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Good luck! Nice song~
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- first thing to say.. you need an Easy difficulty if you want this mapset ranked or reduce the star difficulty into below 2.00 stars. This is available on Ranking Criteria on mapset section
- Reduce HP -1 since you don't have easy anyway that should be more safe imo
- 00:03:374 (1) - just make it straight for nice looking or like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5395185
- 00:12:325 (3,1) - seems 00:12:490 - should be clicked, maybe make (3) into a slider until there then move spinner into long white tick pic
- 00:25:087 (2) - the flow not good if note placed like this in normal diff imo, try to placing note on near tail of 00:24:590 (1) - http://puu.sh/ptFnQ/fccf326b9b.jpg
- 00:39:175 (1,2) - should be ctrl+g for vocal
- 00:52:435 (1,2,3) - I guess it more matching vocal and comfortable to click if just make the rhythm same as 00:53:761 (1,2,3) -
- 01:00:722 - should be clickable for drum sound, it's a bit awkward ignoring that imo
- 01:18:126 (1) - better put it on 01:17:960 - since in here kinda off and that make clicking not good..
- 01:49:286 (2) - I guess it should be on 01:49:452 - for more understandable rhythm. kinda guided by vocal instead.. >.>
- 02:34:534 (1) - not recommended to add much reverse on this difficulty
- 02:38:844 (2) - clap on start and end, also clap to on 02:39:175 (3) - 's end
- 02:56:910 (1) - clap should on 02:56:579 (3) - 's end
- 03:03:706 (1) - too fast after spinner >.<
- 03:07:683 (1) - should start on next red tick
- I noticed some bad overlap in this diff. example on 00:33:043 (2) - with (1). I recommend it stacked properly on other note or more better avoid overlap or stack in this diff for neat and visibility :v
- also about flow in some notes, my advice is try to make slider curve facing on next note for better flow. ex on 00:33:043 (2) - it should be like this also the tail too, try to facing direct toward next note :3
- For nc-ing thingy I guess it's more better if nc every 2 downbeats so it's more tidier and make the combo looks not too short. ex: 00:31:385 (1) - this combo can be removed since it's only (2) combo, better make it 'one' with 00:29:894 (1,2,3,4) -
- I guess adding some finish sound in some place not pain too (afterall you have that nice finish sound in folder lol). especially on some downbeats or spot that sound strong :v ex on 00:51:109 (1) - 's start or 00:59:894 (2) - 's end etc.
- 00:11:993 (3) - same as advice on Normal diff about slider's curve.. it should be like http://puu.sh/ptHJe/6859c6b071.jpg
- 00:17:131 (2) - why not spacing it like 00:19:120 (3) - etc. for consistency.. it's like 1/4 spaced like this
- 00:25:087 (2) - ^
- 00:25:916 - don't ignore that downbeat ;^; my suggestion is move 00:26:082 (1,2,3) - 1/2 beat and add a note on 00:27:076 - or this
- 00:59:894 (5,6) - kinda awkward rhythm in here, maybe just make those into one slider (also add clap on 01:00:059 - lol)
- 01:02:711 (3,1,2,3) - maybe try this rhythm for following vocal?
- 01:06:689 (4,1) - if you want this kind of overlap, maybe larger the spacing a bit http://puu.sh/ptIVM/19db5e28bb.jpg the currently seems you did something like not properly stacking lol
- 01:09:673 (1,2,3,4) - ^
- 01:15:474 (2) - bad overlapppuu ;w;
- 01:57:905 (2) - seems you skipping vocal here.. try this '-') http://puu.sh/ptJbK/5d388dbe0d.jpg
- 02:07:021 (6) - add circle. it's so obvious something can be heard ;(
- 02:11:827 (4) - make it like http://puu.sh/ptJms/e8bfcacf19.jpg dat downbeat should be clickable and fit with vocal imo :v
- 02:29:231 (1) - it should end at red tick.. can't hear anything that fit in blue tick >_< same goes at 02:30:556 (1) - 02:33:208 (1) -
- 02:32:131 (2) - same reason as ^ delete..
- 02:34:203 (4) - hear piano sound on red tick so it should be clickable http://puu.sh/ptJHz/37497c5879.jpg
- 02:34:866 (2) - naziii but move it 2 grid right for same spacing
- 02:36:026 (1) - nc on next note instead?
- also you can stack some note properly ex: 00:09:673 (4) - 00:56:082 (4) - etc.
- just take a quick look here, kinda tired sorry xD
- 01:00:557 (2) - ctrl+g
- 01:09:673 (1,2,3,4,5) - the flow a bit weird in here.. since that (1) is too curved.. maybe try this and for further note
- 01:24:921 (3,4) - I hope you make those slider or something so the vocal can be covered instead awkward 1/1 rhythm like this..
- 01:43:485 (3) - wew too cornered XD
- 02:01:551 (3) - clap on end
- 02:02:380 (4) - nc
- 02:57:573 (3) - clap sound sound more supported in prev note
- 02:58:402 (8,1) - the rhythm should be ctrl+g'ed i guess..
- 02:59:313 - could be 1/4 in here
- 03:13:816 (5) - delete this may sounds better pause in here also ctrl+g 03:13:982 (6) -
Good luck! Nice song~