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Topic Starter
Acrith
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 12 grudnia 2011 at 16:07:39

Artist: Mami Kawada
Title: Sense
Source: Shakugan no Shana II
Tags: SnS Second Shakugan no Shana II Yuji Sakai Anime
BPM: 168
Filesize: 7209kb
Play Time: 04:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,84 stars, 521 notes)
  2. Normal (3,19 stars, 261 notes)
Download: Mami Kawada - Sense
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Another Shakugan no Shana map. ;)

19.10 - Resurrect;
20.10 - Modded by CXu
23.10 - Some modding and helping by Amai:)
12.11 - Modded by Nitojgrem
14.11 - Modded by Laurier
01.12 - Modding by La Cataline:)
12.12 - Small modding by AmaiHachimitsu
xivonax
Star for Beginning :)
OnizukaEikichi
Beautiful song! Star :3
Gotori
nice song and nice map Acrith

star~
Bodzio
nice map
star~
some slider looks ugly try to make them better
Topic Starter
Acrith
Fixed D:
rEdo
@.@
thr1ve
You still need to work on it. :)
Galkan
Blue - suggestions. You don't need to apply them if you don't want.
Orange - issues. You should fix them.
Red - major issues. You must fix them.

[General]

Great song choice. [Hard] is very good so far, no silly patterns and other annoying things, it's readable and joy to play! Keep it up! But remember you need [Easy] (or getting [Normal] below 3 star rating) to get it ranked.

[Normal]

00:12:831 - (1,2,3) Those sliders are off the rhytm, please shorten those.
00:15:152 - (4,5) It'd be cool to have 4th slider here, don't you think?

[Hard]

Nothing's really wrong now, since you fixed some bugs I told you on IRC (for example irrhytmical slider in 01:48:009 and some design issues) so I have nothing more to complain about.

Good luck with this.
+Star
Piotrekol
/me can't mod but i like it :)
Keita_old
Star
all sugestions told on irc
CHANGE TO KAWADA MAMI BECAUSE RAGE! :)
Topic Starter
Acrith
Keita, I'll think about it :).
klubek
hi :)

[General]

good song! SHANAAAA~

[Hard]
just some suggestions
00:21:938 (2,3,4) - spacing
00:52:831~00:52:920 - ultra fast KIAI mode?
03:45:331 (5) - new combo

nice, star~*
Bass
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MLGnom
Yay another Shakugan no Shana map :3

~Stared
Zlew
Star and a bit of storyboard. Clear/fail animations from Stepmania NEX theme.
chungskale
hi~
some random modding :3

[general]
try to use some hitsound finish.

[normal]
00:28:545 (5) - fix the shape...you can use Ctrl+left click to add a white point, right click to delete one
nice diff.

[hard]
00:32:116 (5) - distance snap
00:51:045 (7) - dont use 1/8 suddenly, and it should be longer ,until 00:51:402

00:55:688 - here is a beat ,maybe add a note here? waiting too long makes your map feel boring~
00:58:545 - ^
01:07:116 - ^
01:11:759 - ^
02:07:116 - ^
02:33:366 - ^
03:27:116 - ^

01:21:224 (5) - one grid left
01:46:581 - can add a note
02:27:116 (3,4,5,6) - 3 and 4 exchange, 5 and 6 exchange
03:31:224 (6) - maybe change it into a slider which end at 03:31:759 ?

conclusion:
you need to work more :D
try to look at those ranked maps which made by experienced mappers
like siriru and angelhoney
wish these can help you! star for support :D
Nickelodeon_old
*star for Hard. ;) nice map
Optic
very nice map :)

~ star ~
Louis Cyphre
[General]
Source: Shakugan no Shana II
a preview point for this map is not set.
02:01:402 - start kiai mod here. and end here 02:38:545 in both difficulties.
your background size is incorrent, please cut/resize to 1024 x 768
any kind of SB element must not be over 800 x 600, so resize your SB files too.
Add Easy difficulty
Use same count and length of kiai mod.
Add hitsounds


[Normal]
Use same count of break points as in [Hard]
I wonder, why you add green line that discreases sliderspeed by x0.80 in same time with red line.
00:07:117 (1) - select slider --> select 3rd point of slider --> move it 1 grid left --> select 2nd point of slider move down by 1 grid. And shape looks better.
00:12:831 (1) - try to do same shape as previous sliders
00:14:259 (2) - make it linear. http://puu.sh/2DkN
01:19:081 (3) , 00:38:545 (1,2) - please do not use stacks of such type :/
01:19:795 (1) - better to start on white tick, it's kinda hard to start from red tick.
00:21:402 (1,2,3,4) - fix those stacks, it's hard to read, and it's really hard for newbie/middling players.
00:27:116 (1,2,3,4) - more fantasy, more style instead of boring stacks.
00:54:438 - ~? http://puu.sh/2DlD
00:58:902 (1) - um? http://puu.sh/2DlJ
01:00:152 (2) - linear, linear
01:12:831 - http://puu.sh/2DlT
256,48,72831,2,0,B|136:16|96:128,1,192
00:15:688 (1) - http://puu.sh/2Dm6
00:21:402 (1) - spacing
00:29:974 (6) - http://puu.sh/2Dmi
00:41:402 (1) - remove new combo
. . .

[Hard]

Nothing to mod here. Not like it's perfect, it's just too random, if i want to suggest something, i'd probably better remap this myself. Everything is random and feels overmapped.
First of all slider velocity/slider speed dose not fit with such calm voice, so i'd suggest to discrease it.
Second, please do not use such stuff 00:39:974 (1,2,3,7) - 00:51:045 (7) - 00:28:545 (1,2,3) They don't fit at all, and sounds odd too.
Third use patterns, i saw some of them on Normal difficulty, that piece of Normal diffiuclty is infinit. times better then this
Take a look (not steal) at some [Hard] diffiuclties with such bpm. judge yourself.

No Star.
Topic Starter
Acrith

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[General]
Source: Shakugan no Shana II - Fixed
a preview point for this map is not set. - Fixed
02:01:402 - start kiai mod here. and end here 02:38:545 in both difficulties. - Fixed
your background size is incorrent, please cut/resize to 1024 x 768 - For next general upload, don't have time
any kind of SB element must not be over 800 x 600, so resize your SB files too. - ^
Add Easy difficulty - I'll think about it
Use same count and length of kiai mod. - It'll be.
Add hitsounds - ^


[Normal]
Use same count of break points as in [Hard]
I wonder, why you add green line that discreases sliderspeed by x0.80 in same time with red line.
00:07:117 (1) - select slider --> select 3rd point of slider --> move it 1 grid left --> select 2nd point of slider move down by 1 grid. And shape looks better.
00:12:831 (1) - try to do same shape as previous sliders
00:14:259 (2) - make it linear. http://puu.sh/2DkN
01:19:081 (3) , 00:38:545 (1,2) - please do not use stacks of such type :/
01:19:795 (1) - better to start on white tick, it's kinda hard to start from red tick.
00:21:402 (1,2,3,4) - fix those stacks, it's hard to read, and it's really hard for newbie/middling players.
00:27:116 (1,2,3,4) - more fantasy, more style instead of boring stacks.
00:54:438 - ~? http://puu.sh/2DlD
00:58:902 (1) - um? http://puu.sh/2DlJ
01:00:152 (2) - linear, linear
01:12:831 - http://puu.sh/2DlT
256,48,72831,2,0,B|136:16|96:128,1,192
00:15:688 (1) - http://puu.sh/2Dm6
00:21:402 (1) - spacing
00:29:974 (6) - http://puu.sh/2Dmi
00:41:402 (1) - remove new combo
. . .

FIXED

[Hard]

Nothing to mod here. Not like it's perfect, it's just too random, if i want to suggest something, i'd probably better remap this myself. Everything is random and feels overmapped.
First of all slider velocity/slider speed dose not fit with such calm voice, so i'd suggest to discrease it.
Second, please do not use such stuff 00:39:974 (1,2,3,7) - 00:51:045 (7) - 00:28:545 (1,2,3) They don't fit at all, and sounds odd too.
Third use patterns, i saw some of them on Normal difficulty, that piece of Normal diffiuclty is infinit. times better then this
Take a look (not steal) at some [Hard] diffiuclties with such bpm. judge yourself.

No Star.
Thanks for modding:). Normal still in progress.
Kola
Star :3
Topic Starter
Acrith
Niormal completed.:)
kurohana
my mod :D

[General]

the bg size must be 1024x768 (because of the quality)
it looks better, if the diffs have a same start

[Normal]

00:42:402 (1) a bit confusing, maybe another location?
01:27:116 - slider starting with the voice, at 01:26:938
02:10:668 (3,5) set 3 at the same position as the end of 5
02:22:116 (1) remove new combo
03:45:688 (5) a bit confusing again
03:58:545 - finish?

[Hard]

meeep, one error, you can't use more than 3 different slider speeds
00:35:331 (7) clap
00:36:759 (3) ^
00:37:474 (6) ^
00:38:118 (1) ^
00:39:616 (6) ^
hmm, could take some time to list up all these claps... try to make some rhythm and set hitsounds, at every second white grip (in the same sequence as above)
00:42:116 (4) hm? slider must end at 00:42:295
00:42:563 (5) set at the red grip after
01:38:902 (1) confusing
01:46:581 (1) aaand 01:48:009 (1) set the first one note at the end of the black slider, looks better :D
01:53:902 (4,5) spacing >.<
02:00:509 (2,3,4,5) looks a bit confusing...
02:05:331 (3) spacing
03:46:866 (3,4,5,6)

i really like this song (mami kawada >////<) so i give you a star ~(^.^)~
don't forget to give kudosu~~~
Pereira006
hello~~

General

the wallpaper is 1224x767 you should make 1024x768 that is better
The mp3 is 427kbps you should re-encode mp3 to 192 kbps

[normal]

00:48:545 (3) - Grid 1 dowm?
01:45:688 (2) - Grid 1 up?
01:54:259 (2) - Grid 1 right?
02:22:116 (2) - Remove new combo?
02:49:259 (2) - the end slider is weird the 02:49:974 (1) - end slider maybe make better stack?

lol empty you should make hitsound imo

Hard

Ho my i like this diff i can't find wrong...
ho also again empty hitsound

Star!
Topic Starter
Acrith

kurohana wrote:

my mod :D

[General]

the bg size must be 1024x768 (because of the quality)
it looks better, if the diffs have a same start

[Normal]

00:42:402 (1) a bit confusing, maybe another location?
01:27:116 - slider starting with the voice, at 01:26:938
02:10:668 (3,5) set 3 at the same position as the end of 5
02:22:116 (1) remove new combo
03:45:688 (5) a bit confusing again
03:58:545 - finish?

[Hard]

meeep, one error, you can't use more than 3 different slider speeds
00:35:331 (7) clap
00:36:759 (3) ^
00:37:474 (6) ^
00:38:118 (1) ^
00:39:616 (6) ^
hmm, could take some time to list up all these claps... try to make some rhythm and set hitsounds, at every second white grip (in the same sequence as above)
00:42:116 (4) hm? slider must end at 00:42:295
00:42:563 (5) set at the red grip after
01:38:902 (1) confusing
01:46:581 (1) aaand 01:48:009 (1) set the first one note at the end of the black slider, looks better :D
01:53:902 (4,5) spacing >.<
02:00:509 (2,3,4,5) looks a bit confusing...
02:05:331 (3) spacing
03:46:866 (3,4,5,6)

i really like this song (mami kawada >////<) so i give you a star ~(^.^)~
don't forget to give kudosu~~~
Fixed, received kudosu.

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~

General

the wallpaper is 1224x767 you should make 1024x768 that is better - I'll do it, as last step.
The mp3 is 427kbps you should re-encode mp3 to 192 kbps - ^

[normal]

00:48:545 (3) - Grid 1 dowm?
01:45:688 (2) - Grid 1 up?
01:54:259 (2) - Grid 1 right?
02:22:116 (2) - Remove new combo?
02:49:259 (2) - the end slider is weird the 02:49:974 (1) - end slider maybe make better stack?

lol empty you should make hitsound imo

Hard

Ho my i like this diff i can't find wrong...
ho also again empty hitsound

Star!
Fixed, received kudosu. Hitsounds will be added in next 2 - 3 hours:)

Thanks for modding :)
koki_old_1
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Ryohan
Shanananana
Inamaru
Pretty nice ;)
Star~
Katsu_old_1
kakoni koukaiwanai kanashimiwalalalalalalla~

Nymph
Shana~☆~
Optic
come on people, its a great map ;) +1 if i could do it again :L
CXu
Hi there, sorry I didn't get to actually mod this before now orz

Offset is a bit off. You should probably get someone more experience to check it, but try: 7153. Remember to resnap all notes, as well as fix the inherited sections~~

[Normal]
00:09:617 - Add a note?
00:29:974 (4) - Finish?
00:35:688 (1,3) - The claps on these 2 sliders feels a bit out of place imo.
00:39:081 (2) - Nothing wrong really, just pointing out that this pattern isn't done much in your map, and that it could be a bit tricky. It is fine in itself though, so feel free to keep it.
00:41:402 (1) - With distance snap on, move this more to the left so that it's not obscured by the previous slider. Also, finish?
00:35:688 - 00:52:831 You could try use some whistles here and see if you think that sounds cool :P
00:49:974 - Increase the volume a bit here since the song is picking a bit up?
00:49:974 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try to move this pattern so that 00:50:331 (2) - is directly stacked under 00:48:902 (4)
00:53:188 (1) - I think the chorus could sound better without the claps, but that's entirely my opinion, but this particular one really sounded odd to me.
00:55:152 (4) - Try adding finish on notes like this and see if you like it?
00:58:009 (4) - Move a bit right and down so 00:57:652 (3,4) is parallell with the slider. Not important, but I guess it looks better.
01:04:259 (3) - Finish
01:09:795 (1,2) - I know the distance is right, but it feels a bit short for me, so try spacing it a wee bit more?
01:23:545 (1,2,3) - Nothing wrong, but you could try to make a symmetrical pattern here :P
01:43:188 (3) - The anchor points aren't actually doing anything here.
01:46:759 (4,1) - Swap the combos?
02:18:366 (1,2,3,4) - Try rearranging this combo a bit. Right now it looks a bit messy and weird.
02:22:116 (2) - Start this slider at the red tick before, and end at 02:22:474?
02:27:474 (2,3,4,5) - I'm not really getting the rhythm you're following here, consider changing?
02:31:759 (1) - Remove this
Same hitsoundcomments like the first part.
02:49:259 (2) - Not expecting another repeat, so remove 1 repeat here?
03:02:116 (3,4) - Stack them, and end the slider at 03:02:831, then move 03:03:366 (5) to 03:03:188
03:28:902 (5) - This slider should begin at 03:29:081 - imo
03:30:688 (3) - Try to make it like this? http://puu.sh/7i5l
03:38:902 (4) - and 03:40:331 (3) - feels weird imo. The repeats doesn't really fit.

[Hard]
00:29:974 - Add a note here with normal-hitfinish.
00:39:974 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - These feels out of place in this slow spot. If you want to keep them, atleast make them the same shape.
Yeah, try add some whistles here too xP
00:51:045 (7) - This is unexpected imo.
00:52:831 (8) - 1 grid down, 1 grid left
The chorus has so many 1/2 sliders. Make some longer ones too?
Oh and if you can, try add some finishes.
01:39:438 (4) - Remove this, move this to begin at that spot 01:39:616 (5), and add a note at 01:40:331. Remember to fix hitsounds.
02:14:974 (9) - move to 02:15:152 -
02:52:831 (1) - Make this prettier
02:54:795 (2) - ^
03:00:331 (4) - CTRL+R? I find this disturbing the flow
03:01:581 (2) - Remove the repeat, and move it to 03:01:759?
03:05:331 (6) - Shouldn't the long slider at 03:05:688 (1) - begin here instead?
03:08:545 (1) - Shorten the spinner to 03:09:616 - , then add a note at 03:09:974 - instead

Nice maps overall though, and I like the feeling of the map ^^
AmaiHachimitsu
Map is worth to be ranked IMO.

I tried to remap it a bit while using CXu's instructions. I hope that will help you with the rest.

Dunno how to "star" a map, but as soon as I realise that I will do it xD

With regards,
Topic Starter
Acrith

CXu wrote:

Hi there, sorry I didn't get to actually mod this before now orz

Offset is a bit off. You should probably get someone more experience to check it, but try: 7153. Remember to resnap all notes, as well as fix the inherited sections~~

[Normal]
00:09:617 - Add a note?
00:29:974 (4) - Finish?
00:35:688 (1,3) - The claps on these 2 sliders feels a bit out of place imo.
00:39:081 (2) - Nothing wrong really, just pointing out that this pattern isn't done much in your map, and that it could be a bit tricky. It is fine in itself though, so feel free to keep it.
00:41:402 (1) - With distance snap on, move this more to the left so that it's not obscured by the previous slider. Also, finish?
00:35:688 - 00:52:831 You could try use some whistles here and see if you think that sounds cool :P
00:49:974 - Increase the volume a bit here since the song is picking a bit up?
00:49:974 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try to move this pattern so that 00:50:331 (2) - is directly stacked under 00:48:902 (4)
00:53:188 (1) - I think the chorus could sound better without the claps, but that's entirely my opinion, but this particular one really sounded odd to me.
00:55:152 (4) - Try adding finish on notes like this and see if you like it?
00:58:009 (4) - Move a bit right and down so 00:57:652 (3,4) is parallell with the slider. Not important, but I guess it looks better.
01:04:259 (3) - Finish
01:09:795 (1,2) - I know the distance is right, but it feels a bit short for me, so try spacing it a wee bit more?
01:23:545 (1,2,3) - Nothing wrong, but you could try to make a symmetrical pattern here :P
01:43:188 (3) - The anchor points aren't actually doing anything here.
01:46:759 (4,1) - Swap the combos?
02:18:366 (1,2,3,4) - Try rearranging this combo a bit. Right now it looks a bit messy and weird.
02:22:116 (2) - Start this slider at the red tick before, and end at 02:22:474?
02:27:474 (2,3,4,5) - I'm not really getting the rhythm you're following here, consider changing?
02:31:759 (1) - Remove this
Same hitsoundcomments like the first part.
02:49:259 (2) - Not expecting another repeat, so remove 1 repeat here?
03:02:116 (3,4) - Stack them, and end the slider at 03:02:831, then move 03:03:366 (5) to 03:03:188
03:28:902 (5) - This slider should begin at 03:29:081 - imo
03:30:688 (3) - Try to make it like this? http://puu.sh/7i5l
03:38:902 (4) - and 03:40:331 (3) - feels weird imo. The repeats doesn't really fit.

[Hard]
00:29:974 - Add a note here with normal-hitfinish.
00:39:974 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - These feels out of place in this slow spot. If you want to keep them, atleast make them the same shape.
Yeah, try add some whistles here too xP
00:51:045 (7) - This is unexpected imo.
00:52:831 (8) - 1 grid down, 1 grid left
The chorus has so many 1/2 sliders. Make some longer ones too?
Oh and if you can, try add some finishes.
01:39:438 (4) - Remove this, move this to begin at that spot 01:39:616 (5), and add a note at 01:40:331. Remember to fix hitsounds.
02:14:974 (9) - move to 02:15:152 -
02:52:831 (1) - Make this prettier
02:54:795 (2) - ^
03:00:331 (4) - CTRL+R? I find this disturbing the flow
03:01:581 (2) - Remove the repeat, and move it to 03:01:759?
03:05:331 (6) - Shouldn't the long slider at 03:05:688 (1) - begin here instead?
03:08:545 (1) - Shorten the spinner to 03:09:616 - , then add a note at 03:09:974 - instead

Nice maps overall though, and I like the feeling of the map ^^
Done:). Thanks.

AmaiHachimitsu wrote:

Map is worth to be ranked IMO.

I tried to remap it a bit while using CXu's instructions. I hope that will help you with the rest.

Dunno how to "star" a map, but as soon as I realise that I will do it xD

With regards,
Thanks for helping:)
Nitojgrem
IRC Mod.
Change some Timing things and little stuff...
It's not the whole mod because Osu crashed but I think it's long enough oO
Mod
20:16 <Nitojgrem> : Öhmm sorry... Osu has been crashed oO
20:17 <Nitojgrem> : are you there? No you're afk... ok
20:17 <Acrith> : No i;m not
20:17 <Acrith> : xD
20:17 <Nitojgrem> : lol Osu said that
20:17 <Nitojgrem> : where i was? D:
20:18 <Acrith> : 1:57:510 (1)
20:18 <Nitojgrem> : yes... what is your opinion to that?
20:18 <Acrith> : I changed combo, because it was a good idea.
20:20 <Nitojgrem> : 02:49:295 (2) - Clap at Endpoint (you've done this before so, I think it's one note you have missed when you repaired normal...)
20:21 <Acrith> : Done
20:22 <Nitojgrem> : 03:10:724 (2) - why you don't make it look like 1?
20:22 <Acrith> : It's > and <
20:22 <Acrith> : >
20:22 <Acrith> : <
20:23 <Acrith> : You know what I mean
20:23 <Nitojgrem> : 2 yes 1... more than a L
20:24 <Acrith> : repaired
20:25 <Nitojgrem> : 03:30:545 (3) - maybe a Clap at the midpoint
20:26 <Acrith> : done (It seems good)
20:27 <Nitojgrem> : 03:56:081 (1,2,3,4,5) - You've forget the Claps (I know you understand what I mean; same Claps as here 03:50:367 (1,2,3,4,5) - )
20:27 <Acrith> : Wops, you're right
20:30 <Nitojgrem> : I think thats all I find in Normal... I hope that you have not expect something big... but before i go further with Hard I have a question.
20:30 <Acrith> : Hm?
20:31 <Acrith> : Go ahead.
20:31 <Nitojgrem> : Why are this picture unlimited is in the song folder? I haven't seen it to be used
20:31 <Acrith> : I didn't used it in Normal
20:31 <Nitojgrem> : oh ok :)
20:31 <Acrith> : because I don't use "1,5x inherit section"
20:32 <Acrith> : for a special moment.
20:32 <Nitojgrem> : I think I'll see what you mean
20:32 <Acrith> : In this "speed up" on hard, the unlimited spell from Shanabg is lighting
20:32 <Acrith> : :)
20:34 <Acrith> : Hard now ^^
20:35 <Nitojgrem> : 00:20:724 (2) - why not make it as a "opposite of 1"? I've you understand what i mean
20:36 <Acrith> : Opposite of 1..?
20:36 <Acrith> : Am..
20:36 <Acrith> : Opposite slider of 1 so slider start on top(up) of screen and going down?
20:37 <Acrith> : There're many pairs of opposite sliders, so leave team without comment. There won't be any suggestions to them anyway :)
20:37 <Acrith> : them*
20:37 <Nitojgrem> : i meant something like this http://puu.sh/8ya5
20:38 <Acrith> : Am..
20:38 <Nitojgrem> : it's just a suggestion
20:39 <Nitojgrem> : and i know it's wrong spaced on the timeline ._. XD
20:39 <Acrith> : ...
20:39 <Acrith> : xd
20:40 <Acrith> : done
20:40 <Nitojgrem> : another Question; how it would when AR - 1 and OD - 1?
20:41 <Acrith> : I won't change AR, because it going then to be unreadable
20:41 <Acrith> : slowly unreadable*
20:41 <Acrith> : Overall Difficulty - I could:)
20:42 <Nitojgrem> : ok, for sure, I won't say anything to the spacing of this Diff.... It's totally confusing me x_x
20:42 <Acrith> : It's 0,8x
20:43 <Acrith> : And 1,0 and 1,2x
20:43 <Nitojgrem> : yeah and and and and... the AiMod (I've taken one look, j4f) and it says 147 wrong spacings XD
20:43 <Acrith> : WHAT?!
20:44 <Acrith> : You're kidding..
20:44 <Nitojgrem> : *138
20:44 <Acrith> : CXu didn't saw any wrong spacings
20:44 <Acrith> : And previous modders too
20:45 <Nitojgrem> : yeah it's because you didn't use only one DS... It's not a big thing when the AIMod says something like this...
20:45 <Acrith> : So:)
20:47 <Nitojgrem> : Maybe add a Finish here 00:54:831 (4,5) - and here: 00:57:688 (5,6) -
20:48 <Acrith> : Nice.. Done
20:48 <Acrith> : 01:03:581 (3) - I added at Ending - Clap
20:49 <Nitojgrem> : If yes then here: 01:06:260 (7,8) - and here: 01:09:117 (6,7) - too... öet me see this 3...
20:49 <Acrith> : added
20:49 <Nitojgrem> : 3 seems ok :D
20:50 <Acrith> : :)
20:50 <Nitojgrem> : 01:45:546 (5) - Clap
20:51 <Acrith> : donew
20:51 <Acrith> : 01:50:902 (4) - Added clap at ending
20:52 <Nitojgrem> : it's interesting. You mod your own Map xD
20:53 <Acrith> : Because when you're adding some hitsound
20:53 <Acrith> : I adding next, which it's necessary
20:53 <Acrith> : where it is*
20:54 <Nitojgrem> : I think when i make some suggestions you see some other notes where a Hitsound seems to be ok too and add it...another advantage of IRC
20:54 <Nitojgrem> : modding 'cuase it's live ;)
20:54 <Acrith> : xD
20:55 <Nitojgrem> : 02:03:045 (3) - Clap; and the 4 and 5 after that finish
20:55 <Acrith> : 02:06:260 (5,6) -
20:55 <Nitojgrem> : 02:05:902 (4,5,6) - same procedure
20:55 <Acrith> : Finish added
20:55 <Acrith> : roar.. xD
20:55 <Nitojgrem> : lulz
20:56 <Acrith> : Okay, go further :D
20:56 <Nitojgrem> : 02:14:474 (8) - endpoint finish and by 9 startpoint finish
20:57 <Acrith> : finish
20:57 <Acrith> : tfu, done
20:57 <Acrith> : xd
20:58 <Nitojgrem> : 02:22:867 (1) - why it's not the same slider than 02:21:438 (5) - ? :o
20:58 <Acrith> : It's the same..
20:58 <Acrith> : Maybe some small.. differents..
20:59 <Nitojgrem> : are you kidding me? small differents....
20:59 <Acrith> : For me..
20:59 <Acrith> : And they're opposite.
20:59 <Acrith> : In vertical.
21:00 <Acrith> : I meant |
21:01 <Nitojgrem> : ok... i don't get it but it's unnecessary....
21:02 <Acrith> : mhm, nevermind
21:02 <Acrith> : go further
21:02 <Nitojgrem> : yes :)
21:04 <Nitojgrem> : 02:58:581 - Why you stoped at this point with the fast section?
21:05 <Nitojgrem> : I mean from the music I would say that it would go further...
21:05 <Acrith> : Hm..
21:05 <Acrith> : Idk
21:06 <Acrith> : Hard would be too hard?
21:06 <Nitojgrem> : lol xD
21:06 <Acrith> : ;d
21:06 <Nitojgrem> : and what will you do now?
21:06 <Acrith> : I don't knoiw.
21:07 <Nitojgrem> : this...is not good...
21:07 <Acrith> : I could do it..
21:08 <Acrith> : but I don't have motivation to do it now
21:08 <Acrith> : xD
21:08 <Nitojgrem> : oh I see that you haven't make the mini SB further too
21:09 <Acrith> : what..
21:09 <Acrith> : ?
21:10 <Nitojgrem> : the unlimited picture thing...
21:10 <Acrith> : yup..?
21:10 <Nitojgrem> : it's stopped at the same time
21:10 <Acrith> : Yup
21:10 <Acrith> : Because I ended 1,5x slider section
21:11 <Nitojgrem> : so.. maybe you can let it then it's now
21:11 <Acrith> : am, i don't understand L:?
21:11 <Acrith> : :|
21:12 <Nitojgrem> : I thought that, my english sucks
21:12 <Acrith> : :|
21:13 <Nitojgrem> : let it like it's now or something like that i want to say with that if you can understand... and if not i'll ask the google translator if he translate my
21:13 <Nitojgrem> : german sentencee into polish :P
21:13 <Acrith> : try to translate into polish
21:13 <Acrith> : xd
21:14 <Nitojgrem> : Zostaw tak jak jest teraz
21:14 <Acrith> : why?
21:14 <Nitojgrem> : maybe... if you don't want to change...
21:15 <Acrith> : okey, okey
21:15 <Acrith> : nevermind
21:15 <Acrith> : Go further
21:17 <Nitojgrem> : Maybe add this hit 03:03:938 (6) - and a clap
21:18 <Nitojgrem> : 03:05:367 (1) - Clap at startpoint...
21:19 <Acrith> : 03:06:438 (2) -
21:19 <Acrith> : Same
21:19 <Nitojgrem> : yes
21:21 <Nitojgrem> : hmm, can't find something more :/
21:21 <Acrith> : It;s all?
21:21 <Acrith> : :)
21:21 <Nitojgrem> : hmm... I personally can't find any more :|
21:22 <Acrith> : it's okey
21:22 <Acrith> : Write in thread about modding on IRC
21:22 <Nitojgrem> : But I have to say too that I think that you can ask a MAT now... maybe....
21:22 <Acrith> : maybe?
21:22 <Acrith> : :D
21:23 <Nitojgrem> : I'm not an expert. You can ask a MAT. I mean you've +25 stars and I have to say that it was not easy for me to find some thing
21:24 <Acrith> : But i have +25 in a old "star" receiving
21:24 <Acrith> : Now we can only spend kudosu
21:24 <Nitojgrem> : I know. It's a better way (as long as the Modders aren't big egoists...)

EDIT Before I forget, nice Beatmap and ~ Star (SnS :3)
Topic Starter
Acrith

Nitojgrem wrote:

IRC Mod.
Change some Timing things and little stuff...
It's not the whole mod because Osu crashed but I think it's long enough oO
Mod
20:16 <Nitojgrem> : Öhmm sorry... Osu has been crashed oO
20:17 <Nitojgrem> : are you there? No you're afk... ok
20:17 <Acrith> : No i;m not
20:17 <Acrith> : xD
20:17 <Nitojgrem> : lol Osu said that
20:17 <Nitojgrem> : where i was? D:
20:18 <Acrith> : 1:57:510 (1)
20:18 <Nitojgrem> : yes... what is your opinion to that?
20:18 <Acrith> : I changed combo, because it was a good idea.
20:20 <Nitojgrem> : 02:49:295 (2) - Clap at Endpoint (you've done this before so, I think it's one note you have missed when you repaired normal...)
20:21 <Acrith> : Done
20:22 <Nitojgrem> : 03:10:724 (2) - why you don't make it look like 1?
20:22 <Acrith> : It's > and <
20:22 <Acrith> : >
20:22 <Acrith> : <
20:23 <Acrith> : You know what I mean
20:23 <Nitojgrem> : 2 yes 1... more than a L
20:24 <Acrith> : repaired
20:25 <Nitojgrem> : 03:30:545 (3) - maybe a Clap at the midpoint
20:26 <Acrith> : done (It seems good)
20:27 <Nitojgrem> : 03:56:081 (1,2,3,4,5) - You've forget the Claps (I know you understand what I mean; same Claps as here 03:50:367 (1,2,3,4,5) - )
20:27 <Acrith> : Wops, you're right
20:30 <Nitojgrem> : I think thats all I find in Normal... I hope that you have not expect something big... but before i go further with Hard I have a question.
20:30 <Acrith> : Hm?
20:31 <Acrith> : Go ahead.
20:31 <Nitojgrem> : Why are this picture unlimited is in the song folder? I haven't seen it to be used
20:31 <Acrith> : I didn't used it in Normal
20:31 <Nitojgrem> : oh ok :)
20:31 <Acrith> : because I don't use "1,5x inherit section"
20:32 <Acrith> : for a special moment.
20:32 <Nitojgrem> : I think I'll see what you mean
20:32 <Acrith> : In this "speed up" on hard, the unlimited spell from Shanabg is lighting
20:32 <Acrith> : :)
20:34 <Acrith> : Hard now ^^
20:35 <Nitojgrem> : 00:20:724 (2) - why not make it as a "opposite of 1"? I've you understand what i mean
20:36 <Acrith> : Opposite of 1..?
20:36 <Acrith> : Am..
20:36 <Acrith> : Opposite slider of 1 so slider start on top(up) of screen and going down?
20:37 <Acrith> : There're many pairs of opposite sliders, so leave team without comment. There won't be any suggestions to them anyway :)
20:37 <Acrith> : them*
20:37 <Nitojgrem> : i meant something like this http://puu.sh/8ya5
20:38 <Acrith> : Am..
20:38 <Nitojgrem> : it's just a suggestion
20:39 <Nitojgrem> : and i know it's wrong spaced on the timeline ._. XD
20:39 <Acrith> : ...
20:39 <Acrith> : xd
20:40 <Acrith> : done
20:40 <Nitojgrem> : another Question; how it would when AR - 1 and OD - 1?
20:41 <Acrith> : I won't change AR, because it going then to be unreadable
20:41 <Acrith> : slowly unreadable*
20:41 <Acrith> : Overall Difficulty - I could:)
20:42 <Nitojgrem> : ok, for sure, I won't say anything to the spacing of this Diff.... It's totally confusing me x_x
20:42 <Acrith> : It's 0,8x
20:43 <Acrith> : And 1,0 and 1,2x
20:43 <Nitojgrem> : yeah and and and and... the AiMod (I've taken one look, j4f) and it says 147 wrong spacings XD
20:43 <Acrith> : WHAT?!
20:44 <Acrith> : You're kidding..
20:44 <Nitojgrem> : *138
20:44 <Acrith> : CXu didn't saw any wrong spacings
20:44 <Acrith> : And previous modders too
20:45 <Nitojgrem> : yeah it's because you didn't use only one DS... It's not a big thing when the AIMod says something like this...
20:45 <Acrith> : So:)
20:47 <Nitojgrem> : Maybe add a Finish here 00:54:831 (4,5) - and here: 00:57:688 (5,6) -
20:48 <Acrith> : Nice.. Done
20:48 <Acrith> : 01:03:581 (3) - I added at Ending - Clap
20:49 <Nitojgrem> : If yes then here: 01:06:260 (7,8) - and here: 01:09:117 (6,7) - too... öet me see this 3...
20:49 <Acrith> : added
20:49 <Nitojgrem> : 3 seems ok :D
20:50 <Acrith> : :)
20:50 <Nitojgrem> : 01:45:546 (5) - Clap
20:51 <Acrith> : donew
20:51 <Acrith> : 01:50:902 (4) - Added clap at ending
20:52 <Nitojgrem> : it's interesting. You mod your own Map xD
20:53 <Acrith> : Because when you're adding some hitsound
20:53 <Acrith> : I adding next, which it's necessary
20:53 <Acrith> : where it is*
20:54 <Nitojgrem> : I think when i make some suggestions you see some other notes where a Hitsound seems to be ok too and add it...another advantage of IRC
20:54 <Nitojgrem> : modding 'cuase it's live ;)
20:54 <Acrith> : xD
20:55 <Nitojgrem> : 02:03:045 (3) - Clap; and the 4 and 5 after that finish
20:55 <Acrith> : 02:06:260 (5,6) -
20:55 <Nitojgrem> : 02:05:902 (4,5,6) - same procedure
20:55 <Acrith> : Finish added
20:55 <Acrith> : roar.. xD
20:55 <Nitojgrem> : lulz
20:56 <Acrith> : Okay, go further :D
20:56 <Nitojgrem> : 02:14:474 (8) - endpoint finish and by 9 startpoint finish
20:57 <Acrith> : finish
20:57 <Acrith> : tfu, done
20:57 <Acrith> : xd
20:58 <Nitojgrem> : 02:22:867 (1) - why it's not the same slider than 02:21:438 (5) - ? :o
20:58 <Acrith> : It's the same..
20:58 <Acrith> : Maybe some small.. differents..
20:59 <Nitojgrem> : are you kidding me? small differents....
20:59 <Acrith> : For me..
20:59 <Acrith> : And they're opposite.
20:59 <Acrith> : In vertical.
21:00 <Acrith> : I meant |
21:01 <Nitojgrem> : ok... i don't get it but it's unnecessary....
21:02 <Acrith> : mhm, nevermind
21:02 <Acrith> : go further
21:02 <Nitojgrem> : yes :)
21:04 <Nitojgrem> : 02:58:581 - Why you stoped at this point with the fast section?
21:05 <Nitojgrem> : I mean from the music I would say that it would go further...
21:05 <Acrith> : Hm..
21:05 <Acrith> : Idk
21:06 <Acrith> : Hard would be too hard?
21:06 <Nitojgrem> : lol xD
21:06 <Acrith> : ;d
21:06 <Nitojgrem> : and what will you do now?
21:06 <Acrith> : I don't knoiw.
21:07 <Nitojgrem> : this...is not good...
21:07 <Acrith> : I could do it..
21:08 <Acrith> : but I don't have motivation to do it now
21:08 <Acrith> : xD
21:08 <Nitojgrem> : oh I see that you haven't make the mini SB further too
21:09 <Acrith> : what..
21:09 <Acrith> : ?
21:10 <Nitojgrem> : the unlimited picture thing...
21:10 <Acrith> : yup..?
21:10 <Nitojgrem> : it's stopped at the same time
21:10 <Acrith> : Yup
21:10 <Acrith> : Because I ended 1,5x slider section
21:11 <Nitojgrem> : so.. maybe you can let it then it's now
21:11 <Acrith> : am, i don't understand L:?
21:11 <Acrith> : :|
21:12 <Nitojgrem> : I thought that, my english sucks
21:12 <Acrith> : :|
21:13 <Nitojgrem> : let it like it's now or something like that i want to say with that if you can understand... and if not i'll ask the google translator if he translate my
21:13 <Nitojgrem> : german sentencee into polish :P
21:13 <Acrith> : try to translate into polish
21:13 <Acrith> : xd
21:14 <Nitojgrem> : Zostaw tak jak jest teraz
21:14 <Acrith> : why?
21:14 <Nitojgrem> : maybe... if you don't want to change...
21:15 <Acrith> : okey, okey
21:15 <Acrith> : nevermind
21:15 <Acrith> : Go further
21:17 <Nitojgrem> : Maybe add this hit 03:03:938 (6) - and a clap
21:18 <Nitojgrem> : 03:05:367 (1) - Clap at startpoint...
21:19 <Acrith> : 03:06:438 (2) -
21:19 <Acrith> : Same
21:19 <Nitojgrem> : yes
21:21 <Nitojgrem> : hmm, can't find something more :/
21:21 <Acrith> : It;s all?
21:21 <Acrith> : :)
21:21 <Nitojgrem> : hmm... I personally can't find any more :|
21:22 <Acrith> : it's okey
21:22 <Acrith> : Write in thread about modding on IRC
21:22 <Nitojgrem> : But I have to say too that I think that you can ask a MAT now... maybe....
21:22 <Acrith> : maybe?
21:22 <Acrith> : :D
21:23 <Nitojgrem> : I'm not an expert. You can ask a MAT. I mean you've +25 stars and I have to say that it was not easy for me to find some thing
21:24 <Acrith> : But i have +25 in a old "star" receiving
21:24 <Acrith> : Now we can only spend kudosu
21:24 <Nitojgrem> : I know. It's a better way (as long as the Modders aren't big egoists...)
Yup, it's only a half of whole modding. Thanks for helping:)
Laurier
hi :)
mod4mod time

normal
AR-1
00:20:724 (3) - 1grid right?
00:26:081 (2) - spacing
00:51:081 (4) - add clap?
00:56:795 (2) - spacing
01:00:367 (3) - move to the right of (2). Beginners will get confused.
01:01:795 (2,3,4) - how about this? http://puu.sh/8E0c
01:04:653 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/8E0l
01:15:903 (1) - start at 01:15:724
01:21:438 (3) - delete and start spinner
01:23:581 (1) - make it pretty http://puu.sh/8E0F
01:48:581 - add note
01:49:295 - ^
02:11:438 (5) - new combo
02:23:581 (4) - stack
02:30:010 (5) - stack
02:50:010 (1) - 2nd waypoint x176 y192 endpoint x160y240
03:45:724 (5) - new combo
03:58:581 (1) - sound volume 5%

hard+
00:38:581 (3) - 2grid up and 1grid left
00:40:724 (6) - new combo?
00:41:438 (1) - add finish
00:57:331 (4) - stack
01:19:653 (7) - 1grid right
01:20:545 (2) - 1grid left?
01:57:152 (4) - new combo?
02:06:260 (5) - 2grid up and 1grid right
02:12:867 (5) - add finish?
03:40:010 (1) - stack on 03:38:938 (4)tail
04:02:510 (1) - try silent

That's all GL
Topic Starter
Acrith

Laurier wrote:

hi :)
mod4mod time

normal
AR-1
00:20:724 (3) - 1grid right?
00:26:081 (2) - spacing
00:51:081 (4) - add clap?
00:56:795 (2) - spacing
01:00:367 (3) - move to the right of (2). Beginners will get confused.
01:01:795 (2,3,4) - how about this? http://puu.sh/8E0c
01:04:653 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/8E0l
01:15:903 (1) - start at 01:15:724
01:21:438 (3) - delete and start spinner
01:23:581 (1) - make it pretty http://puu.sh/8E0F
01:48:581 - add note
01:49:295 - ^
02:11:438 (5) - new combo
02:23:581 (4) - stack
02:30:010 (5) - stack
02:50:010 (1) - 2nd waypoint x176 y192 endpoint x160y240
03:45:724 (5) - new combo
03:58:581 (1) - sound volume 5%

hard+
00:38:581 (3) - 2grid up and 1grid left
00:40:724 (6) - new combo?
00:41:438 (1) - add finish
00:57:331 (4) - stack
01:19:653 (7) - 1grid right
01:20:545 (2) - 1grid left?
01:57:152 (4) - new combo?
02:06:260 (5) - 2grid up and 1grid right
02:12:867 (5) - add finish?
03:40:010 (1) - stack on 03:38:938 (4)tail
04:02:510 (1) - try silent

That's all GL
Thanks for modding:)
AmaiHachimitsu
Fast mod and some suggestions

[Normal]

01:15:724 (1) and 01:21:438 (1) - I don't know if it's allowed to put sliders so close to the beats in [Normal], but I'd like you to move these spinners 2 tick to the left each. That will cause the feeling that we spin exactly to Mami's voice
01:49:295 (4,5) - Make (4) as a short slider with 1 reverse and put (5) at 01:50:010, resnap following slider if needed.
02:59:474 (2,3,4) - It'll be surprising for amateurs, I think
03:12:956 - This section does completely nothing, resnap or delete.
03:35:724 (1) and 03:41:438 (1) - The same spinner issue as mentioned firstly.

It's a v. good map, ready to be ranked. The only thing that confuses me is that you always want to change rhythm patterns. Is that a good idea in a [Normal] difficulty? I don't know really, but it's your will D:

[Hard]
02:24:117 (3) - This slider sounds odd when mute.
03:11:795 (2,3) - These sliders are not perfectly paralell
03:12:867 - unnecessary section between this tick and next one, I think there're more of them (due to offset changing probably) but didn't pay attention
03:13:045 - Kiai time in break time? O.O It should start 03:24:295 (1) IMO


Good Luck, and find MATs ;3

No kudosu if useless. Also, Star \:D/
Topic Starter
Acrith
Thanks for useful mod, Amai:)
Yutsuki yukari
Hello. From my Queue

[General]

osb file is useless, del it and full submit

[Normal]

00:09:653 (1) - leave from last slider
00:39:117 (2) - stack 1 will be awesome
00:50:367 (2) - stack last 4 perfectly
01:00:188 (2,3) - I prefer a slider here
01:19:117 (3) - stack 2
01:20:010 (4,1) - exchange time position. circle first, slider later
02:06:081 (3) - leave away from 1
02:30:010 (5) - stack perfectly
02:34:295 (2) - leave from 1
02:50:010 (1) - let the slider end stack 2 perfectly
03:03:938 (6) - leave 4
03:30:545 (3) - adjust the slider shape.


[Hard]

0.8x is not a very good distance spacing for hard. Try to use 1.0x adjust all notes, especially for the 0.75 sv part (1.0sv part is fine)

Try to avoid slider or circle part overlap, like01:12:510 (3) - overlap with last 7, 01:15:188 (3) - overlap with 2. these little overlap makes map looks messy

Fix these will make your map looks prettier :3
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