1. Crimmi's Easy (1.12 stars, 146 notes)
2. Insane (4.98 stars, 520 notes)
3. Normal (3.68 stars, 260 notes)
4. RJ's Hard (4.62 stars, 364 notes)
5. Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 824 notes)

Soaprman wrote:

Pretty solid maps you got here. Most of what I found is just nitpicky nazi non-issues. There might be more extremely minor spacing issues I didn't notice... I only pointed out the obvious ones I saw.

note: Insane before Normal because I modded them in that order. It's alright, i mod that way too

Insane
00:13:739 (1) - 1 grid left? I normally don't nazi like this but this is realllllly obvious in the editor, being just off the center line like that. Thanks for pointing that out, fixed!

00:53:012 (1...9) - these play fine but sound a little weird since they don't QUITE match the lyrics. you could make them match more closely by selecting this whole combo, changing divisor to 1/6, and moving left a bit, but then it plays more awkwardly (I end up 100ing the whole thing). so probably leave it how it is now and forget I mentioned it. Yeah, its probably easier to hit a 1/4 stream than an unever stream, so as you said, no change.

00:53:967 (8,9) - another noticed-in-editor nitpick: end of 8 and 9 beneath it are a bit off-center. Didnt think it was much of a problem, but changed anyways since it doesnt hurt anyone and it looks better, thanks!

01:00:376 (4) - down 1 grid to align horizontally with 3... man, why do you use grid 4? it's making me notice things like this I like grid 4 =P more precise that way, specially useful for sliders!, anyways yeah thanks, fixed

01:31:194 (6) - maybe start this 1/4 later to line up with the lyrics? stuff around it feels mapped to the lyrics so this makes more sense to me. play with the slider as necessary, of course.
01:33:376 (6) - same here.
01:35:558 (6) - here too.
I actually had trouble finding the correct timing of these when i was mapping it, thanks for this!

03:07:193 (1...7) - align these a little more nicely. either have 2-4-6 and 1-3-5-7 form straight lines or curve exactly the same. Also, this feels like a jump in difficulty from the rest of the map. Everything else feels like it could fit in a Hard (excusing your E-N-I difficulty spread) but this right here... I don't know. I could see a lot of players failing right here. Of course, I could always be wrong/out of touch about this. It's accelerated spacing like i did on a previous map, kinda gives it a more climax ending, the diff itself overall felt like Insane for me, which is why i named it Insane, i wouldnt mind turning it into a Hard, but i'd like more opinions on this since when i was first mapping it people thought it was pretty hard for a hard, and i did too so i renamed it to Insane, anyways yeah, the accelerated spacing shouldnt be too Hard to begin with, since the bpm is low, just a little climax at the end =P

Normal
00:11:830 (2) - 1 grid down? looked like you wanted symmetry here so...
00:14:558 (3) - here too.

in fact, if you want full symmetry, move all this right some so the middle things land on the vertical center line.
I do agree it looks odd, but that happens when i try to have everything distance snapped >.< as at first i was going for an Easy here, but got carried away hehe... anyways, they are supposed to be like that, not necessarily symmetric, but i may take it into consideration if someone can help me have these DS'd nicely and having them symmetric at the same time

00:52:739 (4) - sound weird here too (like on Insane) but what can you do? Yeah, in this case, it's harder to have the whole slider fit since some are 1/4 and some are 1/6.

00:54:921 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - vertical line thing again. total non-issue, most people probably won't notice while playing. but if you want to, it's there. Yeah, as the previous this one's hard to change too, it's still symmetric centering on (4) tho

02:11:830 (4) - again. Condering the slider is arked is hard to have a distance snap that agrees with me here >.<

And that's all I found. Feel free to call me back when you add the Easy difficulty.

Crimmi wrote:

Ho hum i was done in exactly 20 minutes but the net went out before i submitted this so here it is my easy (if a mod says to finish the whole thing let me know via PM or in-game PM)

Sakura Hana wrote:

Added but i'd recommend you use more hitsounds

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Ohohohohohohohoho

[Taiko Oni]
- I'd recommend keeping the volume constant, unless really fitting and whatnot, because otherwise it could be hard to keep rhythm.
Changed them to 70% then since 100% is a bit too loud.

(This part has stuff about sliders)
Huh, I don't really like a majority if not all of your slider placements. Sliders are there to help emphasize some held notes, but not all of them.

00:23:558 (3) - This doesn't really even fit. Removed
01:22:467 (4) - Don't use a slider here. Sliders after 1/4 are rather broken in osu! taiko. They involve either being hit later, or earlier to hit correctly. But it doesn't mean they're bad. In fact, that's not why, it just doesn't fit. Removed
01:24:648 (4) - ^ I wouldn't map vocal too much in a taiko map. Specifically BECAUSE it implies sliders should be used. Removed
01:26:558 (4) - ^ Removed
01:59:830 (2) - ^ Whyyy, it doesn't fit. Well, at the time i thought it did XD removed anyways
02:29:012 (2) - ^ You see, first of all, you start it early, and what's sung is not long enough to be mapped with a slider.
Alright, removed.

(This stuff is more on note placement)
These kind of "having the same thing is bad" sort of maps are something I don't like much. Because see, a lot of people think that copy-paste will always be bad for some reason, and will be willing to break the flow of their map, to make sure that one synth pattern or something is not mapped the same way. For example, the little 5 1 2 1 parts in the beginning, it's the same thing, but different each time.

But, that seems to be how most osu! Taiko Onis are, so I'm not going to force you to change styles. These are just things that's flow more.

00:45:512 - Don here
01:09:239 - Don here
01:41:967 - Don here
02:43:330 - Don here
03:03:512 - Don here
All of the above added.

DONE HERE.

(This has any other stuff I wanna say... misc. or whatever)
Oh, and also, if you really want to be cruel at the end, make it like this:
02:34:193 - 1.20
02:42:921 - 1.40
02:51:648 - 1.60
03:00:375 - 1.80
03:09:102 - 2.00
I want to add some climax at the end, but i dont want to be cruel like XD

In fact, I'd recommend it, as it sort of fixes some boredom, and gives a "whoa, didn't expect that, so awesome" sort of feeling.
And it's not like it'd make it too hard anyways.
I'll get more opinions on that then.

Anyways, saw the standard diffs, and they seem good. Star~

• 
  [Tag]
  Add "Taiko" to Crimmi's Easy?

• 
  This diff need more whistle & finish sound while 00:11:285 - 00:28:739...

1. 01:29:830 (1,2,3,4) - Try to use more whistle sound.
2. 01:36:376 (1) - Try to add finish sound like same as other diffs.
3. 01:42:921 (1) - Add clap sound at the end.
4. 02:12:375 (T) - Turn down the volume to 80%.
5. 02:21:102 (T) - ^
6. 02:34:193 - KIAI TIME - Why is there no clap sound?
7. 03:06:921 (1) - End this spinner with finish sound at 03:08:557.

1. 00:17:830 (1,2,3,4) - How about copy&paste 00:15:648 (1,2,3,4)?
2. 01:06:921 (3,4,5) - Perhaps beginners will be confused by this formation. Move (5) to x:156,y:308?

1. 00:18:376 (3) - Down 1 grid?
2. 00:18:921 (6) - Up 1 grid?
3. 00:32:421 (x) - Put a note?
4. 00:46:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Players are maybe confused by them. How about this pattern instead?
   
5. 00:50:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Wow like heart<3
6. 00:52:876 (x) - Put a note?
7. 01:15:512 (2) - Hmm I feel it doesn't follow music.
   
8. 01:22:467 (6) - ^ Move it to next blue line(01:22:603)?
9. 01:23:285 (7) - And delete it?
10. 01:24:649 (6,7) - ^
11. 02:16:739 (2) - Extend to 02:18:375?
12. 02:41:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Rhythm is pretty good, but looks like crowded.
13. 03:07:193 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Awesome formation<3

If my mod is useful to you, please mod my beatmap ^.^
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/27543
Thanks in advance

1. 00:02:557 (1,1,2,3,4) - DDDDK? dkkkk sounds too loud for me, also ddddk is more fun for player XD
2. 00:04:739 (1,1,2,3,4) - Same ^ , but you can use DDKDD / DDKKD too.
3. 00:07:058 (1) - Don here, I don't like too much KAT XD
4. 00:11:558 (1) - Don sounds better for me.
5. 00:12:921 (1) - Kat here.
6. 00:14:012 (4) - ^
7. 00:19:739 (4) - Don here~
8. 00:20:012 (1) - ^
9. 00:20:558 (2) - Kat (that's all of my hitsounds modding, don't want to change the map too much XDD)
10. I think you can use KAT on the backbeat , sounds better and fit the music. However, it's not a big problem, you can still keep it =w=!
    If you do this (add kat on backbeat) , you can remove some KAT which is on the red line.
11. 00:25:058 (1) - remove this note
12. 00:33:376 (2,3,1,1,2,1,1) - Well, I think DDKDDDK is better than now. plays better and fitting the song.
13. 01:15:376 (x) - Add a note here. OOOO + OO here will make players confused. (because the voice haven't stop)
14. 01:31:194 (2) - move this note to 01:31:058 then ↓
15. 01:31:330 (x) - Add a don here. then ↓
16. 01:31:603 (1) - del this note
17. 01:33:648 (1) - Don here ( imo , let's listen the music , the white line should be all don)
18. 01:35:830 (2) - ^
19. 01:41:285 (2) - Remove this finish here as well~~
20. 01:50:012 (7) - you should add a KAT here as well, plays better if you do this~ (as a Taiko player, my suggestion)
21. 01:55:467 (4) - Remove this~~ usually we will not use short slider in Taiko diff. You can use DDD (1/4) or D D (1/2) here.
22. 02:03:785 (x) - Add a don here~
23. 02:09:921 (2) - change to K D here (1/2)
24. [color=#FF00FF]The last kiai time is really good job![color]

-Sekai- wrote:

mod4mod requested :3

[Crimmi's Easy]
00:22:194 (3) - clap at the end? the whistle sounds better imo.
00:23:830 (4) - remove the clap? No.
00:39:648 (4) - put clap on middle and remove from the end? No, i ALWAYS put my whistles before claps.
00:44:012 (3) - clap at the end? Nope.
00:45:648 (4) - remove the clap and add finish? No.
00:47:285 (2) - maybe clap at the end? Nah.
01:06:921 (4) - whistle? ok.
01:29:830 (1) - whistle at the middle? ok.
01:34:739 (2,4) - clap? ok.
02:00:376 (3,4) - clap? nah but i added a whistle.
02:37:466 (5) - clap at the end? ok
02:44:557 (2) - clap? ok.
02:47:284 (1) - finish? ok.
02:49:466 (3) - clap? ok.
03:02:012 (2) - ^ No.
everything seems fine to me as an easy diff :3

1. How about remove countdown?
2. Tag:You missing a "Taiko" in Crimmi's Easy diff.However I recommend you remove "Taiko" in Tag because it's unnecessary!No one will add a "Taiko" in tag unless it is Taikosu.
3. I'm pretty sure the offset is a bit late,Try this:2543(-15),you should adjust the second offset after you fix it.(Please check the mod before you check this!)
4. Add a silent slider if possible because I feel a little noisy when the sliderslide in most of the part.

1. 00:26:558(x)- IMO,here is not appropriate for a spinnerbecause the vocal is still singing.Can you map some notes or slider to instead of?
2. 00:56:012,00:57:103(x,x)- Please add a notes there to consistent the rhythm,Since you almost stuff 1/1 in this diff and feel sudden with this rhythm.
3. 01:27:648(x)- Same as 00:26:558- this place is not appropriate for a spinner.
4. 01:43:467(1)- Hum,I guess you are missing a clap at the end of the slider,right?
5. 01:56:012(1)- Probably make the slider like this?If you change it,please let (2)- symmetry with (1)-
   
   Suggestion

   
6. 02:04:739(4)- Please!Remove this note!It doesn't fit the music,Since here doesn't have any drum sound and vocal!
7. 02:41:284~02:52:739(x)- Why you didn't put any kind of hitsound here?Please add some!
8. 02:58:193(x,x)- Remove the unnecessary green line please!
9. 03:06:921(x)- IMO,this spinner should be end at 03:08:557- and reduce the volume.It sounds better for me after fix.

1. 00:04:194(2)- I feel this note is off the music,I don't know you are make it on purpose or not.However move it to 00:04:058- would be fit the music more. (Won't mention this again T_T)
2. 00:06:376(4)- Remove the finish please!It doesn't fit the music,I prefer finish is using in a accent point,well,anyway~
3. 00:10:739(4.1)- ^Base on that,so I prefer remove a finish here and add it on (1)-
4. 01:16:194(6)- Probably unstack it?Since you didn't any stack in this Kiai,just consistent the gameplay.
5. 02:18:375(4)- This slider doesn't stack it properly at the beginning!Please trun off the grid snap and trun the distance snap to x0.0.Then it can stack it properly!
6. 02:34:466(1.2.3.4)- This pattern is too difficult for "Normal" diff because some slider and notes will be coverd by skin element!Better to change another pattern.
   
   Something

   
7. 02:58:466(1.2.3.4)- I don't know about this pattern is easy enough or not.

1. First,you need to reduce the volume!Too loud is not fun during gameplay!I suggest Soft-80%.It should work.
2. 00:03:103(4)- I guess d would be better.
3. 00:05:285(4)- ^Same!
4. 00:12:921(1)- How about k?I feel better with it.
5. 00:19:467(2.3.4.1.1)- This pattern doesn't fit the music very well.If I were you,I will remove (3.4.1)- then add a finish at 00:20:012.
6. 00:33:376(2.3.1.1.2.1.1)- Pattern suggestion >< : Try ddkkddk?
7. 00:42:103(2.3.1.2.3.1.1.1)- This pattern is difficult then overall,since 3 kat in the middle like this will make confused during sightreading
8. 00:47:830(1.1.2 1.1.2)- IMO,this shouldn't be a trplet,I think some simple 1/2 is good enough here.
9. 00:53:012(~)- Same as 00:42:103,I'm recommad you simplify the pattern.
10. 01:36:376(x)- I recommad you remove the spinner and don't map anything here because this part is quite clam.
11. 01:50:012(7)- How about k it?
12. 01:55:467(4)- Please change this slider to note.Seem weird if you place a 1/2 slider in Taiko.
13. 02:09:921(2)- ^ Same
14. 03:00:921(3)- Probably change it to k?

1. 00:05:830(5)- Some rhythm suggestion here:Remove this slider and place a note at 00:05:830 and 00:05:967- just like what you do in previous.
2. 00:28:467(x)- It would sounds better if you add a note here,also you can make a jump with (3.5)-
3. 00:44:285(1-5)- Seems a little bit ugly of this slider stream.It would looks better if you do This.
4. 00:51:376(5)- Please use auto to watch this part.(5)- is totally hidden by skin element(ApproachCircle also hidden)
   
   lol

   
5. 01:15:512(2)- Some rhythm suggestion here:add a note here and move the slider to 01:15:648.If you fix that,please consistent the spacing with (3.4)-
6. 02:41:557(2.3.4.5.6)- Be honest,this part is really awkward during gameplay,well,I'm not sure it's only for me,you better to get more suggestion about this.
7. 03:08:148(x)- Probably add a note here to fit the music.

Nymph_ wrote:

Try to do a m4m req here~ little suggestions:

Normal:
00:45:648 (4) - nazi: up 1 grid Fixed!
00:50:558 (1,2,3) - nazi:a little ugly...make this slider more beautiful? It looks fine to me X_X any suggestions?
01:18:921 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - still not beautiful.. It's supposed to be slanted like that
01:21:921 (2,3) - nazi: up? Fixed! and moved up the slider and the whole pattern too so spacing isnt screwed up.
02:44:012 (4) - still spacing not beautiful for me. up for a little bit? Changed the slider a bit
I think this diff can improve the spacing,cause the spacing now is not very neat and tidy. Hitsound is good~ nothing to pick out =w=


Insane:
02:11:830 (4,5) - nazi: right for a little bit? x+2 Nice catch! Fixed
02:13:466 (2) - nazi: up 1 grid? Fixed
02:16:466 (1,2,3,4) - this place feel a little weird, although they are trying to follow the vocal.. I suggest like this:

SPOILER

Not really because the vocal starts on the red tick.
02:31:602 (7) - seems a little uncomfortable for me, maybe move it to 02:31:466? Don't see why, the "ka" from "kokure" it's alining perfectly fine there
And I strongly suggest to use normal hitsound during the last Kial, I think it makes the song more intense lol~ I dont like using normal-hitnormal as a normal hitsound (if that made any sense) which is why im using normal-hitnormal on enphasis places that arent as epic, and on the epic ones, finishes
others fine~

That is all~ star~

Sakura Hana wrote:

Nymph_ wrote:

Try to do a m4m req here~ little suggestions:

Normal:
00:50:558 (1,2,3) - nazi:a little ugly...make this slider more beautiful? It looks fine to me X_X any suggestions? I suggest 1 1grid right, 3 1grid right and 1 grid down, it seems good for me~ also we can change the slider shape, but it is more complicated..
01:18:921 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - still not beautiful.. It's supposed to be slanted like that But I still think changing a little bit is better...for 1357 is not neatly in a line, isn't this better*_*?

SPOILER

Sakura Hana wrote:

@Dusty: Yeah but you took long, and i decided to unlazy myself to map it since i love the song

Dusty wrote:

[Insane]
00:29:552 (2) - maybe copy+paste (1) then rotate it 180 degrees? this isn't quite symmetrical ugh, this is what happens when you make stuff without c/p and try to make them similar, however the problem is that due to distance snap, it's quite hard to make the 2nd slider start where i want to.
01:15:371 (3,4,5) - this part feels non-intuitive to me That is weird, i find it pretty intuitive with the music, but then again it may be the stacks, still cant find anything that would feel more intuitive for now, i'll keep note of this.
01:26:825 (6) - this slider seems weird, it doesn't have the same beat pattern as the other two before it? You're right, thanks! Changed
01:35:689 (6) - shorten by 1/4? That does sound better yes, also added a finish at the end since it does fit now, Thanks!
02:16:734 (2,3) - ugly overlap imo Distance snap hates meee!!!! but i love you Dusty <3 fixed!
02:24:643 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think moving this combo so that (3,4) is on the center makes the jump more intuitive Hmm, i thought it was pretty intuitive, but it does look prettier in the center so fixed
02:41:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i dont like this pattern, it's confusingAlright, Finally changed this pattern, hope it's better now
02:46:325 (6) - is there a reason you didn't stack this on (3,4,5)? Because of the arrow pattern
03:08:279 (8) - that note on the red tick sounds very weird Changed but, if people prefer the old pattern then i'll bring ti back.

[Normal]
00:20:007 (1) - maybe try to make this look better? Long sliders are always a pain for me to make look good, i tried to change it a bit not sure if it's better or worse now X_X

(and since you're m4ming anyways, could you please mod this? It's not bubble-worthy yet so I'm not looking for one right now, if you're only modding for bubbles right now)

edit: ninja'd

Mystica wrote:

Hi~~
Here comes my mod..


[Normal]
00:42:507 seems not so beautiful...How about like this

SPOILER

Hmm i see what you mean, actually the note was touching the slidertrack a bit, so i moved it a couple grids, it's still fine after this, not using your suggestion exactly, but fixed anyways XD
00:54:371 if you make that notes seems like a cross...this one may think another place to fit it. I dont get what you mean o.o
01:27:643 add finish? Nah the lyric in there isnt epic enough XD
03:04:188 look at 00:42:507's suggestion Made it look better

[Taiko]
I'm not so good at taiko mapping...So here may some places I feel better
00:15:643 big blue? Nope i think Big don is more enphasis than big katsu
01:27:643 big red? Idk, music not enphasized enough in there, however i may consider it if someone else mentions it
01:28:189 ^
01:32:007 ^
01:34:189 ^
01:42:098 blue?

[Insane]
00:05:007 cancen the whistle? It's following the pitch on the instrument so no
00:32:825 add clap? Kiai hitsound pattern is slightly different to make it more "cool"
00:39:371 ^
00:41:962 ^
00:46:325 may reduce the volume by 10%~20%? (if you do so,00:54:916 this time comes gives back May consider it
01:20:416 new combo? (it may confused some people Sorry but i followed a set combo pattern specially during kiai times
01:22:325 how about 0.8 distance to the pre note?i know you use 0.75SV,but a little may make it more beautiful Although i agree, that it is more beautiful, in this case i prefer to keep 1.0x so the in-between notes distance is the same as slider distances if anything i may think of something even lower to make a close up stack or something.
01:24:507 ^ ^
02:49:188 a grid down.. Nice catch! Fixed!
well...May reduce HPD by 1? It has a really high note density reducing hp by 1 would make the map very easy to pass, the high note density makes hp regain quite easy anyways.

SPOILER

Here is my map that need your mod...
Thanks >W<
Haruka Shimotsuki - Ruri no Tori

And sorry for my poor English >w<

ouranhshc wrote:

Normal
00:35:280 (2) - New combo I didnt really want to use 2 NCs in a row, but i guess it does make sense, so changed.
01:10:189 (2) - ^ ^
02:14:552 (3) - [Nazi] - make symmetrical to (1) Fixed!
02:58:461 (1,2,3,4) - i don't think that this a good idea for a normal Come on! its not like they are Etna sliders D:

Insane
02:11:825 (4,5,1) - is this spacing really neccessary especially in the least intense part of the song Unstacked 5 and put it in between 4 and 1.


Overall
Easy feels lacking.
Normal feels clustered. You should really use grid snap
Hard is fine
Insane - You should definitely use grid snap. it will help clean up the map. Also, it feels like you added notes to create certain patterns sometimes
I actually did use grid snap, but its grid 4 you know...

Samah wrote:

Was my mod too long? <_<
It's not the mod4mod or kudosu I'm interested in, I just wanted to know if it helped you

Charles445 wrote:

General
You're going to want a timing professional to help you time this map. It's a toughie Timing's fine imo, idk why you keep saying that X_X
The hitsounds are loud in comparison to the music. I suggest turning down the volume of the hitsounds. Make sure your own hitsound volume isnt loud as well X_X i even think that they could've been louder specially for kiai sections

Normal
00:11:825 (2) - Move this 1 grid down
00:12:371 (3) - Move this 1 grid left and down
00:14:007 (2) - Move this 1 grid left
00:14:552 (3) - Move this 1 grid down
00:15:098 (4) - Move this 1 grid left and 2 grids down
That should make that part more symmetrical
Fixed!
00:30:098 (4) - Move this up and outta there like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/116790 it helps the map not get too cluttered and hard to read.
actually you made me realize that (4) wasnt covering (3)'s curve perfectly
00:33:098 (1) - Add a finish uhh where? there's like 4 possible spots there... but anyways im not taking any finish suggestions i've already explained them to every other modder here.
00:37:462 (1) - ^^ I know why you would think a Finish fits there, but that's not the hitsound pattern im using.
00:41:825 (1) - ^^ really, that's not the hitsound pattern im using here D:
00:52:734 (4) - Avoid having short multiple-repeat sliders on a normal. This can be confusing to the below average player Actually kick sliders are fine on Normal difficulties ._.
00:58:189 (3) - Move this 1 grid down and 1 grid right Fixed!
01:38:825 - This break is indeed in the right place, it just feels too long. Make it as long as RJ's Take in mind RJ has an extra break before this one, while i only have this one right in the middle (and the small one because of the silent part), the break this long was intentional, it's only missing on Taiko because Taiko is not supposed to have breaks.
02:16:734 (1,2) - This is really confusing looking I was actually trying to Elbow (6) but that was hard to do X_X
02:24:370 (4) - New combo so the drain isn't so harsh here If anything that's about 10% hp the player needs at least to pass this part o.o
02:39:097 (1) - Avoid having short multiple-repeat sliders on a normal. This can be confusing to the below average player. Here's an idea for this part http://puu.sh/3wM0 Read comment on the other slider...
02:46:734 (5) - Move this 1 grid left so it isn't touching the 3 and 4 Another not perfect curve i fixed yay.

Taiko Oni
Man that speedup freaked me out lol
It's pretty darn solid

Insane
I think the main problem with the diff is the many antijumps under sliders
For example, right at the beginning 00:03:098 (3,4) - Is a simple circle under a slider
that you hit quickly. However 00:19:189 (7,8) - Is an antijump circle under a slider. Playing both one after another may confuse the player because they don't know what to expect. There's nothing technically wrong with having them, it's just something that might trip up the player.

00:16:462 (4,5,6,7,8) - Move these a grid to the right so it looks better with the 00:15:371 (6) Fixed!
00:18:098 (1,2,3) - This stream could be more straight lolwhat o.o
00:18:643 (4,5,6) - ^^
00:30:098 (3) - Move this 1 grid to the left so it's under the 1 I blame distance snap! <3
00:33:916 (5) - I'd change this slider into hitcircles. It's not a good idea to have a random 1/4 slider in a stream of circles
00:42:643 (5) - ^^ If you can explain to me why is not a good idea then i'll gladly think about it
00:47:553 (5,6,7,8) - Fix the spacing on these I blame dat one modder... lol
00:52:871 - Add a circle here. Makes more sense and plays better What is this i dont even, what the heck is supposed to go there according to you guys D: the stream is mapped to the lyrics and i dont hear any lyric there.
01:08:689 (4) - Change this slider into hitcircles. I still dont see why? i find it more fun to play that way than simple click spamming.
01:09:234 (7,8) - Try arranging these two like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/116777 , sounds and plays great Actually i noticed i needed to make the timing sections more close together instead...
01:15:780 (5) - Make this 5 not touch the 3. The problem here is it creates the illusion that 6 will be where 3 is. There's nothing not even remotely close to an approach circle near (3)
01:17:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is a good example of the antijumps becoming a problem. This is frustrating to read But Etna sliders are fun D:
01:38:825 - This break is indeed in the right place, it just feels too long. Make it as long as RJ's
Gets pretty nice, love the beat here
02:40:052 (6) - I'd replace this with circles again. Sure a large portion of the stream is sliders but it should only transition once from sliders to circles, not slider circle slider circle =/ sorry but nope (i've already explained it both of the previous times)
Nice ending


Good mapset for someone coming back to mapping, well done!
EDIT: Putting my map in here for m4m http://osu.ppy.sh/s/33197

val0108 wrote:

[Crimmi's Easy]
HP AR OD 2? <--- Hmm, ok.
02:12:370 (5,6) - I think soft sounds good.
02:21:097 (1) - ^
03:06:916 - delete timimg line? <-=--= Ok.
03:07:052 - ^