/1 gap

You use the questionable flow (that requires knowledge of slider leniency, pretty much) a lot in this diff, and I disagree with it. I guess if it's your style or whatever, you can hope that it's fine later, but I really suggest changing it.

01:41:647 (1) - Make this shape more symmetrical

01:45:804 (3) - ^

Gyro's Normal

00:20:683 (1) - Better if it ends on 00:21:949 - to match the strong drum?

00:39:659 - You could place a note here to avoid the 3/2 gap in the rhythm.

00:42:912 (6) - Not a big deal, but why does the end of this point down when the next note is in a different direction

00:50:683 (2,3) - make parallel?

Your combos are not consistent, so I've focused a lot of combos to help you out.

00:17:069 (1) - If you are to be consistent with your pattern of putting NCs every 2 downbeats, move this NC to 00:17:792 (2) -
00:26:467 (6) - New combo to match your every 2 downbeats pattern
00:28:816 (1) - Move the NC to 00:29:358 (2) -
00:32:069 (1) - Move the NC to 00:32:250 (2) -
00:38:033 (6) - NC
01:03:876 (2) - NC because the kiai starts here
01:15:262 (1) - move NC to 01:15:442 (2) -
01:17:973 (1) - move NC to 01:18:153 (2), also I dont like how 01:18:153 (2) - is skipping the vocal on 01:18:334 -
01:21:045 (1) - move NC to 01:21:406 (2) -
01:32:250 (1) - move NC to 01:32:973 (2) -
01:38:033 (1) - move NC to 01:38:756 (2) -
01:43:816 (1) - move NC to 01:44:358 (3) -

Abhor's Hard

00:07:491 (1) - This extended slider is skipping the sound on 00:07:671 - (which is a downbeat even) so I think it's better to just be a 1/2 slider

00:15:623 (1) - this NC isn't needed

00:23:575 (6) - NC should be here since downbeat

01:24:117 (5,1) - This jump is a bit excessive

01:47:430 (1) - This diff ends so much earlier than the other ones, the drain time is a whopping 8 seconds shorter

Nirvana

00:12:370 (4,5) - This would look a lot better if this was a blanket.

00:14:177 (4,6,7) - Perhaps make these the same distance from each other? Bonus points if they're not overlapping

00:20:141 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - Why not claps for these?

00:27:551 (1) - move NC to 00:27:732 (2) -
00:30:623 (1) - move NC to 00:30:804 (3) -

00:34:238 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - some kind of hitsound would be nice here to emphasize these triplets

I suggest going through this diff and cleaning up blankets. Patterns like 01:11:286 (1,3) - would look much better if they were blanketted, or if the sliders at least complemented each other instead of just looking like random curves.

This mapset has promise but needs some work in terms of aesthetics, rhythm and combos. Tried to suggest whatever I could. Good luck!
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

Hobbes2 wrote:

hi

Easy

00:14:539 (4,1,2) - When two sliders are blanketing the same circle, it looks nice if the thickness of the gap between the sliders and the circle is the same for both. I have tried to blanket but failed beacuse the DS,and there is a distance between 1and 3 so is im possible if i use 2 to blanket both 1 and 3,so I blanket 1 :(

00:14:539 (4,2,3) - On that note, the blanket here can be improved fixed

00:17:792 (1,2,3) - Not good flow; an Easy player does not know about slider leniency so they will follow the sliders literally, here you require the players to end the slider and then turn sharply to the right to get the next one, which is hard.

00:25:021 (3,1) - Blanket looks nicer here. Be sure to fix the shapes of 00:27:189 (2,3) - after you make this change

00:40:924 (1,2) - Not good flow for similar reason to above; player has to make a sharp turn from the end of 1 to hit 2 which is not fitting in an Easy.

00:41:647 (2,3) - If you arrange these so that 3 blankets 2, it looks nicer. OK

00:58:274 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern looks good but does not flow well, same reason as I said before.

01:14:900 (3,1) - This is literally the only 1/2 gap in the entire difficulty, just make a 1/1 gap Just cuz this place is the only one used 1/2 gap so I want to keep it, I try my best to avoid 1/2 gap in the whole music but in this place i will miss a improtant drum if I still keep 1/1

You use the questionable flow (that requires knowledge of slider leniency, pretty much) a lot in this diff, and I disagree with it. I guess if it's your style or whatever, you can hope that it's fine later, but I really suggest changing it.
Ohhhhh that's my mapping style! Rotation sliders may be difficult to read in the edit but trust me they are easy and interesting in the playing. In fact flow is the mapper's imagination but in real the players will not consider it too much , they would just clean the slider and put attention to the next but not follow the flow , so I will keep most of the flow. ;)

01:41:647 (1) - Make this shape more symmetrical OK, ill try my best to make it seems symmetrical :)

01:45:804 (3) - ^ ^


Nirvana

00:12:370 (4,5) - This would look a lot better if this was a blanket. im not tend to blanket it but just make a triangle like 00:12:370 (4,5,6) -

00:14:177 (4,6,7) - Perhaps make these the same distance from each other? Bonus points if they're not overlapping fixed it but IDK wether is good><

00:20:141 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - Why not claps for these? Yes! Fixed it .

00:27:551 (1) - move NC to 00:27:732 (2) - thats ok if 1 and 2 is stack because it looks more comfortable than mix the two colors
00:30:623 (1) - move NC to 00:30:804 (3) - ^

00:34:238 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - some kind of hitsound would be nice here to emphasize these triplets Yes！ clap them and strike balance in the volun

I suggest going through this diff and cleaning up blankets. Patterns like 01:11:286 (1,3) - would look much better if they were blanketted, or if the sliders at least complemented each other instead of just looking like random curves.
well, imo always careless in the blanket or I just ignore that may be a blanket.....its my habbit fault , I will check the map and to fixed the blanket. I still cant make all the blanket best so if you find it plz point it out! :)

This mapset has promise but needs some work in terms of aesthetics, rhythm and combos. Tried to suggest whatever I could. Good luck!
THX for modding! :)
Plaudible
1,028 posts
Joined September 2015
Plaudible

kanor wrote:

Ohhhhh that's my mapping style! Rotation sliders may be difficult to read in the edit but trust me they are easy and interesting in the playing. In fact flow is the mapper's imagination but in real the players will not consider it too much , they would just clean the slider and put attention to the next but not follow the flow , so I will keep most of the flow. ;)
Pretty poor reason to reject a change like this imo, and I agree with Hobbes. When a newbie plays a map, they will click and drag to the end of a slider. Having to go back and forth constantly to play a slider is not something really appropriate for them, hence why an Easy should generally have higher quality flow to make sure they don't get thrown off by things like this. If you're of reasonable experience and can play normals and above, yes, this is perfectly suitable for a map. But think of this: this could be someone's first map. Having to play something with mechanics like that that they are not used to doesn't really work. I strongly suggest reconsidering his suggestion, because as it sits right now it's fairly inappropriate for this difficulty.

Also, using your mapping style is, for the most part, not a valid excuse to justify something you mapped. Thoroughly consider what a person says: yes, it may go against your style, but if you want your beatmap to be ranked (which I'm assuming is what you're going for) there are certain criteria you have to meet, and rejecting changes with that reasoning will only hinder that process.

Good luck! no kds.
Lobelia
862 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia

Hobbes2 wrote:

hi



Abhor's Hard

00:07:491 (1) - This extended slider is skipping the sound on 00:07:671 - (which is a downbeat even) so I think it's better to just be a 1/2 sliderfixed

00:15:623 (1) - this NC isn't neededfixed

00:23:575 (6) - NC should be here since downbeatfixed

01:24:117 (5,1) - This jump is a bit excessivei reduce the distance~

01:47:430 (1) - This diff ends so much earlier than the other ones, the drain time is a whopping 8 seconds shorterumm,i will consider about it but the guest diff not must follow the other diffs,and i think end at here also sound fine :)
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Lv9
108 posts
Joined October 2015
Lv9
搞事
  • Nirvana
00:15:262 (2,5) - 没包好。。往下挪一点就完美了
00:15:783 (4,1) - ^
保持这个滑条形状的话可能不太好包，因为右边已经顶到边界了。。感觉拉成这样会好一点？
https://puu.sh/qW3g0/caea046cf8.png
00:37:129 (2,4) - 没包好，00:37:129 (2) - 的尾放在00:35:051 (2) - 上就行
01:15:442 (1) - 不对称的S形滑条看着有点那啥。。我的话会选择开GS拉一个标准的再缩放调整
像这样https://puu.sh/qW3R4/c2cfe6c84f.png
01:31:346 (3) - ^
01:45:804 (5) - ^
01:43:816 (1) - 我的建议是放在这里https://puu.sh/qW4c2/8c0e78812e.png
01:47:430 (1) - 蝴蝶不对称 而且感觉略僵硬。。这图https://osu.ppy.sh/s/311463末尾有一个滑条可以作为参考

摸的全是关于Mapping style的东西。。改不改应该都是rankable的。。每个人想法都不一样，不想改的话就不用回了（
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

Level9 wrote:

搞事
  • Nirvana
00:15:262 (2,5) - 没包好。。往下挪一点就完美了好，改了
00:15:783 (4,1) - ^ OK
保持这个滑条形状的话可能不太好包，因为右边已经顶到边界了。。感觉拉成这样会好一点？ OK
https://puu.sh/qW3g0/caea046cf8.png
00:37:129 (2,4) - 没包好，00:37:129 (2) - 的尾放在00:35:051 (2) - 上就行 可
01:15:442 (1) - 不对称的S形滑条看着有点那啥。。我的话会选择开GS拉一个标准的再缩放调整 尽量改了，中间红点看起来有点僵硬就没用
像这样https://puu.sh/qW3R4/c2cfe6c84f.png
01:31:346 (3) - ^
01:45:804 (5) - ^
01:43:816 (1) - 我的建议是放在这里https://puu.sh/qW4c2/8c0e78812e.png 好
01:47:430 (1) - 蝴蝶不对称 而且感觉略僵硬。。这图https://osu.ppy.sh/s/311463末尾有一个滑条可以作为参考 这个图里的我摆不动......改了几个描点，这个不用记事本改坐标估计很难完全对称了（

摸的全是关于Mapping style的东西。。改不改应该都是rankable的。。每个人想法都不一样，不想改的话就不用回了（
可以，很强 :)
Chalwa
1,105 posts
Joined August 2014
Chalwa
Hello! M4M from your queue!
[General]
  1. Ending time is no consistent, cause in Abhor's diff endind time is 01:50:322. In other is 01:58:816.
[Easy]
  1. 00:15:623 (2,3) - Try to blanket end of 00:15:623 (2) with end of 00:17:069 (3). It looks better then.
  2. 00:32:250 (1,3) - Make this two parallel??
  3. 00:33:696 (3,4) - Blanket improve
  4. 01:48:153 (2,1) - Try to blanket it?? (sugestion)
  5. Wow, it's really good diff :D
[Normal]
  1. 00:42:912 (6) - Why this slider is weird?? :(
  2. 00:50:683 (2,3) - Make this two parralel?
  3. 01:03:876 (2) - NC
[Hard]
  1. 00:29:358 (1) - Anchor point to x: 267 y:108
  2. 00:34:689 - Make here clickable pls, cause it's too hard to read imo
  3. Tbh best diif in mapset
END!
It's very good map! Take my two stars :D.
GOOD LUCK!
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

Chalwa wrote:

Hello! M4M from your queue!

[Easy]
  1. 00:15:623 (2,3) - Try to blanket end of 00:15:623 (2) with end of 00:17:069 (3). It looks better then.OK, I change the shape of the slider
  2. 00:32:250 (1,3) - Make this two parallel?? well
  3. 00:33:696 (3,4) - Blanket improve fixed
  4. 01:48:153 (2,1) - Try to blanket it?? (sugestion) Yes! Nice Idea!
  5. Wow, it's really good diff :D
THX :)

END!
It's very good map! Take my two stars :D.
GOOD LUCK!
THX for modding! :) Enjoy the song and map>< :)
Lobelia
862 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia

Chalwa wrote:

Hello! M4M from your queue!

[Hard]
  1. 00:29:358 (1) - Anchor point to x: 267 y:108ok
  2. 00:34:689 - Make here clickable pls, cause it's too hard to read imono,there is a strong beat on the blue line
  3. Tbh best diif in mapset Thank you~

GOOD LUCK!
fixed
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 63494
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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TitleUnicode:re-fly
Artist:Koji Wada
ArtistUnicode:和田光司
Creator:kanor
Version:Abhor's Hard
Source:デジモンアドベンチャーtri
Tags:Digimon Adventure Gyro Zeppeli [_Abhor_]
BeatmapID:1063901
BeatmapSetID:499976

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361,245,53214,2,0,L|354:168,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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228,259,53936,5,0,0:0:0:0:
228,259,54117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,287,54298,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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202,44,63605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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260,80,68214,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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124,342,78153,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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275,84,79238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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67,84,82129,2,0,P|102:95|139:96,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,86,82491,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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366,320,84117,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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473,59,86467,2,0,P|490:102|491:130,1,70
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216,174,88635,6,0,P|170:181|142:171,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,118,88997,1,8,0:0:0:0:
131,49,89177,2,0,P|171:46|211:58,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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163,309,90081,6,0,B|143:263|143:263|149:158,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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140,312,93334,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,312,93515,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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134,287,96587,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,254,96768,1,8,0:0:0:0:
134,368,96949,1,8,0:0:0:0:
215,257,97129,6,0,B|226:223|219:196|219:196|226:173|226:173|217:142|225:109,1,140,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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440,183,98033,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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310,276,98575,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Lobelia
862 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia
我的最新难度还没更新啊QWQ

[ Normal ]
00:12:370 (2,3,4) - 2,3之间FLOW差了点，然后虽然跟着DS走的但是这里目测看起来2,3和3,4两个差距有点大，
试试这个
00:42:009 (4) - 去掉？还没到对鼓的地方，这里应该继续保持人声吧？
00:42:912 (6) - 这种类似鱼钩滑条的，轨迹不清楚，尾巴带钩与滑条自身重叠的，属于UNRANK
01:25:563 (4) - 这里去掉比较好，没有很明显重音，而且这里明显开始比较舒缓的感觉
01:24:840 (2,3,4,5) - 这段跟人声还是鼓声？跟人声4去掉，2开始跟滑条到01:25:382 - 这里结束，跟鼓就2,4去掉。我建议你跟人声吧，01:27:732 (2) - 因为这里你也是跟的人声，这属于一段节奏里的部分。

[ Easy ]
00:53:936 (4) - 这貌似看起来出界了？然后顺便00:52:852 (2,4) - 包起来
00:55:382 (1) - 这个向左弯曲吧，跟后面FLOW比较顺

[ Insane ]
00:24:208 (2,3) - 不要这样做三连啊，跟着DS走吧，你全篇主歌就这里一个，副歌都没怎么用这种梗，去掉
00:25:563 (2,3,4) - 23和4换位置FLOW更顺前后都顺
00:38:033 (1,3,4) - 这三个ctrl+g?我看着觉得FLOW好看多了
01:07:220 (2,3) - 01:04:328 (2,3) - 这两处你能给出理由，就继续留着吧，不然还是去掉吧，这个三连不好，缺少整体性，要不然你副歌里面尾巴接的三连全部都改成这样蓝线跳← ←？
01:32:611 (2) - 为什么突然拉开间距啊，没理由啊
01:32:882 (3,1) - 我前面说了，你想拉开就都拉开。01:14:449 (1,2) - 01:15:894 (2,3) - 这两个也拉开
01:47:430 (1) - ctrl+g吧，这个跳太大了
Gyro Zeppeli
95 posts
Joined January 2014
Gyro Zeppeli

Hobbes2 wrote:

Gyro's Normal

00:20:683 (1) - Better if it ends on 00:21:949 - to match the strong drum? FIX

00:39:659 - You could place a note here to avoid the 3/2 gap in the rhythm. uhmm,u are good,let's fix it

00:42:912 (6) - Not a big deal, but why does the end of this point down when the next note is in a different direction FIX

00:50:683 (2,3) - make parallel? nope，that is good

Your combos are not consistent, so I've focused a lot of combos to help you out.

00:17:069 (1) - If you are to be consistent with your pattern of putting NCs every 2 downbeats, move this NC to 00:17:792 (2) -
00:26:467 (6) - New combo to match your every 2 downbeats pattern
00:28:816 (1) - Move the NC to 00:29:358 (2) -
00:32:069 (1) - Move the NC to 00:32:250 (2) -
00:38:033 (6) - NC
01:03:876 (2) - NC because the kiai starts here
01:15:262 (1) - move NC to 01:15:442 (2) -
01:17:973 (1) - move NC to 01:18:153 (2), also I dont like how 01:18:153 (2) - is skipping the vocal on 01:18:334 -
01:21:045 (1) - move NC to 01:21:406 (2) -
01:32:250 (1) - move NC to 01:32:973 (2) -
01:38:033 (1) - move NC to 01:38:756 (2) -
01:43:816 (1) - move NC to 01:44:358 (3) -
u are right,ALL FIX
Gyro Zeppeli
95 posts
Joined January 2014
Gyro Zeppeli

[ Abhor ] wrote:

[ Normal ]
00:12:370 (2,3,4) - 2,3之间FLOW差了点，然后虽然跟着DS走的但是这里目测看起来2,3和3,4两个差距有点大，
试试这个
很好，修了
00:42:009 (4) - 去掉？还没到对鼓的地方，这里应该继续保持人声吧？ 嗯，对的
00:42:912 (6) - 这种类似鱼钩滑条的，轨迹不清楚，尾巴带钩与滑条自身重叠的，属于UNRANK FIX
01:25:563 (4) - 这里去掉比较好，没有很明显重音，而且这里明显开始比较舒缓的感觉 好，本来是为了overmap
01:24:840 (2,3,4,5) - 这段跟人声还是鼓声？跟人声4去掉，2开始跟滑条到01:25:382 - 这里结束，跟鼓就2,4去掉。我建议你跟人声吧，01:27:732 (2) - 因为这里你也是跟的人声，这属于一段节奏里的部分。 你说得对
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

[ Abhor ] wrote:

我的最新难度还没更新啊QWQ
我在等Normal的改完摸集体UPDATE一下

[ Easy ]
00:53:936 (4) - 这貌似看起来出界了？然后顺便00:52:852 (2,4) - 包起来 好
00:55:382 (1) - 这个向左弯曲吧，跟后面FLOW比较顺 好

[ Insane ]
00:24:208 (2,3) - 不要这样做三连啊，跟着DS走吧，你全篇主歌就这里一个，副歌都没怎么用这种梗，去掉 这里我听了很久还是觉得加上更舒服，这个音太明显了不压我打起来反而觉得不舒服
00:25:563 (2,3,4) - 23和4换位置FLOW更顺前后都顺 可
00:38:033 (1,3,4) - 这三个ctrl+g?我看着觉得FLOW好看多了 改了
01:07:220 (2,3) - 01:04:328 (2,3) - 这两处你能给出理由，就继续留着吧，不然还是去掉吧，这个三连不好，缺少整体性，要不然你副歌里面尾巴接的三连全部都改成这样蓝线跳← ←？ 想想还是改了，一开始只是觉得Kiai会不会太简单了所以塞点东西加下难度，后面觉得好像也没啥必要
01:32:611 (2) - 为什么突然拉开间距啊，没理由啊 OK
01:32:882 (3,1) - 我前面说了，你想拉开就都拉开。01:14:449 (1,2) - 01:15:894 (2,3) - 这两个也拉开 这两个拉不开呀，如果后面是圈+滑条那我可以拉开，因为来开之后看起来不违和，但是两个单独的单点拉开就更没有整体性了.......
01:47:430 (1) - ctrl+g吧，这个跳太大了 好
Lobelia
862 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia

kanor wrote:

[ Insane ]
00:24:208 (2,3) - 不要这样做三连啊，跟着DS走吧，你全篇主歌就这里一个，副歌都没怎么用这种梗，去掉 这里我听了很久还是觉得加上更舒服，这个音太明显了不压我打起来反而觉得不舒服这里，真的很建议你改了，这里刚开始唱，又不是很强的音，还是跟DS走比较好，我没要你删掉蓝线啊，只是要你三连跟着DS走
01:32:882 (3,1) - 我前面说了，你想拉开就都拉开。01:14:449 (1,2) - 01:15:894 (2,3) - 这两个也拉开 这两个拉不开呀，如果后面是圈+滑条那我可以拉开，因为来开之后看起来不违和，但是两个单独的单点拉开就更没有整体性了.......其实我一开始就想到你会说是因为这里不是接的滑条所不拉开的，我还打出来了后来删掉了。。。不过KIAI作难没关系吧=W=，我只是觉得不太好
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

[ Abhor ] wrote:

kanor wrote:

[ Insane ]
00:24:208 (2,3) - 不要这样做三连啊，跟着DS走吧，你全篇主歌就这里一个，副歌都没怎么用这种梗，去掉 这里我听了很久还是觉得加上更舒服，这个音太明显了不压我打起来反而觉得不舒服这里，真的很建议你改了，这里刚开始唱，又不是很强的音，还是跟DS走比较好，我没要你删掉蓝线啊，只是要你三连跟着DS走 等等，这个flow不好改成按DS来的啊......
01:32:882 (3,1) - 我前面说了，你想拉开就都拉开。01:14:449 (1,2) - 01:15:894 (2,3) - 这两个也拉开 这两个拉不开呀，如果后面是圈+滑条那我可以拉开，因为来开之后看起来不违和，但是两个单独的单点拉开就更没有整体性了.......其实我一开始就想到你会说是因为这里不是接的滑条所不拉开的，我还打出来了后来删掉了。。。不过KIAI作难没关系吧=W=，我只是觉得不太好
AIR
1,586 posts
Joined November 2012
AIR
m4m

[Easy]

  • 01:03:334 - 01:14:900 - 最好保持下一致性，比如在第一处加个圈啥的
    01:35:864 (1) - 可以整理一下
    SPOILER
[Gyro's Normal]
  • 00:18:334 (2) - 换个方向试试，现在斜斜的挺奇怪
    SPOILER
    00:38:575 (2,3) - 前边这一段听起来有点拿不准是在跟鼓点或是人声，我个人不推荐两者交叉
    00:58:997 (3) - 可以试试一弯一直的搭配
    SPOILER
    01:09:840 (1,2) - 有点失控，还是互换长短跟人声吧
    01:17:973 (1) - 失控，稍动下排列试试
    SPOILER
    01:31:888 - 加个圈吧，作为鼓点的停顿
[Abhor's Hard]
  • 00:17:069 (2,3) - 单点多好，像00:15:623 (2,3,4) -
    00:19:599 (2) - 00:34:057 - 3/4真的不太合适，建议考虑使用连续三连作为节奏交接，比较有气势。
    SPOILER
    kiai部分有点没放开的感觉
[Nirvana]
  • 00:12:370 (4) - 01:35:864 (1,2) - 是不是有点远了。。
    00:17:430 (5,6,7) - 并不是像开头那样的移动梗，建议普通的叠在一起
    01:01:708 (1,2,3,4,5) - 移到248,304
    其他美丽
goodluck :)
Lobelia
862 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia

AIR wrote:

m4m



[Abhor's Hard]
  • 00:17:069 (2,3) - 单点多好，像00:15:623 (2,3,4) - 这两处 我听起来并不是一个声音，而且最后一段我是用了相同处理方式的，所以不改啦
    00:19:599 (2) - 00:34:057 - 3/4真的不太合适，建议考虑使用连续三连作为节奏交接，比较有气势。可以QWQ好看，不过只改了19秒的地方，34秒的这样做貌似overmap了？
    SPOILER
    kiai部分有点没放开的感觉QWQ下次再做难一些
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50,168,54840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,64,55021,2,0,L|114:20,2,35,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,102,55382,6,8,P|273:134|347:130,1,105,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,118,55744,2,8,L|363:38,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
437,176,56105,2,0,L|430:250,2,70,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,105,56647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,186,56828,6,0,L|452:306,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
433,327,57189,2,0,B|399:337|399:337|353:333,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,276,57551,2,0,L|293:200,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
341,137,57912,2,0,B|351:105|351:105|342:54,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,55,58274,6,0,L|160:52,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
81,144,58635,2,0,L|157:137,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,211,58997,2,0,L|195:202,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,279,59358,2,0,L|172:273,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,334,59720,6,0,P|333:318|366:264,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,234,60081,2,0,P|334:184|338:154,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
430,88,60442,1,8,0:0:0:0:
430,88,60623,1,0,0:0:0:0:
345,88,60804,2,0,L|269:82,1,70,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61165,12,8,62250,0:0:0:0:
94,277,62611,6,0,L|85:227,3,35,8|0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,206,62973,2,8,B|125:160|125:160|122:58,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,44,63515,5,8,0:0:0:0:
202,44,63605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
202,44,63696,1,8,0:0:0:0:
290,113,63876,6,0,B|361:100|361:100|433:117,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
447,197,64418,2,0,B|457:237|457:237|444:278,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,308,64780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,308,64961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
302,268,65141,1,8,0:0:0:0:
302,268,65322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,199,65503,6,0,P|215:224|183:233,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,171,65864,2,0,P|100:153|66:148,2,70,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,253,66406,2,0,L|133:329,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,302,66768,6,0,P|309:331|398:317,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
439,254,67310,2,0,P|456:217|455:176,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,128,67671,1,0,0:0:0:0:
397,128,67852,2,0,P|359:136|311:122,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,80,68214,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,80,68304,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,80,68394,6,0,B|230:100|230:100|189:107,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,71,68756,2,0,L|87:148,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,188,69117,2,0,L|164:268,1,70
265,279,69479,2,0,L|279:318,3,35,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,327,69840,6,0,P|369:360|446:334,1,140,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
383,277,70382,2,0,P|391:240|372:194,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,279,70924,2,0,L|184:293,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
86,338,71286,6,0,B|73:262|73:262|91:182,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,151,71828,1,0,0:0:0:0:
229,113,72009,2,0,L|317:126,2,70,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,129,72551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,72,72732,6,0,L|373:93,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,155,73274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
422,238,73455,2,0,L|411:310,2,70,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,168,73997,6,0,P|287:224|214:235,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,154,74539,2,0,L|71:145,1,70,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,52,74900,2,0,L|218:49,1,70,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,50,75171,1,8,0:0:0:0:
243,50,75262,1,8,0:0:0:0:
379,53,75442,6,0,P|339:97|356:179,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,209,75985,1,8,0:0:0:0:
425,209,76165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
442,291,76346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
442,291,76527,2,0,L|432:361,2,70,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,256,77069,6,0,P|290:286|208:258,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,202,77611,2,0,P|150:229|141:267,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,342,77973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,342,78153,1,8,0:0:0:0:
61,234,78334,6,0,B|46:200|58:164|58:164|73:122|52:81,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,37,78876,2,0,L|228:32,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,84,79238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,133,79418,2,0,P|390:160|416:162,2,70,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,67,79961,6,0,L|251:147,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,207,80322,2,0,B|303:245|303:245|291:293,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,261,80683,2,0,B|172:229|172:229|186:193,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,327,81045,2,0,L|196:363,3,35,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,349,81406,6,0,P|121:333|86:238,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
67,84,81949,1,0,0:0:0:0:
67,84,82129,2,0,P|102:95|139:96,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,86,82491,1,8,0:0:0:0:
347,32,82671,6,0,L|350:191,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,229,83214,2,0,P|432:189|429:148,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,174,83575,2,0,P|273:208|294:236,1,70,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,320,83936,1,8,0:0:0:0:
366,320,84117,1,8,0:0:0:0:
246,328,84298,6,0,B|202:310|202:310|159:274|149:218,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,162,84840,2,0,P|208:122|206:73,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,118,85382,2,0,P|83:67|87:42,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,14,85744,6,0,B|265:26|281:64|281:64|297:103|346:114,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
407,111,86286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
473,59,86467,2,0,P|490:102|491:130,1,70
440,204,86828,2,0,P|432:239|434:278,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
503,359,87189,6,0,L|342:345,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,267,87732,2,0,P|285:280|249:280,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
401,168,88274,2,0,P|353:150|328:149,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,174,88635,6,0,P|170:181|142:171,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,118,88997,1,8,0:0:0:0:
131,49,89177,2,0,P|171:46|211:58,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
65,133,89720,2,0,L|60:214,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,309,90081,6,0,B|143:263|143:263|149:158,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,129,90623,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,193,90804,2,0,L|269:273,2,70,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,53,91346,6,0,L|408:52,1,140,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,130,91888,2,0,B|436:169|436:169|433:212,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,252,92250,2,0,B|368:292|368:292|384:334,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,356,92521,1,0,0:0:0:0:
399,356,92611,2,0,L|475:347,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,324,92973,6,0,L|206:320,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,312,93334,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,312,93515,1,0,0:0:0:0:
73,261,93696,2,0,P|52:218|54:149,1,105,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,132,94057,2,0,L|158:141,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,207,94418,6,0,P|260:147|245:86,1,105,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,72,94780,2,0,L|151:58,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,54,95141,2,0,B|435:67,1,105,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,101,95503,2,0,P|469:148|462:191,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,263,95864,6,0,P|378:213|290:209,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
134,287,96587,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,254,96768,1,8,0:0:0:0:
134,368,96949,1,8,0:0:0:0:
215,257,97129,6,0,B|226:223|219:196|219:196|226:173|226:173|217:142|225:109,1,140,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,136,97671,2,0,P|341:130|383:132,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,183,98033,1,0,0:0:0:0:
422,265,98214,2,0,L|340:273,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,276,98485,1,8,0:0:0:0:
310,276,98575,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,340,98756,6,0,B|231:299|221:257|221:257|226:225|250:202,1,140,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,154,99298,2,0,L|388:146,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
462,136,99659,2,0,P|465:85|451:52,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,48,100021,6,0,B|289:58|289:58|251:52|251:52|136:71,1,210,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,130,100744,1,0,0:0:0:0:
83,130,100834,1,0,0:0:0:0:
83,130,100924,2,0,L|76:205,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,284,101286,2,0,L|161:208,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,123,101647,6,0,P|239:169|339:207,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,169,102189,1,4,0:0:0:0:
389,169,102280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
389,169,102370,2,0,B|396:219|396:219|385:268|385:268|394:319,1,140,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,272,102912,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,272,103003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,272,103093,6,0,L|302:282,1,140,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,286,103816,1,4,0:0:0:0:
110,218,103997,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,332,104177,2,0,L|246:284,3,35,12|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,257,104539,6,0,B|250:217|250:217|257:152|257:152|249:108,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
130,69,105081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
130,69,105442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
77,159,105623,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,236,105804,6,0,L|306:226,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,233,106346,2,0,P|369:208|344:127,1,140,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,49,106888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
437,138,107069,2,0,L|512:126,1,70,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,107430,12,0,110322,0:0:0:0:

goodluck :)
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

AIR wrote:

m4m

[Easy]

  • 01:03:334 - 01:14:900 - 最好保持下一致性，比如在第一处加个圈啥的 加了之后感觉还是有点不舒服，干脆keep
    01:35:864 (1) - 可以整理一下 好
    SPOILER

[Nirvana]
  • 00:12:370 (4) - 01:35:864 (1,2) - 是不是有点远了。。 还好吧，打起来没什么违和感
    00:17:430 (5,6,7) - 并不是像开头那样的移动梗，建议普通的叠在一起 好
    01:01:708 (1,2,3,4,5) - 移到248,304 这个不是很懂，能不能详细说一下？我把整个串的坐标改了之后串都飞到屏幕外面去了......
    其他美丽
goodluck :)
THX for modding! :)
Ashton
1,978 posts
Joined February 2016
Ashton
I'm applying for BN this december so please rate and leave suggestions on how I can become a better modder

m4m from your que

Easy

- 00:18:515 (2) - look throughout your whole map and find sliders like these that can have less curve on them please
- 01:05:503 (3,1) - I personally do not like how this flows and looks
- 01:35:503 (4,1) - this can be blanketed better
- good diff



Gero's Normal

- 00:14:177 (5,1) - this blanket can be improved
click me
because as you can see it's not blanketed right, go through your whole map and find things like this
- 00:17:611 - I think a beat should go here
- good diff wuuw gero sempai


I modded 2 diffs, I expect at least ONE diff done for me



here's my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/487377
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

Whirl wrote:

I'm applying for BN this december so please rate and leave suggestions on how I can become a better modder

m4m from your que

Easy

- 00:18:515 (2) - look throughout your whole map and find sliders like these that can have less curve on them please OK，fixedit
- 01:05:503 (3,1) - I personally do not like how this flows and looks i changed the shape of slider
- 01:35:503 (4,1) - this can be blanketed better well, 1cant blanket because the tail of 1 is blanketed by 3 ,it will destroyed the next blanket if I blanekt 4.
- good diff THX :)
Gyro Zeppeli
95 posts
Joined January 2014
Gyro Zeppeli

Whirl wrote:




[size=150]Gero's Normal

- 00:14:177 (5,1) - this blanket can be improved
click me

because as you can see it's not blanketed right, go through your whole map and find things like this

- 00:17:611 - I think a beat should go here eh..i dont want map a beat hear bcz it will be hard.
- good diff wuuw gero sempai
I'M GYRO!! ;;;;;;;;w;;;;;;;;;;;
Blitzfrog
389 posts
Joined March 2016
Blitzfrog
From your m4m queue
Sorry for only doing 2 but it's quite late here...

Abhor's Hard
00:25:924 (3,1) - Stack, although concentrated on vocal, the guitar in the background suits this way and it looks better
00:38:033 (1) - Curving anti-clockwise looks better
Stack 00:43:455 (4,5) and 00:43:997 (1,2) to not cause confusion and the music is paired up this way
Move 00:50:683 (4) to about (145,280) and 00:50:864 (5) to about (65, 310), - better flow and no awkward overlapped object
00:56:105 (3) - Point this towards the bottom left, makes it less clustered
Make 00:59:720 (1,2,3,4,5) a similar patter to 00:58:274 (1,2,3,4)
01:12:009 (3) - Point this NorthWest and 01:12:551 (4) to somewhere near (150,95)
01:17:069 (1) - Remove combo, same stanza
01:17:973 (3) - NC, new stanza
01:21:045 (4) - NC^
01:45:804 (1) - Stanza doesn't sound finished

Nirvana
00:14:539 (6,7) - Looks better when stacked
00:15:171 - Something like this would look better


00:18:153 (2) - move this to somewhere near (200, 110) and blanket it with 00:18:696 (4)
00:40:563 (5) - Swap this with 00:40:744 (6) and move 00:40:744 (6) to about (450, 160)
01:08:756 (2,4) - Stack this or move 01:08:756 (2) away
01:20:503 (3) - Since you already done many back and forths why not this one as well? (Keeps style more consistent)
01:32:611 (2) - Looks a bit odd, try this?

01:36:587 (3,5) - Stack these 2, or put 01:36:587 (3,4,5) in a straight line to go in sync with the guitar
01:39:117 (6,7) - This overlap looks kind of awkward
01:47:430 (1) - Maybe make it symmetrical for better looks

Hope I helped :)
Lobelia
862 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia

Blitzfrog wrote:

From your m4m queue
Sorry for only doing 2 but it's quite late here...

Abhor's Hard
00:25:924 (3,1) - Stack, although concentrated on vocal, the guitar in the background suits this way and it looks better
00:38:033 (1) - Curving anti-clockwise looks better
Stack 00:43:455 (4,5) and 00:43:997 (1,2) to not cause confusion and the music is paired up this way
Move 00:50:683 (4) to about (145,280) and 00:50:864 (5) to about (65, 310), - better flow and no awkward overlapped object
00:56:105 (3) - Point this towards the bottom left, makes it less clustered
Make 00:59:720 (1,2,3,4,5) a similar patter to 00:58:274 (1,2,3,4)
01:12:009 (3) - Point this NorthWest and 01:12:551 (4) to somewhere near (150,95)
01:17:069 (1) - Remove combo, same stanza
01:17:973 (3) - NC, new stanza
01:21:045 (4) - NC^
01:45:804 (1) - Stanza doesn't sound finished
Thanks for mod but i don't think there are some problems.so..no fix
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

Blitzfrog wrote:

From your m4m queue
Sorry for only doing 2 but it's quite late here...


Nirvana
00:14:539 (6,7) - Looks better when stacked I think its better for a little move
00:15:171 - Something like this would look better

OK fixed
00:18:153 (2) - move this to somewhere near (200, 110) and blanket it with 00:18:696 (4) No,00:17:069 (3,1,2) - is a small triangle
00:40:563 (5) - Swap this with 00:40:744 (6) and move 00:40:744 (6) to about (450, 160) a little movement can be friendly to HD
01:08:756 (2,4) - Stack this or move 01:08:756 (2) away ^
01:20:503 (3) - Since you already done many back and forths why not this one as well? (Keeps style more consistent) for a better flow
01:32:611 (2) - Looks a bit odd, try this?
If done like this ,the flow will be destoried
01:36:587 (3,5) - Stack these 2, or put 01:36:587 (3,4,5) in a straight line to go in sync with the guitar ^ not tend to stack
01:39:117 (6,7) - This overlap looks kind of awkward a kind of stack can make the map more interesting imo><
01:47:430 (1) - Maybe make it symmetrical for better looks do my best, and follow the song re-fly

Hope I helped :)
THX for modding>< :)
Blitzfrog
389 posts
Joined March 2016
Blitzfrog
Wasn't of much help, don't think I deserve a kudosu here
Lobelia
862 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia
加油飞QWQ差不多了吧？大概
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

Blitzfrog wrote:

Wasn't of much help, don't think I deserve a kudosu here
No！Dont be upset! I havent change the note but I have consider them seriously for another way ! your advice are useful,too! lol
Blitzfrog
389 posts
Joined March 2016
Blitzfrog

kanor wrote:

Blitzfrog wrote:

Wasn't of much help, don't think I deserve a kudosu here
No！Dont be upset! I havent change the note but I have consider them seriously for another way ! your advice are useful,too! lol
Hahaha, not upset, just actually thought I didn't deserve the kudosu here (didn't really make much changes, whether you applied them or not), gave it to ya, twas a good map hahaha
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
[Easy]
  1. 00:27:916 (3,4) - 可以包好点 后面复制粘贴的也是
  2. 01:17:073 (3) - 这里可以不用折返滑条 和01:14:904 (3,1) - 这里用一样的节奏可以避免3/2拍空隔 感觉会让新人好打点
[Normal]
  1. 00:39:121 (3,4) - 可以包一下?
  2. 00:57:916 (1,2) - 换下nc?
  3. 01:17:977 (7,1) - 这节奏好奇怪 重新摆一下吧
  4. 01:45:808 (3,4) - 可以包一下
[Hard]
  1. 00:31:892 (4,5) - 咋忽然跳了下
  2. 00:34:422 (4) - 换成1/2如何 这里有点难打
[Insane]
  1. 01:06:410 (2,3) - 试试这样?忽然变近感觉不好 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6143851
  2. 01:13:458 (3,4,5,6) - 有点卡手 试试这样? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6143852
xixi
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

ZZHBOY wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 00:27:916 (3,4) - 可以包好点 后面复制粘贴的也是 可
  2. 01:17:073 (3) - 这里可以不用折返滑条 和01:14:904 (3,1) - 这里用一样的节奏可以避免3/2拍空隔 感觉会让新人好打点
为了尽量避免1/2还是没压
[Normal]
Normal在remap，就不改了
[Insane]
  1. 01:06:410 (2,3) - 试试这样?忽然变近感觉不好 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6143851 这样改前面的1滑条那里又突然近了
  2. 01:13:458 (3,4,5,6) - 有点卡手 试试这样? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6143852
好

xixi
xixi
Lobelia
862 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia

ZZHBOY wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 00:31:892 (4,5) - 咋忽然跳了下其实这里有个重音，不过 看着的确不是很好看，也觉得不是那么舒服所以改了
  2. 00:34:422 (4) - 换成1/2如何 这里有点难打好
你还要不要找摸QAQ还要找，我一次性改完再发
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

[ Abhor ] wrote:

ZZHBOY wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 00:31:892 (4,5) - 咋忽然跳了下其实这里有个重音，不过 看着的确不是很好看，也觉得不是那么舒服所以改了
  2. 00:34:422 (4) - 换成1/2如何 这里有点难打好
你还要不要找摸QAQ还要找，我一次性改完再发
不着了
mardoka
235 posts
Joined May 2013
mardoka
Hi, modback

[Easy]
  1. 00:17:073 (3,1) - make this blanket look better
  2. 00:33:699 (3,4) - fix blanket pls
  3. 00:43:097 (4) - curve could be better http://puu.sh/rmnhq/8e86d64acf.jpg
  4. 01:30:085 (1,2) - blanket is off
  5. 01:41:651 (1) - I can't think of a reason as to why this slider is so different and stands out from other sliders. Like the other sliders you used are repeated throughout the map. Maybe I'm missing something in the song... x.x
[Normal]
  1. 00:48:880 (4,1) - looks a little ugly imo... maybe blanket it a little better
  2. 00:50:326 (2,3,4) - triangle can maybe look better
[Hard]
  1. 00:08:394 (4,5) - make spacing same as 00:08:214 (3,4) - ? looks better and easier to read
[Insane]
  1. 00:34:242 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think it makes more sense if the triples increased in ds. The music doesnt slow down here so I think it might be better to keep equal distance or increasing distance to emphasize the cymbal crash at 00:35:145 (3) -
  2. 00:42:013 (4,1) - fix blanket
  3. 01:47:434 (1) - nice shape :o
[Kencho's Insane]
  1. 00:14:724 (6,1) - deserves more spacing than 00:14:543 (5,6) - to emphasize downbeat
  2. 00:16:169 (1) - ^ same with this
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho

nubery wrote:

[Kencho's Insane]
  1. 00:14:724 (6,1) - deserves more spacing than 00:14:543 (5,6) - to emphasize downbeat fixed
  2. 00:16:169 (1) - ^ same with this fixed
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kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

nubery wrote:

Hi, modback

[Easy]
  1. 00:17:073 (3,1) - make this blanket look better OK
  2. 00:33:699 (3,4) - fix blanket pls FIXED
  3. 00:43:097 (4) - curve could be better http://puu.sh/rmnhq/8e86d64acf.jpg you are right,fixed
  4. 01:30:085 (1,2) - blanket is off dont tend to blanket but fixed
  5. 01:41:651 (1) - I can't think of a reason as to why this slider is so different and stands out from other sliders. Like the other sliders you used are repeated throughout the map. Maybe I'm missing something in the song... x.x ohhhhh I just want to make more kinds of sliders so that players would not feel boried if it is only 2 kind of sliders :)


[Normal]
  1. 00:48:880 (4,1) - looks a little ugly imo... maybe blanket it a little better OK,fixed
  2. 00:50:326 (2,3,4) - triangle can maybe look better OK,fxied
[Insane]
  1. 00:34:242 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think it makes more sense if the triples increased in ds. The music doesnt slow down here so I think it might be better to keep equal distance or increasing distance to emphasize the cymbal crash at 00:35:145 (3) -
    because it is the end of a paragraph which has a process of pack the last paragraph and start the next one so i want to stess it by the different ds.01:14:452 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - is the same way but just in contrast
  2. 00:42:013 (4,1) - fix blanket OK
  3. 01:47:434 (1) - nice shape :o thx because its re-fly!>///////<
thx for modding! Help a lot :)
Blitzfrog
389 posts
Joined March 2016
Blitzfrog
Played Abhor's hard just then and really got to say that at 01:24:302 the hitsound is really loud when it should probably gradually crescendo at every strong down beat.
Lobelia
862 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia

nubery wrote:

Hi, modback

[Hard]
00:08:394 (4,5) - make spacing same as 00:08:214 (3,4) - ? looks better and easier to readactually i follow the ds here so i think it will nice

Blitzfrog wrote:

Played Abhor's hard just then and really got to say that at 01:24:302 the hitsound is really loud when it should probably gradually crescendo at every strong down beat.
fix
osu file format v14

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Artist:Koji Wada
ArtistUnicode:和田光司
Creator:kanor
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Shiranai
2,186 posts
Joined August 2012
Shiranai
Hello~
Sugestion,

Easy
  1. 00:17:073 (3,1) - Blanket could be better
  2. 00:19:965 (3,4,1) - Maybe you can do ctrl+g on (3,4) then do ctrl+j on (1)? I think how the cursor turn could be more less sharp there especially the flow on 00:20:326 (4,1) - and 00:20:687 (1,2) - , visually they will be look like this http://puu.sh/rqi7E/1e5683e143.jpg
  3. 00:45:989 (2) - Add finish on tail for cymbal sound?

    Seems nice, all I can say is some of your blanket is pretty off I think you can make them neater by yourself :p
Normal
  1. 00:19:965 (4) - A bit improve the flow there imo, you can make the slider shape into like this http://puu.sh/rqiEv/31954b8d24.jpg
  2. 00:46:712 (1) - Add finish on head? I hear a faint cymbal there
  3. 00:47:434 (2,3,4) - Make the shape more paralel? I think that will looks neater http://puu.sh/rqiN3/7a253d74d9.jpg
  4. 01:07:675 (4,5) - The rhythm seems weird to play imo, isn't that one supposed to be more consistent like 01:19:242 (4,5,6) - ? Based on music literally the rhythm supposed to be at least consistent

    I have a little concern on rhythm usement on kiai around 01:03:880 - until 01:24:302 - . Mostly because you use too many 1/2 rhythm that make the gameplay denser and harder than it should be e.g. 01:21:049 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - etc, my sugestion try to get rid some 1/2 rhythm with something easier like 1/1 rhythm or something else to make the gameplay less dense
Hard
  1. 00:28:820 (4) - Why use a larger spacing there? imo nothing to emphsized there same as you did on 00:31:531 (3,4) - that have same music, I think it is better to use regular 1.2 spacing like the rest or at least more consistent
  2. 00:40:928 (1) - Move to x:164 y:36? to make the overlap on 00:40:567 (4,1) - neater like http://puu.sh/rqpjK/44e9ee25b6.jpg
  3. 00:46:712 (1) - Add finish on head? I hear a faint cymbal there
  4. 01:44:181 (4) - Too quite, I think you can add some hitsound on that one either whistle or clap to cover the drum sound
Insane
  1. 00:34:242 (3) - Obvious should be nc for consistency with 00:34:603 (1,2,3) - and 00:34:965 (1,2,3) -
  2. 00:46:712 (7) - Add finish for cymbal
  3. 01:01:169 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make them more straight lol, you can move 01:01:260 (2,3,4,5) - to x:385 y:206
  4. 01:14:452 (1) - Doesn't really need nc imo, it will more consistence like this http://puu.sh/rqq1j/0a1182ada2.jpg
Great set, gl :)
Saki
437 posts
Joined October 2013
Saki
kd够了啊朋友

算了我再混一个好了
[kencho]
摸个屁啊，我都不愿意打开，直接飞吧
[Insane]
00:13:459 (1,2,3) - 这种直flow不推荐，个人不是特别喜欢
00:24:212 (2) - 没用啊，删了吧
01:47:434 (1) - 滑条和后面转盘的衔接略显奇怪，没有明显的音啊，不过如果是为了配合滑条的形状那就也只能这样了吧
01:19:061 (6) - 放到01:19:422 (8,9) - 之间

低难度依旧不想看，嘻嘻水个kd就跑
Lobelia
862 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hello~
Sugestion,


Hard
  1. 00:28:820 (4) - Why use a larger spacing there? imo nothing to emphsized there same as you did on 00:31:531 (3,4) - that have same music, I think it is better to use regular 1.2 spacing like the rest or at least more consistentok
  2. 00:40:928 (1) - Move to x:164 y:36? to make the overlap on 00:40:567 (4,1) - neater like http://puu.sh/rqpjK/44e9ee25b6.jpgok
  3. 00:46:712 (1) - Add finish on head? I hear a faint cymbal thereok
  4. 01:44:181 (4) - Too quite, I think you can add some hitsound on that one either whistle or clap to cover the drum soundok
fix
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kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

Vert wrote:

kd够了啊朋友

算了我再混一个好了
[kencho]
摸个屁啊，我都不愿意打开，直接飞吧
[Insane]
00:13:459 (1,2,3) - 这种直flow不推荐，个人不是特别喜欢 果然不能听智障波的，不过感觉还行，懒得改了
00:24:212 (2) - 没用啊，删了吧 这里有个音，不押难受
01:47:434 (1) - 滑条和后面转盘的衔接略显奇怪，没有明显的音啊，不过如果是为了配合滑条的形状那就也只能这样了吧 厚
01:19:061 (6) - 放到01:19:422 (8,9) - 之间 可

低难度依旧不想看，嘻嘻水个kd就跑
嘻嘻 :)
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hello~
Sugestion,

Easy
  1. 00:17:073 (3,1) - Blanket could be better OK
  2. 00:19:965 (3,4,1) - Maybe you can do ctrl+g on (3,4) then do ctrl+j on (1)? I think how the cursor turn could be more less sharp there especially the flow on 00:20:326 (4,1) - and 00:20:687 (1,2) - , visually they will be look like this http://puu.sh/rqi7E/1e5683e143.jpg
    looks better ,fixed
  3. 00:45:989 (2) - Add finish on tail for cymbal sound? OK

    Seems nice, all I can say is some of your blanket is pretty off I think you can make them neater by yourself :p
Insane
  1. 00:34:242 (3) - Obvious should be nc for consistency with 00:34:603 (1,2,3) - and 00:34:965 (1,2,3) - well, ur right
  2. 00:46:712 (7) - Add finish for cymbal yes!
  3. 01:01:169 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make them more straight lol, you can move 01:01:260 (2,3,4,5) - to x:385 y:206 fixed, seems better
  4. 01:14:452 (1) - Doesn't really need nc imo, it will more consistence like this http://puu.sh/rqq1j/0a1182ada2.jpg
OK,revoke the NC

Great set, gl :)
thx for your modding! it is those places that can make my map better>< :)
Gyro Zeppeli
95 posts
Joined January 2014
Gyro Zeppeli

Mako Sakata wrote:

Normal
  1. 00:19:965 (4) - A bit improve the flow there imo, you can make the slider shape into like this http://puu.sh/rqiEv/31954b8d24.jpg
    fix
  2. 00:46:712 (1) - Add finish on head? I hear a faint cymbal there yeap,i miss it
  3. 00:47:434 (2,3,4) - Make the shape more paralel? I think that will looks neater http://puu.sh/rqiN3/7a253d74d9.jpg
    looks good,fix
  4. 01:07:675 (4,5) - The rhythm seems weird to play imo, isn't that one supposed to be more consistent like 01:19:242 (4,5,6) - ? Based on music literally the rhythm supposed to be at least consistent
    eh..fix,
Atrue
osu! Alumni
1,017 posts
Joined July 2012
Atrue
For memory of Koji Wada.
[General]
All clear! Question about Source but should be good.
[Easy]
  1. Structrual Issue
    People say that blanket is not important and focus on bigger stuff, but it is still the basic patttern component and I believe it is still the fundation of structure, unless you mean to do something else.
  2. Minor Picks
    00:43:097 (4) - Blanket is not good
    SPOILER

    00:45:989 (2) - Well you could have actually made use of this slider to get the objects less packed.

    00:52:856 (2) - Blanket issue.
    SPOILER

    00:55:386 (1) - I believe this slider is supposed to be at least mirror symmetry on y axis. But for now I don't think there is a way to move it around without changing the whole pattern.
[Gyro's Normal]
  1. Structrual Issue
    Generally the structure is still unpolished enough as far as I concerned. Check AIMod, there are quite some places that can do some small adjustment.

    00:10:563 (1) - If you cannot make it stacked fully, just make it another pattern, like this:
    SPOILER

    00:40:928 (1) - I would say this flow is not so good to follow here. To make a better transition you can use this kind of direction:
    SPOILER

    00:46:712 (1,2,3,4) - I don't really like this pattern setting. It squeezes room and literally is just drawing a circle. And the arc is not unified with the following slider so it makes it aesthetically not good enough. If you want to make a symmetry pattern like this, try something like this: (just an example)
    SPOILER

    01:23:760 (6) - Rhythmetically I think it can be a reverse slider to cover the clap and better fit the drum. But seems that it needs a lot of work on patterns.
  2. Minor Picks
    00:18:338 (2) - For this kind of sliders personally I would suggest making something different.
    SPOILER

    01:46:712 (6) - Blanket is not well made. At least in the end give people some good impression on the Diff.
    SPOILER
[Abhor's Hard]
  1. Structrual Issue
    00:48:880 - I think this place is in a pair with 00:49:061 . So why not making them a slider as the latter slider, rather than seperate them?
    SPOILER

    01:11:290 - Personally I would give it a whistle (Sampleset = Drum) to emphasize the slider head and the vocal. You generally did it in other places in the diff.
  2. Minor Picks
    00:45:898 - I'm also not sure if it is good, but seems that the music suggests a triplet here. I think you can add a note here and reduce the distance to next slider to make it less hard on jump but more dense on rhythm. Thus you can use clap on 00:45:989 (4) - to make it more fit.
[Insane]
  1. Structrual Issue
    Generally good, just some places still need more polishment.

    00:38:218 - Opposing to this whistle usage. Generally your whistles are sparsely seperated on vocal and here you got 5 whistles in a row. Sampleset = Auto.

    00:41:471 - 00:42:916 - And here obviously the head is stronger than the tail, should get an whistle on that. Sampleset = Drum

    01:02:254 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think here might be a obstacle for players to complete this density of streams in this distance change. You might want to reduce the distance a bit.

    01:02:977 (3) - And here you can use a slowed slider to cover the feeling of slow down rather than making an unusual shaped slider here. The risk is that in this way it will become a bit tricky. Considering the situation it should be fine.

    01:11:290 - Personally I would give it a whistle (Sampleset = Drum) to emphasize the slider head and the vocal. You generally did it in other places in the diff.

    01:15:898 (2,3) - For here if you want to make it look tidier, just stack completely. Also I think for this part your objects are kind of restricted in the right side of the screen which is not really suggested.
  2. Minor Picks
    01:14:001 (1,2,3) - Personally I don't really like this way you stack. As the following notes are spamming triplets, why not just spread them out like this?
    SPOILER

    01:32:615 (2) - How about making it something new rather than keeping the same direction of the previous slider?
    SPOILER
[Kencho's Nirvana]
  1. Structrual Issue
    Clean.

    01:11:290 - Personally I would give it a whistle (Sampleset = Drum) to emphasize the slider head and the vocal. You generally did it in other places in the diff.
  2. Minor Picks
    00:42:374 (1) - Bend it more to get a better blanket.
    SPOILER

    00:45:085 (1,6) - Personally in this case I would suggest making something else on the second slider to just unify the arc, but here the shape is limited by flow and room, so just bend it more to blanket better might be good enough.
    SPOILER
Forum PM for any questions related. Thank you!
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
下劃線太蠢啦，加了反而會搜不到
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
jonathanlfj
[General]
Need to add a few red lines in the middle to fix an off-sync section
00:45:119 - 166bpm
00:46:745 - 168bpm
00:49:602 - 166bpm

[Easy]
00:43:097 (4) - blanket is a bit off
00:44:543 (1) - you will probably have to break this slider up after the timing change is applied
00:52:856 (2,3) - uh blanket
01:06:772 (1) - the shape of this slider is kinda weird, you can take advantage of red line:
SPOILER
01:18:338 (1) - ^

[Gyro's Normal]
00:44:001 (1,2,3) - this part plays better like this imo
SPOILER
00:53:218 (2,3,4,5) - why is there whistle on every beat? seems out of place compared to other sections
01:23:760 (6) - see if you can make this a repeat slider (or circle + 1/2 slider), would fit the music super well

[Abhor's Hard]
00:19:965 (3) - i would resort to 1/2 here since you covered the guitar strings earlier at 00:17:073 (2,3)
00:43:368 - perhaps add a circle here? feels weird to skip such a strong 1/4
00:46:712 (1) - finish
01:23:579 (3) - swap this for two circles, since the drum emphasis is strong

[Insane]
00:34:242 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - based on how you did the other triplets, you should increase the distance here instead of decreasing
01:03:338 (1) - missing a clap?
01:31:892 (4,1,2) - this distance between each slider is different, its better to make it consistent
01:35:326 (5,6) - try ctrl+g, flows onto 01:35:868 (1) better
01:44:452 (7,1) - this is misaligned
nice butterfly

[Kencho's Nirvana]
00:46:745 (1) - missing finish on slider start
01:03:338 (1) - this would play better as two 1/4 sliders, since that way there is a click on the vocals at 01:03:517
01:23:760 (5) - if you want more emphasis on this jump, try a NC here

thats all from me you can call me back after
Gyro Zeppeli
95 posts
Joined January 2014
Gyro Zeppeli

Atrue wrote:

[Gyro's Normal]
  1. Structrual Issue
    Generally the structure is still unpolished enough as far as I concerned. Check AIMod, there are quite some places that can do some small adjustment. OK i fixed

    00:10:563 (1) - If you cannot make it stacked fully, just make it another pattern, like this:
    SPOILER

    nice examplei fixed

    00:40:928 (1) - I would say this flow is not so good to follow here. To make a better transition you can use this kind of direction:
    SPOILER

    OK i fixed

    00:46:712 (1,2,3,4) - I don't really like this pattern setting. It squeezes room and literally is just drawing a circle. And the arc is not unified with the following slider so it makes it aesthetically not good enough. If you want to make a symmetry pattern like this, try something like this: (just an example)
    SPOILER

    OK i fixed

    01:23:760 (6) - Rhythmetically I think it can be a reverse slider to cover the clap and better fit the drum. But seems that it needs a lot of work on patterns. u r right,but esay to work,fixed
  2. Minor Picks
    00:18:338 (2) - For this kind of sliders personally I would suggest making something different.
    SPOILER

    OK i fixed

    01:46:712 (6) - Blanket is not well made. At least in the end give people some good impression on the Diff.
    SPOILER
OK i fixed

jonathanlfj wrote:

[General]

[Gyro's Normal]
00:44:001 (1,2,3) - this part plays better like this imo
SPOILER

nice part,i fixed
00:53:218 (2,3,4,5) - why is there whistle on every beat? seems out of place compared to other sections
OK i fixed
01:23:760 (6) - see if you can make this a repeat slider (or circle + 1/2 slider), would fit the music super well
i forgot this part;w; fixed
Lobelia
862 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia

Atrue wrote:

[Abhor's Hard]
  1. Structrual Issue
    00:48:880 - I think this place is in a pair with 00:49:061 . So why not making them a slider as the latter slider, rather than seperate them?
    SPOILER
    in fact the 4 slider follow the vocal for emphasize the music

    01:11:290 - Personally I would give it a whistle (Sampleset = Drum) to emphasize the slider head and the vocal. You generally did it in other places in the diff.ok
  2. Minor Picks
    00:45:898 - I'm also not sure if it is good, but seems that the music suggests a triplet here. I think you can add a note here and reduce the distance to next slider to make it less hard on jump but more dense on rhythm. i follow the same bass track hereThus you can use clap on 00:45:989 (4) - to make it more fit.ok

jonathanlfj wrote:

[Abhor's Hard]
00:19:965 (3) - i would resort to 1/2 here since you covered the guitar strings earlier at 00:17:073 (2,3)
00:43:368 - perhaps add a circle here? feels weird to skip such a strong 1/4
00:46:712 (1) - finish
01:23:579 (3) - swap this for two circles, since the drum emphasis is strong
all fix
fix,
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Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho
Atrue

Atrue wrote:

For memory of Koji Wada.
[Kencho's Nirvana]
  1. Structrual Issue
    Clean.

    01:11:290 - Personally I would give it a whistle (Sampleset = Drum) to emphasize the slider head and the vocal. You generally did it in other places in the diff. ok
  2. Minor Picks
    00:42:374 (1) - Bend it more to get a better blanket. no because I make it symmetry
    SPOILER

    00:45:085 (1,6) - Personally in this case I would suggest making something else on the second slider to just unify the arc, but here the shape is limited by flow and room, so just bend it more to blanket better might be good enough. ok
    SPOILER

jonathanlfj

jonathanlfj wrote:

[General]
Need to add a few red lines in the middle to fix an off-sync section Fixed
00:45:119 - 166bpm
00:46:745 - 168bpm
00:49:602 - 166bpm

[Kencho's Nirvana]
00:46:745 (1) - missing finish on slider start ok
01:03:338 (1) - this would play better as two 1/4 sliders, since that way there is a click on the vocals at 01:03:517 ok
01:23:760 (5) - if you want more emphasis on this jump, try a NC here keep

Thanks for mod

Kencho's Nirvana
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Title:re-fly
TitleUnicode:re-fly
Artist:Koji Wada
ArtistUnicode:和田光司
Creator:kanor
Version:Kencho's Nirvana
Source:デジモンアドベンチャー tri.
Tags:Digimon Adventure monster refly Kouji Gyro Zeppeli [_Abhor_] Kencho
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kanor
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Topic Starter
kanor

Atrue wrote:

For memory of Koji Wada.
[General]
All clear! Question about Source but should be good.
im sorry that i cant load most of the image but i have tried to fixed those notes metioned! :D
[Easy]
  1. Structrual Issue
    People say that blanket is not important and focus on bigger stuff, but it is still the basic patttern component and I believe it is still the fundation of structure, unless you mean to do something else.
  2. Minor Picks
    00:43:097 (4) - Blanket is not good
    SPOILER

    OK,fixed it
    00:45:989 (2) - Well you could have actually made use of this slider to get the objects less packed.
    OK,fixed it
    00:52:856 (2) - Blanket issue.
    SPOILER
    OK,fixed it
    00:55:386 (1) - I believe this slider is supposed to be at least mirror symmetry on y axis. But for now I don't think there is a way to move it around without changing the whole pattern.
    OK,fixed it
[Insane]
  1. Structrual Issue
    Generally good, just some places still need more polishment.

    00:38:218 - Opposing to this whistle usage. Generally your whistles are sparsely seperated on vocal and here you got 5 whistles in a row. Sampleset = Auto.OK,fixed it

    00:41:471 - 00:42:916 - And here obviously the head is stronger than the tail, should get an whistle on that. Sampleset = DrumOK,fixed it

    01:02:254 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think here might be a obstacle for players to complete this density of streams in this distance change. You might want to reduce the distance a bit. OK,reduced the ds of streams

    01:02:977 (3) - And here you can use a slowed slider to cover the feeling of slow down rather than making an unusual shaped slider here. The risk is that in this way it will become a bit tricky. Considering the situation it should be fine.OK,reduced the sv to 0.8

    01:11:290 - Personally I would give it a whistle (Sampleset = Drum) to emphasize the slider head and the vocal. You generally did it in other places in the diff.OK,fixed it

    01:15:898 (2,3) - For here if you want to make it look tidier, just stack completely. Also I think for this part your objects are kind of restricted in the right side of the screen which is not really suggested.stacked them
  2. Minor Picks
    01:14:001 (1,2,3) - Personally I don't really like this way you stack. As the following notes are spamming triplets, why not just spread them out like this?
    SPOILER
    OK,fixed it

    01:32:615 (2) - How about making it something new rather than keeping the same direction of the previous slider?
    SPOILER
OK,fixed it
thx for modding my map<3333333

jonathanlfj wrote:

[General]
Need to add a few red lines in the middle to fix an off-sync section
00:45:119 - 166bpm
00:46:745 - 168bpm
00:49:602 - 166bpm
all fixed
[Easy]
00:43:097 (4) - blanket is a bit off fixed
00:44:543 (1) - you will probably have to break this slider up after the timing change is applied fixed
00:52:856 (2,3) - uh blanket fixed
01:06:772 (1) - the shape of this slider is kinda weird, you can take advantage of red line:
SPOILER
fixed
01:18:338 (1) - ^ fixed


[Insane]
00:34:242 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - based on how you did the other triplets, you should increase the distance here instead of decreasing fixed
01:03:338 (1) - missing a clap? fixed
01:31:892 (4,1,2) - this distance between each slider is different, its better to make it consistent fixed
01:35:326 (5,6) - try ctrl+g, flows onto 01:35:868 (1) better fixed
01:44:452 (7,1) - this is misaligned fixed
nice butterfly thx><
thats all from me you can call me back after
thx for modding lfj sama>< :)
jonathanlfj
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cool
kanor
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哇，感谢lfj大人>< :)
Karen
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[Kencho]
  1. 00:21:410 (1) - 我觉得这不需要NC 节奏都没变，要NC也应该是00:21:772 (2) - 这个
  2. 00:40:928 (1,3) - 一个弯的一个直的看起来有点不爽唉
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:983 (3,4,5) - 这一个3/4一个1/2节奏，距离都差不多，很难读，弄简单一点吧，3/4应该老实用小间距，况且这又是简单in
  2. 00:13:459 (1,2,3) - 这看起来都不像是1/2间距，固定一个差不多的间距，大概跟这个00:19:603 (2,3) - 一样
  3. 00:24:212 (2) - 这个违和，然而00:27:103 - 这里听起来应该加note的却没加
  4. 01:03:608 - 这里的音很明显，漏掉太奇怪了，01:03:517 - 这里放1/4滑条跟一下比较好
  5. 01:14:451 (2) - 这note不需要，没音而且这里不适合overmap
  6. 01:15:897 (2) - 01:18:789 (4) - ^ 为什么要在滑条尾overmap??
  7. 01:35:506 (6) - 漏clap
  8. 01:35:867 (1,2) - 同第一条，3/4距离太大
  9. 01:41:650 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这组跳非常不合曲，不是很懂为啥要强行跳，搞点滑条吧
[Hard]
  1. AR降一点，这个bpm用ar8太高了。 OD也是
[Normal]
  1. 下次主要不要一直绕圈
改完喊我
Kencho
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Joined August 2013
Kencho

Karen wrote:

[Kencho]
  1. 00:21:410 (1) - 我觉得这不需要NC 节奏都没变，要NC也应该是00:21:772 (2) - 这个 Fixed
  2. 00:40:928 (1,3) - 一个弯的一个直的看起来有点不爽唉 改了
Thanks for mod
最後我還是把kiai前的1/4改成折返了，dt玩家表示太難
edit:修復了點overlap
edit2/3:bookmark..
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218,173,93698,2,0,P|231:210|227:250,1,80,6|2,3:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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176,92,94963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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139,296,95505,1,12,3:3:0:0:
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116,146,96951,1,12,3:3:0:0:
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386,255,98758,6,0,P|367:329|419:384,1,160,4|12,3:2|0:3,0:0:0:0:
486,206,99300,1,0,3:0:0:0:
290,260,99481,1,6,0:3:0:0:
445,308,99662,1,2,3:0:0:0:
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290,260,100565,1,12,0:3:0:0:
118,221,100746,1,2,3:0:0:0:
118,221,100836,1,2,3:0:0:0:
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199,356,101288,2,0,L|279:348,1,80,12|0,3:3|3:0,0:0:0:0:
216,211,101650,5,6,0:3:0:0:
117,326,101830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,348,102011,1,12,0:3:0:0:
127,251,102192,2,0,P|111:287|117:327,1,80,0|6,3:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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85,170,102734,2,0,P|53:193|38:230,1,80,12|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,211,103095,6,0,P|219:132|175:66,1,160,6|12,3:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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216,211,104361,1,2,3:0:0:0:
216,211,104451,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,211,104541,6,0,P|255:214|292:199,1,80,4|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,124,104903,1,12,3:3:0:0:
339,265,105083,1,0,3:0:0:0:
243,126,105264,1,6,0:3:0:0:
419,216,105445,1,10,3:0:0:0:
259,314,105626,1,12,0:3:0:0:
341,54,105806,6,0,P|416:70|436:142,1,160,4|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,198,106348,2,0,P|246:165|243:126,1,80,12|0,3:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,124,106710,1,6,3:3:0:0:
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339,265,106981,1,2,0:0:0:0:
339,265,107071,1,12,3:3:0:0:
177,186,107252,1,2,3:0:0:0:
177,186,107342,1,2,0:0:0:0:
177,186,107433,6,0,P|117:193|63:217,1,120.000004577637,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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288,251,108698,6,0,L|282:370,1,120.000004577637,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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Pata-Mon
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Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
随便看看．没看阿伯和啃球的

[General]
  1. 所有难度点一下Timing→全部重新对齐，因为改了红线，有很多东西差了1ms
  2. blanket真随便……好多地方好难看
[Easy]
  1. 00:38:760 (2) - 碰血条，最好把这段往下移一点
  2. 01:12:734 (1,2,3) - 全难度就这里出现1/2gap，感觉不太好．考虑一下01:12:734 (1) - 加一次折返，然后01:13:999 - 这里开始第二个滑条，一拍半折返，这里正好也能把finish放滑条头，这样结束在01:15:083 - ，这里是那组鼓点同时也是vocal的开头，跟后面也是1/1，会比较好
  3. 01:48:155 (2) - 01:51:047 (2) - 01:53:939 (2) - 这几个结尾啥都没跟啊，吉他正好全在两边．这节奏确实比较舒服，如果你一定要这么下的话，我倒建议你把结尾都加上whistle，不然听得实在太明显了那里节奏明显不对，加了音效反而听着舒服．
[Normal]
  1. 00:17:615 - 这里声太明显，建议把00:17:073 (6) - 换成俩短滑条
  2. 00:41:651 (2) - 这段一直主跟的人声，那这里同样
  3. 01:08:758 (7,8) - 这里人声停住了，你8盖过的地方基本是空的，而01:09:481 - 到01:09:842 - 反而有鼓声，所以建议删掉8，然后7加一次折返，01:09:481 - 这里在放一个短滑条
  4. 因为你主跟人声，所以01:32:794 - 要比01:32:071 (5) - 重要
  5. 01:47:613 (1) - 一般都很不建议这么长（都超过10s）的转盘，参考一下其他难度吧
  6. 排列还是不太好看感觉
[Insane]
  1. 人格该说的基本都说了．后面那段肯定要削跳，但你要想放跳的话，00:58:276 - 这里开始这段完全可以放跳，现在我是觉得这段太不爽了，那么密的音效以及渐强准备进入kiai，你ds这么小
GL~
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kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

Pata-Mon wrote:

随便看看．没看阿伯和啃球的

[General]
  1. 所有难度点一下Timing→全部重新对齐，因为改了红线，有很多东西差了1ms 好
  2. 除了啃球的难度以外，blanket真随便……好多地方好难看QWQ
[Easy]
  1. 00:38:760 (2) - 碰血条，最好把这段往下移一点 好
  2. 01:12:734 (1,2,3) - 全难度就这里出现1/2gap，感觉不太好．考虑一下01:12:734 (1) - 加一次折返，然后01:13:999 - 这里开始第二个滑条，一拍半折返，这里正好也能把finish放滑条头，这样结束在01:15:083 - ，这里是那组鼓点同时也是vocal的开头，跟后面也是1/1，会比较好 这里是两个kiai的交接处所以我觉得加个1/2gap没什么特别违和的地方......而改了感觉还要到处改，想象还是keep
  3. 01:48:155 (2) - 01:51:047 (2) - 01:53:939 (2) - 这几个结尾啥都没跟啊，吉他正好全在两边．这节奏确实比较舒服，如果你一定要这么下的话，我倒建议你把结尾都加上whistle，不然听得实在太明显了那里节奏明显不对，加了音效反而听着舒服．好，加了

[Insane]
  1. 人格该说的基本都说了．后面那段肯定要削跳，但你要想放跳的话，00:58:276 - 这里开始这段完全可以放跳，现在我是觉得这段太不爽了，那么密的音效以及渐强准备进入kiai，你ds这么小 因为简单in嘛，本来是打算跳的，但是一跳就爆星orz，下次会注意的
GL~
thx for mod><
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

Karen wrote:

PLACEHOLDERED


[Insane]
  1. 00:11:983 (3,4,5) - 这一个3/4一个1/2节奏，距离都差不多，很难读，弄简单一点吧，3/4应该老实用小间距，况且这又是简单in 好，改了
  2. 00:13:459 (1,2,3) - 这看起来都不像是1/2间距，固定一个差不多的间距，大概跟这个00:19:603 (2,3) - 一样 OK，加大了间距
  3. 00:24:212 (2) - 这个违和，然而00:27:103 - 这里听起来应该加note的却没加 去掉了，后面那个地方加了Note
  4. 01:03:608 - 这里的音很明显，漏掉太奇怪了，01:03:517 - 这里放1/4滑条跟一下比较好 这里改成三连了，确实呢qwq
  5. 01:14:451 (2) - 这note不需要，没音而且这里不适合overmap 因为00:34:242 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里我就是这么下的，同样是位于两个段落的连接处所以我想让梗尽量对应起来......不然的话感觉前面这么下有有点突兀了，所以我想保留下来QWQ
  6. 01:15:897 (2) - 01:18:789 (4) - ^ 为什么要在滑条尾overmap?? 想当然的下了三连撑难度......去掉了
  7. 01:35:506 (6) - 漏clap fixed
  8. 01:35:867 (1,2) - 同第一条，3/4距离太大 改了
  9. 01:41:650 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这组跳非常不合曲，不是很懂为啥要强行跳，搞点滑条吧 之前一直不知道怎么用左上角那个加音效.....补加了finish，没有finish引导就这么下确实会觉得不合曲吧......不知道改完之后这样行不行，如果还是觉得不合适的话我再改QWQ
[Hard]
  1. AR降一点，这个bpm用ar8太高了。 OD也是帮他降到了ar7.5,od6

改完喊我
Updated
感谢人格QWQ :)
Gyro Zeppeli
95 posts
Joined January 2014
Gyro Zeppeli

Pata-Mon wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:17:615 - 这里声太明显，建议把00:17:073 (6) - 换成俩短滑条
  2. 00:41:651 (2) - 这段一直主跟的人声，那这里同样
    fix
  3. 01:08:758 (7,8) - 这里人声停住了，你8盖过的地方基本是空的，而01:09:481 - 到01:09:842 - 反而有鼓声，所以建议删掉8，然后7加一次折返，01:09:481 - 这里在放一个短滑条
    fix
  4. 因为你主跟人声，所以01:32:794 - 要比01:32:071 (5) - 重要
    好
  5. 01:47:613 (1) - 一般都很不建议这么长（都超过10s）的转盘，参考一下其他难度吧
    好，加了
  6. 排列还是不太好看感觉 太菜


GL~
Karen
2,864 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
qua了吧
怕他萌居然摸泡图很有上狗潜质啊
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor
ohhhhhhhhh跪舔人格 :)
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf
graz :)
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
I do not remember myself suggesting putting anything in the Source. Is it really a song from デジモンアドベンチャー tri. ? If I remember correctly, it's only a song from the single, "re-fly" of Koji Wada.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rY5VnM8AGM0

Would be appreciated if you could provide me some references, thanks!
- Angelia
118 posts
Joined August 2013
- Angelia
boom
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Lily Bread
(那个“哇哦”的表情)
恭喜
sahuang
2,294 posts
Joined December 2014
sahuang
？？？
Easy

Normal

etc.

kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

sahuang wrote:

？？？
Easy

Normal

etc.

ORZ之前没有这个毛病结果最后一次发过来的时候就没查了.....我背锅
normal最后一条红线被改了，导致后面全部偏了
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
Please fix these. https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5564286

and Could you reply to KawN's post ?

IamKwaN wrote:

I do not remember myself suggesting putting anything in the Source. Is it really a song from デジモンアドベンチャー tri. ? If I remember correctly, it's only a song from the single, "re-fly" of Koji Wada.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rY5VnM8AGM0

Would be appreciated if you could provide me some references, thanks!
I couldn't find this song from anime website and his official.

http://digimon-adventure.net/music/

http://www.lantis.jp/release-item/LACA-15485.html
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor
:)

alacat wrote:

Please fix these. https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5564286

and Could you reply to KawN's post ?

IamKwaN wrote:

I do not remember myself suggesting putting anything in the Source. Is it really a song from デジモンアドベンチャー tri. ? If I remember correctly, it's only a song from the single, "re-fly" of Koji Wada.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rY5VnM8AGM0

Would be appreciated if you could provide me some references, thanks!
I couldn't find this song from anime website and his official.

http://digimon-adventure.net/music/

http://www.lantis.jp/release-item/LACA-15485.html
sorry to post so late…… i have asked kwan about the source, yes i make a misstake :? so im waiting kwan to dq it...that's ok i will fix the source ！
anyway thanks :)
btw, can i have a rebub after fixed the source？( ｰ̀εｰ́ )lfj is so busy that he hasnt be online for a week…… :?
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