Monarch's Easy
00:19:435 (4,1) - Over here it's stacked, but over here you give it distance 00:24:820 (3,4,1). I think that 00:19:435 (4,1) - should be rearranged so the 1 is not stacked on (4)
00:32:512 (1,2) - Copy paste for (2)?
00:38:666 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't get it, why these 2/1 squares that repeat? I feel like sliders would be better
00:57:127 (1,3) - ew
01:20:204 (2,1) - ^
01:24:820 (1,2) - These aren't parallel
Nice Beginner diff, I think you should remove the "Easy" part from the diffname though because it's too long as-is
00:32:512 (1,2) - Copy paste for (2)?
00:38:666 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't get it, why these 2/1 squares that repeat? I feel like sliders would be better
00:57:127 (1,3) - ew
01:20:204 (2,1) - ^
01:24:820 (1,2) - These aren't parallel
Nice Beginner diff, I think you should remove the "Easy" part from the diffname though because it's too long as-is
squirrelp's Normal (modded now)To be coming
00:17:127 (1,2) - could be blanketed better
00:18:666 (1,1) - The rhythm here sounds odd to me. Maybe remove the reverse on 00:18:666 (1) - and put a clickable object where the slidertail is? or something like this perhaps https://puu.sh/rT3iA/bede409b17.png idk really but as is it sounds weird
00:37:897 (2) - Wanna hear a funny story? 00:37:801 (2) - https://puu.sh/rT46e/d6135c6ef8.png :OOOOO
00:51:551 (3,4) - 00:51:551 (3) - Feel like this should be a reverse and then a circle at 00:52:127 - instead
01:13:858 (1,2) - Seems out of place in rhythm compared to what you were doing before
01:26:935 (2) - Needs to be more hype a reverse slider like this makes me want to stop dancing :^)
00:17:127 (1,2) - could be blanketed better
00:18:666 (1,1) - The rhythm here sounds odd to me. Maybe remove the reverse on 00:18:666 (1) - and put a clickable object where the slidertail is? or something like this perhaps https://puu.sh/rT3iA/bede409b17.png idk really but as is it sounds weird
00:37:897 (2) - Wanna hear a funny story? 00:37:801 (2) - https://puu.sh/rT46e/d6135c6ef8.png :OOOOO
00:51:551 (3,4) - 00:51:551 (3) - Feel like this should be a reverse and then a circle at 00:52:127 - instead
01:13:858 (1,2) - Seems out of place in rhythm compared to what you were doing before
01:26:935 (2) - Needs to be more hype a reverse slider like this makes me want to stop dancing :^)
xChorse's Hard
These hitsounds...
The triples into the 1/2 slider during the kiai sound wrong imo, really odd rhythm choice, I'd go as far as to say remap those two kiais
00:33:281 (5) - ctrl + h for better aesthetic
00:42:897 (6,1,2) - Make symmetrical?
01:24:435 (5,1,2,3) - Stack 01:24:435 (5) - with 01:24:820 (1) - because you have it stacked with (3) right now and I think it looks bad
00:27:512 (6,1,2,3) - Same here ^
00:35:589 (1,2,3,4,5) - Aesthetically this one looks good tho
01:27:704 (7) - this looks weird in the 01:26:935 (4,5,6,7) - pattern
00:38:666 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Why only fucking finishes, and why are finishes being overused in the entire diff anyway (sorry for cursing but yeah the finishes seem waaaay overdone to me)
The triples into the 1/2 slider during the kiai sound wrong imo, really odd rhythm choice, I'd go as far as to say remap those two kiais
00:33:281 (5) - ctrl + h for better aesthetic
00:42:897 (6,1,2) - Make symmetrical?
01:24:435 (5,1,2,3) - Stack 01:24:435 (5) - with 01:24:820 (1) - because you have it stacked with (3) right now and I think it looks bad
00:27:512 (6,1,2,3) - Same here ^
00:35:589 (1,2,3,4,5) - Aesthetically this one looks good tho
01:27:704 (7) - this looks weird in the 01:26:935 (4,5,6,7) - pattern
00:38:666 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Why only fucking finishes, and why are finishes being overused in the entire diff anyway (sorry for cursing but yeah the finishes seem waaaay overdone to me)
Extra
00:16:359 (6,1) - You fucked up the silence you wanted to put on the slidertail, also move 00:16:744 (1) - one pixel down and one pixel to the right
00:17:897 (6,7,8,9) - These jumps could be done better, the 00:18:474 (9) - especially seems random
00:18:667 (1) - I think it would be better if the sliderhead was stacked on one of those jumps right before it
00:20:686 (4,5,7) - Ahh why are these touching
00:22:513 (6) - slidertail should be clickable imo, maybe like this: https://puu.sh/rRUoe/8437acfcd6.png
00:23:858 (6) - Remove this curve.
00:26:936 (6,7,3,4,5,6,7) - Stack these properly
00:30:396 (5,3) - ^ Same, idk why you didn't put them on top of each other
00:30:782 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - If this is some aesthetic choice, I highly recommend not doing it because you don't perfectly stack those, but then you do for things like 00:31:647 (2,8) - so make up your mind
00:33:089 (6,7,8,9) - Reangle these so 00:32:512 (1,6) - these aren't so close, and so that 00:32:704 (3,8) - stack on each other in some way
00:33:667 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This could be more aesthetically pleasing
00:34:917 (3,4) - I think this was an accident, none of the other doubles seem to be like this
00:37:224 (2,3,4,5) - Not a perfect square
00:37:801 (2,1) - Stack
00:38:474 (2,2) - This looks quite nice actually
00:40:012 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why is 00:40:012 (1) - the only one that is not curved
00:44:821 (1,2,3) - This spacing doesn't make sense to me, since the 00:45:205 (3) - is the strong one, yet (2) is getting the emphasis in spacing and the jump to (3) is smaller
00:45:590 (4,5,6,1) - Poorly implemented circular flow imo
00:47:128 (4) - Should be ctrl + g and moved accordingly (subsequent notes too)
00:49:436 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think a star would be better than what you did here
00:50:494 (6) - Could be deleted I think
Because of 00:50:974 (1,2) - I expect to go to the right for 00:51:744 (3,4) - not down like you have it. An idea is to 00:51:936 (4,6) - ctrl +g these and fixing the rest, but idk I guess it's fine but I would line up 00:51:359 (2,3,4) -
00:54:821 (5,6) - WHAT why so low spacing
00:56:167 (3,4,5) - Bad flow from 3 to 4 I think, 00:56:743 (5) - why is this ending on the blue tick when sound ends on red?
00:59:051 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - .... No reason to go to soft hitsounds out of nowhere fam
01:02:321 (5,1) - Fam it's right there waiting for you why do you not use this: https://puu.sh/rRZJU/0fe7c0fa28.png hoyl shite
01:03:858 (4,5,6) - This could work so much better if you design it around 5 being in the center
01:05:205 (1,2,3) - It doesn't make sense to go back and with less spacing for this, and then this 01:05:589 (3,4) - massive jump, the emphasis is done wrong I would just redo 01:05:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part entirely
01:06:935 (3) - whistle on the whole slider, bad
01:07:513 (4,5) - 5 should be higher than 4 not lower, 01:07:897 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - these jumps are bad imo as well
01:16:167 (6,7,8,9,10) - 01:16:455 (9,10) - xd
Nice copy paste, now I don't have the mod the final kiai
01:26:935 (1,2,3,4) - Repeating myself but these should be same distance
Diff feels like you made it random on purpose to avoid having to use proper structure
00:17:897 (6,7,8,9) - These jumps could be done better, the 00:18:474 (9) - especially seems random
00:18:667 (1) - I think it would be better if the sliderhead was stacked on one of those jumps right before it
00:20:686 (4,5,7) - Ahh why are these touching
00:22:513 (6) - slidertail should be clickable imo, maybe like this: https://puu.sh/rRUoe/8437acfcd6.png
00:23:858 (6) - Remove this curve.
00:26:936 (6,7,3,4,5,6,7) - Stack these properly
00:30:396 (5,3) - ^ Same, idk why you didn't put them on top of each other
00:30:782 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - If this is some aesthetic choice, I highly recommend not doing it because you don't perfectly stack those, but then you do for things like 00:31:647 (2,8) - so make up your mind
00:33:089 (6,7,8,9) - Reangle these so 00:32:512 (1,6) - these aren't so close, and so that 00:32:704 (3,8) - stack on each other in some way
00:33:667 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This could be more aesthetically pleasing
00:34:917 (3,4) - I think this was an accident, none of the other doubles seem to be like this
00:37:224 (2,3,4,5) - Not a perfect square
00:37:801 (2,1) - Stack
00:38:474 (2,2) - This looks quite nice actually
00:40:012 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why is 00:40:012 (1) - the only one that is not curved
00:44:821 (1,2,3) - This spacing doesn't make sense to me, since the 00:45:205 (3) - is the strong one, yet (2) is getting the emphasis in spacing and the jump to (3) is smaller
00:45:590 (4,5,6,1) - Poorly implemented circular flow imo
00:47:128 (4) - Should be ctrl + g and moved accordingly (subsequent notes too)
00:49:436 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think a star would be better than what you did here
00:50:494 (6) - Could be deleted I think
00:54:821 (5,6) - WHAT why so low spacing
00:56:167 (3,4,5) - Bad flow from 3 to 4 I think, 00:56:743 (5) - why is this ending on the blue tick when sound ends on red?
00:59:051 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - .... No reason to go to soft hitsounds out of nowhere fam
01:02:321 (5,1) - Fam it's right there waiting for you why do you not use this: https://puu.sh/rRZJU/0fe7c0fa28.png hoyl shite
01:03:858 (4,5,6) - This could work so much better if you design it around 5 being in the center
01:05:205 (1,2,3) - It doesn't make sense to go back and with less spacing for this, and then this 01:05:589 (3,4) - massive jump, the emphasis is done wrong I would just redo 01:05:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part entirely
01:06:935 (3) - whistle on the whole slider, bad
01:07:513 (4,5) - 5 should be higher than 4 not lower, 01:07:897 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - these jumps are bad imo as well
01:16:167 (6,7,8,9,10) - 01:16:455 (9,10) - xd
Nice copy paste, now I don't have the mod the final kiai
01:26:935 (1,2,3,4) - Repeating myself but these should be same distance
Diff feels like you made it random on purpose to avoid having to use proper structure