Insane
Just wanna say for starters that this is mapped so neatly and just, really really good. This cannot be your first map x_x
00:07:850 (3,4,5) - Here the stack with 3 and 5 is off, you should make them completely overlap.
00:10:502 (2,3,4) - ^^^
00:21:441 (2,1) - ^^^^^
00:22:435 (2,3,4,5) - You should adjust 4 so its on the same level as the rest of these
01:05:198 (6,3) - Layering again
01:21:109 (5,1,2) - It just doesn't look so good with this slightly shifted to the right, i don't really know what i would put there instead so. ya :L
01:24:921 (3,1) - Layering, again, again
01:54:590 (1,2) - If you flip 2 horizontally, it flows a lot better~
03:07:186 (4,5,6,1) - Same thing with the layering on 4 and 1
This is seriously AMAZING for someones first map.
00:07:850 (3,4,5) - Here the stack with 3 and 5 is off, you should make them completely overlap.
00:10:502 (2,3,4) - ^^^
00:21:441 (2,1) - ^^^^^
00:22:435 (2,3,4,5) - You should adjust 4 so its on the same level as the rest of these
01:05:198 (6,3) - Layering again
01:21:109 (5,1,2) - It just doesn't look so good with this slightly shifted to the right, i don't really know what i would put there instead so. ya :L
01:24:921 (3,1) - Layering, again, again
01:54:590 (1,2) - If you flip 2 horizontally, it flows a lot better~
03:07:186 (4,5,6,1) - Same thing with the layering on 4 and 1
This is seriously AMAZING for someones first map.
Best of luck on tihs!! I really hope this gets ranked