11:15 <Garven> : So anyway, have a link?
11:15 <La_Cataline> : ah, right, link
11:15 *La_Cataline is listening to (A Perfect Circle - The Outsider (Apocalypse mix))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/22240]
11:15 <La_Cataline> : ;D
11:16 <Garven> : Oh hey, it's ready eh?
11:16 <Garven> : <3
11:16 <La_Cataline> : aha
11:18 <Garven> : Just looking at the difficulty settings, they seem really high for an easy. :/
11:19 <Garven> : Especially since Normal's is the same except with one tick higher AR, hehe
11:19 <Garven> : Lower HP drain by at least two, AR/OD by at least one please
11:19 <La_Cataline> : ah i must have forgotten about that lol
11:19 <La_Cataline> : k k
11:20 <Garven> : 00:56:116 (4) - I'm wary of stacks under slider ends since it's hard to tell what the rhythm is going to be.
11:21 <La_Cataline> : i can remove that circle and remap a bit
11:21 <Garven> : 01:28:940 (2,3,4) - And these aren't really good for easy difficulties either: hard to tell when it's going to end, and with the next one
11:21 <Garven> : starting so soon after, I can see it getting pretty confusing
11:22 <Garven> : 01:41:293 (2,3) - Might be okay since it's a slider underneath, but I'd still rather it not be that way, hehe
11:23 <Garven> : 01:55:057 (3,4) - I've found that cutting sliders like these look much much better if you can make it so the body of the slider doesn't
11:23 <Garven> : overlap with the circle part of the other slider.
11:23 <Garven> : 02:01:410 (1) - Another stack under a slider end
11:24 <Garven> : Eh, there are a few others. Fix 'em or not. ;p
11:24 <Garven> : 02:25:056 (2,5) - Same comment as earlier
11:24 <Garven> : They'd be okay if there weren't notes so soon after they stop
11:25 <Garven> : 02:33:527 (2,3,4,5) - I don't know if new players would reliably understand this rhythm as a stack. They might just kind of click fast and
11:25 <Garven> : half get it.
11:26 <Garven> : 02:43:762 (1) - Kiiind of soon after a spinner... though it does fit with the general difficulty of the map. Eh, I guess it's fine. :P
11:26 <Garven> : 02:45:879 (5) - Forget a finish/stacked anyway ;p
11:27 <Garven> : 02:51:526 (6) - Definitely not in an easy, please.
11:27 <Garven> : Yeah, keep those things in mind that I mentioned as you go through the easy and see what you can tweak to make it more
11:27 <Garven> : newbie-friendly
11:29 <Garven> : In normal: 01:32:822 (1) - The slider ticks make it really obvious that this isn't symmetrical.
11:32 <Garven> : In Hard:
11:33 <Garven> : 00:38:469 (4,5) - This jump doesn't ready very well at all considering the pattern. I kept thinking it was going to the center over and
11:33 <Garven> : over and I get bunches of 50s, hehe
11:33 <Garven> : read*
11:34 <Garven> : 01:02:822 (1,2,3) - :/
11:34 <Garven> : Maybe stack the 2 and 3? I can't feel the jump/anti jump there.
11:35 <Garven> : 01:17:292 (3) - Remove whistle from slider slide. Soft whistle sounds bad there.
11:36 <Garven> : 01:36:528 (2) - ^
11:36 <Garven> : Eh, I guess you're using them on purpose
11:36 <Garven> : nm then
11:38 <Garven> : Good stuff as always. <3
11:44 <La_Cataline> : okay i guess i fixed everything o.o
11:44 <Garven> : Hehe, okay, lemme check again
11:44 <La_Cataline> : thank you <3
11:47 <Garven> : 02:08:822 (6,1) - spacing
11:47 <Garven> : in easy
11:49 <Garven> : 03:07:056 (1,2) - spacing as well orz how did I miss these? D:
11:50 <Garven> : 03:15:526 (1,2,3) - This is kinda pushing it for an easy. But it's at the very end. Eh. I'll leave it up to you if you want to try something
11:50 <Garven> : else or not.
11:51 <Garven> : 02:18:351 (5) - Stack under a slider in case you missed it
11:53 <La_Cataline> : 03:10:232 (4,5,6,7) - i probably should something wit these, right?
11:54 <La_Cataline> : *do
11:54 <La_Cataline> : *with
11:54 <La_Cataline> : orz
11:55 <Garven> : Yeah probably. :P
11:55 <Garven> : Other diffs are good now though
11:59 <La_Cataline> : k updated :3
12:01 <Garven> : Alright, lookin' good to me now.