1. Easy (2.04 stars, 52 notes)
2. Hard (4.95 stars, 139 notes)
3. Normal (4.06 stars, 84 notes)
4. Saten's Insane (4.99 stars, 192 notes)

ziin wrote:

Ushavtem mayim b'sason mimainei hayeshua! Mayim mayim mayim mayim, hey, mayim b'sason :3

all suggestions due to WIP.

[general]
bpm 138.583 works for me the whole way through. May need fine tuning after it's done.
add "mayim" to tags.

[saten]
00:09:382 (6) - just a beat not a slider
00:13:183 (5,1) - ^ (5) is 2 circles now
00:22:511 (4) - ^
00:23:158 (5) - overmap it?
00:29:633 (1) - repeating sliders?
00:32:655 (3,4) - repeating slider
00:44:917 (5) - just a beat on the end
spinner is too long

ziin wrote:

Ushavtem mayim b'sason mimainei hayeshua!

all suggestions due to WIP.

[general]
bpm 138.583 works for me the whole way through. May need fine tuning after it's done. fixed
add "mayim" to tags.
crop the background rather than scaling it please, unless this is just temporary. It's temporary still need to find one

[hard]
00:00:857 (3) - no beat
00:01:073 (4) - snap to 6ths or 8ths or don't follow the lyrics at all.
00:09:274 (3) - slider until 00:09:598?
00:10:569 (1,2,3,4) and 00:14:022 (1,2,3,4) - make them consistent
00:17:260 (6) - delete or map "biribiri" with sliders
00:18:339 (3) - do something else
00:22:224 (6) - just a beat not a slider
spinner too long

Saten-san wrote:

Here's 2 BG suggestions (unedited though )

SPOILER

SPOILER

ArisuKarin wrote:

Um here is my beatmap for this if you want to use it.

Hushu wrote:

Hello, here is my mod ^^!

Easy:
There are some pattern changes which I don't like. It is best if easy repeates sequences. Emm no it isn't play the same pattern over and over again get really boring so I'd rather not

0:07:137 - Make it go till 0:07:570 and then <-> twice What I said above
0:40:041 - Copy slider which is at 0:36:578, removing the 3 intruding beats Nope
0:44:154 - Add a circle Too hard for an Easy

Normal:
Very stiff...

0:13:415 - Add a circle
0:16:878 - ^
0:27:269 - ^
0:30:733 - ^
0:32:248 - Makethis slider 1/4 beat shorter and then <-> once

Nope^

Hard:


0:09:843 - Add a circle
0:13:306 - ^
0:22:723 - Don't <-> this slider, intead...
--> 0:22:940 - Add 1/4 beat long slider
--> 0:23:156 - ^
0:34:629 - Delete this circle
0:41:557 - ^

Adding beats will just become a spam of them, and others well I can't apply them

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[General]
You can use "Toaru Majutsu no Index" as Source It's already in the source :S
Add "Misaka Mikoto", "Last Order" and "Imouto" as tags Done
Why all those inherited sections at the end of all diff? left only the final one. The sound fades out to a smooth silent finish

[Hard]
it seems a bit to easy for a Hard >.< +2 AR, +2 OD +1 CS (small circles) could make it an hard, actually Doen the OD [/color]
00:30:949 (5,1) - spacing >.<, you can move 00:30:516 (3,4,5) - to correct this Done
00:36:578 (1,2,3,4) - those slider will be nicer if you move them to form A cross a cross would screw up the spacing but did something that looks better
nothing to say for the other diff's

Giorgos wrote:

Saten-san's Insane:
00:07:353 - spacing. Add there a circle I guess it wont hurt
00:10:600 - 00:11:899 - On these 4 jumps it would be nice if you put them not in random order - more symmetry,as I said done
00:14:064 - 00:15:579 - ^ I used 90º rotating here
crazy diff,btw xD Mhm :3

Giorgos wrote:

Well,let's see..

you should put in option 'Lead-in-(Seconds)' - 2 seconds,but not 1,5

you have some non-simmetrical sliders..

Easy:
00:04:972 - I think this circle is better right above the middle of the slider.. so,1 grid down,2 grids left.
00:25:754 - 2 grids up
No more problems here,just only non-simmetry.

Normal:
00:00:210 - 1 grid left
00:22:290 - 1 grid up
00:23:156 - 1 grid right
No problems here as well,just the same problem as in easy diff.

Hard:
00:06:271 - 1 grid right
00:06:704 - 1 grid up
00:27:702 - I think this is an extra note


So,that is all! I did what I could
Nice song,star

wmfchris wrote:

[saten's insane]
find nothing more than uneven spacings at the beginning.

[Hard]
00:04:942 (4) - right 1 grid seems fine here
00:05:405 (1,2) - stack properly
00:21:641 (3) - right 1 grid

[Normal]
00:00:210 (1,2) - down 1 grid

not bad, star~

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

gomen, matta~?

Hard
AR + 1 +2 looks better
00:06:487 (4,5) - symmetry D: its not suppose to by symmetrical D:
00:10:600 (1,2,3,4) - turn those into REAL jumps will ya? like 1,5x spacing, much more fitting and challenging same goes for other patterns like this I only like jumps on insane diffs personally
00:16:012 (2,3) - 1 grid left nope
00:22:723 (1) - avoid overlap Done
00:30:516 (3,4,5) - try not no to overlap (3) with (1)? Done
00:34:846 (1) - remove one repeat and add a note Nope
00:38:742 (2,3) - symmetry D: its not suppose to by symmetrical D:
00:40:041 (1,2) - add finishes? Thought about that but sounds really weird
00:40:907 (3) - add whistles? Added on the repeat part
00:42:855 (4,5) - slight overlap with (1) Done
00:43:505 (1,2) - finishes Again, sounds weird
00:45:886 (2,4) - add whistle? Done
00:51:731 (4) - add finishes Nope

Normal
00:05:405 (1) - spacing Fixed
hmm... kinda boring. it's very monotone. try to add more notes. Nope, fine as it is
00:04:756- add note
00:06:487 - ^
00:07:353 - ^
00:13:415 - ^
00:23:373 ^
00:27:269 - ^
00:30:733 - ^
00:31:599 - ^
00:35:928 - ^
00:42:855 - ^

Easy
Would be cool if you could get Finish hitsounds on the sliderticks. //custom hitsounds Way too lazy atm >w< might do it in the future
besides that fine :3

Kurisuchianu wrote:

General:
Why is not the kai? Kiai time doesn't fit this song

Easy:
00:51:948 - 00:55:628 : why so much control points It creates a fading spinner sound when played.

Normal:
00:51:948 - 00:55:628 : The same

Hard:
00:51:948 - 00:55:628 : still the same

Saten-san's Insane:
00:51:948 - 00:55:628 : why is the same ....

Finally... Star

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Insane
00:13:415 (1) - 1 grid up done

Blue Dragon wrote:

Insane
00:30:949 (3) - add whistle done
00:33:980 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the stacking makes this bad to play >: :> Did something different :3

James2250 wrote:

Saten-san's Insane:
Pretty overmapped... Yes, it's overmapped and pretty~ but really, I mostly followed the vocals so..
00:06:596 (4) - I would start at 00:06:487 and end on the white tick done I guess :3
00:33:547 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - meh...fine I guess, might be hard to read at first This was changed but never got updated in time

James2250 wrote:

Some things are simply suggestions, you don't have to follow everything~

-BPM might need some fine tuning, seems to go slightly off at the end Gonna leave that for later >.<
-Remove audio from the video if possible to save filespace Will fix when they program i use stops crashing :/

Easy:
Stuff like 00:03:673 (1,2) would look better if not touching. Go through the map and try and space your patterns out slightly more Tried my best to find them all
Map is pretty slow so maybe hp -1? Done
00:08:869 (1) - I would expect a whistle at the end of this to follow your pattern Done
00:16:662 (2,3) - ^ Done
00:34:846 (2) - could look nicer (more symmetrical) Done
00:34:846 (2,1) - spacing Fixed
00:40:041 (1,2) - try and avoid patterns overlapping Done
00:51:298 (3) - add whistles like the last slider? Done

Normal:
00:08:869 (1,2,3) - move pattern away from previous slider Done
00:17:095 (2) - add whistle? Done

Hard:
00:10:600 (1,4) - stack Was done in the past mod didn't update in time >.<
00:12:332 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add whistles to this part Done
00:40:041 (1,2,3,4) - add finishes to all these parts like the other difficulties? Done but not on 4, sounds weird
00:43:505 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ done but not on all parts said


Hitsounds might need some slight work but not bad overall
Deserves a star~

Deif wrote:

Yo Weez :3

[Easy]
00:29:650 (1) - As it is after a spinner, I suggest moving this to the middle of the screen. It'd be easier to Begginer players Don't really see how this would change anything. People typically spin like crazy so putting in the middle won't really change anything cuz they finish at a random point. And I feel that they have enough time to move.

[Normal]
00:27:919 (1) - I wonder if this spinner it too near to 00:29:650 (1)... 2 options:
- End it at 00:28:784 (it's gonna be too short imo) OR
- Convert it into a slider (end --> 00:29:217). It's up to you Done

[Hard]
00:06:487 (4) - (Nazi) 1 level-4 grid up Nope
00:37:444 (3,4) - 1 level-3 grid right, to align with 00:36:578 (1,2) Done


That's all! Take a star~ and gimme a cookie :3 (itadakimasu!!)
No cookie until i get my cookie D:

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi~ Here's my mod >w<

General;
- Everything is okk here

Easy;
- 00:43:072 >> One grid up then maybe make a triangle with (2,3,1)
- 00:48:700 >> Add a finish ?? Nope
- 00:52:164 >> I don't like how the spinner ends without sound, maybe end it in the previous white tick and add a finish ?? This is for all diffs by the way Will see what my partner in crime says

Normal;
- 00:00:642 >> Align with (1)
- 00:11:466 (2,1) >> Spacing
- 00:20:991 >> Could you curve it better so it doesn't touch (2)

Hard;
- 00:16:012 >> Align with (1)

Saten-san's Insane;
- Good ~

* Star ~

Weezy wrote:

lovhin456 wrote:

- 00:52:164 >> I don't like how the spinner ends without sound, maybe end it in the previous white tick and add a finish ?? This is for all diffs by the way Will see what my partner in crime says Is that me? o.o Btw, I really think that the fader fits though, correct me if I'm wrong

PS: YAAAY 500 posts!!!!

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[Insane]

00:17:095 (1) - delete new combo

00:33:872 (4,1) - ? although the right... What? >.<

IceBeam wrote:

[Saten-san]

00:29:650 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - So hard to read

Nice mapset,though Insane seems overmapped to me.
Star.

nante wrote:

[Easy]
fine

[Normal]
00:14:064 (1,2,3,4) - distance
00:22:290 (2) - ^
00:22:723 (1,2,3) - ^
00:24:455 (1) - ^
wait... why do you skip from 0,5, 0,2 to 1,0 distance snap? Set constant distance snap.
:/ i have no clue how the spacing got messed up here, well fixed now

[Hard]
00:40:907 (3) - delete finish at bounce o_o what finish...


nice, star