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DJ Totoriott - Chronoxia [CatchTheBeat]

posted 2016-03-13T10:55:05+00:00

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Kyuare

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Kyuare 2016-03-13T10:55:05+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on mercredi 26 avril 2017 at 08:00:19

Artist: DJ Totoriott
Title: Chronoxia
Source: REFLEC BEAT groovin'!!
Tags: CLSW WildOne94 JBHyperion Kurokami Furely konami bemani totto
BPM: 180
Filesize: 3524kb
Play Time: 01:53
Difficulties Available:

Chronos (6,2 stars, 750 notes)
Crystal's Salad (2,14 stars, 203 notes)
Furely's Overdose (5,2 stars, 599 notes)
Hyperion's Cup (1,54 stars, 181 notes)
Kurokami's Rain (4,2 stars, 474 notes)
Wild's Platter (2,98 stars, 350 notes)

Download: DJ Totoriott - Chronoxia
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thanks for the support everyone, have fun
Illustrator: ゆっ ( https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=50725381 )

Last edited by Kyuare 2018-06-19T22:38:37+00:00, edited 116 times in total.

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2016-03-30T20:00:36+00:00

Holy
One of the creative map I've ever seen

Moeruattack

763 posts

Joined June 2014

Moeruattack 2016-04-06T11:43:10+00:00

Yeah, i`m back from net cut-off,

Its done

Murumuru's Salad

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Chronoxia.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 22547
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 22547,54547,65213,75880
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 4.199998

[Metadata]
Title:Chronoxia
TitleUnicode:Chronoxia
Artist:DJ Totoriott
ArtistUnicode:DJ Totoriott
Creator:Kyuare
Version:Murumuru's Salad
Source:REFLEC BEAT groovin'!!
Tags:
BeatmapID:928524
BeatmapSetID:429184

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:2.5
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Konachan.com - 201426 brown_hair dress headdress isis_(p&d) long_hair maiwetea purple_eyes puzzle_&_dragons water white.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,65413,71869
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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1214,333.333333333333,4,2,0,60,1,0
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CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2016-04-12T20:11:49+00:00

http://puu.sh/ofVLb/54668ff9e0.zip

Dyskl

Dyskl 2016-05-04T21:44:09+00:00

Hello everyone !

There is my mod for all the mapset ! It'll be long :

I will use 3 colors :
-Problems
-Propositions
-Must change (Big problems :') )

Ok let's go ! :

Hyperion's Cup

00:34:880 (4) - this slider is too much curved, they are beginner, they'll do a lot of droplet and maybe shitmiss. You should nerf it a bit.

00:37:547 (5) - Stupid droplets here too !This time you shouldn't curved it at all, just make it straight.

01:28:213 (4) - This slider and the droplets are really weard.I think you should change it and make it maybe curved but differently for sure...

01:40:880 (3,4) - This is too hard for a cup diff, the player must stay pressed on his right touch but the beginner can't know that when he starts playing.You should put the slider closer to the circle 3 and nerf the slider by putting it a bit up.

01:48:880 (3,4) - The distance is too big. Put the slider 4 closer to the circle 3 to make the same distance than the two circle 2 and 3.

Crystal's Salad

First of all, CLSW, I'm sorry about what I did before, I mod your map with Kyuare without asking you anything.

00:17:213 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The distance is too high for a salad.You should nerf all the passage by a lot at the end but let enough place to force some dash at the end but not at the start

00:20:213 (2,1) - and 00:20:880 (2,3) - You praticly must dash to get those ones, I don't think you should dash on a pattern like that.Nerf the distance between the two sliders and the circle. It will be really better.

00:41:213 (1,2,3,4,1) - This pattern is too hard for a salad. This spacing between those circle shouldn't be so important.You really should nerf this spacing

For the next ones that I'll show you are spacing problems. I don't want to repeat me so I'll just ask you to nerf most of them as you wish, but for me they are too important for a salad diff.

00:44:547 (2,1) -

00:45:880 (2,1) -

00:53:547 (2,1) -

00:53:880 (1,1) -

Remember that peoples who play salad are taking time to react.

01:03:546 (4,1) - The pattern is really fun but this spacing here inside it shouldn't be here.I think that you should bring closer the slider 4 and 1 and erase this spacing useless.

01:33:547 (2,3) - It'll be better if this spacing was nerfed enough to erase this dash like here : 01:38:547 (1,2,3) -

01:40:547 (2,3,1) - I find this pattern too hard for a salad.Maybe let this space between the slider 2 and 3, and change the slider 3 ( go right to left like that : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5077272 ) and as I showed you nerf the spacing betweed the slider 3 and 1.

Wild's Platter

So I'll be straight here.. Your map is not fun, it is boring... You don't use the dash enough and when you use it, you use it badly ! First of all do the start again, I'll not tell what you should do here, not Kyuare too, it's you ! So do the start again between 00:00:991 (1) - to 01:05:213 (1) -
Why am I saying that ? You are doing some patterns really boring in platters like it's only streams and streams like this one at the end : 01:00:547 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - are boring, there is no dash and no difficulty, it's free, you should put some littles dashes between streams and just make the plate move ! At the start you don't move exept with some hyper who are actualy bad like this one at the start : 00:20:991 (6,1,2) - What is this ? It's not fun and there is no sense to put a hyper here and not at another place like there is maybe a drop but it's small and just do it differently, look at others platters and find some fun patterns but not that...

Look, at the end, it's moving ! Here it's fun ! If you don't understand me then Kyuare will tell you what he thinks about this start. Ok I'll mod the end with him. Sry if I'm so bad with you here, but I really want to rank this map for Kyuare.

Kurokami's Rain

There is a lot to do here, I'm sorry Kurokami but your diff is too hard for a Rain, I'll try to do my best with this diff and show you some patterns that you can do because some are absolutly too hard to explain how you can fix that so I'll do some screen shots. Let's go :

00:02:209 (5,6,7,1) - This pattern looks bad in game and is actualy bad :').Just nerf the spacing between the circle 5 and 6, and the spacing between 7 and 1.

00:05:987 (8) - This slider ruin the patern.You should change like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5077721 (just do it it's actualy really really good !)

00:07:765 (7,1) - Nerf this spacing

00:11:209 (4,5,6) - This moment can be better like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5077792

00:12:432 (3,4) - and 00:12:876 (5,6) - Nerf a bit those spacings

00:14:987 (2,3) - and 00:15:543 (4,5) - Principaly the sliders, for me it's better like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5077875

00:18:543 (1,2,3) - I find those three sliders bad, because of the spacing and their positions, you should find another way to do this or just nerf the spacing maybe it'll be better.

00:20:543 (3,4,5) - this pattern is better like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5077917

00:28:876 (4,1) - This pattern looks terrible in my oppinion.You should change it, try to find another pattern who match better with the song

00:30:209 (8,1,2) - This one is not that bad, maybe just nerf the spacing between 1 and 2, I think it will be better.

00:32:209 (2,3) - Nerf this spacing.

00:36:543 (4,5,6,1) - This one go well with the song but it's too hard for a rain, change it or nerf it if you want to keep it.

00:41:376 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I find a better and funnier way to do this pattern : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5078047 / https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5078056 it's really good like this.

00:42:876 (2,3,4) - Not this pattern twice in a row, it's too hard again for a rain ! Try to find another one.

00:44:376 (2) - This slider looks very bad in this situation where you go right to left and then this slider just go right and you must stop right there and go back right really fast and then left... change it pliz

00:45:876 (3) - Too far away from the circle 2. Nerf the distance between them.

00:46:209 (4,1,2,3) - Here we must change the pattern, it is a good one but we must get the star rating lower with something like that : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5078163

00:47:043 (4,5,6,7) - Change this pattern like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5078188 It's really better and low the star rate, it's important.

00:49:876 (4,5) - Nerf this spacing

00:53:043 (7,1,2) - You can't leave this pattern in this difficulty, if it was an overdose ok but not a rain, it's too fast. Find another pattern, change it or nerf it a lot (but you shouldn't keep this one).

00:54:543 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I just find this moment poorly done... This moment is important you really should take more time and do it again maybe or change some spacing / sliders ...

01:15:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same, it's horrible, just take some time and do this moment again...

01:20:709 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - This end is really poorly done, you hadn't the time to finish or what ? You must do this all over again, all the patterns are ridiculous and the worst is this.... : 01:22:543 (1,2) - and 01:27:876 (1,2) - ...... It's the same man... Why ? This moment give you so many opportunities and you do that twice...

That's all here i'll not mod this end... Maybe if you do it again I'll but right now I don't want to it's ridiculous.

I did the diffs of Furely and Kyuare with him, so don't worry, they are done too. Well that's all for now, if there is some changes with them maps of Wild and Kurokami I'll probably do them again. Sorry for my english I did my best !

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,885 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-05-05T09:44:11+00:00

Dyskl wrote:
Hello everyone ! There is my mod for all the mapset ! It'll be long :

I will use 3 colors :
-Problems
-Propositions
-Must change (Big problems :') )

Ok let's go ! :

Hyperion's Cup
00:34:880 (4) - this slider is too much curved, they are beginner, they'll do a lot of droplet and maybe shitmiss. You should nerf it a bit. Sure, reduced the curve on this a bit and others such as 00:40:213 (4) - etc.

00:37:547 (5) - Stupid droplets here too !This time you shouldn't curved it at all, just make it straight. Done, but there's no need to call something "stupid" since that's kinda rude :< Just saying it's too hard/awkward/unfair/whatever would be enough

01:28:213 (4) - This slider and the droplets are really weard.I think you should change it and make it maybe curved but differently for sure... It's the best curve I can do with a 1/1 slider at this SV, I don't find it that weird tbh

01:40:880 (3,4) - This is too hard for a cup diff, the player must stay pressed on his right touch but the beginner can't know that when he starts playing.You should put the slider closer to the circle 3 and nerf the slider by putting it a bit up. Moved (3) to the right since it didn't need that much spacing anyway - (2,4) are now consistent with each other. Didn't change the angle though as I want this to still be intense to end the kiai section

01:48:880 (3,4) - The distance is too big. Put the slider 4 closer to the circle 3 to make the same distance than the two circle 2 and 3. Done, also reduced 01:49:213 (4,5) slightly since (5) is a low-pitch, weaker sound

Sorry for my english I did my best !

Thanks for the mod!

Cup

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Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2016-05-05T17:23:36+00:00

Dyskl wrote:
Hello everyone ! There is my mod for all the mapset ! It'll be long :

[notice]There is a lot to do here, I'm sorry Kurokami but your diff is too hard for a Rain, I'll try to do my best with this diff and show you some patterns that you can do because some are absolutly too hard to explain how you can fix that so I'll do some screen shots. Let's go :

00:05:987 (8) - This slider ruin the patern. You should change like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5077721 (just do it it's actualy really really good !) You said to degrease the star rating yet you are giving me one more 1/4 Hyper pattern at the beginning of the map. Nope, I'm not gonna use it.
00:07:765 (7,1) - Nerf this spacing Why? The head of the slider follows a strong beat which could be mapped even as a Hyper. I decided to not use too much at the beginning that is why I just applied a bigger distance there. I think it suits the music well enough and the pattern is really easy to follow.
00:12:432 (3,4) - and 00:12:876 (5,6) - Nerf a bit those spacings Again, I don't get your idea here. Both of them easy to follow and (3,4) has higher spacing than (5,6) just to follow the strong drum in the music. It might not be your average pattern due the 1/3 but they plays nicely I think.
00:28:876 (4,1) - This pattern looks terrible in my oppinion. You should change it, try to find another pattern who match better with the song You say it is bad but can you tell me why? I think it perfectly follows the melody at that part and even the pattern itself (Hyper) is easy to follow.
00:44:376 (2) - This slider looks very bad in this situation where you go right to left and then this slider just go right and you must stop right there and go back right really fast and then left... change it pliz I think it fits and plays well. :c If you can give me a better pattern I will consider changing it.
00:54:543 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,...,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I just find this moment poorly done... This moment is important you really should take more time and do it again maybe or change some spacing / sliders ... You basically saying that I should just redo a whole part without explaining yourself and telling my why. Explain why is it poorly done, what you think should be changed and how and I'm up to the task. I did some changes but unfortunately, you gave me no proper solution.
01:15:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,...,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same, it's horrible, just take some time and do this moment again... Well, same. You again failed to give me proper feedback.
01:20:709 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4...,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - This end is really poorly done, you hadn't the time to finish or what ? You must do this all over again, all the patterns are ridiculous and the worst is this.... : 01:22:543 (1,2) - and 01:27:876 (1,2) - ...... It's the same man... Why ? This moment give you so many opportunities and you do that twice... Yes, you guessed it right, I did not have much time to finish it as I already passed the deadline with like 10+ days. But your mod is just the same as this, it was really good at the beginning then you just threw parts into my face saying all pattern is bad there though I really doubt that. Can't you just take your time and suggest changes one by one? Even if it takes more than 2 check. Telling me that "hey, this part is bad, remap it" will not help at all. I'm a busy man, with real life, work and I can only do this in my free time, along with other osu! related stuff. I expect modders to give just as many effort into their mod as I did with mapping it, and despite of the lack of time, I did gave much effort to map it. Well, I made some changes at the second half of the map but without a proper mod, thats all I can do.

That's all here i'll not mod this end... Maybe if you do it again I'll but right now I don't want to it's ridiculous. []

I did the diffs of Furely and Kyuare with him, so don't worry, they are done too. Well that's all for now, if there is some changes with them maps of Wild and Kurokami I'll probably do them again. Sorry for my english I did my best !

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WildOne94

581 posts

Joined October 2013

WildOne94 2016-05-07T14:38:46+00:00

Didn't change my diff because of it being not really a mod but saying "Remap the song" lol
I thought it was a bit rude what you said and also could have been put in a much more nicer way lol.
00:20:991 (6,1,2) - This was the only real mod I saw but I didn't change due to strong drum beat in the song at 00:21:213 (1) -

Sorry btw Kyuare but I don't want to change my diff to 3.8 CS as I think it will be a bit too hard and the spread will be fine without the change. I don't want anyone else but me changing my own GD from what I like.

Next time don't say stuff to people like "You are doing some patterns really boring in platters like it's only streams" and keep on repeating it.
It's like if I were to say to you "Learn to mod better"

Thanks for trying I guess (Sorry for drama everyone)

I must be having a bad day

EDIT: I see some same things in KuroKami's mod where you were rude such as "This pattern looks terrible in my opinion" and "it's horrible". it's not nice to say to the mappers. Put it in some nicer words.... Same here "Stupid droplets here too" in JBH's mod. It really can make the mapper feel bad or upset with the words you're using.

xi-False

133 posts

Joined March 2014

xi-False 2016-05-07T15:29:00+00:00

「M4M」

Hyperions Cup

-00:33:213 (7) - This slider feels better off as a hidden slider

- for this slider 00:37:547 (5) - The droplets trigger me, it's fine how it is but I would select the middle anchor point and move it to x:244

- This slider 01:16:547 (1) - would probably be better off being the same as this slider 01:15:880 (1) -
so select 01:15:880 (1) - Ctrl+C then move to 01:16:547 and Ctrl+V then Ctrl+H

-small change but Select this Reverse slider 01:22:547 (3) - and Ctrl+G and move to x:108
i feel like that makes the flow better

Crystal's Salad

-just a suggestion but, These patterns should be the same 00:03:213 (2,3) - 00:05:880 (2,3) -
Copy this pattern 00:03:213 (2,3) - Move to 00:05:880 Ctrl+V then Ctrl+H Move to x:408 this will creat a H-Dash here 00:06:214 (3,1) -
so to fix that move 00:06:547 (1) - to x:368 or you can move it to x:504 you decide
(i reccomend to make all these changes or none at all)

-Moving this pattern 00:56:547 (3,4) - to x:192 give it more of a zigzag feel

-The small gaps in this section 01:00:547 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - do not feel right
Move 01:01:213 (1) - to x:216 and 01:01:880 (3) - to x:176

-Same with these sliders 01:03:546 (4) - Move to x:224
and move 01:04:547 (7) - to x:472

-your map is 7-8 seconds shorter than all the other maps LOL just thought that i would point that out

Wild's Platter

-This jump 00:48:547 (2,3) - feels a little tight, move 00:48:547 (2) - to x:168

-Since a lot of streams and sliders are connected on this map, moving this section 01:04:658 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - to x:200 would make sense

-Increase the H-Jump on here 01:05:102 (6,1) - maybe to x:448

-Move this 01:20:880 (2) - a bit to the left, maybe too x:440

Kurokami's Rain

-this sliders 00:08:543 (4,6) - alter the spacing of the triplet combos 00:08:543 (4,5) - & 00:08:876 (6,7) -
Me personally I would delete the sliders and place the notes Like this
~00:08:543 (4) - x:192
~00:08:654 (5) - x:112
~00:08:765 (6) - x:32
&
~00:08:876 (7) - x:192
~00:08:987 (8) - x:272
~00:09:098 (9) - x:352

-Small change but, Move 00:38:209 (4) - to x:192

- to keep the H-Dash but to smooth this pattern 01:26:043 (4,5) - up a bit move 01:26:043 (4) - to x:256
same with this pattern 01:27:043 (2,3,4) - Move 01:27:209 (4) - to x:144 to get rid of that small gap

-More small changes, move 01:33:626 (6) - to x:336

Furely's overdose

(I'm going to be recommending a lot of small changes but when it comes to maps 5* or higher, small changes matter a lot!)

-this is not necessary but, you should spread this notes out a little more 00:28:047 (3,4,5) -
maybe move 00:28:047 (3) - to x:200 and 00:28:130 (4) - to x:264

- smooth this pattern 00:33:213 (1,2,3,4) - up a bit move 00:33:213 (1) - to x:400 and 00:33:463 (4) - to x:384
same with this 00:34:213 (8) - move to x:168

-Same pattern as before 00:35:880 (1,2,3,4) - Move 00:35:880 (1) - x:112 and 00:36:130 (4) - x:128

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I played this section many time and found the following patterns hardest to land 00:54:547 (1,13) -

-00:58:880 (4,6) - move to x:296

-This combo imparticular is really hard to land
Move 01:02:547 (1,3) - to x:192 and 01:02:880 (4,6) - to x:328
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

-another small change, move 01:26:881 (2) - to x:304

-Move this note 01:33:213 (1) - to x:200

Chronos

-this pattern is really hard to land 00:20:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and I've come to realize that tight spacing and the transition from Dash Jumps to H-Dash jump make it hard to lane. so I messed around with it a bit and came up with this spacing give it a try it might make the pattern a lot more smoother for you
Ctrl+G+2
~00:20:547 (1) - x:304
~00:20:658 (2) - x:232
~00:20:769 (3) - x:328
~00:20:880 (4) - x:160
~00:20:991 (5) - x:400
~00:21:102 (6) - x:96
The reason why I made this pattern not symmetrical is because the natural flow of a CTB player is not perfect, so by keeping the spacing different for each jump it adheres to our natural flow of not being perfect

-These patterns make really snappy jumps 00:24:047 (9,10,11) - 00:24:463 (2,3) - 00:25:380 (2,3,4) - 00:25:713 (5,6,7) -
They are fine but i would recomend to make these changes. it make for a smooth trasnition
~00:24:130 (10) - x:168
~00:24:463 (2) - x:256
~00:25:463 (3) - x:160
~00:25:797 (6) - x:320
~00:26:797 (3) - x:328

-Small change but move 00:27:547 (9) - to x:224

-these two pattern feels weird 00:56:547 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 00:59:213 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
and from the looks of it I'm guessing you made them this way so that this section won't be really repetitive , well i came up with some other patterns that could also fit. Give it a try the template is down below
~00:56:547 (1) - x:128
~00:56:659 (2) - x:64
~00:56:770 (3) - x:240
~00:56:882 (4) - x:176
~00:56:992 (5) - x:352
~00:57:104 (6) - x:272
&
~00:59:213 (1) - x:336
~00:59:325 (2) - x:400
~00:59:436 (3) - x:224
~00:59:548 (4) - x:288
~00:59:658 (5) - x:112
~00:59:770 (6) - x:176
(This is just a general pattern im pretty sure you can smooth this out a bit more)

small changes again-All Optional!
Move 01:44:130 (10) - to x:352
01:44:463 (2) - x:368
01:45:463 (3) - x:352
01:46:797 (3) - x:176
01:47:463 (8) - x:272

Amazing Map-Spread everyone!!
Good Luck on getting Ranked

Last edited by xi-False 2016-05-09T23:21:54+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kyuare

252 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Kyuare 2016-05-07T21:42:53+00:00

xi-False wrote:
「M4M」

Still Modding as we speak!!

Crystal's Salad
-just a suggestion but, These patterns should be the same 00:03:213 (2,3) - 00:05:880 (2,3) -
Copy this pattern 00:03:213 (2,3) - Move to 00:05:880 Ctrl+V then Ctrl+H Move to x:408 this will creat a H-Dash here 00:06:214 (3,1) -
so to fix that move 00:06:547 (1) - to x:368 or you can move it to x:504 you decide
(i reccomend to make all these changes or none at all) No sorry, the original pattern is more consistent imo

-Moving this pattern 00:56:547 (3,4) - to x:192 give it more of a zigzag feel No sorry, the flow will be really weird

-The small gaps in this section 01:00:547 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - do not feel right
Move 01:01:213 (1) - to x:216 and 01:01:880 (3) - to x:176 mmh, I really like this gap, maybe i will change it if some people notice it but no for now, sorry

-Same with these sliders 01:03:546 (4) - Move to x:224
and move 01:04:547 (7) - to x:472 Fixed in my way

-your map is 7-8 seconds shorter than all the other maps LOL just thought that i would point that out
Yeah, I know, but CLSW want to be original so I don't mind.
Thank you !

Furely's overdose
(I'm going to be recommending a lot of small changes but when it comes to maps 5* or higher, small changes matter a lot!)

-this is not necessary but, you should spread this notes out a little more 00:28:047 (3,4,5) -
maybe move 00:28:047 (3) - to x:200 and 00:28:130 (4) - to x:264

- smooth this pattern 00:33:213 (1,2,3,4) - up a bit move 00:33:213 (1) - to x:400 and 00:33:463 (4) - to x:384
same with this 00:34:213 (8) - move to x:168

-Same pattern as before 00:35:880 (1,2,3,4) - Move 00:35:880 (1) - x:112 and 00:36:130 (4) - x:128

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I played this section many time and found the following patterns hardest to land 00:54:547 (1,13) -

-00:58:880 (4,6) - move to x:296

-This combo imparticular is really hard to land
Move 01:02:547 (1,3) - to x:192 and 01:02:880 (4,6) - to x:328
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

-another small change, move 01:26:881 (2) - to x:304

-Move this note 01:33:213 (1) - to x:200
All fixed in my way, thank you !

Chronos
-this pattern is really hard to land 00:20:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and I've come to realize that tight spacing and the transition from Dash Jumps to H-Dash jump make it hard to lane. so I messed around with it a bit and came up with this spacing give it a try it might make the pattern a lot more smoother for you
Ctrl+G+2
~00:20:547 (1) - x:304
~00:20:658 (2) - x:232
~00:20:769 (3) - x:328
~00:20:880 (4) - x:160
~00:20:991 (5) - x:400
~00:21:102 (6) - x:96
The reason why I made this pattern not symmetrical is because the natural flow of a CTB player is not perfect, so by keeping the spacing different for each jump it adheres to our natural flow of not being perfect

-These patterns make really snappy jumps 00:24:047 (9,10,11) - 00:24:463 (2,3) - 00:25:380 (2,3,4) - 00:25:713 (5,6,7) -
They are fine but i would recomend to make these changes. it make for a smooth trasnition
~00:24:130 (10) - x:168
~00:24:463 (2) - x:256
~00:25:463 (3) - x:160
~00:25:797 (6) - x:320
~00:26:797 (3) - x:328

-Small change but move 00:27:547 (9) - to x:224

-these two pattern feels weird 00:56:547 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 00:59:213 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
and from the looks of it I'm guessing you made them this way so that this section won't be really repetitive , well i came up with some other patterns that could also fit. Give it a try the template is down below
~00:56:547 (1) - x:128
~00:56:659 (2) - x:64
~00:56:770 (3) - x:240
~00:56:882 (4) - x:176
~00:56:992 (5) - x:352
~00:57:104 (6) - x:272
&
~00:59:213 (1) - x:336
~00:59:325 (2) - x:400
~00:59:436 (3) - x:224
~00:59:548 (4) - x:288
~00:59:658 (5) - x:112
~00:59:770 (6) - x:176
(This is just a general pattern im pretty sure you can smooth this out a bit more)

small changes again-All Optional!
Move 01:44:130 (10) - to x:352
01:44:463 (2) - x:368
01:45:463 (3) - x:352
01:46:797 (3) - x:176
01:47:463 (8) - x:272
All fixed in my way again, thank you !

Amazing Map-Spread everyone!!
Good Luck on getting Ranked

Thanks for modding !

Last edited by Kyuare 2016-05-08T09:33:48+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

WildOne94

581 posts

Joined October 2013

WildOne94 2016-05-07T23:30:49+00:00

"All fixed in my way, thank you !"

Wait what ?
Don't tell me you fixed our diffs by yourself O_o

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2016-05-08T07:34:51+00:00

I'm kinda curious about WildOne's quote as well. o.o If that true I need to warn you because despite you are being the owner of the set you have no rights to touch the work of others as long as they are being active or did not give you permission. And I don't remember giving you any and basing on WildOne's reaction, I think he didn't either.

Anyway, my difficulty is here with my way of doing things.

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Kyuare

252 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Kyuare 2016-05-08T09:11:20+00:00

WildOne94 wrote:
"All fixed in my way, thank you !"

Wait what ?
Don't tell me you fixed our diffs by yourself O_o

CLSW and Furely told me to fix for them, when I say "Fixed in my way", I mean that I have not exactly respected his coordinates "x:168" etc..
I understood the lesson WildOne94, I will not touch your diffs.

WildOne94

581 posts

Joined October 2013

WildOne94 2016-05-08T14:47:59+00:00

Kyuare wrote:
WildOne94 wrote:
"All fixed in my way, thank you !"

Wait what ?
Don't tell me you fixed our diffs by yourself O_o
CLSW and Furely told me to fix for them, when I say "Fixed in my way", I mean that I have not exactly respected his coordinates "x:168" etc..
I understood the lesson WildOne94, I will not touch your diffs.

Alright phew XD
Sorry I am kinda really jumpy with this mapset for some reason XD.
*Boing boing*

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,885 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-05-09T09:45:05+00:00

xi-False wrote:
「M4M」

Hyperions Cup
-00:33:213 (7) - This slider feels better off as a hidden slider I assume you mean a burai slider (that overlaps itslef)? If so, then I did that lol

- for this slider 00:37:547 (5) - The droplets trigger me, it's fine how it is but I would select the middle anchor point and move it to x:244 Just made it linear like other similar ones

- This slider 01:16:547 (1) - would probably be better off being the same as this slider 01:15:880 (1) -
so select 01:15:880 (1) - Ctrl+C then move to 01:16:547 and Ctrl+V then Ctrl+H Done

-small change but Select this Reverse slider 01:22:547 (3) - and Ctrl+G and move to x:108
i feel like that makes the flow better Antiflow is intentional here to highlight the much higher pitch

Amazing Map-Spread everyone!!
Good Luck on getting Ranked

Thanks for the mod!

Cup

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Badis

416 posts

Joined November 2010

Badis 2016-05-16T13:14:14+00:00

Kyu chamaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa *u*
Time to mod this beauty !! o/

Chronos

De 00:00:991 - à 00:22:547 - j'pense que j'te l'avais déja dit mais tu spam les triangles inversés , tu peux trouver autre chose plz ç_ç
00:33:047 (6,7,8,9,1) - T'overmap la nan ? j'aime pas quand on suit pas la zic ¯\_༼ ି ~ ି ༽_/¯
00:37:672 - Un cercle ici ca serait cool a mon avis
00:57:547 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ce spam de triangles , give us a break ç_ç

Sinon rien d'autre à dire , c'est impec !! Vivement qu'elle soit rank sérieux

Time for Furely Sama !! *u*

Furely's Overdose

00:04:435 (3,4) - the transition is bad imo , it lack some flow we need to move more
00:06:546 (1,2) - Same thing here
00:27:880 (2,3) - The spacing is too large I think , or else make (2) as an hyper , would be cool
01:53:047 (6) - what about X=224 ? to emphasize the very end

Good map , sasuga furely sama !! *u*

Make this ranked gaddamit !!!

Kyuare

252 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Kyuare 2016-05-16T13:52:43+00:00

Badis wrote:
Kyu chamaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa *u*
Time to mod this beauty !! o/

Chronos

De 00:00:991 - à 00:22:547 - j'pense que j'te l'avais déja dit mais tu spam les triangles inversés , tu peux trouver autre chose plz ç_ç mmmh c'est répétitif mais je vois vraiment pas autre chose, si t'as des suggestions je veut bien mais la j'ai un peu de mal, désolé
00:33:047 (6,7,8,9,1) - T'overmap la nan ? j'aime pas quand on suit pas la zic ¯\_༼ ି ~ ି ༽_/¯ Oui j'ai overmap, c'est en fait du 1/6, fixed
00:37:672 - Un cercle ici ca serait cool a mon avis Non j'ai envie que ça reste consistent avec le reste de la map désolé
00:57:547 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ce spam de triangles , give us a break ç_ç ok j'ai nerf

Sinon rien d'autre à dire , c'est impec !! Vivement qu'elle soit rank sérieux

Time for Furely Sama !! *u*

Furely's Overdose

00:04:435 (3,4) - the transition is bad imo , it lack some flow we need to move more Yes I see, fixed in my way
00:06:546 (1,2) - Same thing here
00:27:880 (2,3) - The spacing is too large I think , or else make (2) as an hyper , would be cool Nerfed the distance
01:53:047 (6) - what about X=224 ? to emphasize the very end

Good map , sasuga furely sama !! *u*

Make this ranked gaddamit !!!

Merci !!! Tout ce qui n'as pas été répondu a été fixé comme tu l'as dit.

WildOne94

581 posts

Joined October 2013

WildOne94 2016-05-17T17:19:51+00:00

xi-False wrote:
「M4M」

Wild's Platter
-This jump 00:48:547 (2,3) - feels a little tight, move 00:48:547 (2) - to x:168 - Fixed

-Since a lot of streams and sliders are connected on this map, moving this section 01:04:658 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - to x:200 would make sense - alright but x:192 instead

-Increase the H-Jump on here 01:05:102 (6,1) - maybe to x:448 - Only increased a little to x:416 because I wanted to try centre it here

-Move this 01:20:880 (2) - a bit to the left, maybe too x:440 - Good point. Fixed

Amazing Map-Spread everyone!!
Good Luck on getting Ranked

Thanks for mod

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Wehus

29 posts

Joined May 2014

Wehus 2016-05-18T14:12:45+00:00

Provoked by Kyuare :^)
"I hate to be one of those who tells a mapper to do this and that as an order when it's their map, and not the modders. It's the modders job to come with ideas and solutions to improve the map, not make it their own. I have no idea how to link note placements as I am new. If anyone could explain how, that'd be appriciated a bunch <3. Used screenshots instead. Here are my suggestions. "

Wild's Platter

00:07:547 (4,5) - This part of the song has the same sound as 00:06:880 (2,3) - yet 4,5 is like a reverse 2,3 creating a seperate sound. 00:10:547 (1,2) - and 00:11:880 (1,2) - keeps the consistency but with different sounds, so having a seperate pattern for the same sound seems odd.
Don't like platters so it was a tiny mod, but didn't find anything else to point out either way.

Kuyrokami's Rain

I see what you're going for but, 01:01:209 (1,2,3) - looks way better than 01:01:876 (5,6,7) - and has pretty much the same sounds, so I would keep the consistency and have use the same like http://imgur.com/GTrzrgW.
This does in no way make the map any less fun or make it repetetive. Only more consistent and nice.
01:32:376 (2,3,4) - Same http://imgur.com/zomKkLl
01:37:709 (2,3,4) - Same http://imgur.com/VD1cbRE
A nitpicky mod, but hope it helps ^^

WildOne94

581 posts

Joined October 2013

WildOne94 2016-05-19T14:09:15+00:00

Wild's Platter
00:07:547 (4,5) - This part of the song has the same sound as 00:06:880 (2,3) - yet 4,5 is like a reverse 2,3 creating a seperate sound. - This is fine. I wanted a cool variety here.
00:10:547 (1,2) - and 00:11:880 (1,2) - keeps the consistency but with different sounds, so having a seperate pattern for the same sound seems odd. - Errm... this is fine O-o
Don't like platters so it was a tiny mod, but didn't find anything else to point out either way. - Boo :^(

A for effort ;w;
Thanks for the mod

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Wehus

29 posts

Joined May 2014

Wehus 2016-05-19T14:20:01+00:00

WildOne94 wrote:
Wild's Platter
00:07:547 (4,5) - This part of the song has the same sound as 00:06:880 (2,3) - yet 4,5 is like a reverse 2,3 creating a seperate sound. - This is fine. I wanted a cool variety here.
00:10:547 (1,2) - and 00:11:880 (1,2) - keeps the consistency but with different sounds, so having a seperate pattern for the same sound seems odd. - Errm... this is fine O-o Your're mistaking. This was an example that this has the consistency, yet one has a more darker tone and keeps the same pattern. While the one with the same pattern, did not. It was a comparison. Nothing was wrong here.
Don't like platters so it was a tiny mod, but didn't find anything else to point out either way. - Boo :^(
A for effort ;w;
Thanks for the mod

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Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2016-05-19T14:36:34+00:00

All fixed, not exactly the same way but fixed. Thanks.

SPOILER

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WildOne94

581 posts

Joined October 2013

WildOne94 2016-05-19T17:30:41+00:00

Your're mistaking. This was an example that this has the consistency, yet one has a more darker tone and keeps the same pattern. While the one with the same pattern, did not. It was a comparison. Nothing was wrong here.
Don't like platters so it was a tiny mod, but didn't find anything else to point out either way. - Boo :^(

Ah i see XD my mistake

Yumeno Himiko

Elite Storyboarder

1,168 posts

Joined August 2012

Yumeno Himiko 2016-05-20T11:46:17+00:00

good map

Jasmine

103 posts

Joined April 2014

Jasmine 2016-05-29T22:29:06+00:00

DJ Totoriott - Chronoxia

Chronos

Combo colors
00:49:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
00:09:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -
01:15:880 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) -

Les suggestions
01:32:213 (2,3,4,5) - peut être tu peut plus incliner le stream pour forcer a faire plus de mouvement
01:38:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - je trouve que tu exploite peu les "bruit" que on peut entendre a se moment la avec se stream répétitif; essaye de voir si tu peut rendre le stream plus "technique" ou créer un pattern
01:41:547 (1) - Tu peut surement en faire un léger jump intéressant a la fin du stream ( comme ceci par exemple https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5270669 ), histoire d’épurer tout ça car tu sollicite pas mal la zone gauche de l’écran pendant cette partie de la map
01:41:338 (3) - fruit en x:0
01:16:130 (2,3) - fruit en y:0

Furely's Overdose

00:02:991 (2) - fruits in x:0 is not allowed since the new ranking criteria

Really nice map and song

CelegaS

484 posts

Joined April 2012

CelegaS 2016-05-30T01:11:30+00:00

Hibari wrote:
01:41:338 (3) - fruit en x:0
01:16:130 (2,3) - fruit en y:0

Dans les futures règles pas encore accepté par le staff à l'heure ou j'écris ce message:
C'est que pour les hyperdash qui amène a un fruit en x:0 que c'est interdit et le y sa n'a aucun impacte dans le jeu donc osef.

Chronos

Par contre pour le combo faut évité plus de 16 donc 01:17:047 (7) - NC ?
00:49:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - on arrive a 18 donc 00:50:547 (1) - NC?

Kurokami's Rain
As i said for future new rules combo is limited to 16 for rain, "Combos should not exceed 16 objects including slider tails and repeats." - Deif

00:03:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Total of 18 combo so NC somewhere.
00:14:543 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^

Crystal's Salad
On future rules "Combos should not exceed 10 objects including slider tails and repeats." - Deif for Salad

01:00:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Total of 12 combo so NC somewhere

It's intended the end at 1:45 instead of 1:53?

Hyperion's Cup
On future rules "Combos should not exceed 8 objects including slider tails and repeats." - Deif for Salad

00:30:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Total of 9 combo so NC somewhere
01:18:547 (1,2,3,4,5) - 10 combo so NC too
01:21:213 (1,2,3,4) - 9 combo
01:23:880 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:31:880 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:34:546 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:37:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:47:880 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:50:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

It's "should not exceed" so it can but try to avoid it

Kyuare

252 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Kyuare 2016-06-02T12:21:08+00:00

Hibari wrote:
DJ Totoriott - Chronoxia

Chronos

Combo colors
00:49:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
00:09:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -
01:15:880 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) -

Les suggestions
01:32:213 (2,3,4,5) - peut être tu peut plus incliner le stream pour forcer a faire plus de mouvement Non si je l'incline le stream sera déformé et pas joli à voir, je préfère le garde comme il l'est
01:38:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - je trouve que tu exploite peu les "bruit" que on peut entendre a se moment la avec se stream répétitif; essaye de voir si tu peut rendre le stream plus "technique" ou créer un pattern Non désolé un pattern plus technique rendrait la map très shitmissable et très frustrante
01:41:547 (1) - Tu peut surement en faire un léger jump intéressant a la fin du stream ( comme ceci par exemple https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5270669 ), histoire d’épurer tout ça car tu sollicite pas mal la zone gauche de l’écran pendant cette partie de la map ok
01:41:338 (3) - fruit en x:0 C'est bon si c'est pas un H dash
01:16:130 (2,3) - fruit en y:0 On compte pas l'axe des Y en CtB

Furely's Overdose

00:02:991 (2) - fruits in x:0 is not allowed since the new ranking criteria Pareil pour la chronos, c'est bon si c'est pas un H dash

Really nice map and song

Merci !

CelegaS wrote:
Hibari wrote:
01:41:338 (3) - fruit en x:0
01:16:130 (2,3) - fruit en y:0

Chronos

Par contre pour le combo faut évité plus de 16 donc 01:17:047 (7) - NC ?
00:49:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - on arrive a 18 donc 00:50:547 (1) - NC?

Crystal's Salad
On future rules "Combos should not exceed 10 objects including slider tails and repeats." - Deif for Salad

01:00:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Total of 12 combo so NC somewhere

It's intended the end at 1:45 instead of 1:53? Oui CLSW voulait faire quelque chose de différent

All fixed thanks !

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,885 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-06-02T13:33:29+00:00

@CelegaS

Split all combos > 8 outside the kiai section - kept all current NCs in the kiai because I feel the pulsing effects and fruit rapidly boucning off the plate could get pretty distracting for new players, which I would like to avoid. Thanks for the mod!

Cup

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Bunnrei

1,044 posts

Joined May 2011

Bunnrei 2016-06-05T11:28:08+00:00

[chronos]
00:13:769 (9,1) - maybe make this a hyper since the parts like this all have one
00:14:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - wrong timeline snapping
00:23:658 (6,7) - personal preference, move (7) 1 grid to the left
00:25:380 (2,3,4) - move a biiit farther from 00:25:213 (1) -
00:35:213 (6,7) - kinda underwhelming part compared to the others, increase spacing
00:40:213 (3,4) - make this a hyper
01:05:102 (6,1) - make this a stronger jump
01:18:547 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - feels weird that they're all vertical, maybe add some diagonal variety on them (only a bit diagonal, like moving the endpoint 1 grid to the left/right)
01:24:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - increase spacing by a bit

i love the chorus part >.>

[furelydose]
00:16:880 (7,8,9) - would be nicer if these were evenly spaced
01:52:880 (5,6) - make this a hyper since the rain has one here

not much i can find here : / tho parts like 01:33:547 (5,6) - might be concerning (for me at least)

[kurain]
00:18:543 (1,2,3,4) - should be snapped at 1/3 instead of 1/4
00:59:209 (3,4,5) - would probably be more okay to move (4) closer to (3) so that (3,4) becomes a normal dash

good rain difficulty-wise (not too easy or hard) and aesthetically

lol i suck at modding now xdxdx

Kyuare

252 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Kyuare 2016-06-05T11:46:22+00:00

Chara wrote:
[chronos]
00:13:769 (9,1) - maybe make this a hyper since the parts like this all have one
00:14:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - wrong timeline snapping wtf done
00:23:658 (6,7) - personal preference, move (7) 1 grid to the left
00:25:380 (2,3,4) - move a biiit farther from 00:25:213 (1) -
00:35:213 (6,7) - kinda underwhelming part compared to the others, increase spacing
00:40:213 (3,4) - make this a hyper
01:05:102 (6,1) - make this a stronger jump
01:18:547 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - feels weird that they're all vertical, maybe add some diagonal variety on them (only a bit diagonal, like moving the endpoint 1 grid to the left/right) Done for 01:19:213 (1,2,3,4) - , but I will keep 01:18:547 (1,2,3,4) - vertical to make a crescendo effect
01:24:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - increase spacing by a bit

i love the chorus part >.>

[furelydose]
00:16:880 (7,8,9) - would be nicer if these were evenly spaced
01:52:880 (5,6) - make this a hyper since the rain has one here

not much i can find here : / tho parts like 01:33:547 (5,6) - might be concerning (for me at least)

lol i suck at modding now xdxdx

Thank you !

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2016-06-24T10:29:05+00:00

Chara wrote:
[kurain]
00:18:543 (1,2,3,4) - should be snapped at 1/3 instead of 1/4 Fixed
00:59:209 (3,4,5) - would probably be more okay to move (4) closer to (3) so that (3,4) becomes a normal dash Fixed

good rain difficulty-wise (not too easy or hard) and aesthetically Well, I was asked to make something easier than Overdose and harder than Platter. Plus I don't like the current close to being Overdose like Rains anyway.

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Yumeno Himiko

Elite Storyboarder

1,168 posts

Joined August 2012

Yumeno Himiko 2016-06-30T16:41:20+00:00

M4M! Sorry for wait for so long XD

[General]
Seems that no one mods this mentioned? the mp3 is 320kbps, you need to encode it to 192kbps to satisfy the rc.
check out the timing in kurokami's diff, it's 4ms different from other diffs, you need to make the timing points consistent.
Since you need to move the timing lines after changing the mp3, you may consider change the timings in all diffs.

[Hyperion's Cup]
00:25:213 (2) - just my opinion, would you like to add a finish here since I heard a finish sound?
00:37:547 (5) - what making this slider moving left? This will make less left-right move patterns =w=
01:04:880 (6,1) - since 01:05:213 (1) - is a strong note, I suggest make the ds between 01:04:880 (6,1) larger than 01:04:547 (5,6).
01:15:880 (1,2,3,4) - I was hoping the ds increasing gradually when the ds decreases at 01:17:213 (3,4), you may adjust it a bit.
01:37:880 (2) - the curve direction of this slider is not feeling good, I'd like the curve at the left side.
00:57:213 (1) - whistle on tail
00:58:213 (2) - delete the whistle
01:26:380 (6) - I suggest a clap here
01:27:213 (2) - no clap on head
01:30:213 (2) - clap
01:34:213 (4) - same suggestion as above, suggest claps for both head and tail
01:37:047 (6) - ^
01:44:547 (5) - missing clap on tail
01:47:213 (6) - ^
01:49:213 (1) - no need for NC?

[Crystal's Salad]
00:32:546 (2,1) - If possible, i'd like to see a dash here, you can make a dash by making slider 2 moving left
01:31:713 - I suggest a note here
00:24:547 (3) - clap on tail?
00:37:213 (1) - ^
00:37:880 (2) - and no clap here
00:38:547 (1,2,1,2) - wrong clap patterns
01:41:880 (2) - finish?

[Wild's Platter]
hmm it's still not hitsounded, if you're pushing this set for rank, you may hitsound this diff quickly.
Some of my suggestions are not following your idea of the patterns so feel free to reject everything =w=
00:01:103 (2,1) - I suggest the ds to get a bit larger here as circle 1 is the first strong note to about 1.40x or 1.50x. the larger space will require a bit dash and it can emphasize the point well.
00:01:547 (2,3) - 00:02:213 (4,5) - 00:03:769 (3,1) - etc. same for these
00:33:547 (2,3) - I guess a dash is expected here, if you agree so, make the ds a bit larger
00:43:047 (2,3) - same^ I expected a dash here
00:46:213 (4,1) - this pattern definitely needs a dash, find a way to make the flow better
00:52:880 (2,1) - same as above but I also think it's ok here
00:57:047 - no sound here, you may remove the slider and only keep a circle at 00:56:880 (7), and you can make patterns like 00:59:213 (5,6,7,1).
It's a nice platter, though some patterns make me feel a bit strange owo.

[Kurokami's Rain]
00:29:543 (4,5) - the space you leave here is too small and the flow is a bit ruined here, I suggest 00:29:709 (5,6,7) - at x:304, and cut down the ds between these notes to 1.06x, it'll work like this if you make it right. After that you may adjust slider 00:30:209 (8) a bit.

SPOILER

01:25:543 (3,4,5) - I don't know why the ds suddenly cuts down here since dashes are needed for other patterns in the kiai part instead of these.
00:06:209 (4) - no clap on tail
00:24:876 (7) - clap?
00:25:376 (2) - finish instead of clap
00:33:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - wrong clap patterns
00:37:876 (2) - whistle instead of clap, check these 00:47:876 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:49:209 (1) - clap on tail, since clap patterns appear again here 00:49:876 (4)
01:25:543 (3) - no clap on tail
01:26:209 (5) - clap here
01:30:209 (3) - clap
01:53:043 (2) - finish instead of clap
very clean and nice rain with amazing patterns! I love it so much.

[Furely's Overdose]
I have to say this is an really epic diff. Just a few bugs here.
01:39:213 (1,2) - at least a dash is needed here XD
00:09:769 (3) - missing clap on tail
00:25:380 (3) - finish instead of clap
00:38:380 (6) - clap?
00:43:213 (4) - whistle instead of clap
01:30:880 (6) - clap? I think the hs patterns in kiai part are a bit messed up, you may check it by yourself =w=

[Chronos]
00:25:380 (2) - should be a finish here, also for this reason, I suggest it be an HDash, x:232
00:27:713 (10) - this clap sounds annoying, remove it ;w;
00:38:213 (5,7) - claps
01:35:547 (2) - clap
01:35:880 (3) - clap on tail
01:37:547 (3,5) - clap abuses
epic diff tbh, but I'm week at checking diffs that are beyond my ability, so I just point out very few of them ;w; ~~forgive me~~

Kyuare

252 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Kyuare 2016-06-30T17:48:23+00:00

examination wrote:
M4M! Sorry for wait for so long XD

[General]
Seems that no one mods this mentioned? the mp3 is 320kbps, you need to encode it to 192kbps to satisfy the rc.
check out the timing in kurokami's diff, it's 4ms different from other diffs, you need to make the timing points consistent.
Since you need to move the timing lines after changing the mp3, you may consider change the timings in all diffs.

[Crystal's Salad]
00:32:546 (2,1) - If possible, i'd like to see a dash here, you can make a dash by making slider 2 moving left
01:31:713 - I suggest a note here
00:24:547 (3) - clap on tail?
00:37:213 (1) - ^
00:37:880 (2) - and no clap here Added a Whistle instead of the clap
00:38:547 (1,2,1,2) - wrong clap patterns I don't get it, Its fine imo o.o
01:41:880 (2) - finish? Not really strong to deserve a finish, I will keep the Whistle
Thanks !

[Furely's Overdose]
I have to say this is an really epic diff. Just a few bugs here.
01:39:213 (1,2) - at least a dash is needed here XD
00:09:769 (3) - missing clap on tail
00:25:380 (3) - finish instead of clap
00:38:380 (6) - clap?
00:43:213 (4) - whistle instead of clap
01:30:880 (6) - clap? I think the hs patterns in kiai part are a bit messed up, you may check it by yourself =w=
All done, thanks !

[Chronos]
00:25:380 (2) - should be a finish here, also for this reason, I suggest it be an HDash, x:232
00:27:713 (10) - this clap sounds annoying, remove it ;w;
00:38:213 (5,7) - claps
01:35:547 (2) - clap
01:35:880 (3) - clap on tail
01:37:547 (3,5) - clap abuses
epic diff tbh, but I'm week at checking diffs that are beyond my ability, so I just point out very few of them ;w; ~~forgive me~~
All done too, thanks !

Thank you for the mod !

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2016-06-30T18:06:02+00:00

examination wrote:
M4M! Sorry for wait for so long XD

[General]
check out the timing in kurokami's diff, it's 4ms different from other diffs, you need to make the timing points consistent.
Since you need to move the timing lines after changing the mp3, you may consider change the timings in all diffs. I used a different timing for my difficulty for testing purpose because the original felt off a bit, but forgot to tell that to Kyuare. My bad :c @Kyuare Please use the timing from my difficulty as there is no need for that extra timingpoint before 1210. If you want to lower the volume just lower the main volume and add an Inherited point at this point to change the ones after.

[Kurokami's Rain]

01:25:543 (3,4,5) - I don't know why the ds suddenly cuts down here since dashes are needed for other patterns in the kiai part instead of these. I don't really get this. I tried to do something but well...

Thank you. :3

SPOILER

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ArtistUnicode:DJ Totoriott
Creator:Kyuare
Version:Kurokami's Rain
Source:REFLEC BEAT groovin'!!
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JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,885 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-06-30T18:40:02+00:00

examination wrote:
M4M! Sorry for wait for so long XD

[Hyperion's Cup]
00:25:213 (2) - just my opinion, would you like to add a finish here since I heard a finish sound? Added
00:37:547 (5) - what making this slider moving left? This will make less left-right move patterns =w= Done, no need for antiflow here
01:04:880 (6,1) - since 01:05:213 (1) - is a strong note, I suggest make the ds between 01:04:880 (6,1) larger than 01:04:547 (5,6). Done
01:15:880 (1,2,3,4) - I was hoping the ds increasing gradually when the ds decreases at 01:17:213 (3,4), you may adjust it a bit. Made DS increase every second object in 01:15:876 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2)
01:37:880 (2) - the curve direction of this slider is not feeling good, I'd like the curve at the left side. Agreed, antiflowing droplet formation isn't well defined here so a natural flow looks better
00:57:213 (1) - whistle on tail Swapped with 00:58:209 (2)
00:58:213 (2) - delete the whistle ^
01:26:380 (6) - I suggest a clap here Feels overbearing to use consecutively, I prefer just the one on the head throughout this section
01:27:213 (2) - no clap on head Removed
01:30:213 (2) - clap Swapped with whistle
01:34:213 (4) - same suggestion as above, suggest claps for both head and tail Same response as before
01:37:047 (6) - ^ ^
01:44:547 (5) - missing clap on tail Fixed
01:47:213 (6) - ^ ^
01:49:213 (1) - no need for NC? Combo is 9 fruits long, recommended 8 maximum so I split this up. Longer combos used in the kiai only as a difficulty addition

Thanks for the mod!

Cup

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WildOne94

581 posts

Joined October 2013

WildOne94 2016-07-03T02:55:29+00:00

examination wrote:
M4M! Sorry for wait for so long XD

[Wild's Platter]
hmm it's still not hitsounded, if you're pushing this set for rank, you may hitsound this diff quickly. - Yeah I swear I asked someone else to hitsound it but maybe I didn't idk XD.
Some of my suggestions are not following your idea of the patterns so feel free to reject everything =w= - (this is after i finished applying mod) I don't think so XD More like accept everything \owo/
00:01:103 (2,1) - I suggest the ds to get a bit larger here as circle 1 is the first strong note to about 1.40x or 1.50x. the larger space will require a bit dash and it can emphasize the point well. - yeah good idea. Fixed
00:01:547 (2,3) - 00:02:213 (4,5) - 00:03:769 (3,1) - etc. same for these - ^ as well as some more dashes near the start
00:33:547 (2,3) - I guess a dash is expected here, if you agree so, make the ds a bit larger - Fixed
00:43:047 (2,3) - same^ I expected a dash here - I really don't know what happened to me when mapping XD. I can't believe i missed these dashes!
00:46:213 (4,1) - this pattern definitely needs a dash, find a way to make the flow better - Same again. What's wrong with me
00:52:880 (2,1) - same as above but I also think it's ok here - Yeah I might leave this one. Quite tricky to place a hyper.
00:57:047 - no sound here, you may remove the slider and only keep a circle at 00:56:880 (7), and you can make patterns like 00:59:213 (5,6,7,1). - Once again thank you for seeing the error of my ways ;w;!
It's a nice platter, though some patterns make me feel a bit strange owo. - thanks oAo ?

Thanks for mod exam

Kyuare I will try place hitsounds tomorrow :3

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koliron

791 posts

Joined July 2014

koliron 2016-07-24T05:28:40+00:00

General

timing is not consistent, the offset is 992 is the platter and 1210 in the rest
aaa also about the tags, you only added "CLSW WildOne94 JBHyperion" in chronos, do not forget to add kurokami and copy paste it in the rest diffs
the cs is higher in the salad than the platter? c.c

Cup

i think this is my favorite cup

Salad

00:20:876 (2,3) - i understand the pattern, but there were no dash until now ): i think 3 is a nice sound to start with them, you could replace 2 with a circle to add a 1/1 dash x3
00:27:876 (1,2,1) - i guess you tried to add the same distances here but the ds to 00:29:209 (1) - is a lot and is almsot a dash, i'd reduce it a little and if is supposed to be a dash, pls increase, then a salad player would be sure that a dash is necessary
00:36:543 (3,4,1) - i think the dash would be better to 1 for the nc hitsounds and stronger sound
00:41:209 (1,2,3,4) - this is a hard to walk, try to move (1) a little to the left and (3) to the right fdsfdghwsd
00:51:876 (1,1,2,1,2) - the ncs are weird here imo, 00:54:543 (2) - definitely deserves nc, also 00:51:876 (1,1,2,1) - 3 ncs almost in a row is not necessary >.<
01:27:876 (1) - is this a dash or walk? i dont think a salad player will understand it, i'd add distance if it is or reduce if is not
01:40:543 (2,3,1) - same here, i think you tried to add dash to (1) but is hard to understand, i'd move (1) to the left of (3) then it would be easier to understand (also maybe make 2,3 a little more vertical? try to test it you'll notice that is hard to walk too)

Platter

00:02:213 (4,5) - i understand that the sound in (5) is stronger than 00:01:880 (3) - but that jump could be too hard, i think is better to reduce it (also just cpy paste 00:01:547 (2,3) - with ctrl+h would be an aesthetic pattern <: )
00:02:880 (1,2,3,1) - mmmh, the rhythm is a little weird, here is a suggestion of a rhythm which i think fits much better with the violin:
1
00:16:880 (3) - i'd ctrl+g this, the jump to 00:16:880 - is too hard imo, or you could just move it to the right jgfkldjkl
00:34:380 (4,1) - a dash or hyper here would be nice for the nc x3
00:35:213 (3,4,1) - mmh the hyper feels a little weird imo D: i'd add that hyper to 00:35:880 (1) - because that sound is stronger, and reduce 3,4 to a normal dash
00:38:380 (4,1) - also maybe add an hyper here would be nice for that sound
00:56:547 (4) - i'd move this note some grids to the left, just for aesthetic <:
01:38:547 (3,4) - aaaa hard jump! try to move 4 to the left x_x
01:46:380 (3,1) - ^
nice kiai tbh

Rain

00:02:876 (2,3,4,1) - mmh to not be so repetitive, i think you could add an hyper in 00:03:543 (4,1) - to emphasize the new stanza
00:15:654 (5,1) - same as above, i think a dash or hyper would be nice here for that strong sound and nc
00:20:987 (5,1) - aaa hard jump >.< maybe this is supposed to be an hyper? if is not i think is recommendable to reduce the distance a little
00:31:876 (1,2,3) - mmh the movement in this pattern is a little weird imo, i think a dash to 00:32:043 - would help, try to make (1) more horizontal, also because i think a sound like 00:32:043 - deserves at least a dash
00:41:376 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - why is there a dash only to 00:42:043 (2) - ? i think is better if you reduce it to keep consistency, or add a dash to 00:42:376 (5) - as well to make a buildup like how the music is going
00:46:876 (3,4,5) - aaaa this movement could be too hard, i'd make 4 a little more vertical to avoid a frustrating miss here ):
01:03:209 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - instead of this movement with a dash in every note, i'd add a hyper to 01:03:432 (3,1) - for the nc and maybe make a curve in 01:03:543 (1,2,3) - this pattern for a better movement, here is an example:
a
01:27:876 (1,2,3,4) - a dash or hyper to 01:28:209 (3) - would be nice to be a little less repetitive and to emphasize the drum >< i'd move 01:28:209 (3,4) - to the left a little
01:38:709 (3,6) - just for aesthetic, i wouldnt make them 100% vertical, something like this would looks much better:
o

Overdose

00:03:432 (6,7) - you added an hyper here so i think you could add in 00:03:098 (3,4) - as well to emphasize that strong sound
00:03:876 (1,2,3) - i expected a movement to the right after catch (1) ))): try to ctrl+h in 00:04:209 (2,3) - , it wouldp lays much better imo
00:06:098 (6,7) - same as in :03:432, an hyper here would be better
00:17:209 (1,2,3,4) - too repetitive imo, here is an example to keep those hypers and make diferent curves and movements:
asd
00:38:209 (5,6) - aaa an hyper here would be nice, try to ctrl+g in (6) and move it to x~16 or something like that :3
00:47:543 (7,8) - ooh why suddenly there is not a movement here ):? you dont need to move to catch this >.< tro ty move (8) some grids to the left
00:53:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i love this pattern, but the strongest sounds are in 3 and 6, what about something like this?
01:05:209 (13) - nc for the new stanza(?
thats all, really nice overdose, specially the kiai, you made really interesting and original pattern like 01:38:876 (5,6) - 01:41:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) -

Chronos

mod

2016-07-25 03:56 koliron: hey! your mod is almsot done, do you have time to irc the last diff?
2016-07-25 03:57 koliron: sorry for late too much ;w;
2016-07-25 03:57 Kyuare: Hi
2016-07-25 03:57 Kyuare: sure
2016-07-25 03:57 koliron: sad
2016-07-25 03:57 koliron: asd*
2016-07-25 03:57 koliron: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/926084 DJ Totoriott - Chronoxia [Chronos]]
2016-07-25 03:58 Kyuare: don't worry, I waited like 2 month for mb's mod 'v'
2016-07-25 03:58 Kyuare: huehue
2016-07-25 03:58 koliron: lmao
2016-07-25 03:58 Kyuare: I'm ready
2016-07-25 03:58 koliron: why dont you ask for other mods meanwhile? XD
2016-07-25 03:58 Kyuare: I'm scared when two people mod the same thing ;-;
2016-07-25 03:59 koliron: 00:08:543 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - until now all of these movements have dash, but this one has not )): try to move 5 a little to the left and 2 to the right to add it :3
2016-07-25 03:59 koliron: lol
2016-07-25 03:59 koliron: you shouldnt
2016-07-25 04:00 koliron: maybe if you ask like 5 people to mod the same map could make a problem
2016-07-25 04:00 koliron: because repetitive suggestions etc
2016-07-25 04:00 koliron: but 2 or 3 its fine xD
2016-07-25 04:00 Kyuare: oh xD
2016-07-25 04:01 Kyuare: done
2016-07-25 04:01 koliron: usually i hate repetitive pattern but for any reason they are really nice in this map lol
2016-07-25 04:02 koliron: 00:19:209 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - same suggestion here
2016-07-25 04:02 Kyuare: xD
2016-07-25 04:02 Kyuare: thats 1/3's magic :)
2016-07-25 04:03 Kyuare: done
2016-07-25 04:03 koliron: 00:21:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - mmh i understand what you tried, but the movent could be a little uncomfortable, i'd make 00:22:043 (3,4) - like in  00:21:876 (1,2) -  and 00:22:376 (7,8) - like in 00:22:209 (5,6) - to avoid a frustrating miss 
2016-07-25 04:03 koliron: movement*
2016-07-25 04:05 koliron: 00:28:793 (7) - make this circle some grids to the left? then you would need to move the ryuuta here (you can catch all of this pattern 00:28:543 (6,7) - without move)
2016-07-25 04:05 Kyuare: oh, you can just say "reduce the density" and I will understand :p
2016-07-25 04:05 Kyuare: but you're right, done
2016-07-25 04:05 koliron: reduce the distance*
2016-07-25 04:05 koliron: xD
2016-07-25 04:05 koliron: yeah sorry
2016-07-25 04:05 koliron: hahah
2016-07-25 04:06 koliron: 00:31:209 (5,6,7) - the jump to 6 is almost a pixel dash >.< try to move it a little to the left
2016-07-25 04:07 Kyuare: done, fixed 00:29:876 (6,7) - too for the consistency
2016-07-25 04:07 koliron: 00:31:876 (1,2,3) - i just want to say that i love this pattern, dont change it, for anything );
2016-07-25 04:09 Kyuare: mmh the jump to 6 isn't hard at all imo o.o
2016-07-25 04:09 koliron: 00:51:543 (11) - aaa long combo! (18 fruits) try to add a nc in 00:50:543 (8) - 
2016-07-25 04:10 Kyuare: sure xD
2016-07-25 04:10 Kyuare: thanks for 00:31:876 (1,2,3) - >v<
2016-07-25 04:10 koliron: 00:56:543 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - what an evil pattern :^)
2016-07-25 04:11 koliron: what about something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5686654 this instead?
2016-07-25 04:11 Kyuare: yeah ! but a lot of people like the map for this pattern
2016-07-25 04:11 koliron: oh welp
2016-07-25 04:11 koliron: then its fine
2016-07-25 04:11 Kyuare: sorry >v<
2016-07-25 04:11 koliron: dw xD
2016-07-25 04:12 koliron: the most important thing is that players like it :3
2016-07-25 04:12 Kyuare: yeah
2016-07-25 04:14 koliron: 01:16:126 (2,3,4,5) - i like it, andi  think it could be even better if you move 01:16:209 (3,4) - to the left, until be hypers
2016-07-25 04:14 koliron: that would be nice pattern
2016-07-25 04:14 koliron: i imagined it when i played x3
2016-07-25 04:15 Kyuare: yeah I agree, but its not really consistent with the folowing pattern x.x
2016-07-25 04:15 koliron: 01:17:876 (13,14,15,16) - aaaa why too stacked? )))): i'd move 01:18:043 (14,15,16) - to the left too to make a dash here as before
2016-07-25 04:15 koliron: following which pattern?
2016-07-25 04:16 Kyuare: all the crescendo
2016-07-25 04:16 Kyuare: 01:15:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) -
2016-07-25 04:16 Kyuare: I keep hypers for the end of this
2016-07-25 04:16 koliron: mh oko
2016-07-25 04:16 Kyuare: >v<
2016-07-25 04:17 koliron: 01:18:459 (18) - btw long combo again :v 22 fruits ():
2016-07-25 04:17 koliron: i'd add in 01:17:376 (8) - 
2016-07-25 04:17 Kyuare: yeah you're right for 01:18:043 (14,15,16) - , but if I move it to the left, there will be too much spacing between 01:18:209 (16,17) - , so i will fix it in my way ::p
2016-07-25 04:17 Kyuare: done
2016-07-25 04:17 koliron: then try to move 01:18:043 (14) - to x176 (?
2016-07-25 04:18 koliron: 01:18:043 - 
2016-07-25 04:20 koliron: 01:23:126 - you could add a note here
2016-07-25 04:21 koliron: as how you did in 01:33:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 
2016-07-25 04:21 Kyuare: wow dunno why i didn't did it
2016-07-25 04:21 Kyuare: done xD
2016-07-25 04:21 koliron: thats all
2016-07-25 04:22 Kyuare: thanks !

aaaaa good luck!

Last edited by koliron 2016-07-25T07:25:29+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

WildOne94

581 posts

Joined October 2013

WildOne94 2016-07-24T16:36:33+00:00

Hitsounds done

Will apply Kolirons mod when she is finished due to maybe she might change some things :3

Code for now

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Kyuare

252 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Kyuare 2016-07-25T08:12:01+00:00

koliron wrote:

General
timing is not consistent, the offset is 992 is the platter and 1210 in the rest
aaa also about the tags, you only added "CLSW WildOne94 JBHyperion" in chronos, do not forget to add kurokami and copy paste it in the rest diffs no need to add Kurokami and Furely because thay are already here with the diff name, but I will copy paste in the rest diffs
the cs is higher in the salad than the platter? c.c q.q

Salad
00:20:876 (2,3) - i understand the pattern, but there were no dash until now ): i think 3 is a nice sound to start with them, you could replace 2 with a circle to add a 1/1 dash x3
00:27:876 (1,2,1) - i guess you tried to add the same distances here but the ds to 00:29:209 (1) - is a lot and is almsot a dash, i'd reduce it a little and if is supposed to be a dash, pls increase, then a salad player would be sure that a dash is necessary
00:36:543 (3,4,1) - i think the dash would be better to 1 for the nc hitsounds and stronger sound
00:41:209 (1,2,3,4) - this is a hard to walk, try to move (1) a little to the left and (3) to the right fdsfdghwsd
00:51:876 (1,1,2,1,2) - the ncs are weird here imo, 00:54:543 (2) - definitely deserves nc, also 00:51:876 (1,1,2,1) - 3 ncs almost in a row is not necessary >.<
01:27:876 (1) - is this a dash or walk? i dont think a salad player will understand it, i'd add distance if it is or reduce if is not
01:40:543 (2,3,1) - same here, i think you tried to add dash to (1) but is hard to understand, i'd move (1) to the left of (3) then it would be easier to understand (also maybe make 2,3 a little more vertical? try to test it you'll notice that is hard to walk too)2,3 are here to introduce the end of the map i think, so I will let it as it is, but you're right for (1)
not answered=done

Overdose
00:03:432 (6,7) - you added an hyper here so i think you could add in 00:03:098 (3,4) - as well to emphasize that strong sound I think the hyper is here to empathise the clap and not the strong sound, and the sound isn't really strong to deserve a hyper imo ^^, so no change sorry
00:03:876 (1,2,3) - i expected a movement to the right after catch (1) ))): try to ctrl+h in 00:04:209 (2,3) - , it wouldp lays much better imo indeed
00:06:098 (6,7) - same as in :03:432, an hyper here would be better there is 2 clap here, so yes
00:17:209 (1,2,3,4) - too repetitive imo, here is an example to keep those hypers and make diferent curves and movements: You're right, but I found a better way to fix it
asd
00:38:209 (5,6) - aaa an hyper here would be nice, try to ctrl+g in (6) and move it to x~16 or something like that :3 no, a hyper will be inconsistent with 00:48:876 (5,6) - , and the flow is better as it is imo ^^
00:47:543 (7,8) - ooh why suddenly there is not a movement here ):? you dont need to move to catch this >.< tro ty move (8) some grids to the left you're right, but I fixed it in my way, its okay now
00:53:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i love this pattern, but the strongest sounds are in 3 and 6, what about something like this? good idea
01:05:209 (13) - nc for the new stanza(? done
thats all, really nice overdose, specially the kiai, you made really interesting and original pattern like 01:38:876 (5,6) - 01:41:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) -

Chronos
mod
2016-07-25 03:56 koliron: hey! your mod is almsot done, do you have time to irc the last diff?
2016-07-25 03:57 koliron: sorry for late too much ;w;
2016-07-25 03:57 Kyuare: Hi
2016-07-25 03:57 Kyuare: sure
2016-07-25 03:57 koliron: sad
2016-07-25 03:57 koliron: asd*
2016-07-25 03:57 koliron: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/926084 DJ Totoriott - Chronoxia [Chronos]]
2016-07-25 03:58 Kyuare: don't worry, I waited like 2 month for mb's mod 'v'
2016-07-25 03:58 Kyuare: huehue
2016-07-25 03:58 koliron: lmao
2016-07-25 03:58 Kyuare: I'm ready
2016-07-25 03:58 koliron: why dont you ask for other mods meanwhile? XD
2016-07-25 03:58 Kyuare: I'm scared when two people mod the same thing ;-;
2016-07-25 03:59 koliron: 00:08:543 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - until now all of these movements have dash, but this one has not )): try to move 5 a little to the left and 2 to the right to add it :3
2016-07-25 03:59 koliron: lol
2016-07-25 03:59 koliron: you shouldnt
2016-07-25 04:00 koliron: maybe if you ask like 5 people to mod the same map could make a problem
2016-07-25 04:00 koliron: because repetitive suggestions etc
2016-07-25 04:00 koliron: but 2 or 3 its fine xD
2016-07-25 04:00 Kyuare: oh xD
2016-07-25 04:01 Kyuare: done
2016-07-25 04:01 koliron: usually i hate repetitive pattern but for any reason they are really nice in this map lol
2016-07-25 04:02 koliron: 00:19:209 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - same suggestion here
2016-07-25 04:02 Kyuare: xD
2016-07-25 04:02 Kyuare: thats 1/3's magic :)
2016-07-25 04:03 Kyuare: done
2016-07-25 04:03 koliron: 00:21:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - mmh i understand what you tried, but the movent could be a little uncomfortable, i'd make 00:22:043 (3,4) - like in  00:21:876 (1,2) -  and 00:22:376 (7,8) - like in 00:22:209 (5,6) - to avoid a frustrating miss 
2016-07-25 04:03 koliron: movement*
2016-07-25 04:05 koliron: 00:28:793 (7) - make this circle some grids to the left? then you would need to move the ryuuta here (you can catch all of this pattern 00:28:543 (6,7) - without move)
2016-07-25 04:05 Kyuare: oh, you can just say "reduce the density" and I will understand :p
2016-07-25 04:05 Kyuare: but you're right, done
2016-07-25 04:05 koliron: reduce the distance*
2016-07-25 04:05 koliron: xD
2016-07-25 04:05 koliron: yeah sorry
2016-07-25 04:05 koliron: hahah
2016-07-25 04:06 koliron: 00:31:209 (5,6,7) - the jump to 6 is almost a pixel dash >.< try to move it a little to the left
2016-07-25 04:07 Kyuare: done, fixed 00:29:876 (6,7) - too for the consistency
2016-07-25 04:07 koliron: 00:31:876 (1,2,3) - i just want to say that i love this pattern, dont change it, for anything );
2016-07-25 04:09 Kyuare: mmh the jump to 6 isn't hard at all imo o.o
2016-07-25 04:09 koliron: 00:51:543 (11) - aaa long combo! (18 fruits) try to add a nc in 00:50:543 (8) - 
2016-07-25 04:10 Kyuare: sure xD
2016-07-25 04:10 Kyuare: thanks for 00:31:876 (1,2,3) - >v<
2016-07-25 04:10 koliron: 00:56:543 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - what an evil pattern :^)
2016-07-25 04:11 koliron: what about something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5686654 this instead?
2016-07-25 04:11 Kyuare: yeah ! but a lot of people like the map for this pattern
2016-07-25 04:11 koliron: oh welp
2016-07-25 04:11 koliron: then its fine
2016-07-25 04:11 Kyuare: sorry >v<
2016-07-25 04:11 koliron: dw xD
2016-07-25 04:12 koliron: the most important thing is that players like it :3
2016-07-25 04:12 Kyuare: yeah
2016-07-25 04:14 koliron: 01:16:126 (2,3,4,5) - i like it, andi  think it could be even better if you move 01:16:209 (3,4) - to the left, until be hypers
2016-07-25 04:14 koliron: that would be nice pattern
2016-07-25 04:14 koliron: i imagined it when i played x3
2016-07-25 04:15 Kyuare: yeah I agree, but its not really consistent with the folowing pattern x.x
2016-07-25 04:15 koliron: 01:17:876 (13,14,15,16) - aaaa why too stacked? )))): i'd move 01:18:043 (14,15,16) - to the left too to make a dash here as before
2016-07-25 04:15 koliron: following which pattern?
2016-07-25 04:16 Kyuare: all the crescendo
2016-07-25 04:16 Kyuare: 01:15:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) -
2016-07-25 04:16 Kyuare: I keep hypers for the end of this
2016-07-25 04:16 koliron: mh oko
2016-07-25 04:16 Kyuare: >v<
2016-07-25 04:17 koliron: 01:18:459 (18) - btw long combo again :v 22 fruits ():
2016-07-25 04:17 koliron: i'd add in 01:17:376 (8) - 
2016-07-25 04:17 Kyuare: yeah you're right for 01:18:043 (14,15,16) - , but if I move it to the left, there will be too much spacing between 01:18:209 (16,17) - , so i will fix it in my way ::p
2016-07-25 04:17 Kyuare: done
2016-07-25 04:17 koliron: then try to move 01:18:043 (14) - to x176 (?
2016-07-25 04:18 koliron: 01:18:043 - 
2016-07-25 04:20 koliron: 01:23:126 - you could add a note here
2016-07-25 04:21 koliron: as how you did in 01:33:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 
2016-07-25 04:21 Kyuare: wow dunno why i didn't did it
2016-07-25 04:21 Kyuare: done xD
2016-07-25 04:21 koliron: thats all
2016-07-25 04:22 Kyuare: thanks !
aaaaa good luck!

aaaaa thank you!

Kurokami

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Kurokami 2016-07-25T12:00:20+00:00

koliron wrote:

Rain
00:02:876 (2,3,4,1) - mmh to not be so repetitive, i think you could add an hyper in 00:03:543 (4,1) - to emphasize the new stanza I followed the strong drum hits at this section which is 2 stanza further. If I add a Hyper here with the same movement I could add a Hyper at every stanza because they are new. I want the Hyper to be where there is a sound which deserves it.
00:15:654 (5,1) - same as above, i think a dash or hyper would be nice here for that strong sound and nc 00:11:654 (6,1) - and 00:14:209 (5,1) - are much stronger so if its about a Hyper I would choose them instead. But this is still the intro so I decided to hold back the Hypers.
00:31:876 (1,2,3) - mmh the movement in this pattern is a little weird imo, i think a dash to 00:32:043 - would help, try to make (1) more horizontal, also because i think a sound like 00:32:043 - deserves at least a dash I have no idea why is this weird, I think its plays just fine. Sure, you don't need to break your hands to jump but that was the idea. I moved a bit but not too much since I don't want to make the slider horizontal.
00:41:376 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - why is there a dash only to 00:42:043 (2) - ? i think is better if you reduce it to keep consistency, or add a dash to 00:42:376 (5) - as well to make a buildup like how the music is going 00:41:376 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - First pair and 00:42:043 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - second pair. Between these there is a dash, just like before and after them. Due to them being triplet I wanted to avoid too much movement because that can cause miss easily and while Rain is about hard patterns I think its important to differentiate hard pattern from extreme.
01:27:876 (1,2,3,4) - a dash or hyper to 01:28:209 (3) - would be nice to be a little less repetitive and to emphasize the drum >< i'd move 01:28:209 (3,4) - to the left a little Sure, if you can show me one more place where I used Hyper at drums during the kiai. No, I don't want to place random Hyper just because they can be justified.
01:38:709 (3,6) - just for aesthetic, i wouldnt make them 100% vertical, something like this would looks much better: They being vertical is intended and it seems like everyone is afraid of vertical patterns, I keep them.

Thank you. The mod was useful although I used different concept while I mapped this so I had to reject most of them. I'm really picky about the Hypers. :c

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WildOne94

581 posts

Joined October 2013

WildOne94 2016-07-29T02:33:53+00:00

koliron wrote:

Platter
00:02:213 (4,5) - i understand that the sound in (5) is stronger than 00:01:880 (3) - but that jump could be too hard, i think is better to reduce it (also just cpy paste 00:01:547 (2,3) - with ctrl+h would be an aesthetic pattern <: ) - Oh yeah I don't know why this was like this! Fixed
00:02:880 (1,2,3,1) - mmmh, the rhythm is a little weird, here is a suggestion of a rhythm which i think fits much better with the violin: - Changed differently
1
00:16:880 (3) - i'd ctrl+g this, the jump to 00:16:880 - is too hard imo, or you could just move it to the right jgfkldjkl - Weird thing is I can't move right anymore to not make it a hyper ;w;. I will keep as it is as I think it's quite easy imo
00:34:380 (4,1) - a dash or hyper here would be nice for the nc x3 - Added a little jump :3
00:35:213 (3,4,1) - mmh the hyper feels a little weird imo D: i'd add that hyper to 00:35:880 (1) - because that sound is stronger, and reduce 3,4 to a normal dash - Fixed :3
00:38:380 (4,1) - also maybe add an hyper here would be nice for that sound - Was hard to try maintain what I had but I made a small jump instead
00:56:547 (4) - i'd move this note some grids to the left, just for aesthetic <: - I quite like as it is >w<
01:38:547 (3,4) - aaaa hard jump! try to move 4 to the left x_x - I ALSO FORGOT TO NC HERE ;W;. Woops
01:46:380 (3,1) - ^ - I must have been drunk! (Although I don't drink and hate the taste of alcohol XD)
nice kiai tbh - Thank you

aaaaa good luck!

Thanks for Mod Koliron >w<

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Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2016-10-04T08:53:33+00:00

As requested:

[General]

Tags: Add "Furely Kurokami" to tags in all diffs. No matter if their complete names are in the difficulty name already, it's a must to include their name in tags or it won't be possible to search for them in the Beatmap Listing on the forums.
Combo Colors: Please make the blue-ish one slightly darker to make a better contrast with the background.

[Chronos]

The new combo placement looks rather erratic to me. I understand you wanted to remark some of the high-pitched notes with that by adding NCs like in 00:03:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - or more clearly marked in 00:20:543 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - but unfortunately other milder patterns have due to that NC placement a rather long combo. See some examples below on how to balance your NCs:
SPOILER
1. 00:01:210 (3) - This slider will need a NC, it's a strong sound and the beginning of a new stanza.
2. 00:17:876 (1) - The NC shouldn't be needed on this one.
3. 00:20:876 (1,2,3,4) - In this section I'd rather remove the NC on 00:20:876 - and place it on 00:21:209 - .
4. 00:22:543 - 00:52:876 - And in this whole section you alternate inconsistently NCs every stanza or half stanza and some others seem just random like 00:22:543 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - where you placed it in a not that important beat. Please take a look at this section to make your NC placement consistent.
5. 01:03:209 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Looks better when the NC is applied every 3 notes like you did before.
6. 01:20:543 (5) - I'd apply here one to differenciate that this is the intro to the new section on 01:21:209 - .
7. 01:25:209 (5) - This beat will need one too.
8. 01:35:876 (3) - This one would need a NC if you apply the previous one to make it consistent. Additionally 01:36:876 (1) - shouldn't need one.
9. 01:43:043 (1) - This beat isn't that relevant. You can remove the NC there.
10. 01:43:876 (8) - On the other side, this one should need one whereas in 01:44:376 (1) - should be removed.
I've probably missed some, so check your beatmap thoroughly
00:26:876 (4,5,6) - This pattern generates a pixel jump on (5) and then there's the hyper on (6) to the opposite direction. That means missing the dash (4,5) would screw up the whole thing. Consider making this pattern so there's no hyper in (5) or generate a hyper at the end of the slider (4) to make the movement more controlled.
00:54:543 - 01:05:209 - I'm still impressed with this section. One of the most creative I've ever seen \:D/
01:51:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This end pattern looks nice, but at the end it's quite easy to hit the wall while doing the last double hyper (6,7,8) and therefore miss the last note due to instability. Try to vary those mentioned notes to avoid being close to the screen border.

[Furely's Overdose]

01:38:543 (3,4,5,6) - The transition (4,5,6) is more confusing than the one you used previously on 01:33:376 (3,4,5,6) - mostly because there's one hyper more on 01:38:543 (3,4) - that doesn't appear on 01:33:209 (1,2,3,4) - . Either way, to make that pattern more accessible try to incline a bit the slider (5) and place it completely centered between (4) and (6), so that all hypers are generated. This is my example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6242787
01:52:876 (5,6) - At the exactly end, the last note is quite easy to miss. This is due to the previous 1/4 hyper having a huge distance (5,35x) whereas the last 1/2 hyper isn't as strong as the previous one (2,50x). To solve this, either move both (5,6) to the right to decrease the jump (4,5), or just move (6) to balance the 2 last chained hypers.

[Kurokami's Rain]

00:11:654 (6,1) - You really need to add a hyper on that transition. The beat is too relevant to be missed. Same on 00:14:209 (5,1) - and 00:16:876 (4,1) - .
00:20:543 (3,4,5) - All those beats deserve Claps. It doesn't sound that well if you ommit that hitsound at the end of (3,4).
00:21:709 (3,4,5,6) - In my opinion, the note on the blue tick should be placed at 00:21:793 - where that little chime sounds, and not at 00:21:959 (5) - .
01:52:793 (4,1,2) - This is not allowed according to the Ranking Criteria. You cannot make a chained 1/4+1/2 hyper on a Rain, so make sure you look for an alternative.

[Wild's Platter]

00:00:991 - This timing section must be removed. All red timing sections must be consistent throughout the whole mapset.
00:01:214 - Additionally, this timing section isn't placed at the same ms compared to the other difficulties. It must have been placed with an offset of 1210 ms.
00:05:880 (4) - The slider doesn't sound good at all. While you're missing some important beats at 00:06:213 - and 00:06:436 - , you mapped a less relevant one by placing the end of the slider at 00:06:325 - . The current slider should be splitted into two, like shown in this example: http://puu.sh/rxduA/2c8a25ca71.jpg
00:07:547 (4,5) - One of the most relevant beats is missed here again. Please invert the order of the timeline to slider-note like you did in previous patterns to have the beat at 00:07:769 - covered.
00:10:547 (1,2,3) - This section is also awkward and unfitting to the music. The slider (3) should be splitted into two as mentioned before and you can additionally include another note at 00:11:102 - .
00:12:436 - For the same reason, there should be another note on this beat. It's odd in a tercial rhythm section to map only the 1st and the 3rd note unless the music justifies it.
00:16:880 (3) - If you want to keep that slider as it is, place it at least 1/3 beat before (00:16:769 - ). The clap should then be changed to the beat 00:16:880 - again.
00:21:102 - Again, it's odd that this beat doesn't get covered, while the one at 00:20:991 - does.
00:22:547 (1) - The end of the slider is not snapped correctly. This section doesn't have a tercial rhythm anymore. The most logical snap would be at the red tick 00:22:713 - .
00:23:102 (3) - This note is also not correctly snapped. The correct placement should be at 00:23:047 - .
00:34:547 (1) - I find odd that you opted to place the end of the slider at a 1/4 tick. The high-pitched sound at 00:34:713 - sounds more relevant to me.
00:38:380 (4,1) - A hyper should probably be added between those two notes like you did in previous examples in this section.
00:45:213 (1) - Same as 00:34:547 (1) - . Make sure to fix this one either if you accepted my suggestion before.
00:55:213 (3,4) - We're again at a tercial rhythm section while those sliders are snapped on a 1/2 beat. Please make them 2/3 long.
00:58:325 (3,1) - This hyper must be removed. The beat isn't that relevant and it's not allowed to have 1/3 hypers with this BPM according to the Ranking Criteria.
00:59:769 (7,1) - For the same reason as before, you cannot use 1/3 hypers on Platters. Having a normal dash would be okay though.
01:02:880 (2) - I'd place this slider a few ticks to the right to make this section more interesting. It's a bit boring to have plain streams with just slight curves.
01:04:769 (3,4) - As mentioned before, you can make this distance higher to remark the relevant beat but it's up to you. In case you want to do it, don't forget to move the whole group of notes (4,5,6) altogether.
01:05:102 (6,1) - You got one 1/3 hyper there too.
01:12:713 (1) - Any special reason why the spinner is added? At least make it start on a white tick like 01:13:213 - .
01:30:130 (3) - It'd definitely make more sense for this note to be placed on the red tick 01:30:047 - instead of using the blue one.
01:35:547 (4,1) - I don't think there should be a hyper on that part. A normal dash should be enough.
01:44:880 (3,1) - On the other hand, a hyper on those notes would make sense. 01:47:380 (2,1) - same on those ones to remark the cymbals.
01:48:880 (3,1) - This jump will definitely need a bigger distance ):
01:50:380 (3,1) - And here you can increase the dash either or make it a hyper.

[Crystal's Salad]

A pity that this diff is the only one that's not mapped until the end. Other than that, it's quite clean

[Hyperion's Cup]

01:10:543 (1) - Such a long spinner ;w; Take a look at the mod on Platter and maybe you can use the same starting point as I suggested 01:13:213 - .

[]
Good luck!

JBHyperion

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JBHyperion 2016-10-04T09:11:58+00:00

Deif wrote:
As requested:

[Hyperion's Cup]
01:10:543 (1) - Such a long spinner ;w; Take a look at the mod on Platter and maybe you can use the same starting point as I suggested 01:13:213 - . This banana hate is unacceptable, but they've gone to a better place now. Started spinner at 01:13:209 - instead
[]
Good luck!

Thanks for the suggestion!

Cup

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Kyuare

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Topic Starter

Kyuare 2016-10-04T15:30:33+00:00

Deif wrote:
As requested:

[General]
Tags: Add "Furely Kurokami" to tags in all diffs. No matter if their complete names are in the difficulty name already, it's a must to include their name in tags or it won't be possible to search for them in the Beatmap Listing on the forums.
Combo Colors: Please make the blue-ish one slightly darker to make a better contrast with the background.
[Chronos]
The new combo placement looks rather erratic to me. I understand you wanted to remark some of the high-pitched notes with that by adding NCs like in 00:03:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - or more clearly marked in 00:20:543 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - but unfortunately other milder patterns have due to that NC placement a rather long combo. See some examples below on how to balance your NCs:
SPOILER
00:01:210 (3) - This slider will need a NC, it's a strong sound and the beginning of a new stanza.
00:17:876 (1) - The NC shouldn't be needed on this one.
00:20:876 (1,2,3,4) - In this section I'd rather remove the NC on 00:20:876 - and place it on 00:21:209 - .
00:22:543 - 00:52:876 - And in this whole section you alternate inconsistently NCs every stanza or half stanza and some others seem just random like 00:22:543 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - where you placed it in a not that important beat. Please take a look at this section to make your NC placement consistent.
01:03:209 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Looks better when the NC is applied every 3 notes like you did before.
01:20:543 (5) - I'd apply here one to differenciate that this is the intro to the new section on 01:21:209 - .
01:25:209 (5) - This beat will need one too.
01:35:876 (3) - This one would need a NC if you apply the previous one to make it consistent. Additionally 01:36:876 (1) - shouldn't need one.
01:43:043 (1) - This beat isn't that relevant. You can remove the NC there.
01:43:876 (8) - On the other side, this one should need one whereas in 01:44:376 (1) - should be removed.
I've probably missed some, so check your beatmap thoroughly (Yes
00:26:876 (4,5,6) - This pattern generates a pixel jump on (5) and then there's the hyper on (6) to the opposite direction. That means missing the dash (4,5) would screw up the whole thing. Consider making this pattern so there's no hyper in (5) or generate a hyper at the end of the slider (4) to make the movement more controlled.
00:54:543 - 01:05:209 - I'm still impressed with this section. One of the most creative I've ever seen \:D/ /:D/
01:51:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This end pattern looks nice, but at the end it's quite easy to hit the wall while doing the last double hyper (6,7,8) and therefore miss the last note due to instability. Try to vary those mentioned notes to avoid being close to the screen border. (Moved the whole pattern towards the left, i think it's okay now
[Furely's Overdose]
01:38:543 (3,4,5,6) - The transition (4,5,6) is more confusing than the one you used previously on 01:33:376 (3,4,5,6) - mostly because there's one hyper more on 01:38:543 (3,4) - that doesn't appear on 01:33:209 (1,2,3,4) - . Either way, to make that pattern more accessible try to incline a bit the slider (5) and place it completely centered between (4) and (6), so that all hypers are generated. This is my example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6242787
01:52:876 (5,6) - At the exactly end, the last note is quite easy to miss. This is due to the previous 1/4 hyper having a huge distance (5,35x) whereas the last 1/2 hyper isn't as strong as the previous one (2,50x). To solve this, either move both (5,6) to the right to decrease the jump (4,5), or just move (6) to balance the 2 last chained hypers. (I just decreased the jump by 1pixel (grid size 3) I think it's okay now

[Crystal's Salad]
A pity that this diff is the only one that's not mapped until the end. Other than that, it's quite clean

Good luck!

All fixed, thank you very much !

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

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Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2016-10-04T22:44:30+00:00

All fixed and applied. Thank you Deif.

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WildOne94

581 posts

Joined October 2013

WildOne94 2016-10-06T17:12:52+00:00

Deif wrote:
I don't know if it's just me but I feel as if someone tried to adjust things on my mapset as I swear some things seem different. Either that or I am going crazy and stupidly wrong.

Also Imo I find the offset is off entirely.

[Wild's Platter]
00:00:991 - This timing section must be removed. All red timing sections must be consistent throughout the whole mapset. - Like this. I swear I never added this here but maybe my memory deceives me. Removed
00:01:214 - Additionally, this timing section isn't placed at the same ms compared to the other difficulties. It must have been placed with an offset of 1210 ms. - Imo I think Kyuare should have updated my diff along with the rest so that the tags and timing points are the same and yet it's different. I don't know why these were never the same to start with. But yeah fixed
00:05:880 (4) - The slider doesn't sound good at all. While you're missing some important beats at 00:06:213 - and 00:06:436 - , you mapped a less relevant one by placing the end of the slider at 00:06:325 - . The current slider should be splitted into two, like shown in this example http://puu.sh/rxduA/2c8a25ca71.jpg - Again I really don't know why it was like this O_o. Fixed but differently
00:07:547 (4,5) - One of the most relevant beats is missed here again. Please invert the order of the timeline to slider-note like you did in previous patterns to have the beat at 00:07:769 - covered. - Fixed
00:10:547 (1,2,3) - This section is also awkward and unfitting to the music. The slider (3) should be splitted into two as mentioned before and you can additionally include another note at 00:11:102 - . - Fixed along with previous suggestion but differently again.
00:12:436 - For the same reason, there should be another note on this beat. It's odd in a tercial rhythm section to map only the 1st and the 3rd note unless the music justifies it. - Fixed
00:16:880 (3) - If you want to keep that slider as it is, place it at least 1/3 beat before (00:16:769 - ). The clap should then be changed to the beat 00:16:880 - again. - I added a circle note before hand instead as I thought this felt a little odd to play
00:21:102 - Again, it's odd that this beat doesn't get covered, while the one at 00:20:991 - does. - As you say a bit later on. 1/3 hypers can't be ranked although I know I could make this into a dash but it feels good with a hyper here. That's why I deleted this note so will keep.
00:22:547 (1) - The end of the slider is not snapped correctly. This section doesn't have a tercial rhythm anymore. The most logical snap would be at the red tick 00:22:713 - . - Fixed
00:23:102 (3) - This note is also not correctly snapped. The correct placement should be at 00:23:047 - . - Fixed although I still think the whole offset is wrong as mentioned before.
00:34:547 (1) - I find odd that you opted to place the end of the slider at a 1/4 tick. The high-pitched sound at 00:34:713 - sounds more relevant to me. - Fixed
00:38:380 (4,1) - A hyper should probably be added between those two notes like you did in previous examples in this section. - Added
00:45:213 (1) - Same as 00:34:547 (1) - . Make sure to fix this one either if you accepted my suggestion before. - Fixed
00:55:213 (3,4) - We're again at a tercial rhythm section while those sliders are snapped on a 1/2 beat. Please make them 2/3 long. - I think I fixed but I am bad with fraction to sliders XD.
00:58:325 (3,1) - This hyper must be removed. The beat isn't that relevant and it's not allowed to have 1/3 hypers with this BPM according to the Ranking Criteria. -
00:59:769 (7,1) - For the same reason as before, you cannot use 1/3 hypers on Platters. Having a normal dash would be okay though. - Awww man that sucks I liked this hyper but yeah ranking criteria is important I guess.
01:02:880 (2) - I'd place this slider a few ticks to the right to make this section more interesting. It's a bit boring to have plain streams with just slight curves. - Oooo yeah good idea.
01:04:769 (3,4) - As mentioned before, you can make this distance higher to remark the relevant beat but it's up to you. In case you want to do it, don't forget to move the whole group of notes (4,5,6) altogether. - Fixed differently here.
01:05:102 (6,1) - You got one 1/3 hyper there too. - Yeah I fixed when fixing the others before XD. It sucks that they must go ;w;
01:12:713 (1) - Any special reason why the spinner is added? At least make it start on a white tick like 01:13:213 - . - I added one because it's recommend to have at least one spinner in a diff. So I thought here was an exceptional spot but yeah fixed.
01:30:130 (3) - It'd definitely make more sense for this note to be placed on the red tick 01:30:047 - instead of using the blue one. - Fixed
01:35:547 (4,1) - I don't think there should be a hyper on that part. A normal dash should be enough. - Did a lot of shuffling but fixed.
01:44:880 (3,1) - On the other hand, a hyper on those notes would make sense. 01:47:380 (2,1) - same on those ones to remark the cymbals. - Added both
01:48:880 (3,1) - This jump will definitely need a bigger distance ): - Sure >w<
01:50:380 (3,1) - And here you can increase the dash either or make it a hyper. - Alright but just a tiny bit
Good luck!

I will be applying this throughout the day as this diff really stresses me out for some reason lol. It's hard to call it my diff as it doesn't feel like I mapped this.
Sorry maybe I am just being weird and a bit rude tbf. (nothing to do with you though Deif >w<. You're awesome)

Thanks Deif for mod <3

EDIT: I really want to apologise to what I said Kyuare. I was kind of being a jerk to what I said . Sorry ;w;

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Setomi

153 posts

Joined December 2012

Setomi 2016-10-18T16:27:38+00:00

Placeholder!

Talked quickly about offset change in timing with kyuare

Timing IRC

2016-10-18 18:21 Setomi: Yo
2016-10-18 18:21 Kyuare: oY
2016-10-18 18:21 Setomi: I just quickly wanted to say that you should change the timing offset
2016-10-18 18:21 Setomi: It's currently a bit to early
2016-10-18 18:22 Setomi: 1241
2016-10-18 18:22 Setomi: is around perfect
2016-10-18 18:24 Kyuare: oh, can you put it on the mod please
2016-10-18 18:24 Setomi: yeah I will
2016-10-18 18:24 Kyuare: i think you are right but everyone need to see this o3o
2016-10-18 18:24 Setomi: yeye
2016-10-18 18:24 Setomi: Weird it didn't get noticed before but w/e
2016-10-18 18:24 Setomi: I'll continue on the rest of mod 
2016-10-18 18:24 Kyuare: okay !

Chronos IRC

2016-10-30 21:36 Setomi: Okay, do you have time now?
2016-10-30 21:36 Kyuare: yeah
2016-10-30 21:36 Setomi: Alright
2016-10-30 21:38 Setomi: Ok good stuff
2016-10-30 21:39 Kyuare: the platter need a pretty intense mod i think
2016-10-30 21:40 Setomi: Yeah it needs 
2016-10-30 21:40 Setomi: Just gimme a sec
2016-10-30 21:40 Kyuare: sure
2016-10-30 21:41 Setomi: 00:00:992 (1,2) - Why are these unsnapped?
2016-10-30 21:41 Setomi: In timeline
2016-10-30 21:42 Kyuare: thay are snapped in 1/3 o.o
2016-10-30 21:43 Kyuare: wait Deif is here, I asked him to check the offset
2016-10-30 21:43 Setomi: Oh sorry mb, it was because I changed the offset 
2016-10-30 21:43 Kyuare: yeah i think too
2016-10-30 21:43 Setomi: And then those before the timing thing didn't follow
2016-10-30 21:43 Setomi: Making them unsnapped
2016-10-30 21:45 Setomi: You gonna talk to deif first?
2016-10-30 21:45 Kyuare: he is checking atm
2016-10-30 21:45 Setomi: Aright
2016-10-30 21:46 Setomi: 00:23:075 (4,5,6) - Think you can select these and move to x:448
2016-10-30 21:46 Setomi: This creates a bit better flow
2016-10-30 21:47 Kyuare: 2s, I'll snap every notes manually
2016-10-30 21:47 Kyuare: it will be fast, sorry
2016-10-30 21:48 Setomi: Ok you need x on each note then?
2016-10-30 21:48 Kyuare: no need don't worry
2016-10-30 21:49 Setomi: Ok
2016-10-30 21:51 Kyuare: done
2016-10-30 21:51 Setomi: Alright
2016-10-30 21:53 Kyuare: for 00:23:063 (4,5,6) - I moved them to x:464 it's better for the symmetry with the next pattern
2016-10-30 21:53 Setomi: Sure that also works
2016-10-30 21:55 Setomi: 00:28:241 (3,4) - & 00:29:574 (3,4) - don't have the same distance
2016-10-30 21:55 Setomi: between eachother
2016-10-30 21:55 Kyuare: oh right
2016-10-30 21:55 Kyuare: fixed
2016-10-30 21:56 Setomi: 00:35:908 (1,2,3,4) - 
2016-10-30 21:56 Setomi: This pattern feels a bit weak
2016-10-30 21:57 Setomi: When it comes after a 1/2 break
2016-10-30 21:57 Setomi: 1/1*
2016-10-30 21:58 Kyuare: moved 00:35:896 (1,4) - to x:160
2016-10-30 21:58 Kyuare: is it enough ?
2016-10-30 21:58 Setomi: Yes
2016-10-30 21:58 Setomi: Because now it requires movement through the whole pattern
2016-10-30 21:58 Kyuare: fine
2016-10-30 21:59 Setomi: 00:41:241 (1) - 
2016-10-30 21:59 Setomi: I kinda have the same issue with this one 
2016-10-30 21:59 Kyuare: I also fixed 00:33:229 (1,2,3,4) - for the consistency
2016-10-30 21:59 Setomi: Sure
2016-10-30 21:59 Kyuare: oh it will be hard to fix here
2016-10-30 22:01 Setomi: Yeah
2016-10-30 22:01 Kyuare: okay i tried something
2016-10-30 22:03 Kyuare: i think it's fine now, you will see when i update
2016-10-30 22:03 Setomi: Ok, did u move the slider more to the left?
2016-10-30 22:04 Kyuare: yeah
2016-10-30 22:04 Setomi: Yeah, I think that's a good fix
2016-10-30 22:04 Kyuare: and inclined it
2016-10-30 22:04 Setomi: Sure
2016-10-30 22:04 Setomi: 00:42:575 (1,2,3,4) - 
2016-10-30 22:05 Setomi: These also feels a bit weak, considering the sounds 
2016-10-30 22:05 Setomi: No need for a huge buff
2016-10-30 22:05 Setomi: But slightly more movement 
2016-10-30 22:06 Setomi: 00:42:741 (2,3,4) - 
2016-10-30 22:06 Setomi: ***
2016-10-30 22:06 Setomi: I mean those 
2016-10-30 22:07 Kyuare: done, increased the spacing from 1 pixel (grid size 2)
2016-10-30 22:08 Setomi: Sweet
2016-10-30 22:08 Setomi: 00:48:408 (5,6,7) - 
2016-10-30 22:08 Setomi: I think these should follow the flow instead of being linear 
2016-10-30 22:09 Kyuare: moved 00:48:452 (6) - to x:152
2016-10-30 22:09 Kyuare: tell me if it's fine
2016-10-30 22:10 Setomi: That works
2016-10-30 22:11 Kyuare: nice
2016-10-30 22:11 Setomi: 01:02:353 (5) - 
2016-10-30 22:11 Setomi: I think you can move thise to x:64 for another double vertical
2016-10-30 22:11 Setomi: this*
2016-10-30 22:12 Setomi: Considering how you've mapped before there should be one about there
2016-10-30 22:12 Setomi: And maybe you want to move that double a bit more to the right after
2016-10-30 22:12 Kyuare: there is no clap between 01:02:229 (4,5) - so I don't think we can put a strong dash here :/
2016-10-30 22:13 Kyuare: we could put one if it was a new santza (every triplets) but here i don't think it works...
2016-10-30 22:14 Setomi: Well you can move the 01:02:353 (5,6) - closer to (4) then?
2016-10-30 22:14 Kyuare: sure
2016-10-30 22:15 Kyuare: a bit closer or much closer ?
2016-10-30 22:15 Setomi: 00:59:574 (4,5,6) - in this pattern they are close 
2016-10-30 22:15 Setomi: So maybe use that (?) or have a bit more distance 
2016-10-30 22:16 Kyuare: stacked 01:02:341 (5,6) -
2016-10-30 22:17 Setomi: Yes (?)
2016-10-30 22:17 Kyuare: let's keep it
2016-10-30 22:17 Setomi: So no change or?
2016-10-30 22:17 Kyuare: i will do your suggestion
2016-10-30 22:18 Setomi: Ok
2016-10-30 22:19 Kyuare: oh, can I try something please ?
2016-10-30 22:19 Kyuare: 01:02:341 (5,6) -
2016-10-30 22:19 Kyuare: tell me if it's fine
2016-10-30 22:19 Setomi: ok
2016-10-30 22:20 Kyuare: wait
2016-10-30 22:20 Kyuare: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6451989
2016-10-30 22:22 Setomi:  That also works
2016-10-30 22:22 Setomi: But then I think you should give 01:04:987 (2,3) - more movement
2016-10-30 22:23 Setomi: Not being vertical
2016-10-30 22:24 Kyuare: moved 01:05:118 (3) - to x:48
2016-10-30 22:25 Setomi: Sure
2016-10-30 22:26 Setomi: 01:16:741 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - For this part I think it fits if these are like
2016-10-30 22:26 Setomi: 01:16:158 (2,3,4,5) - 
2016-10-30 22:26 Setomi: In timeline 
2016-10-30 22:26 Setomi: Because that gives the same type of movement through that whole section
2016-10-30 22:26 Setomi: Instead of mixing movements
2016-10-30 22:29 Setomi: And I think it's fine to do this even tho you skip some sounds
2016-10-30 22:31 Kyuare: well i really want to keep triplets, I fixed it to keep triplets but have the same type of movement
2016-10-30 22:31 Setomi: Ok nice 
2016-10-30 22:31 Setomi: Then I guess that is fine too 
2016-10-30 22:31 Setomi: The movement was what I was mostly after
2016-10-30 22:36 Setomi: Use the same distance between 01:25:741 (4) - & 01:26:075 (5,6,7) -  as u did in this pattern 01:24:575 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 
2016-10-30 22:37 Setomi: And when I think about it 01:26:241 (7,8) - could also use that same distance
2016-10-30 22:39 Kyuare: oh I did something different, wait, i'll submit my work
2016-10-30 22:39 Setomi: oki
2016-10-30 22:40 Kyuare: done you can update
2016-10-30 22:41 Setomi: Okey that is also nice
2016-10-30 22:41 Setomi: And the timing changed a bit 
2016-10-30 22:42 Kyuare: yeah, Deif checked it
2016-10-30 22:45 Setomi: 01:30:646 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 
2016-10-30 22:45 Setomi: This pattern feels a bit weak
2016-10-30 22:45 Setomi: You don't even have to dash this part
2016-10-30 22:46 Kyuare: fixed, increased the spacing
2016-10-30 22:46 Kyuare: we need to dash now
2016-10-30 22:47 Setomi: Nice
2016-10-30 22:47 Setomi: 01:31:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A bit weak here aswell
2016-10-30 22:49 Kyuare: made them H dash
2016-10-30 22:52 Setomi: 01:35:563 (2) - This fits good with anti flow 
2016-10-30 22:53 Setomi: having right left right left movement between 01:35:229 (1,2) - 
2016-10-30 22:55 Kyuare: done
2016-10-30 22:55 Setomi: Sweet
2016-10-30 22:55 Setomi: 01:39:896 (1,2,3,4) - more movement considering sounds here
2016-10-30 22:55 Setomi: mostly in (1,2)'
2016-10-30 22:56 Setomi: and/or having this 01:40:563 (1,2) - antiflow
2016-10-30 22:56 Kyuare: increased the distance
2016-10-30 22:57 Kyuare: mmh an antiflow here is very dangerous imo
2016-10-30 22:57 Kyuare: it will be frustrating if the player miss :/
2016-10-30 22:58 Kyuare: I think i will keep it as it is sorry
2016-10-30 22:58 Setomi: Sure
2016-10-30 22:59 Setomi: 01:43:896 (1) - This is not HDash as the other 
2016-10-30 22:59 Setomi: 01:45:229 (1) - & 01:46:563 (1) - for example
2016-10-30 23:00 Kyuare: fixed
2016-10-30 23:01 Setomi: 01:50:563 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - A bit more distance here
2016-10-30 23:01 Setomi: Because these can be walked without dashing 
2016-10-30 23:04 Kyuare: fixed
2016-10-30 23:05 Setomi: Ok 
2016-10-30 23:05 Setomi: That's it
2016-10-30 23:05 Kyuare: wow the map is much better
2016-10-30 23:05 Setomi: yay 
2016-10-30 23:05 Setomi: Makes me happy 
2016-10-30 23:05 Kyuare: thanks
2016-10-30 23:06 Kyuare: me too :D
2016-10-30 23:07 Setomi: I will irc with furely and rest 
2016-10-30 23:08 Kyuare: i will take care of Overdose and Salad
2016-10-30 23:08 Setomi: So I don't mod those?
2016-10-30 23:08 Kyuare: if you want to mod them you can irc with me
2016-10-30 23:08 Kyuare: furely can't speak english
2016-10-30 23:08 Setomi: Ah ok, let's do that tomorrow 
2016-10-30 23:08 Kyuare: and clsw is dead
2016-10-30 23:08 Kyuare: sure
2016-10-30 23:08 Setomi: Because I have to wake up early 
2016-10-30 23:09 Kyuare: thank you very much
2016-10-30 23:09 Kyuare: sure
2016-10-30 23:09 Setomi: But I'm online all day tomorrow so just catch me at any time

Hyperion's Cup

01:20:229 (2) - Considering how you're gonna map upcoming 1/2's I think this could be horizontal + that it adds a double tap movement which is nice for a finish part

01:41:896 (5) - Think this could be a 1/2 reverse considering sounds here and previous mapping

Rest is great!

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,885 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-11-02T21:15:49+00:00

@Setomi

fixed both - first I also had to reduce 01:20:229 (2,3) - slightly to avoid it being uncomfortable, and for second it was basically a repeat slider shape already anyway so sure

Cup

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Kurokami

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Kurokami 2016-11-02T21:25:47+00:00

ITS ALIVE!!!

MBomb

MBomb 2016-11-03T20:41:14+00:00

i'm not late right

[Cup]

00:56:896 (5) - A slight reduction on this would be nice, I currently sometimes only just catch this on the edge of my platter right now, so a tiny bit more leniency would be great (Due to the backforth motions). Try x:112.
01:05:229 (1) - Very hard distance considering the backforth motions required, try reducing to x:128 instead.

[Salad]

00:29:229 (1) - Distance to this feels a little too strong, try x:168 on this to make it more comfortable for a salad player.
00:35:229 (2) - Note isn't really strong enough for a dash at this difficulty, and this distance is quite difficult for a salad player without dashing right now. Try reducing it to x:400.
00:36:896 (4) - Distance to this is far too strong for a non-dash in a salad, but this note is not strong at all, please reduce distance to it to make it easier.
00:37:896 (2) - Same with this, the note on this head is really weak, yet this distance is near impossible without dashing, please reduce the distance.
00:41:229 (1) - Considering the direction change, a positioning like x:416 would be more forgiving for the player.
00:43:229 (2) - Why is the distance to this so strong, and the distance from it so weak? This note is pretty weak, and the note after is a lot stronger. I'd recommend making the distance to this smaller, and then curving the slider to make a dash to the next note.

I'm just gonna stop here. This salad needs a lot of work, there are a lot of places with notes which are near impossible for a salad player to do without dashing, and if you did intend for those to be dashes, then there are way too many dashes in this salad, making it far too hard for a newer player. Go through the examples I've listed, and carry on through the map yourself and try to fix these movements, as the difficulty is far too hard as it is now.

[Platter]

00:07:563 (4,5) - Movement here is a bit too strong, I'd recommend reducing slightly to make it a bit of an easier dash movement, try x:160 on this section.
00:24:229 (2) - That distance feels far too big, this is nearly a HDash as it is now, please reduce it to something more comfortable, like x:392.
00:35:229 (3) - Distance to this feels a bit awkward for a platter player too, a slight reduction like x:424 would be nice.
00:45:896 (3) - Smaller distance from this would be nice considering the direction changes before and after, x:440 is good.

I really like the rest

[Rain]

AR9 would be nice, both for AR spread, and considering the high bpm and a few of the snaps, it'd feel a lot nicer at those parts.

00:21:229 (1) - x:320 on this would feel slightly better flow-wise, the sudden distance increase out of this pattern can feel uncomfortable.
00:53:563 (3) - Distance to this may be a bit too strong considering the HDash in the opposite direction beforehand, the pattern can feel very difficult to change speed fast enough right now.
00:55:563 (4) - Considering the snap strengths here, maybe a slight distance reduction would be nice for flow, try x:368, as these patterns can feel very confusing right now.
01:05:007 (5) - This note looks very far out from the rest of the triple right now, I think making it a bit closer, like x:96, would feel good.

I love how you mapped the kiai <3

[Overdose]

I'm not really a fan of those early breaks, I think mapping those out would feel very nice.

00:33:562 (5) - Whilst this seems like a very small change, it actually feels like a fairly big one. Reduce this to x:144. It reduces the HDash strength slightly but keeps it, and makes the flow a lot better into the next note, as currently slowing down to hit the slider is difficult with the flow, but the slower HDash speed and higher distance makes it feel nicer.
00:40:896 (7,8) - Move this section to x:448, the current slider can feel a bit against the wall, so moving it further away would fix this.
00:44:396 (6) - Slightly lower distance to this slider would be nice because of the HDash in the opposite direction beforehand making this jump very difficult right now for this level of play. Try x:240.
00:47:396 (6,7) - Same reason as above with the HDash followed by really strong movement, try moving these to x:352 to make the timing a little more lenient.
01:47:563 (6,7) - Lower distance to this section slightly, as the dash is currently very strong followed by quickly moving in the opposite direction, resulting in some pretty awkward movement. Try x:248 on here.

How have I never heard of you before, this mapping is amazing! <3

[Chronos]

00:06:007 (2,5) - I think a nice idea for variety in this intro would be, because these are a lower pitch, the pattern could be easier to emphasise the harder patterns on the higher pitch more, so maybe make these two notes normal flow?
00:23:563 (7,8,9,10) - Distance to this feels way too strong for a non-HDash movement, I would suggest decreasing this pattern to x:176, to keep the movement at a more tolerable level.
00:32:063 (2) - Whilst I'm fine with this pattern, I'm not entirely sure if I really should be. Not asking for a change, just pointing out that this is a very hard pattern, and the notes here are not even that strong, because of this flow break.
00:44:896 (8,9,10,11,12) - Again, movement to this feels far too strong for a non-HDash, reduce this section to like x:304.
00:54:563 - to 01:05:229 - , whilst the general pattern ideas are fine here, almost this entire section is antiflow patterns, which can feel very repetitive if not for a few normal patterns too. Please add some flow patterns involved within the section for a bit more variety.
01:36:813 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Move this entire section right by 1 square, to make the 5,6 double feel a little better flowing, as right now there can be some misses due to the quickness of the direction change, and the HDash requiring pretty good timing on that change.

Pretty fun, I managed to FC

Alright, done <3 The salad needs more work before ranking, and Chronos could have a bit of a tone down on how many antiflow patterns there are, but it's a good mapset overall

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