NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
I'm not sure about the diff spread... orz. good luck. XD

[Easy]
really easy 0 0 better if you could map the whole song.
slider tick rate:1Fixed
01:17:961 (2) - remove whistleFixed

[Normal]
00:10:684 (1) - start 1/2 earlier. (still end at current point)Fixed
00:51:526 (1,2) - add sliderwhistle to keep consistencyFixed
00:58:357 (7) - soft whistle at the end (volume = 40)Fixed
01:37:565 (1) - end 1/2 earlierFixed
01:59:248 (1,2) - same as 00:51:526 (1,2)Fixed
02:06:080 (7) - same as 00:58:357 (7)Fixed
don't copy&paste that muchXDhehe

[Hard]
00:15:585 (2) - maybe you should keep the whistle pace?Fixed
01:05:189 - add a note?Fixed
01:06:228 & 01:06:526 - add notes?Fixed
01:49:892 (2,3,4,1,2) - i don't like stacks like thisFixed
...many many stacks...

[gow's Insane]
00:21:674 (2,6) - whistle
00:25:387 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - ....wtf
00:38:605 (3) - make it left a bit (2 grids maybe), looks better
01:17:961 (2,2,4) - personally i don't think finish fits here.
01:46:327 (3) - same thing..
02:25:684 (2,2,4) - ^^

[Oni]
00:12:615 - add a noteFixed
00:13:803 - ^Fixed
00:14:991 - ^Fixed
02:18:704 (1) - ctrl+r
well... i won't support so many long sliders in a Insane diff.. = = this is harder than gow's Insane, but less max score... so a little strange.

thank you mod and starr~>w<!

☆~

[Oni]
- OD +2 (for make the score higher then gow's Insane) however this diff look harder then gow's insane, maybe because of higher AR or +1AR, +2OD, +2HP to gow's diff [for make some diff look much harder @_@!
00:38:011 (5) - hidden silder (hard to read) このスライダパターンでアンランクされた譜面が過去にあります。 fix it to easy to read more then this, or make to something like this http://photobucket.com/screenshot047.jpg
00:45:288 (7,8,9,10,11) - move them down 1 grid lvl3 and right 1 grid lvl3, look much cleaner when playing
01:19:001 (4) - make it curved like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/53317 ?
01:37:417 (4) - hidden silder, or make to something like this http://photobucket.com/screenshot048.jpg
01:39:347 (3,4,5,6,7) - move them to http://photobucket.com/screenshot049.jpg look much better when playing.
01:53:011 (7,8,9,10,11) - move them down 1 grid lvl3 and right 1 grid lvl3, look much cleaner when playing
02:12:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - move them down 4 grid lvl3, look much cleaner when playing
02:16:179 (3) - move it to http://photobucket.com/screenshot050.jpg, for not making 02:16:625 (4,5,6,7) to be notes that hidden under silder.
02:26:724 (4) - make it curved like 01:19:001 (4) -

[Normal]
- HP -1 and OD -2? or make star rating of this diff lower then 3.50
01:14:991 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make some of them to silder?
01:51:823 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:10:832 (6) - new combo?
02:15:585 (7) - ^
02:20:337 (5) - ^

[Hard]
- could you make this diff to be H icon on the beatmap listening(web site)? because this mapset have 3I which is not allow
00:40:387 (4) - hidden silder when playing ;w;

[gow's Insane]
- Circls size -1?
01:47:367 (4,5,6,7,8) - move them down 2 grid lvl 3, look much better when playing

maybe make a score of Oni diff and gow's Insane a bit more different then this.
i'd suggest you to make Oni diff to be a hardest diff for this mapset if possible.
low a score on gow's insane or make a score on Oni a bit higher.

orioncomet wrote:

[Oni]
- OD +2 (for make the score higher then gow's Insane) however this diff look harder then gow's insane, maybe because of higher AR or +1AR, +2OD, +2HP to gow's diff [for make some diff look much harder @_@!oni>OD+1drain+2
00:38:011 (5) - hidden silder (hard to read) このスライダパターンでアンランクされた譜面が過去にあります。 fix it to easy to read more then this, or make to something like this http://photobucket.com/screenshot047.jpgOMG...ok.i put is here:3 http://gyazo.com/328f653879ff14853d5c24730f7810f6.png Is this all right?>o<;;
00:45:288 (7,8,9,10,11) - move them down 1 grid lvl3 and right 1 grid lvl3, look much cleaner when playingFixed
01:19:001 (4) - make it curved like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/53317 ?Fixed
01:37:417 (4) - hidden silder, or make to something like this http://photobucket.com/screenshot048.jpgI put is here. http://gyazo.com/2e50122d6da5bb50b367a47765168e7a.png
01:39:347 (3,4,5,6,7) - move them to http://photobucket.com/screenshot049.jpg look much better when playing.
01:53:011 (7,8,9,10,11) - move them down 1 grid lvl3 and right 1 grid lvl3, look much cleaner when playingFixed
02:12:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - move them down 4 grid lvl3, look much cleaner when playingFixed
02:16:179 (3) - move it to http://photobucket.com/screenshot050.jpg, for not making 02:16:625 (4,5,6,7) to be notes that hidden under silder.i put is here:3. 02:15:585 (1) - http://gyazo.com/79fcc1cfa372bbe5376cd17f0dc9aaea.png 02:16:773 (1) - http://gyazo.com/60172782e9eb8f3ae020ac873369603d.png
02:26:724 (4) - make it curved like 01:19:001 (4) -Fixed

[Normal]
- HP -1 and OD -2? or make star rating of this diff lower then 3.50HP-1 OD-2 Fixed
01:14:991 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make some of them to silder?Fixed.http://gyazo.com/e4778897f05be75a2ce35e132ae3996e.png
01:51:823 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^Fixed http://gyazo.com/9916764320d65b0e6d04799beaa70257.png
02:10:832 (6) - new combo?Fixed
02:15:585 (7) - ^Fixed
02:20:337 (5) - ^Fixed

[Hard]
- could you make this diff to be H icon on the beatmap listening(web site)? because this mapset have 3I which is not allowIs it an by all means to make H?>w<;;
00:40:387 (4) - hidden silder when playing ;w;Fixed http://gyazo.com/221e18431532c4e5bc62d9f7b0e72cf6.png

[gow's Insane]
- Circls size -1?no.but, I can change it
01:47:367 (4,5,6,7,8) - move them down 2 grid lvl 3, look much better when playing Fixed

maybe make a score of Oni diff and gow's Insane a bit more different then this.
i'd suggest you to make Oni diff to be a hardest diff for this mapset if possible.
low a score on gow's insane or make a score on Oni a bit higher.ok oni>12,000,000score.gow'sInsane>14,000,000

Thank you for modding so in detail >w<"!
and thank you starr~

shooooting star~!!!!! i love this map~

遅くなってすみません

[General]
Chiptune instrumentals! Woo!

[All difficulties]
01:19:595 - Start kiai here

[Normal, gowww's Insane, Hard, Oni]
02:27:318 - Start kiai here

[Easy]
Aw, only half done. :<
00:23:308 (1,2,3,4) - These four notes feel really off-time. I think if you moved 00:20:337 (1) - to 00:19:446 - and ended it at 00:21:526 - with a soft hitsound, it would work a lot better, and that way you can map the vocals a lot easier.
00:32:219 (1,2,3,4) - These as well - they're almost going against the strongest part of the music. Move them back to the red tick (starting from 00:32:070 - ) and adjust things. It'll sound and play a lot better imo.
Maybe take a look at a lot of your note placement and see if you can adjust things with rhythms like that. It would play and sound 10x better. :D
00:48:852 (5) - Reverse arrow is pointing strange.
01:17:219 - End kiai here

[Normal]
Raise OD +2 or 3 please.
00:32:813 (1) - I think during these parts of the song, if you didn't stick so strictly to the beat the entire time, it might end up with a more pleasurable play experience. So maybe use longer sliders to represent more complex musical phrases? This will also reduce how many circles and hits your map has and reduce the inflated star rating a little bit.
00:54:199 (5) - Maybe lower the bottom point so that this and the 6 slider don't overlap? There are other small overlaps like this in your map, if you wish to fix them. Otherwise, just ignore this. :p
01:17:219 - End kiai here

[gow's Insane]
So hard. @_@ Maybe reduce HP drain by 1?
There were some stacks that I didn't like much since they kind of impeded on general flow, but it fits for how you mapped the difficulty, so I'll just mention this and move along. :P

[Hard]
00:20:337 (1) - Hmm, maybe do a silenced soft hit sound for the end of this?
01:31:476 (4) - Maybe do a normal circle instead of a slider?

[Oni]
I know the settings were pushed this high for the star rating, but it's almost unplayable to a huge portion of the community. Please consider at least -1 to HP drain.
00:43:357 (2) - Such a pretty slider... kind of marred by 00:44:100 (2) - half-covering it. Maybe adjust like this?
01:51:823 (2) - Same thing as 00:43:357 (2) -
Some IRC modding concerning making certain sliders look more neat/smooth.

Garven wrote:

遅くなってすみませんAll right

[General]
Chiptune instrumentals! Woo!woo!!

[All difficulties]
01:19:595 - Start kiai hereFixed

[Normal, gowww's Insane, Hard, Oni]
02:27:318 - Start kiai hereFixed

[Easy]
Aw, only half done. :<
00:23:308 (1,2,3,4) - These four notes feel really off-time. I think if you moved 00:20:337 (1) - to 00:19:446 - and ended it at 00:21:526 - with a soft hitsound, it would work a lot better, and that way you can map the vocals a lot easier.Fixed
00:32:219 (1,2,3,4) - These as well - they're almost going against the strongest part of the music. Move them back to the red tick (starting from 00:32:070 - ) and adjust things. It'll sound and play a lot better imo.
Maybe take a look at a lot of your note placement and see if you can adjust things with rhythms like that. It would play and sound 10x better. Fixed
00:48:852 (5) - Reverse arrow is pointing strange.Fixed
01:17:219 - End kiai hereFixed

[Normal]
Raise OD +2 or 3 please.Fixed.I put OD + 2
00:32:813 (1) - I think during these parts of the song, if you didn't stick so strictly to the beat the entire time, it might end up with a more pleasurable play experience. So maybe use longer sliders to represent more complex musical phrases? This will also reduce how many circles and hits your map has and reduce the inflated star rating a little bit.Fixed
00:54:199 (5) - Maybe lower the bottom point so that this and the 6 slider don't overlap? There are other small overlaps like this in your map, if you wish to fix them. Otherwise, just ignore this. :pFixed
01:17:219 - End kiai hereFixed

[gow's Insane]
So hard. @_@ Maybe reduce HP drain by 1?no
There were some stacks that I didn't like much since they kind of impeded on general flow, but it fits for how you mapped the difficulty, so I'll just mention this and move along.

[Hard]
00:20:337 (1) - Hmm, maybe do a silenced soft hit sound for the end of this?Fixed
01:31:476 (4) - Maybe do a normal circle instead of a slider?Fixed

[Oni]
I know the settings were pushed this high for the star rating, but it's almost unplayable to a huge portion of the community. Please consider at least -1 to HP drain.Fixed
00:43:357 (2) - Such a pretty slider... kind of marred by 00:44:100 (2) - half-covering it. Maybe adjust like this?Fixed

SPOILER

Fixed
01:51:823 (2) - Same thing as 00:43:357 (2) -Fixed
Some IRC modding concerning making certain sliders look more neat/smooth.Thank you~:3

Thank you mod and starr~>w<"

star

another IRC modded about diff spear, score, nazi thing.
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edit: don't edit your first post

[Easy]
00:48:852 (5) - Slider's too long. Shorten it by a 1/4 tick.

Edit: Ranked.

Ahhh, I forgot abouit modding this in the end, sorry.

wow, congrats, val0108 !

Rating: 8.3
Vocaloid.

Well wth happened here? ;D

sorry I'm too late >_>

and grats for rank.

CDFA wrote:

Rating: 8.3
Vocaloid.

Well wth happened here? ;D

difficulty spread =p

Is there an MP3 for this song?

angelwings725 wrote:

Is there an MP3 for this song?

open up the song folder and you should find it there

Weezy wrote:

angelwings725 wrote:

Is there an MP3 for this song?

open up the song folder and you should find it there

There was no song folder when I downloaded it. D:

I love this song