column format is as following: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7 l 8 l 9
pitch and consistency
02:04:313 (124313|7) - move to 3, pitch wise it sound just right
Done02:04:616 (124616|2) - move to 9
I find this too awkward to play, moved it to 1 instead02:04:919 (124919|3) - move to 5
Done02:20:070 (140070|0,140070|3,140070|5) - consider reducing its note density since you use 2 notes on equally loud sound 02:18:252 (138252|2,138252|7) - and 02:20:525 (140525|0,140525|8) - . If you really gonna emphasizes the drum+piano with 3 notes then there's many section you could do so but i suggest keep it 2 notes
I removed a note from that chord02:22:495 (142495|0,142495|3,142495|6) - using 3 notes here are okay, it's like starting a new paragraph in essay, or in charting map, you could say base sequence. it still depends on quantity of instruments presence, mind you
I decided to remove 1 note since it isn't really the start of a phrase (I'm counting them one as 4 bars long)02:26:131 (146131|0,146131|5) - ^
02:27:949 (147949|2,147949|7) - shift them 1 time to the right, column 9 seems quite lonely
02:28:252 (148252|5) - move to 7 for gap consistency with 02:27:949 (147949|8,147949|3) -
02:28:404 (148404|4,148555|3) - shift them 1 time to the right
02:28:707 (148707|4) - swap to left hand side, move to column 1
Done all of this blockat this timing 02:30:070 (150070|6) - , i suggest this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4578581 inheriting and mirroring the previous pattern flow 02:29:464 (149464|2,149464|6,149616|1,149767|5,149767|0) -
I left it as it is because the piano sound is rather noticeable so I decided to keep it correctly pitched02:44:161 (164161|8) - rearrange based on appropriate pitch, i leave it in your hand
I moved it to 8optional: personally i would map like this, but means im imposing my style to your map which might damaged it. you decides I didn't end up doing this, but instead just moved 02:47:343 (167343|7) - to 9 because that lane was empty for a while
02:46:434 (166434|1,166434|3) - press ctrl + h
02:46:586 (166586|5,166737|4) - shift them 1 time to the left
if you follow this optional, then
02:47:192 (167192|0,167343|2) - press ctrl + g, and
02:47:343 (167343|7) - move to 9
02:48:101 (168101|4) - move to 1
optional 2: starting at this time 02:50:373 (170373|3) - , Decided to leave it as it is
part 1: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4578729
part 2: just move 02:51:737 (171737|7) - to 5--
i suggest you follow flow rather than pitching 02:56:434 (176434|6,176434|4,176889|6,176889|4) - , try moving 02:56:434 (176434|6,176434|4) - 1 time to the left
Done and added for when the same melody sequence repeats03:11:131 (191131|2) - no sound here, consider deleting it, and since this break your stair pattern, might as well follow different stair. so,
03:11:586 (191586|5) - you can move this to column 3, following this stair 03:10:980 (190980|4,191283|3,191586|2) -
03:11:737 (191737|4) -
Did all of this, the note was accidental* it might be intentional from what I see throughout your map, so i won't delve further.
start at this timing 02:26:737 (146737|1) - , suggest
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4578912 pitch + flow
Didn't change this, partially because I just like having the new phrase start with a note in 1 for the bass02:30:980 (150980|3,150980|5,150980|2,151283|3,151283|5,151283|1,151586|6,151586|2,151586|3) - despite following pitch, it looks rigid and boring, suggest: starting at this time 02:30:676 (150676|1) -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4578935 Done* 02:32:192 (152192|0,152192|3) - add 1 more note, new base sequence
Didn't add the note however to keep consistent with previous since this isn't too significant to me02:02:495 (122495|3,122495|4) - open reference mode and check your normal difficulty, you might want to do something for note density at current time @ normal difficulty
Decided to leave this bit because I was having throughout this klai 1 note for the rap and 2 notes for voice melody* I'll stop here, well it's a very good map and I hardly find flaw with pitch, simply amazing
* good luck with your map c: