Thanks for mod~Maxus wrote:
Well, as Requested.
[X]
00:09:543 (9543|7) - I think having this at col 6 is better tbh instead at col 8 which kinda makes the flow kinda weird. sure
00:15:728 (15728|5,15742|4) - Kinda similar as above, I prefer you switch column the pattern to kinda make it more linear, especially before hitting the nasty jack after this part. ok
00:18:994 (18994|4) - Try move this to col 6 to form a complete trill with 00:18:734 (18734|6,18821|5,18907|6) - to make it consistent with how you did it at 00:17:347 (17347|5,17433|4,17520|5,17607|4) - ok
00:20:728 (20728|6) - move to col 6 here cause the pitch at 00:20:901 (20901|6) - is noticeably higher. sure
00:32:607 - This looks really hard, do others can actually hit this ._.? Actually, revising this pattern seems to suggest I put some extra notes here, let's fix it...
00:39:716 - Quite sure there's still synth here, shouldn't be ignore here.sure, checked out the whole section for this synth too.
00:51:162 - Should have 1/2 LN here, i can actually hear synth here. please do this at other diff too. sure. (I use single note instead of LN for N diff as short LN can be confusing for novices)
00:57:462 - Having 1/3 stream until 00:57:809 - actually quite interesting to be made here. ok
01:11:219 (71219|5,71234|4) - Same as 00:15:728 (15728|5,15742|4) - sure
01:16:219 (76219|5,76306|4,76393|5,76479|4) - This pattern kinda not makes sense for me for you to trilled here since the piano pitch obviously all different here. I will recommend you http://puu.sh/AeELZ/05854e8bc2.png instead (started from 01:16:306 - ) Somewhat different to your suggestion as I want to keep the Clap at col 8. But otherwise ok.
01:29:138 - Although I know the structure you intend to built here, but for me this kinda doesn't represent the pitch well enough. I will recommend you something like http://puu.sh/AeF4o/08d7649d9e.png ok
01:39:543 (99543|4,99716|4,99890|4,100063|4,100237|4,100410|4,100584|4) - This anchor kindaaa.. mehhh.. probably move 01:39:890 (99890|4) - to col 8 to reduce a bit. sure
01:53:503 - There's cymbal hard sound here, probably add a note? Does not seem to be a sound for me, could be artifact from the last cymbal, not sure, leaving it
01:56:537 - Ah i was hoping you actually normalize the red line here, since the slowdown here makes it play too redundant and personally i don't really like it playing slowjam at 46 BPM. please do it at all difficulty. argh... actually I really liked slowing down this, the music get softer down the road..... what about normalize it and then apply gradually slowing down to 0.7x of normalized SV?...
[I]
00:09:543 (9543|7) - Same as X difficulty. sure
00:25:757 (25757|6) - since this one is higher pitch, doesn't really makes sense for me to have lower column than 00:25:670 (25670|7) - , I will suggest you to move 00:25:670 (25670|7,25757|6,25844|5,25930|3) - to 6-7-4-5. actually the note 8 is for kick that has been running for several measures already... Moving that note away could become awkward...
00:26:711 - Since the pitch are gradually lower, i expect the stair pattern to also represent that. Try something like http://puu.sh/AeFsd/0a3d8cf885.png ok, tweaked a bit
00:33:300 - until 00:37:115 - Perhaps you can give more differences with patterning compared with X diff? you can essentially only move the column of the pattern while making the structure remains the same. sure let's see...
01:29:138 - until 01:32:953 - this also kinda looked too same with X diff, although i can give leniency when it's at low dense pattern, but not when the pattern is this dense. I hope you can kinda makes it different but still makes your structure remains same. ok let's see...
[H]
00:18:040 - You should delete this note i think since you didn't use it at 00:19:427 - etc. The piano is present here but absent at 00:19:427, so keeping...
00:24:977 - Should be deleted too? same reason as above. Same as 00:18:040, piano is present
01:26:711 - Actually i don't really like how simple this pattern is although i know its hard diff, since it's only single stream i do think you can variate it a bit like http://puu.sh/AeFV6/36a3753362.png hm... ok, tweaked the ending to keep decreasing in pitch
01:28:792 - Probably kinda the same as I diff. sure
[N]
00:16:826 (16826|1,17000|2,17173|4,17347|5) - I don't think the pattern should be this linear considering how the pitch sounded here. try 4-3-6-5. ok
01:12:318 (72318|1,72491|3,72664|4,72838|5) - kinda same as before, but you probably can tweak it a bit in a way that forms similar pattern as before. ok
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