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Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ
Thanks for stars :oops:
K o h a k u
hi~ :3

I tried to just a few MOD~
SPOILER
[Nomal]
00:29:400 - add note better I think :3
00:30:345 - ^
00:30:818 - remove note ~ near spinner :(

other diff good diff to me ;)

star~ ;)
Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ
> K o h a k u
Hai :3
Fixed, thank you :oops:
Vass_Bass
Привет ;)

Удали осб наверное
А так прям смотрю и радуюсь, старр~
h3k1ru
i see u didnt added notes by kohakusama suggestion, but he was right, u need add em, also at 00:29:873 - 00:30:109 - too, and start spinner a bit early.. final result should be like this:


anyway take my star, another awesome map :)
Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ
> h3k1ru
I added it in Normal diff, as Kohaku said.
Now fixed in Hard :3
Thank you~ :)
Komeiji Yuki
Seems Good and find only something

[General]

It seems no SB but exist x - x (Reiji-RJ).osb , maybe del it (the name makes me lol)


[Beamsy]

00:19:479 (1) . 00:27:038 (1) . 00:36:959 (2) I don't know why not stack them O.O?


01:02:944 (1.2.3.4.1.2.3) maybe make a straight alignment or symmetrical alignment


Code:
56,284,62944,5,4
136,292,63416,1,8
216,288,63888,2,0,B|232:208|212:112,2,160,4|4|4
296,300,66251,1,8
376,308,66723,5,4
456,300,67196,2,0,B|448:224|456:128,2,160,8|8|8
If you need explain for the code
the red words mean Y axis , +4 means 1 gird down ... -4 means 1 grid up (LV4)

[Normal]

[Hard]


Both are good~

[Special Service]

If you need lyric SB , I'm willing to make because of good song and mapping and Suwako is in the BG




star and keep work :3 expect that it's ranked
IceBeam

a0178042 wrote:

stuff
Thank you for effort.
Mercurius
hi~

GoGo ;)
Komeiji Yuki
Finish

So tired now :|

Keep working ~ Wish it will be ranked ~


Attachments:

Lyric Elements [325.21 KB]
Download me please

Download: SYO - Tooi Sekai no Unknown X (Reiji-RJ).osb
Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ
Awww, thank you!
Awesome, will submit it later ;)
Shiirn
Beamsy
00:26:566 (3) - Stack this.
00:36:487 (1) - ^

Normal
Nothing much.

Hard
Not much t- oh, OD -1, a bit too high for a slow song.
Axey
hi
I have checked this map and I can't find any problems ^^

I love this song too~ wait for rank ~
Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ
> Shiirn, thank you, fixed :D
> BakaHuang, aww, thanks for checking :3
frost-b-spec
thx reqs~

nice map!!!

[Beamsy]
0.26.566(3,1) - spacing x0.0(use higher stack)



+star
loveFantasy
hi~

cute song :D

[General]
- toggle on "display storyboard in front of combo fire"

[Storyboard/Skin]
<01:44:046> the "た" is accidentally fading out/in?
<02:09:794> suggest fading those two lyric elements together, and use Rotate (-15~+15 degree) to animate second one (sync with vocal)

[Beamsy]
<00:19:007> (3,1) not stacking perfectly
<00:58:219> (1) move toward left/right, it's blocking storyboard
<01:24:676> (1) rearrange position, it's blocking storyboard

[Normal]
<01:53:022> (6) x:274 y:185?

[Hard]
<00:26:093> (3) unfit spacing
<01:12:392> (6) new combo to be symmetrical with previous part
- your notes arrangement in this diff block storyboard a lot, just letting you know

star
IceBeam
Thanks for modding!

I'll check your suggestions.
XepherX3
really really nice map

can't find anything wrong :evil:

star
Komeiji Yuki

loveFantasy wrote:

[Storyboard/Skin]
<01:44:046> the "た" is accidentally fading out/in?
sorry my mistake
<02:09:794> suggest fading those two lyric elements together, and use Rotate (-15~+15 degree) to animate second one (sync with vocal)
Not sure your mean :?


I will post the .osb after <02:09:794> is fixed
Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ
> frost-b-spec, loveFantasy, XepherX3
Thank you! Fixed something ;)
Komeiji Yuki
YGOkid8
Beamsy:
- Increase Circle Size by 1

Nice map.
Dark_Ai
Mod Queues:

[Beamsy]
nice one

[Normal]
Too

[Hard]
00:28:928 (5) - new combo

I promise nothing more :?

Star~!
YGOkid8
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Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ
> Dark_Ai
Thanks~

> YGOkid8
Woah :oops:
Thank you!
Shiro
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember all these are suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game :)

General
What a dark background. Making it a bit brighter wouldn't hurt imo.

Beamsy
01:29:400 (1) - The spinning suddenly appears at the end of this spinner and it really sounds terrible. Move the timing section to 01:31:290 - to fix it (and keep the hitsound for the spinner's end).

Normal
00:19:479 (1) - The first beat lacks the custom finish.
00:21:369 (4) - The last beat lacks the custom finish.
00:29:873 (2) - Add a custom finish to the first beat ? I don't see why it isn't there.
00:32:235 (1) - Is that new combo really needed ?
00:47:353 (5) - Clap ? Why did you stop the clap pattern ?
01:33:180 (1) - Seriously, why do people keep using 0.5x slowdowns ? I can understand why you used a slowdown here but why so drastic ? 0,75x or something would have been a lot better imo... On top of that I think such drastic speed changes can be confusing in a Normal.
01:59:637 (1,2) - I think this placement might be a bit confusing (because when I saw that I expected (1) to have 2 repeats). Tilting (1) in another direction would fix it.
02:10:975 (1) - This repeat is partially hidden by a hitburst. It's still somewhat possible to see, but it'd be a lot better to change the direction of the slider.

Hard
Same comment about the slowdown.

Before you disregard any fix because the map is bubbled, remember you can ask the bubbler for a bubble repair. In the case he's away or refuses, I could rebubble the map.
Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ
> Odaril
Thank you, all fixed, except Hard diff :3
Shiro
Bubble repair, since the original bubbler refused to do so, and I'm fine bubbling the map.
YGOkid8
for future reference, when a bubble is popped by a MAT/BAT (or a change is done from a mod from MAT/BAT), the original bubbler shouldn't be the one to rebubble. I'm pretty sure that's how it works :(
Larto
Impressive work. The map was intuitive with its spacing and the hitsounds fit pretty well. The storyboard isn't all that noticable, but a nice touch. Nothing to complain about here!
Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ
Thank you, Larto :oops:
al2e10
[Hard]
01:58:692 (1,2) And 01:59:637 (4,5) - Not the same space?
01:55:385 (5,6) - ^

It's nothing that can find, becuase that is great. :D
But I just told you something that you can change next time. :)
Alace
<Easy>
00:19:007 (3,1) - are those stacks on purpose
00:26:566 (3,1) - ^

<Normal>
00:47:825 (1,1,1) - this part sounds bad, those drumbeats are so loud and sudden, remove drumbeats on sliders ?
01:18:062 (1,1,1) - ^

<Hard>
00:47:944 (1,1,2,3,1) - same as normal
01:18:180 (1,1,2,3,1) - ^

good mapset
IceBeam

Alace wrote:

<Easy>
00:19:007 (3,1) - are those stacks on purpose
00:26:566 (3,1) - ^
yep.
Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ

Alace wrote:

<Normal>
00:47:825 (1,1,1) - this part sounds bad, those drumbeats are so loud and sudden, remove drumbeats on sliders ?
01:18:062 (1,1,1) - ^

<Hard>
00:47:944 (1,1,2,3,1) - same as normal
01:18:180 (1,1,2,3,1) - ^

good mapset
All fixed
Thank you! *o*
Alace
I checked the timing again
I think +6ms to offset is better
you need to move all of your timing lines and resnap all notes in all diffs
Also, you have to do the same thing to your Storyboard, and full submit
Komeiji Yuki
Shiro
Rechecking the map on someone else's request.

I could have nazi'd some stuff, but it's just personal preferences, so I won't prevent you from getting a bubble you deserve over that.
Alace
Let`s go
ranked
KRZY
I was like "wtf" after seeing that the diff spread was E E I but the actual difficulty spread doesn't seem to be much of a problem :D

congrats~
La Cataline
gratz Reiji!
lol
m i z u k i
!!!!!!
Louis Cyphre
Гратц~
Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ
Gawww, thanks to all :oops:
Ch1ka
Waaaah, грац!
h3k1ru
11/10
Firo Prochainezo
Could you tell me the which album is this song from? This is a very nice song and map.
Faust
Someone who isn't dumb enough to use "SOUND HOLIC" as artist?

Quite rare here.
Topic Starter
Reiji-RJ

Firo Prochainezo wrote:

Could you tell me the which album is this song from? This is a very nice song and map.
想 -OMOI-
http://vgmdb.net/album/17060
Axey
congrats!!! <3
Firo Prochainezo

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Firo Prochainezo wrote:

Could you tell me the which album is this song from? This is a very nice song and map.
想 -OMOI-
http://vgmdb.net/album/17060
Thank you!
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