1. God (4.79 stars, 132 notes)
2. Mortal (3.43 stars, 75 notes)
3. Poor Soul (1.3 stars, 55 notes)

Lightgazer wrote:

Hey

I dont have much experience so dont expect much

[General]

Tags are: game music indie instrumental vgm Oregon Thanks!
Maybe u should add a easy or normal cuz its only 00:59 short Mortal is a normal and is easy enough.
hm 135.02 BPM maybe? BPM sounds fine, chiptunes typically have solid BPMs.
Use AIMod in Mortal It doesn't point out any extreme problems...

[Mortal]

00:03:555 move this slider 4 grid down Done.

[God]

00:31:111->00:31:999 hard to see the notes cuz of the skins I think they're fine, can't do much about it anyway.

thats all what I can say i guess
nice map
and good luck with it

theMikeAG wrote:

This song reminds me of Moon Song from Cave Story. Simple, but awesome. I have to say the same thing about this beatmap. Simple, but awesome.

My biggest suggestion is that you create a third difficulty to mediate between Mortal and God. Maybe something like Demi-God or Angel. Mortal would be a great Normal, except for that one segment that is simply too complicated. I think you should cut that segment
00:24:888(1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) out of Mortal and incorperate it into a new difficulty. Yes, I suppose. I'll see what I can do.

Now for the regular modding.
Mortal: 00:40:444 (5) - This slider is 1/4 too short. It doesn't match up with the sliders at 00:43:999 (5), 00:47:555 (5), and 00:51:111 (5). oh man, good catch. I didn't notice that.

God: 00:58:666 (1,2,3,4,1) - You're using the same pattern here as in Mortal. This seems kind of unsuitable for this difficulty. You might want use some quick sliders or streaming to match with the rest of the map. Interesting observation. At first, I could only hear those 5 clicks, but when I listen to it gain I hear more, and could probably do a stream with the entire thing to go with the difficulty, which is meant to be crazy insane as a whole. EDIT: Oh, hey, that upped the star difficulty to 5.

That's all I can find. This beatmap seems really cool. I really like the way you're going with it. Starred. Thanks!

Arusha Shuna wrote:

Request Accepted

General
-hhhhh slider HHHHHH
-you need an easier diff
Mortal
00:01:333 (3) - pull the 3rd anchor point a little to the right so they'll look better
00:11:333 (2) - make this slider smoother
00:28:555 (1) - lengthen this spinner by 1/4 beat
00:33:333 (5) - stack with (4)'s slider end

THEM SLIDERS
star

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi! Here's my mod >w<

General;
- Short song, nice >w< but ends too sudden I think ...
- Remove countdown from all diff ...Huh. I didn't know I did this...
- Tags >> Remove game music instrumental, when this gets ranked BAT is going to put it in this category most likely so no need for these tags ~~ Done.

SB;
- Good ~~

Poor Soul;
- 00:00:000 (1,2,3) >> Make a pattern like this ?? and continue with a the pattern I show below the first image ??
- 00:17:777 (1~1) >> Too close, confused me Fixed.
- 00:21:777 >> Kind of ugly ... Made it look a little less butt ugly.
- 00:31:555 >> Kiai time ends here Fixed all the Kaia time stuff.
- 00:58:666 >> 2nd Kiai time starts here and ends at 00:59:555
- After the spinner the notes are too close and is too confusing, this is bad because this diff is supposed to be the easiest and yet I had trouble reading the notes ;w; Yeah, I need to work on that. Dare I say I should up the spacing a tad, to x1.0, in that section.
This is a new difficulty, by the way, the other difficulties had about a few days of work put into them, this was made in about an hour, so yeah, I'm going to work on it a lot. I might try revising that section entirely, it's probably too hard for Easy in the first place so I might just use a different formula. Should be better.

Mortal;
- 00:31:777 >> Kiai ends here
- 00:58:666 >> 2nd Kiai time starts here and ends at 00:59:555
- Good diff, some sliders overlap eachother sometimes but that's fine

God;
- 00:14:222 >> You can curve this better Alright.
- 00:31:777 >> Kiai ends here
- 00:58:666 >> 2nd Kiai time starts here and ends at 00:59:555
- Good diff, good ~~

* Star & Good Luck !! >w< Thanks!

- 00:00:000 (1,2,3) >> Make a pattern like this ?? and continue with a the pattern I show below the first image ??

SPOILER

lovhin456 wrote:

Silly me !! I forgot to put the example of this

- 00:00:000 (1,2,3) >> Make a pattern like this ?? and continue with a the pattern I show below the first image ??

Here it is, maybe it'll help you;

SPOILER

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* No kudosu >w< I was just silly and forgot ~~

Blue Dragon wrote:

GODDAMMIT I WANTED TO MAP THAT SO MUCH ;____;

Oh well, I think I should map a Tower of Heaven medley D:

Star for awesome map + song <3

Blue Dragon wrote:

Oh man I have to ask it. WHERE DID YOU GET THOSE IMAGES FROM THE SB? ;_;

I spent 3.5 hours rendering everything from the game but it actually failed since some things are too complicated...

Dusty wrote:

[Easy]
00:54:444 (2) - It's hard to tell that this is only 1/2 beat later than (1) because the spacing is so low on this diff Done.
Also, the sliders are way too slow for me, especially in the non-Kiai section. That's based a bit more on your preference. It's obviously meant to be very easy.

[Normal]
00:31:259 (2,1) - This is kinda mean, IMO Alright. It's now one less repeat.

[Hard]
00:55:111 (4) - Is the slider supposed to end on the blue tick? It was not. Fixed.

Weezy wrote:

General
I don't agree with some of your slider choices throughout the map. Most are just ugly and random

Besides that I couldn't find any other problems
Nice map

Vass_Bass wrote:

hi~

General
The bitrate of MP3 should be not over CBR 192kbps, yours is 320kbps. Please change it. I have never heard this anywhere else and I'm not going to bother with it unless it's crucial to ranking.

Poor Soul
00:19:333 (2) - do it simmetrical Done, I think?
00:33:333 (3) 00:36:889 (3).... - bad idea using 0.5 speed in easy Fixed.
00:54:666 (2,3) - move it on a white lines (timing) What?
strange diff, it's mean nothing i think, delete that 0.5 timing sections

Mortal
00:40:444 (5) - 2 grids up Done.
00:53:333 (1) - move it to the end of the previous slider Done.

God
00:09:333 (1) - spacing Done.

Strange, but star

wmfchris wrote:

SB - use the same cloud.jpg is good enough, no need to use 8 pics. Eurgh, I don't want to slug through the storyboard again unless you can tell me how to replace the images with the same image without having to redo it all. They don't cost that much kb anyway and I know other storyboard that did the same thing, so I don't exactly want to bother.

[God]
0:01:111 (5) right+up 1 grid Done.
0:02:222 (1~9) nice pattern but tro to make it softer? Softer as in? Hitsounds?
0:14:777 (5) left 1 grid + down 2 grids Done.
0:23:555 (2~7) use 3/4 slider instead of 1/2 slider + note Done.

[Mortal]
0:00:000 (1,2,3) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/44027 ? Done.

I like this old mapping style xD I don't know what you mean but alright.

starrrrrrr