random mod ^_^ really enjoying this anime so far
[General]
In options you have a preferred skin set to one of your own. I suggest leaving it to user preferred unless you are going to include the skin in your beatmap
I also recommend unchecking Widescreen support and selecting some custom colours to use that suit the background
You have two red timing points. Remove the 120 BPM one. (Make sure you resnap your first note after doing this)
I just made my first map recently too and I reckon looking at other maps and copying but manipulating their styles works really well when starting out. Eventually you will have your own style!
Just like I did for my first map; you've mapped mostly in the centre and no where near the sides as shown by this bundle of noodles (all your notes)
Oh and also try get a louder .mp3 (If you can't find one, you can amplify it in audacity but make sure it doesn't clip.)
[Normal]
00:00:166 (1) - Move it to be in the centre of 1,2
00:01:889 (1) - Remove NC
00:02:082 (2) - Add NC
00:06:727 (6) - Blanket with 5
00:07:115 (1) - This is really awkward, either move it away from 2 or change it. Also get rid of the finish on it
00:24:533 (5,6,7) - Spread these out (unstacked)
00:31:114 (4) - Stack this on the end of 2
01:06:727 (5) - Add NC
01:06:921 (1) - Remove NC
01:07:695 (3,4) - 1 and 1/2 beats between these notes. Very hard to land to normal players. Add another not on white tick and use slider
01:12:146 (2) - Move this out from underneath 01:09:824 (1)
[Hard]
Change HP to 5
00:01:308 (3) - Add NC
00:01:502 (1) - Remove NC
00:01:889 (1) - The sliders 2,3 are symmetrical but this one isn't. Either change this slider or make it symmetrical
00:01:889 (1) - Remove NC
00:02:276 (2) - Add NC
00:03:050 (1) - Remove NC
00:14:082 (3,4,5,6) - Make a perfect triangle with 3,4,5 and stack 6 on 3 (I know this removes your blanket)
00:13:308 (2,1) - You can blanket these if you still want to blanket something
00:13:889 (1) - Remove NC
00:14:082 (3) - Add NC
00:16:986 (1) - Remove NC
00:19:888 (6) - Add NC
00:20:083 (1) - Remove NC
00:27:824 (1) - Remove NC
00:28:404 (2) - Add NC
00:29:566 (5) - Add NC
00:30:146 (1) - Remove NC (Honestly going to stop here with the New Combo edits, you can do them yourself
, check all combos to make sure that they begin on white ticks unless your mapping rhythm is on red ticks for a section then its fine to have it on red ticks like at 00:04:986 (1).)
00:37:017 (7,8) - Make this stream closer to the slider so that the DS is the same. Also change it so the stream curves into the slider (you may need to rotate the slider)
00:39:050 (2) - Mate don't be lazy you can do better than that
00:49:114 (6) - I would much rather a stream here but I guess this works
00:54:727 (7) - Now this one DOESN'T work. Singer says su-gi-te which is 3 beats yet you have 6 beats. Either increase size to fit 3 or change it
01:02:469 (1) - Make this perfectly symmetrical. Circles only need 3 points, look up how to do one
01:19:308 (2,3) - Spacing issue
[Insane]
Fix up NC issues
Set OD 8
Set CS 4
00:04:018 (3,4) - Slider should begin at 3 to 4 not start at 4
00:04:599 (1,3) - These two should be the same slider just CTRL + H + J
00:28:986 (6,1) - Stack 1 on 6
00:30:533 (7,1) - Stack 7 on the end of 1
00:39:727 (6,7) - Check what I wrote at 00:37:017 (7,8) for Hard diff
00:44:082 (1,2) - Move 1 away so it doesn't look like a failed blanket or just blanket it
01:00:921 (1) - Check what I wrote at 01:02:469 (1) for Hard diff
01:06:534 (1,2,3,4) - Blanket this
01:17:566 (2) - Stack this with 01:18:341 (1)
01:18:921 (4) - Stack with 01:20:082 (8)