Thanks!J1NX1337 wrote:
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[xChorse's Hard Rocks!]
A pretty good Hard diff, plays fairly well.1) I would raise the HP drain a bit since right now it's the as the Normal's. Maybe something around 5. Done
2) 00:22:897 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Think you should use 1.2x spacing here instead of 1.3x, since you've previously used 1.2x for this part of the song during the intro, and this doesn't seem more intense than those parts where you used 1.2x. For the buildup to the next part as it's the last one, also having the same small spacing after these strong notes 00:22:512 (4,5) - would feel pretty awkward
3) 00:34:051 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why exactly do you raise spacing by 0.1x here for the rest of the riff? The song is getting less intense towards the end of the riff so it doesn't make too much sense in that regard. lol It's actually easier like this than with smaller spacing since the patterns start getting cluttered at low DS. The first section is 1.2 and it's final notes are 1.3 so it stays 1.3 in the following sections (00:38:666 - is still more intense than 00:14:051 - for example, which is 1.2)
4) 01:07:704 (6) - I would place an NC here instead of 01:08:089 (1) - because the vocal change seems to occur before the downbeat rather than after it. I agree, changed
5) 01:13:858 (6) - ^ Same here Changed as well
6) 01:15:589 - You use a different spacing here (1.6x) than the earlier riff section at 00:26:358 - (1.5x) so I'd recommend making them consistent. I want to have some emphasis on there since it's the last section, it's also not a huge noticeable change so I don't see a reason to change it besides consistency (which is justified by emphasis I think )
7) 01:22:897 (7) - You could use a quarter beat reverse slider here instead of two half beat circles, like at 01:18:281 (7) - Too overdone that way imo
8) 01:23:281 (1) - You could replace this with a normal circle triplet like at 00:34:051 (1,2,3) - for the sake of rhythmical consistency. Changed
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Title:Back on the Rocks
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