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Sirenia - Lost In Life

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JaaiMiTo
20 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
JaaiMiTo
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jueves, 19 de mayo de 2011 at 12:28:25 p.m.

Artist: Sirenia
Title: Lost In Life
Source: Sirenia Gothic Metal, Symphonic Metal
BPM: 120
Filesize: 6880kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.29 stars, 99 notes)
  2. Insane (4.79 stars, 374 notes)
  3. Normal (3.08 stars, 173 notes)
Download: Sirenia - Lost In Life
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vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
vivere
mod irc.
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Rucker
Former osu! Champion: OWC#1
561 posts
Joined August 2009
Rucker
star~
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
Wenas~
En general buena cancion xD algunos detalles :3

[General]
-Alguna razon para no tener el mismo kiai time en ambas diff?
-Un normal y easy no estarian mal~

[Hard]
-Streams mas largos que en insane xD? wtf? adicionalmente el spacing es mas grande, en general los streams entre circles mas juntos son mas faciles que los con circles mas separados osea.... wtf? xD

Y.... eso xD me gusto la cancion y el mapping asi q aqui mi star~
Flute
68 posts
Joined December 2009
Flute
star~^^
senaya
osu! Alumni
5,798 posts
Joined March 2010
senaya
Yes, osu needs more metal ;)

[Normal]
00:12:848 (7,1,2,3) - spacing is confusing here. you use same distance for different time sections.
00:16:348 (5,1) - spacing here is kinda confusing too.
00:18:598 (3,4) - these two notes are kinda strange.
Suggestion: maybe change this section like so? http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/6299 ... ot091e.jpg
I think it will be easier this way.
00:27:848 (5,6) - strange spacing.
00:37:848 (5,6) - this spacing is wrong 100% Circles should be closer (turn on the Distance Snap tool)
Suggestion: maybe like this http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/3273/86792267.jpg
00:38:598 (1,2) - after ^ spacing here feels wrong too. after fixing ^ spacing here feels a lot better.
01:02:098 (4,5) - this spacing feels bad.

[Hard]
Good. A lot better than Normal.
00:58:098 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2) - maybe give this corner stream some curve?
Suggestion: something like this http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/3559/42468880.jpg but i think you can do it better than me.

I like this band. Good luck, I'll leave you a star :)
Ignacio_old
378 posts
Joined August 2009
Ignacio_old
Star~
JaaiMiTo
20 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
JaaiMiTo

senaya wrote:

Yes, osu needs more metal ;)

[Normal]
00:12:848 (7,1,2,3) - spacing is confusing here. you use same distance for different time sections.
00:16:348 (5,1) - spacing here is kinda confusing too.
00:18:598 (3,4) - these two notes are kinda strange.
Suggestion: maybe change this section like so? http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/6299 ... ot091e.jpg
I think it will be easier this way.
00:27:848 (5,6) - strange spacing.
00:37:848 (5,6) - this spacing is wrong 100% Circles should be closer (turn on the Distance Snap tool)
Suggestion: maybe like this http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/3273/86792267.jpg
00:38:598 (1,2) - after ^ spacing here feels wrong too. after fixing ^ spacing here feels a lot better.
01:02:098 (4,5) - this spacing feels bad.

[Hard]
Good. A lot better than Normal.
00:58:098 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2) - maybe give this corner stream some curve?
Suggestion: something like this http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/3559/42468880.jpg but i think you can do it better than me.

I like this band. Good luck, I'll leave you a star :)

thanks for modding ;)
chocomint
Former osu! Champion: OWC#3
202 posts
Joined June 2009
chocomint
good :D
WubWoofWolf
Former osu! Champion: 2017
112 posts
Joined September 2008
WubWoofWolf
=.=
laport
1,240 posts
Joined June 2010
laport
nice map 8-)
eldnl
Former osu!catch Champion: 2013
2,930 posts
Joined March 2010
eldnl
[General]

[*] No vas a usar "Source" ni "tags" ? en Source podrias poner el nombre del disco de la cantante o banda.

[Normal]

[*] Bajale 1 Tick a los sliders, por lo general estos ticks hacen que sea mas dificil.
[*] Podrias hacerle los circulos mas grandes tambien, solo es una sugerencia.
[*] Podrías remappear todo a un Grid level 3, ya que esto provoca muchos errores de spacing. Para cambiarlo anda a la pestaña View > Grid Level > 3.

Te ayudare con los hitsounds

SPOILER
Con los Clap podrías seguir este patron



00:08:348 (1) Agrega un Finish
00:18:848 (4) Whistle
00:19:848 (8) Whistle (Si es que haces el cambio que mencione abajo)
00:20:098 (9) Whistle ^
01:10:848 (2) Whistle
01:11:598 (5,6) Whistle (Al principio del slider)
01:20:348 (1) Finish

00:18:598 (3 ~ 7) Esta parte sonaria mejor si la dejara así:



00:24:348 (6) New Combo
00:25:848 (1) Remove new Combo
00:49:348 (8) Podrias correr este slider al siguiente tick rojo, creo que suena mejor
01:01:598 (2,3) Estas notas se encuentran muy separadas
01:03:098 (6,7) Estas dos estan muy juntas, intenta que todas esten a la misma distancia
01:06:848 (1,2,3,4) Todos estos slider estan muy separados entre sí
01:19:598 (5) No se que ritmo quiciste seguir con este 5, te aconsejo borrarlo.
01:21:848 (3,4) Estan muy separados para un normal.

[Hard]

[*] Esos streams son muy dificiles para un hard, creo.
[*] Podrías mejorar algunos sliders mal hechos
[*] Sigue el mismo patrón de hitsounds que te mencioné arriba.

00:09:348 (1) Remove new combo
00:13:598 (1) Remove new combo
00:14:348 (4) New combo
00:32:848 (1) Remove new combo
00:56:348 (8) New combo
00:56:848 (1) Remove new combo
02:04:348 (6) New combo
02:04:598 (1) Remove new combo
02:05:598 (1) Remove new combo
02:16:348 (9) New combo
02:17:598 (1) Remove new combo
02:18:348 (6) New combo
02:22:348 (10) New combo
02:22:598 (1) Remove new combo




Eso es todo, cualquier duda In-Game

Star ~
JaaiMiTo
20 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
JaaiMiTo

eldnl wrote:

[General]

[*] No vas a usar "Source" ni "tags" ? en Source podrias poner el nombre del disco de la cantante o banda.

[Normal]

[*] Bajale 1 Tick a los sliders, por lo general estos ticks hacen que sea mas dificil.
[*] Podrias hacerle los circulos mas grandes tambien, solo es una sugerencia.
[*] Podrías remappear todo a un Grid level 3, ya que esto provoca muchos errores de spacing. Para cambiarlo anda a la pestaña View > Grid Level > 3.

Te ayudare con los hitsounds

SPOILER
Con los Clap podrías seguir este patron



00:08:348 (1) Agrega un Finish
00:18:848 (4) Whistle
00:19:848 (8) Whistle (Si es que haces el cambio que mencione abajo)
00:20:098 (9) Whistle ^
01:10:848 (2) Whistle
01:11:598 (5,6) Whistle (Al principio del slider)
01:20:348 (1) Finish

00:18:598 (3 ~ 7) Esta parte sonaria mejor si la dejara así:



00:24:348 (6) New Combo
00:25:848 (1) Remove new Combo
00:49:348 (8) Podrias correr este slider al siguiente tick rojo, creo que suena mejor
01:01:598 (2,3) Estas notas se encuentran muy separadas
01:03:098 (6,7) Estas dos estan muy juntas, intenta que todas esten a la misma distancia
01:06:848 (1,2,3,4) Todos estos slider estan muy separados entre sí
01:19:598 (5) No se que ritmo quiciste seguir con este 5, te aconsejo borrarlo.
01:21:848 (3,4) Estan muy separados para un normal.

[Hard]

[*] Esos streams son muy dificiles para un hard, creo.
[*] Podrías mejorar algunos sliders mal hechos
[*] Sigue el mismo patrón de hitsounds que te mencioné arriba.

00:09:348 (1) Remove new combo
00:13:598 (1) Remove new combo
00:14:348 (4) New combo
00:32:848 (1) Remove new combo
00:56:348 (8) New combo
00:56:848 (1) Remove new combo
02:04:348 (6) New combo
02:04:598 (1) Remove new combo
02:05:598 (1) Remove new combo
02:16:348 (9) New combo
02:17:598 (1) Remove new combo
02:18:348 (6) New combo
02:22:348 (10) New combo
02:22:598 (1) Remove new combo




Eso es todo, cualquier duda In-Game

Star ~










wao felicidades muy bien gracias por modiar mi mapa :D
Ignacio_old
378 posts
Joined August 2009
Ignacio_old
Normal ~

01:20:348 - Creo que suena mejor con los hitsound en normal en vez de soft, pero pasa a ser desicion tuya :>


Insane ~

00:10:098 (7) - 1 grid a la derecha
00:22:098 (7) - ^
00:46:098 (7) - ^
02:13:848 (1) - elimina esta nota y haz que el spinner termine en 02:08:098.
02:27:348 (3) - spacing
02:40:848 (1) - ^



N~i~c~e~
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
swish
star~ =)
galvenize
919 posts
Joined June 2010
galvenize
Hey :>

[General]

Offset: 8330
Mp3 is encoded at 320 kbps =>Not rankable
Reencode it to 192Kbps.

[Normal]

01:18:348 (2,3,4,5) - :S, sounds weird. Remove (5). End 01:18:348 (2) - this slider on the red tick. 01:18:835 (x) - Add note here. It should look like this:

01:34:848 (3) - Either extend this slider till next big white tick or add a note at 01:36:335.

[Insane]
00:08:330 (1,2,3,4) - Better make the spacings like 00:44:330 (1,2,3)
00:28:205 (1) - remove finish
01:11:830 (5) - New combo.
01:15:080 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - how about putting 01:15:455 (4) on 01:15:580? A triplet followed by a quintuplet is better imo.
02:15:330 (5,6) - Spacing
02:18:330 (3) - new combo
02:19:830 (7) - ^
02:21:580 (1) - remove new combo. Add it 02:22:330 (4) here.

That's about it :).
ShaggoN
689 posts
Joined September 2008
ShaggoN
Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

[Normal]
  1. 00:16:330 (1,2,3) - Use some distance snap in this combo. Current is not confusing, but looks a little ugly imo.
  2. 00:40:330 (4) - Add finish at the beginning of slider.
  3. 00:44:330 (1) - ^
  4. 00:48:330 (1) - ^
[Insane]
  1. 00:19:580 (10) - This moment (stacking looks ugly). Go to Song Setup > Advanced. Stack Leniency -1
  2. 01:19:455 (1) - Why new combo?
  3. 01:25:955 (7,8) - Place these notes under end of slider.
  4. 02:31:830 (4) - Place it exactly under 3 note.
  5. Also. You can use finish hitsounds in way i mentioned in Normal. You can put finish when you hear strong beat.
Well made map, i dont see any bigger problems sooo... good luck in ranking. Starr'd :D
P.S.
Song is awesome. o.o
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi
Revived!!
Ignacio_old
378 posts
Joined August 2009
Ignacio_old
Insane

02:20:830 - añade un circle
02:21:080 (1,2) - 45~50 de sonido, asi como las tienes no suenan muy bien

suerte jaimito :D

no kd
Max Period
25 posts
Joined March 2012
Max Period
Why is this in the graveyard?

How do I give this a star?
lolitalisa
14 posts
Joined August 2013
lolitalisa
This is actually a really good beatmap :D (and i think osu! really lacks in this genre of music)
HOWEVER.......
Easy:where is the other half of the song??!??!???
Otherwise,everything else is perfect :D
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