1. Average (2.73 stars, 293 notes)
2. Cesc's Extreme (4.9 stars, 574 notes)
3. iNiS201 (4.77 stars, 544 notes)
4. Larto's Intense (4.83 stars, 586 notes)
5. Relaxing (1.08 stars, 202 notes)

1. Relaxing (Easy 100%)
2. Average (Normal 100%%)
3. iNiS201(Hard 100%)
4. Larto's Intense (Insane 100%)
5. Cesc's Extreme (Insane 100%)
6. SB (100%)
7. Skin (100%)

Larto wrote:

That might be a bit harder than you wanted it to be?.. Oh well, I like it!

Sallad4ever wrote:

Yo

[General]
- epilepsy warning?
- missing tag
- can you cut some of those long spinners ? maybe change one or two of them into long slider repeat or map to the drum
- 01:39:371 is a nice place for the preview point

[Relaxing]
rise the HP,AR,OD by 1 or 2 tick?
01:48:926 (3) - strange shape It's kinda odd, But I like it
03:24:926 (5) - ^

[Difficult]
04:15:926 (1) - should start at 04:16:037 - white tick
04:42:259 (1) - sounds weird, try shorten it by 1/2 and maybe add another repet

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Hey Gonzvlo! HI Kirby =D

So let's see what you got here. Nice song choice. xD

It seems that there's duplicate Slow Downs in your Storyboard script. Since they're all at the same location (for the most part), you might as well remove the Slow Down warnings in the .osu storyboards for [Normal] and [Difficult]. Keep the Slow Down warning in the .osb. Oops , Ok I had to remove it from .obs, Because Larto's diff doesn't need the warning.

That's pretty much the needed stuff there. xp

So let's see the other stuff...

First of all, really cool storyboard. The Photoshop effect and the MUSE flash was really interesting and creative. Especially liked the build up you made as it went into the chorus. Thanks =]

Suggestions!

Your strobes for strobe.png. I'm trying to understand why you decided to place them on the 2nd and 4th 1/1 beat. It's really irregular. xD Are you trying to emphasize the "wrong" in the lyrics? Well, my suggestion here is to try it out 1/1 earlier (e.g. try it on L,100037,1 instead) and see how you like it. It's up to you. :3 Uhm yeah I tried to emphasize "wrong", But you gave me an idea for the 1/1 earlier beats, I'll try it later.

Also, the strobes for BNFLASH.png. It's a nice build up, but when I feel it actually reaches to the Kiai chorus, there isn't really that climax I was expecting. Perhaps you can have a full white background that fades from 1 to 0 when you're at 128037 and 224037? (By the way, the line here isn't fully invisible; F,0,224037,226259,1,0.01351351 , you may consider just putting that off to 0) What do you think? =D Ok, It looks nice.

My suggestions might suck, or whatever. XD But that's rather up to you. This is awesome stuff anyway.

Hushu wrote:

- Relaxing is quite boring and very alike ur other pending beatmap, is there anything what can be done about it?
How is it boring ? , I find it very creative and fun for the easiest diff.
- Difficult is way better (and harder somewhat,..) than ur other pending beatmap! Thanks for the creativity
Thanks =]

Advice: This might be dubledori, but I wonder why you've chosen oragne and green for the buttom and above of the storyboard, wouldn't orange and red be more 'suitable'? <-- Just a proposition!
Yeah the colors are very random also the BG has a lot of colours so it's difficult to choose the right ones, I'll try something later.

NotShinta wrote:

General:
An inbetween diff between Difficult and Larto's would certainly be nice.
Larto goes in tags.

Larto's Intense
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Difficult:
01:39:815 - Put a hitcircle here. (If you do this, do the same for 01:43:371, 01:46:926 etc.)
01:55:148 (4,5) - Doesn't really matter, but I thought there was a hitcircle inbetween these...
02:36:482 - Rhythmic the break up to here.
03:14:704 (1) - Why such a short spinner?
03:51:148 (1) - End 1/2 earlier.
04:08:037 (1) - I think the slowdown should come AFTER this slider. Plus I wouldn't make it 0.5 but meh
04:30:037 (1) - Make this last for most of the break too like a bawse.
04:39:148 - Whistles from here onward offend my ears. I think finishes would achieve the 'epic' feel you were probably aiming for better.

Relaxing:
02:36:482 - Rhythmic the break up to here.

Very impressive in general <3

ErufenRito wrote:

MOD

narakucrimson's sign wrote:

30 Seconds to Mars - Kings and Queens

NoHItter wrote:

General
IMO the last kiai section should start on 04:40:941. It seems better on 04:39:163 imo

Relaxing
01:48:915 (3) - This slider actually surprised me when I tried playing it. I play with snaking sliders off. Perhaps make it a regular one instead?
03:24:930 (5) - ^
Lol, Ok fixed both :3

NoHItter wrote:

Cesc's Extreme
I kind of biased against small circle sizes, but other than that, it's good.

cesc wrote:

How can a MAT say something like this? You have no idea of what "small circle sizes" are in osu.
By the way, I appreciate you think it's fine.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Sorry, but the amount of Strobes does not justify a Epilepsy warning, so please remove it.

Fair enough.

Other small suggestions if you want to follow them:

I suggest making the lighting a bit more brighter, it's almost like if it's not there at all. No changes here :3
Please please please, add some Finish hitsounds to the choruses, they would fit so great. Added

- Average:
Approach Rate -1? 6 Feels a bit too fast sometimes. Ok, reduced
02:17:809 (4) - 04:47:386 (4) - remove these? Done
03:40:043 (4,5,6) - please move them down a bit Done

- Larto's:
04:23:161 (6) - new combo? Updated