SYO - Tooi Sekai no Unknown X · forum

Reiji-RJ

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Reiji-RJ 2011-03-17T21:24:50+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 12 мая 2011 г. at 16:56:15

Artist: SYO
Title: Tooi Sekai no Unknown X
Source: Touhou
Tags: unknownx of a far away world sound holic unfound adventure icebeam komeiji yuki
BPM: 127
Filesize: 4207kb
Play Time: 02:16
Difficulties Available:

Beamsy (0,9 stars, 85 notes)
Hard (4,7 stars, 254 notes)
Normal (2,57 stars, 130 notes)

Download: SYO - Tooi Sekai no Unknown X
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thank you, IceBeam, for [Easy] (Beamsy) *o*
Thanks to Komeiji Yuki for SB!

25/04/2011 re-dl please

Last edited by Reiji-RJ 2011-05-12T13:00:08+00:00, edited 15 times in total.

Ch1ka

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Ch1ka 2011-03-17T21:26:31+00:00

Aleks719

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Aleks719 2011-03-17T21:50:06+00:00

Алекс Бимсевич Героев/ star /

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2011-03-17T21:50:25+00:00

m i z u k i

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m i z u k i 2011-03-20T19:05:27+00:00

Reiji-RJ

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Reiji-RJ 2011-03-22T11:28:02+00:00

Thanks for stars

K o h a k u

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K o h a k u 2011-03-22T23:44:31+00:00

hi~ :3

I tried to just a few MOD~

SPOILER

[Nomal]
00:29:400 - add note better I think :3
00:30:345 - ^
00:30:818 - remove note ~ near spinner

other diff good diff to me

star~

Reiji-RJ

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Reiji-RJ 2011-03-23T11:44:21+00:00

> K o h a k u
Hai :3
Fixed, thank you

Vass_Bass

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Vass_Bass 2011-03-23T17:40:46+00:00

Привет

Удали осб наверное
А так прям смотрю и радуюсь, старр~

h3k1ru

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h3k1ru 2011-03-23T20:55:16+00:00

i see u didnt added notes by kohakusama suggestion, but he was right, u need add em, also at 00:29:873 - 00:30:109 - too, and start spinner a bit early.. final result should be like this:

SPOILER

anyway take my star, another awesome map

Reiji-RJ

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Reiji-RJ 2011-03-23T21:23:39+00:00

> h3k1ru
I added it in Normal diff, as Kohaku said.
Now fixed in Hard :3
Thank you~

Komeiji Yuki

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Komeiji Yuki 2011-03-26T21:24:49+00:00

Seems Good and find only something

[General]

It seems no SB but exist x - x (Reiji-RJ).osb , maybe del it (the name makes me lol)

SPOILER

[Beamsy]

00:19:479 (1) . 00:27:038 (1) . 00:36:959 (2) I don't know why not stack them O.O?

01:02:944 (1.2.3.4.1.2.3) maybe make a straight alignment or symmetrical alignment

Code:
56,284,62944,5,4
136,292,63416,1,8
216,288,63888,2,0,B|232:208|212:112,2,160,4|4|4
296,300,66251,1,8
376,308,66723,5,4
456,300,67196,2,0,B|448:224|456:128,2,160,8|8|8

If you need explain for the code

the red words mean Y axis , +4 means 1 gird down ... -4 means 1 grid up (LV4)

[Normal]

[Hard]

Both are good~

[Special Service]

If you need lyric SB , I'm willing to make because of good song and mapping ~~and Suwako is in the BG~~

star and keep work :3 expect that it's ranked

IceBeam

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IceBeam 2011-03-27T22:25:28+00:00

a0178042 wrote:
stuff

Thank you for effort.

Mercurius

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Mercurius 2011-03-30T06:25:25+00:00

hi~

GoGo

Komeiji Yuki

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Komeiji Yuki 2011-04-01T18:30:39+00:00

Finish

So tired now

Keep working ~ Wish it will be ranked ~

Attachments:

Lyric Elements [325.21 KB]
Download me please

Download: SYO - Tooi Sekai no Unknown X (Reiji-RJ).osb

Reiji-RJ

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Reiji-RJ 2011-04-01T18:50:41+00:00

Awww, thank you!
Awesome, will submit it later

Shiirn

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Shiirn 2011-04-05T17:16:26+00:00

Beamsy
00:26:566 (3) - Stack this.
00:36:487 (1) - ^

Normal
Nothing much.

Hard
Not much t- oh, OD -1, a bit too high for a slow song.

Axey

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Axey 2011-04-06T11:18:22+00:00

hi
I have checked this map and I can't find any problems ^^

I love this song too~ wait for rank ~

Reiji-RJ

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Reiji-RJ 2011-04-06T12:12:29+00:00

> Shiirn, thank you, fixed

> BakaHuang, aww, thanks for checking :3

frost-b-spec

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frost-b-spec 2011-04-07T06:34:52+00:00

thx reqs~

nice map!!!

[Beamsy]
0.26.566(3,1) - spacing x0.0(use higher stack)

+star

loveFantasy

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loveFantasy 2011-04-07T17:19:22+00:00

hi~

cute song

[General]
- toggle on "display storyboard in front of combo fire"

[Storyboard/Skin]
<01:44:046> the "た" is accidentally fading out/in?
<02:09:794> suggest fading those two lyric elements together, and use Rotate (-15~+15 degree) to animate second one (sync with vocal)

[Beamsy]
<00:19:007> (3,1) not stacking perfectly
<00:58:219> (1) move toward left/right, it's blocking storyboard
<01:24:676> (1) rearrange position, it's blocking storyboard

[Normal]
<01:53:022> (6) x:274 y:185?

[Hard]
<00:26:093> (3) unfit spacing
<01:12:392> (6) new combo to be symmetrical with previous part
- your notes arrangement in this diff block storyboard a lot, just letting you know

star

IceBeam

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IceBeam 2011-04-07T21:04:58+00:00

Thanks for modding!

I'll check your suggestions.

XepherX3

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XepherX3 2011-04-07T21:37:46+00:00

really really nice map

can't find anything wrong

star

Komeiji Yuki

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Komeiji Yuki 2011-04-08T08:38:54+00:00

loveFantasy wrote:
[Storyboard/Skin]
<01:44:046> the "た" is accidentally fading out/in?
sorry my mistake
<02:09:794> suggest fading those two lyric elements together, and use Rotate (-15~+15 degree) to animate second one (sync with vocal)
Not sure your mean

I will post the .osb after <02:09:794> is fixed

Reiji-RJ

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Reiji-RJ 2011-04-08T11:01:38+00:00

> frost-b-spec, loveFantasy, XepherX3
Thank you! Fixed something

Komeiji Yuki

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Komeiji Yuki 2011-04-08T12:57:10+00:00

All things fixed :3

Download: SYO - Tooi Sekai no Unknown X (Reiji-RJ).osb

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2011-04-10T08:54:43+00:00

Beamsy:
- Increase Circle Size by 1

Nice map.

Dark_Ai

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Dark_Ai 2011-04-10T16:16:24+00:00

Mod Queues:

[Beamsy]
nice one

[Normal]
Too

[Hard]
00:28:928 (5) - new combo

I promise nothing more

Star~!

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2011-04-12T02:13:25+00:00

.

Reiji-RJ

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Reiji-RJ 2011-04-12T10:18:51+00:00

> Dark_Ai
Thanks~

> YGOkid8
Woah

Thank you!

Shiro

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Shiro 2011-04-25T09:15:38+00:00

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember all these are suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game

General
What a dark background. Making it a bit brighter wouldn't hurt imo.

Beamsy
01:29:400 (1) - The spinning suddenly appears at the end of this spinner and it really sounds terrible. Move the timing section to 01:31:290 - to fix it (and keep the hitsound for the spinner's end).

Normal
00:19:479 (1) - The first beat lacks the custom finish.
00:21:369 (4) - The last beat lacks the custom finish.
00:29:873 (2) - Add a custom finish to the first beat ? I don't see why it isn't there.
00:32:235 (1) - Is that new combo really needed ?
00:47:353 (5) - Clap ? Why did you stop the clap pattern ?
01:33:180 (1) - Seriously, why do people keep using 0.5x slowdowns ? I can understand why you used a slowdown here but why so drastic ? 0,75x or something would have been a lot better imo... On top of that I think such drastic speed changes can be confusing in a Normal.
01:59:637 (1,2) - I think this placement might be a bit confusing (because when I saw that I expected (1) to have 2 repeats). Tilting (1) in another direction would fix it.
02:10:975 (1) - This repeat is partially hidden by a hitburst. It's still somewhat possible to see, but it'd be a lot better to change the direction of the slider.

Hard
Same comment about the slowdown.

Before you disregard any fix because the map is bubbled, remember you can ask the bubbler for a bubble repair. In the case he's away or refuses, I could rebubble the map.

Reiji-RJ

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Reiji-RJ 2011-04-25T16:48:03+00:00

> Odaril
Thank you, all fixed, except Hard diff :3

Shiro

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Shiro 2011-04-26T17:33:17+00:00

Bubble repair, since the original bubbler refused to do so, and I'm fine bubbling the map.

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2011-04-27T01:43:17+00:00

for future reference, when a bubble is popped by a MAT/BAT (or a change is done from a mod from MAT/BAT), the original bubbler shouldn't be the one to rebubble. I'm pretty sure that's how it works

Larto

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Larto 2011-05-07T20:33:24+00:00

Impressive work. The map was intuitive with its spacing and the hitsounds fit pretty well. The storyboard isn't all that noticable, but a nice touch. Nothing to complain about here!

Reiji-RJ

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Reiji-RJ 2011-05-08T14:13:29+00:00

Thank you, Larto

al2e10

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al2e10 2011-05-09T13:22:47+00:00

[Hard]
01:58:692 (1,2) And 01:59:637 (4,5) - Not the same space?
01:55:385 (5,6) - ^

It's nothing that can find, becuase that is great.

But I just told you something that you can change next time.

Alace

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Alace 2011-05-12T07:43:34+00:00

<Easy>
00:19:007 (3,1) - are those stacks on purpose
00:26:566 (3,1) - ^

<Normal>
00:47:825 (1,1,1) - this part sounds bad, those drumbeats are so loud and sudden, remove drumbeats on sliders ?
01:18:062 (1,1,1) - ^

<Hard>
00:47:944 (1,1,2,3,1) - same as normal
01:18:180 (1,1,2,3,1) - ^

good mapset

IceBeam

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IceBeam 2011-05-12T10:12:47+00:00

Alace wrote:
<Easy>
00:19:007 (3,1) - are those stacks on purpose
00:26:566 (3,1) - ^

yep.

Reiji-RJ

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Reiji-RJ 2011-05-12T10:32:21+00:00

Alace wrote:
<Normal>
00:47:825 (1,1,1) - this part sounds bad, those drumbeats are so loud and sudden, remove drumbeats on sliders ?
01:18:062 (1,1,1) - ^

<Hard>
00:47:944 (1,1,2,3,1) - same as normal
01:18:180 (1,1,2,3,1) - ^

good mapset

All fixed
Thank you! *o*

Alace

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Alace 2011-05-12T11:37:46+00:00

I checked the timing again
I think +6ms to offset is better
you need to move all of your timing lines and resnap all notes in all diffs
Also, you have to do the same thing to your Storyboard, and full submit

Komeiji Yuki

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Komeiji Yuki 2011-05-12T12:52:03+00:00

Fix timing

Download: SYO - Tooi Sekai no Unknown X (Reiji-RJ).osb

Shiro

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Shiro 2011-05-12T17:41:04+00:00

Rechecking the map on someone else's request.

I could have nazi'd some stuff, but it's just personal preferences, so I won't prevent you from getting a bubble you deserve over that.

Alace

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Alace 2011-05-13T01:03:31+00:00

Let`s go
ranked

KRZY

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KRZY 2011-05-13T01:12:00+00:00

I was like "wtf" after seeing that the diff spread was E E I but the actual difficulty spread doesn't seem to be much of a problem