1. EZ - 4Key (1,44 stars, 585 notes)
2. HD - 4Key (3,01 stars, 1646 notes)
3. MX - 4Key (3,86 stars, 2127 notes)
4. NM - 4Key (2,19 stars, 999 notes)

My 2nd Beatmap
Reference

Status's Log

Bubble by Protastic101
Popped by Maxus
Rebubble by Protastic101
Qualified by Maxus
Disqualified by pishifat
Rebubble by Protastic101
Requalified by Maxus
Disqualified by Cryptic
Rebubble by Protastic101
Requalified by Maxus

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HEY BOIZZZ :v

Agis- wrote:

Mod request from chat-in game

EZ

1. 00:06:904 (6904|1) - pindah ke 00:07:257 - trus add note di 00:06:904 - 00:07:080 - 00:07:786 -
2. 00:08:139 (8139|3) - pindah ke 00:08:669 - trus add note di 00:08:139 - 00:08:316 - 00:08:492 - 00:09:198 -
3. 00:09:551 (9551|2) - pindah ke 00:10:080 - trus release LN nya di 00:10:610 - dan add note di 00:09:551 - 00:09:727 - 00:09:904 - 00:10:610 -
4. 00:10:786 (10786|3) - harusnya di 00:10:963 - trus releasenya tetep sambungin ke LN berikutnya
5. untuk masalah pattern yang 00:12:375 - dan seterusnya samakan dengan poin 1 - 3, aku rasa udh cukup paham (cukup tandai suara "tak" nya)
6. add note di 00:16:963 - 00:17:139 -
7. aku saranin double not dengan suara drum "tak" seperti 00:19:080 (19080|1,19080|2) - jadiin single not aja untuk diff EZ
8. 00:17:669 (17669|2) - ini kalo LN nya mau digunakan buat ganti nada drum yg 1/4 mending di release sampe nada drum itu berhenti, yaitu di 00:18:022 -
9. 00:22:963 (22963|3) - ini juga masalahnya sama kaya yg diatas, kalo LN nya ini ngikuti nada belakangnya, seharusnya di release di 00:23:669 -
10. 00:26:492 (26492|3) - aku saranin gausah pake LN, mending samain kek not not sebelumnya, pake 1/2 not
11. 00:28:610 (28610|1) - kalo LN yg ini mending pindah ke 00:28:963 - trus release LN nya di 00:29:316 - lalu add not di 00:28:610 - 00:28:786 -
12. 00:34:257 (34257|2) - mending release nya di 00:34:963 -
13. 00:39:904 (39904|0) - untuk yg ini samakan kayak poin kedua diatas dari poin ini dan seterusnya isu semacam ini cukup disamakan saja
14. 00:40:610 (40610|2) - jadikan short note lalu add not di 00:40:963 - alias tick putih
15. 00:41:845 - add not disini , trus 00:42:022 (42022|0) - jadiin short not lalu add not di 00:42:198 -
16. 00:43:257 (43257|3) - samakan kayak poin kedua diatas dari poin ini dan seterusnya isu semacam ini cukup disamakan saja
17. 00:50:492 (50492|0) - ini release di 00:50:845 - ini jadiin short not trus add not di tick putih
18. 00:54:198 (54198|0) - pindah ke 00:54:375 -
19. 00:56:139 (56139|2) - release di 00:56:669 - dan add not di 00:56:492 -
20. add not di 00:57:551 -
21. 00:59:845 (59845|0) - delete, kalo mode mania lebih baik ikuti suara instrumen, jangan vokal, jadi add not di 01:00:022 -
22. 01:01:786 (61786|1) - release di 01:02:139 -
23. 01:02:669 (62669|3) - release di 01:03:198 -
24. 01:07:433 (67433|0) - LN sambung dg LN berikutnya trus LN berikutnya sambung dengan short not di thick putih
25. 01:13:080 (73080|3) - jadikan short not trus add not di 01:13:257 -
26. 01:13:786 (73786|0,74139|0) - jadikan short not aja
27. 01:15:198 - add not
28. 01:16:257 - ^
29. 01:19:786 - ^
30. 01:25:786 (85786|2) - release dan add not di 01:26:139 -
31. 01:28:610 (88610|1) - ^
32. 01:31:433 (91433|0) - ^
33. 01:34:610 - add not
34. 01:36:375 - ^
35. 01:36:727 - ^
36. 01:37:080 (97080|1) - release sampai tick putih
37. 01:39:375 (99375|1) - ^
38. 01:41:316 (101316|2) - ^
39. 01:42:727 - add not
40. 01:45:198 - ^
41. 01:46:963 (106963|1) - release sampai tick putih
42. 01:48:198 (108198|2) - pindah ke 01:48:375 - trus release di tick yg sama seperti awalnya
43. 01:49:786 - add not
44. 01:54:375 - ^
45. 01:56:845 - ^
46. 01:57:198 (117198|3,117551|2,117904|1) - jadiin short not semua
47. 01:58:610 - add not
48. 01:59:139 (119139|1) - release sampai tick putih
49. 02:04:257 - add not
50. 02:08:492 - 02:09:198 - 02:10:610 - add not
51. 02:10:963 (130963|3) - release sampai tick putih dan add not di 02:11:316 -
52. 02:11:669 - 02:12:022 - add not
53. 02:12:375 (132375|0) - sama kayak poin kedua keatas dari poin ini
54. 02:16:610 (136610|0) - ^
55. 02:20:845 (140845|0) - ^
56. 02:21:551 - add not
57. 02:29:316 (149316|0) - sama kayak poin kedua keatas dari poin ini
58. 02:30:551 - add not
59. 02:33:198 - ^
60. 02:35:139 - add not lalu ubah LN nya jadi short LN
61. 02:35:669 (155669|2) - release sampai tick putih
62. 02:40:610 (160610|2) - ^
63. 02:41:492 - add not
64. 02:42:904 - ^
65. 02:44:316 - ^
66. 02:45:727 (165727|1) - release sampai tick putih
    banyak kesalahan (terutama ghost note) =.=

MX

Untuk MX, aku saranin suara 'tak' jadiin triple note dan yg seperti ini 00:07:433 (7433|2,7433|0,7433|3) - jadikan double aja, sementara untuk cymbal jadikan triple (saran ini berlaku di setiap pattern, baik stream atau 1/2 beat biasa)

1. 00:06:375 - add LN sampai tick putih
2. 00:11:051 (11051|2,11227|2,11404|1,11580|1,11757|3,11933|3) - ghost note (?) , delete aja
3. 00:23:669 - add note di col 4 dan 1 untuk cymbal
4. 00:27:551 (27551|1) - pindah ke 4 untuk control yg lebih enak
5. 00:29:316 - add note di 4 untuk cymbal
6. 00:40:433 (40433|1) - pindah ke 3 lalu 00:40:522 - add note di 2
7. 00:54:375 - add note di 4
8. 00:54:639 - ^, di 3
9. 01:00:022 - ^, di 4
10. 01:00:286 - ^, di 2
11. 01:15:022 - delete note di col 2
12. 01:21:198 (81198|2) - pindah ke 1
13. 01:30:375 - add note di 1
14. 01:31:433 - add dua note di 3 dan 4 utk cymbal
15. 01:33:198 - add note di 1
16. 01:33:904 - ^
17. 01:34:257 - ^
18. 01:34:610 - ^, di 4
19. 01:35:316 - ^, di 1
20. 01:39:375 (99375|2,99375|1) - release di tick putih dan 01:39:551 - add note di 1
21. 01:43:080 - add note di 1
22. 01:43:786 - ^, di 4
23. 01:44:492 - ^, di 1
24. 01:45:198 - add dua note di 1 dan 2
25. 01:45:551 - add 2 note
26. 01:46:610 - add note di 1
27. 01:47:492 - ^, di 4
28. 01:48:022 - untuk yg ini, kenapa tidak jadikan seperti ini
29. 01:57:198 - add note di 3
30. 02:20:492 - saranku jadikan seperti ini
31. 02:30:551 - add note di 2
32. 02:30:639 - ^, di 3
33. 02:30:727 - ^, di 4
    oke bagus pattern jumpstreamnya, terutama yang di akhir ^^

Good Luck om o/

- Ly0572 - wrote:

hi nyadow~

Noob mod here

|1|2|3|4|

ez

00:06:375 - why not put note here
00:07:963 (7963|2) - remove
00:09:375 (9375|0) - ^
00:12:551 (12551|1) - ^
00:13:433 - add note to 3
00:13:433 (13433|2) - add to 1 or 4
00:15:022 (15022|3) - remove
00:15:375 (15375|0) - ^
00:16:610 (16610|1) - ^
00:16:610 - add to 1
00:16:786 - add to 2
00:16:963 (16963|2) - move to 4
00:17:139 (17139|0) - move to 3
00:17:139 (17139|2) - add to 2
00:19:433 (19433|2) - move to 4
00:20:845 (20845|1) - move to 1
00:21:198 (21198|0) - move to 3
00:24:727 (24727|3) - move to 3
00:26:669 (26669|0,27022|3,27375|2) - better removed
00:28:963 (28963|1) - move to 1
00:28:963 (28963|0) - add to 2 or 3
00:33:198 (33198|3) - move to 1 or 2
00:33:551 (33551|0) - move to 4
00:33:551 (33551|3) - add to 3
00:42:198 (42198|0) - move to 4
00:43:080 (43080|1) - move to 1
00:43:257 (43257|3) - move to 3
00:43:257 - add t o 2
00:43:610 (43610|2) - move to 1
00:43:786 (43786|0) - move to 3
00:44:669 - add two note here maybe 1 & 4
00:44:845 (44845|1) - remove
00:44:845 - note to 3
00:45:022 - note to 2
00:46:080 (46080|0) - remove
00:46:080 - add two note here maybe 1 & 4
00:46:257 - add to 2
00:46:433 (46433|1) - move to 3
00:46:963 (46963|3) - move to 2
00:47:492 (47492|1) - remove
00:47:492 - add two note here maybe 1 & 2
00:47:669 - add to 4
00:47:845 (47845|0) - move to 3
00:48:022 - add to 2
00:48:375 (48375|2) - remove
00:48:375 - note to 3
00:51:022 (51022|0) - remove
00:51:198 - note anywhere here
01:04:257 (64257|2) - move to 2
01:05:669 (65669|1) - move to 3
01:07:080 (67080|2) - ^
02:21:375 (141375|0) - move to 4

nm

00:06:375 - why not put note here
00:12:904 - add to 1
00:13:786 - ^ 2
00:14:316 - ^ 1
00:15:727 - ^ 2
00:26:492 (26492|3) - remove
00:26:492 - add to 3
00:26:845 - ^ to 4
00:27:198 - ^ to 1
02:21:551 - add anywhere here

hd

00:06:375 - why not put note here

mx

00:06:375 - why not put note here

Ilham wrote:

hi~ irc about EZNM icon

ngeeng

19:08 Ilham: eh sudah jadi diff reference nya buat eznm nya
19:08 Ilham: puu.sh/qbzKI/9c304a0071.rar
19:08 Ilham: https://puu.sh/qbzKI/9c304a0071.rar
19:08 Ilham: EZ 1.44 NM 2.07
19:09 Syadow-: wogh :v ntapz thanks mas xD
19:09 Ilham: udah paham open ref kan?
19:10 Syadow-: maksud ?
19:10 *Syadow- is editing capitaro - Tenshinranman Haikara Hime [NM ref]
19:11 Ilham: kamu buka EZ trus klik file -> open difficulty -> as reference
19:11 Ilham: buka yang EZ ref
19:12 Ilham: nanti tinggal cocokin
19:12 Ilham: sama selfmodmu sendiri
19:12 Syadow-: weh bisa gitu anjir
19:13 Ilham: ok good luck

genkicho wrote:

Fast Mod
MX
00:11:139 - 00:11:845 it would be better if 3 2 3 2 3
00:15:198 add 1
00:15:727 - 00:16:610 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5680904
00:17:139 add 1
00:18:110 delete
00:19:522 delete
00:19:874 delete
00:22:522 add 1
00:28:698 00:28:874 delete
00:29:669 00:30:022 dan sejenisnya kok jadi triple
00:57:022 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5680940

note : MX agak gangerti gw ama notesnya D:

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

Hapus Source Vocaloid
Taruh di tags
*no kudosu
I'll mod this asap :^)

erlinadewi- wrote:

mark 4 mod

IRC

20:15 Syadow-: mbak itu nya sudah
20:15 erlinadewi-: oh ya
20:17 erlinadewi-: oh kmu baru ngemod map?
20:18 Syadow-: maksud mbak ?
20:21 *erlinadewi- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016101 capitaro - Tenshinranman Haikara Hime [EZ]]
20:21 *Syadow- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016101 capitaro - Tenshinranman Haikara Hime [EZ]]
20:23 Syadow-: awal2 bingung naruh note dmana ,-,
20:23 erlinadewi-: bntr2
20:23 erlinadewi-: yg tadi ya
20:23 Syadow-: iya
20:23 erlinadewi-: 00:01:430 (1430|2) - ini ghost note ya
20:24 erlinadewi-: eh ada suara disana
20:24 erlinadewi-: wkwkwk
20:24 Syadow-: :v wkwkw
20:25 erlinadewi-: 00:03:195 (3195|3) - gimana klo ini di pindah ke col 3?
20:26 erlinadewi-: agak kosong disana
20:26 Syadow-: dah
20:27 Syadow-: wadoo kok ada panggilan emak ;w;
20:27 erlinadewi-: yhaa
20:27 erlinadewi-: 00:12:724 (12724|3) - ini juga col 3 for balance
20:27 erlinadewi-: gimana mau lanjut besok aja?
20:28 Syadow-: lanjut dah sampe dipaksa matiin :v
20:28 erlinadewi-: wkwkwk ya
20:28 Syadow-: bsok jg ga tentu bisa ol takut php wkkww
20:28 erlinadewi-: wkwkwk oke deh
20:28 Syadow-: wkwkw
20:29 erlinadewi-: 00:19:430 (19430|3) - col 3 lagi deh, lagi2 kosong wkwkwk
20:30 Syadow-: dah wkwk
20:30 erlinadewi-: 00:28:607 (28607|2,29313|2) - kurang enak
20:30 erlinadewi-: ada jack
20:30 erlinadewi-: maybe ini 00:28:960 (28960|1) - kasih ke col 1
20:31 erlinadewi-: 00:29:313 (29313|2,29666|1) - ctrl g
20:31 Syadow-: dah
20:31 erlinadewi-: klo gak guna di reject gpp :"u
20:32 Syadow-: guna kok >w<
20:32 erlinadewi-: 00:34:254 (34254|2,34254|3) - ini knp double?
20:33 erlinadewi-: 1 ln aja cukup lho
20:33 Syadow-: kan cuma 1 ln nya
20:33 erlinadewi-: 00:40:960 (40960|1) - ke col 3 lebih balance
20:33 Syadow-: yg col 4 note kecil di awal
20:33 erlinadewi-: mksd ku single note nya diapus aja
20:33 erlinadewi-: pake 1 ln aja udah cukup
20:34 Syadow-: oalah wkwkw
20:35 erlinadewi-: 00:44:842 - part ini engga dibuat kaya 00:43:254 - ?
20:36 erlinadewi-: 00:53:666 (53666|2,54019|1) - ctrl j?
20:37 Syadow-: 00:44:666 - dah ku samain kyk 43 + ctrl j
20:38 erlinadewi-: 00:58:960 - dari pada pake 2 3 mulu gimana kalau https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5736226
20:38 erlinadewi-: ok
20:38 erlinadewi-: 01:01:783 (61783|1) - ini coba kasih ke col 1
20:39 erlinadewi-: ^ kalau di acc 01:02:136 (62136|2,62313|1) - ctrl j
20:39 erlinadewi-: 01:03:901 (63901|2,64254|2,65313|1,65666|1,66724|2,67077|2) - kenapa di buat jack ya?
20:41 erlinadewi-: udah?
20:41 Syadow-: nadanya kek sama >< tak pindah ke col 1 4 1 yg jack
20:41 Syadow-: dah
20:42 erlinadewi-: yg mana yg sama?
20:42 Syadow-: yg jack
20:42 erlinadewi-: 01:03:901 (63901|2,64254|2,65313|1,65666|1,66724|2,67077|2) - ini ya?
20:42 erlinadewi-: itu kick + snare lho
20:43 erlinadewi-: jelas beda :"
20:43 erlinadewi-: atas2 nya jg dicek lagi
20:43 Syadow-: ;w;
20:43 Syadow-: oke
20:43 erlinadewi-: 01:13:077 (73077|3,73254|3) - klo ini baru sama
20:44 Syadow-: dah tak betulin
20:45 erlinadewi-: coba 01:18:371 (78371|1) - ini ke col 1 01:18:724 (78724|2) - ini col 4 :3
20:45 Syadow-: dah
20:45 erlinadewi-: 01:14:842 - anoo.. disini coba perhatikan, itu LN kamu kasih 1 LN+1 single note kan
20:46 Syadow-: ya
20:46 erlinadewi-: 01:22:607 - disini cuma 1 ln aja
20:46 erlinadewi-: :3
20:47 Syadow-: oiya >< lupa :3
20:47 erlinadewi-: 01:25:077 (85077|3) - ini col 2 deh
20:47 erlinadewi-: hindari jack
20:48 Syadow-: dah
20:48 erlinadewi-: ok
20:48 erlinadewi-: nanti bagian ln sama note itu dicek lagi ya yang atas2 nya jg
20:49 erlinadewi-: klo aku pribadi sih cukup pake 1 ln aja
20:49 Syadow-: siap xD
20:49 erlinadewi-: 01:38:842 (98842|0) - ke col 2
20:49 erlinadewi-: kosong
20:49 erlinadewi-: disana
20:50 erlinadewi-: patternmu masih bnyk yg random xD
20:50 Syadow-: oiya
20:50 Syadow-: wkwkw tergantung mood mbak wkwkw
20:50 erlinadewi-: 01:50:901 (110901|3,111077|2,111195|1) - oh ini unsnapped
20:50 erlinadewi-: hahaha xD
20:51 erlinadewi-: 01:57:548 (117548|2,117901|1) - ctrl j lebih balance
20:52 Syadow-: dah
20:53 erlinadewi-: 02:49:474 (169474|2) - disini harusnya 02:49:489 - pakai 1/6
20:53 erlinadewi-: bener gak?
20:54 erlinadewi-: lanjut NM yak
20:55 erlinadewi-: 00:00:372 - 1 note aja cukup xD
20:55 *erlinadewi- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016104 capitaro - Tenshinranman Haikara Hime [NM]]
20:55 Syadow-: 02:50:048 (170048|0) - yg ini 1/4 keknya lainnya 1/6 mbak
20:55 erlinadewi-: ya itu emang 1/4 kan owo
20:55 Syadow-: tak taruh col 2
20:56 erlinadewi-: ok2
20:56 erlinadewi-: 00:09:901 (9901|2,10254|3) - ctrl g owo)b
20:57 erlinadewi-: 00:11:136 - ini cymbal nya double xD 00:09:548 - disini pakai 1
20:57 erlinadewi-: owo
20:57 Syadow-: dah :3
20:57 erlinadewi-: ok
20:58 erlinadewi-: 00:24:019 (24019|0) - coba ke col 2 aja
20:58 Syadow-: menurut feel
20:59 Syadow-: dah
20:59 erlinadewi-: 00:26:489 (26489|2,26842|1) - ctrl g better flow
20:59 Syadow-: dah
20:59 erlinadewi-: 00:38:842 (38842|1) - ctrl 4 avoid jack :3
21:01 Syadow-: dah
21:01 erlinadewi-: 00:57:548 - gak double aja? buat cymbal ?
21:02 erlinadewi-: free reject ya :"u
21:02 erlinadewi-: 01:05:489 (65489|3) - 1 ln cukup sepertinya :3
21:03 Syadow-: dah ku apply
21:03 erlinadewi-: cek konsistensinya lagi
21:04 Syadow-: 01:06:901 (66901|0) - ini remove jg ?
21:04 erlinadewi-: 01:05:489 - 01:06:901 - pakai 1 ln + note 01:07:430 - disini pakai 1 ln aja
21:04 erlinadewi-: kalau aku sih iya
21:05 Syadow-: dah
21:06 erlinadewi-: nanti bisa dicek lagi buat consistency nya
21:07 erlinadewi-: 01:50:901 (110901|3) - ini 1/4
21:07 Syadow-: iya
21:07 erlinadewi-: 01:51:077 (111077|2) - ini jg
21:08 Syadow-: 01:51:077 (111077|2) - tetep pake yg lama aku mbak
21:08 erlinadewi-: ya
21:09 erlinadewi-: 02:30:195 - ini snare sama kek 02:29:842 -
21:09 erlinadewi-: jadi harusnya double ?
21:10 Syadow-: dobel
21:10 erlinadewi-: 02:41:136 - hapus single note nya
21:10 erlinadewi-: eh gak sah
21:10 erlinadewi-: wkwkwk
21:10 erlinadewi-: ada kick disana
21:10 Syadow-: :v wkwkw
21:10 erlinadewi-: NM dah
21:11 erlinadewi-: sampe nm aja ya :v
21:11 Syadow-: ez nm aja ya mbak kakekku ngamok ;w;
21:11 erlinadewi-: ok2
21:11 erlinadewi-: tenaga saya habis _(:'3
21:11 Syadow-: yap thanks mbak >w<)b
21:11 erlinadewi-: ntar aku post dlu di thread
21:11 erlinadewi-: sip2

GL~

Protastic101 wrote:

I'm here for some late mods ^,^

Column 1|2|3|4

*drops mod*

[General]

1. I'd consider increasing the OD of MX to ~8.3 due to the lack of LNs. Fix Later if I not busy yet
2. I'd basically recommend increasing the OD by ~.2 or .3 for the rest of the diffs except easy for the reason listed above.
3. Uncheck widescreen support in your diffs if there's no storyboard. Fixed Thanks for remind me

[EZ]00:05:313 (5313|3) - For pitch relevancy, I would move this to 2.
00:06:371 (6371|1) - I'd suggest making this an LN and ending at 00:06:371 (6371|1) to represent the sustained drum.
00:06:901 - Since you're mapping to the, uhh, the Japanese woodblock (I don't know what it's called) here, it would make sense to add a note here since the melody plays here. Unless you're mapping to the drums and snares here, which I would recommend as more complex rhythms tend to be in NM difficulties. If you are mapping to the drums, then the LNs like 00:07:254 (7254|1,8666|2,10077|2) wouldn't be fitting as they're part of the melody. mapping to the drum n snares. I Change it into simple note. Thanks
00:11:313 (11313|1,11666|2,12195|3) - As for these notes, I think a 1/2 burst might be a little difficult for easy, so I would consider removing these notes. This way it helps to accent the crashes at 00:11:136 - 00:11:489 and etc. still confused with Ez pattern haha Thanks
00:19:077 - 00:20:489 - 00:21:901 - and etc. - I think it would be fine to add a double note at places like these for the snare because they don't occur very often and they would accent the drums in this section.
00:22:960 (22960|3,23136|2,23313|1,23489|0) - I would suggest using a trill like {2-3-2-3} because the pitch is alternating, so something like this I will use 4-1-4-1 for avoid jack
00:28:607 - Right here is a sound very similar to the above, but you don't use any 1/2 here, which might be confusing since you mapped it earlier but aren't mapping it now. My suggestion is to do something similar to the above using a 1/2 trill or a 1/2 roll.
00:34:254 - ^^
00:34:607 (34607|1,34783|1) - I would shy away from using 1/2 jacks in EZ because of how suddenly it appears and how quick it is (to a beginner). Another reason is that you don't map this same sound at places like 00:23:313 - 00:23:489 so this is also a little bit of a consistency thing too. fixed when Applied Erlin mod
00:40:783 - The drum here is very loud and audible, but you ignore it and map a quieter sound at 00:40:960 (40960|2) ? I would highly suggest moving this down to 00:40:783 to accent the drum. Sorry ;w; Applied
00:42:019 (42019|0,42195|0) - Same stuff I said about using jacks in an EZ. fixed when Applied Erlin mod
00:54:724 (54724|3,55077|3) - Why are these jacked when they aren't the same pitch or the same kind of drum (kick, snare, tom, etc)? I'd consider moving 00:55:077 (55077|3) to a different column.
00:54:724 (54724|3) - Another thing is that I think you should add another note here for the crash cymbal since it signifies the end of a musical phrase and adds finality to a song's section.
01:12:371 (72371|2,73077|3,73254|3,73430|2,73607|3) - This is all very right hand heavy. I would suggest moving the LN to 1 and then moving 01:13:430 (73430|2) to 2 so the notes are a little more balanced.
01:13:783 (73783|0,73960|2,74136|1,74313|3) - To accent the beginning of this musical section, I would suggest removing the notes here as they're much quieter than the notes at 01:13:077 but they're the same kind of note density in the music.
01:35:842 (95842|2,96019|1,96195|2) - I would also consider removing these notes to increase the emphasis at 01:36:371 where the snares come in.
01:39:548 - You should definitely add a note here for flow, because without it, there is no longer a steady beat for a beginner player to tap to, and they might get lost. It aids in readability basically.
01:50:930 (110930|3) - I highly suggest against using 1/4 in an EZ difficulty because of how quick it is, and how suddenly it appears in the music. I would only ever use it after using it in earlier parts of the song to familiarize the player with 1/4, which you don't do. Instead, I would recommend doing something like this to get the rhythm across and avoid 1/4 (I just removed the note on the 1/4 line and added another note on the white tick) Haha u right thank
02:01:077 (121077|1,121430|1) - Stop it with the jacks, like why are they here Q.Q
02:16:960 to 02:17:666 - I would recommend adding an LN here to represent the 1/4 drum roll here, and remove 02:17:313 (137313|2)
02:36:371 to end - Since this is an EZ diff, you'll probably have to really tone down the 1/2 stream here. I've seen some 1/2 bursts used in EZ, but I think 1/2 streams are far too difficult because of their speed and how long they last, as opposed to the low stamina most players at this level have.

[NM]00:01:342 (1342|2,2754|2,4166|3,4871|1) - Because this is a normal difficulty, I would suggest at least giving 2 beats of rest between each use of 1/4 notes. This also works out because following the melody here would be a better idea since it's much more audible and easier to hear.
00:11:136 (11136|2,11489|1,11842|2,12019|3) - I would suggest making these doubles for the loud crashes here. I'd also recommend adding a note at 00:11:666 for the kick and the melody. It keeps the flow going I guess? better i keep old one, sorry ;w;
00:22:254 (22254|2,22430|1,22783|2) - Vocal mapping is kind of frowned upon in the Mania community as far as I'm aware, and the reason is due to the vocals not being heavily emphasized all the time and therefore making it hard to keep a steady beat in the player's head, so maybe consider removing these?Yeah Thanks
00:41:842 - 00:44:666 - I highly suggest you add notes here to represent the snares since they're very loud and accented.00:46:077 (46077|2,46077|3,46254|0,46254|1,46430|2) - Shouldn't these notes be flipped? You accent the last two notes of each phrase, but here, you accented the snare and not the melody, so control J.
01:19:783 (79783|0) - I'd consider making this an LN and ending at 01:20:136 due to the softer crash holding for a beat before being silenced.
01:20:136 - I'd also recommend a double here for the loud crash cymbal. In that way, you can add a note at 01:20:313 to keep the beat while also accenting the cymbal.
01:27:019 (87019|3) - Since you don't use any other jacks in this section, I would highly suggest you move this to a different column because it may catch some players by surprise since they're under the assumption that you aren't using jacks here.
02:04:254 (124254|0) - Consider moving to 2 to make it an easier to read roll.
02:08:313 - Why didn't you map the 1/4 here if you mapped it back at 02:03:901 ? The player will be expecting the notes now since you already set up the structure early on in this section.
02:35:666 (155666|0) - I probably sound like a hypocrite, but I'd consider removing this note to accent the pause between the crashes at 02:35:489 and 02:35:842
02:36:107 - I'd consider adding a note here in 3 for the drums since you've already established a pattern of using 1/4
02:36:371 - In EZ, you used a 1/2 stream for this, but now you've dropped the density in notes to a broken 1/2 jumpstream? That kind of seems like this is the EZ difficulty in that case. My suggestion is to add notes on every 1/2 tick due to the musical structure of this outro section Haha Really ?
I just realized Thanks .

Nice vocaloid song ^.^ Have a star

Muu-chan wrote:

Hi there
NM here

1|2|3|4

HD

00:08:489 (8489|2,8666|2) - I suggest to move them on 4 and 1. Because i think 4 jacks didn't fit nicely in this part
* 00:12:195 - I would suggest something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5757202
* 00:16:607 - I would suggest something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5757210
* 00:18:636 (18636|2) - i hear no instrument for this, i suggest to move it here 00:19:695 - you missed a hit hat there
* 00:21:107 - I suggest https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5757248 3 jacks aren't fit imo
* 00:22:519 - you missed a hit hat too here
* 00:22:960 - and 00:23:136 - i prefer make them in different column because the pitch is different
* 00:23:313 - I think it should be double too for clap and organ thingy sound. Example both with^ : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5757241
* 00:29:313 - you could double here for cymbal
* 00:30:107 - missed a hit hat
* 00:32:136 - and 00:32:489 - i suggest to add a note for kick since you add too here 00:32:842 - also it kinda suddenly blank without that kick
* 00:34:254 - ; 00:34:430 - ; 00:34:607 - make them double like you did on 00:28:607 -
* 00:35:048 - I suggest something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5757283 because 00:35:048 - and 00:35:401 - aren't really clear (unclear) sound that prefer not to be added. 00:35:666 - and the LN here should be stop on 00:36:019 - also you missed hit hat here 00:35:754 -
* Well i think i would stop ;-; i won't ruin ur map more qq

Nice song, take my star and good luck :3 sorry can't help much
a little note from me, if there're voice and instrumental sound together.. try to pay more attention to the instrumental

L A U R A wrote:

heres my mod sorry if not too usefull >.<

HD

hd
00:09:195 - better add 2 notes here

00:10:607 - here too

00:10:960 (10960|0,10960|1,11136|1,11136|2,11313|3,11313|2,11489|0,11489|3,11666|1,11666|2,11842|0,11842|1,12019|3,12019|2,12195|0,12195|3,12371|1) - i think you better make variation like this

00:13:430 - 2 notes here as well

00:14:842 - here as well

00:37:783 - 1 or 2 notes here maybe?

00:44:489 - maybe 1 note here?

01:29:136 - 1 note here

01:28:607 (88607|3,88783|2,88871|1,88960|0,89313|1,89666|1) - like this maybe? and i think itll work for the next part as well 3 jack Applied with my style thanks



01:35:666 (95666|3,95842|3,96019|2,96195|3,96371|2,96548|3,96636|2,96724|3) - like this? Apply With my Style

thats all i think and good luck !!!!!!!

laughingcomet wrote:

What a great song!
1 l 2 l 3 l 4

NM

00:22:254 (22254|0) - ? i have no idea what that LN is there for For Bzeet sound haha Applied lol
00:28:607 (28607|3) - ^
00:34:254 (34254|2) - ^
00:39:901 (39901|2) - ^
01:07:430 (67430|0,68136|3) - ^
01:12:371 (72371|2) - ^
01:48:371 (108371|2) - goes to white while all other diffs stops at red
02:10:607 (130607|3) - Double?

HD

00:08:666 (8666|2) - lane 4? same sound as 00:07:254 (7254|3) - and 00:10:077 (10077|0) - so i would say keep it consistent and make it a jack because random mini jacks plays weirdly. Thanks Remind me
00:15:724 (15724|2) - ^
same applies to all the sounds/places where you've put mini jacks like 00:24:724 (24724|2,24901|1) - 00:26:136 (26136|2,26313|2) - sorry I missed it. no mini jack there
00:32:842 - missed? Haha Thanks
00:46:077 (46077|0,46254|0,46430|0,46607|0) - consider moving some of them around for easier pattern (when it dosen't even have the same sound. at least from what i can hear) sorry
01:12:371 (72371|3,73783|2) - ? High Sound for 01:12:371 (72371|3) - Remove 01:13:783 (73783|2) -
01:15:901 (75901|2) - ^
01:25:783 (85783|0) - ends at blue to go into the 2 notes http://puu.sh/qpw9x/3aac4434a3.jpg from 01:25:783 - to 01:31:430 - Woa Thanks
01:25:960 - no sound
01:28:783 - ^
01:31:607 - ^
01:37:077 (97077|0,97430|3) - ?
01:42:195 - http://puu.sh/qpwfr/7bcfb204f5.jpg
01:48:371 (108371|1) - flute goes on until 01:51:195 - Sorry Reject this
01:57:195 (117195|0,117195|2,117195|1,117371|3,117371|1,117548|1,117548|3,117548|2,117724|0,117724|2,117901|3,117901|2,117901|0,118077|1,118077|3,118254|3,118254|0,118254|1,118430|0,118430|2,118607|0,118607|1) - and
02:04:871 (124871|3,124871|2,124960|1,124960|3,125048|2,125048|0,125136|2,125136|1,125224|0,125224|3,125313|2,125313|1) - Very big difficulty spike. For the LN part i recommend to just remove a note where there's a LN start. it's also easier to hit the LN part than the jump jacks at 02:04:871 - Fixed thanks for suggest jump jack
i would make 02:47:313 (167313|1) - these doubles (for that sound)

Valentrixe wrote:

hi
i'm here as your request in our queue

Mod Inside

[General]

1. should be add more kiai point in 02:27:901 ~ 02:36:371 Applied

[MX]

1. 00:00:372 (372|0,372|3,724|3,724|0) - you're not consistent, what're you trying to follow? the string? the beat? if you trying to follow the string, add one more note on 00:00:901 - , etc. but if you follow the beat, add more note on 00:02:136 - and delete one of 00:00:372 (372|0,372|3)
   you need to be more consistent with the layer that you chose I Follow the Beat Thanks for Suggest
2. 00:06:371 (6371|2,6371|0,6371|1) - too much note, 00:06:724 (6724|0,6724|1) - this should be the one that triplets to follow the cymbal sound Thanks
3. 00:07:783 (7783|1,7783|0,7783|2) - another inconsistency, if this snare is using triplet, the snare in 00:07:077 (7077|0,7077|2) - should be triplets too, and here too 00:08:489 - , reducing the note to 2 because there are 1/4 before them is a silly reason to me, they didn't increase the difficulty that much anyway so why bother reduce them Applied, sorry for my inconsistency
4. 00:12:019 - should be triplets, the cymbal are here. 00:12:195 (12195|1,12195|3,12195|0) - these should be double
5. 00:12:724 (12724|0,12724|2) - these are the snare, you can make triplet like you did in 00:13:430 (13430|0,13430|3,13430|1)
6. 00:13:077 (13077|3,13077|2,13077|0) - these are the kick, two notes is enough
7. 00:15:195 (15195|1,15371|1,15548|1,15724|1) - careful, too much notes here make it unbalance
8. 00:18:019 (18019|1) - you can delete this, i don't see any reason to use 2 notes in here
9. 00:18:460 (18460|0) - ghost note, delete
10. 00:18:813 - missing note, the sound is just like 00:21:636 (21636|1)
11. 00:18:989 - add note to follow the bell like you did in 00:21:813 (21813|3)
12. 00:23:666 - add note for cymbal
13. 00:24:283 (24283|3) - another ghost note
14. 00:24:460 - you miss the note, again
15. 00:24:548 (24548|0,24548|2) - inconsistent, you only use 1 note in 00:21:724 (21724|2)
16. 00:25:254 (25254|1) - move this to 00:25:342
17. 00:25:695 (25695|2) - ghost note
18. 00:25:871 - missing note
19. 00:25:960 (25960|2) - what're you trying to follow? Sorry I missed remove ln + add note 00:26:048 -
20. 00:26:666 (26666|0,26666|1,26666|3,27019|0,27019|2,27019|1) - 1 note is enough for both of them
21. 00:29:313 - i won't mod this part, you can repair it yourself based on the mod above, since the melody is actually same
22. 00:40:519 (40519|1) - you should make this double, it's the same sound as 00:40:430 (40430|2,40430|0)
23. 00:40:607 (40607|3,40607|0,40607|2,40783|2,40783|0,40783|3) - double is enough, the sound isn't that strong
24. 00:41:136 (41136|1,41136|2) - it's lower than 00:40:960 (40960|2,40960|0) - or 00:41:313 (41313|2,41313|3) - , so one note is enough for that, same apply to 00:41:489 (41489|0,41489|3)
25. 00:42:019 - do this part like what i mentioned above
26. 00:47:136 (47136|2) - same sound like 00:46:960 (46960|1,46960|0) - , make it double
27. 00:47:224 (47224|1,47401|1,47577|3) - these are ghost note, delete them
28. 00:48:107 (48107|1) - ghost
29. 00:48:548 (48548|1) - should be double
30. 00:48:636 - should be double too
31. 00:49:783 - add one LN like you did in 00:49:077 (49077|0)
32. 00:50:136 (50136|2) - should be double
33. 00:50:313 - add one note for guitar
34. 00:52:519 (52519|3,52695|1,52871|1,53048|2,53224|2) - ghost note, about this part, i can highlight it for you, there are stream in 00:51:901 ~ 00:52:430 - , then 1/2 chord in 00:52:430 ~ 00:53:313 - , then repeat to stream again
    if you see the music pattern you can map this better, also avoid some anchor like 00:53:313 (53313|3,53489|3,53666|3,53842|3,54019|3,54195|3,54371|3,54548|3)

okay i think it's enough, your map need to be more structured, i can write longer but i already covered the basic that you can follow so i think it's fine now, i'm sure you can reconstructed your map to be better

good song btw

that's all
thanks for requesting!

Eternalie wrote:

hi there
hope this will help~

gaaaaaah I like thoose kind of instru >w<

dadon

key=1/2/3/4
[MX]
00:09:548 (9548|0,9548|2) - this should be 3 notes cause of the cymbal sound and according to : 00:15:195 (15195|3,15195|0,15195|2) -
00:23:489 (23489|1) - how about adding a note to 3 ? it should be a 3 note cause of the cymbal , tho you can keep it as 2 it's up to you I use 3 note thanks xD
00:34:783 (34783|2) - this should be 2 notes
00:48:107 (48107|2) - add a note to 3 for the drum roll
00:55:783 (55783|0) - should be two notes
01:01:430 (61430|1) - ^ same suggestion
01:02:136 (62136|0,62136|1,62136|3) - this one should be only two notes and this one : 01:02:313 (62313|2) - should be 3 notes
01:07:607 (67607|1) - try doubling this to emphasis the cymbal sound
01:07:960 (67960|0) - ^ add another note to emphasis the cymbal sound
01:22:607 (82607|1,82607|3) - should be 3 notes according to 01:21:195 (81195|3,81195|0,81195|1) -
01:55:254 (115254|0,115430|1) - Ctrl+J , the second note is not the same sound as the first one , but the third one is
02:09:724 (129724|1,129901|2) - Ctrl+J for pitch relevancy

here goes ~ Try to see if you can find some inconsistency here and there ,
if you think that a kick + cymbal should be 3 notes then try to keep them 3 notes concistently
same for snare if you think they are 2 notes , try to make them 2 notes concistently etc
Good Luck :3

WolfyArmato- wrote:

I'm going to do IRC mod in game pm when you online, because I'm lazy to write and post here lol

Another Lie wrote:

Req dari thread

HD

00:32:313 (32313|3,32401|3) - salah 1 pindahin, hindarin jack (MX aja ga jack, masa HD jack + inconsistent itu)
00:36:283 - tambah 1 note
00:36:989 - ^
00:37:695 - ^
00:38:489 - ^
01:10:695 - ^
01:12:107 - ^
01:56:666 (116666|3,116666|0) - delete salah 1

Maaf lambat, ga liat request soalnya dah lama sepi

WolfyArmato- wrote:

Hello, From My Queue.

IRC Mod with Syadow-

Don't read this xDD

15:53 Syadow-: hi wolfy >w<
15:54 WolfyArmato-: hi hi
15:54 WolfyArmato-: uh
15:54 WolfyArmato-: do you want to start now? :3
15:58 Syadow-: yeah if u not busy xD
15:58 WolfyArmato-: okay
15:58 *WolfyArmato- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016103 capitaro - Tenshinranman Haikara Hime [MX]]
15:59 *Syadow- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016103 capitaro - Tenshinranman Haikara Hime [MX]]
15:59 WolfyArmato-: 00:09:195 - i don't understand why you make triple here
15:59 WolfyArmato-: but previous part such as 00:07:783 - u do only double notes
16:00 Syadow-: 00:07:783 - i use 3 note there
16:00 WolfyArmato-: uh sorry i forgot to update xDDDD
16:01 Syadow-: haha xD
16:01 WolfyArmato-: 00:07:077 - make triple note here
16:01 WolfyArmato-: same sound with 00:07:783 -
16:03 Syadow-: hmm i'm not sure that same sound
16:04 Syadow-: maybe same as 00:08:489 -
16:04 WolfyArmato-: hmm ok
16:05 Syadow-: sorry i keep that ;w;
16:05 WolfyArmato-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5826557
16:05 WolfyArmato-: 00:17:666 -
16:05 WolfyArmato-: maybe do like this
16:07 Syadow-: oke done
16:08 WolfyArmato-: 00:22:430 - 00:22:607 - i think do double here
16:09 WolfyArmato-: 00:26:666 (26666|1,26842|1) - why you do jacks here
16:10 Syadow-: not enough space
16:11 Syadow-: i change 00:26:842 (26842|2,27019|3) - to 3 4
16:11 WolfyArmato-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5826592 you can do like this
16:13 WolfyArmato-: 00:28:783 (28783|0) - i think delete this
16:13 WolfyArmato-: there is no drum here
16:14 WolfyArmato-: 00:29:313 - add note at |1|
16:15 Syadow-: 00:28:783 (28783|0,28783|2,28783|1) - 3 notes cuz strong sound
16:15 WolfyArmato-: 00:38:401 (38401|1) - delete
16:16 WolfyArmato-: but what did you follow here
16:16 WolfyArmato-: bass? hats?
16:18 Syadow-: i follow gruk sound idk the name of that
16:20 WolfyArmato-: 00:39:901 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5826637 maybe do like this
16:21 WolfyArmato-: 00:40:254 - you can make triple here since it's MX
16:21 WolfyArmato-: and it's the cymbal sound here
16:22 Syadow-: oke applied
16:22 WolfyArmato-: 00:41:401 (41401|1,41489|3) - there is no sound here, delete
16:24 Syadow-: wogh thanks i missed it
16:24 WolfyArmato-: and maybe do like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5826660
16:24 WolfyArmato-: 00:40:960 -
16:26 Syadow-: 00:40:077 (40077|3,40254|3,40430|3,40607|3,40783|3,40960|3) - but there make minijack ?
16:26 WolfyArmato-: you can spread to other column
16:27 WolfyArmato-: and you can random to other pattern
16:28 Syadow-: oki applied
16:29 Syadow-: remove 00:42:901 -
16:30 WolfyArmato-: 00:51:901 to 00:54:724 - you should do stream here
16:30 WolfyArmato-: because 00:57:548 did
16:34 WolfyArmato-: 01:03:901 (63901|0) - delete
16:34 Syadow-: oke applied
16:34 WolfyArmato-: 01:04:077 (64077|3,64077|2) - delete
16:34 WolfyArmato-: or delete one
16:34 WolfyArmato-: 01:04:254 - make triple ordouble here
16:34 WolfyArmato-: *or double
16:35 Syadow-: remove 1 enough
16:35 Syadow-: double note added
16:36 WolfyArmato-: 01:04:607 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5826693 do like this
16:36 WolfyArmato-: 01:04:871 - you miss the note here lol
16:37 WolfyArmato-: 01:05:842 (65842|1) - move to |4|
16:38 Syadow-: lol thanks
16:38 Syadow-: this too 01:06:283 -
16:38 WolfyArmato-: 01:05:313 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5826704 do like this
16:40 Syadow-: okay applied
16:41 WolfyArmato-: 01:06:901 (66901|1) - why jack here i think move to |3| and0 move 1:07:077 (67077|2) - to |2|
16:41 WolfyArmato-: 01:07:077 (67077|2) -
16:43 Syadow-: should i make double note here ? 01:06:901 -
16:43 WolfyArmato-: yes
16:44 WolfyArmato-: 01:07:254 - do here too
16:46 Syadow-: 01:07:430 - 01:07:783 - 01:08:136 - 01:08:136 - this too ?
16:46 WolfyArmato-: 01:06:724 - 01:06:724 -
16:46 WolfyArmato-: ow sorry
16:46 WolfyArmato-: 01:06:724 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5826730
16:46 WolfyArmato-: maybe do like this
16:47 WolfyArmato-: 01:08:842 - this part again lol
16:49 Syadow-: lol
16:49 Syadow-: 01:07:254 (67254|1,67430|1,67607|1,67960|1,68136|1,68313|1,68489|1) - unbalance
16:50 WolfyArmato-: make it balance by yourself xD
16:50 Syadow-: lol xD oki oki
16:52 WolfyArmato-: 01:09:548 -
16:52 WolfyArmato-: like i said
16:53 WolfyArmato-: make it consistency with previous part here
16:54 Syadow-: oki
16:54 WolfyArmato-: 01:12:371 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5826772 maybe do like this
16:57 WolfyArmato-: 01:14:489 - WHY STREAM HERE
16:57 Syadow-: applied before LN
16:58 Syadow-: stream is love <3 *plak
16:59 WolfyArmato-: delete all of blue line 01:14:489 to 01:18:371
16:59 WolfyArmato-: 01:14:489 - 01:18:371 -
16:59 WolfyArmato-: jumpstream is life <3
17:00 WolfyArmato-: anyway delete 01:14:489 - to 01:18:371 -
17:00 WolfyArmato-: *delete note on blue line
17:00 Syadow-: wait still remove it :v
17:01 WolfyArmato-: oki :v
17:02 WolfyArmato-: 01:19:166 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5826807
17:05 WolfyArmato-: 01:20:842 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5826827
17:06 WolfyArmato-: i'm waiting >:3
17:07 Syadow-: too much :v
17:08 WolfyArmato-: call me when u finished xDD
17:11 Syadow-: done with my style
17:11 WolfyArmato-: 01:26:313 (86313|1,86489|1,86666|2,86842|2) - y jacks here QwQ
17:11 WolfyArmato-: spread to other column plz
17:13 Syadow-: haha xD oke ;w;
17:14 WolfyArmato-: 01:37:077 - stream this like previous part
17:16 Syadow-: 01:42:195 - this too ?
17:17 WolfyArmato-: yeah
17:19 WolfyArmato-: 01:40:960 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5826910
17:20 WolfyArmato-: 01:53:754 (113754|1) - delete
17:21 Syadow-: 01:41:842 - i keep this LN
17:21 WolfyArmato-: ok
17:22 WolfyArmato-: 01:57:195 - i think remove LN here
17:22 WolfyArmato-: it's not suitable to use
17:23 Syadow-: oke ;w;
17:23 WolfyArmato-: 01:57:195 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5826935
17:23 WolfyArmato-: maybe like this
17:25 Syadow-: maybe no jack there not same pitch
17:25 WolfyArmato-: oki
17:25 WolfyArmato-: 01:59:224 - WTF
17:27 WolfyArmato-: LN is no suitable here
17:28 WolfyArmato-: you use LN to follow what?
17:28 Syadow-: yha ;w;
17:28 Syadow-: tut tut tut tut
17:29 Syadow-: sorry i cant explain it
17:30 WolfyArmato-: 01:58:960 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5826967 how about this
17:33 Syadow-: applied
17:33 WolfyArmato-: 02:05:489 -
17:34 WolfyArmato-: gosh
17:34 Syadow-: add note ?
17:34 WolfyArmato-: yeah
17:34 WolfyArmato-: destiny isn't match with previous part
17:35 Syadow-: ;w;
17:35 WolfyArmato-: maybe follow drum and snare
17:36 WolfyArmato-: if not you can do like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5827003
17:36 WolfyArmato-: 02:05:313 - add note at |1| pls
17:37 Syadow-: i re arrange in this part
17:37 WolfyArmato-: okay
17:38 Syadow-: done until 02:11:313 -
17:38 WolfyArmato-: 02:21:548 (141548|1) - move to |1|?
17:38 Syadow-: i changed LN to double note with no jack (maybe)
17:39 WolfyArmato-: 02:05:313 - don't forget to add note at |1| here
17:40 Syadow-: done
17:41 Syadow-: until this 02:27:019 -
17:41 WolfyArmato-: ow
17:41 WolfyArmato-: so fast OwO
17:42 Syadow-: for this part 02:25:077 -
17:42 Syadow-: :'v sorry i missed before that
17:43 WolfyArmato-: 02:27:901 - add note at |4|
17:43 WolfyArmato-: cymbal here
17:43 WolfyArmato-: 02:33:548 - triple here
17:44 WolfyArmato-: 02:30:724 - add note at |2|
17:44 Syadow-: done
17:44 WolfyArmato-: 02:33:195 - doubel here
17:45 WolfyArmato-: 02:33:901 - ^
17:45 WolfyArmato-: *double
17:45 WolfyArmato-: 02:34:607 - ^
17:45 WolfyArmato-: 02:36:019 - nice here x3
17:47 Syadow-: xD done all applied
17:47 WolfyArmato-: 02:39:901 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5827063
17:48 Syadow-: applied
17:48 WolfyArmato-: 02:44:136 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5827069
17:48 Syadow-: much minijack in ss :v make unbalance
17:49 WolfyArmato-: lol
17:49 WolfyArmato-: I love jacks <3
17:50 Syadow-: lol haha
17:50 WolfyArmato-: 02:47:313 - add note at |2|
17:50 WolfyArmato-: 02:48:195 - add note at |1|
17:51 WolfyArmato-: 02:48:901 - make triple note here
17:51 WolfyArmato-: 02:49:474 - ^
17:51 WolfyArmato-: 02:50:048 - ^
17:51 WolfyArmato-: 02:50:886 - ^
17:52 WolfyArmato-: 02:51:901 - add note at |4|
17:52 WolfyArmato-: all of these are cymbal
17:52 Syadow-: all applied
17:52 WolfyArmato-: oki
17:53 WolfyArmato-: that's all i can find now
17:53 WolfyArmato-: update and i will take a look again
17:53 Syadow-: thanks xD wait a minute
17:55 Syadow-: done
17:56 WolfyArmato-: i will take a look soon
17:56 WolfyArmato-: i'm tried xDDD

Alsty- wrote:

hi syadow- NM here :3
langsung aja kuy. feel free to reject all of em xD
4k Col GUIDE.
1|2|3|4

MX

00:17:136 (17136|2,17136|3) - suara nya lebih gede dari notes sebelumnya harusnya di taro triple ato quad gt 00:16:960 oki
(16960|1,16960|0,16960|2) - malah kalo di denger yang 00:16:960 (16960|1,16960|0,16960|2) - lebih cocok double I keep it
00:17:754 (17754|2) - disini snare sama kek 00:17:666 (17666|3,17666|0) - , coba bikin gini example
00:18:371 (18371|2) - coba bass disini bikin double , lebih kerasa keknya xD kasihan byk double nanti ;w; thanks suggest nya
00:20:666 (20666|0) - pindah ke 4 , berat di kiri itu , selesai LN pencet kiri terus ada stair dari kiri lagi xD oki
00:22:960 - coba liat ini Tetap ku pakai note biasa
00:34:254 - disini juga bikin reversenya aja kalo ^ di apply , btw bagian ini bunyi nya sama kek ^ , tapi beda pattern nya sama yg sebelumnya. kalo pun di tolak minimal bikin sama ato di bikin reversenya di 00:22:960 - biar keliatan konsisten pattern nya ^ kek aneh malah ;w;
00:42:548 (42548|1,42548|2) - single
00:46:430 (46430|0) - suaranya sama kek00:46:254 -
00:49:607 (49607|3,49783|1) - tuker posisi , pitch relevancenya.
00:51:195 (51195|2) - pindah ke 4
01:04:871 - kalo ikutin synth disini harus ada notes malah yg ini ga perlu 01:05:048 (65048|1) - . coba liat disini 01:03:371 (63371|2,63371|3,63460|1,63548|3,63548|2) - coba di benerin , ini kyk pattern nya maju 1 langkah , kek 01:05:666 (65666|0) - harusnya ga ada LN .
01:14:136 (74136|1,74313|1) - pindah 4 I keep it thanks for suggest
01:39:371 - harusnya LN nya lebih panjang , coba liat 02:20:489 -
01:56:842 - add di 3|4 suara crash itu
01:57:195 - dari sini suara LN udah ga ada
01:59:224 (119224|2,119401|1) - apus , 01:59:577 (119577|0) - jangan jadiin LN
02:43:166 (163166|2,163254|0,163254|3,163342|2) - samain sama 02:41:754 (161754|1,161842|2,161930|3) - , dibikin variasinya aja
jujur sebenernya udah bagus penempatan pattern nya , tapi kurang konsisten aja. <~ abaikan pendapat pribadi xD

thanks for requesting and goodluck u.u

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

Hotaru's Mania Modding KueKue

Oiissuu >w<)/
NM delivery

Kolom
1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[General]
Fine

[EZ]
00:51:195 (51195|3) - Bikin double buat emphasis dan disitu juga awal mulai hype part lagunya

01:20:136 (80136|2) - bikin double buat cymbal

01:25:783 (85783|2,86136|3) - di swap aja kurang nyaman imo sama buat pitchnya juga lalu yang 01:26:313 (86313|0) - move ke 2 abis itu yang 01:26:489 (86489|1,86842|0) - swap lagi biar nyaman dan buat pitch juga uwu

[NM]
review awal buat diffnya
Pattern di pertengahan rada berat di kanan QwQ re arrange dikit ya

00:15:195 (15195|2) - Ini seharusnya double karna cymbal dan yang 00:15:548 (15548|3,15548|0) - single soalnya gaada bunyi kick yang begitu berarti disitu

00:40:960 (40960|2) - ganti jadi LN buat nutupin bunyi drum uwu

00:43:783 - add LN buat nutup bunyi drum juga

01:19:783 (79783|0) - Lnnya di pecah jadi 2 aja LN kedua dimulai dari 01:19:960 (79960|1) -

01:42:195 (102195|0) - harusnya double suara mirip sama 01:41:489 (101489|2,101489|0) -

01:47:313 (107313|0) - ini double ada suara cymbalnya

01:47:842 (107842|3) - 01:48:371 - dst.. double juga qwq konsistensi sama 01:46:960 (106960|0,106960|2,107136|1,107136|3) - (mohon check ulang lagi owo banyak tuh yang kurang konsisten)
aku takut SR nya jd hard ;w; Applied Thanks

That's all my mod owo..
HD sama MXnya Irc aja nanti kalo aku lagi kosong uwu
Good Luck >w<)/

Ochasan wrote:

Hi~

M4M req via msg ^^

code = 1|2|3|4

Mod

EZ
00:04:960 (4960|1,5136|0,5313|2,5489|2,5666|1,5842|0) berat sebelah kykny. ane rasa janggal banget Keknya ga usah deh dah balance kok
00:10:430 (10430|1,10607|0,10960|2,11136|0) ^ oki
00:15:901 something miss here :p oki
01:13:607 (73607|3) col 1 enak oki
01:15:548 mengapa tidak sama dengan 01:16:960 ? padahal sama oki
02:25:077 (145077|2,145430|3,145783|2,146136|3) susun lagi oki

NM
00:03:371 (3371|2,3460|1,3548|3) mending stairs oki
00:41:842 (41842|1,43254|0) dihapus aja kayak 00:44:666 sama aja suaranya oki
00:50:842 (50842|2,51019|1) ^ oki
00:51:901 ini double,add 1 note oki
00:57:019 ^ oki
01:02:666 (62666|3,63195|0) kamu bisa dengar drum finish disini, add note oki
01:05:842 (65842|0,66019|2) ctrl+h oki
01:04:254 disini kamu membuat double karena bass. coba dilanjutin lagunya ada 01:05:666 yang merupakan single note. pilih antara hapus yg 01:04:254 atau add note 01:05:666 hapus aja deh
01:14:842 (74842|0,75195|2) hapus, gk ada double disini oki
01:19:430 mending ln disini sampai 01:20:136 oki
01:32:842 (92842|3,93371|3,94077|3,94254|3) salah satu susun kelain oki
01:37:077 add note oki
01:42:724 ^ oki
01:44:489 (104489|0,104489|1,104666|3,104842|2,105019|3,105195|0,105195|1) susun lagi oki
01:47:136 (107136|1,107313|1,107489|1) jacking oki
02:02:842 ini bukan cymbal, 1 note tarik ke 02:02:489 ini baru cymbal yg benar oki
02:03:901 um uh oh, NM gk ada 1/4 notes. jadikan 1/2 snap dan hapus yg gk kena snap, adapun pengganti nya ln oki
02:10:607 (130607|3,130607|2,130783|1,130783|2,130960|0,130960|1,131136|0,131136|3) jack ini masih belum dibolehkan di NM oki
02:12:548 (132548|2,132548|3,132724|1) ctrl+h oki
yang diatas berlaku juga untuk yg lain
02:16:430 (136430|2,136430|1,136607|3,136607|1,136783|0,136783|2,136960|2,136960|3,137136|0,137136|1,137313|1,137313|3,137489|0,137489|3,137666|0,137666|1,137842|2,137842|3,138019|0,138019|2,138195|3,138195|1,138371|2,138371|1,138548|0,138548|3,138724|1,138724|3,138901|0,138901|2,139077|0,139077|3) jacking juga, tdk direkomendasikan owo. hapus yg bukan bass oki
02:21:019 (141019|2) tarik ke 02:20:842 oki
02:30:724 add note oki
02:32:136 (152136|3,152313|2,152489|3,152489|1,152666|0,152842|3,153019|2,153195|1,153195|3,153371|0) pattern, mungkin dibuat acak" lah
02:36:371 add note oki
02:41:489 (161489|1,161666|0) buat 4|2 aja oki

HD
00:11:489 (11489|3,11842|3) jgn stack kyk gini. 00:11:842 (11842|3) pindah ke 1 oki
00:16:254 (16254|1,16607|1,16783|1) jacking kuatur ulang
00:35:666 hapus ln, gk baik dicampur 1/4 notes oki
00:38:313 (38313|2,38401|3,38489|1,38577|3,38666|2) susun ulang oki
00:54:548 (54548|3,54724|3,54901|3) jacking ini susah dibaca, susun ulang oki
00:52:871 (52871|0,52960|1,53048|0) susun ulang oki
00:53:930 (53930|1,54019|0,54107|2,54195|3,54283|2,54371|0,54460|1) ^ oki
00:56:313 (56313|2,56489|2,56666|2) jacking oki
01:00:371 (60371|1,60460|2,60548|1,60724|2,60813|1,60901|2,61077|2) fokus ke tengah banget, atur supaya menyebar oki
01:01:783 (61783|1,61960|1,62136|1) jacking oki
01:04:607 (64607|0,64695|1,64783|0,64871|1,64960|2,65048|1) susun ulang oki
01:13:783 (73783|1,73960|1,74136|1,74313|1,74489|1) ^ suaranya sama
01:22:695 (82695|1) emang ada 1/4 di suara? hapus aja oki
01:32:489 (92489|3,92842|2,93019|3,93107|2,93195|1,93371|1,93460|2,93548|3,93724|3,93901|2,94077|1) fokus ke sebelah, col 1 kosong jadinya. atur lagi oki
01:35:136 (95136|2,95224|1,95313|2,95313|0) geser kanan oki
01:41:666 (101666|1,101842|2) ^ oki
01:58:077 (118077|1,118254|1,118430|1,118430|2,118607|2,118783|2,118960|0,119136|0,119313|0) jacking oki
02:04:607 (124607|0,124607|1,124695|3,124695|2,124783|0,124783|1,124871|3,124871|2,124960|2,124960|1) yg kayak gini gk disarankan, 02:04:607 -> 02:05:224 jadiin single notes aja keknya over :v oki
02:20:489 add note oki
02:20:842 (140842|2,141548|3) ^ oki
02:45:371 ^ oki

MX
00:05:842 jadiin ln aja Tetep aja dah kyk kurang srek pake LN disini
00:12:019 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5864798 sama aja berat di col 2 + 1 tambah ga balance
00:40:254 hapus 1, ini bukan cymbal oki
00:34:254 (34254|1,34430|2) hapus oki
00:43:430 (43430|2) ^ oki
00:44:666 add note oki
00:44:842 (44842|1,45019|0) hapus oki
00:46:254 (46254|0,46430|3) ^ oki
00:47:489 add note oki
00:47:666 (47666|2,47842|1) hapus oki
00:56:666 add note oki
00:57:019 ^ oki
01:25:871 (85871|1) hapus oki
01:39:371 (99371|2,99371|1) ^ ,bagian ini buat lagi note" nya oki
01:47:489 add note oki
01:50:489 (110489|3,110666|0,110842|2,110960|1) salah snap, pakai 25% playbackrate upss dah ku fix pake 1/6 thanks xD
01:59:489 (119489|2,119489|3,119577|0,119577|1,119666|2,119666|0,119666|3) ctrl+h
02:04:254 (124254|0) hapus
02:09:901 add note
02:10:960 (130960|3,131136|0) ^ Hapus kan ?? oki
02:12:371 (132371|0,132548|3) ^ ^
02:13:783 (133783|0,133960|3) ^ ^
02:15:195 (135195|3,135371|0) ^ ^
02:32:136 (152136|3,152313|3,152489|3,152666|3) col 1&2 gk rapat banget, susun ulang oki
02:34:960 (154960|0,155313|1) hapus oki
02:43:077 (163077|3,163077|0,163077|2,163166|1,163254|0,163342|1,163430|2,163430|3,163430|0,163519|1,163607|3,163607|0,163607|2,163695|1,163783|3,163783|2) susun ulang dah
02:44:842 (164842|2,164842|3,164930|0,164930|1,165019|2,165019|3,165107|0,165107|1,165195|2,165195|3,165283|0,165283|1,165371|3,165371|2) part gk cocok dgn suara, atur ulang oki

DONE!!!
late owo sibuk dgn tugas
ditunggu mod mu di https://osu.ppy.sh/s/489365 katanya sama nih
bye~

Syadow wrote:

02:09:901 add note
02:10:960 (130960|3,131136|0) ^ Hapus kan ?? oki
02:12:371 (132371|0,132548|3) ^ ^
02:13:783 (133783|0,133960|3) ^ ^
02:15:195 (135195|3,135371|0) ^ ^

ditunggu mod mu di https://osu.ppy.sh/s/489365 katanya sama nih
bye~

Garalulu wrote:

Mark for Kawaiiiiiiiiiiiiiii song

Ochasan wrote:

Syadow wrote:

02:09:901 add note
02:10:960 (130960|3,131136|0) ^ Hapus kan ?? oki
02:12:371 (132371|0,132548|3) ^ ^
02:13:783 (133783|0,133960|3) ^ ^
02:15:195 (135195|3,135371|0) ^ ^

ditunggu mod mu di https://osu.ppy.sh/s/489365 katanya sama nih
bye~

coba diliat yg mod. aduh salah w kependekan bilang "add note" :v
eh, gw lupa. oki thx for mod on my map (elysian forest)

[ Gyuso ] wrote:

Gyuso's Chex Modding!


hi! Thank you for req!


1ㅣ2ㅣ3ㅣ4

Mod!

[General]

1. 1.37 / 2.22 / 2.66 / 3.83 . HD~MX diff gap is far. more up HD diff star rate

[HD]

1. add one more note:00:01:077 - 00:01:783 - 00:02:489 - 00:03:195 - 00:03:901 - 00:05:313 - . same sound for 00:00:372 - here
2. 00:07:783 - snare sound. add 2 note
3. 00:17:489 - Symbal sound. add 1 note
4. 00:17:754 (17754|1,17842|2) - move to left and 00:17:930 - add to 3
5. 00:18:724 (18724|3,18724|0) - 00:19:783 - is same sound. 00:19:783 - add to 1
6. 00:20:136 - ^
7. 00:20:842 - ^
8. 00:22:254 - add to 4
9. 00:22:783 - add to 3
10. 00:22:960 (22960|2,22960|3,23313|0,23313|1) - same sound. 00:23:313 (23313|0,23313|1) - ctrl + h
11. Putting double notes on the bass sound is recommended such as:00:24:371 -, 00:25:077 -, 00:25:783 etc.
12. 00:35:666 - add 2 note
13. 00:40:254 - add to 3
14. 00:40:430 (40430|2,40519|3) - Ctrl + J
15. 00:41:577 - add to 2
16. 00:41:842 - ^
17. 00:47:224 - add to 3
18. 00:47:489 - add to 3
19. 00:48:460 - add 1 note
20. 00:48:548 (48548|3,48724|3) - double note
21. 00:48:901 - symbal sound. add 1 note
22. 00:54:724 - ^
23. 00:57:019 - ^
24. 00:57:371 (57371|3) - move to 3 and add to 4 by 00:57:460 - here
25. 01:00:371 - symbal sound
26. 01:06:019 - ^
27. 01:08:842 - ^
28. 01:11:666 - ^
29. 01:12:901 - ^
30. 01:25:783 - ^ add to 4
31. After, Drum sound Putting double note recommended

[MX]

1. 00:12:283 (12283|2) - move to 1 and 00:12:371 (12371|0,12371|1) - ctrl + h
2. 00:12:195 (12195|3) - delete
3. 00:15:195 - symbal sound. add 1 note
4. 00:16:960 (16960|0) - delete
5. 00:26:754 - add to 2
6. 00:31:519 - ^
7. 00:34:960 - add 1 note
8. 00:40:871 (40871|1) - delete
9. 00:40:342 (40342|1) - ^
10. 00:43:519 (43519|3) - ^
11. 00:43:519 (43519|3) - add to 1
12. 00:48:107 - add to 3
13. 00:48:901 - add to 2
14. 00:50:489 - not good snap. remap plz. ex)
15. 00:57:460 - add to 3 and 00:57:371 (57371|2) - move to 2
16. 01:06:019 - 3 note
17. 01:08:401 (68401|2) - delete
18. 01:13:077 (73077|0) - no sound. delete
19. 01:25:519 (85519|0) - delete
20. 01:27:195 - why 3 note? delete 1 note
21. 01:30:548 - add 1 note
22. 01:31:254 - add to 2
23. 01:36:548 - no ... not match sound. remake plz. ex)
24. 01:39:901 - symbal. 3 note
25. 01:55:430 - add 1 note
26. 02:02:489 - symbal sound add 1 note
27. 02:08:136 - ^
28. 02:22:430 - and 02:23:489 - here. add LN finish for 02:24:724 - here

ok, i finished.
you I listened again to slowly.this map is more need self modding.

Good luck! XD

Frim4503 wrote:

Col : 1|2|3|4|5|6|7
NM

General

1. BG : ok
2. Mp3 : ok
3. Hitsound : have hs but not palced it yet
4. Difficulty : ok
5. Timing: ok
6. AI Mod : ok

MX

1. 00:12:107 -you can add note in here. Then move 00:12:195 (12195|1) -to 4 and 00:12:371 (12371|3) -to 2
2. 00:09:548 (9548|2,9548|1) -you can make this triple for cymbal
3. 00:19:430 (19430|2) -double pls. see before and after this part
4. 00:49:077 (49077|1) -you can make this double since this have cymbal on it
5. 01:06:019 (66019|1,66019|0) -triple cymbal.. etc. (I’m not mention it again, pls check it by yourself)
6. 01:13:783 (73783|1) -move to 1. Different sound
7. 01:26:048 (86048|1) -double pls. see after this part. You make double
8. 01:28:430 (88430|1) -move to 1
9. 01:27:813 (87813|2) -ghost note
10. 01:29:489 (89489|0) -remove. Ghost note
11. 01:30:548 -add note in 3
12. 01:31:960 -^
13. 01:32:666 -^double note
14. 01:56:136 (116136|3) -move to 3
15. 01:56:136 (116136|3) -add note in 1 and 3

Just take a look at MX diff it seem your map is still need more rework. Try to make it consistent, example: double note for whistle, triple note for clap/cymbal. Also try to look at other mania map specific.
Good luck
Mod Done

Column:
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4K - |1|2|3|4|

arcwinolivirus wrote:

"Arcwinolivirus' M4M-only contract"

A contract to be fulfilled as exchange of mod.

Song: capitaro - Tenshinranman Haikara Hime (Syadow-)
Number of difficulties modded in my map: 2 - 4K Normal and 4K Hard

Note:
• First of all, I would want to apologize if I ever say something that will hurt your feelings as a mapper. Remember that I only want to give advices, suggestions, recommendations and sideas for some improvement in your map. Please do understand and thank you.

• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I am not perfect and I am not always right. But I do give my best to mod with sense. Also, I do not bite rawr.

• If I suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, dont forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.

[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: To have a better background ratio, It should be atleast exact size of one of the following: 800x600 (4:3) / 1024x768 (4:3) / 1366x768 (widescreen)
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• No problem!

Column:
      _ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|

[NM]

SPOILER

00:00:372 (372|1) - move to 1? same as sound as 00:01:783 (1783|0) - and 00:03:195 (3195|0) - . It is for consistency so it can get the same feeling as 00:01:783 (1783|0,1960|3,2048|2,2136|0) - Oki uwu

00:04:607 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qN0pA/70384e7f86.png for pitch relevancy. The stair pattern fits for the high to low pitch and the alternative for the last stair pattern. Nice Applied

00:09:548 - add note for cymbals since you made cymbals as doubles on 00:11:136 (11136|2,11136|1,11489|3,11489|1,11842|1,11842|2) - Oh i missed it thanks

00:15:195 - ^

00:16:254 - add note to 4 like you always did for every end-1/4-snare like 00:13:430 (13430|3,13430|2,14842|0,14842|1) - Oki

00:16:783 (16783|0) - quite awkward on left hand, suggesting to move to 3 for hand balance. oki

00:23:489 - add note for cymbals same as you did on 00:29:313 (29313|0,29313|3) - Oki

00:40:254 - ^ to 3 oki

00:41:313 (41313|1) - remove since you only made single on the same sound at 00:41:666 (41666|3) - Applied

00:44:136 (44136|2) - ^ Applied

00:46:077 - add note to 4 for cymbals. Applied

00:46:607 (46607|1) - change to LN for the drum roll like you did at 00:43:783 (43783|3) - Applied

00:47:666 (47666|0,47842|3) - add note to make them doubles like you did at 00:44:842 (44842|2,44842|1,45019|3,45019|0) - Applied

00:48:548 - add note to 2 it fits for the guitar-like sound + for the percussion as well. Applied

01:04:077 (64077|3) - remove as the HD doesnt even have mini LN here. Also 2-note presses occured here while HD only has single note here. Applied

01:05:489 (65489|0) - Change to single note. Same reason as above about mini LN. Applied

01:06:901 (66901|1) - ^

01:09:724 (69724|1) - ^

01:11:136 (71136|2) - ^

01:12:901 (72901|0,73077|3) - move to 3 and 4 respectively for better and comfortable note arrangement. Applied

01:12:901 (72901|0,73077|3) - add note for cymbals. Applied

01:27:901 (87901|0) - remove as there is no cymbal here to make it double press. Applied

01:31:430 - add note for cymbals. Applied

01:34:254 - ^ Applied

01:37:254 - add note so the starting flow of notes won't break. feels empty here. It is the same as 01:40:077 (100077|2) - Applied

01:42:901 - ^

01:47:489 - must add note as strong sound occured here which is the cymbals. Applied

01:58:254 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qN1oL/12031b6483.png which focuses more on cymbals by doubles. With the doubles, it emphasizes the strong sound which is comfortable. Applied

02:05:313 - add note to 2 for cymbals. Applied

02:10:607 - ^ to 3 Applied

02:28:077 - add note so the flow won't break just like 02:33:724 (153724|1,154077|3) - Applied

02:28:430 - ^ Applied

02:43:430 - add note for cymbals. Applied

02:43:960 - ^ Applied

02:45:371 - ^Applied

[HD]

SPOILER

00:01:342 (1342|2,1430|1) - ctrl H so it can be more comfortable and counter part of 00:03:371 (3371|3,3460|2,3548|1,3548|0) - Applied

00:05:577 (5577|2,5666|1) - ^ Applied

00:06:371 (6371|3) - move to 2, both hands fits more. Applied

00:12:195 - add note cymbals. Applied

00:23:313 (23313|2,23489|0) - ctrl H for more comfortable pattern. Nice Thanks >w<

00:40:342 (40342|1) - remove, no sound and MX do not have note in this 1/4 blue line. Applied

00:48:636 - add note as there is snare drum here. Add in MX as well. Applied

00:51:195 (51195|1,51195|2) - move to 1 and 4 as it fits more than index fingers. Applied

00:53:577 (53577|1,53666|2,53666|0,53754|1) - I would like to suggest to rearrange this pattern as it gives awkward feeling. Haha xD fixed

00:56:666 (56666|2) - move to 4 Applied

01:05:930 (65930|2) - remove, no sound here. MX doesn't have a note in this line. Applied

01:13:607 (73607|3) - move to 2 as following the pitch. Applied

01:27:813 (87813|1) - remove no sound and no note at MX here. Applied

01:30:548 - add note for the beat sound. Applied

01:33:019 (93019|3) - remove, no sound here. No note at MX as well. Applied

01:33:283 (93283|3) - ^ Applied

01:34:077 - add note for cymbals. Applied

01:56:136 (116136|3) - move to 3 so it can be a stair pattern for 01:55:430 (115430|0,115783|1,116489|3) - which gives pitch relevancy for the guitar-like sound. Wow Thanks uwu

02:09:548 - add note for the beat. Applied

02:09:901 - ^ Applied

02:10:254 (130254|3,130342|2,130430|1,130519|0,130607|1,130695|2) - change to single note. MX's notes are non-LN Cool Pattern Fixed

02:17:489 (137489|2) - move to 1 just like 02:18:548 (138548|0,138636|1,138724|3,138724|2) - Applied

02:30:195 - add note for cymbals. Applied

02:35:842 - ^ Applied

02:40:077 - add note for snare emphasis Applied

02:42:107 (162107|1,162283|3) - remove, no sound and no notes for MX here. Applied

02:42:019 - and 02:42:195 - add note, it should be the same double notes as 02:40:783 (160783|0,160783|3,160960|2,160960|1) - Applied

02:43:519 (163519|2,163695|0) - remove. same reason as previous. Applied

02:43:430 (163430|3,163607|1) - add note to make double. Applied

02:44:930 (164930|3,165107|3,165283|1) - remove. same reason as previous. Applied

02:46:254 - add note to 1, strong sound cymbals. Applied

02:44:842 (164842|1,165019|2,165195|0) - add note to make it double. Applied

[Overall]
Great Miku song pick~
Please vote here as feedback for my M4M modding performance: t/372334/ Done >w<)b
Thank you so much for the contract, until next time~
Good luck! Here have a star AAAAAAA


~ END OF CONTRACT ~

Garalulu wrote:

Hi, Syadow! sry for late ㅠㅅㅠ

Team Symphony Mania Modding Queue

[EZ]
00:00:372 - 00:06:019 - let's start from the first part!

00:01:254 (1254|0,1430|2,1607|0,1783|1) - this is same sound with 00:02:666 (2666|1,2842|0,3195|2) . so I think you can add one note at 00:03:019
00:01:783 (1783|1,2136|3,2313|2) - this is same sound with 00:03:195 (3195|2,3371|0,3548|1,3724|3) . and 00:00:372 (372|0,724|3,901|1) . how about delete one note at 00:03:371 (3371|0) ? Oki Applied

00:06:724 - 00:18:019 - this is same melody construction. you should organize it with consistency.
idk what sound do you put on it. melody or drum? Melody

00:06:724 (6724|0,7077|3,7254|2) - the first sound occupied three notes but 00:08:136 - has only one note. 00:09:548 - is same!
and 00:13:783 - has four notes. make them same structure :3 oh thanks remind me >w<)b

00:10:960 - 00:12:371 - they had high sound so how about add one note at 00:11:313 - , 00:11:666 - 00:12:195 - ? Oki

01:03:195 - 01:13:783 - you can map this part same with 00:06:724 - 00:18:019 Thanks Rearranged

[NM]

00:04:077 (4077|1,4166|3,4254|0) - another part in 00:00:372 - 00:06:019 , they had only two notes with this sound.
00:02:666 (2666|0,2842|3) - 00:04:783 (4783|1,4960|2) - 00:05:489 (5489|2,5666|0) - For Safe in NM diff

00:18:019 - 00:39:901 - too easy and looks similar with EZ. add more notes to increase diff harder. No! cuz SR increase

01:01:783 (61783|1,61960|2,62136|0,62313|2,62313|1) - make consistency with 00:56:136 (56136|0,56136|3,56313|2,56313|1,56489|0,56666|3,56666|2) - Nice Thanks

[MX]

00:48:636 - add 1 note for focusing drum Oki

01:19:960 (79960|3,79960|1,80048|0,80048|2,80136|2,80136|1,80136|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5934429 Thanks

kk i'm done with this

Good Luck!!

Rivals_7 wrote:

Mod Request

capitaro - Tenshinranman Haikara Hime[OsuMania]

You are not forced to applied all, if there's any suggestion that doesn't fit your mapping style, you can freely reject it

[General]
Background:Not Fine! Find the BG that has at least 1366 x 768. This has been mentioned several times, why you still not change this? Fixed My BG to 1366 x 768 Thanks >w<
Metadata: Fine
Mapset:fine
Difficulty Spread:Fine
AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A): Ok
MP3: Fine
Hitsound: No HS Oh god i Cant HS right now
Timing: Fine
Other Stuff: None

Column:
1|2|3|4

EZ

SPOILER

• tfw its named EZ but still 1'6*
  
  This diff could be more pitch wise, take a serious look on each note.

1. suggestion below is to made this diff properly balanced between hands All Applied
   00:01:607 (1607|0) - to col 4
   00:05:313 (5313|2) - 4
   00:06:724 (6724|0,6901|2) - 4|1
   02:29:489 (149489|3,149666|2,149842|3) - 3|4|2
   02:36:019 (156019|1) - 3
   02:44:313 (164313|2,164489|1) - 2|4
   
2. 00:11:313 (11313|2,11313|1,11666|1,11666|2,12195|2,12195|3) - imo there's no need to doubles, since this is EZ so Single note should be fine. (Except for cymbal, but you dont have to double all the cymbals) Oki
   
3. 01:07:430 (67430|3,67430|2,67783|2,67783|1,68136|1,68136|0) - ^ Oki
   
4. 01:12:371 (72371|1,72371|2,72724|3,72724|2,72901|0,72901|1,73077|3,73254|3) - rearrange, thats all i could say. this is too tricky for EZ fixed
   
5. 02:27:901 (147901|1,148254|1) - pitch is not same Oki

NM

SPOILER

• The consistencies is quite messed up, especially at balancing. some pattern could be improved more

1. 00:04:166 (4166|3) - delete. you didnt map this kind of noises before - 00:01:342 - so its inconsistent Oki
   
2. 00:11:136 (11136|1,11313|0,11489|1,11666|0,11842|1) - alright. since this is NM, you will have to pay attention on making a simple pattern but "challenging". like this one. it is challenging, but its formed a trill. which can confuse player whose still new at this gamemode. I would recommed the pattern that might fit with songs atmosphere as well.
   Thanks for Suggestion >w<
   
3. 00:16:960 (16960|3) - i'd say to better delete this. let the cymbal have the doubles oki
   
4. 00:34:960 (34960|1) - no need for doubles. see - 00:23:666 (23666|3) - oki
   
5. 00:47:489 (47489|1,47666|1,48371|1,48548|1) - I recommend to avoid jack as possible in eaasier difficulties. except on special cases. like, same pitch oki fixed
   
6. 01:29:136 (89136|0,89313|0) - wh.. no pls. change pls fixed
   
7. 01:30:724 (90724|1,90989|1,91254|1) - uhh... ;w;
   
8. 01:34:077 (94077|0,94254|0) - hue ;w;
   
9. 01:35:666 (95666|1,95842|1) - not a same pitch, even the vocal pitch is different. so why same col? fixed thats my old pattern :'v
   
10. 01:39:548 (99548|2,99548|0) - this clap doubled but - 01:40:254 (100254|1) - 01:40:960 (100960|3) - isn't. inconsistent. (there's probably more. im lazy :u) fixed
    
11. 01:57:195 (117195|3,117371|3,117548|2,117724|2,117901|1,118077|1) - i did not recommend this for NM tbh oki
    
12. 02:10:254 (130254|1,130254|3,130342|2,130430|0,130519|1) - Nope, this is just too tricky for NM. pls change oki

HD

SPOILER

• Some stream is quite uncomfy, plus some ghost note

1. 00:10:960 (10960|1) - move to 3. avoid shielding - 00:10:960 (10960|1,11136|1) - Oki
   
2. 00:24:371 (24371|0,24460|1,24548|0,24636|1) - one handed trill is fine tho, but this is like... the only one on the entire diff lel. so maybe move - 00:24:548 (24548|0,24636|1) - to 4|1 Oki
   
3. 00:28:430 (28430|1,28607|0,28783|1) - 3|2|1 respectively. better handling Oki
   
4. 00:41:489 (41489|3) - ghost oki
   
5. 00:42:548 (42548|0) - ^ Oki
   
6. 00:43:254 (43254|1,43254|2,43430|2,43430|1) - well actually it'll be more better if its moved to left one step fixed
   
7. 00:43:607 (43607|3) - i feel that this should be doubled too. technically still a part of the 2-noter crash noise before (- 00:43:254 (43254|2,43254|1,43430|1,43430|2) - ) so I see no reason why is this one note fixed
   
8. 00:44:313 (44313|3) - ghost. Oki
   I'll stop about ghost now, heard the map with 0% fx noises to easily spot 'em Thanks for suggestion
   
9. 00:44:754 - Oki
   
10. 00:45:371 (45371|1,66548|1) - not really convenient imo so just move this to 3 Oki
    
11. 01:23:313 (83313|2) - move to 2 for more lenient gameplay Oki
    
12. 01:25:607 (85607|0,85783|3) - 4|3 Oki
    
13. 01:27:548 (87548|2,87724|2) - different pitch, so idk why is this in the same column oh :v thanks
    
14. 01:28:607 - where is the SN like you do before? - 01:25:783 - ??
    
15. 01:30:371 (90371|1) - pretty sure this should be doubled Oki
    
16. 01:50:724 (110724|3,110901|3) - different pitch. why same column? aaaa again
    
17. 02:35:666 (155666|0) - more lenient if its moved to 4 Oki
    
18. 02:40:430 (160430|2) - should be doubled? yeah
    
19. 02:49:033 (169033|2) - some of the notes, like this one, are quite earlier than it should be. try using 1/12 (Should applied to all diff)Fixed to All diff

MX

SPOILER

• Still many ghost notes occured, unecessary jacks and inconsistencies. this diff still needs a lot of work

1. 00:16:607 (16607|3,16607|0,16783|1,16783|2) - these doubles are literally louder than - 00:16:960 (16960|3,16960|0,16960|1) - so in the end it'll be like [img]puu.sh/qPXiu/43b086ab49.jpg[/img] oki Applied
   
2. 00:17:489 (17489|0) - delete. even tho its cymbal but its not enough emphasize for triple Applied
   
3. 00:20:048 (20048|0) - delete. no synth. Considering you use most of these Short Notes for synth wow thanks
   
4. 00:31:783 (31783|2) - i dont think i see this before. take a look at - 00:26:136 (26136|1) - . its a same phase but no LN are present. So this is inconsistent I forget to remove that Ln, thanks
   
5. 00:32:754 (32754|1) - no synth here. but - 00:32:930 - has synth. so add note there Oki Applied
   
6. 00:36:283 (36283|0) - 00:36:989 (36989|1) - 00:37:695 (37695|1) - No synth ^
   
7. 00:38:754 (38754|0,38842|2) - ctrl+g. your left lane is quite heavy - 00:38:136 (38136|0,38136|1,38313|0,38401|1,38577|0,38666|1,38754|0,38842|1) - Fixed
   
8. 00:41:489 (41489|0) - Ghost note oki
   
9. 00:41:842 (41842|0,41842|3) - i reckon this should be triple-ed as well. loud crash Oki
   
10. 00:42:548 (42548|1) - I think this is a ghost Oki
    
11. 00:43:607 - try sounds more balanced Fixed Thanks
    
12. 00:44:313 (44313|3,44313|1) - no beat. this should be empty Oki
    
13. 00:47:666 (47666|3,47666|0,47842|2,47842|1) - not triple-ed? triple hehe
    
14. 00:50:842 (50842|2,50842|1,51019|3,51019|2) - ctrl+g. to avoid triple stacking - 00:50:489 (50489|1,50666|1,50842|1) - Oki
    
15. 00:53:489 (53489|2,53666|2,53842|2,54019|2) - i dunno how should i made this to be more comfy. If i do, i might remap the entire stream part lel. Try to repattern. Fixed
    
16. 00:57:371 (57371|0,57548|0,57724|0,57901|0,58077|0,58254|0) - #1 aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaa thanks
    
17. 00:58:607 (58607|1,58783|1,58960|1,59136|1) - #2 why so many jacks occured in the same hand in a row :< aaaaaaa thanks
    
18. 00:59:489 (59489|1,59666|1,59842|1,60019|1) - #3 :u masih ada aja yg jack ;w;
    
19. 01:00:636 - no note for vocal? just like - 00:54:813 (54813|3) - Haha xD oki
    
20. 01:00:813 (60813|2) - no vocal i'm not follow vocal there a sound
    
21. 01:00:989 - vocal Keep mine
    
22. 01:02:136 (62136|1,62313|0) - swap place. avoid - 01:01:783 (61783|1,61960|1,62136|1) - Nice >w< thanks
    
23. 01:26:666 (86666|2) - should be on the blue line above (1/4). the synth is there not here Thanks remind me
    
24. 01:27:195 (87195|0,87195|2,87195|3,87195|3) - Triple? arent - 01:26:842 (86842|0,86842|3) - should be triple instead. according to the sound you mapped. also STACKEEDD NOTES!!! Fixed
    
25. 01:29:666 (89666|1,89666|0) - triple for crash oki
    
26. 01:31:077 (91077|2,91077|0,91077|3) - delete one of these. cymbal is actually at - 01:30:989 (90989|1,90989|0) - wow thanks
    
27. 01:31:960 (91960|2) - to 1 pls Oki
    
28. 01:36:901 - ??
    
29. 01:38:136 (98136|0) - delete. see at - 01:38:842 (98842|0,98842|3) - . They're same right so whats the purpose to make it different? Oki
    
30. 01:46:254 (106254|0,106430|0,106607|0,106783|1,106960|1,107136|1) - aaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaa fixed
    
31. 01:48:195 (108195|3,108195|2,108195|3) - STACKEEDD NOTES!!!(2) Fixed
    
32. 01:50:901 (110901|2) - shift it to blue line above (1/4) wew Thanks
    
33. 01:58:519 - missing note(s) ? Nice Thanks >w<
    
34. 01:59:577 - ^
    
35. 02:04:960 (124960|1) - pls delete,. the transition is really uncomfortable to hit Oki
    
36. 02:09:724 (129724|0,130077|3) - i guess this should be double? yeah
    
37. 02:16:077 (136077|1,136166|2,136254|3) - ctrl+h for more better handling oki
    
38. 02:30:548 (150548|1,150636|1) - uhhh.... this isnt fit. just remove - 02:30:548 (150548|1) - for more convenient gameplay Oki
    
39. 02:33:195 (153195|1,153371|1,153548|1,153724|1) - :u aaaaaaa again ;w;
    
40. 02:36:283 (156283|1) - ghost oki
    
41. 02:36:636 - missing note and - 02:36:813 (156813|2) - is a ghost Oki
    
42. just.... the area after the third kiai is really randomly placed. pls check again carefully Done
    
43. 02:52:607 - ohh no. not random SV. this is not even fit with the song :< aaaaaaa oki

alrite, Good Luck