GladiOol wrote:

[General]

• Offset 1.340

Fixed

[Oni]

• don't like most of the jumps, they feel really random ): Also some streams play 'weird'. Maybe change them a bit?

ok.I change it D;
00:03:122 (1,1,1) - I find these new combo spams really awkward and weird to play. They don't look nice either, I'd suggest changing it to a normal pattern.Remove new combo here.
Also, 00:05:498 (1,1,1,2) - here you start with new combos, then quit it. And here: 00:10:250 (1,2,3,4) - you don't even start it D: It's too random.I put the pattern that was similar in the last time:D
00:21:538 (1) - This doesn't hear nice, there's no 1/4 music here :Soh...o.oWhat do I do in it?><
01:15:003 (5) - Add new combo.Fixed
01:15:745 (1) - Remove new combo.Fixed
01:17:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Make these soft hitsounds please.Fixed
01:32:676 (1) - Move this one grid to the left.Fixed
02:07:874 (1) - Doesn't sound nice at all.I put soft sound
02:24:953 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Soft hitsounds.Fixed
[Hard]

• Increase Approach Rate by 2.ok
  Increase Drain Rate by 2..ok
  Increase Overal Difficulty by 2 or 3ok
  [b][Normal]
  

1. Map this difficulty till the end please.

Fixed
01:12:630 (5) - Add new combo.Fixed
[Easy]

1. Delete the unused timing sections at the end please.

Fixed
01:17:976 (2,3,4,5) - Soft hitsounds please.Fixed

lalarun wrote:

ﾜｯｼｮｲ

hurun18 wrote:

star~☆

loli_milk wrote:

;)

Muya wrote:

star~

• - Offset: 1,326~1,330ms (-14~-10) I hope it's correct *I still mod with your old offset, since I'm not sure at the new one.
  - Don't like background much -x-

• - I lol'd at difficulty setting XD They're all 0 except HPD. AR+1?

• 00:07:132 (5,1,2) - Remove finishs
  00:21:240 (4,1) - I don't like this spacing, could you stack it under (4) -w-?
  00:26:290, 00:26:884 (5) - Add whistle?
  00:27:478 (1,2,3) - Remove whistles on each slider's end
  00:40:547 (2) - Not a good overlapping on Normal
  00:56:884 - Add a note?
  00:57:181 (5) - End at 00:57:775 - ?
  00:59:557 (6) - Finish. Also decrease volume to 45.
  01:04:904 (6) - Clap at slider's end
  02:04:607 - Same as 00:56:884
  02:04:903 (4) - Same as 00:56:181
  02:07:280 (6) - Same as 00:59:557
  
  
  
  Hard
  [list:75736]- AR+1~2, OA+1~2, most of your combo on kiai parts suck at AR5

• - AR9 doesn't fit your whole map ;w;..

Pokie wrote:

General

• - Offset: 1,326~1,330ms (-14~-10) I hope it's correct *I still mod with your old offset, since I'm not sure at the new one.Thank you offset pokie~>w<"
  - Don't like background much -x-

Easy

• - I lol'd at difficulty setting XD They're all 0 except HPD. AR+1?

Fixed
00:23:914 (2) - Delete? Fixed
00:32:231 (7) - New comboFixed
00:33:419 (1) - Remove new comboFixed
00:37:577 - Add a note and new combo?Fixed
01:01:339 (1) - Delete, since it's too close to last spinner.Fixed
01:07:874 (5) - Place it again, due to bug reverse arrow lolFixed


Normally:


01:17:379 (T) - decrease volume on this section to 50%Fixed
01:19:755 (5) - Move 1/2 beats backward?Fixed



Normal

• 00:07:132 (5,1,2) - Remove finishsFixed
  00:21:240 (4,1) - I don't like this spacing, could you stack it under (4) -w-?ok.I put stacked:D Fixed
  00:26:290, 00:26:884 (5) - Add whistle?Fixed
  00:27:478 (1,2,3) - Remove whistles on each slider's endFixed
  00:40:547 (2) - Not a good overlapping on Normal Fixed
  00:56:884 - Add a note?Fixed
  00:57:181 (5) - End at 00:57:775 - ?Fixed
  00:59:557 (6) - Finish. Also decrease volume to 45.Fixed
  01:04:904 (6) - Clap at slider's endFixed
  02:04:607 - Same as 00:56:884Fixed
  02:04:903 (4) - Same as 00:56:181Fixed
  02:07:280 (6) - Same as 00:59:557Fixed
  
  
  
  Hard
  [list:e96db]- AR+1~2, OA+1~2, most of your combo on kiai parts suck at AR5

Fixed
00:03:125 (1,2) - Doesn't look good x_x Try this:Fixed


00:04:313 (1,2) - ^Fixed
00:05:501 (1,2) - ^Fixed
00:10:696 (1,2,3,4) - 1/2 beats backward? and repeat the last slider once.Fixed
00:23:768 (5,6) - Similar to 00:03:125Fixed


00:24:956 (1,2,3) - ^Fixed
00:43:372 (6) - End at 00:43:815 - Fixed
01:38:768 (1) - DeleteFixed
01:39:065 (7) - ClapFixed
01:43:372 (6) - Change this slider to slider+circles? Suggestion. *clap at (7)Fixed


01:59:412 (2) - End at 01:59:854 - Fixed
02:26:738 (9) - New combo? and use finish at 02:27:330 - instead, just like what you use at Normal.Fixed



Oni

• - AR9 doesn't fit your whole map ;w;..

I was at a loss whether I made AR 9 or 8 D:Because AR9 was easy to look, it is AR9 now

Btw, I don't like this difficulty.
Non-sence streams -w-..(Not following either vocal or rhythm imo)
Big jumps in sudden..
Overmapping? I don't know ~All right.I ask other MAT:)


But nice try though~ Star
Ganbatte

ganbaruyo>w<"arigatouu

Astom wrote:

Hi~
[Easy]
-I think is much more easy of follow and play when you place circles like thisIt does not match music when I put it there.I put 00:10:832 (3) -move it to00:10:684 (3) -
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-00:08:308 (1) - move it to 00:08:159
-00:09:496 (2) - move it to 00:09:347
-00:10:832 (3) - move it to
-00:12:021 add a circle

[Normal]
-fine

[hard]
-fine

[oni]
-=.=
-Maybe playable I think

[gow's diff]
-sry I get depressed when I don't understand the mapping.

Thank you mod

ponsaku wrote:

nice map!
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yongtw123 wrote:

Mod by request~

Overall
The reddish combo colors are sometimes not so visible.fmm...A good color is not found XDhaha

[Easy]
I suggest you using distance spacing x1.0 (current is x0.8), as the patterns are crowded.Fixed
Although the rhythm is technically correct, it doesn't go well with the music. Please improve the rhythm.All right.i make note.
An example:

SPOILER

Approx.00:23:308 -

.Fixed

00:10:684 (3) - align with (2)? (Improvise with patterns afterward)i put add note.
01:19:149 (4,5) - replace with a slider?.Fixed


[Normal]
Same with [Easy], the rhythm needs some variation. It's monotonous as of now.
Approach Rate is too low, use at least 4. Adjust other difficulty settings too..Fixed


00:10:684 (3) - I've expected a note to land on this beat. (You can put a slider here and extend to 00:11:129, for example.).Fixed
00:29:842 (1) - end 00:32:070?.Fixed
00:36:971 (1,2,3,4) - not pretty, improvise~.Fixed
01:09:347 (6,1) - spacing.Fixed

[Hard]
Minor flow problems, but overall it's fine.XD Thank you

01:17:664 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe not stacking these?Fixed
02:25:387 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^Fixed

[Oni]
Maybe AR8 is enough?
OD and DR are too high, lower them one or two notches.Fixed

01:31:773 (1,2) - Minor spacing errorFixed
01:41:575 (1,2) - ^Fixed
01:42:095 (6,1) - ^Fixed

With such high BPM, this is too hard for me @@ XD hehe me too.

[gow's diff]
This diff has many semi-hidden sliders, ex. 01:07:714 (2), 01:31:773 (2), Though there's no way to fix all of them, I'd say...well, now this is a hard diff.

00:25:981 (6) - possibly new combo? since this is a jump
00:38:456 (2,3) - this jump really necessary?
01:33:852 (7) - new combo? (jump)Fixed
01:46:179 (2,3) - same as 00:38:456 (2,3)

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Improve [Easy] and [Normal], and that'd be great.
Withholding my star for now

Wiinter wrote:

Hey ;w; Sorry for the delay i.i nono:/Thank you mod>w<"/

Easy
00:10:684 (3) - uhh nazi >_< But well. Make it symmetrical to the previous beat (2 grids up)why 2 grids up?

Normal
Increase a little the O.D. and H.P. Drain Rate? ><Fixed
00:10:832 (3) - new comboFixed
01:00:733 (1) - bad spacing, it's really hard to read ._.'Fixed
01:09:941 (x) - add a note here? If you do it, place the new combo from 01:10:238 (1) to this one.Fixed
02:14:397 (4) - rotate it by 180º? (Ctrl+Shift+R) and set it like this http://puu.sh/O0J and than reverse the seletion (Ctrl+R)Fixed

Hard
01:44:545 (3,4) - change this spacing to something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/52345. Looks better imoFixed

Oni
Nothing to point here >< thank you >w<"

gow's diff
Shouldn't it be called gow's Diff? Hmm, not sure about this anyways. Fixed

Well, finger killer map, so fast ;_; But really well done. Have a star :3

val0108 wrote:

Easy
00:10:684 (3) - uhh nazi >_< But well. Make it symmetrical to the previous beat (2 grids up)why 2 grids up?
So, here. 00:04:743 (3,4) - You made the spacing of (4) symmetrical to (3):

SPOILER

in this place I mentioned it was the same rhythm and same stuff you used (I mean beat -slider with the same diference of time and blablabla), and the spacing was diferent XD So I suggested you to make it like the other one was, just that ^.^

thank you mod and starr~>w</ Always that you need ^___^

James2250 wrote:

-I did this mod a little while ago so several of the things have already been said in previous mods. Do not do them again if they have already been mentioned in the last day or so. Pretty detailed so up to you what to follow
-1500kb+ background is really too much in my opinion, convert it to JPEG and try and reduce it to below 900kbFixed

Easy:
(spacing made to 1.0 I see, looks better)
OD +1, doesn't need to be on the lowest settings for this map Fixed
00:23:308 (1,2,3,4) - has an odd flow, I can't tell exactly what it is followingFixed
01:14:991 (1,2,3,4,5) - I wouldn't recommend having a finish on all these notes,remove a few of them Remove finish 01:14:991 (1,2,3,4) - Fixed

Normal:
I didn't point them all out but I suggest you go through and try and avoid too many overlapping patterns if possible (and try and get rid of most of the anti jumps)
00:05:931 (1,2,3,4,5) - might want to center this on the grid?Fixed
00:29:842 (1) - sounds better ending on previous red tick to me Fixed.i put silence
00:24:496 (5,1) - would look neater in general if stuff like this and 00:26:278 (5,1) didn't touchFixed
00:35:189 (2,5,6) - don't overlap? Looks odd when playing I changed it so that they were not piled up:)
00:58:060 (6,7) - avoid hidden repeats especially on easier difficulties Fixed
01:09:347 (6,1) - spread out moreFixed
02:05:783 (6,7) - hidden repeat Fixed
02:06:080 (7,1) - spread out more Fixed

Hard:
Try and keep a clap pattern following the music for most of the time?Fixed
Pretty low HP for a Hard, I suggest +1 or +2 ok:)Fixed
00:58:357 (1) - end on previous red tick (or silence out the end like you did on Normal)
Patterns could look slightly more organized but not badFixed

Oni:
As much as I don't like AR9 the map is nice thank you
00:04:892 (3,1) - spread these out more Fixed
01:14:248 (8,1) - don't overlapFixed
01:32:664 (1) - would look better if it didn't go under previous notesFixed
01:38:753 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spread out more?Fixed

gow's diff:
For this kind of map it is odd to use the largest circles, I recommend circle size -1
00:24:793 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - make spacing easier to read here
01:31:179 (5,2) - try to avoid hidden repeats
some fixed
Maps don't look too bad just need some slight improvements.
Deserves a star~

Wiinter wrote:

Just to explain...

val0108 wrote:

Easy
00:10:684 (3) - uhh nazi >_< But well. Make it symmetrical to the previous beat (2 grids up)why 2 grids up?
So, here. 00:04:743 (3,4) - You made the spacing of (4) symmetrical to (3):

SPOILER

in this place I mentioned it was the same rhythm and same stuff you used (I mean beat -slider with the same diference of time and blablabla), and the spacing was diferent XD So I suggested you to make it like the other one was, just that ^.^

thank you mod and starr~>w</ Always that you need ^___^

bktn wrote:

nice map :::::

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
- I think you should rename "gow's Diff" to "gow's Insane". It just sounds so weird.Fixed

Easy:
Why is this not mapped to the end? I'd really like this diff to be mapped until the end like the other diffs.Because this as for EASY is because is it

Normal:
00:10:832 (1,2,3) - I'd like these 3 one 1/2 tick earlier. Sounds way better. Watch out for the spacing later though.

Hard:
00:40:090 - Add a note here? Flows better with the lyrics IMO.Fixed
This feels already pretty close to an Insane IMO.

gow's Diff:
00:25:832 (5,1,2,3,4) - Now these jumps feel really random. I tried to test that part a bunch of times and it really feels awkward.
01:06:674 (1,2) - This feels very unnatural and forced. Plays pretty bad.
01:13:209 (3,4,5) - Also pretty confusing spacing. Plays also pretty bad.
01:33:704 (1,2,3,4) - The same thing like I said about the first jump.
02:20:931 (3,4,5,6) - This is also pretty confusing. Again plays pretty bad.
I'm sorry that I was a bit harsh about these jumps but they are really confusing to play.^^some fixed

Oni:
This looked fine to me.thank you >w<

Pretty nice mapset.

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
I'm not sure about the diff spread... orz. good luck. XD

[Easy]
really easy 0 0 better if you could map the whole song.
slider tick rate:1Fixed
01:17:961 (2) - remove whistleFixed

[Normal]
00:10:684 (1) - start 1/2 earlier. (still end at current point)Fixed
00:51:526 (1,2) - add sliderwhistle to keep consistencyFixed
00:58:357 (7) - soft whistle at the end (volume = 40)Fixed
01:37:565 (1) - end 1/2 earlierFixed
01:59:248 (1,2) - same as 00:51:526 (1,2)Fixed
02:06:080 (7) - same as 00:58:357 (7)Fixed
don't copy&paste that muchXDhehe

[Hard]
00:15:585 (2) - maybe you should keep the whistle pace?Fixed
01:05:189 - add a note?Fixed
01:06:228 & 01:06:526 - add notes?Fixed
01:49:892 (2,3,4,1,2) - i don't like stacks like thisFixed
...many many stacks...

[gow's Insane]
00:21:674 (2,6) - whistle
00:25:387 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - ....wtf
00:38:605 (3) - make it left a bit (2 grids maybe), looks better
01:17:961 (2,2,4) - personally i don't think finish fits here.
01:46:327 (3) - same thing..
02:25:684 (2,2,4) - ^^

[Oni]
00:12:615 - add a noteFixed
00:13:803 - ^Fixed
00:14:991 - ^Fixed
02:18:704 (1) - ctrl+r
well... i won't support so many long sliders in a Insane diff.. = = this is harder than gow's Insane, but less max score... so a little strange.

orioncomet wrote:

[Oni]
- OD +2 (for make the score higher then gow's Insane) however this diff look harder then gow's insane, maybe because of higher AR or +1AR, +2OD, +2HP to gow's diff [for make some diff look much harder @_@!oni>OD+1drain+2
00:38:011 (5) - hidden silder (hard to read) このスライダパターンでアンランクされた譜面が過去にあります。 fix it to easy to read more then this, or make to something like this http://photobucket.com/screenshot047.jpgOMG...ok.i put is here:3 http://gyazo.com/328f653879ff14853d5c24730f7810f6.png Is this all right?>o<;;
00:45:288 (7,8,9,10,11) - move them down 1 grid lvl3 and right 1 grid lvl3, look much cleaner when playingFixed
01:19:001 (4) - make it curved like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/53317 ?Fixed
01:37:417 (4) - hidden silder, or make to something like this http://photobucket.com/screenshot048.jpgI put is here. http://gyazo.com/2e50122d6da5bb50b367a47765168e7a.png
01:39:347 (3,4,5,6,7) - move them to http://photobucket.com/screenshot049.jpg look much better when playing.
01:53:011 (7,8,9,10,11) - move them down 1 grid lvl3 and right 1 grid lvl3, look much cleaner when playingFixed
02:12:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - move them down 4 grid lvl3, look much cleaner when playingFixed
02:16:179 (3) - move it to http://photobucket.com/screenshot050.jpg, for not making 02:16:625 (4,5,6,7) to be notes that hidden under silder.i put is here:3. 02:15:585 (1) - http://gyazo.com/79fcc1cfa372bbe5376cd17f0dc9aaea.png 02:16:773 (1) - http://gyazo.com/60172782e9eb8f3ae020ac873369603d.png
02:26:724 (4) - make it curved like 01:19:001 (4) -Fixed

[Normal]
- HP -1 and OD -2? or make star rating of this diff lower then 3.50HP-1 OD-2 Fixed
01:14:991 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make some of them to silder?Fixed.http://gyazo.com/e4778897f05be75a2ce35e132ae3996e.png
01:51:823 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^Fixed http://gyazo.com/9916764320d65b0e6d04799beaa70257.png
02:10:832 (6) - new combo?Fixed
02:15:585 (7) - ^Fixed
02:20:337 (5) - ^Fixed

[Hard]
- could you make this diff to be H icon on the beatmap listening(web site)? because this mapset have 3I which is not allowIs it an by all means to make H?>w<;;
00:40:387 (4) - hidden silder when playing ;w;Fixed http://gyazo.com/221e18431532c4e5bc62d9f7b0e72cf6.png

[gow's Insane]
- Circls size -1?no.but, I can change it
01:47:367 (4,5,6,7,8) - move them down 2 grid lvl 3, look much better when playing Fixed

maybe make a score of Oni diff and gow's Insane a bit more different then this.
i'd suggest you to make Oni diff to be a hardest diff for this mapset if possible.
low a score on gow's insane or make a score on Oni a bit higher.ok oni>12,000,000score.gow'sInsane>14,000,000

Garven wrote:

遅くなってすみませんAll right

[General]
Chiptune instrumentals! Woo!woo!!

[All difficulties]
01:19:595 - Start kiai hereFixed

[Normal, gowww's Insane, Hard, Oni]
02:27:318 - Start kiai hereFixed

[Easy]
Aw, only half done. :<
00:23:308 (1,2,3,4) - These four notes feel really off-time. I think if you moved 00:20:337 (1) - to 00:19:446 - and ended it at 00:21:526 - with a soft hitsound, it would work a lot better, and that way you can map the vocals a lot easier.Fixed
00:32:219 (1,2,3,4) - These as well - they're almost going against the strongest part of the music. Move them back to the red tick (starting from 00:32:070 - ) and adjust things. It'll sound and play a lot better imo.
Maybe take a look at a lot of your note placement and see if you can adjust things with rhythms like that. It would play and sound 10x better. Fixed
00:48:852 (5) - Reverse arrow is pointing strange.Fixed
01:17:219 - End kiai hereFixed

[Normal]
Raise OD +2 or 3 please.Fixed.I put OD + 2
00:32:813 (1) - I think during these parts of the song, if you didn't stick so strictly to the beat the entire time, it might end up with a more pleasurable play experience. So maybe use longer sliders to represent more complex musical phrases? This will also reduce how many circles and hits your map has and reduce the inflated star rating a little bit.Fixed
00:54:199 (5) - Maybe lower the bottom point so that this and the 6 slider don't overlap? There are other small overlaps like this in your map, if you wish to fix them. Otherwise, just ignore this. :pFixed
01:17:219 - End kiai hereFixed

[gow's Insane]
So hard. @_@ Maybe reduce HP drain by 1?no
There were some stacks that I didn't like much since they kind of impeded on general flow, but it fits for how you mapped the difficulty, so I'll just mention this and move along.

[Hard]
00:20:337 (1) - Hmm, maybe do a silenced soft hit sound for the end of this?Fixed
01:31:476 (4) - Maybe do a normal circle instead of a slider?Fixed

[Oni]
I know the settings were pushed this high for the star rating, but it's almost unplayable to a huge portion of the community. Please consider at least -1 to HP drain.Fixed
00:43:357 (2) - Such a pretty slider... kind of marred by 00:44:100 (2) - half-covering it. Maybe adjust like this?Fixed

SPOILER

Fixed
01:51:823 (2) - Same thing as 00:43:357 (2) -Fixed
Some IRC modding concerning making certain sliders look more neat/smooth.Thank you~:3

CDFA wrote:

Rating: 8.3
Vocaloid.

Well wth happened here? ;D

angelwings725 wrote:

Is there an MP3 for this song?

Weezy wrote:

angelwings725 wrote:

Is there an MP3 for this song?

open up the song folder and you should find it there