Hey Gonzvlo!
So let's see what you got here. Nice song choice. xD
It seems that there's duplicate Slow Downs in your Storyboard script. Since they're all at the same location (for the most part), you might as well remove the Slow Down warnings in the .osu storyboards for [Normal] and [Difficult]. Keep the Slow Down warning in the .osb.
That's pretty much the needed stuff there. xp
So let's see the other stuff...
First of all, really cool storyboard. The Photoshop effect and the MUSE flash was really interesting and creative. Especially liked the build up you made as it went into the chorus.
Suggestions!
Your strobes for strobe.png. I'm trying to understand why you decided to place them on the 2nd and 4th 1/1 beat. It's really irregular. xD Are you trying to emphasize the "wrong" in the lyrics? Well, my suggestion here is to try it out 1/1 earlier (e.g. try it on L,100037,1 instead) and see how you like it. It's up to you. :3
Also, the strobes for BNFLASH.png. It's a nice build up, but when I feel it actually reaches to the Kiai chorus, there isn't really that climax I was expecting. Perhaps you can have a full white background that fades from 1 to 0 when you're at 128037 and 224037? (By the way, the line here isn't fully invisible; F,0,224037,226259,1,0.01351351 , you may consider just putting that off to 0) What do you think?
My suggestions might suck, or whatever. XD But that's rather up to you. This is awesome stuff anyway.
So let's see what you got here. Nice song choice. xD
It seems that there's duplicate Slow Downs in your Storyboard script. Since they're all at the same location (for the most part), you might as well remove the Slow Down warnings in the .osu storyboards for [Normal] and [Difficult]. Keep the Slow Down warning in the .osb.
That's pretty much the needed stuff there. xp
So let's see the other stuff...
First of all, really cool storyboard. The Photoshop effect and the MUSE flash was really interesting and creative. Especially liked the build up you made as it went into the chorus.
Suggestions!
Your strobes for strobe.png. I'm trying to understand why you decided to place them on the 2nd and 4th 1/1 beat. It's really irregular. xD Are you trying to emphasize the "wrong" in the lyrics? Well, my suggestion here is to try it out 1/1 earlier (e.g. try it on L,100037,1 instead) and see how you like it. It's up to you. :3
Also, the strobes for BNFLASH.png. It's a nice build up, but when I feel it actually reaches to the Kiai chorus, there isn't really that climax I was expecting. Perhaps you can have a full white background that fades from 1 to 0 when you're at 128037 and 224037? (By the way, the line here isn't fully invisible; F,0,224037,226259,1,0.01351351 , you may consider just putting that off to 0) What do you think?
My suggestions might suck, or whatever. XD But that's rather up to you. This is awesome stuff anyway.