Hi there, sorry I didn't get to actually mod this before now orz
Offset is a bit off. You should probably get someone more experience to check it, but try:
7153. Remember to resnap all notes, as well as fix the inherited sections~~
[Normal]00:09:617 - Add a note?
00:29:974 (4) - Finish?
00:35:688 (1,3) - The claps on these 2 sliders feels a bit out of place imo.
00:39:081 (2) - Nothing wrong really, just pointing out that this pattern isn't done much in your map, and that it could be a bit tricky. It is fine in itself though, so feel free to keep it.
00:41:402 (1) - With distance snap on, move this more to the left so that it's not obscured by the previous slider. Also, finish?
00:35:688 - 00:52:831 You could try use some whistles here and see if you think that sounds cool
00:49:974 - Increase the volume a bit here since the song is picking a bit up?
00:49:974 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try to move this pattern so that 00:50:331 (2) - is directly stacked under 00:48:902 (4)
00:53:188 (1) - I think the chorus could sound better without the claps, but that's entirely my opinion, but this particular one really sounded odd to me.
00:55:152 (4) - Try adding finish on notes like this and see if you like it?
00:58:009 (4) - Move a bit right and down so 00:57:652 (3,4) is parallell with the slider. Not important, but I guess it looks better.
01:04:259 (3) - Finish
01:09:795 (1,2) - I know the distance is right, but it feels a bit short for me, so try spacing it a wee bit more?
01:23:545 (1,2,3) - Nothing wrong, but you could try to make a symmetrical pattern here
01:43:188 (3) - The anchor points aren't actually doing anything here.
01:46:759 (4,1) - Swap the combos?
02:18:366 (1,2,3,4) - Try rearranging this combo a bit. Right now it looks a bit messy and weird.
02:22:116 (2) - Start this slider at the red tick before, and end at 02:22:474?
02:27:474 (2,3,4,5) - I'm not really getting the rhythm you're following here, consider changing?
02:31:759 (1) - Remove this
Same hitsoundcomments like the first part.
02:49:259 (2) - Not expecting another repeat, so remove 1 repeat here?
03:02:116 (3,4) - Stack them, and end the slider at 03:02:831, then move 03:03:366 (5) to 03:03:188
03:28:902 (5) - This slider should begin at 03:29:081 - imo
03:30:688 (3) - Try to make it like this?
http://puu.sh/7i5l03:38:902 (4) - and 03:40:331 (3) - feels weird imo. The repeats doesn't really fit.
[Hard]00:29:974 - Add a note here with normal-hitfinish.
00:39:974 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - These feels out of place in this slow spot. If you want to keep them, atleast make them the same shape.
Yeah, try add some whistles here too xP
00:51:045 (7) - This is unexpected imo.
00:52:831 (8) - 1 grid down, 1 grid left
The chorus has so many 1/2 sliders. Make some longer ones too?
Oh and if you can, try add some finishes.
01:39:438 (4) - Remove this, move this to begin at that spot 01:39:616 (5), and add a note at 01:40:331. Remember to fix hitsounds.
02:14:974 (9) - move to 02:15:152 -
02:52:831 (1) - Make this prettier
02:54:795 (2) - ^
03:00:331 (4) - CTRL+R? I find this disturbing the flow
03:01:581 (2) - Remove the repeat, and move it to 03:01:759?
03:05:331 (6) - Shouldn't the long slider at 03:05:688 (1) - begin here instead?
03:08:545 (1) - Shorten the spinner to 03:09:616 - , then add a note at 03:09:974 - instead
Nice maps overall though, and I like the feeling of the map ^^
