Hey from my modding
queue for NM!
General:
A lot of your blankets are off, I don't know if this is intentional. I suggest using approach circles for reference, allows you to make sick lookin' blankets
Normal:
00:09:839 (3,4) - lower 3 a little for alignment
00:10:004 (4,1) - reduce curve on 2, blanket is not perfect
00:21:938 (1) - just a suggestion, not an issue, but maybe remove the second red dot make it white and make the slider curve around 00:20:943 (3) - ?
00:48:291 (2) - I'd make this straight, doesn't look very nice
00:51:109 (1) - I don't see a reason to NC this
00:52:932 (4,5) - align 5 to the end of 4, or put it a little lower imo
01:06:192 (4,5) - align a little better here too
01:14:977 (1,2) - rotate 2 a little this doesn't look like it curves perfectly
02:04:037 (2,3) - lower 3
02:06:523 (3) - better as straight or slight curve imo
02:36:523 (4,5) - I had to use a ruler to check, but this is indeed not perfectly aligned (yes I DID use a ruler
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03:06:358 (1,2) - blanket
03:05:860 (5,1) - and here I mean it's the same slider but stack 5 and 2 and have 1 blanket better around both
Really nice diff imo
Flow's nicely, rythm is cool, but some blankets aren't perfect (i didn't mention them all because some are really minor) and I'm picky when it comes to alignment :p
Hard:
00:35:198 (1,2) - blanket
00:36:358 (1) - don't like this shape
00:38:347 (2,3) - blanket
00:43:651 (2,3) - maybe blanket 2 to 3 and lower 00:44:479 (1) - just a little so 3 doesn't get offset like it is atm, it's not quite beautiful imo. Maybe do even further than I show below
00:44:977 (2,3) - blanket
00:46:303 (2) - the end is weird imo :/
00:57:905 (2,4) - weird stack and doesn't align with 00:58:070 (3) -
01:05:529 (1,3) - weird stack also
01:20:280 (1,2) - blanket
01:26:744 (1,2) - blanket
01:46:800 (1) - straight or slight downwards curve is better here imo
01:48:126 (1) - the end looks a bit weird
01:48:954 (3,1,2,3,4) - the pattern is cool, but there's a total lack of blanketting :p blanket 4 to the 5 that comes after, and then copy paste rotate it, they'll all look a pinch nicer
01:53:264 (1,2) - blanket
01:58:733 (1,2) - blanket
02:07:186 (1,2) - blanket and 2's shape is not symmetrical (oh noes!)
02:08:181 (1,2) - yeah, blanket
02:31:054 (3,4) - blanket
02:37:849 (3,4) - ^
02:56:247 (3) - assymetrical S shape
02:57:242 (2,3) - blanket
03:09:507 (2,3) - ^
03:14:313 (1,2) - ^
03:14:811 (2,3) - ^
03:14:811 (2,1) - stacking oddly
Nice mapset overall, but too many blanketting issues, and I probably didn't pick them all up
I hope you can get these fixed, your mapset is really good, so I'd love to see it ranked