Hello there, I came to do a NM due to your request.
[General]
BG: 1366 x 768 Ok
AI mod: It says that you have started a kiai timing before 15 seconds passing after a kiai timing's end.
Audio: 192 kbps Ok
Offset check: Ok
Etc: .
Columns: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 |[Hard]
00:00:677 (677|2) - i personally think that moving this note to col 1 is better for handspreading
00:03:101 (3101|6) - this note to col 9 for same reason OR place 00:04:313 (4313|6,4313|2) - these in columns 2 and 8
I feel that the piano sounds from 00:04:313 to 00:04:919 should not be ignored in my personal opinion. The sounds in that section are like the link for these notes 00:04:919 (4919|5,5070|6,5222|7,5373|8) . So, i recommend adding notes in 00:04:464 - column 3, 00:04:616 - column 4 and 00:04:767 - column 5.
00:05:525 (5525|2) - moving it to col 1 looks better for me.
00:07:495 (7495|3) - in stead of using only note to represent this, i recommend using 2 notes in this way. 00:07:495 (7495|3) - move it to column 3 and add a note in column 1, it looks good and keeps the consistency of using 2 notes for the piano sound.
00:08:404 - How about this?
http://puu.sh/oByRg/7bd83a292c.jpg . The reason i put it this way is because i felt that it needed to have a higher noterate than the medium difficulty, and 00:09:161 (9161|0) - for the low key sound making it 3 notes.
00:16:434 (16434|0) - I feel that the column 1 looks pretty empty after this timing, how about putting the notes like this? Example:
http://puu.sh/oBziD/9c004c4cbf.jpg00:54:616 (54616|2,54919|2) - how about adding a note to both columns in column 1? there is a base sound there.
01:03:707 (63707|1) - it has the same sound as 01:03:404 with bass sound, i recommend adding notes in columns 5 and 8
01:52:192 (112192|0,112798|1) - I feel that using 3 notes would be more adaptable to the song rather than using LNs to represent the cymbal sound, i recommend adding notes at columns 1 and 9 for 01:52:192 (112192|4,112798|4) - these two timings.
If you applied the previous mod, 01:53:404 (113404|2) - move this to column 1
02:25:525 - I think that this timing is good to represent it with a LN, so how about this?
http://puu.sh/oBAiu/8d5a6498c6.jpg02:25:980 - if you are following the vocals, you should add a note here, adding a note in column 4 makes a good pattern.
02:54:919 - I do not agree with putting 3 notes here, there is no bass sound nor kick sound in this timing, i can see your intention of vocal + 2 notes for these timings 02:55:222 (175222|6,175525|8,175828|7,176131|6) . However, i do not think that the sound is strong enough to be 3 notes. I recommend deleting only 1 note
03:15:828 - Adding a long note in this timing to represent the other sound woldn't disturb the play, add a long note in column 6 and end it here 03:16:434
03:35:221 (215221|0,215827|1) - if you applied the mod to use 3 notes in total to represent the cymbal, here it is too.
I guess my mod is done here, good luck on getting it ranked