Koji Wada - re-fly · forum

kanor

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

kanor 2016-09-25T02:32:59+00:00

nubery wrote:
Hi, modback

[Easy]
00:17:073 (3,1) - make this blanket look better OK
00:33:699 (3,4) - fix blanket pls FIXED
00:43:097 (4) - curve could be better http://puu.sh/rmnhq/8e86d64acf.jpg you are right,fixed
01:30:085 (1,2) - blanket is off dont tend to blanket but fixed
01:41:651 (1) - I can't think of a reason as to why this slider is so different and stands out from other sliders. Like the other sliders you used are repeated throughout the map. Maybe I'm missing something in the song... x.x ohhhhh I just want to make more kinds of sliders so that players would not feel boried if it is only 2 kind of sliders

[Normal]
00:48:880 (4,1) - looks a little ugly imo... maybe blanket it a little better OK,fixed
00:50:326 (2,3,4) - triangle can maybe look better OK,fxied
[Insane]
00:34:242 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think it makes more sense if the triples increased in ds. The music doesnt slow down here so I think it might be better to keep equal distance or increasing distance to emphasize the cymbal crash at 00:35:145 (3) -
because it is the end of a paragraph which has a process of pack the last paragraph and start the next one so i want to stess it by the different ds.01:14:452 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - is the same way but just in contrast
00:42:013 (4,1) - fix blanket OK
01:47:434 (1) - nice shape thx because its re-fly!>///////<

thx for modding! Help a lot

Blitzfrog

389 posts

Joined March 2016

Blitzfrog 2016-09-27T08:27:01+00:00

Played Abhor's hard just then and really got to say that at 01:24:302 the hitsound is really loud when it should probably gradually crescendo at every strong down beat.

Lobelia

862 posts

Joined February 2014

Lobelia 2016-09-27T09:35:20+00:00

nubery wrote:
Hi, modback

[Hard]
00:08:394 (4,5) - make spacing same as 00:08:214 (3,4) - ? looks better and easier to readactually i follow the ds here so i think it will nice

Blitzfrog wrote:
Played Abhor's hard just then and really got to say that at 01:24:302 the hitsound is really loud when it should probably gradually crescendo at every strong down beat.

fix

osu file format v14

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Title:re-fly
TitleUnicode:re-fly
Artist:Koji Wada
ArtistUnicode:和田光司
Creator:kanor
Version:Abhor's Hard
Source:デジモンアドベンチャー tri.
Tags:Digimon Adventure monster refly Kouji Gyro Zeppeli [ Abhor ] Kencho
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Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2016-09-28T06:16:01+00:00

Hello~
Sugestion,

Easy

00:17:073 (3,1) - Blanket could be better
00:19:965 (3,4,1) - Maybe you can do ctrl+g on (3,4) then do ctrl+j on (1)? I think how the cursor turn could be more less sharp there especially the flow on 00:20:326 (4,1) - and 00:20:687 (1,2) - , visually they will be look like this http://puu.sh/rqi7E/1e5683e143.jpg
00:45:989 (2) - Add finish on tail for cymbal sound?

Seems nice, all I can say is some of your blanket is pretty off I think you can make them neater by yourself :p

Normal

00:19:965 (4) - A bit improve the flow there imo, you can make the slider shape into like this http://puu.sh/rqiEv/31954b8d24.jpg
00:46:712 (1) - Add finish on head? I hear a faint cymbal there
00:47:434 (2,3,4) - Make the shape more paralel? I think that will looks neater http://puu.sh/rqiN3/7a253d74d9.jpg
01:07:675 (4,5) - The rhythm seems weird to play imo, isn't that one supposed to be more consistent like 01:19:242 (4,5,6) - ? Based on music literally the rhythm supposed to be at least consistent

I have a little concern on rhythm usement on kiai around 01:03:880 - until 01:24:302 - . Mostly because you use too many 1/2 rhythm that make the gameplay denser and harder than it should be e.g. 01:21:049 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - etc, my sugestion try to get rid some 1/2 rhythm with something easier like 1/1 rhythm or something else to make the gameplay less dense

Hard

00:28:820 (4) - Why use a larger spacing there? imo nothing to emphsized there same as you did on 00:31:531 (3,4) - that have same music, I think it is better to use regular 1.2 spacing like the rest or at least more consistent
00:40:928 (1) - Move to x:164 y:36? to make the overlap on 00:40:567 (4,1) - neater like http://puu.sh/rqpjK/44e9ee25b6.jpg
00:46:712 (1) - Add finish on head? I hear a faint cymbal there
01:44:181 (4) - Too quite, I think you can add some hitsound on that one either whistle or clap to cover the drum sound

Insane

00:34:242 (3) - Obvious should be nc for consistency with 00:34:603 (1,2,3) - and 00:34:965 (1,2,3) -
00:46:712 (7) - Add finish for cymbal
01:01:169 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make them more straight lol, you can move 01:01:260 (2,3,4,5) - to x:385 y:206
01:14:452 (1) - Doesn't really need nc imo, it will more consistence like this http://puu.sh/rqq1j/0a1182ada2.jpg

Great set, gl

Saki

437 posts

Joined October 2013

Saki 2016-09-28T06:44:01+00:00

kd够了啊朋友

算了我再混一个好了
[kencho]
摸个屁啊，我都不愿意打开，直接飞吧
[Insane]
00:13:459 (1,2,3) - 这种直flow不推荐，个人不是特别喜欢
00:24:212 (2) - 没用啊，删了吧
01:47:434 (1) - 滑条和后面转盘的衔接略显奇怪，没有明显的音啊，不过如果是为了配合滑条的形状那就也只能这样了吧
01:19:061 (6) - 放到01:19:422 (8,9) - 之间

低难度依旧不想看，嘻嘻水个kd就跑

Lobelia

862 posts

Joined February 2014

Lobelia 2016-09-28T07:30:38+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
Hello~
Sugestion,

Hard
00:28:820 (4) - Why use a larger spacing there? imo nothing to emphsized there same as you did on 00:31:531 (3,4) - that have same music, I think it is better to use regular 1.2 spacing like the rest or at least more consistentok
00:40:928 (1) - Move to x:164 y:36? to make the overlap on 00:40:567 (4,1) - neater like http://puu.sh/rqpjK/44e9ee25b6.jpgok
00:46:712 (1) - Add finish on head? I hear a faint cymbal thereok
01:44:181 (4) - Too quite, I think you can add some hitsound on that one either whistle or clap to cover the drum soundok

fix

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kanor

925 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

kanor 2016-09-28T09:38:12+00:00

Vert wrote:
kd够了啊朋友

算了我再混一个好了
[kencho]
摸个屁啊，我都不愿意打开，直接飞吧
[Insane]
00:13:459 (1,2,3) - 这种直flow不推荐，个人不是特别喜欢果然不能听智障波的，不过感觉还行，懒得改了
00:24:212 (2) - 没用啊，删了吧这里有个音，不押难受
01:47:434 (1) - 滑条和后面转盘的衔接略显奇怪，没有明显的音啊，不过如果是为了配合滑条的形状那就也只能这样了吧厚
01:19:061 (6) - 放到01:19:422 (8,9) - 之间可

低难度依旧不想看，嘻嘻水个kd就跑

嘻嘻

kanor

925 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

kanor 2016-09-28T09:40:58+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
Hello~
Sugestion,

Easy
00:17:073 (3,1) - Blanket could be better OK
00:19:965 (3,4,1) - Maybe you can do ctrl+g on (3,4) then do ctrl+j on (1)? I think how the cursor turn could be more less sharp there especially the flow on 00:20:326 (4,1) - and 00:20:687 (1,2) - , visually they will be look like this http://puu.sh/rqi7E/1e5683e143.jpg
looks better ,fixed
00:45:989 (2) - Add finish on tail for cymbal sound? OK

Seems nice, all I can say is some of your blanket is pretty off I think you can make them neater by yourself :p
Insane
00:34:242 (3) - Obvious should be nc for consistency with 00:34:603 (1,2,3) - and 00:34:965 (1,2,3) - well, ur right
00:46:712 (7) - Add finish for cymbal yes!
01:01:169 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make them more straight lol, you can move 01:01:260 (2,3,4,5) - to x:385 y:206 fixed, seems better
01:14:452 (1) - Doesn't really need nc imo, it will more consistence like this http://puu.sh/rqq1j/0a1182ada2.jpg
OK,revoke the NC

Great set, gl

thx for your modding! it is those places that can make my map better><

Gyro Zeppeli

95 posts

Joined January 2014

Gyro Zeppeli 2016-09-28T12:57:55+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
Normal
00:19:965 (4) - A bit improve the flow there imo, you can make the slider shape into like this http://puu.sh/rqiEv/31954b8d24.jpg
fix
00:46:712 (1) - Add finish on head? I hear a faint cymbal there yeap,i miss it
00:47:434 (2,3,4) - Make the shape more paralel? I think that will looks neater http://puu.sh/rqiN3/7a253d74d9.jpg
looks good,fix
01:07:675 (4,5) - The rhythm seems weird to play imo, isn't that one supposed to be more consistent like 01:19:242 (4,5,6) - ? Based on music literally the rhythm supposed to be at least consistent
eh..fix,

Atrue

osu! Alumni

1,017 posts

Joined July 2012

Atrue 2016-10-07T16:40:51+00:00

For memory of Koji Wada.
[General]
All clear! Question about Source but should be good.
[Easy]

Structrual Issue
People say that blanket is not important and focus on bigger stuff, but it is still the basic patttern component and I believe it is still the fundation of structure, unless you mean to do something else.
Minor Picks
00:43:097 (4) - Blanket is not good
SPOILER

00:45:989 (2) - Well you could have actually made use of this slider to get the objects less packed.

00:52:856 (2) - Blanket issue.
SPOILER

00:55:386 (1) - I believe this slider is supposed to be at least mirror symmetry on y axis. But for now I don't think there is a way to move it around without changing the whole pattern.

[Gyro's Normal]

Structrual Issue
Generally the structure is still unpolished enough as far as I concerned. Check AIMod, there are quite some places that can do some small adjustment.

00:10:563 (1) - If you cannot make it stacked fully, just make it another pattern, like this:
SPOILER

00:40:928 (1) - I would say this flow is not so good to follow here. To make a better transition you can use this kind of direction:
SPOILER

00:46:712 (1,2,3,4) - I don't really like this pattern setting. It squeezes room and literally is just drawing a circle. And the arc is not unified with the following slider so it makes it aesthetically not good enough. If you want to make a symmetry pattern like this, try something like this: (just an example)
SPOILER

01:23:760 (6) - Rhythmetically I think it can be a reverse slider to cover the clap and better fit the drum. But seems that it needs a lot of work on patterns.
Minor Picks
00:18:338 (2) - For this kind of sliders personally I would suggest making something different.
SPOILER

01:46:712 (6) - Blanket is not well made. At least in the end give people some good impression on the Diff.
SPOILER

[Abhor's Hard]

Structrual Issue
00:48:880 - I think this place is in a pair with 00:49:061 . So why not making them a slider as the latter slider, rather than seperate them?
SPOILER

01:11:290 - Personally I would give it a whistle (Sampleset = Drum) to emphasize the slider head and the vocal. You generally did it in other places in the diff.
Minor Picks
00:45:898 - I'm also not sure if it is good, but seems that the music suggests a triplet here. I think you can add a note here and reduce the distance to next slider to make it less hard on jump but more dense on rhythm. Thus you can use clap on 00:45:989 (4) - to make it more fit.

[Insane]

Structrual Issue
Generally good, just some places still need more polishment.

00:38:218 - Opposing to this whistle usage. Generally your whistles are sparsely seperated on vocal and here you got 5 whistles in a row. Sampleset = Auto.

00:41:471 - 00:42:916 - And here obviously the head is stronger than the tail, should get an whistle on that. Sampleset = Drum

01:02:254 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think here might be a obstacle for players to complete this density of streams in this distance change. You might want to reduce the distance a bit.

01:02:977 (3) - And here you can use a slowed slider to cover the feeling of slow down rather than making an unusual shaped slider here. The risk is that in this way it will become a bit tricky. Considering the situation it should be fine.

01:11:290 - Personally I would give it a whistle (Sampleset = Drum) to emphasize the slider head and the vocal. You generally did it in other places in the diff.

01:15:898 (2,3) - For here if you want to make it look tidier, just stack completely. Also I think for this part your objects are kind of restricted in the right side of the screen which is not really suggested.
Minor Picks
01:14:001 (1,2,3) - Personally I don't really like this way you stack. As the following notes are spamming triplets, why not just spread them out like this?
SPOILER

01:32:615 (2) - How about making it something new rather than keeping the same direction of the previous slider?
SPOILER

[Kencho's Nirvana]

Structrual Issue
Clean.

01:11:290 - Personally I would give it a whistle (Sampleset = Drum) to emphasize the slider head and the vocal. You generally did it in other places in the diff.
Minor Picks
00:42:374 (1) - Bend it more to get a better blanket.
SPOILER

00:45:085 (1,6) - Personally in this case I would suggest making something else on the second slider to just unify the arc, but here the shape is limited by flow and room, so just bend it more to blanket better might be good enough.
SPOILER

Forum PM for any questions related. Thank you!

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2016-10-08T01:01:25+00:00

下劃線太蠢啦，加了反而會搜不到

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2016-10-08T01:13:02+00:00

[General]
Need to add a few red lines in the middle to fix an off-sync section
00:45:119 - 166bpm
00:46:745 - 168bpm
00:49:602 - 166bpm

[Easy]
00:43:097 (4) - blanket is a bit off
00:44:543 (1) - you will probably have to break this slider up after the timing change is applied
00:52:856 (2,3) - uh blanket
01:06:772 (1) - the shape of this slider is kinda weird, you can take advantage of red line:

SPOILER

01:18:338 (1) - ^

[Gyro's Normal]
00:44:001 (1,2,3) - this part plays better like this imo

SPOILER

00:53:218 (2,3,4,5) - why is there whistle on every beat? seems out of place compared to other sections
01:23:760 (6) - see if you can make this a repeat slider (or circle + 1/2 slider), would fit the music super well

[Abhor's Hard]
00:19:965 (3) - i would resort to 1/2 here since you covered the guitar strings earlier at 00:17:073 (2,3)
00:43:368 - perhaps add a circle here? feels weird to skip such a strong 1/4
00:46:712 (1) - finish
01:23:579 (3) - swap this for two circles, since the drum emphasis is strong

[Insane]
00:34:242 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - based on how you did the other triplets, you should increase the distance here instead of decreasing
01:03:338 (1) - missing a clap?
01:31:892 (4,1,2) - this distance between each slider is different, its better to make it consistent
01:35:326 (5,6) - try ctrl+g, flows onto 01:35:868 (1) better
01:44:452 (7,1) - this is misaligned
nice butterfly

[Kencho's Nirvana]
00:46:745 (1) - missing finish on slider start
01:03:338 (1) - this would play better as two 1/4 sliders, since that way there is a click on the vocals at 01:03:517
01:23:760 (5) - if you want more emphasis on this jump, try a NC here

thats all from me you can call me back after

Gyro Zeppeli

95 posts

Joined January 2014

Gyro Zeppeli 2016-10-08T03:40:28+00:00

Atrue wrote:
[Gyro's Normal]
Structrual Issue
Generally the structure is still unpolished enough as far as I concerned. Check AIMod, there are quite some places that can do some small adjustment. OK i fixed

00:10:563 (1) - If you cannot make it stacked fully, just make it another pattern, like this:
SPOILER

nice examplei fixed

00:40:928 (1) - I would say this flow is not so good to follow here. To make a better transition you can use this kind of direction:
SPOILER

OK i fixed

00:46:712 (1,2,3,4) - I don't really like this pattern setting. It squeezes room and literally is just drawing a circle. And the arc is not unified with the following slider so it makes it aesthetically not good enough. If you want to make a symmetry pattern like this, try something like this: (just an example)
SPOILER

OK i fixed

01:23:760 (6) - Rhythmetically I think it can be a reverse slider to cover the clap and better fit the drum. But seems that it needs a lot of work on patterns. u r right,but esay to work,fixed
Minor Picks
00:18:338 (2) - For this kind of sliders personally I would suggest making something different.
SPOILER

OK i fixed

01:46:712 (6) - Blanket is not well made. At least in the end give people some good impression on the Diff.
SPOILER
OK i fixed

jonathanlfj wrote:
[General]

[Gyro's Normal]
00:44:001 (1,2,3) - this part plays better like this imo
SPOILER

nice part,i fixed
00:53:218 (2,3,4,5) - why is there whistle on every beat? seems out of place compared to other sections
OK i fixed
01:23:760 (6) - see if you can make this a repeat slider (or circle + 1/2 slider), would fit the music super well
i forgot this part;w; fixed

Lobelia

862 posts

Joined February 2014

Lobelia 2016-10-08T14:15:28+00:00

Atrue wrote:
[Abhor's Hard]
Structrual Issue
00:48:880 - I think this place is in a pair with 00:49:061 . So why not making them a slider as the latter slider, rather than seperate them?
SPOILER
in fact the 4 slider follow the vocal for emphasize the music

01:11:290 - Personally I would give it a whistle (Sampleset = Drum) to emphasize the slider head and the vocal. You generally did it in other places in the diff.ok
Minor Picks
00:45:898 - I'm also not sure if it is good, but seems that the music suggests a triplet here. I think you can add a note here and reduce the distance to next slider to make it less hard on jump but more dense on rhythm. i follow the same bass track hereThus you can use clap on 00:45:989 (4) - to make it more fit.ok
jonathanlfj wrote:
[Abhor's Hard]
00:19:965 (3) - i would resort to 1/2 here since you covered the guitar strings earlier at 00:17:073 (2,3)
00:43:368 - perhaps add a circle here? feels weird to skip such a strong 1/4
00:46:712 (1) - finish
01:23:579 (3) - swap this for two circles, since the drum emphasis is strong
all fix

fix,

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Kencho

952 posts

Joined August 2013

Kencho 2016-10-08T15:20:46+00:00

Atrue

Atrue wrote:
For memory of Koji Wada.
[Kencho's Nirvana]
Structrual Issue
Clean.

01:11:290 - Personally I would give it a whistle (Sampleset = Drum) to emphasize the slider head and the vocal. You generally did it in other places in the diff. ok
Minor Picks
00:42:374 (1) - Bend it more to get a better blanket. no because I make it symmetry
SPOILER

00:45:085 (1,6) - Personally in this case I would suggest making something else on the second slider to just unify the arc, but here the shape is limited by flow and room, so just bend it more to blanket better might be good enough. ok
SPOILER

jonathanlfj

jonathanlfj wrote:
[General]
Need to add a few red lines in the middle to fix an off-sync section Fixed
00:45:119 - 166bpm
00:46:745 - 168bpm
00:49:602 - 166bpm

[Kencho's Nirvana]
00:46:745 (1) - missing finish on slider start ok
01:03:338 (1) - this would play better as two 1/4 sliders, since that way there is a click on the vocals at 01:03:517 ok
01:23:760 (5) - if you want more emphasis on this jump, try a NC here keep

Thanks for mod

Kencho's Nirvana

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Title:re-fly
TitleUnicode:re-fly
Artist:Koji Wada
ArtistUnicode:和田光司
Creator:kanor
Version:Kencho's Nirvana
Source:デジモンアドベンチャー tri.
Tags:Digimon Adventure monster refly Kouji Gyro Zeppeli [_Abhor_] Kencho
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kanor

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Topic Starter

kanor 2016-10-08T15:41:24+00:00

Atrue wrote:
For memory of Koji Wada.
[General]
All clear! Question about Source but should be good.
im sorry that i cant load most of the image but i have tried to fixed those notes metioned!
[Easy]
Structrual Issue
People say that blanket is not important and focus on bigger stuff, but it is still the basic patttern component and I believe it is still the fundation of structure, unless you mean to do something else.
Minor Picks
00:43:097 (4) - Blanket is not good
SPOILER

OK,fixed it
00:45:989 (2) - Well you could have actually made use of this slider to get the objects less packed.
OK,fixed it
00:52:856 (2) - Blanket issue.
SPOILER
OK,fixed it
00:55:386 (1) - I believe this slider is supposed to be at least mirror symmetry on y axis. But for now I don't think there is a way to move it around without changing the whole pattern.
OK,fixed it
[Insane]
Structrual Issue
Generally good, just some places still need more polishment.

00:38:218 - Opposing to this whistle usage. Generally your whistles are sparsely seperated on vocal and here you got 5 whistles in a row. Sampleset = Auto.OK,fixed it

00:41:471 - 00:42:916 - And here obviously the head is stronger than the tail, should get an whistle on that. Sampleset = DrumOK,fixed it

01:02:254 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think here might be a obstacle for players to complete this density of streams in this distance change. You might want to reduce the distance a bit. OK,reduced the ds of streams

01:02:977 (3) - And here you can use a slowed slider to cover the feeling of slow down rather than making an unusual shaped slider here. The risk is that in this way it will become a bit tricky. Considering the situation it should be fine.OK,reduced the sv to 0.8

01:11:290 - Personally I would give it a whistle (Sampleset = Drum) to emphasize the slider head and the vocal. You generally did it in other places in the diff.OK,fixed it

01:15:898 (2,3) - For here if you want to make it look tidier, just stack completely. Also I think for this part your objects are kind of restricted in the right side of the screen which is not really suggested.stacked them
Minor Picks
01:14:001 (1,2,3) - Personally I don't really like this way you stack. As the following notes are spamming triplets, why not just spread them out like this?
SPOILER
OK,fixed it

01:32:615 (2) - How about making it something new rather than keeping the same direction of the previous slider?
SPOILER
OK,fixed it

thx for modding my map<3333333

jonathanlfj wrote:
[General]
Need to add a few red lines in the middle to fix an off-sync section
00:45:119 - 166bpm
00:46:745 - 168bpm
00:49:602 - 166bpm
all fixed
[Easy]
00:43:097 (4) - blanket is a bit off fixed
00:44:543 (1) - you will probably have to break this slider up after the timing change is applied fixed
00:52:856 (2,3) - uh blanket fixed
01:06:772 (1) - the shape of this slider is kinda weird, you can take advantage of red line:
SPOILER
fixed
01:18:338 (1) - ^ fixed

[Insane]
00:34:242 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - based on how you did the other triplets, you should increase the distance here instead of decreasing fixed
01:03:338 (1) - missing a clap? fixed
01:31:892 (4,1,2) - this distance between each slider is different, its better to make it consistent fixed
01:35:326 (5,6) - try ctrl+g, flows onto 01:35:868 (1) better fixed
01:44:452 (7,1) - this is misaligned fixed
nice butterfly thx><
thats all from me you can call me back after

thx for modding lfj sama><

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

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jonathanlfj 2016-10-09T23:17:50+00:00

cool

kanor

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Topic Starter

kanor 2016-10-10T00:44:59+00:00

哇，感谢lfj大人><

Karen

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Joined August 2013

Karen 2016-10-20T12:21:21+00:00

~~PLACEHOLDERED~~

[Kencho]

00:21:410 (1) - 我觉得这不需要NC 节奏都没变，要NC也应该是00:21:772 (2) - 这个
00:40:928 (1,3) - 一个弯的一个直的看起来有点不爽唉

[Insane]

00:11:983 (3,4,5) - 这一个3/4一个1/2节奏，距离都差不多，很难读，弄简单一点吧，3/4应该老实用小间距，况且这又是简单in
00:13:459 (1,2,3) - 这看起来都不像是1/2间距，固定一个差不多的间距，大概跟这个00:19:603 (2,3) - 一样
00:24:212 (2) - 这个违和，然而00:27:103 - 这里听起来应该加note的却没加
01:03:608 - 这里的音很明显，漏掉太奇怪了，01:03:517 - 这里放1/4滑条跟一下比较好
01:14:451 (2) - 这note不需要，没音而且这里不适合overmap
01:15:897 (2) - 01:18:789 (4) - ^ 为什么要在滑条尾overmap??
01:35:506 (6) - 漏clap
01:35:867 (1,2) - 同第一条，3/4距离太大
01:41:650 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这组跳非常不合曲，不是很懂为啥要强行跳，搞点滑条吧

[Hard]

AR降一点，这个bpm用ar8太高了。 OD也是

[Normal]

下次主要不要一直绕圈

改完喊我

Kencho

952 posts

Joined August 2013

Kencho 2016-10-23T10:02:38+00:00

Karen wrote:
[Kencho]
00:21:410 (1) - 我觉得这不需要NC 节奏都没变，要NC也应该是00:21:772 (2) - 这个 Fixed
00:40:928 (1,3) - 一个弯的一个直的看起来有点不爽唉改了

Thanks for mod
最後我還是把kiai前的1/4改成折返了，dt玩家表示太難
edit:修復了點overlap
edit2/3:bookmark..

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385,96,99842,1,12,0:3:0:0:
216,211,100023,6,0,P|182:266|205:363,1,160,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,260,100565,1,12,0:3:0:0:
118,221,100746,1,2,3:0:0:0:
118,221,100836,1,2,3:0:0:0:
118,221,100927,2,0,L|38:229,1,80,6|2,3:3|3:0,0:0:0:0:
199,356,101288,2,0,L|279:348,1,80,12|0,3:3|3:0,0:0:0:0:
216,211,101650,5,6,0:3:0:0:
117,326,101830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,348,102011,1,12,0:3:0:0:
127,251,102192,2,0,P|111:287|117:327,1,80,0|6,3:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
216,211,102553,1,2,0:0:0:0:
85,170,102734,2,0,P|53:193|38:230,1,80,12|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,211,103095,6,0,P|219:132|175:66,1,160,6|12,3:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
85,170,103638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,126,103818,1,6,3:3:0:0:
126,12,103999,1,2,3:0:0:0:
126,12,104089,1,2,0:0:0:0:
126,12,104180,1,12,0:3:0:0:
216,211,104361,1,2,3:0:0:0:
216,211,104451,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,211,104541,6,0,P|255:214|292:199,1,80,4|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,124,104903,1,12,3:3:0:0:
339,265,105083,1,0,3:0:0:0:
243,126,105264,1,6,0:3:0:0:
419,216,105445,1,10,3:0:0:0:
259,314,105626,1,12,0:3:0:0:
341,54,105806,6,0,P|416:70|436:142,1,160,4|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,198,106348,2,0,P|246:165|243:126,1,80,12|0,3:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,124,106710,1,6,3:3:0:0:
339,265,106891,1,2,3:0:0:0:
339,265,106981,1,2,0:0:0:0:
339,265,107071,1,12,3:3:0:0:
177,186,107252,1,2,3:0:0:0:
177,186,107342,1,2,0:0:0:0:
177,186,107433,6,0,P|117:193|63:217,1,120.000004577637,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,337,108156,2,0,L|200:277,1,60.0000022888184,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,251,108517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,251,108698,6,0,L|282:370,1,120.000004577637,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
282,371,109421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,315,109602,2,0,L|332:317,1,60.0000022888184,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
443,373,109963,2,0,L|502:370,1,60.0000022888184,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
408,246,110324,6,0,L|288:251,1,120.000004577637,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
120,315,111047,2,0,L|179:317,1,60.0000022888184,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,257,111409,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,257,111589,6,0,P|40:310|57:366,1,120.000004577637,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
58,367,112312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,315,112493,2,0,L|179:317,1,60.0000022888184,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,236,112855,2,0,L|188:234,1,60.0000022888184,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
303,294,113216,6,0,P|327:241|310:185,1,120.000004577637,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
151,100,113939,2,0,L|153:159,1,60.0000022888184,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,44,114300,1,0,0:0:0:0:
93,44,114481,6,0,P|146:20|202:37,1,120.000004577637,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
309,184,115204,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,241,115385,2,0,P|212:244|183:236,1,60.0000022888184,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,186,115746,2,0,P|78:183|49:191,1,60.0000022888184,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
0,272,116108,6,0,P|41:302|84:265,1,120.000004577637,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
198,97,116830,2,0,P|227:97|256:106,1,60.0000022888184,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,165,117192,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,165,117373,6,0,L|333:46,1,120.000004577637,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
182,268,118095,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,200,118276,2,0,L|119:141,1,60.0000022888184,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,97,118638,2,0,L|203:38,1,60.0000022888184,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:

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Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2016-10-23T10:19:12+00:00

随便看看．没看阿伯和啃球的

[General]

所有难度点一下Timing→全部重新对齐，因为改了红线，有很多东西差了1ms
blanket真随便……好多地方好难看

[Easy]

00:38:760 (2) - 碰血条，最好把这段往下移一点
01:12:734 (1,2,3) - 全难度就这里出现1/2gap，感觉不太好．考虑一下01:12:734 (1) - 加一次折返，然后01:13:999 - 这里开始第二个滑条，一拍半折返，这里正好也能把finish放滑条头，这样结束在01:15:083 - ，这里是那组鼓点同时也是vocal的开头，跟后面也是1/1，会比较好
01:48:155 (2) - 01:51:047 (2) - 01:53:939 (2) - 这几个结尾啥都没跟啊，吉他正好全在两边．这节奏确实比较舒服，如果你一定要这么下的话，我倒建议你把结尾都加上whistle，不然听得实在太明显了那里节奏明显不对，加了音效反而听着舒服．

[Normal]

00:17:615 - 这里声太明显，建议把00:17:073 (6) - 换成俩短滑条
00:41:651 (2) - 这段一直主跟的人声，那这里同样
01:08:758 (7,8) - 这里人声停住了，你8盖过的地方基本是空的，而01:09:481 - 到01:09:842 - 反而有鼓声，所以建议删掉8，然后7加一次折返，01:09:481 - 这里在放一个短滑条
因为你主跟人声，所以01:32:794 - 要比01:32:071 (5) - 重要
01:47:613 (1) - 一般都很不建议这么长（都超过10s）的转盘，参考一下其他难度吧
排列还是不太好看感觉

[Insane]

人格该说的基本都说了．后面那段肯定要削跳，但你要想放跳的话，00:58:276 - 这里开始这段完全可以放跳，现在我是觉得这段太不爽了，那么密的音效以及渐强准备进入kiai，你ds这么小

GL~

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kanor

925 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

kanor 2016-10-23T13:17:14+00:00

Pata-Mon wrote:
随便看看．没看阿伯和啃球的

[General]
所有难度点一下Timing→全部重新对齐，因为改了红线，有很多东西差了1ms 好
除了啃球的难度以外，blanket真随便……好多地方好难看QWQ
[Easy]
00:38:760 (2) - 碰血条，最好把这段往下移一点好
01:12:734 (1,2,3) - 全难度就这里出现1/2gap，感觉不太好．考虑一下01:12:734 (1) - 加一次折返，然后01:13:999 - 这里开始第二个滑条，一拍半折返，这里正好也能把finish放滑条头，这样结束在01:15:083 - ，这里是那组鼓点同时也是vocal的开头，跟后面也是1/1，会比较好这里是两个kiai的交接处所以我觉得加个1/2gap没什么特别违和的地方......而改了感觉还要到处改，想象还是keep
01:48:155 (2) - 01:51:047 (2) - 01:53:939 (2) - 这几个结尾啥都没跟啊，吉他正好全在两边．这节奏确实比较舒服，如果你一定要这么下的话，我倒建议你把结尾都加上whistle，不然听得实在太明显了那里节奏明显不对，加了音效反而听着舒服．好，加了

[Insane]
人格该说的基本都说了．后面那段肯定要削跳，但你要想放跳的话，00:58:276 - 这里开始这段完全可以放跳，现在我是觉得这段太不爽了，那么密的音效以及渐强准备进入kiai，你ds这么小因为简单in嘛，本来是打算跳的，但是一跳就爆星orz，下次会注意的
GL~

thx for mod><

kanor

925 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

kanor 2016-10-23T15:06:06+00:00

Karen wrote:
~~PLACEHOLDERED~~

[Insane]
00:11:983 (3,4,5) - 这一个3/4一个1/2节奏，距离都差不多，很难读，弄简单一点吧，3/4应该老实用小间距，况且这又是简单in 好，改了
00:13:459 (1,2,3) - 这看起来都不像是1/2间距，固定一个差不多的间距，大概跟这个00:19:603 (2,3) - 一样 OK，加大了间距
00:24:212 (2) - 这个违和，然而00:27:103 - 这里听起来应该加note的却没加去掉了，后面那个地方加了Note
01:03:608 - 这里的音很明显，漏掉太奇怪了，01:03:517 - 这里放1/4滑条跟一下比较好这里改成三连了，确实呢qwq
01:14:451 (2) - 这note不需要，没音而且这里不适合overmap 因为00:34:242 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里我就是这么下的，同样是位于两个段落的连接处所以我想让梗尽量对应起来......不然的话感觉前面这么下有有点突兀了，所以我想保留下来QWQ
01:15:897 (2) - 01:18:789 (4) - ^ 为什么要在滑条尾overmap?? 想当然的下了三连撑难度......去掉了
01:35:506 (6) - 漏clap fixed
01:35:867 (1,2) - 同第一条，3/4距离太大改了
01:41:650 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这组跳非常不合曲，不是很懂为啥要强行跳，搞点滑条吧之前一直不知道怎么用左上角那个加音效.....补加了finish，没有finish引导就这么下确实会觉得不合曲吧......不知道改完之后这样行不行，如果还是觉得不合适的话我再改QWQ
[Hard]
AR降一点，这个bpm用ar8太高了。 OD也是帮他降到了ar7.5,od6

改完喊我

Updated
感谢人格QWQ

Gyro Zeppeli

95 posts

Joined January 2014

Gyro Zeppeli 2016-10-23T15:27:42+00:00

Pata-Mon wrote:
[Normal]
00:17:615 - 这里声太明显，建议把00:17:073 (6) - 换成俩短滑条
00:41:651 (2) - 这段一直主跟的人声，那这里同样
fix
01:08:758 (7,8) - 这里人声停住了，你8盖过的地方基本是空的，而01:09:481 - 到01:09:842 - 反而有鼓声，所以建议删掉8，然后7加一次折返，01:09:481 - 这里在放一个短滑条
fix
因为你主跟人声，所以01:32:794 - 要比01:32:071 (5) - 重要
好
01:47:613 (1) - 一般都很不建议这么长（都超过10s）的转盘，参考一下其他难度吧
好，加了
排列还是不太好看感觉太菜

GL~

Karen

2,864 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2016-10-24T02:56:07+00:00

qua了吧
怕他萌居然摸泡图很有上狗潜质啊

kanor

925 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

kanor 2016-10-24T03:13:45+00:00

ohhhhhhhhh跪舔人格

moonlightleaf

2,157 posts

Joined September 2011

moonlightleaf 2016-10-24T03:25:10+00:00

graz

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2016-10-24T04:20:28+00:00

I do not remember myself suggesting putting anything in the Source. Is it really a song from デジモンアドベンチャー tri. ? If I remember correctly, it's only a song from the single, "re-fly" of Koji Wada.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rY5VnM8AGM0

Would be appreciated if you could provide me some references, thanks!

- Angelia

118 posts

Joined August 2013

- Angelia 2016-10-24T06:42:21+00:00

boom

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Lily Bread 2016-10-24T08:26:45+00:00

(那个“哇哦”的表情)
恭喜

sahuang

2,294 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-10-24T08:49:19+00:00

？？？
Easy

Normal

etc.

kanor

925 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

kanor 2016-10-24T10:41:22+00:00

sahuang wrote:
？？？
Easy

Normal

etc.

ORZ之前没有这个毛病结果最后一次发过来的时候就没查了.....我背锅
normal最后一条红线被改了，导致后面全部偏了

alacat

osu! Alumni

3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

alacat 2016-10-24T12:46:13+00:00

Please fix these. https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5564286

and Could you reply to KawN's post ?

IamKwaN wrote:
I do not remember myself suggesting putting anything in the Source. Is it really a song from デジモンアドベンチャー tri. ? If I remember correctly, it's only a song from the single, "re-fly" of Koji Wada.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rY5VnM8AGM0

Would be appreciated if you could provide me some references, thanks!

I couldn't find this song from anime website and his official.

http://digimon-adventure.net/music/

http://www.lantis.jp/release-item/LACA-15485.html

kanor

925 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

kanor 2016-10-24T12:56:11+00:00

alacat wrote:
Please fix these. https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5564286

and Could you reply to KawN's post ?

IamKwaN wrote:
I do not remember myself suggesting putting anything in the Source. Is it really a song from デジモンアドベンチャー tri. ? If I remember correctly, it's only a song from the single, "re-fly" of Koji Wada.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rY5VnM8AGM0

Would be appreciated if you could provide me some references, thanks!
I couldn't find this song from anime website and his official.

http://digimon-adventure.net/music/

http://www.lantis.jp/release-item/LACA-15485.html

sorry to post so late…… i have asked kwan about the source, yes i make a misstake

so im waiting kwan to dq it...that's ok i will fix the source ！
anyway thanks

btw, can i have a rebub after fixed the source？( ｰ̀εｰ́ )lfj is so busy that he hasnt be online for a week……

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raririn

1,002 posts

Joined October 2011

raririn 2016-10-24T12:58:05+00:00

:/ .....

Kencho

952 posts

Joined August 2013

Kencho 2016-10-24T13:01:08+00:00

正好可以讓我優化一下容易點打xixi

kanor

925 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

kanor 2016-10-24T13:29:19+00:00

all updated !
fix the source

Sonnyc

7,761 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2016-10-24T13:51:23+00:00

Seeming the map has got disqualified, I'd like to add some additional mods.

Easy.
00:46:203 - 00:46:745 - Mind adding finishes here along the song?
00:46:745 (3,1) - 01:35:505 (4,1) - There is a really minor spacing issue that you can fix.
01:47:433 - I recommend you using a soft-finish here. The cymbol sound is pretty clear for me.

Normal.
00:11:983 - Consider adding a finish here.
00:14:543 - 00:16:712 - 00:35:507 - 00:36:230 - 00:41:290 - 00:42:013 - 00:45:661 - 00:47:102 - 00:47:816 - 00:48:530 - 00:49:245 - 00:49:963 - Add a clap.
00:45:085 (3) - 00:46:203 - 00:46:745 - 00:52:492 - 00:55:383 - Consider adding a finish along the strong cymbol sound.
00:48:173 (3,4) - The spacing is pretty much unbalanced. You'll want to keep it evenly since this is a 120 degree rotation pattern afterall.
01:08:753 (7,8) - According to the distance snapping, it is a correct spacing but when looking at this pattern, it is pretty unclear to tell the rhythms. Is (7) a reverse slider with 2 reverses, or only 1 reverse? Just avoid overlaps between those, and you'll see everything is fine.
01:24:291 (1,2) - Why suddenly the 0.8x spacing while others are having 1.00x?
01:47:433 - I recommend you using a soft-finish here. The cymbol sound is pretty clear for me.
01:56:089 (1) - You'll want to end this spinner where other diffs end.
So many hitsounds are missing.

Hard.
00:10:563 (1) - What's with the snap?
00:52:493 - 00:55:385 - Consider a finish.
01:37:132 (1) - 00:16:169 (5) - Inconsistent combo setting.
01:43:999 (3,4) - This jump feels way too much for this difficulty for this part of the song. Please make them closer.

Insane.
00:39:483 (1) - Considering there was a notable beat at 00:39:663, using an extended slider didn't felt tasteful here.
00:52:493 - 00:55:385 - Consider Finish.
00:55:114 (5) - The spacing inside the triple stream is inconsistent.
01:31:891 (4,1,2) - Not sure if it's an intended setting, but I believe the flow could be much more smoother.
01:47:433 - I recommend you using a soft-finish here. The cymbol sound is pretty clear for me.

Nirvana.
00:45:085 (1) - The end is unsnapped. I've tried adjusting the slider length manually, but it kinda results in some unwanted extra slider ticks so I just recommend you to adjust your rhythms to make no unsnaps happen.
00:52:493 (1) - 00:55:385 - Consider Finish.
01:03:336 (1,2,1) - First of all, 1/4 having a similar spacing with 1/2 didn't looked nice in pattern design. Also since there was a strong sound at 01:03:879, just leaving (2,1) as a close spacing didn't felt cool in emphasis.
01:47:433 - I recommend you using a soft-finish here. The cymbol sound is pretty clear for me.

The quality of the map feels nice enough, but I'd like to question the difficulty spread between normal and hard. Hard is mostly consisted of 1/2 and several 1/4 objects appear along a jump. While Normal is mm containing several 1/2 at kiai section but most other sections are 1/1 oriented. Rhythm wise, I believe Normal could be a little more harder. Other than the kiai, it was somewhat similar with easy, creating a big gap.

Besides, the overall quality of Normal was questionable. Most objects are placed with a flow oriented concept. It works fine in play-wise, and there aren't much to get hindered according to the RC. But I just don't get any quality here. Since you are focusing on flows, I feel there are things that could get smoother. Such as 01:04:778 (3,4,5), it could be something like http://puu.sh/rTWsz/035004c33f.jpg so the flow towards the slider feels less forced.

Lobelia

862 posts

Joined February 2014

Lobelia 2016-10-24T14:16:14+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Hard.
00:10:563 (1) - What's with the snap?
00:52:493 - 00:55:385 - Consider a finish.
01:37:132 (1) - 00:16:169 (5) - Inconsistent combo setting.
01:43:999 (3,4) - This jump feels way too much for this difficulty for this part of the song. Please make them closer.
all fix,thank you Sonnyc~~

fixed

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 63427
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11983,92977
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.7

[Metadata]
Title:re-fly
TitleUnicode:re-fly
Artist:Koji Wada
ArtistUnicode:和田光司
Creator:kanor
Version:Abhor's Hard
Source:
Tags:Digimon Adventure monster refly Kouji Gyro Zeppeli [_Abhor_] Kencho デジモンアドベンチャー tri.
BeatmapID:1063901
BeatmapSetID:499976

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"re-fly.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
443,361.44578313253,4,2,1,20,1,0
6226,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
9117,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
10563,355.029585798817,4,2,1,65,1,0
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别着急啦这次QAQ你弄完找别人检查一下，不然又弄得到处unsnap了

kanor

925 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

kanor 2016-10-24T14:24:54+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Seeming the map has got disqualified, I'd like to add some additional mods.

Easy.
00:46:203 - 00:46:745 - Mind adding finishes here along the song? well, u r right
00:46:745 (3,1) - 01:35:505 (4,1) - There is a really minor spacing issue that you can fix. OK,fixed
01:47:433 - I recommend you using a soft-finish here. The cymbol sound is pretty clear for me. changed it

Insane.
00:39:483 (1) - Considering there was a notable beat at 00:39:663, using an extended slider didn't felt tasteful here. OK,fixed
00:52:493 - 00:55:385 - Consider Finish. added00:55:385 - is a clap, not real need to finish imo....
00:55:114 (5) - The spacing inside the triple stream is inconsistent. fixed
01:31:891 (4,1,2) - Not sure if it's an intended setting, but I believe the flow could be much more smoother. umm......the flow is smooth enouth imo....
01:47:433 - I recommend you using a soft-finish here. The cymbol sound is pretty clear for me. OK,fixedit

Last edited by kanor 2016-10-24T14:28:45+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kencho

952 posts

Joined August 2013

Kencho 2016-10-24T14:25:37+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Nirvana.
00:45:085 (1) - The end is unsnapped. I've tried adjusting the slider length manually, but it kinda results in some unwanted extra slider ticks so I just recommend you to adjust your rhythms to make no unsnaps happen. Yea, I have been fixed.
00:52:493 (1) - 00:55:385 - Consider Finish. Fixed 00:52:493 (1) - but keep 00:55:385 -
01:03:336 (1,2,1) - First of all, 1/4 having a similar spacing with 1/2 didn't looked nice in pattern design. Also since there was a strong sound at 01:03:879, just leaving (2,1) as a close spacing didn't felt cool in emphasis. ok
01:47:433 - I recommend you using a soft-finish here. The cymbol sound is pretty clear for me. Cool

The quality of the map feels nice enough, but I'd like to question the difficulty spread between normal and hard. Hard is mostly consisted of 1/2 and several 1/4 objects appear along a jump. While Normal is mm containing several 1/2 at kiai section but most other sections are 1/1 oriented. Rhythm wise, I believe Normal could be a little more harder. Other than the kiai, it was somewhat similar with easy, creating a big gap.
Besides, the overall quality of Normal was questionable. Most objects are placed with a flow oriented concept. It works fine in play-wise, and there aren't much to get hindered according to the RC. But I just don't get any quality here. Since you are focusing on flows, I feel there are things that could get smoother. Such as 01:04:778 (3,4,5), it could be something like http://puu.sh/rTWsz/035004c33f.jpg so the flow towards the slider feels less forced.

Thanks for mod

Kencho's Nirvana

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Yea I also think that the difficulty spread between Normal and Hard is a little large. However, spread between Hard and Insane is also. Star rating : 1.95 -> 3.24(+1.29) -> 4.47(+1.23). Hit objects : 190 -> 306(+116) -> 425(+119). Therefore, I think the spread is balanced imo. Moreover, about the quality of Normal. It is a subjective thing, the GDer in question is a newbie mapper. So the overall quality of the map would not quite well. However, I think the map is not really bad. The playability is qualified imo. But maybe we need more different opinions about this.

Gyro Zeppeli

95 posts

Joined January 2014

Gyro Zeppeli 2016-10-24T15:18:49+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Normal.
00:11:983 - Consider adding a finish here.
00:14:543 - 00:16:712 - 00:35:507 - 00:36:230 - 00:41:290 - 00:42:013 - 00:45:661 - 00:47:102 - 00:47:816 - 00:48:530 - 00:49:245 - 00:49:963 - Add a clap.
00:45:085 (3) - 00:46:203 - 00:46:745 - 00:52:492 - 00:55:383 - Consider adding a finish along the strong cymbol sound.
FIX, it is really i missed
00:48:173 (3,4) - The spacing is pretty much unbalanced. You'll want to keep it evenly since this is a 120 degree rotation pattern afterall.
FIX
01:08:753 (7,8) - According to the distance snapping, it is a correct spacing but when looking at this pattern, it is pretty unclear to tell the rhythms. Is (7) a reverse slider with 2 reverses, or only 1 reverse? Just avoid overlaps between those, and you'll see everything is fine.
i get it, good!
01:24:291 (1,2) - Why suddenly the 0.8x spacing while others are having 1.00x?
mistake, fix.
01:47:433 - I recommend you using a soft-finish here. The cymbol sound is pretty clear for me.
it really have finish here
01:56:089 (1) - You'll want to end this spinner where other diffs end.
OK
So many hitsounds are missing.
sry;w;