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namesi like how you have a difficulty indicator for 4 diffs but for the rest you somehow forgot to put anything
also Battle Begins, mind your SVA
wew 4 minutes
to all diffs: 03:19:601 (199601|3) - seems like this is a 1/12 not a 1/16
please confirm, im not too sure
ur diff
00:04:107 (4107|2,4107|0,4253|1,4253|3,4399|2,4399|0) - maybe you could try varying the patterns here a bit? maybe flip this thing or smth
00:04:838 (4838|0,4838|3,4838|2,4985|2,4985|0,4985|3) - these two are pretty instantaneous, whilst 00:05:131 (5131|3,5131|0,5131|2) - is a more drawn out crash. id suggest 00:04:838 (4838|3,4838|0,4838|2,4985|3,4985|2,4985|0) - to be doubles on one hand and the last one be a triple
00:04:692 (4692|1) - r u sure this is following something, cuz i wouldnt take the end of a pull synth to be worthy of a note
00:05:716 (5716|2) - move to 4
00:05:863 (5863|0,6009|2) - crtl-g to show continuity with pattern before
00:06:302 (6302|1,6448|2) - crtl-g
if you did everything above you should see something forming.
notice how those highlighted notes stack each other? yeah do that for this section, there are inconsistencies evrywhr. better to have to get to your feet and think about stuff than to have me keep "crtl-g "ng and "move to 4 "ing
00:09:814 - 00:10:107 - thr are synths here why miss them out
00:12:155 - theres still synths
00:12:302 - and above - understandable if you decide not to follow the synth here doe
00:13:473 (13473|0,13473|1,13473|3,13619|0,13619|3,13619|1,13765|0,13765|1,13765|3,13912|3,13912|2,13912|0) - maybe me but these look better if you were to jumble up their positions tbh
00:13:985 (13985|1) - theres no bass beat here
00:14:643 (14643|0,14936|3,15229|1,15521|3,15668|0,15960|2,16253|0,16399|3,16692|1) - the notes are fine, i have issue with the LNs doe. i tried thinking that they were following the vocals but nope 00:14:936 (14936|3) - proved me wrong becuz of the shift at 00:15:082 _ 00:15:521 (15521|3,15668|0) - are actually one long vocal line, 00:15:960 (15960|2,16253|0) - are also one long vocal line, so on so forth. im sure you know what to do here, please change this
00:22:253 (22253|1,23424|3) - nice one
00:24:448 (24448|2,24594|2) - remember what i said about consistency? yeah please do that for this section too
00:30:741 (30741|2,30887|2,31034|2,31180|2) - please why do this
00:32:643 (32643|2) - double
00:32:936 (32936|2,32936|3,32936|0,33082|3,33082|2,33082|0,33229|3,33229|0,33229|2) - no like seriously doe i think jumbling them up looks nicer
00:34:546 - 00:34:847 - oh so youre not following vocals then
00:33:668 (33668|3,33668|2) - then whats this
00:34:253 (34253|0,34253|1,34399|3,34399|2) - really weird design choice to have these two doubles not stack each other in anyway; like even the bass beats and the synth sound alike why not have them stack
00:35:131 (35131|0,35131|2,35277|3,35277|1) - same as above, this time only being the bass beats
00:36:594 (36594|1,36594|2,36741|1,36741|0) - later on you stack these. why so inconsistent?
00:34:546 - 00:36:009 - 00:36:887 - 00:37:912 - 00:38:351 - 00:39:229 - 00:40:838 - 00:41:716 - id rather you at least have a note here, theres like a shhh synth sound that goes on for 4 1/2 ticks throughout this section, example 00:34:253 (34253|1,34253|0,34399|3,34399|2,34692|1,34692|0,34692|2). without the notes this section just feels hollow in a sense, since youre mainly just layering to the bass and claps
00:56:351 (56351|3,56497|3,56643|3,56790|3) - remember i was talking about being consistent? yeah do this for the chorus too
00:56:643 (56643|2,56643|3,56643|0) - r u sure you want this to be a triple
00:56:936 - hi hat sound is present here so note here plis
00:59:570 (59570|1,59716|3) - crtl-g, remember before you had stacks right after the triples? 00:57:668 (57668|2,57668|0,57668|1,57814|2) - 00:58:253 (58253|2,58253|3,58253|1,58399|1) - 00:58:838 (58838|2,58838|0,58838|1,58985|2) -
00:57:082 (57082|2,57082|0,57082|3,57229|1) - same thing too
01:00:887 (60887|2,60887|3,61034|0,61034|1,61180|3,61180|2) - arent these supposed to be triples
01:09:741 (69741|1,69814|0,69887|2,69960|1,70034|3,70107|1,70180|2,70253|0,70326|1,70399|3) - looks so disconnected omg try to have the notes at least be related somehow
01:10:985 - 01:11:277 - 01:12:448 - why ignore these drum beats
01:11:863 - 01:13:034 - 01:14:204 - what happened to these crashes
01:14:936 (74936|1) - why is this a note you arent following the hihats here are you
01:15:521 (75521|3,75521|1,75668|2,75814|3,75814|1,75960|2,76107|1,76107|3,76253|2,76399|1,76399|3,76546|2) - you have no idea how mindblocky this pattern is for me i hate you so much
01:18:155 (78155|2,78302|2,78448|2,78594|2) - im sure you know how imbalanced this is.
01:19:985 (79985|1) - no drum/hihat delete plis
01:20:351 (80351|2,80497|2,80497|1,80643|2) - remember what i said about consistency? yeah ill stop reminding you
01:24:741 - 01:25:034 - 01:27:082 - theres still synths here
01:27:229 (87229|0,87229|1,87375|3,87375|2,87521|0,87521|1,87668|3,87668|2,87814|1,87814|0) - can you compare this to 00:13:473 (13473|0,13473|1,13473|3,13619|0,13619|3,13619|1,13765|0,13765|1,13765|3,13912|3,13912|2,13912|0) - and tell me whether or not this is consistent
do this for above
reason why 01:27:814 - 01:27:960 - 01:28:107 - are doubles is becuz of density; layering it to be triples like the rest wouldnt be too appropriate for the difficulty level of your chart
01:28:399 - can be a triple doe your call
reason why i started the stream at 01:28:399 - is cuz of major player thing - if a section has a more obvious drum/bass beat then ill layer to that first; if a section has clean hihats on 1/4 without anyth else id layer to that
will not speak about consistency again; sure you know what to clean up by now
01:38:643 (98643|2) - SVs are horrendous; they inhibit reading of this section. id be really mad if i played this.
01:39:668 (99668|1,99668|0,99814|1,99814|0,100107|1,100107|0,100253|0,100253|1,100546|0,100546|1,100692|0,100692|1) - pretty neat idea, but there are pitfalls:
1) they are really biased to the left hand
2) the anchors are too much
try this
notice how the highest number of stacked notes remains at 3; try to keep it that way.
01:40:838 (100838|3,100838|2) - 01:41:277 (101277|2,101277|3) - 01:42:302 (102302|2,102302|1) - triple, theres a snare (i noticed ive been saying clap oops)
01:43:619 (103619|0,103619|1) - this one has a snare and a crash
01:43:765 (103765|2,103765|1,103765|3,103912|0,103912|1) - lmao this is a mistake is it
01:48:229 (108229|2) - double, there still a snare
01:47:716 (107716|3,107716|0,107790|1,107790|2,107863|3,107863|0,107936|2,107936|1,108009|3,108009|0,108082|1,108082|2,108155|0,108155|3) - can you like have a normal jumpthrill rather than a split one esp. after all those stacks
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also please make the highlighted note a double thx
01:48:302 (108302|1,109180|3) - these are like the same pitch so what are you doing then
01:48:302 (108302|1,109180|3,110643|0,111521|2) - ^^^
01:52:985 (112985|1,113863|2) - ^^^
01:55:326 (115326|0,116204|2) - ^^
same thing about second chorus, consistency
02:11:863 - hihat here
02:24:741 - 02:24:887 - rather have these be doubles and remove 02:24:668 (144668|2,144814|1) - becuz predominant beat is bass not the synth here
02:24:668 (144668|2,144741|3,144814|1,144887|2,144960|0,145034|2,145107|1,145180|3,145253|2,145326|0) - copy paster
02:26:351 (146351|2,146351|3,146351|0) - r u sure you want this to be a triple
02:26:790 - 02:27:960 - 02:29:131 - what happened to these crashes
02:28:692 (148692|1,148692|2,148692|3) - im not sure if theres a snare here making this a triple i think not
02:29:863 (149863|2) - you werent following hihats here get this out of here
02:30:448 (150448|0,150448|2,150594|1,150741|0,150741|2,150887|1,151034|2,151034|0,151180|1,151326|2,151326|0) - copy pasting makes life easy doesnt it? ill not edit this part, just refer to the above suggestions
02:34:838 (154838|3,154912|2,154985|3) - bass beats not present
02:34:985 (154985|0,155863|3,157473|2,158058|3,158643|0) - what are these following? they seem so arbitrary and out of place, esp when you have 1/2 LN streams and shit. please consider removing them, it clears this section up and makes the LNs more bearable to play. you only have 4 columns to work with, dont limit yourself by having too many LNs
02:38:643 (158643|1) - 02:43:326 (163326|2) - LN here
02:46:692 (166692|2) - move to 4, i dont like your transition into the next section being a 3 note stack 02:46:546 (166546|2,166692|2,166838|2) -
02:49:326 (169326|1,169473|0,169619|1) - flip this, transition issues 02:49:034 (169034|1,169180|1,169326|1) -
02:51:082 (171082|1,171229|2,171375|1) - flip this, just my take but i dont like having LNs end stacking
02:53:570 (173570|0,173716|0) - sadly is this unavoidable
02:56:058 (176058|3,176204|3) - you could just ignore me if you think im being a whiny bitch about the stacks
02:58:399 (178399|1,178546|1,178692|1) - same thing
03:02:058 (182058|2,182058|0,182131|1,182131|3,182204|2,182204|0,182277|3,182277|1,182351|0,182351|2,182424|1,182424|3) - i dont like this at all, split thrills are the most mindblocky type of patterns you can ever do
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transition between the jumpthrills at 03:03:229 (183229|3) - can be a single, just cuz of variation and transition. also 03:03:229 - has a note becuz of styleeeeeee jk you can add a note there for the touche breath of air the singer takes at that moment
03:19:546 (199546|0) - absolutely non-existent
same thing as last chorus, pretty obvious by now youve been copy pasting the whole chuck over and over so im not gonna bother to redo my mod; you can check through the last part yourself
04:00:009 (240009|1,240009|0,240082|2,240155|1,240155|3,240229|0,240302|1,240302|2,240375|3,240448|0,240448|2) - rather you have these be just double stacks, same thing about dominant beat thing above
04:01:765 - theres a sound here
clocking in at 1 hour 30 minutes now
reyzra's one
i like this map; reyzra absolutely knows what hes doing
00:14:058 (14058|3,14131|2,14204|3,14277|2) - i wont really recommend this
00:14:643 - to 00:22:838 - i dont understand how you decide layer doubles/triples here, please review this section.
00:34:838 (34838|2) - i dont get why this has a note, assuming youre layering to the background shhh synth sound
00:37:912 - 00:40:838 - 00:41:716 - note here, becuz of above mentioned synth
00:59:277 - theres a faint bass beat here; not sure if you wish to follow it here
01:10:107 (70107|2,70107|0,70180|1,70180|3,70253|0,70253|2,70326|1,70326|3,70399|0,70399|2,70473|3,70473|1,70546|0,70546|2) - i thought you were better than this
01:22:253 (82253|0,82253|3,82253|2) - some LNs have doubles cuz of the snare but some others 01:20:497 (80497|2,80497|3) - dont. why doe? is it cuz of the LN before for the one i listed out?
01:27:229 (87229|0,87229|2,87229|3,87375|3,87375|0,87375|1,87521|0,87521|2,87521|3,87668|3,87668|0,87668|1) - your SVs make these more mindblocky than ever; please vary the chords
01:28:399 (88399|0,88546|0,88692|0,88838|0,88985|0,89131|0,89277|0,89424|0,89570|0) - im sure you can make better streams than this
01:29:716 - 01:32:058 - 01:34:399 - 01:36:741 - theres the electric guitar sound here
00:51:375 (51375|1,51521|2,51668|3) - you followed vocals here so why not 01:38:643 - here
01:47:716 (107716|3,107716|1,107790|0,107790|2,107863|1,107863|3,107936|2,107936|0,108009|3,108009|1) - leading into LNs? ew why?
02:11:131 (131131|1,131424|1) - 02:20:497 (140497|2,140790|2) - why arent these doubles
btw i love the variation between choruses, makes playing this 4 minute tv size much more bearable
02:25:034 (145034|3,145034|1,145107|2,145107|0,145180|1,145180|3,145253|2,145253|0,145326|1,145326|3) - no really i want to know where you got these shit thrill ideas from, if its blastix remind me to kill myself
02:29:863 - 02:30:302 - theres that synth sound here
02:33:960 (153960|1,153960|0,154034|2,154034|3,154107|0,154107|1,154180|3,154180|2) - yes thats the way
02:35:277 (155277|3,155424|1,155570|3,155716|1,155863|3,156009|1) - these dont play well, the distinction provided in the music with the snares are ignored here, and the repetitive nature of these patterns make these really mindblocky, esp when they wear on only two fingers.
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having them be in sets of 4 at least makes these much more bearable in a sense of reading. i deleted all the side notes, you probably can fill them in where theres snares. try not to have notes for every alternate LN, it makes things really dense
02:36:887 (156887|2,156887|0,157180|1,157180|3) - little justification for these to be doubles, also makes this section awkward due to the missing LN at 02:37:034 -
02:37:326 (157326|2) - if you listen carefully the synth resets at 02:37:473 -
02:37:619 (157619|0,157765|2,157912|0,158058|2) - same thing about coming in sets of 4
02:40:253 (160253|3,160399|1,160546|3,160692|2,160838|3) - are a little better, but column 4 is still too over the top. im sure you can think up with some variation
02:41:570 (161570|0,161570|2,161863|1,161863|3) - same thing as above
02:44:351 (164351|0) - the LN amplifies this awkwardness, try playing this section and youll see. tbh i really dont recommend you have the pattern continue on here, you have to remember we are playing with 4 columns, not 7. becuz of this limitation you can see here 02:46:253 (166253|1,166546|3) - that you seemingly ignored the synths at 02:46:399 - 02:46:692 - because you literally dont have enough space to spare. id suggest turning this section into a simple 1/2 stream, following the snares/crashes in the music.
02:49:034(169034|3,169180|2,169326|3,169473|1,169619|3,169765|1,169912|3,170058|1,170204|3,170351|1,170497|3,170643|1,170790|3) this is really really awkward, like even more awkward than anything. you have to hold down one finger, then have the other one keep pressing and holding down at regular intervals.
02:54:009 (174009|0,174155|1,174302|0,174448|1,174594|0,174741|1,174887|0,175034|1,175180|0,175326|1,175473|0,175619|1) - do i have to explain to you why this is awkward?
03:01:180 (181180|3,181180|2,181326|3,181326|2,181473|1,181473|0,181619|1,181619|0,181765|3,181765|2,181912|3,181912|2) - why not meld these together like
03:03:155 (183155|2) - ha starts at 03:03:229 -
03:03:155 (183155|2) - LN should really end at 03:04:398 - because thats when the singer takes in another breath
03:15:814 (195814|3,197277|0) - why not end a 1/4 tick earlier, leads into this 03:19:582 (199582|2,199619|1) - better
pretty smart move to use SVs as another way to differentiate the chorus sets from each other; although i feel as if this shouldnt be the end chorus since theyre pretty easy to hit. i wouldve made the SV chorus the second one and the second chorus the third one because of density, but yeah up to you
03:42:302 (222302|1,222302|3,222375|2,222375|0,222448|1,222448|3,222521|2,222521|0) - hahaha please dont do this im sure you can fix this by now
04:00:594 (240594|3,240668|2,240741|3,240887|3,240887|2,241034|3,241107|2,241180|3,241253|2,241326|3,241473|3,241473|2,241619|3) - same suggestion as above, just do whatever i did above but invert it
diff curve between meggumi's diff and reyzra's diff is too damn small, meggumi's diff just looks like an over inflated version of reyzra's one. id suggest not including meggumi's one for rank, unless you can show me that theres a conceivable style/chart difference between the two (excluding the SVs of course)
clocking in at 2 hours 30 minutes now
meggumi's one
dense LN play isnt my taste and style but ill try to look past it
00:33:375 (33375|1) - to 3, 00:33:521 (33521|2) - to 1, 00:33:521 (33521|3) - to 3 00:32:936 (32936|1,33082|1,33229|1,33375|1) - isnt too fun, and becuz of 00:34:253 (34253|2,34253|3,34399|2,34399|3) - pattern consistency
00:34:838 (34838|3) - to 3, im sure 00:34:692 (34692|3,34838|3,34985|3) - isnt intentional
00:37:473 (37473|2) - to 1, 00:37:619 (37619|1) - to 4, same thing as above consistency thing
wow your chorus looks almost the same as reyzra's one; just with more notes on 1/2 tick
01:09:082 (69082|2,69082|1,69229|0) - flip this, 01:09:229 (69229|0,69375|0,69521|0,69668|0) - isnt fun to have it lead into the next pattern
01:11:424 (71424|3) - theres like a pretty loud snare here you seemingly ignored
01:19:034 (79034|1,79034|0,79034|3,79180|1,79180|3,79180|2,79326|0,79326|1,79326|3,79473|1,79473|0,79473|2) - why chu ignore the bass beats here? the jumpthrill should begin here
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jumpthrill transits at 01:19:546 - because of pattern variation and becuz the word world is mentioned there so
01:28:107 (88107|3,88107|2,88180|0,88180|1,88253|2,88253|3,88326|1,88326|0) - the zzzzzz synth sound stops at 01:28:107 - so end the jumpthrill there
01:42:009 (102009|0,102009|1,102155|2,102155|1) - did pattern consistency suddenly die on you
01:42:448 (102448|2,102448|3,102594|1,102594|2) - no but seriously doe
01:42:887 (102887|2,102887|1,103034|0,103034|1) - what
01:43:326 (103326|0,103326|1,103473|2,103473|1) - happened to it
01:46:692 (106692|3,106692|2,106838|2,106838|1) - 01:47:131 (107131|2,107131|1,107277|1,107277|0) - same thing as above
00:51:375 - you didnt follow the vocals here but 02:06:302 (126302|0,126448|1,126594|2) - why here doe
02:22:107 (142107|3,142253|2) - you followed the vocals wrongly here
02:23:424 (143424|2,143424|1,143570|3,143716|3,143716|2,143716|0,143863|1,144009|2,144009|0) - what happened to the vocals here then
02:23:570 (143570|2,154107|1,154399|2,154546|3) - please dont force patterns into each other, just having 02:34:546 (154546|0,154546|1,154619|2,154692|0,154692|1,154765|2,154838|0,154838|1) - be jumpthrills should suffice.
02:37:326 (157326|0,157473|0) - you ignored the repeated synth here at 02:37:326 -
02:36:887 (156887|0,157034|3,157180|3) - theres an obvious shift upwards in pitch you didnt follow with LNs
02:39:229 (159229|1,159375|2,159375|0,159521|1,159668|3) - id understand if you chose to not follow the synths here with LNs like you did here 02:38:351 (158351|0,158497|1,158643|3,158790|2) - but i guess that some people would be like "omg inconsistent"
02:39:668 (159668|3,159668|1,159814|1) - same repeated synth
02:41:570 (161570|0,161716|2,161863|2) - same rise in pitch
02:43:765 (163765|0,163912|1,164058|2,164204|0) - you followed the lowering synth here, rather you not since you didnt to that at 02:39:229 (159229|1,159375|2,159375|0,159521|1,159668|3) -
02:46:838 (166838|3,166838|0,166838|1) - 02:49:180 (169180|1,169180|0,169180|3) - 02:51:521 (171521|0,171521|2,171521|3) - 02:53:716 (173716|0,173716|3,173716|1) - 02:56:204 (176204|0,176204|1,176204|2) - 02:58:546 (178546|2,178546|0,178546|3) - want to accent the crash with a quad or smth
03:19:601 (199601|3) - seems like this is a 1/12 not a 1/16
idk whether or not youre intentionally ignoring the crashes cuz you can have quads there but to each their own i guess
03:51:375 (231375|0,231375|2,231375|1,231521|3,231521|2,231521|0,231668|3,231668|0,231668|1) - same jumpthrill thing as above
03:59:277 (239277|2) - to 4, 03:58:985 (238985|2,239131|2,239277|2,239424|2,239570|2,239716|2) - yeah no thanks
04:00:302 (240302|2,240302|3,240375|1,240375|0,240448|3,240448|2,240521|0,240521|1) - same thing with the bzzz synth, end at 04:00:302 - so jumpthrill should end there
3 hours yay fun times am i righttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
to frozen19/30, 63.3% map is -ok- in a sense, i wouldnt want to play it for so long doe. main things are with YOUR PATTERN CONSISTENCY plis be more consistent in your usage of patterns and esp. transitions between them
to reyzra24/30, 80% urs is the best amongst the ones i scrutinized, really appreciate the effort in making the map interesting throughout, even though i didnt agree on the usage of the differences. one word though: please dont abuse the [13][24] splitthrill pattern, those patterns are the hardest to hit out of the possible sets of jumpthrills, and they usually are pretty easy to mindblock on.
to meggumi20/30, 66.6% there isnt anything inherently wrong with your chart, but in the context of other diffs (esp. reyzra's one) it kinda turns irrelevant imo. chart generally is solid in terms of patterning and layering, although i dont really agree with the use of LNs in your chart. i really dont know if there is anything that stands out to me in your chart tbh, maybe its just me but i just feel as if i was playing a harder vers of reyzra's one. maybe thats good, since the diff gap is less of a problem, but when it comes to quality this chart kinda just suffers because of that fact.
hope my mod helped, better keep an eye on the diff gap between reyzra's and meggumi's diff @frozen
good luck with rank vv
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