1. Another - 4Key (4,06 stars, 1471 notes)
2. Beginner - 4Key (1,37 stars, 400 notes)
3. Hyper - 4Key (2,96 stars, 1071 notes)
4. Normal - 4Key (2,02 stars, 658 notes)

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  [General]

1. mp3 quality is higher than 192kbps, please reduce
2. turn off widescreen support in Normal and Hyper
3. sounds more epic if set the preview point here 01:26:143 -
   [Normal]
4. 00:03:446 (3446|0) - Instead of following this drum which layered on 1/4, its better to follow the main sound appear at 00:03:525 - , its much more noticeable than the drum. Also compare with 00:03:054 (3054|3,3682|2,3918|1,4153|0) - those main sound that you had follow
5. 00:05:959 (5959|2) - 00:08:473 (8473|0) - 00:10:986 (10986|2) - 00:13:499 (13499|2) - 00:16:012 (16012|0) - 00:18:525 (18525|3) - 00:21:038 (21038|1) - Same with those note, if you apply the previous mod
6. 00:22:216 (22216|1,22373|2,22530|3) - How about move those 3 notes 1 col to left, because the instrument are different with 00:21:588 (21588|0,21745|1,21902|3,22059|2) - , you can show the difference by moving that pattern
7. 00:26:614 (26614|3) - How about delete this note, like you did in 00:31:640 - , to make a "stop" feeling in the pattern will be nice
8. 00:32:582 (32582|2,32818|2) - I feel those notes are different pitch smh, unlike 00:32:111 (32111|0,32347|0) -
9. 01:05:488 (65488|2) - 01:10:514 (70514|2) - Those notes are more like for the piano sound, i will suggest move to other col to avoid the jack

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

lol keep this pending pls zzz
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Feerum wrote:

I was actually about to turn off the computer but i looked a last time into the website.
Then i found this post.

I saw the video is literally horrible quality haha.
Then i made a little search, i tried to find the Original BMS File in hope to get the video but nope, deleted.

Then i did search a bit more. I found in a Youtube Video a link to this chart for LR2 which did also include the video!
It's really the best quality i could find.

I prepared a .rar for you. This rar includes:
The original video from the LR2 Chart folder and the same one just changed to .avi
Then i edited it twice for you. In two different resolutions because one of it looked a bit stretched, the other one has the same resolution like yours.

You can decide which one you take or if you want to convert it by yourself :3
You can find everything here: click

Hope it helps!
Good luck!

Kawawa wrote:

dede you poyi

[General]
※Unnecessary option.
Disable the Widescreen Support on the "Beginner" "Black Another"

※OD/HP
I recommend this.
Beginner 6/7 → 7/7
Hyper 7/8 → 7.5/7.5

※Tags
You can add it in tags "せんざい"

[Beginner]
00:33:426 - This rhythm is really awkward to me.
I think you should use this rhythm for make it your structure ended.
It's obviously important rhythm than kick sound(00:33:583 - )
Feedback :: https://puu.sh/uNE8q/b594de7139.jpg

00:42:850 - Add a note here too.
It has not a kick sound, but you can make a note for synth sounds.
because It started from this section. And ended with 00:43:007 (43007|3,43164|2,43321|1) -

00:58:557 - Add a note for snare.

01:08:609 - It feels really empty, make the rhythm
At least you can make it bundle as LN.
Feedback :: https://puu.sh/uNEw0/d6cd12d663.jpg

01:17:562 (77562|0) - Move it to 01:17:640 -
It should be followed the dump / snare section. Normal diffs showed it too.
I think it's a mistake as your intention. example :: 01:12:614 (72614|0) -

02:07:509 - 02:07:666 - 02:07:823 - make the rhythm.
even If you used drum only in this structure, I think It's the better.

[Normal]
00:05:782 (5782|1,5939|1) - It looks your intention, feels rhythm is really awkward.
I think If you kept this structure like 00:03:269 (3269|1,3269|0,3504|3,3740|1,3740|2) -
It will be better intentionally. https://puu.sh/uNFkV/081c44ee7f.jpg

00:10:494 (10494|2,10651|3,10808|0,10965|2,11122|1) -
00:15:520 (15520|2,15834|0,15991|3,16148|2) -
00:20:546 (20546|2,20703|1,20860|2,21017|3,21175|1,21332|2) -
This parts are same reason with above in my opinion. consider it once again! up to you.

01:21:332 (81332|0) - Remove this one, And Add a note here 01:21:567 -
I feel this is more important than previous one. of course, there was a hihat. but It's really weak by around kicks.
Feed back :: https://puu.sh/uNFUb/be545ff986.jpg

01:23:373 - Suggesetion. https://puu.sh/uNG2k/86bb0f0740.jpg
Because mostly It was same pattern with Beginner.

01:54:316 (114316|3,114473|3) - Move it somewhere.
This jack is the same colume with 01:53:373 (113373|3,113530|3) -
It's not a issue, If you move it to somewhere, will be balanced.

[Hyper]
00:11:122 (11122|1,11201|2) - You can catch the one which sounds are clearly when you hear the song.
like you did it here 00:15:834 (15834|3,15913|2,15991|1,16070|2) -
※ but If you want to keep yours, then use this patterns https://puu.sh/uNGO1/050389d1ff.jpg
It's the better If you consider the irregular snare
I recommend you to change the patterns only on two way

00:22:117 - ~ 00:22:745 - What do you think about? https://puu.sh/uNHbX/dd0d07ee03.jpg
It looks more fit as Hyper diff in my opinion.

00:38:138 - 00:38:766 - Intionally skiped some notes by LN, but I think you can add here at least.
It will gives a rhythm to players. Feedback :: https://puu.sh/uNHtx/ba3250b60f.jpg

01:01:541 - Add a note here? Just a suggestion.
Becuase you made it two(Bass anchor + one of any effect) on the same section like 01:00:284 -

01:06:881 (66881|2) - Move to 1. tril is better for that.

01:07:353 - Remove a note. As your intention, It should be the one note only.
From all the difficulties, this difficulty only used 2 anchors. can compare with hardest set.
After remove a note this section, And 01:07:431 - Add a note here for snare like 01:07:588 -
Feed back :: https://puu.sh/uNI2C/135b3d60b2.jpg

01:12:379 (72379|3,72379|2,72457|1,72536|0,72614|2,72614|1) -
01:17:405 (77405|0,77405|3,77483|1,77562|2,77640|0,77640|1) -
This parts are same reason with above.

01:15:363 (75363|2,75363|3,75599|1,75677|2) - It looks too empty.
What do you think about? https://puu.sh/uNIbG/0604dfbcf8.jpg

01:21:489 (81489|2) - move it to 01:21:567 -

01:23:138 (83138|1,83216|2,83295|3) - Try other pattern.
is the same pattern with above, but you can provide a various patterns for them.
because instruments are different that used on the each sections.
Feedback :: https://puu.sh/uNIvb/c8e41232ba.jpg

01:49:446 - 01:54:473 - 01:56:986 - 02:04:525 - Add a note here. It depends on your decision, I recommend it.

[Another]
00:06:096 - 00:10:023 - Make the rhythm,
seems It missed one by your intention. 00:03:583 - 00:08:609 - 00:13:635 - 00:15:049 -

00:16:148 - Remove a note, And Add a note here 00:15:991 -
I think note amounts should be like that. seems mistake.

00:22:431 - Add at 4? If you applied "Hyper" diff's mod.

00:24:002 - Add at 1. You can make it three like 00:34:054 -

00:58:557 (58557|0,58557|1,58714|1,58714|0) - This Two snare sctions are different with this Kick 00:58:400 (58400|1,58400|0) -
You can make it separate After remove a note at here 00:58:478 -
Feedback :: https://puu.sh/uNLd2/3169977d3d.jpg

01:16:462 - Add at 1. You can make it two like 01:21:332 (81332|3,81489|1,81489|0,81567|3,81567|2) -

01:46:305 - 01:46:462 - 01:46:619 - I think you should make the rhythm(Hyper diffuclty ended the rhythm at here)
And 01:45:991 (105991|0) - This LN should be started from 01:46:148 - you can compare this with "Beginner diff"
Feedback :: https://puu.sh/uNJyF/dec354394e.jpg
I think It needs to be fixed entirely.

[Black Another]
00:32:169 - Add at 1, You can make it three here.
because of you made three on the snare section 00:31:855 - And It still can play smoothly
00:32:483 - ~ 00:32:955 - And this rhythm is something weird. I might you can make it highlight which impacted by crash.
Sample :: https://puu.sh/uNKW7/f46eb0257c.jpg
And "Another difficulty also should consider again" in this part

00:58:557 (58557|1,58557|2,58714|1,58714|2) - Same reason with "Another"
This Two snare sctions are different with this Kick 00:58:400 -
You can make it separate After remove a note at here 00:58:478 -
Feedback :: https://puu.sh/uNLiY/3e1cfa65ee.jpg

01:07:117 (67117|0,67195|1) - looks better https://puu.sh/uNLo1/a05c8b2389.jpg

01:10:180 - It should be consitency with 01:05:154 - It's your decision to add or remove for that.

01:45:363 - ~ 01:47:562 - Same issue with Another, I explained it on Another mod.

02:06:724 - ~ 02:07:980 - Just a suggestion for ending part
Feedback :: http://puu.sh/uNLIJ/4e8ddeeed5.jpg

What a cool song.

SpectorDG wrote:

seems it's ready for qualify .. but haven't icons. k Mr.D im here for more improve that

[ALL DIFFS]

1. 00:01:070 - Ups noises would be good to adding LNs, so it's can be add LN's for that part? for the playble i like the pattern as it is

[Another]

1. 00:05:468 - Make triple for hard whistle, like a when you maped triple-triple for before parts
   
2. 00:23:373 - Add double LN's for that part, it's makes harder/difference than Hyper
   
3. 00:23:923 - If you accepted that you can end all LN for here, and make 4 for 00:24:002 - here
   
4. 00:32:876 (32876|3) - How about move this note for 00:32:798 - here? it's have same sound as above
   
5. 01:07:353 - Add note for make rankable stuffs on this part
   
   
   
6. 01:13:635 - Make Double LN's for playable, same as before
   
7. 01:57:928 (117928|3) - This LN should be end 01:59:185 - here, there are unbalanced with hyper

[Hyper]

1. 00:03:426 - Add note for whistle, you mapped same one 00:04:918 (4918|1) - here also 00:08:452 - this one too
   
2. 00:29:970 (29970|2) - Move to [2] for mirror as 00:30:599
   
3. 01:05:782 (65782|3) - How about move to [2] and 01:05:939 (65939|1,66096|3) - Ctrl+G this? 3sr LN jacks kinda hard to catching on 4/1 stream
   
4. 01:23:373 (83373|0,83452|1,83531|2,83609|3) - There are have differenet sound it's kinda awkard to reading this one so you can make [1][3][1][4] ?

[Normal]

1. Fine to me

[Beginner]

1. 00:31:227 (31227|3,31541|0) - Swap these? Patterns are kinda focused right-hand on this part
   
2. 02:00:284 (120284|3) - Move to [2] 2/1 stream little bit hard for catching beginners

star rain here bbe

AchsanLovers wrote:

finally we go again

DE-CADE wrote:

[SV]
00:31:536 - i really dont see the point of having this SV, the slow down section is only 1/8 length with 0.4 and then back to 1.0, player can barely notice that SV and might even cause them getting 200 hit. You can either delete it or adjust the SV number
01:59:180 - ^^ similar thing
>they wont had any problem on OD7

01:04:442 - 01:09:468 - change this from 0.5 to 0.25 if you want the SV stay at 1x

call me when finished
> calling

Sandalphon wrote:

DE-CADE wrote:

[SV]
00:31:536 - i really dont see the point of having this SV, the slow down section is only 1/8 length with 0.4 and then back to 1.0, player can barely notice that SV and might even cause them getting 200 hit. You can either delete it or adjust the SV number
01:59:180 - ^^ similar thing
>they wont had any problem on OD7

01:04:442 - 01:09:468 - change this from 0.5 to 0.25 if you want the SV stay at 1x

call me when finished
> calling

OD cant really justify the SVs usage here, i still highly recommend you delete the SVs or just adjust the number, if you need help i'm here all day
and whats the reason of keeping the 0.5?

[HS]
some missing hitsound
Beginner
00:28:081 (28081|1) - C
00:28:709 (28709|3) - C
00:38:133 (38133|2) - C
00:38:761 (38761|0) - C
01:52:583 (112583|3) - C

Normal
00:05:463 - C
00:11:039 - change from W to C

Critical_Star wrote:

General
Normal OD 6>6.5?

Normal
00:05:855 - kinda feel empty here as you can notice the drum sound obviously, i think a short 1/4 stream should be alright
00:15:986 - same here, it is just the same as previous point i mentioned
00:22:112 (22112|3) - suggest to make a LN like 00:21:955 (21955|2,22269|0,22426|3,22583|2) i dont think it could be an LN because i dont feel any holding sound of an instrument
00:33:421 - how about double note here?
00:56:667 (56667|0) - move to 4 to align the same way with 00:54:154 (54154|0,54468|0) -
00:59:494 (59494|2) - same suggestion, move to 4 if u agree

Hyper
00:32:557 (32557|1) - suggest to remove this, there is barely a sound here. unlike 00:32:321 (32321|2,32793|2) -
01:06:719 (66719|0,66798|2,66876|1,66955|0) - maybe try a 1-2-1-2 pattern? it seems cool along with this sound changed into 232
01:34:677 (94677|1) - could move this to 4 to differentiate the pitch from 01:34:049 (94049|1) -
01:59:965 (119965|1,119965|0) - how about move to right by 1 to make an ascending pattern?

Another
01:59:180 - till 02:00:279 - you can make a sv something like x1.5 with x0.5 along the way here, seems nice to me
yes added and pls take a look because SY suggest to remove inb4

SpectorDG wrote:

Please recommend suggestions for before Q.

SpectorDG wrote:

How about report only unrankable issues? Stop ton of suggestions for qualified mapset.

SpectorDG wrote:

How about report only unrankable issues? Stop ton of suggestions for qualified mapset. Please recommend suggestions for before Q.

SpectorDG wrote:

How about report only unrankable issues? Stop ton of suggestions for qualified mapset. Please recommend suggestions for before Q.

Kawawa wrote:

Hello! dede. I have some concerns.

First of all I think video delayed a little.
The song is started at 2635 section but the change of video started at 2680 to 2685 section.
so I concern this anyway.

[Hyper]
01:34:049 (94049|1) - This rhythm seems missed from their section.
I mean they are completely focusing on the synth sound like this :: http://puu.sh/AMTk4/cad8730fd7.jpg
The point is that the piano section is here 01:34:127 - like your Another. obviously not here 01:34:049 -
I feel the piano keys come down too early when I played the chart.
It can be calculated as awkward rhythms because you expressed it as piano LN. anyway It looks a mistake.
+ can comparing with above part 01:44:101 - http://puu.sh/AMTDU/5082208391.jpg
Here you did not expressed it as LN, so It's not confusing between synth and stadard rhythm.
so If you want to make a LN for piano keys. then must be here 01:34:127 - 01:44:180 - not be 01:34:049 - 01:44:101 -
anyway It's definitely 70ms(1/4) faster more than the intention of piano rhythm. It's quite big.
added note at 1/4 snap as u said

[Insane]
01:44:180 - It's an option. seems you missing a note here like 01:34:127 -
added

Except for those, no problem.
cool map!! Best of luck!!

Alternater wrote:

Hi decade Another

I played this song and it felt very fun, with the SV adding some sort of challenge. Here's my mod on Another cus it's the only thing I played :3
- credit to Donotmess for some of these finds <3

@ You're missing singles 00:03:892 - and 00:04:128 - I'd understand if there were SV, but there isn't.
^ Missing 00:06:405 - and 00:06:562 - <(more apparent)
^ Missing 00:08:918 - and 00:09:075 - <(definitely more apparent)
^ Missing 00:11:353 - and 00:11:431 - and 00:11:588 - (pure 1/4)
^ Missing 00:13:944 - and 00:14:101 -
^ Missing 00:16:615 -
^ Missing 00:18:971 - and 00:19:128 - 00:19:206 - <(you mapped 00:19:756 (19756|1,19834|0) -)

earlier version, i did map it but later on i feel that it's hard to read rather than jumpstream itself, i made player like me testplay it they always fail at that first part. concerning this is the first part of the map that should not be hardest whole song so i delete them all. I missed the singles, but yeah they are intended

@ 00:04:206 (4206|0,4206|2,4206|1,4363|2,4363|0,4363|1) - and 00:06:719 (6719|0,6719|2,6719|1,6876|2,6876|1,6876|3) - are the same sounds, yet one is different than the other, line 00:06:876 (6876|3,6876|2,6876|1) - up with 00:06:719 (6719|0,6719|2,6719|1) -

@ 00:05:463 (5463|3) - Perhaps add SV stutter here at 1/8 to add more emphasis on that unique sound.

i dont like to add more SV

@ 00:05:777 - feels very weak to me, perhaps making this a double would serve more purpose to be an entrance note, try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11266639

smh 4*map shouldn't have this pattern imo

@ 00:09:625 (9625|1) - isn't at all very noticeable once you slow it down to even 25%

@ How come you mapped 00:09:704 (9704|2,9782|3) - but not 00:10:096 -

@ Ghost note 00:10:725 (10725|0) - Ghost note 00:13:238 (13238|1) -

@ 00:12:845 (12845|0,12845|1) - should be a different double and not the same as 00:12:688 (12688|0,12688|1) - since different sounds

@ This SV at 00:22:740 - serves no purpose, and it doesn't even show on play

@ Missing light drum which you've mapped some of it, but need all of it 00:24:075 - 00:24:861 - 00:25:332 - 00:25:489 - 00:26:117 - 00:26:274 - 00:26:588 - 00:27:374 - 00:27:845 - 00:28:002 - 00:28:316 - 00:28:473 - 00:28:630 - 00:29:101 - 00:29:887 - 00:30:358 - 00:30:515 - 00:31:143 - 00:31:300 - 00:32:243 - and so on in 00:34:049 - to 00:43:002 -

I intended to skip for 1 first light drum on my pattern, not big problem. this makes an easier pattern

@ wrong length 00:27:766 (27766|3) - make 1/2

no it isn't wrong

@ You can use some sicker Burst SV here at 00:31:536 - to 00:31:850 - to really emphasis that transition.
i dont have to make it hard

@Missing 00:41:039 - and make 00:41:117 (41117|3) - a double and missing 00:41:117 (41117|3) - and missing 00:41:117 (41117|3) - missing alot of light drum, follow light drum suggestion.

@ Missing some cool chance to add 00:44:101 - 00:54:154 - some sick LN play from the vocals, I recommend doing so because this section is literally just 10 seconds of "boring" Another reason, is your Another and Hyper are literally the same patterning with just 1 long stroke of LN, so I SUPER recommend you to map the vocals in this section in Another.

@ Useless SV at 01:03:107 -, remove it and make 01:02:950 - .50x, then 01:03:735 - to 01:04:206 - use 1/8 to clean the SV transition between your .75x 1.00x 1.25x

@ Make 01:21:327 (81327|1,81327|2) - single LN and change 01:21:641 (81641|0) - to LN

@ Better distinguish 01:04:206 - to 01:04:520 - the SV here feels like it the 1.25x stretches more than it should, attempt changing it, so you don't have to use the same SV for 01:09:232 - to 01:09:546 - which is a completely different transition.

@Add some powerful SV burst to this SV at 01:13:630 - to 01:14:259 - feels weird to not exaggerate the burst here 01:13:630 (73630|3,73630|1) -

@ 01:31:536 - to 01:45:986 - perhaps just make this section without these 01:28:237 (88237|1) - because you only really map like, 1/4th of the piano in this section, you should either map all the piano with that LN, or not map the piano with no LN,

@ Make 01:39:389 (99389|0,99389|3,99860|3,99860|0) - a different double than 01:40:331 (100331|3,100331|0) - to give distinction

@ 01:47:085 - to 01:47:557 - can have more 1/8 SV to better transition the slow at a more clean pace.

@ 01:47:557 - to 01:47:871 - you should attempt a slow to very fast entrance SV to really give emphasis on that transition to the kiai section.

@ 01:59:180 - to 02:00:279 - you should make this even more powerful, I barely notice any burst, exaggerate them even more. "also may I say, 01:59:965 - this sound is weird in the song lmao."

@ 02:07:975 - 02:28:080 - rip cool mapping ending, instead of "not" mapping it probably due to it being "boring" cus it's just all vocal, abuse it. Try some sick, tricky LN structure to trip up some players, it would be the same as 00:44:101 - to 00:54:154 - where these both can be the LN part of this chart where it'll really test the players finger independence.

Hyper

@ 01:51:483 (111483|0) - should be just like 01:50:384 (110384|1,110384|2,110541|1) - or 01:49:284 (109284|0,109284|2,109441|2) - because you start your 2 note jack whenever the 3 repeating notes begin
^Same here 01:54:311 (114311|2,114311|0,114468|1) -
^Same here 02:01:379 (121379|1,121379|0,121536|3) -
^Same here 02:03:892 (123892|2,123892|3,124049|0) -
^This 2 note jack 02:04:520 (124520|2,124677|2) - needs to be moved down one for consistency

@ 02:05:148 (125148|0,125305|0) - This needs to not be a 2 note jack, and this does need to be a 2 two jack 02:05:462 (125462|2,125462|3,125619|1) -
^ Make 2 note jack 02:06:405 (126405|2,126405|3,126562|0) -

Sandalphon wrote:

Q

Protastic101 wrote:

Hello, the video offset still has not been fixed despite being confirmed by both Maxus and I, along with a member of the QAH. Just a friendly reminder that it should be moved to 963 ms. Once this is fixed, you can poke me to requalify this.