Thanks For Modding my map! (Sorry there was so many mistakes, I haven't mapped in foreverYasora wrote:
hey~ hi
NormalHard
- first thing to say.. you need an Easy difficulty if you want this mapset ranked or reduce the star difficulty into below 2.00 stars. This is available on Ranking Criteria on mapset section Oh, okay thanks for pointing that out ^.^
- Reduce HP -1 since you don't have easy anyway that should be more safe imo okie
- 00:03:374 (1) - just make it straight for nice looking or like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5395185 done
- 00:12:325 (3,1) - seems 00:12:490 - should be clicked, maybe make (3) into a slider until there then move spinner into long white tick pic done
- 00:25:087 (2) - the flow not good if note placed like this in normal diff imo, try to placing note on near tail of 00:24:590 (1) - http://puu.sh/ptFnQ/fccf326b9b.jpg done
- 00:39:175 (1,2) - should be ctrl+g for vocal done
- 00:52:435 (1,2,3) - I guess it more matching vocal and comfortable to click if just make the rhythm same as 00:53:761 (1,2,3) - done
- 01:00:722 - should be clickable for drum sound, it's a bit awkward ignoring that imo done
- 01:18:126 (1) - better put it on 01:17:960 - since in here kinda off and that make clicking not good.. done
- 01:49:286 (2) - I guess it should be on 01:49:452 - for more understandable rhythm. kinda guided by vocal instead.. >.> done
- 02:34:534 (1) - not recommended to add much reverse on this difficulty Ok, i changed to a repeat slider and circle
- 02:38:844 (2) - clap on start and end, also clap to on 02:39:175 (3) - 's end Added to (2), but I think (3) is fine without the clap on the end because it sounds like the music is winding down there (just imo)
- 02:56:910 (1) - clap should on 02:56:579 (3) - 's end done
- 03:03:706 (1) - too fast after spinner >.< removed spinner, added note on first white tick (where it started)
- 03:07:683 (1) - should start on next red tick done
- I noticed some bad overlap in this diff. example on 00:33:043 (2) - with (1). I recommend it stacked properly on other note or more better avoid overlap or stack in this diff for neat and visibility :v
- also about flow in some notes, my advice is try to make slider curve facing on next note for better flow. ex on 00:33:043 (2) - it should be like this also the tail too, try to facing direct toward next note :3 okie
- For nc-ing thingy I guess it's more better if nc every 2 downbeats so it's more tidier and make the combo looks not too short. ex: 00:31:385 (1) - this combo can be removed since it's only (2) combo, better make it 'one' with 00:29:894 (1,2,3,4) - ok
- I guess adding some finish sound in some place not pain too (afterall you have that nice finish sound in folder lol). especially on some downbeats or spot that sound strong :v ex on 00:51:109 (1) - 's start or 00:59:894 (2) - 's end etc. okay
Insane
- 00:11:993 (3) - same as advice on Normal diff about slider's curve.. it should be like http://puu.sh/ptHJe/6859c6b071.jpg okay
- 00:17:131 (2) - why not spacing it like 00:19:120 (3) - etc. for consistency.. it's like 1/4 spaced like this done
- 00:25:087 (2) - ^ done
- 00:25:916 - don't ignore that downbeat ;^; my suggestion is move 00:26:082 (1,2,3) - 1/2 beat and add a note on 00:27:076 - or this i did the first one
- 00:59:894 (5,6) - kinda awkward rhythm in here, maybe just make those into one slider (also add clap on 01:00:059 - lol) done
- 01:02:711 (3,1,2,3) - maybe try this rhythm for following vocal? done
- 01:06:689 (4,1) - if you want this kind of overlap, maybe larger the spacing a bit http://puu.sh/ptIVM/19db5e28bb.jpg the currently seems you did something like not properly stacking lol done
- 01:09:673 (1,2,3,4) - ^ fixed
- 01:15:474 (2) - bad overlapppuu ;w; fixed
- 01:57:905 (2) - seems you skipping vocal here.. try this '-') http://puu.sh/ptJbK/5d388dbe0d.jpg I used a repeat slider instead
- 02:07:021 (6) - add circle. it's so obvious something can be heard ;( done
- 02:11:827 (4) - make it like http://puu.sh/ptJms/e8bfcacf19.jpg dat downbeat should be clickable and fit with vocal imo :v done
- 02:29:231 (1) - it should end at red tick.. can't hear anything that fit in blue tick >_< same goes at 02:30:556 (1) - 02:33:208 (1) - done
- 02:32:131 (2) - same reason as ^ delete.. done
- 02:34:203 (4) - hear piano sound on red tick so it should be clickable http://puu.sh/ptJHz/37497c5879.jpg done
- 02:34:866 (2) - naziii but move it 2 grid right for same spacing okay
- 02:36:026 (1) - nc on next note instead? done
- also you can stack some note properly ex: 00:09:673 (4) - 00:56:082 (4) - etc. got it
oh one thing again, delete ☆ from your tag. sometimes icon like that can be broken in some editor ._. got it
- just take a quick look here, kinda tired sorry xD
- 01:00:557 (2) - ctrl+g done
- 01:09:673 (1,2,3,4,5) - the flow a bit weird in here.. since that (1) is too curved.. maybe try this and for further note okay
- 01:24:921 (3,4) - I hope you make those slider or something so the vocal can be covered instead awkward 1/1 rhythm like this..
- 01:43:485 (3) - wew too cornered XD fixed
- 02:01:551 (3) - clap on end done
- 02:02:380 (4) - nc done
- 02:57:573 (3) - clap sound sound more supported in prev note okay
- 02:58:402 (8,1) - the rhythm should be ctrl+g'ed i guess.. done
- 02:59:313 - could be 1/4 in here tbh, I feel like it's fine as it is, I don't see (or hear) a reason to change it
- 03:13:816 (5) - delete this may sounds better pause in here also ctrl+g 03:13:982 (6) - done
Good luck! Nice song~