ASIAN KUNG-FU GENERATION - Re:Re:

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TouchxMe
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, May 02, 2016 at 5:38:48 PM

Artist: ASIAN KUNG-FU GENERATION
Title: Re:Re:
Source: Boku dake ga inai machi
Tags: Erased op tv size asian kungfu generation Boku dake ga inai machi rere re:re: rere: touchxme 僕だけがいない街
BPM: 155
Filesize: 11051kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Erased (4.55 stars, 343 notes)
  2. Hard (3.66 stars, 290 notes)
  3. Normal (1.99 stars, 162 notes)


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Do appreciate any modding :D:D
teko8
From #modreqs.

All difficulties:
Kiai Times - Some of the kiai timings are either not snapped or feel really out of place. Here's my suggestion for this (read by start point to end point, will require adding inherited points)
Current kiai timings
00:35:469 - 00:38:082 - This starts very randomly
00:38:275 - 00:41:179 - This is slightly too late
01:13:114 - 01:25:695 - This starts very randomly

Suggested kiai timings
00:00:534 - 00:12:921 - Song starts on a big sound
00:37:695 - 00:50:082 - Chorus part
01:14:856 - 01:27:340 - Solo(?) part

Hitsounding: Could use more varity, try out the drum and soft hitsounds where appropriate.

Normal:
Overall: Feels more like an Easy at the moment than a normal. Try adding more beats by making some sliders shorter; Some of the beats are not in time with the music, must fix this first (i.e. 00:30:727 (3) - too long, 00:34:212 (1) - Starts too early {even though its mapped to the guitar, it stretches for far too long})


Hard:

00:01:308 (1) - Remove NC. Not need here.
00:13:308 (1) - Remove NC.
00:22:018 (1) - This slider is long for no real reason. Should map 00:22:017 - 00:23:179 - similar to the rest of the map thus far.
00:26:275 (1) - Remove NC.
00:26:856 (2) - Create NC.
01:10:792 (1) - Same as before at 00:22:018 (1) - .
01:17:566 (6) - Same as before at 00:22:018 (1) - .
01:19:501 (3) - Slider repeats 2 times too many. Shorten by 2 repeats and make 01:20:179 (4) - a small back-forth slider that starts on 01:20:082 - .
01:26:856 (5,6) - Swap these so that the combo ends on a circle instead.
General Note: The spacing in this map is too random/inconsistent at the moment. The spacing doesn't necessarily need to be even per note for a combo but has to make sense with the timing (a.k.a. short spacing = earlier hits vs. longer spacing = later hits).

Insane:

00:03:050 (6,7,8) - Check alignment of 7,8 with the slider.
00:05:760 (1) - Makes this longer so that it ends on 00:06:050 - so that it leads into the stream better.
00:07:115 (1) - Remove NC. Not necessary to have a 1 note combo before it. Make part 00:06:728 (1) - the start of the next combo.
00:14:276 (2) - 1 less repeat and add a circle at 00:14:856 - under the slider end.
00:15:630 (1) - Remove NC.
00:18:728 (1) - Remove this and replace with beats at 00:18:727 - , 00:18:728 (1) - , and 00:19:114 - .
00:36:147 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This part is inconsistent. Should make it either into one stream, or 4 repeat sliders of the same length (e.g. repeat for 3, x4). Fix spacing between them and then next slider at 00:37:695 (1) - afterwards.
00:39:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part also feels inconsistent. Stream sounds like it should start on the next white tick instead of the red tick. The red tick feels like it should serve as a 4th point for the previous combo.
00:41:179 - , 00:41:759 - , 00:41:953 - Add a beat in these places.
00:49:889 (7,8) - This jump is really sudden and feels out of place here. Should make it so that the stream ends on the slider at 00:50:082 - and remove the circle currently at 00:50:083 (8) - .
00:56:470 (2) - Same as 00:14:276 (2) - .
01:00:921 (1) - Don't make this slider repeat if you're gonna keep it. Remove the repeat and map the gap that's after it.
01:13:501 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I would extend 01:13:501 (1) - until 01:13:888 - , remove 01:13:889 (2) - , and map it into a slightly longer stream. Correct spacing as needed.
01:16:599 (3) - 1 less repeat and add a circle under where the slider ends.
01:19:502 (7) - This repeat slider feels really random. Might want to think of something else to put here.
01:23:373 (5) - Same as 01:16:599 (3) - .
01:25:502 (1,2) - This spacing is too short. Should make much larger. Putting it this close to the slider suggests that it happens earlier than it actually does.
General Notes:
1. The spacing in this map is too random/inconsistent at the moment. The spacing doesn't necessarily need to be even per note for a combo but has to make sense with the timing (a.k.a. short spacing = earlier hits vs. longer spacing = later hits) [Copy/Paste from Hard].
2. Parts of the map are mapped to different instrumental parts of the music, which is fine, but the transtions between parts should be a little more subtle. Right now it seems random which makes it extremely noticeable (e.g. 00:38:470 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,4) - into 00:41:373 (1,1,1,2,3,4) - ).
Insane:

00:06:631 (7) - I would remove this. Doesn't flow with the music in my opinion. This can also allow farther spacing to 00:06:728 (1) - .

As it stands right now, I would focus on fixing the spacing and timing on notes to go with the music. May look at it again after alterations have been made. ;)
Topic Starter
TouchxMe

teko8 wrote:

From #modreqs.

All difficulties:
Kiai Times - Some of the kiai timings are either not snapped or feel really out of place. Here's my suggestion for this (read by start point to end point, will require adding inherited points)
Current kiai timings
00:35:469 - 00:38:082 - This starts very randomly
00:38:275 - 00:41:179 - This is slightly too late
01:13:114 - 01:25:695 - This starts very randomly

Suggested kiai timings
00:00:534 - 00:12:921 - Song starts on a big sound
00:37:695 - 00:50:082 - Chorus part
01:14:856 - 01:27:340 - Solo(?) part

Hitsounding: Could use more varity, try out the drum and soft hitsounds where appropriate.

Normal:
Overall: Feels more like an Easy at the moment than a normal. Try adding more beats by making some sliders shorter; Some of the beats are not in time with the music, must fix this first (i.e. 00:30:727 (3) - too long, 00:34:212 (1) - Starts too early {even though its mapped to the guitar, it stretches for far too long})


Hard:

00:01:308 (1) - Remove NC. Not need here.
00:13:308 (1) - Remove NC.
00:22:018 (1) - This slider is long for no real reason. Should map 00:22:017 - 00:23:179 - similar to the rest of the map thus far.
00:26:275 (1) - Remove NC.
00:26:856 (2) - Create NC.
01:10:792 (1) - Same as before at 00:22:018 (1) - .
01:17:566 (6) - Same as before at 00:22:018 (1) - .
01:19:501 (3) - Slider repeats 2 times too many. Shorten by 2 repeats and make 01:20:179 (4) - a small back-forth slider that starts on 01:20:082 - .
01:26:856 (5,6) - Swap these so that the combo ends on a circle instead.
General Note: The spacing in this map is too random/inconsistent at the moment. The spacing doesn't necessarily need to be even per note for a combo but has to make sense with the timing (a.k.a. short spacing = earlier hits vs. longer spacing = later hits).

Insane:

00:03:050 (6,7,8) - Check alignment of 7,8 with the slider.
00:05:760 (1) - Makes this longer so that it ends on 00:06:050 - so that it leads into the stream better.
00:07:115 (1) - Remove NC. Not necessary to have a 1 note combo before it. Make part 00:06:728 (1) - the start of the next combo.
00:14:276 (2) - 1 less repeat and add a circle at 00:14:856 - under the slider end.
00:15:630 (1) - Remove NC.
00:18:728 (1) - Remove this and replace with beats at 00:18:727 - , 00:18:728 (1) - , and 00:19:114 - .
00:36:147 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This part is inconsistent. Should make it either into one stream, or 4 repeat sliders of the same length (e.g. repeat for 3, x4). Fix spacing between them and then next slider at 00:37:695 (1) - afterwards.
00:39:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part also feels inconsistent. Stream sounds like it should start on the next white tick instead of the red tick. The red tick feels like it should serve as a 4th point for the previous combo.
00:41:179 - , 00:41:759 - , 00:41:953 - Add a beat in these places.
00:49:889 (7,8) - This jump is really sudden and feels out of place here. Should make it so that the stream ends on the slider at 00:50:082 - and remove the circle currently at 00:50:083 (8) - .
00:56:470 (2) - Same as 00:14:276 (2) - .
01:00:921 (1) - Don't make this slider repeat if you're gonna keep it. Remove the repeat and map the gap that's after it.
01:13:501 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I would extend 01:13:501 (1) - until 01:13:888 - , remove 01:13:889 (2) - , and map it into a slightly longer stream. Correct spacing as needed.
01:16:599 (3) - 1 less repeat and add a circle under where the slider ends.
01:19:502 (7) - This repeat slider feels really random. Might want to think of something else to put here.
01:23:373 (5) - Same as 01:16:599 (3) - .
01:25:502 (1,2) - This spacing is too short. Should make much larger. Putting it this close to the slider suggests that it happens earlier than it actually does.
General Notes:
1. The spacing in this map is too random/inconsistent at the moment. The spacing doesn't necessarily need to be even per note for a combo but has to make sense with the timing (a.k.a. short spacing = earlier hits vs. longer spacing = later hits) [Copy/Paste from Hard].
2. Parts of the map are mapped to different instrumental parts of the music, which is fine, but the transtions between parts should be a little more subtle. Right now it seems random which makes it extremely noticeable (e.g. 00:38:470 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,4) - into 00:41:373 (1,1,1,2,3,4) - ).
Insane:

00:06:631 (7) - I would remove this. Doesn't flow with the music in my opinion. This can also allow farther spacing to 00:06:728 (1) - .

As it stands right now, I would focus on fixing the spacing and timing on notes to go with the music. May look at it again after alterations have been made. ;)
Thanks a lot for the huge feedback :)
Will work on it now
Topic Starter
TouchxMe

teko8 wrote:

From #modreqs.

All difficulties:
Kiai Times - Some of the kiai timings are either not snapped or feel really out of place. Here's my suggestion for this (read by start point to end point, will require adding inherited points)
Current kiai timings
00:35:469 - 00:38:082 - This starts very randomly
00:38:275 - 00:41:179 - This is slightly too late
01:13:114 - 01:25:695 - This starts very randomly

Suggested kiai timings
00:00:534 - 00:12:921 - Song starts on a big sound
00:37:695 - 00:50:082 - Chorus part
01:14:856 - 01:27:340 - Solo(?) part

Hitsounding: Could use more varity, try out the drum and soft hitsounds where appropriate.

Normal:
Overall: Feels more like an Easy at the moment than a normal. Try adding more beats by making some sliders shorter; Some of the beats are not in time with the music, must fix this first (i.e. 00:30:727 (3) - too long, 00:34:212 (1) - Starts too early {even though its mapped to the guitar, it stretches for far too long})


Hard:

00:01:308 (1) - Remove NC. Not need here.
00:13:308 (1) - Remove NC.
00:22:018 (1) - This slider is long for no real reason. Should map 00:22:017 - 00:23:179 - similar to the rest of the map thus far.
00:26:275 (1) - Remove NC.
00:26:856 (2) - Create NC.
01:10:792 (1) - Same as before at 00:22:018 (1) - .
01:17:566 (6) - Same as before at 00:22:018 (1) - .
01:19:501 (3) - Slider repeats 2 times too many. Shorten by 2 repeats and make 01:20:179 (4) - a small back-forth slider that starts on 01:20:082 - .
01:26:856 (5,6) - Swap these so that the combo ends on a circle instead.
General Note: The spacing in this map is too random/inconsistent at the moment. The spacing doesn't necessarily need to be even per note for a combo but has to make sense with the timing (a.k.a. short spacing = earlier hits vs. longer spacing = later hits).

Insane:

00:03:050 (6,7,8) - Check alignment of 7,8 with the slider.
00:05:760 (1) - Makes this longer so that it ends on 00:06:050 - so that it leads into the stream better.
00:07:115 (1) - Remove NC. Not necessary to have a 1 note combo before it. Make part 00:06:728 (1) - the start of the next combo.
00:14:276 (2) - 1 less repeat and add a circle at 00:14:856 - under the slider end.
00:15:630 (1) - Remove NC.
00:18:728 (1) - Remove this and replace with beats at 00:18:727 - , 00:18:728 (1) - , and 00:19:114 - .
00:36:147 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This part is inconsistent. Should make it either into one stream, or 4 repeat sliders of the same length (e.g. repeat for 3, x4). Fix spacing between them and then next slider at 00:37:695 (1) - afterwards.
00:39:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part also feels inconsistent. Stream sounds like it should start on the next white tick instead of the red tick. The red tick feels like it should serve as a 4th point for the previous combo.
00:41:179 - , 00:41:759 - , 00:41:953 - Add a beat in these places.
00:49:889 (7,8) - This jump is really sudden and feels out of place here. Should make it so that the stream ends on the slider at 00:50:082 - and remove the circle currently at 00:50:083 (8) - .
00:56:470 (2) - Same as 00:14:276 (2) - .
01:00:921 (1) - Don't make this slider repeat if you're gonna keep it. Remove the repeat and map the gap that's after it.
01:13:501 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I would extend 01:13:501 (1) - until 01:13:888 - , remove 01:13:889 (2) - , and map it into a slightly longer stream. Correct spacing as needed.
01:16:599 (3) - 1 less repeat and add a circle under where the slider ends.
01:19:502 (7) - This repeat slider feels really random. Might want to think of something else to put here.
01:23:373 (5) - Same as 01:16:599 (3) - .
01:25:502 (1,2) - This spacing is too short. Should make much larger. Putting it this close to the slider suggests that it happens earlier than it actually does.
General Notes:
1. The spacing in this map is too random/inconsistent at the moment. The spacing doesn't necessarily need to be even per note for a combo but has to make sense with the timing (a.k.a. short spacing = earlier hits vs. longer spacing = later hits) [Copy/Paste from Hard].
2. Parts of the map are mapped to different instrumental parts of the music, which is fine, but the transtions between parts should be a little more subtle. Right now it seems random which makes it extremely noticeable (e.g. 00:38:470 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,4) - into 00:41:373 (1,1,1,2,3,4) - ).
Insane:

00:06:631 (7) - I would remove this. Doesn't flow with the music in my opinion. This can also allow farther spacing to 00:06:728 (1) - .

As it stands right now, I would focus on fixing the spacing and timing on notes to go with the music. May look at it again after alterations have been made. ;)
Changes has been made, do help take a look again ;)
Yales
Hello!
First of all, when someone mod your map, think about giving him a kudosu if you think that was helpful! (I say it for the previous modder who spent quite some time for this set!)
[General]
  1. First off, there's some General issues that should be fixed. I think that offset 166 fits way better for the first red line and 552 for the second red line. (I didn't fix it while modding it, so check my points first!)
  2. There's so tags conflicts between you diffs, which means you didn't put the exact same tags in all your diffs.
  3. For some reason your hard diff has more red lines than other diffs..
  4. 01:27:341 (1) - Make the spinner on all diffs finish on 01:28:792 - sounds more accurate

[Insane]
  1. Try to avoid as much as possible (except if the music calls for it) to put sliders on red ticks, they're not really catchy. I put a few examples.
  2. 00:09:824 (7) - The break feels a bit random, there's still the same music you were mapping going on, yet you decide to suddenly stop mapping it (there's even the kiai still on!) Try to keep going until 00:11:372 -
  3. 00:12:533 - I'd add a note here. You're following the vocal I understand it but it might be a bit confusing as there's a beat just before you didn't map!
  4. 00:14:276 (2) - Be careful, the reverse is hidden, which is unrankable! You can do this though http://puu.sh/nydh9/4ec6d90a54.jpg I Ctrl+G this slider to improve the flow. See if you like or not, up to you change this as well or not :P Just if you do, put 00:14:856 (3) - farther!
  5. 00:17:373 (7) - This slider is hiding the stronger beat of you pattern (which is right at the middle of it. Try this rhythme: http://puu.sh/nydp2/6245910d7d.jpg
  6. 00:16:599 (5) - Same. The stronger beat (as well as where the vocal is accentuated) is mapped at the end of you slider, which means that we're not hitting it as you put the emphasize just before. Try this http://puu.sh/nydxy/8e993da8f3.jpg This is the red tick slider problem I was talking about.
  7. 00:18:921 (6) - Same. To fix just put a circle instead of the slider, and where the slider used to finish, make a new one start instead! http://puu.sh/nydCu/95e93b1885.jpg
  8. 00:44:083 (1,2) - To make this kind of pattern looks nice, make sure you create a nice blanket. You can see if it's good via the approach rate of (1) http://puu.sh/nydI8/19813b3728.jpg
  9. 00:45:437 (1) - Would sound better if it would finish on the previous white tick, in a way that the rythme you created (most likely 1/2 or 1/1) stays constant!
  10. 00:50:082 (8) - Add a note or a reverse on the previous slider, there's beat+vocal here
  11. 01:05:566 (1) - Finish instead? Seems it's the end of that triple section!
  12. 01:16:599 (3,4) - Spacing might be a bit confusing here!
  13. 01:19:501 (7,8) - Switch them in the timeline! (and put normal samplet set on the slider) it will be way more catchy!
  14. 01:25:889 (2) - I wouldn't reduce volume as you did, it's the stronger part!!

Patterns are pretty cool, they're not too messy imo which is pretty great actually. Some flow problem but nothing that bad. I think you gotta focus on those sliders on red ticks, they usually don't sound good and plays weird, I just pointed them a few out there's more left!
[Hard]
  1. 00:20:276 (2,3) - You can improve blanket (the thing I was talking about with the AR on insane: http://puu.sh/nyehj/0cb477d41d.jpg
  2. 00:24:340 (1) - The end should be hittable~
  3. 01:00:921 (1) - Idea is really good, I would remove the reverse and make the slider start here instead 01:02:469 - but it's a pretty good idea anyway!
  4. 01:22:985 (2,3,4,5) - Your square doesn't look really neat. You can automatically create some : Compose -> Create polygon circles.

Gotta fix the sliders on this diff as well if you also think it sounds better the way I recommend!
[Normal]
I didn't check your normal in detail but you have to always respect Distance Snap in this difficulty level as well as "easy" (Hard is recommended too, but you're free).

That's it. It's pretty good overall to be honest! Just those timing issues with your sliders..!

Don't forget to give kudosu if you think that was helpful! If you have any question mapping/modding related, feel free to contact me IG!
teko8
Hey! Back again to look at edits.

All difficulties:

Hitsounding: There are good hitsounding patterns on all difficulties, but are not maintained throughout the map/randomly change. Should try to make them consistent (e.g. clap,clap,clap on triples in Insane difficulty).
Ending: Ending spinner needs to be time snapped to 1/6 imo at 01:27:437 - . Spinner should have a soft ending to fit the song's fadeout effect (change audio sample through timing setup window to soft for very last inherited point).
01:27:340 - Snap this timing point to 01:27:437 - .

Normal:

00:52:792 (9) - This slider is way longer than the other sliders in this section. Should shorten by quite a bit (imo, ending at 00:53:179 - and filling the gap that's left with another combo).


Hard:

00:25:308 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Feel like this combo drags on for too long. Try to add an NC at some point (I'll leave that to you to decide ;) )
00:36:437 (9) - Create NC here.
00:37:501 (1) - This sounds like it occurs 3 ticks too early. Move to 00:37:695 - , remove 00:37:888 (2) - and add a beat at 00:38:082 - .
01:06:533 (1) - Remove NC here so that the combo starts on 01:06:146 (1) - .


Insane:

00:00:534 (2) - Create NC here.
00:01:308 (1) - Remove NC here. Make it part of the previous combo.
00:18:921 (6) - Create NC here.
00:20:663 (12) - Create NC here and place ontop of start of 00:20:857 (13) - or create spacing between them. Currently, coming from the previous jumps right before it, it doesn't flow well.
00:32:083 (1,2) - Only time a stack occurs in this section. Could make into another small jump similar to the other jumps before and after it.
00:39:824 (1) - Remove NC here.
00:45:437 (1) - Remove NC here.
01:02:856 (2) - Create NC here. Now that the slider doesn't repeat, the player needs to be able to survive the drain more easily by hitting the slider as a combo instead of the entire combo after the slider.
Insane:

00:00:147 (1) - Remove this beat(?). As it stands it seems like an extra hit which could just be used as a lead-in into the song (remove, test, and consider).
00:42:147 (1) - Remove NC here. Make it part of the previous combo.
00:43:115 (4) - Remove repeat and place a beat at 00:43:695 - under the slider end and another beat at 00:43:888 - some distance away. Maintain spacing for the combo.

Overall, it's a huge step up from before. Just gotta work with NC points and hitsounding. Get some more mods to check it for you and you should be good to go. :)
Topic Starter
TouchxMe

Yales wrote:

Hello!
First of all, when someone mod your map, think about giving him a kudosu if you think that was helpful! (I say it for the previous modder who spent quite some time for this set!)
[General]
  1. First off, there's some General issues that should be fixed. I think that offset 166 fits way better for the first red line and 552 for the second red line. (I didn't fix it while modding it, so check my points first!)
  2. There's so tags conflicts between you diffs, which means you didn't put the exact same tags in all your diffs.
  3. For some reason your hard diff has more red lines than other diffs..
  4. 01:27:341 (1) - Make the spinner on all diffs finish on 01:28:792 - sounds more accurate

[Insane]
  1. Try to avoid as much as possible (except if the music calls for it) to put sliders on red ticks, they're not really catchy. I put a few examples.
  2. 00:09:824 (7) - The break feels a bit random, there's still the same music you were mapping going on, yet you decide to suddenly stop mapping it (there's even the kiai still on!) Try to keep going until 00:11:372 -
  3. 00:12:533 - I'd add a note here. You're following the vocal I understand it but it might be a bit confusing as there's a beat just before you didn't map!
  4. 00:14:276 (2) - Be careful, the reverse is hidden, which is unrankable! You can do this though http://puu.sh/nydh9/4ec6d90a54.jpg I Ctrl+G this slider to improve the flow. See if you like or not, up to you change this as well or not :P Just if you do, put 00:14:856 (3) - farther!
  5. 00:17:373 (7) - This slider is hiding the stronger beat of you pattern (which is right at the middle of it. Try this rhythme: http://puu.sh/nydp2/6245910d7d.jpg
  6. 00:16:599 (5) - Same. The stronger beat (as well as where the vocal is accentuated) is mapped at the end of you slider, which means that we're not hitting it as you put the emphasize just before. Try this http://puu.sh/nydxy/8e993da8f3.jpg This is the red tick slider problem I was talking about.
  7. 00:18:921 (6) - Same. To fix just put a circle instead of the slider, and where the slider used to finish, make a new one start instead! http://puu.sh/nydCu/95e93b1885.jpg
  8. 00:44:083 (1,2) - To make this kind of pattern looks nice, make sure you create a nice blanket. You can see if it's good via the approach rate of (1) http://puu.sh/nydI8/19813b3728.jpg
  9. 00:45:437 (1) - Would sound better if it would finish on the previous white tick, in a way that the rythme you created (most likely 1/2 or 1/1) stays constant!
  10. 00:50:082 (8) - Add a note or a reverse on the previous slider, there's beat+vocal here
  11. 01:05:566 (1) - Finish instead? Seems it's the end of that triple section!
  12. 01:16:599 (3,4) - Spacing might be a bit confusing here!
  13. 01:19:501 (7,8) - Switch them in the timeline! (and put normal samplet set on the slider) it will be way more catchy!
  14. 01:25:889 (2) - I wouldn't reduce volume as you did, it's the stronger part!!

Patterns are pretty cool, they're not too messy imo which is pretty great actually. Some flow problem but nothing that bad. I think you gotta focus on those sliders on red ticks, they usually don't sound good and plays weird, I just pointed them a few out there's more left!
[Hard]
  1. 00:20:276 (2,3) - You can improve blanket (the thing I was talking about with the AR on insane: http://puu.sh/nyehj/0cb477d41d.jpg
  2. 00:24:340 (1) - The end should be hittable~
  3. 01:00:921 (1) - Idea is really good, I would remove the reverse and make the slider start here instead 01:02:469 - but it's a pretty good idea anyway!
  4. 01:22:985 (2,3,4,5) - Your square doesn't look really neat. You can automatically create some : Compose -> Create polygon circles.

Gotta fix the sliders on this diff as well if you also think it sounds better the way I recommend!
[Normal]
I didn't check your normal in detail but you have to always respect Distance Snap in this difficulty level as well as "easy" (Hard is recommended too, but you're free).

That's it. It's pretty good overall to be honest! Just those timing issues with your sliders..!

Don't forget to give kudosu if you think that was helpful! If you have any question mapping/modding related, feel free to contact me IG!

teko8 wrote:

Hey! Back again to look at edits.

All difficulties:

Hitsounding: There are good hitsounding patterns on all difficulties, but are not maintained throughout the map/randomly change. Should try to make them consistent (e.g. clap,clap,clap on triples in Insane difficulty).
Ending: Ending spinner needs to be time snapped to 1/6 imo at 01:27:437 - . Spinner should have a soft ending to fit the song's fadeout effect (change audio sample through timing setup window to soft for very last inherited point).
01:27:340 - Snap this timing point to 01:27:437 - .

Normal:

00:52:792 (9) - This slider is way longer than the other sliders in this section. Should shorten by quite a bit (imo, ending at 00:53:179 - and filling the gap that's left with another combo).


Hard:

00:25:308 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Feel like this combo drags on for too long. Try to add an NC at some point (I'll leave that to you to decide ;) )
00:36:437 (9) - Create NC here.
00:37:501 (1) - This sounds like it occurs 3 ticks too early. Move to 00:37:695 - , remove 00:37:888 (2) - and add a beat at 00:38:082 - .
01:06:533 (1) - Remove NC here so that the combo starts on 01:06:146 (1) - .


Insane:

00:00:534 (2) - Create NC here.
00:01:308 (1) - Remove NC here. Make it part of the previous combo.
00:18:921 (6) - Create NC here.
00:20:663 (12) - Create NC here and place ontop of start of 00:20:857 (13) - or create spacing between them. Currently, coming from the previous jumps right before it, it doesn't flow well.
00:32:083 (1,2) - Only time a stack occurs in this section. Could make into another small jump similar to the other jumps before and after it.
00:39:824 (1) - Remove NC here.
00:45:437 (1) - Remove NC here.
01:02:856 (2) - Create NC here. Now that the slider doesn't repeat, the player needs to be able to survive the drain more easily by hitting the slider as a combo instead of the entire combo after the slider.
Insane:

00:00:147 (1) - Remove this beat(?). As it stands it seems like an extra hit which could just be used as a lead-in into the song (remove, test, and consider).
00:42:147 (1) - Remove NC here. Make it part of the previous combo.
00:43:115 (4) - Remove repeat and place a beat at 00:43:695 - under the slider end and another beat at 00:43:888 - some distance away. Maintain spacing for the combo.

Overall, it's a huge step up from before. Just gotta work with NC points and hitsounding. Get some more mods to check it for you and you should be good to go. :)
Thanks for the encouraging and helpful feedback guys :)
will work on it now 8-)
Zyl
Random and Usless Normal Diff mod :3

[Song Setup]
-Approach Rate: 6 You wanna kill they?, xDD use this faq for a little guide of your map https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Normal
-Countdown: this is optional but this was very used in old maps but now isnt use it, consider remove it
[Timing]
Offset: 00:00:534 (1) - the real offset goes there, in front of that object theres no sound
00:00:534 (1) - Why a kiai time there? i reccomend erase this
00:34:211 (1) - Previem point here
[Design]
Wallpaper: Use this Wallpaper http://puu.sh/nzZMh/50dfd29125.jpg Every wallpaper you use MUST BE in a resolution of 1366 x 768 ;)
OSB: ok you dont have any Storyboarding so copy and paste this in the OSB file:
[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
[Compose]
-Your map have SO MUCH Overlapping heres is and example:
http://puu.sh/nA0BU/04bf30cbb6.png
Don't crash anything

http://puu.sh/nA0Ft/b92cc67754.png : Everytime you see this beat, START A NOTE AND DONT END A NOTE THERE IS A RULE DON'T END SLIDERS THERE

Theres a lot of overlapping, i won't put all of them, only if you want
read this faqs: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Mapping_Techniques
i think you MUST use blankets,Pattern matic section,stars and few more
01:27:437 (1) - Is too short for a Normal
SrBolinho
Amei o beatmap <33 Parabéns C:
Topic Starter
TouchxMe

SrBolinho wrote:

Amei o beatmap <33 Parabéns C:
I had to use google translate. :) Thanks for the compliment! :D
Underdogs
#modreqs bubble call o/

[Normal]

First of all, Normal should always have Distance Snap on.



This ain't right. Most modders will point out the distance snap at first

00:02:082 (2) - I don't know about this kind of slider. It's not right, but not wrong at the same time

00:15:631 (1) - This has an overlap (Overlap means you stacked a circle/slider on a beat that is a red tick/white tick earlier) Relocate this one should make it look smoother

00:20:856 (4) - I suggest a zig-zag pattern to make it appealing

00:26:083 (4) - This one doesn't shape right with 00:26:857 (2) -

00:47:760 (3) - Not a good mirror. Either you drag it left and make it parallel, or drag it a bit to the right and make it vertically similar

00:49:115 (5) - This beat is a hit earlier, i suggest you put a circle and start the slider at 00:49:308

[Hard]

00:19:502 (5) - This overlap feels odd. And weird to play
01:16:405 (6) - Awkward slider as well
01:26:856 (5) - The distance did not comprehend with 01:25:695 (2,3) -

[Insane]

00:10:985 (5,7) - Doesn't look like a star from me. And these two are the main issue from you creating a perfect star.
00:14:276 (2) - This overlap is not good in Insane. I suggest you redo this
00:39:050 (5) - Same as 00:10:985 (5,7) - only that it's one circle
00:46:017 (6) - Too close. Distance them from each other

[General]

As a first beatmap. Pretty good. But you got a lot of ground to cover before you can actually map good

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
TouchxMe

Underdogs wrote:

#modreqs bubble call o/

[Normal]

First of all, Normal should always have Distance Snap on.



This ain't right. Most modders will point out the distance snap at first

00:02:082 (2) - I don't know about this kind of slider. It's not right, but not wrong at the same time

00:15:631 (1) - This has an overlap (Overlap means you stacked a circle/slider on a beat that is a red tick/white tick earlier) Relocate this one should make it look smoother

00:20:856 (4) - I suggest a zig-zag pattern to make it appealing

00:26:083 (4) - This one doesn't shape right with 00:26:857 (2) -

00:47:760 (3) - Not a good mirror. Either you drag it left and make it parallel, or drag it a bit to the right and make it vertically similar

00:49:115 (5) - This beat is a hit earlier, i suggest you put a circle and start the slider at 00:49:308

[Hard]

00:19:502 (5) - This overlap feels odd. And weird to play
01:16:405 (6) - Awkward slider as well
01:26:856 (5) - The distance did not comprehend with 01:25:695 (2,3) -

[Insane]

00:10:985 (5,7) - Doesn't look like a star from me. And these two are the main issue from you creating a perfect star.
00:14:276 (2) - This overlap is not good in Insane. I suggest you redo this
00:39:050 (5) - Same as 00:10:985 (5,7) - only that it's one circle
00:46:017 (6) - Too close. Distance them from each other

[General]

As a first beatmap. Pretty good. But you got a lot of ground to cover before you can actually map good

Good luck :)
I got a post saying the notes shouldn't overlap so I thought removing the distance snap would prevent that, I'll work on it now
thanks for the huge feedback! :D

Edit: I don't get what you mean by
"01:26:856 (5) - The distance did not comprehend with 01:25:695 (2,3) - " on [Hard]
Pentori
random mod ^_^ really enjoying this anime so far

[General]
In options you have a preferred skin set to one of your own. I suggest leaving it to user preferred unless you are going to include the skin in your beatmap

I also recommend unchecking Widescreen support and selecting some custom colours to use that suit the background

You have two red timing points. Remove the 120 BPM one. (Make sure you resnap your first note after doing this)

I just made my first map recently too and I reckon looking at other maps and copying but manipulating their styles works really well when starting out. Eventually you will have your own style! :D

Just like I did for my first map; you've mapped mostly in the centre and no where near the sides as shown by this bundle of noodles (all your notes)

Oh and also try get a louder .mp3 (If you can't find one, you can amplify it in audacity but make sure it doesn't clip.)
[Normal]
00:00:166 (1) - Move it to be in the centre of 1,2
00:01:889 (1) - Remove NC
00:02:082 (2) - Add NC
00:06:727 (6) - Blanket with 5
00:07:115 (1) - This is really awkward, either move it away from 2 or change it. Also get rid of the finish on it
00:24:533 (5,6,7) - Spread these out (unstacked)
00:31:114 (4) - Stack this on the end of 2
01:06:727 (5) - Add NC
01:06:921 (1) - Remove NC
01:07:695 (3,4) - 1 and 1/2 beats between these notes. Very hard to land to normal players. Add another not on white tick and use slider
01:12:146 (2) - Move this out from underneath 01:09:824 (1)

[Hard]
Change HP to 5
00:01:308 (3) - Add NC
00:01:502 (1) - Remove NC
00:01:889 (1) - The sliders 2,3 are symmetrical but this one isn't. Either change this slider or make it symmetrical
00:01:889 (1) - Remove NC
00:02:276 (2) - Add NC
00:03:050 (1) - Remove NC
00:14:082 (3,4,5,6) - Make a perfect triangle with 3,4,5 and stack 6 on 3 (I know this removes your blanket)
00:13:308 (2,1) - You can blanket these if you still want to blanket something
00:13:889 (1) - Remove NC
00:14:082 (3) - Add NC
00:16:986 (1) - Remove NC
00:19:888 (6) - Add NC
00:20:083 (1) - Remove NC
00:27:824 (1) - Remove NC
00:28:404 (2) - Add NC
00:29:566 (5) - Add NC
00:30:146 (1) - Remove NC (Honestly going to stop here with the New Combo edits, you can do them yourself :), check all combos to make sure that they begin on white ticks unless your mapping rhythm is on red ticks for a section then its fine to have it on red ticks like at 00:04:986 (1).)
00:37:017 (7,8) - Make this stream closer to the slider so that the DS is the same. Also change it so the stream curves into the slider (you may need to rotate the slider)
00:39:050 (2) - Mate don't be lazy you can do better than that
00:49:114 (6) - I would much rather a stream here but I guess this works
00:54:727 (7) - Now this one DOESN'T work. Singer says su-gi-te which is 3 beats yet you have 6 beats. Either increase size to fit 3 or change it
01:02:469 (1) - Make this perfectly symmetrical. Circles only need 3 points, look up how to do one
01:19:308 (2,3) - Spacing issue

[Insane]
Fix up NC issues
Set OD 8
Set CS 4
00:04:018 (3,4) - Slider should begin at 3 to 4 not start at 4
00:04:599 (1,3) - These two should be the same slider just CTRL + H + J
00:28:986 (6,1) - Stack 1 on 6
00:30:533 (7,1) - Stack 7 on the end of 1
00:39:727 (6,7) - Check what I wrote at 00:37:017 (7,8) for Hard diff
00:44:082 (1,2) - Move 1 away so it doesn't look like a failed blanket or just blanket it
01:00:921 (1) - Check what I wrote at 01:02:469 (1) for Hard diff
01:06:534 (1,2,3,4) - Blanket this
01:17:566 (2) - Stack this with 01:18:341 (1)
01:18:921 (4) - Stack with 01:20:082 (8)
Topic Starter
TouchxMe

Pentori wrote:

random mod ^_^ really enjoying this anime so far

[General]
In options you have a preferred skin set to one of your own. I suggest leaving it to user preferred unless you are going to include the skin in your beatmap

I also recommend unchecking Widescreen support and selecting some custom colours to use that suit the background

You have two red timing points. Remove the 120 BPM one. (Make sure you resnap your first note after doing this)

I just made my first map recently too and I reckon looking at other maps and copying but manipulating their styles works really well when starting out. Eventually you will have your own style! :D

Just like I did for my first map; you've mapped mostly in the centre and no where near the sides as shown by this bundle of noodles (all your notes)

Oh and also try get a louder .mp3 (If you can't find one, you can amplify it in audacity but make sure it doesn't clip.)
[Normal]
00:00:166 (1) - Move it to be in the centre of 1,2
00:01:889 (1) - Remove NC
00:02:082 (2) - Add NC
00:06:727 (6) - Blanket with 5
00:07:115 (1) - This is really awkward, either move it away from 2 or change it. Also get rid of the finish on it
00:24:533 (5,6,7) - Spread these out (unstacked)
00:31:114 (4) - Stack this on the end of 2
01:06:727 (5) - Add NC
01:06:921 (1) - Remove NC
01:07:695 (3,4) - 1 and 1/2 beats between these notes. Very hard to land to normal players. Add another not on white tick and use slider
01:12:146 (2) - Move this out from underneath 01:09:824 (1)

[Hard]
Change HP to 5
00:01:308 (3) - Add NC
00:01:502 (1) - Remove NC
00:01:889 (1) - The sliders 2,3 are symmetrical but this one isn't. Either change this slider or make it symmetrical
00:01:889 (1) - Remove NC
00:02:276 (2) - Add NC
00:03:050 (1) - Remove NC
00:14:082 (3,4,5,6) - Make a perfect triangle with 3,4,5 and stack 6 on 3 (I know this removes your blanket)
00:13:308 (2,1) - You can blanket these if you still want to blanket something
00:13:889 (1) - Remove NC
00:14:082 (3) - Add NC
00:16:986 (1) - Remove NC
00:19:888 (6) - Add NC
00:20:083 (1) - Remove NC
00:27:824 (1) - Remove NC
00:28:404 (2) - Add NC
00:29:566 (5) - Add NC
00:30:146 (1) - Remove NC (Honestly going to stop here with the New Combo edits, you can do them yourself :), check all combos to make sure that they begin on white ticks unless your mapping rhythm is on red ticks for a section then its fine to have it on red ticks like at 00:04:986 (1).)
00:37:017 (7,8) - Make this stream closer to the slider so that the DS is the same. Also change it so the stream curves into the slider (you may need to rotate the slider)
00:39:050 (2) - Mate don't be lazy you can do better than that
00:49:114 (6) - I would much rather a stream here but I guess this works
00:54:727 (7) - Now this one DOESN'T work. Singer says su-gi-te which is 3 beats yet you have 6 beats. Either increase size to fit 3 or change it
01:02:469 (1) - Make this perfectly symmetrical. Circles only need 3 points, look up how to do one
01:19:308 (2,3) - Spacing issue

[Insane]
Fix up NC issues
Set OD 8
Set CS 4
00:04:018 (3,4) - Slider should begin at 3 to 4 not start at 4
00:04:599 (1,3) - These two should be the same slider just CTRL + H + J
00:28:986 (6,1) - Stack 1 on 6
00:30:533 (7,1) - Stack 7 on the end of 1
00:39:727 (6,7) - Check what I wrote at 00:37:017 (7,8) for Hard diff
00:44:082 (1,2) - Move 1 away so it doesn't look like a failed blanket or just blanket it
01:00:921 (1) - Check what I wrote at 01:02:469 (1) for Hard diff
01:06:534 (1,2,3,4) - Blanket this
01:17:566 (2) - Stack this with 01:18:341 (1)
01:18:921 (4) - Stack with 01:20:082 (8)
Wow thanks alot for the huge modding, LOL at the bundle of noodles XD
Will work on it now
Xinying
Oh my a fellow singaporean mapper! And Erased opening!! <3 btw don't kudosu this post.

So you need advice as a new mapper from #modreq , I think the best one I can give you is not by pointing out your mistakes , but let you point them out yourself.

Also , please take a look at Kibbleru's advice for new mappers (all creds to him)

Kibbleru wrote:

  1. If you're new and want to start out mapping, but have no idea what to do, you can follow these 3 main steps.
  2. First of all, learn the basics to mapping. What i mean is like timing your map, putting hitobjects, beatsnap divisor, etc. Just basically getting used to all the tools in editor. there are some videos on youtube that can help you get started. There is also a sub-forum that contains tons of guides which you can also ask questions there. link. Or you can check out Garven's userpage which i think has some useful tips. After you think you're comfortable with your knowledge of mapping, you can start out to creating your first beatmap! Do not expect to get it ranked without a few remaps.
  3. After you've made your first beatmap, your next step is to finds mods for it. Mods will basically tell you what you are doing wrong, further expanding your knowledge of mapping. Now you're asking yourself; "how on earth do find mods?". Well personally i would recommend you checking out the modding queues sub-forum. Be sure to read the queue's rules and only post when the modding queue is open. But unless you're some kind of ninja, the chances of getting a slot for NM (Normal Mod) is quite low as people will swarm them in less than 10 minutes. Luckily, there are almost always M4M (Mod for Mod) queues open at all times. Where quite literally, you mod their map and they mod yours. This is the most beneficial for you. Not only do you get to practice your own modding, you also get to learn off analyzing other people's maps, and study their patterns. Not to mention how you get a mod for your own mapset too!. This process should take up to months, but after that, you should have a good enough understanding of mapping to make rankable maps, and, hopefully by the end of this you would have your first ranked map!
  4. The last step is to refine your knowledge of mapping into your own style. Usually this step comes when you find out that no matter what you do, you yourself do not like your own mapping. That is good because that means you are trying to improve. Hopefully by now you've found yourself a mapper that you absolutely look up to. The mapper who inspires you to map. Or maybe even just some maps you really really like. Now what you do is just spend periods studying their maps, and try to copy their patterns and styles. You will know that you have gotten past this stage once you realize that you no longer hate your own maps.
  5. Congratulations, you have now came from a complete beginner to a unique mapper with your own unique style. Note that step 3 may happen more than once, but that is just you trying to improve your own mapping! From now on what you should to is focus on expressing the song further and better than you have ever before. Every new map should be better than the old one.
    To all you mappers; Good luck, and don't forget to have fun.

Well , it's long but it really helps! And of course anything you're unsure of just forum pm or ask me in game. Have fun :D/
Topic Starter
TouchxMe

Chocox wrote:

Oh my a fellow singaporean mapper! And Erased opening!! <3 btw don't kudosu this post.

So you need advice as a new mapper from #modreq , I think the best one I can give you is not by pointing out your mistakes , but let you point them out yourself.

Also , please take a look at Kibbleru's advice for new mappers (all creds to him)

Kibbleru wrote:

  1. If you're new and want to start out mapping, but have no idea what to do, you can follow these 3 main steps.
  2. First of all, learn the basics to mapping. What i mean is like timing your map, putting hitobjects, beatsnap divisor, etc. Just basically getting used to all the tools in editor. there are some videos on youtube that can help you get started. There is also a sub-forum that contains tons of guides which you can also ask questions there. link. Or you can check out Garven's userpage which i think has some useful tips. After you think you're comfortable with your knowledge of mapping, you can start out to creating your first beatmap! Do not expect to get it ranked without a few remaps.
  3. After you've made your first beatmap, your next step is to finds mods for it. Mods will basically tell you what you are doing wrong, further expanding your knowledge of mapping. Now you're asking yourself; "how on earth do find mods?". Well personally i would recommend you checking out the modding queues sub-forum. Be sure to read the queue's rules and only post when the modding queue is open. But unless you're some kind of ninja, the chances of getting a slot for NM (Normal Mod) is quite low as people will swarm them in less than 10 minutes. Luckily, there are almost always M4M (Mod for Mod) queues open at all times. Where quite literally, you mod their map and they mod yours. This is the most beneficial for you. Not only do you get to practice your own modding, you also get to learn off analyzing other people's maps, and study their patterns. Not to mention how you get a mod for your own mapset too!. This process should take up to months, but after that, you should have a good enough understanding of mapping to make rankable maps, and, hopefully by the end of this you would have your first ranked map!
  4. The last step is to refine your knowledge of mapping into your own style. Usually this step comes when you find out that no matter what you do, you yourself do not like your own mapping. That is good because that means you are trying to improve. Hopefully by now you've found yourself a mapper that you absolutely look up to. The mapper who inspires you to map. Or maybe even just some maps you really really like. Now what you do is just spend periods studying their maps, and try to copy their patterns and styles. You will know that you have gotten past this stage once you realize that you no longer hate your own maps.
  5. Congratulations, you have now came from a complete beginner to a unique mapper with your own unique style. Note that step 3 may happen more than once, but that is just you trying to improve your own mapping! From now on what you should to is focus on expressing the song further and better than you have ever before. Every new map should be better than the old one.
    To all you mappers; Good luck, and don't forget to have fun.

Well , it's long but it really helps! And of course anything you're unsure of just forum pm or ask me in game. Have fun :D/
Thanks for the advice feedback :D
Will try it out ;)
Noya
Hey from #modreqs

Normal -

00:09:824 (4,1) - The space between these two would be better as a spinner and not a small break.
00:14:470 (4) - This would flow better if it was flipped horizontally, rotated 90 degrees clockwise and made a bit straighter.
00:27:630 (5) - NC
00:29:954 (2,3,4) - This could be confusing for newer players.
00:36:534 (1,2,1) - Change the placing of the sliders or the start of the combo, this area seems a bit clustered.
00:53:953 (5) - NC
00:56:857 (3,4,5,6) - This part is pretty clustered + hard to read for a 2 star.
01:09:050 (6,1) - Move 6 to avoid overlapping with the next slider.
01:13:308 (5) - NC
01:19:114 (5) - NC

Hard -

00:05:760 (5) - Make this outward instead of inward.
00:09:824 (4) - NC
00:09:437 (3,4,5,6) - This sequence of beats is confusing.
00:14:082 (1,4) - I would make this inline with 00:14:469 (3,5) -
00:22:792 (6) - Make outward.
00:37:114 (8) - Move up so it flows better with the stream.
00:53:759 (4,5) - This is confusing to read.
00:49:211 (6) - You could make this a short stream instead of a repeat slider.

Insane -

00:20:857 (2) - I don't think this should repeat a 3rd time.
00:36:146 (1,2,3,4) - Could make this a stream instead of repeat sliders.
00:52:018 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Difficult to read.
See General for the rest of this.

General -

I don't really see the need for 3 kiai sections. I would just keep the 2nd one you have and get rid of the 1st and 3rd since they really aren't the "climax" of the song.
The patterns you're using (especially in the insane difficulty) tend to seem a bit random and inconsistent. In parts where the beat is the same or similar don't be afraid to reuse the same patterns, but just change up the note placements and stuff. You can reuse the same patterns without being repetitive. Some of the jumps also seem randomly placed as well, which can be fixed by modifying the placements manually choosing the coordinates. The star jumps you have aren't bad though. Some more consistency and closer attention to the placement of your jumps would do this map justice. Best of luck! :D
Topic Starter
TouchxMe

[ Mine ] wrote:

Hey from #modreqs

Normal -

00:09:824 (4,1) - The space between these two would be better as a spinner and not a small break.
00:14:470 (4) - This would flow better if it was flipped horizontally, rotated 90 degrees clockwise and made a bit straighter.
00:27:630 (5) - NC
00:29:954 (2,3,4) - This could be confusing for newer players.
00:36:534 (1,2,1) - Change the placing of the sliders or the start of the combo, this area seems a bit clustered.
00:53:953 (5) - NC
00:56:857 (3,4,5,6) - This part is pretty clustered + hard to read for a 2 star.
01:09:050 (6,1) - Move 6 to avoid overlapping with the next slider.
01:13:308 (5) - NC
01:19:114 (5) - NC

Hard -

00:05:760 (5) - Make this outward instead of inward.
00:09:824 (4) - NC
00:09:437 (3,4,5,6) - This sequence of beats is confusing.
00:14:082 (1,4) - I would make this inline with 00:14:469 (3,5) -
00:22:792 (6) - Make outward.
00:37:114 (8) - Move up so it flows better with the stream.
00:53:759 (4,5) - This is confusing to read.
00:49:211 (6) - You could make this a short stream instead of a repeat slider.

Insane -

00:20:857 (2) - I don't think this should repeat a 3rd time.
00:36:146 (1,2,3,4) - Could make this a stream instead of repeat sliders.
00:52:018 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Difficult to read.
See General for the rest of this.

General -

I don't really see the need for 3 kiai sections. I would just keep the 2nd one you have and get rid of the 1st and 3rd since they really aren't the "climax" of the song.
The patterns you're using (especially in the insane difficulty) tend to seem a bit random and inconsistent. In parts where the beat is the same or similar don't be afraid to reuse the same patterns, but just change up the note placements and stuff. You can reuse the same patterns without being repetitive. Some of the jumps also seem randomly placed as well, which can be fixed by modifying the placements manually choosing the coordinates. The star jumps you have aren't bad though. Some more consistency and closer attention to the placement of your jumps would do this map justice. Best of luck! :D
Thanks for the mod and feedback :D
Will work on it now :)
Topic Starter
TouchxMe
Updated :D

[ Mine ] wrote:

Hard -

00:05:760 (5) - Make this outward instead of inward.
00:22:792 (6) - Make outward.
I decided to put it inward for a different movement instead of it being the same throughout

[ Mine ] wrote:

Hard -
00:09:437 (3,4,5,6) - This sequence of beats is confusing.
Can you elaborate? :D I'm not sure why it is confusing.
Noya

TouchxMe wrote:

Updated :D

[ Mine ] wrote:

Hard -

00:05:760 (5) - Make this outward instead of inward.
00:22:792 (6) - Make outward.
I decided to put it inward for a different movement instead of it being the same throughout

[ Mine ] wrote:

Hard -
00:09:437 (3,4,5,6) - This sequence of beats is confusing.
Can you elaborate? :D I'm not sure why it is confusing.
The distance from the end of 00:09:437 (3) - 00:09:824 (4) - is somewhat large/it doesn't make sense to me why 4 wouldn't follow the end of 3. It's not exactly a bad thing I guess and if you wanted to keep it, I would just recommend making 4 the start of a new combo :)
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