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Normal -
00:09:824 (4,1) - The space between these two would be better as a spinner and not a small break.
00:14:470 (4) - This would flow better if it was flipped horizontally, rotated 90 degrees clockwise and made a bit straighter.
00:27:630 (5) - NC
00:29:954 (2,3,4) - This could be confusing for newer players.
00:36:534 (1,2,1) - Change the placing of the sliders or the start of the combo, this area seems a bit clustered.
00:53:953 (5) - NC
00:56:857 (3,4,5,6) - This part is pretty clustered + hard to read for a 2 star.
01:09:050 (6,1) - Move 6 to avoid overlapping with the next slider.
01:13:308 (5) - NC
01:19:114 (5) - NC
Hard -
00:05:760 (5) - Make this outward instead of inward.
00:09:824 (4) - NC
00:09:437 (3,4,5,6) - This sequence of beats is confusing.
00:14:082 (1,4) - I would make this inline with 00:14:469 (3,5) -
00:22:792 (6) - Make outward.
00:37:114 (8) - Move up so it flows better with the stream.
00:53:759 (4,5) - This is confusing to read.
00:49:211 (6) - You could make this a short stream instead of a repeat slider.
Insane -
00:20:857 (2) - I don't think this should repeat a 3rd time.
00:36:146 (1,2,3,4) - Could make this a stream instead of repeat sliders.
00:52:018 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Difficult to read.
See General for the rest of this.
General -
I don't really see the need for 3 kiai sections. I would just keep the 2nd one you have and get rid of the 1st and 3rd since they really aren't the "climax" of the song.
The patterns you're using (especially in the insane difficulty) tend to seem a bit random and inconsistent. In parts where the beat is the same or similar don't be afraid to reuse the same patterns, but just change up the note placements and stuff. You can reuse the same patterns without being repetitive. Some of the jumps also seem randomly placed as well, which can be fixed by modifying the placements manually choosing the coordinates. The star jumps you have aren't bad though. Some more consistency and closer attention to the placement of your jumps would do this map justice. Best of luck!
Normal -
00:09:824 (4,1) - The space between these two would be better as a spinner and not a small break.
00:14:470 (4) - This would flow better if it was flipped horizontally, rotated 90 degrees clockwise and made a bit straighter.
00:27:630 (5) - NC
00:29:954 (2,3,4) - This could be confusing for newer players.
00:36:534 (1,2,1) - Change the placing of the sliders or the start of the combo, this area seems a bit clustered.
00:53:953 (5) - NC
00:56:857 (3,4,5,6) - This part is pretty clustered + hard to read for a 2 star.
01:09:050 (6,1) - Move 6 to avoid overlapping with the next slider.
01:13:308 (5) - NC
01:19:114 (5) - NC
Hard -
00:05:760 (5) - Make this outward instead of inward.
00:09:824 (4) - NC
00:09:437 (3,4,5,6) - This sequence of beats is confusing.
00:14:082 (1,4) - I would make this inline with 00:14:469 (3,5) -
00:22:792 (6) - Make outward.
00:37:114 (8) - Move up so it flows better with the stream.
00:53:759 (4,5) - This is confusing to read.
00:49:211 (6) - You could make this a short stream instead of a repeat slider.
Insane -
00:20:857 (2) - I don't think this should repeat a 3rd time.
00:36:146 (1,2,3,4) - Could make this a stream instead of repeat sliders.
00:52:018 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Difficult to read.
See General for the rest of this.
General -
I don't really see the need for 3 kiai sections. I would just keep the 2nd one you have and get rid of the 1st and 3rd since they really aren't the "climax" of the song.
The patterns you're using (especially in the insane difficulty) tend to seem a bit random and inconsistent. In parts where the beat is the same or similar don't be afraid to reuse the same patterns, but just change up the note placements and stuff. You can reuse the same patterns without being repetitive. Some of the jumps also seem randomly placed as well, which can be fixed by modifying the placements manually choosing the coordinates. The star jumps you have aren't bad though. Some more consistency and closer attention to the placement of your jumps would do this map justice. Best of luck!