1. Cup (1.35 stars, 133 notes)
2. Grapes' Rain (3.47 stars, 248 notes)
3. Platter (2.74 stars, 243 notes)
4. Salad (1.92 stars, 161 notes)

Cup, Salad and Platter by me.

Grapes' Rain by Paranoid Grapes

1. 00:31:085 (2) - hmm, try to make it reverse slider, fits the vocal more cx
2. 01:18:098 (1) - this may confuse the newbie players, like they can start to spam moving left and right, but that's not required. change this, maybe? cx
3. 01:24:134 (1,2) - booring, well you can keep 2, just change 1 into something fun to play cx
   well nice cup, can't say much about it

1. 00:09:500 (4) - make this somehow like this 00:10:598 (1) why? well plays awkward since after reaching 4 you need to turn left immediately, not recommended for a salad
2. 00:29:988 (3) - nuu, pls make it reverse
3. 01:10:780 (3,4) - pls reduce the distance a little bit
4. 01:12:244 (3,4) - ^
5. 01:28:707 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Idk what to say about this. Well it's okay there's 1/4 patterns in salad, but pls, if you decided to make them exsist, make sure you make them easy to play, this is not easy at all, considering changing

1. 00:34:927 (6,7) - hmm, what about to increasy the distance a little bit?
2. 01:21:756 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - it plays a little bit boring. try to make some moves here

Myle wrote:

hi, mod is coming from my Queue

[Cup]

1. 00:31:085 (2) - hmm, try to make it reverse slider, fits the vocal more cx I repositioned the the slider so the curve isn;t as wonky and the next notes flow better.
2. 01:18:098 (1) - this may confuse the newbie players, like they can start to spam moving left and right, but that's not required. change this, maybe? cx You could easily just sit and catch but hopefully the new pattern has better movement.
3. 01:24:134 (1,2) - booring, well you can keep 2, just change 1 into something fun to play cx Enjoy your stream.
   well nice cup, can't say much about it Thank you.

[Salad]

1. 00:09:500 (4) - make this somehow like this 00:10:598 (1) why? well plays awkward since after reaching 4 you need to turn left immediately, not recommended for a salad Done, I wasn't pleased with that spot anyway.
2. 00:29:988 (3) - nuu, pls make it reverse The "Furu" is light in the vocals, so its fine now.
3. 01:10:780 (3,4) - pls reduce the distance a little bit Reduced to 1.80x
4. 01:12:244 (3,4) - ^ No, because the beat calls for a higher jump there and 2.00x spacing a decent distance here.
5. 01:28:707 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Idk what to say about this. Well it's okay there's 1/4 patterns in salad, but pls, if you decided to make them exsist, make sure you make them easy to play, this is not easy at all, considering changing I understand your concern but the Ranking Criteria for Salads says this "1/3 and/or 1/4 patterns can be used sparingly. Individual 1/3 and/or 1/4 patterns must not persist for more than one bar (4 and 5 objects respectively)." and my patterns only appear in this one section to it works.

[Platter]

1. 00:34:927 (6,7) - hmm, what about to increasy the distance a little bit? Tone is too low for more distance, it's fine
2. 01:21:756 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - it plays a little bit boring. try to make some moves here I get what you mean but the piano is too calm to do anything but a straight plate walk with it.

such a little mod, soz, just a nice mapset, I think Thank you, I do try to make better maps now I've been learning.

Paranoid Grapes wrote:

map

ayyy... my mapping is trahs ;-;

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SYAHME wrote:

Am I having hallucination rn?

Jusenkyo wrote:

NM as requested

General

1. Everything looks good (for now).

Cup

1. 00:08:402 (1) - You could reduce the distance, maybe prev 1.10x. Sure, why not
2. 00:13:890 (1,2) - I know you're still sounds in this slider, but it would be better if you do a repeat, would be better, so delete (2) and make (1) repeat slider. Made the change but then had to remap the next slider to make it work.
3. 00:55:415 - Maybe you could put a note here. I hear nothing here for there to be a note, even the vocal isn't strong enough
4. 01:10:963 (3) - This slider does not fit, I recommend you follow a slider repeat, as you did 01:08:037 (3) - here, to manetener consistency. Had to remap again so I could make the change.
5. 01:19:744 (2) - It is the same as mentioned above ^. No, there's a triplet there that I can hear
6. 01:29:988 (5) - You could remove this note, and put the spinner where was this note. There's a sounds that need emphasis there so I won;t change.

Salad

1. 00:01:817 (3) - I feel it would be better if you change the side. I don't know what you're asking me to do.
2. 00:09:134 (3,4) - Increases a little distance, merits a dash. I would if I had the room to fit a dash, but I dont rhythm wise.
3. 00:29:988 (3) - I feel it would look better with a repeat slider. The spacing is messed up now but okay.
4. 01:07:671 (3,4) - Reduces the distance. Done
5. 01:09:500 (3,4) - The dash is not necessary. Fine but I disagree here
6. 01:10:780 (3,4) - ^ Okay, makes sense here.

Platter

1. 00:01:085 (2,3) - You should increase the distance. Done
2. 00:17:915 (6,1) - Try putting a hdash here, if you can not, leave it as dash. Made into a dash my slider (5) and note (6) to the left a bit.
3. 00:35:293 (3,1) - ^, so, imo this slider sounds weird o,o. It's to accent the drum beats there but I can make it a non-reverse slider.
4. 00:39:134 (2,1) - Reduce the distance, probably this slider cause many shitmisses. reduced to 1.80x
5. 00:46:451 (1,2) -Board a bit these notes, but do not lose the hdash. You mean reduce distance? then done
6. 00:55:232 (4,5) - ^ ^^^.

Grape's Rain
Well, before we begin, I feel that the imbalance of notes does not look good, therefore I propose to review your diff and add notes where required. I've discussed that with Grapes as well, but thank you for pointing it out.

1. 00:14:805 (2,3) - tbh, that's me too difficult, try doing a little easier.
2. 00:17:915 (1,2) - Needs a hdash.
3. 00:24:866 (7,8) - Remove the hdash, does not fit.
4. 00:26:695 (1,2) - hdash to maintain consistency with the another suggestion.
5. 00:35:476 (1,2) - hdash.
6. 00:39:134 (3,1) - ^.
7. 00:42:061 (6,7) - ^.
8. 01:20:841 (5,6) - This is difficult, try to make the stream more vertical.
9. 01:24:317 (3,1) - Don't need hdash.
10. 01:24:591 (3,1) - ^.
11. That's all, just as mentioned in the beginning, has spaces without notes, I recommend following instruments and not all vocal, very lucky.

I hope I have helped a little, if so, let me know, I'd appreciate it.

GOOD LUCK~

1. 01:02:183 (6,1) - you should rework this pattern, make the first slider longer, currently the slider ends at a random moment and doesn't fit the music, make it follow the guy's voice and maybe add a hyper for the second word transition
2. 01:24:134 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - make the stream a bit longer to fit the background piano or whatever it is

FuZ wrote:

[Grape's Rain]

1. 01:02:183 (6,1) - you should rework this pattern, make the first slider longer, currently the slider ends at a random moment and doesn't fit the music, make it follow the guy's voice and maybe add a hyper for the second word transition remapped it in a different way
2. 01:24:134 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - make the stream a bit longer to fit the background piano or whatever it is i think its fine imo

dont give kudo

RoseusJaeger wrote:

Jusenkyo wrote:

NM as requested

General

1. Everything looks good (for now).

Cup

1. 00:08:402 (1) - You could reduce the distance, maybe prev 1.10x. Sure, why not
2. 00:13:890 (1,2) - I know you're still sounds in this slider, but it would be better if you do a repeat, would be better, so delete (2) and make (1) repeat slider. Made the change but then had to remap the next slider to make it work.
3. 00:55:415 - Maybe you could put a note here. I hear nothing here for there to be a note, even the vocal isn't strong enough
4. 01:10:963 (3) - This slider does not fit, I recommend you follow a slider repeat, as you did 01:08:037 (3) - here, to manetener consistency. Had to remap again so I could make the change.
5. 01:19:744 (2) - It is the same as mentioned above ^. No, there's a triplet there that I can hear
6. 01:29:988 (5) - You could remove this note, and put the spinner where was this note. There's a sounds that need emphasis there so I won;t change.

Salad

1. 00:01:817 (3) - I feel it would be better if you change the side. I don't know what you're asking me to do.
2. 00:09:134 (3,4) - Increases a little distance, merits a dash. I would if I had the room to fit a dash, but I dont rhythm wise.
3. 00:29:988 (3) - I feel it would look better with a repeat slider. The spacing is messed up now but okay.
4. 01:07:671 (3,4) - Reduces the distance. Done
5. 01:09:500 (3,4) - The dash is not necessary. Fine but I disagree here
6. 01:10:780 (3,4) - ^ Okay, makes sense here.

Platter

1. 00:01:085 (2,3) - You should increase the distance. Done
2. 00:17:915 (6,1) - Try putting a hdash here, if you can not, leave it as dash. Made into a dash my slider (5) and note (6) to the left a bit.
3. 00:35:293 (3,1) - ^, so, imo this slider sounds weird o,o. It's to accent the drum beats there but I can make it a non-reverse slider.
4. 00:39:134 (2,1) - Reduce the distance, probably this slider cause many shitmisses. reduced to 1.80x
5. 00:46:451 (1,2) -Board a bit these notes, but do not lose the hdash. You mean reduce distance? then done
6. 00:55:232 (4,5) - ^ ^^^.

Grape's Rain
Well, before we begin, I feel that the imbalance of notes does not look good, therefore I propose to review your diff and add notes where required. I've discussed that with Grapes as well, but thank you for pointing it out. messed with the beginning a little to add a bit more consistancy.

1. 00:14:805 (2,3) - tbh, that's me too difficult, try doing a little easier. yea i agree that was a bit ambitious on my end
2. 00:17:915 (1,2) - Needs a hdash. i think that its fine imo but if anyone else comments on it then ill change it
3. 00:24:866 (7,8) - Remove the hdash, does not fit. done
4. 00:26:695 (1,2) - hdash to maintain consistency with the another suggestion. i think its fine imo
5. 00:35:476 (1,2) - hdash. ^
6. 00:39:134 (3,1) - ^.making a hyper here would be diffucult since its snapped 1/2 so ill just increase the distance.
7. 00:42:061 (6,7) - ^. done
8. 01:20:841 (5,6) - This is difficult, try to make the stream more vertical. fixed
9. 01:24:317 (3,1) - Don't need hdash. ill keep it for now but i agree that it is a bit ambitious, ill see if anyone else says anything
10. 01:24:591 (3,1) - ^. ^
11. That's all, just as mentioned in the beginning, has spaces without notes, I recommend following instruments and not all vocal, very lucky.

I hope I have helped a little, if so, let me know, I'd appreciate it.

GOOD LUCK~

Thank you for your mod, you were helpful.

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rew0825 wrote:

Hi from My Modding Queue.

[Platter]

1. 00:43:890 (6,7) - I think between (6,7) is strange. If you see between 00:43:524 (5,6) - is look more far than (6,7). How about Ctrl+g 00:44:256 (7). Done and fixed h-dash.
2. 00:49:744 (6,7) - Remove Hdash between (6,7). I think on that rhythm is low. so Hdash is not necessary to use. There's a hard beat on (7), so it stays.
3. 00:51:207 (2,3) - How about change it to slider? the vocal of Artist is long. I think it's should use a slider Agreed, done
4. 01:28:890 (4,5,6) - Change it to same pattern 01:28:524 (1,2,3). Done and remapped a bit so h-dashes would be maintained.

[Grapes' Rain]

1. About this diff. I think it can harder You can add a note more. Listen the music and catch timing to add more note.

So short mod TWT. You can mustn't give me a kudosu . Good luck <3 Thank you, you were helpful so enjoy your kudosu.

RoseusJaeger wrote:

No, the 1/3 snap sounds awful, what are you talking about????

examination wrote:

tbh you'll find these are real 1/3 snaps if you play the song at 25% speed
in other words, most 1/2 sliders in your patterns are actually 2/3 ones.




edit: if you think 1/3 patterns doesn't fit well in ctb, you can check out Mili - A Turtle's Heart

Paranoid Grapes wrote:

why not use 1/12 snapping? :^)

Paranoid Grapes wrote:

why not use 1/12 snapping? :^)

Paranoid Grapes wrote:

map

self-modding is great isnt it?

(i probably made more problems with the map but whatever lol )

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32,192,19378,2,0,L|128:192,1,80
384,192,19744,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,20110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,288,20476,2,0,L|384:288,1,80
144,288,20841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,288,21207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,240,21573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,240,21939,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,256,22305,5,0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,22671,2,0,L|336:320,2,80
112,288,23402,2,0,L|192:288,1,80
464,224,23768,2,0,L|352:224,1,80
128,208,24134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,208,24500,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,24866,2,0,P|96:144|256:64,1,240
464,64,25598,2,0,L|378:67,1,80
112,80,25963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,80,26329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,26695,5,0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,27061,2,0,L|224:272,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,256,27427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,272,27793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,288,28159,2,0,L|384:288,1,80
112,272,28524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,176,28890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,176,29256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,176,29622,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,224,29988,2,0,L|144:224,1,80
416,240,30354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,224,30719,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,336,31085,5,0,0:0:0:0:
432,336,31451,2,0,L|384:256,1,80
112,208,31817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,208,32183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,336,32549,2,0,L|112:240,1,80
352,208,32915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,208,33280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,208,33646,2,0,P|416:128|192:128,1,320
352,160,34744,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,160,35110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
446,171,35476,5,0,0:0:0:0:
193,195,35841,2,0,P|241:291|465:339,1,320,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,352,36939,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,352,37305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,352,37671,5,0,0:0:0:0:
118,352,38037,2,0,P|34:231|139:128,1,320
411,350,39134,2,0,P|495:230|389:126,1,320
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480,192,40598,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,40963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,192,41695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,42061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,208,42427,2,0,P|187:200|208:192,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,43159,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,43524,5,8,0:0:0:0:
432,192,43890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,256,44256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,144,45354,2,0,L|112:144,1,80
464,128,45719,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,128,46085,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,320,46451,6,0,L|368:320,1,80
112,320,46817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,47183,2,0,L|336:320,1,80
32,320,47549,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,272,47915,2,0,P|304:240|336:160,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,144,48646,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,96,49012,6,0,L|176:96,1,80
448,224,49378,2,0,L|368:224,1,80
96,176,49744,2,0,P|144:256|240:256,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,320,50476,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,320,50841,6,0,L|176:320,1,80
432,256,51207,2,0,L|272:256,1,160
128,240,51756,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,240,51939,2,0,L|144:240,1,80
384,240,52305,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,128,52671,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,128,53037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,240,53402,6,0,L|144:240,1,80
384,240,53768,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,54134,2,0,L|352:192,1,80
128,192,54500,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,54866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,208,55232,6,0,L|336:208,1,80
48,144,55598,2,0,L|208:144,1,160
304,208,56146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,288,56329,2,0,L|288:288,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,208,57061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,208,57427,5,0,0:0:0:0:
64,208,57793,2,0,L|176:208,1,80
464,272,58159,2,0,L|368:272,1,80
112,224,58524,2,0,P|48:208|16:112,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,59256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,59622,6,0,L|320:192,1,80
48,224,59988,2,0,L|208:224,1,160
464,160,60719,2,0,L|384:160,1,80
128,288,61085,2,0,L|304:288,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,240,61817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,224,62183,2,0,P|368:320|80:208,1,480
192,208,63646,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,208,64012,6,0,L|320:208,1,160
192,16,64744,5,0,0:0:0:0:
128,64,64927,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,112,65110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,65293,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,208,65476,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,65659,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,304,65841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,304,66024,5,0,0:0:0:0:
368,304,66207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,304,66390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,304,66573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,304,66939,5,0,0:0:0:0:
400,256,67122,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,256,67305,2,0,L|272:256,1,80
336,320,67671,2,0,L|240:320,1,80
64,256,68037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,256,68402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,240,68768,6,0,L|160:128,1,120
320,144,69134,2,0,L|400:144,1,80
240,144,69500,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,144,69866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,144,70049,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,70415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,70598,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,208,70963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,208,71329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,240,71695,6,0,L|464:240,1,80
304,240,72061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,272,72244,2,0,L|144:272,1,80
448,288,72793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,240,72976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,320,73159,5,0,0:0:0:0:
128,272,73250,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,224,73341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,176,73433,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,128,73524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,73616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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288,208,74073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,128,74256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,74622,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,128,74988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,75354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,75537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,240,75719,6,0,L|288:240,1,80
16,256,76085,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,320,76268,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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496,256,76817,2,0,L|400:256,1,80
64,160,77183,2,0,L|144:160,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,160,77549,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,160,77915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,160,78280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,304,78646,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,304,78829,5,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,79195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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96,208,79744,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,208,80110,2,0,L|272:208,1,80
336,288,80476,5,0,0:0:0:0:
384,256,80567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,224,80659,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,256,80750,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,288,80841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,48,80933,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,80,81024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,112,81116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,80,81207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,144,81756,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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464,304,82305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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400,208,83037,5,0,0:0:0:0:
96,160,83402,2,0,L|208:160,1,80
448,160,83860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,320,84134,5,0,0:0:0:0:
416,272,84226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,224,84317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,84409,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,84500,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,96,84591,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,224,84683,5,0,0:0:0:0:
64,176,84774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,176,85963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,304,86695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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336,224,87427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,208,87793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,208,88159,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,160,88524,6,0,L|176:160,1,80
416,160,88890,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,208,88982,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,256,89073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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448,224,89622,2,0,L|336:224,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,224,89988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,90354,12,0,95841,0:0:0:0:

SYAHME wrote:

I will mod tonight, please be patience because so many mappers request before you. I have to finish mod them first.

1. 아주 NICE

1. 00:06:207 (1) - it will be good to make this a reverse slider to emphasize piano sound in the middle of this slider.
2. 00:12:610 - maybe put a hitcircle here.
3. 00:17:183 (2) - maybe make this a hitcircle only, 00:17:915 - put hitcircle here for beginning of new part.
4. 00:34:744 (2) - maybe make this a hitcircle only, 00:35:476 - put hitcircle here for beginning of new part.
5. 00:37:305 (2) - move to x:180.
6. 00:45:354 - 00:45:719 - will be nice if you can split this slider into 2 hitcircles to emphasize the vocal 'ke' & 'ru'.
7. 00:46:817 (3) - end the tail of slider 00:47:183 - here.
8. 00:49:012 (1,2) - maybe you can make these curve or horizontal a little bit.
9. 00:50:841 (1) - maybe you can end the slider tail until 00:51:024 - here, then put slider 00:51:207 - here until 00:51:573 - here.
10. 00:51:573 (2) - break this reverse slider into slider by start 00:51:939 - here until 00:52:305 - here.
11. 00:55:232 - 00:55:415 - put notes here.
12. 00:57:793 (1,3) - move to x:296.
13. 01:13:524 (4) - this anti-flow is kinda hard for new players, maybe change it to easier one.
14. 01:16:999 - 01:17:914 - put notes here, 01:18:463 - remove this. 01:18:646 - put note here too.
15. 01:19:195 (1) - reverse slider.
16. 01:18:829 (2) - maybe move to x:200.
17. 01:20:659 (1) - split this into hitcircle + slider, 01:20:658 - hitcircle & 01:20:841 - start slider here because of strong beat until 01:21:207 - here.
18. 01:21:939 (3) - reverse slider.
19. 01:24:865 - put note here.
20. 01:25:049 (1) - maybe split this reverse slider into slider + slider.
21. 01:25:963 (1) - reverse slider.
22. 01:27:975 - put note here.
23. 01:28:524 (1) - make this large reverse slider become small reverse slider at 01:28:524 - here, 01:28:707 - here & 01:28:890 - here.
24. 01:29:255 - put hitcircle here.
25. 01:29:439 (2,3,4,5) - these hitcircle doesn't suitable to emphasize the spam beat, pkease change into slider. Start slider 01:29:438 - here until 01:29:987 - here.

1. 00:02:549 (4,1) - make this spacing consistence with previous notes because the beat is same and not that strong.
2. 00:09:500 (4,5,6) - why this pattern is different than previous one, 00:08:402 (1,2,3) - here.
3. 00:23:768 (4) - maybe make this slider head closer to previous note, 00:23:402 (3) - here.
4. 00:25:963 (2) - no need to go that far.
5. 00:26:695 (1,2) - reduce some distance.
6. 00:29:988 (3,4,1) - far, maybe make the 00:31:085 (4) - hitcircle closer to 00:29:988 (3,1) - these notes.
7. 00:50:110 (7) - no need to go that far.
8. 00:56:695 (4,5) - reduce some distance.
9. 01:01:817 (5,1) - ^.
10. 01:23:037 (2,3) - this stack is not fun, please change.

1. 00:06:024 (6,1) - why not make this pattern same as 00:07:854 (5,6) - this.
2. 00:06:024 (6) - do you sure there's sound here, if you use 1/3 or 1/6 the sound is in different place.
3. 00:07:854 (5) - ^.
4. 00:09:134 (3) - why not lengthen the slider tail until 00:09:409 - here.
5. 00:10:232 (5) - ^ 00:10:506 - here.
6. 00:12:244 (4) - I can't hear sound here, 00:11:695 (3) - maybe lengthen the slider tail until 00:12:335 - here.
7. 00:12:671 - 1/3 sound here.
8. I will stop here, I can't tolerate with 1/4 beat snap divisor. The choice of beats/sounds/notes become messy, please reconsider.

1. Same as platter, remap using 1/3 or 1/6. Please reconsider.

SYAHME wrote:

M4M, from my modding queue.
[General]

1. 아주 NICE Since the full version it coming out soon, I'm probs gonna be in metadata hell again.

[Cup]

1. 00:06:207 (1) - it will be good to make this a reverse slider to emphasize piano sound in the middle of this slider. Agreed, made it a bit vertical as well since the tone is lower here as well.
2. 00:12:610 - maybe put a hitcircle here. Sure, I didn't hear anything there before.
3. 00:17:183 (2) - maybe make this a hitcircle only, 00:17:915 - put hitcircle here for beginning of new part. Done
4. 00:34:744 (2) - maybe make this a hitcircle only, 00:35:476 - put hitcircle here for beginning of new part. The held out tone is too prominent for me to ignore right now. So, no change.
5. 00:37:305 (2) - move to x:180. Sure, I guess.
6. 00:45:354 - 00:45:719 - will be nice if you can split this slider into 2 hitcircles to emphasize the vocal 'ke' & 'ru'. Good idea
7. 00:46:817 (3) - end the tail of slider 00:47:183 - here.
8. 00:49:012 (1,2) - maybe you can make these curve or horizontal a little bit. Tilted (2) for more emphasis, but (1) seems fine for now.
9. 00:50:841 (1) - maybe you can end the slider tail until 00:51:024 - here, then put slider 00:51:207 - here until 00:51:573 - here. Did something similar
10. 00:51:573 (2) - break this reverse slider into slider by start 00:51:939 - here until 00:52:305 - here. Did something different.
11. 00:55:232 - 00:55:415 - put notes here. Sure
12. 00:57:793 (1,3) - move to x:296. Done
13. 01:13:524 (4) - this anti-flow is kinda hard for new players, maybe change it to easier one. Flipped (5) and (6) horizontally and repositioned them
14. 01:16:999 - 01:17:914 - put notes here (Now, I have to fix combos, firetruck), 01:18:463 - remove this. (okay)/color] 01:18:646 - put note here too. Tried another think to fix density. But BNs probs gonna wreck me later for it.
15. 01:19:195 (1) - reverse slider. Mapped notes instead because reverse slider will funk up flow/
16. 01:18:829 (2) - maybe move to x:200. That will force a dash, so no.
17. 01:20:659 (1) - split this into hitcircle + slider, 01:20:658 - hitcircle & 01:20:841 - start slider here because of strong beat until 01:21:207 - here. Sure
18. 01:21:939 (3) - reverse slider. Sure
19. 01:24:865 - put note here. Again, note density issue, so I'm putting my foot down for this one with a hard no.
20. 01:25:049 (1) - maybe split this reverse slider into slider + slider. Sure
21. 01:25:963 (1) - reverse slider. Did something different.
22. 01:27:975 - put note here. Note density issue, so no.
23. 01:28:524 (1) - make this large reverse slider become small reverse slider at 01:28:524 - here, 01:28:707 - here & 01:28:890 - here. probs did it
24. 01:29:255 - put hitcircle here. Note density too high if I do. so no
25. 01:29:439 (2,3,4,5) - these hitcircle doesn't suitable to emphasize the spam beat, pkease change into slider. Start slider 01:29:438 - here until 01:29:987 - here. I don;t really like that idea too well, but I'll keep it a stream of notes with better placement

[Salad]

1. 00:02:549 (4,1) - make this spacing consistence with previous notes because the beat is same and not that strong. Sure
2. 00:09:500 (4,5,6) - why this pattern is different than previous one, 00:08:402 (1,2,3) - here. I was drunk, fixed
3. 00:23:768 (4) - maybe make this slider head closer to previous note, 00:23:402 (3) - here. Reduced
4. 00:25:963 (2) - no need to go that far. it's 1.70x now
5. 00:26:695 (1,2) - reduce some distance. 1.70x now
6. 00:29:988 (3,4,1) - far, maybe make the 00:31:085 (4) - hitcircle closer to 00:29:988 (3,1) - these notes. reduced
7. 00:50:110 (7) - no need to go that far. Reduced
8. 00:56:695 (4,5) - reduce some distance. Reduced AND fixed an overlapping slider I missed.
9. 01:01:817 (5,1) - ^. Reduced
10. 01:23:037 (2,3) - this stack is not fun, please change. Hopefully it's better now.

[Platter]

1. 00:06:024 (6,1) - why not make this pattern same as 00:07:854 (5,6) - this. Because (1) is heavier beat and the other pattern doesn't shift in tone at all. so no change.
2. 00:06:024 (6) - do you sure there's sound here, if you use 1/3 or 1/6 the sound is in different place. Sounds fine to me
3. 00:07:854 (5) - ^.
4. 00:09:134 (3) - why not lengthen the slider tail until 00:09:409 - here. Made it a 1/3 dash
5. 00:10:232 (5) - ^ 00:10:506 - here.
6. 00:12:244 (4) - I can't hear sound here, 00:11:695 (3) - maybe lengthen the slider tail until 00:12:335 - here. There's a beat there
7. 00:12:671 - 1/3 sound here. yeah
8. I will stop here, I can't tolerate with 1/4 beat snap divisor. The choice of beats/sounds/notes become messy, please reconsider. I cannot hear the 1/3 patterns unless they're pointed out because I'm clinically beat deaf (makes mapping difficult too). I'm just as frustrated as you are with it now that not just you and exam, but also Mbomb have told me basically, "Yeah, change it, you dope". Unless all instances where it's appropriate are pointed out, I can't do much about it.

[Grapes' Rain]

1. Same as platter, remap using 1/3 or 1/6. Please reconsider. I talked to him about, he'll get around to it

Good luck on ranking this. I'm thirstier than Ascendance for getting this ranked. Thanks.

xi-False wrote:

「M4M」


I'm really bad when it comes to making or modding Easy Difficulties
so im not sure if I should mod the Cup or Salad. Fair enough

Platter

-Is there a way to Emphasize this note 00:35:841 (1) - more? Not really, it's fine as is since it's a held out note
perhaps you can move this 00:34:927 (2) - note to x:300 and then select this slider 00:35:293 (3) - Ctrl+H and move to x:400 It's really awkward flow wise if I do that.


-This jump 01:25:963 (4,5) - can use a Nerf?, I'm not sure if it's too hard for a platter
Moving this note 01:25:963 (4) - to x:428 should make it fine I nerfed it a bit but in my own way

-same with this 01:27:427 (6,7) - Nerf it? Nerfed in my own way
and you can probably move this 01:27:610 (7) - to x:276

Grape's Rain

-This pattern 00:00:720 (1,2) - is the same as these two 00:02:915 (1,2) - 00:04:012 (1,2) -
But this doesnt have a hyper jump 00:00:720 (1,2) - i would recommend to keep them all the same either all hyper jumps or none hyper jumps
Me personally i would move this note 00:01:085 (2) - to x:96 and 00:01:451 (3) - to x:304


-I would also recommend to move this slider 00:14:988 (3) - to x:228
making it so you have to hold the dash button just as long as this jump 00:13:890 (1,2) - makes it feel better

-I believe for this section you are following the person singing 00:17:915 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
if you are you should take off this note 00:21:939 (12) - and maybe you can make these two notes 00:21:573 (11,1) - into one slider

-Same with this section 00:22:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
This note 00:26:329 (10) - doesn't follow the person singing but its up to you to decide if you want it there or not

- ^ 00:30:719 (12) - Delete it if you want, just a recommendation

-You could also add notes here 00:34:652 - 00:35:018 - 00:35:384 - make sure beat snap divisor is at 1/4
these extra notes can make for some fun hyper jumps

-you should move this note 01:10:598 (7) - to x:96

Good Luck Paranoid and Roseus!

RoseusJaeger wrote:

xi-False wrote:

「M4M」


I'm really bad when it comes to making or modding Easy Difficulties
so im not sure if I should mod the Cup or Salad. Fair enough

Platter

-Is there a way to Emphasize this note 00:35:841 (1) - more? Not really, it's fine as is since it's a held out note
perhaps you can move this 00:34:927 (2) - note to x:300 and then select this slider 00:35:293 (3) - Ctrl+H and move to x:400 It's really awkward flow wise if I do that.

To be continued.

-This jump 01:25:963 (4,5) - can use a Nerf?, I'm not sure if it's too hard for a platter
Moving this note 01:25:963 (4) - to x:428 should make it fine

-same with this 01:27:427 (6,7) - Nerf it?
and you can probably move this 01:27:610 (7) - to x:276

Grape's Rain

-This pattern 00:00:720 (1,2) - is the same as these two 00:02:915 (1,2) - 00:04:012 (1,2) -
But this doesnt have a hyper jump 00:00:720 (1,2) - i would recommend to keep them all the same either all hyper jumps or none hyper jumps
Me personally i would move this note 00:01:085 (2) - to x:96 and 00:01:451 (3) - to x:304 ok


-I would also recommend to move this slider 00:14:988 (3) - to x:228
making it so you have to hold the dash button just as long as this jump 00:13:890 (1,2) - makes it feel better ok

-I believe for this section you are following the person singing 00:17:915 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
if you are you should take off this note 00:21:939 (12) - theres a piano beat and maybe you can make these two notes 00:21:573 (11,1) - into one slider

-Same with this section 00:22:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
This note 00:26:329 (10) -piano beat doesn't follow the person singing but its up to you to decide if you want it there or not

- ^ 00:30:719 (12) - Delete it if you want, just a recommendation piano beat

-You could also add notes here 00:34:652 - 00:35:018 - 00:35:384 - make sure beat snap divisor is at 1/4nah
these extra notes can make for some fun hyper jumps

-you should move this note 01:10:598 (7) - to x:96ok

Good Luck Paranoid and Roseus!

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Ascendance wrote:

yo grapes start putting a

spoilerbox on your gd code please

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Xinely wrote:

Roseus

General:
- begining until 00:08:037 - can add whistle for every stanza. the hitsound is </3
- cymbal sound like 00:46:817 - etc can add finish to emphasis more

Cup :
- according modding assitant, there are unsnapped
- 00:08:402 (1) - x:312. can use bigger spacing to emphasis the clap hitsound
- 00:11:695 (1) - x:208. ^ (but emphasis the stanza). also imo this slider is too hard for newbie due too curve for red node one (it needs fast response to catch all droplets)
- 00:14:988 (2) - inconsistency spacing.. the difference spacing is too real, it feels weird when play. especially the music has clap which considered as strong sound. i would say move to x:396 with nerf spacing after it for next objects
- 00:25:963 (2) - actually the natural flow to catch this is in x:168 rip lol
- 00:31:085 (2) - its weird after 00:31:451 - we dont need to move ryuuta due no movement.. try make consistent movement on your slider to make ryuuta moves slowly to catch all droplets ><
- 00:32:549 (4) - x:308.. consistent spacing ><
- 00:39:134 (2) - imo this slider is too hard for newbie due too curve on the red node
- 00:40:232 (1) - cymbal here. you can use bigger spacing for x:224
- 00:45:719 (3) - can use bigger spacing like x:120 to emphasis vocal
- 00:47:549 (4) - try keep consistency of spacing D: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5924766
- 00:49:744 (2) - much better with horizontal slider imo. to emphasis the vocal on 00:50:110 - with movement
- 00:52:305 (5,6,7,1,2) - why variation spacing with 1,2x and 0,8x here? D:
- 01:12:061 (4) - 2 circles with 1,2x spacing would be nice to emphasis double cymbal
- 01:12:793 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - awwww nooopeeeeeeeeeeee.. Cup should have much of 1/1.. less 1/2.. keep rhythm is easy to follow for fellow newbies
- 01:24:134 (1,2,3,4,1,2,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

Salad :
- 00:12:793 (1) - try x:88? you do too many movement to right.. that makes boring qwq
- 00:41:329 (2) - try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5924876, inconistency spacing between (2) and (3) is too far when music is something that sound similar
- 00:55:598 (2,3) - dunno why but that sound weird for me. i prefer to combine them as a slider so it follows vocal properly
- 01:04:378 (3) - cute slider art but 01:05:476 - is cymbal sound. skip it = ded for me </3
- 01:09:683 (4) - change to a circle for 01:09:865 - . there is nothing sound for 01:09:682 -
- 01:10:963 (4) - 1/1 slider. no important sound for red tick. if you can make it more simple. why not :C
- 01:13:890 - till end well i have to say you map rhythm like platter here. not salad.. should be more simple :C

Platter :
- 00:09:500 (4) - a dash would be nice here. x:284?
- 00:10:110 - a sound here. why not map it?
- 00:11:207 - 00:15:598 - ^
- 00:14:439 (4) - i think you better start the slider at 00:14:500 - instead due drum is stronger than guitar snare
- 00:31:451 (1) - i think you can drag red node to left a bit. the movement is a bit weird to me ><
- 00:34:622 - strong drum. dont skip it please
- 00:34:927 (2) - no sound at 1/6 instead on 00:34:988 - so better move the slider to that time
- 00:35:293 (3) - ayyy no 1/2.. the sound starts at 00:35:354 -
- well too many rhythm issues. you have to know if this song is mapped for 1/3 :C

For Rain 1/3 starts from 00:09:500 - so 00:09:500 - until 00:18:280 - should be mapped with 1/3 . also imo AR is too fast here due no complex rhythms. try 8,8 instead

fixed 1/3 timing issue, didnt change ar since i felt that it didnt match the spread and it feels wierd.
hope this helped you ><

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Xinely wrote:

Roseus

General:
- beginning until 00:08:037 - can add whistle for every stanza. the hitsound is </3 I'll try to find a good whistle hitsound out of the ones JBH gave me to look through. Also, i forgot what the hell a stanza is because I'm dumb. I know the hitnormal and clap are fine because I checked them personally to make sure they were rankable.
- cymbal sound like 00:46:817 - etc can add finish to emphasis more Let me find one first ;-;

Cup :
- according modding assitant, there are unsnapped I didn't find any that were unsnapped through AiMod
- 00:08:402 (1) - x:312. can use bigger spacing to emphasis the clap hitsound Moved to X=300 because 1.4x feels a bit much for me.
- 00:11:695 (1) - x:208. ^ (but emphasis the stanza). also imo this slider is too hard for newbie due too curve for red node one (it needs fast response to catch all droplets) I tilted the slider and moved as directed so it's not as harsh to newbies.
- 00:14:988 (2) - inconsistency spacing.. the difference spacing is too real, it feels weird when play. especially the music has clap which considered as strong sound. i would say move to x:396 with nerf spacing after it for next objects I moved the slider a it for better spacing.
- 00:25:963 (2) - actually the natural flow to catch this is in x:168 rip lol I dont like how it stacks, but done
- 00:31:085 (2) - its weird after 00:31:451 - we dont need to move ryuuta due no movement.. try make consistent movement on your slider to make ryuuta moves slowly to catch all droplets >< Had to remap to do so
- 00:32:549 (4) - x:308.. consistent spacing >< ^Had to remap
- 00:39:134 (2) - imo this slider is too hard for newbie due too curve on the red node Okay
- 00:40:232 (1) - cymbal here. you can use bigger spacing for x:224 remapped
- 00:45:719 (3) - can use bigger spacing like x:120 to emphasis vocal Moved to X=139 because otherwise it's overspaced.
- 00:47:549 (4) - try keep consistency of spacing D: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5924766 Straightened out slider
- 00:49:744 (2) - much better with horizontal slider imo. to emphasis the vocal on 00:50:110 - with movement
- 00:52:305 (5,6,7,1,2) - why variation spacing with 1,2x and 0,8x here? D: This is the match the rise in vocal, so no change
- 01:12:061 (4) - 2 circles with 1,2x spacing would be nice to emphasis double cymbal It's fine as is because sounds arent that strong
- 01:12:793 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - awwww nooopeeeeeeeeeeee.. Cup should have much of 1/1.. less 1/2.. keep rhythm is easy to follow for fellow newbies Tell that to past modders, made a could changes
- 01:24:134 (1,2,3,4,1,2,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ Same...

Salad :
- 00:12:793 (1) - try x:88? you do too many movement to right.. that makes boring qwq It's fine, it keeps with rhythm consistancy
- 00:41:329 (2) - try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5924876, inconistency spacing between (2) and (3) is too far when music is something that sound similar Did something similar
- 00:55:598 (2,3) - dunno why but that sound weird for me. i prefer to combine them as a slider so it follows vocal properly Changed a bit
- 01:04:378 (3) - cute slider art but 01:05:476 - is cymbal sound. skip it = ded for me </3 I shortened slider and added another slider.
- 01:09:683 (4) - change to a circle for 01:09:865 - . there is nothing sound for 01:09:682 - Sounds like there's a piano there
- 01:10:963 (4) - 1/1 slider. no important sound for red tick. if you can make it more simple. why not :C The sound is important because it's one of the more unique ones. There's no need to make it simpler when it's already simple enough.
- 01:13:890 - till end well i have to say you map rhythm like platter here. not salad.. should be more simple :C It's fine as is unless you get more specific because i don't know what you're referring to.

Platter :
- 00:09:500 (4) - a dash would be nice here. x:284? Absolutely not. 1/3 dashes as not allowed at this bpm. I would think a BN would know that
- 00:10:110 - a sound here. why not map it? There is not sound there, what?
- 00:11:207 - 00:15:598 - ^ ??? Um, no, there is not sound there. I'm confused.
- 00:14:439 (4) - i think you better start the slider at 00:14:500 - instead due drum is stronger than guitar snare Yeah
- 00:31:451 (1) - i think you can drag red node to left a bit. the movement is a bit weird to me >< okay
- 00:34:622 - strong drum. dont skip it please Did something similar, but caught beat
- 00:34:927 (2) - no sound at 1/6 instead on 00:34:988 - so better move the slider to that time Okay
- 00:35:293 (3) - ayyy no 1/2.. the sound starts at 00:35:354 - Okay
- well too many rhythm issues. you have to know if this song is mapped for 1/3 :C The problem is I'm beat deaf and physically cannot hear the beats. It's hard enough to map let alone get every single rhythm right because the song is gonna sound different to me every time I listen to it. So if it's not consistent, I'm sorry. Unless ALL instances are pointed out to me, it sounds like 1/2 and 1/4 to me.

For Rain 1/3 starts from 00:09:500 - so 00:09:500 - until 00:18:280 - should be mapped with 1/3 . also imo AR is too fast here due no complex rhythms. try 8,8 instead Talked with Grapes about it, we're getting a second opinion about the AR since I agree on the AR issue but he doesn't

hope this helped you >< Thank you, it was somewhat helpful

MickeyTran wrote:

Here's the NM that you requested

General

All good atm. I'll be back in metadata hell soon enough when full version of song comes out,

Cup

I'd make Cup a little easier tbh. Some distancing issues like:

01:01:451 (5,6,1) - This feels weird to play in my opinion. I would make 01:01:817 (6,1) - more distance and 01:01:451 (5,6) - shorter distance Agreed, I hope the shifting around I did makes it play better.
01:12:793 (1,2,3) - I wouldn't really use 1/2 notes for this, but id rather delete 01:12:793 (1,3) - because it just doesn't fit with the song. Kind of overmapped for cup I made it a slider so it still catches the main beats
01:17:183 (2) - Don't repeat the slider, and drag 01:17:914 (3) - to the red tick because i feel like the part can make more sense. The repeat is tp follow the snare of the drums But I did move the note

Important stuff:
01:19:194 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - I'm sorry but too many 1/2 notes tbh. Can you try remapping it in a different pattern because it doesn't make it a Cup difficulty if you spam too many 1/2 notes :c For example I would do this:


I made one of the triplets a slider.

NC issues:
00:30:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too many combos, i'd consider NC on 00:31:817 (3) -
00:49:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Wayyy too many combos. You should NC 00:50:841 (1) -
00:55:232 (3) - NC
01:08:037 (3) - NC
01:15:902 (1) - NC
01:20:841 (2) - NC
01:26:694 (4) - NC

Done

Salad

Note: I think i'll fix NC issues for Salad for now.

00:48:646 (5) - NC
00:53:037 (1) - NC
00:57:793 (1) - NC

All Done

Platter

Too much left-right movement in the beginning of the song ;w;

Here's to show how much you use the zig zag or the left right movement pattern:
00:06:024 (6,1,2,3,4) - This plays fine, but I did nerf the spacing slightly
00:10:598 (1,2,3) - The only argument I see for this is the flow from the previous slider would suck, but the pattern itself plays fine and gives the piano emphasis.
00:12:671 (6,7,1,2,3) - There's not much else I can do with this since it's consistent to the previous patterns and adds the needed emphasis to the piano
00:14:500 (4,5,1,2,3) - I did something
00:18:280 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Honestly too much left right here Did some repositioning

Ok ok I didn't want to put too much time stamp to frustrate or stress you a little. I know there are more patterns that look like this, but just a change in some patterns and the map will improve to make it more fun for other players. An essay mod wont stress me any but thanks.

I hope it's helpful! >< It was, thank you

Sinnoh wrote:

First mod queue post!

Cup
00:27:061 (1) - Should this be a reverse slider? Two syllables
00:52:305 (2) - Put in the exact center between 00:51:207 (1) - and 00:53:402 (1). Should look nicer
00:52:305 (2) - ^ but with middle of slider 00:52:305 (2) - and 00:53:037 (4) -
00:53:037 (4,2) - Could give them the same x coordinate.
01:21:938 (3,4) - Just curious as to why those are different angles

Salad
00:06:207 (3) - For the intro, I would suggest keep it cup difficulty just because the song is lighter, no dashes until the drum kicks in
00:16:817 (4) - Curious to why this one is further
00:46:451 (1) - Change beatsnap to 1/3, increase slider length

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00:51:207 (2) - If you're following the lyrics, change to 1/3 and move it back one tick

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00:55:232 (1) - ^^
00:59:622 (1) - ^
Rhythm Stuff: Are you following a beat or lyrics on this level, if it's lyrics, some of the curve sliders should be reverse and vice versa
00:20:476 (1) - ^
00:23:768 (4) - ^
00:24:866 (5) - ^

Platter
00:12:183 (4) - This circle feels extremely out of place
00:13:159 (1) - Only double clap on the diff
00:39:134 (2) - Slider too long
00:57:793 (5,6,1) - Consider splitting into four sliders like so

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Kinda tired, did platter last, will finish the rest of it tomorrow.

Rain
Still not too good at playing rain, please doubt what I say here.
It's quite difficult to react to most of the fruits at the start. Its low note density + random placement is making me also agree that it needs a lower AR. I didn't read the other mods about AR until after noticing it in game, so add my opinion to this discussion. ok fine ill change.
00:26:695 (1) - Too close, or make spacing even k
00:28:159 (1) - Double check hitsound pls ask roseus for that one buddy
01:13:159 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - If you ctrl-g this pattern, it makes the initial hyperdash much easier to follow (and raises the difficulty by 0.05* for some reason) done
01:16:451 (4) - If you move this to x=208, it makes walking from 2,3,4 consistent, and becomes clearer you need to dash to 01:16:817 (1) remapped
01:25:598 (1) - Bit too far after that hard part i rhink its fine imo.

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320,160,83860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,320,84134,5,0,0:0:0:0:
416,272,84226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,224,84317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,84409,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,84500,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,96,84591,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,224,84683,5,0,0:0:0:0:
64,176,84774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,128,84866,2,0,L|128:128,1,80
304,112,85231,2,0,L|192:112,1,80
448,160,85598,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,176,85963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,304,86329,2,0,L|336:304,1,80
48,320,86694,2,0,L|128:320,1,80
384,304,87061,6,0,L|464:304,1,80
128,320,87426,2,0,L|48:320,1,80
384,208,87793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,208,88159,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,160,88524,6,0,L|336:160,1,80
96,160,88890,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,208,88982,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,256,89073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,288,89256,2,0,L|304:288,1,80
64,224,89622,2,0,L|176:224,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,224,89988,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,90354,12,0,95841,0:0:0:0: