The padoru avatar invasion.
[General]
- I know kami mention the hitsound volume already, but while modding this, many of them are barely audible, the soft-hitnormal are mostly audible, mostly with the chord spam, but the whistle, the clap.
You'll find some example in my mods, but like for example these clap in Normal : 00:41:624 (41624|6,41971|4,42318|4,42664|2) - , you barely hear them, maybe you won't even hear them at all. And some whistle that you try to match the drum in the higher diff, are barely audible x.x. - Suggestion for future map: On your hard, you should really try to find an easier rhythm, mostly on the calm part (calm part with MANY notes), they have nearly the exact same rhythm and amount of note as the highest diff, while having 10x more then the diff below.
[N]
- 00:16:653 - I'm not sure if you are "strickly" matching to the pitch that it became like that, but check out 2nd and last column. https://puu.sh/yVNto/d2cf2b6757.png , feel pretty empty no?
- 00:41:624 (41624|6,41971|4,42318|4,42664|2) - You're using this clap hitsound consistently on every diff, yet what happen here? Why are they place here, when there is no that "clap" sound from the song you try to fit with? The hitsound overall are super lower, which is why player probably won't feel it (which is also bad), but imagine if someone turn off hitsound, they will hear random clapping sound here that is not consistent with other difficulty and the Normal diff.
- 01:01:740 (61740|5,62000|7,62260|5,62433|6,62693|4) - I don't know if you'll change it, but better point it out, since it might help for your future map. You're using the exact same rhythm and pattern as the higher diff, I mean for the rhythm part you probably didn't find something more simple, but patternwise you could totally have done something way more simple for beginner. Look at this pattern is all in the same hand with a different snap in the middle after a consistent 1/1 snap, totally going to trick many Normal player.
- 01:34:341 - Not sure how you manage those trills while the song is consistent. Try listening to 25%, and group some notes : 01:34:688 (94688|5,94861|3,95034|5,95208|7) - , 01:35:381 (95381|5,95555|3,95728|5,95901|3) - , 01:36:075 (96075|1,96248|2,96422|4,96595|2) - , 01:36:769 (96769|1,96942|2,97115|1,97289|3) - , etc.
- 01:45:092 (105092|1,105266|3,105439|1) - Pretty sure you can play around the pattern so this 01:45:092 (105092|1) - doesn't end up the same column as 01:45:439 (105439|1,105786|1,106133|1,106479|1) - .
- 01:49:601 (109601|1,110295|2) - Move one column to the right? Not sure why they have to be in the same column then 01:48:214 (108214|1,108560|1,108907|1,109254|1) - . Also there is so many empty spot.
[H]
- 00:10:410 (10410|0) - Hmm, forgot your scratch hitsound here? xD
- 00:19:601 (19601|2,19688|3,19774|2,19861|3) - Try to avoid this mini trill? I mean it might throw off some player, and doesn't fit the piano (even thought on 100% it will be too fast to notice). The reason I'm mentioning this, is because I see you cut your clean stair here 00:20:468 - , so pretty sure you can do something here as well 00:19:514 (19514|1,19601|2,19688|3) - .
- 00:18:127 (18127|3) - Move to the right one time, so that this pattern 00:18:040 (18040|1,18127|3,18214|5) - isn't the exact same as 00:17:693 (17693|1,17780|3,17867|5) - . Also 00:18:127 (18127|3) - have the same pitch as 00:18:474 (18474|4) - . Another reason, barely any note in that column =w= https://puu.sh/yVPyL/d4aa2ce421.png .
- 00:24:543 (24543|3,24716|3,24977|3,25150|3) - Hmm try to use another column? 00:24:543 (24543|3,24716|3) - have different pitch then this 00:24:977 (24977|3,25150|3) - .
- 00:28:445 (28445|2) - Just mentioning in case if it was a mistake, not sure if is intentional to keep it 1/1 snap, while the main sound start here 00:28:358 - . If this is accept, might want to check your Normal diff too.
00:31:219 (31219|3) - This too. - 00:58:271 - Missing a whistle here?
- 01:12:144 - + Pretty sure you just map this section for the piano, but what about 2nd column *cough cough* https://puu.sh/yXRJg/ea1078910c.png
[I]
- 00:29:023 - Not sure if you're missing your drum here, since you map the other one in this section.
- 00:58:271 - Missing a whistle here?
- 01:38:589 (98589|3) - Move this to the middle lane, 5th columns.
[X]
- 01:01:740 (61740|5) - Not sure if is intentional, but you probably want to keep these consistent. https://puu.sh/yVxrI/88be031601.png
- 01:19:688 (79688|5,79774|4,79861|5,79861|3,79948|4,80034|5,80034|3,80121|4,80208|3,80208|5,80295|4,80381|5,80555|3,80555|5,80641|4,80728|3,80728|5,80815|4,80901|5,80901|3,80988|4,81075|5) - I understand the double stairs part, but this is quite a long trills for 2 part of the piano that have a complete different pitch. https://puu.sh/yVxE3/3df94d87fe.png
This 01:21:162 - and 01:19:774 - , how about make these 2 similar, since the piano is similar here, instead of making this 01:19:774 - similar to this 01:20:555 - . Also 01:21:162 - have repetitif piano pattern.
01:19:774 (79774|4,79774|6,79861|5,79861|3,79948|4,79948|6,80034|3,80034|5) - This trill, I personnally would stop it here 01:20:121 - because the piano stop repeating the same notes. I love the way you try to make lower to higher pitch here 01:20:208 (80208|3,80295|4,80381|5) - , but how about something like this for a change https://puu.sh/yVxIS/74c44d9dd6.png, you still keep the "trilly part" (Also 01:20:295 - this is a bit lower pitch then 01:20:208 - , which is why I put a note more right here.) Or you could try something else you want xP. - 01:22:549 - How about give the middle column some rest here XD. https://puu.sh/yVxPy/5c2cbaba5e.png . Like you did here 01:21:942 (81942|2,81942|4,82029|3,82029|5,82115|4,82115|2) - some kind of trill due to the piano (I wish is started here 01:21:855 - like the piano thought, but anyway song going too fast to be super ultra nazi with the song xD). How about making a trill here 01:22:549 - , so it go, trill then double stair left to right to fit the fast piano pitch OwO. Suggestion : https://puu.sh/yVxSQ/b187d99bb6.png , trill isn't the same column as 01:21:855 - due to different pitch.
- 01:33:821 (93821|1,93864|2,93907|3,93951|4,93994|1,94052|2,94110|3,94167|1,94225|2,94283|3) - Uhh, I don't know if there is a confirmation somewhere, most of the 1/3 drum that you put whistle on, mostly the middle part, I have a huuuuge trouble of hearing it from the song, I don't know if is me so it might be me, but here is what I'm hearing. I suppose you did a 1/8 here 01:33:821 (93821|1,93864|2,93907|3,93951|4) - due to the fast part, but that fast part also appear here 01:34:167 - , but you did a 1/6 here with here 01:33:994 - . I'm also not sure if I hear anything here 01:33:994 (93994|1,94052|2,94110|3) - .
- 01:34:345 - + I suppose those double chord note are mostly place random, since I can kinda see a nearly copy pasta around this part https://puu.sh/yVygj/fa2d02cb40.png, also with a random number of jack note. I actually have an idea, I don't know if you'll have patient to maybe try it out.
Your double chord note start doing some random jack column, 01:34:688 (94688|6,94861|6,95034|6,95208|6,95381|6) - , 01:35:381 (95381|5,95555|5,95728|5,95901|5,96075|5) - , 01:36:335 (96335|1,96508|1,96682|1,96855|1,97029|1,97202|1,97375|1) - , 01:36:422 (96422|4,96595|4,96769|4,96942|4,97115|4,97289|4) - , 01:39:196 (99196|4,99370|4,99543|4,99716|4,99890|4,100063|4,100237|4,100410|4,100584|4) - seriously is fine by me, I mean making those pattern, it will happen obviously, but how about trying something that can be a little bit more consistent. If you try to listen to it on 25% you'll be hearing the consistent really clear, follow the main melody at 01:34:688 - , then is still consistent but with different pitch 01:35:381 - , then 01:36:075 - , then 01:36:769 - , etc. And try to just make your continue jack on those section. In the end, you'll have a consistent jack spread on different kind of column, without a column being too overflow, while having your double/triple chord notes.