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SYO - Tooi Sekai no Unknown X
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Topic Starter
Thanks for stars 
hi~ :3
I tried to just a few MOD~
other diff good diff to me
star~
I tried to just a few MOD~
SPOILER
[Nomal]
00:29:400 - add note better I think :3
00:30:345 - ^
00:30:818 - remove note ~ near spinner
00:29:400 - add note better I think :3
00:30:345 - ^
00:30:818 - remove note ~ near spinner
other diff good diff to me
star~
Topic Starter
> K o h a k u
Hai :3
Fixed, thank you
Hai :3
Fixed, thank you
Привет
Удали осб наверное
А так прям смотрю и радуюсь, старр~
Удали осб наверное
А так прям смотрю и радуюсь, старр~
Topic Starter
> h3k1ru
I added it in Normal diff, as Kohaku said.
Now fixed in Hard :3
Thank you~
I added it in Normal diff, as Kohaku said.
Now fixed in Hard :3
Thank you~
Seems Good and find only something
[General]
It seems no SB but exist x - x (Reiji-RJ).osb , maybe del it (the name makes me lol)
[Beamsy]
00:19:479 (1) . 00:27:038 (1) . 00:36:959 (2) I don't know why not stack them O.O?
01:02:944 (1.2.3.4.1.2.3) maybe make a straight alignment or symmetrical alignment
Code:
56,284,62944,5,4
136,292,63416,1,8
216,288,63888,2,0,B|232:208|212:112,2,160,4|4|4
296,300,66251,1,8
376,308,66723,5,4
456,300,67196,2,0,B|448:224|456:128,2,160,8|8|8
[Normal]
[Hard]
Both are good~
[Special Service]
If you need lyric SB , I'm willing to make because of good song and mappingand Suwako is in the BG
star and keep work :3 expect that it's ranked
[General]
It seems no SB but exist x - x (Reiji-RJ).osb , maybe del it (the name makes me lol)
[Beamsy]
00:19:479 (1) . 00:27:038 (1) . 00:36:959 (2) I don't know why not stack them O.O?
01:02:944 (1.2.3.4.1.2.3) maybe make a straight alignment or symmetrical alignment
Code:
56,284,62944,5,4
136,292,63416,1,8
216,288,63888,2,0,B|232:208|212:112,2,160,4|4|4
296,300,66251,1,8
376,308,66723,5,4
456,300,67196,2,0,B|448:224|456:128,2,160,8|8|8
If you need explain for the code
the red words mean Y axis , +4 means 1 gird down ... -4 means 1 grid up (LV4)
[Normal]
[Hard]
Both are good~
[Special Service]
If you need lyric SB , I'm willing to make because of good song and mapping
star and keep work :3 expect that it's ranked
Thank you for effort.a0178042 wrote:
stuff
Finish
So tired now
Keep working ~ Wish it will be ranked ~
Attachments:
Lyric Elements [325.21 KB]
Download me please
Download: SYO - Tooi Sekai no Unknown X (Reiji-RJ).osb
So tired now
Keep working ~ Wish it will be ranked ~
Attachments:
Download me please
Download: SYO - Tooi Sekai no Unknown X (Reiji-RJ).osb
Topic Starter
Awww, thank you!
Awesome, will submit it later
Awesome, will submit it later
Beamsy
00:26:566 (3) - Stack this.
00:36:487 (1) - ^
Normal
Nothing much.
Hard
Not much t- oh, OD -1, a bit too high for a slow song.
00:26:566 (3) - Stack this.
00:36:487 (1) - ^
Normal
Nothing much.
Hard
Not much t- oh, OD -1, a bit too high for a slow song.
hi
I have checked this map and I can't find any problems ^^
I love this song too~ wait for rank ~
I have checked this map and I can't find any problems ^^
I love this song too~ wait for rank ~
Topic Starter
> Shiirn, thank you, fixed 
> BakaHuang, aww, thanks for checking :3
> BakaHuang, aww, thanks for checking :3
thx reqs~
nice map!!!
[Beamsy]
0.26.566(3,1) - spacing x0.0(use higher stack)
+star
nice map!!!
[Beamsy]
0.26.566(3,1) - spacing x0.0(use higher stack)
+star
hi~
cute song
[General]
- toggle on "display storyboard in front of combo fire"
[Storyboard/Skin]
<01:44:046> the "た" is accidentally fading out/in?
<02:09:794> suggest fading those two lyric elements together, and use Rotate (-15~+15 degree) to animate second one (sync with vocal)
[Beamsy]
<00:19:007> (3,1) not stacking perfectly
<00:58:219> (1) move toward left/right, it's blocking storyboard
<01:24:676> (1) rearrange position, it's blocking storyboard
[Normal]
<01:53:022> (6) x:274 y:185?
[Hard]
<00:26:093> (3) unfit spacing
<01:12:392> (6) new combo to be symmetrical with previous part
- your notes arrangement in this diff block storyboard a lot, just letting you know
star
cute song
[General]
- toggle on "display storyboard in front of combo fire"
[Storyboard/Skin]
<01:44:046> the "た" is accidentally fading out/in?
<02:09:794> suggest fading those two lyric elements together, and use Rotate (-15~+15 degree) to animate second one (sync with vocal)
[Beamsy]
<00:19:007> (3,1) not stacking perfectly
<00:58:219> (1) move toward left/right, it's blocking storyboard
<01:24:676> (1) rearrange position, it's blocking storyboard
[Normal]
<01:53:022> (6) x:274 y:185?
[Hard]
<00:26:093> (3) unfit spacing
<01:12:392> (6) new combo to be symmetrical with previous part
- your notes arrangement in this diff block storyboard a lot, just letting you know
star
Thanks for modding!
I'll check your suggestions.
I'll check your suggestions.
really really nice map
can't find anything wrong
star
can't find anything wrong
star
loveFantasy wrote:
[Storyboard/Skin]
<01:44:046> the "た" is accidentally fading out/in?
sorry my mistake
<02:09:794> suggest fading those two lyric elements together, and use Rotate (-15~+15 degree) to animate second one (sync with vocal)
Not sure your mean
I will post the .osb after <02:09:794> is fixed
Topic Starter
> frost-b-spec, loveFantasy, XepherX3
Thank you! Fixed something
Thank you! Fixed something
Beamsy:
- Increase Circle Size by 1
Nice map.
- Increase Circle Size by 1
Nice map.
Mod Queues:
[Beamsy]
nice one
[Normal]
Too
[Hard]
00:28:928 (5) - new combo
I promise nothing more
Star~!
[Beamsy]
nice one
[Normal]
Too
[Hard]
00:28:928 (5) - new combo
I promise nothing more
Star~!
.
Topic Starter
> Dark_Ai
Thanks~
> YGOkid8
Woah
Thank you!
Thanks~
> YGOkid8
Woah
Thank you!
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember all these are suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game
General
What a dark background. Making it a bit brighter wouldn't hurt imo.
Beamsy
01:29:400 (1) - The spinning suddenly appears at the end of this spinner and it really sounds terrible. Move the timing section to 01:31:290 - to fix it (and keep the hitsound for the spinner's end).
Normal
00:19:479 (1) - The first beat lacks the custom finish.
00:21:369 (4) - The last beat lacks the custom finish.
00:29:873 (2) - Add a custom finish to the first beat ? I don't see why it isn't there.
00:32:235 (1) - Is that new combo really needed ?
00:47:353 (5) - Clap ? Why did you stop the clap pattern ?
01:33:180 (1) - Seriously, why do people keep using 0.5x slowdowns ? I can understand why you used a slowdown here but why so drastic ? 0,75x or something would have been a lot better imo... On top of that I think such drastic speed changes can be confusing in a Normal.
01:59:637 (1,2) - I think this placement might be a bit confusing (because when I saw that I expected (1) to have 2 repeats). Tilting (1) in another direction would fix it.
02:10:975 (1) - This repeat is partially hidden by a hitburst. It's still somewhat possible to see, but it'd be a lot better to change the direction of the slider.
Hard
Same comment about the slowdown.
Before you disregard any fix because the map is bubbled, remember you can ask the bubbler for a bubble repair. In the case he's away or refuses, I could rebubble the map.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game
General
What a dark background. Making it a bit brighter wouldn't hurt imo.
Beamsy
01:29:400 (1) - The spinning suddenly appears at the end of this spinner and it really sounds terrible. Move the timing section to 01:31:290 - to fix it (and keep the hitsound for the spinner's end).
Normal
00:19:479 (1) - The first beat lacks the custom finish.
00:21:369 (4) - The last beat lacks the custom finish.
00:29:873 (2) - Add a custom finish to the first beat ? I don't see why it isn't there.
00:32:235 (1) - Is that new combo really needed ?
00:47:353 (5) - Clap ? Why did you stop the clap pattern ?
01:33:180 (1) - Seriously, why do people keep using 0.5x slowdowns ? I can understand why you used a slowdown here but why so drastic ? 0,75x or something would have been a lot better imo... On top of that I think such drastic speed changes can be confusing in a Normal.
01:59:637 (1,2) - I think this placement might be a bit confusing (because when I saw that I expected (1) to have 2 repeats). Tilting (1) in another direction would fix it.
02:10:975 (1) - This repeat is partially hidden by a hitburst. It's still somewhat possible to see, but it'd be a lot better to change the direction of the slider.
Hard
Same comment about the slowdown.
Before you disregard any fix because the map is bubbled, remember you can ask the bubbler for a bubble repair. In the case he's away or refuses, I could rebubble the map.
Topic Starter
> Odaril
Thank you, all fixed, except Hard diff :3
Thank you, all fixed, except Hard diff :3
Bubble repair, since the original bubbler refused to do so, and I'm fine bubbling the map.
for future reference, when a bubble is popped by a MAT/BAT (or a change is done from a mod from MAT/BAT), the original bubbler shouldn't be the one to rebubble. I'm pretty sure that's how it works
Impressive work. The map was intuitive with its spacing and the hitsounds fit pretty well. The storyboard isn't all that noticable, but a nice touch. Nothing to complain about here!
Topic Starter
Thank you, Larto
[Hard]
01:58:692 (1,2) And 01:59:637 (4,5) - Not the same space?
01:55:385 (5,6) - ^
It's nothing that can find, becuase that is great.
But I just told you something that you can change next time.
01:58:692 (1,2) And 01:59:637 (4,5) - Not the same space?
01:55:385 (5,6) - ^
It's nothing that can find, becuase that is great.
But I just told you something that you can change next time.
<Easy>
00:19:007 (3,1) - are those stacks on purpose
00:26:566 (3,1) - ^
<Normal>
00:47:825 (1,1,1) - this part sounds bad, those drumbeats are so loud and sudden, remove drumbeats on sliders ?
01:18:062 (1,1,1) - ^
<Hard>
00:47:944 (1,1,2,3,1) - same as normal
01:18:180 (1,1,2,3,1) - ^
good mapset
00:19:007 (3,1) - are those stacks on purpose
00:26:566 (3,1) - ^
<Normal>
00:47:825 (1,1,1) - this part sounds bad, those drumbeats are so loud and sudden, remove drumbeats on sliders ?
01:18:062 (1,1,1) - ^
<Hard>
00:47:944 (1,1,2,3,1) - same as normal
01:18:180 (1,1,2,3,1) - ^
good mapset
yep.Alace wrote:
<Easy>
00:19:007 (3,1) - are those stacks on purpose
00:26:566 (3,1) - ^
Topic Starter
All fixedAlace wrote:
<Normal>
00:47:825 (1,1,1) - this part sounds bad, those drumbeats are so loud and sudden, remove drumbeats on sliders ?
01:18:062 (1,1,1) - ^
<Hard>
00:47:944 (1,1,2,3,1) - same as normal
01:18:180 (1,1,2,3,1) - ^
good mapset
Thank you! *o*
I checked the timing again
I think +6ms to offset is better
you need to move all of your timing lines and resnap all notes in all diffs
Also, you have to do the same thing to your Storyboard, and full submit
I think +6ms to offset is better
you need to move all of your timing lines and resnap all notes in all diffs
Also, you have to do the same thing to your Storyboard, and full submit
Rechecking the map on someone else's request.
I could have nazi'd some stuff, but it's just personal preferences, so I won't prevent you from getting a bubble you deserve over that.
I could have nazi'd some stuff, but it's just personal preferences, so I won't prevent you from getting a bubble you deserve over that.