1. Hard (4,79 stars, 395 notes)
2. Odaril's Normal (2,3 stars, 196 notes)

Louis Cyphre wrote:

00:54:646 - короткий брейк.
Я бы настоятельно порекомндовал бы увеличить велосити до 1,8 и поставить Distance Snap Devisor на 1.0x.
И переспейсить, будет лучше.

А так гуд. =P

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Блин... эта песня застряла у меня в башке *_*

И кстати. Nusha - Moy Zaychik.

Odaril wrote:

Finally done >_< sorry for taking so long

[attachment=0:3bd01]Nusha - Moy Zaychik (ZLOdeuka) [Odaril's Normal].osu[/attachment:3bd01]

Garven wrote:

Sorry for the delays. D:

[General][Odaril's Normal]
00:42:384 (1) - Remove new combo The new combo is here to warn for the slight speed change. So, nope.
00:49:390 (1) - ^ same
01:02:966 (4,1) - As nice as this is, I'm wary of an anti-jump in the easiest of a set. ;_; let's say that it can be fine because it's a new combo. We'll see :/
01:45:883 (1) - Worryingly soon after a spinner for the easiest of the set. Agreed, removed.
01:53:765 (2) - I found this to flow better on the opposite side of the screen. o.O ? okay
02:25:077 (1) - Didn't feel like a good spot for a spinner, imo. Lazily changed.
02:31:427 (1) - ^ Changed.
03:30:328 (2) - Spacing? For 0,04x ;_;
Nice flow in this diff. I thought the diff was terrible, appears it's not as terrible as I thought.

Garven wrote:

Sorry for the delays. D:

[General]
Please set a preview point, and make sure it's the same on all difficulties. Usually right before a chorus works well, so maybe at 00:55:083?
You have hitsounds for custom set 1 that aren't being used. Please remove these files and full resubmit.
Is this mapset complete? If so, please move it to Pending instead of WIP.

[Storybaord]
Do you think you could get rid of this white noise around the heart image?

SPOILER

[Odaril's Normal]
00:42:384 (1) - Remove new combo
00:49:390 (1) - ^
01:02:966 (4,1) - As nice as this is, I'm wary of an anti-jump in the easiest of a set.
01:45:883 (1) - Worryingly soon after a spinner for the easiest of the set.
01:53:765 (2) - I found this to flow better on the opposite side of the screen.
02:25:077 (1) - Didn't feel like a good spot for a spinner, imo.
02:31:427 (1) - ^
03:30:328 (2) - Spacing?
Nice flow in this diff.

[Hard]
Add Odaril to tags in this difficulty.
It doesn't make sense to have a higher OD than AR. Please set AR and OD to the same rate (I found reducing OD 1 worked best) and reduce HP drain by at least 1. Such a slow dong doesn't really feel like it demands a high drain.
00:53:551 (2) - This anti-jump doesn't play well to me.
02:25:515 (1,2) - This spacing intentional?
02:34:492 - Hrm, maybe start the break here where the kiai ends?
02:52:666 (1,7) - These aren't very visually appealing. Think you can smooth out the curve a bit better?
Really nice. Wish there wasn't those little bits of over-mapping, but the flow is pretty good.

Aleks719 wrote:

Приветы. всё есть чисто пожелания, естественно.
[Hard]
00:38:223 (1,2,3) - я бы сделал в одной точке, т.к. по мне переход сложноват с быстрых битов на медленный слайдер.в точке это не так заметно. Нормально) не исправленно
00:45:778 (5) - закончить его здесь 00:46:325 , на белой палочке)не уверена что так лучше но подправила..
00:47:201 (1,2) - поближе бы D: самый раз)
00:48:734 - в этом тайминг поинте громкие клэпы. Да, громкость средняя. Но блин, мои наушники лажают на низах, и если в них мне так лупит по ушам, то в нормальных наушниках тем более. сбавить на 1.5-2 пункта, имхо.не исправленно
00:57:711 (5,6) - эм. такая дистанция правда задумана? переназначь (6)-слайдер в реверс, будет играбельно.ноу.
01:23:986 (7) - в музыку, но что-то не то.Мб громкость попробуй уменьшить для 7го или 6го и 7го битов.не тронуто.
01:48:964 - спиннер зажал звук, я негодую. предлагая поставить бит, а спиннер сдвинуть хоть на 1/4 с сохранением конца, естессно.ууу..тут ты совсем не прав)
02:58:578 (1) - я бы бит добавил, вот.ноу
03:31:641 (1,2) - тоже аццкая дистанция, я б делал симметрию не такой симметричной)нетронуто.

вот и всё, удачи в продвижении, звезда.

01:02:966 (4,1) - As nice as this is, I'm wary of an anti-jump in the easiest of a set. ;_; let's say that it can be fine because it's a new combo. We'll see :/

Crazy Jay wrote:

[Hard]
00:45:778 (5) - move the end(00:46:325) to (00:46:216) I'm confused by this ... Leaving aside the so
00:59:025 (7) - change dis plz o.o no
02:54:418 (1) - exchange the begin & end (ctrl+alt+r) ~no

smooth song
star

Hitomi May wrote:

STAR
думаю модинг попробую сделать
хоть не особо умею)

Vass_Bass wrote:

Привет
В след. раз пиши Mod4mod пожалуйста

Odaril's Normal
00:44:135 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - look through this combos
01:52:452 (1,2,3) - ^ same problem
01:58:801 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

В остальном вроде хорошая мапа, интересный Сб
стар~

Leorda wrote:

Privet my friend!

Sorry for delay

[General]
1) If you make a fade in/out, you should open OSB and find "0.0" like 0.002917588. you should change this, otherwise the the frame will be lost.
2) I have 2 OSB, delete the wrong one
3) All diff are not set the preview point



[Hard]
On design mode, warning.png should enable the Diff. Specific in this diff. Otherwise warning.png will display on Oda-chan's Normal. ups~ Thx ^^

01:00:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These pattern are uncomfortable for me, maybe?
01:14:790 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:43:693 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
left as is

Not Bad
STAR

Tonoko wrote:

:oops: hi

pretty good

not too much thing I can say

but remenbe to put the timing point before the note, especially in the volume-changing timing point.

hmm I dont really feel the x2 part is necessary, but, that's your choice. and it's not too hard.><

nice map.star

Fight69 wrote:

Hello there

[Odaril's Normal]

WORST DIFF EVAR DELETE IT DELETE IT !!!!! no u

I'll do it in french for him (too lazy to write everything in english =w=) feignasse

00:26:180 (1) - Un 'tit peu caché par le slider précédaent IMO hm, ok
00:40:413 (4) - 1 grid a gauche (nazi ftw) ok
01:41:503 (3) - Spacing volontaire ? non :/
02:30:770 (3) - New combo ? Pourquoi pas ?

T'as oublié un preview point crétin ! Si tu avais regardé mon mod quelques posts avant, tu aurais vu que je l'avais vu, sous-être !!!

(Odaril will kill me when he'll sees this mod, but well... =w=)
Volontiers.

_llkey_18 wrote:

:)

larch wrote:

star)

1. how about translate 'normal/hard' to russian as the diffs' names? (idk whether osu support it or not)

1. 00:54:865 (T) - too short, not neccessary imo
2. 02:05:151 (T) - ^
3. 01:06:032 (1) - feels out of music, not suggest using a spinner here, well, only a suggestion. (i think 01:48:948 (1) this is a good spinner, for example)
4. 01:55:736 (1) - ^
5. 02:02:743 (1) - ^
6. 02:16:099 (1) - ^
7. 03:12:154 (1) - ^
8. 01:24:424 (T) - a note here? just the same place of 7
9. 02:33:397 (T) - ended too early for this section?
10. this diff playes well, the spinners are maybe my personal taste, so you don't need to care too much, I'm only writting something after i played your map :P

1. hey your preview point, Odaril

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. how about translate 'normal/hard' to russian as the diffs' names? (idk whether osu support it or not)

hmm, that's interesting, I think

[Hard]:

1. 00:54:865 (T) - too short, not neccessary imook~
2. 02:05:151 (T) - ^ok~
3. 01:06:032 (1) - feels out of music, not suggest using a spinner here, well, only a suggestion. (i think 01:48:948 (1) this is a good spinner, for example)not corrected
4. 01:55:736 (1) - ^not corrected
5. 02:02:743 (1) - ^not corrected
6. 02:16:099 (1) - ^not corrected
7. 03:12:154 (1) - ^not corrected
8. 01:24:424 (T) - a note here? just the same place of 7ok~
9. 02:33:397 (T) - ended too early for this section?ok~
10. this diff playes well, the spinners are maybe my personal taste, so you don't need to care too much, I'm only writting something after i played your map

[Normal]:

1. hey your preview point, Odaril

ok ~

that's all, nice one and star~

Thite wrote:

Nicemap

y u c a wrote:

hi :3 Hello~ ^^


Hard

you use many spiner D: I will try
i think you should add rhythm

main volume is small
nomal's volume is 5
so your diff's volume should change 5
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
ok~

01:24:424~add rhythem no
02:33:835 add note? no
03:11:935 ^? no


good song~:3

La Cataline wrote:

irc stuff
seems alright
song makes me sick

AnGelL wrote:

Its really good O.O' better than mine anyway~
Star

rust45 wrote:

[Hard]
Your spacing seems to be rather inconsistent, but it's not too bad as you do have new combos when the spacing drastically changes and I'm able to read it.
00:25:962 (2) - This note is kinda hard to see as it is hidden under the slider.
01:06:907 (1) - Need a New Combo on this.
01:48:948 (1) - ^
01:56:393 (1) - ^
02:03:400 (1) - ^
02:09:969 (1) - ^
02:16:975 (1) - ^
03:06:023 (1) - ^
03:13:030 (1) - ^
Your spinners were like that due to a glitch, but they should have new combos on them.
I don't really think the fast section fits, but it's playable so, it's your choice.

Seems fine, I guess I can shoot a star.