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Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Hard

00:23:991 (5,6) - spacing. the distance here should be the same as that between 00:22:896 (1,2)
00:27:713 (1,2) - it feels not good that player wait such a long time before hitting the next note. and I think note 2 should be 1/4 earlier. I recommand you using the note 2 as end of a slider and changing 1 into a single circle.
00:31:655 (5,6) - spacing. make them not touch each other.
00:45:011 (1) - new combo?
00:50:485 (1) - remove new combo
00:50:923 (2) - add new combo
00:59:025 (7) - new combo? or make it farther away from 00:58:149 (6)
01:14:790 (9) - new combo
01:15:009 (1) - remove new combo
01:39:423 (4) - this note hears bad. remove it.


Normal

02:07:779 - add a note?
02:09:531 - ^
02:22:887 (5) - add a repeat?
03:21:569 (1,2,3,4) - it's kiai time and I think there should be more notes
03:29:452 (1,2,1) - bad end...more notes here.


nice song and good sb 8-)
Crazy Jay
[Hard]
00:45:778 (5) - move the end(00:46:325) to (00:46:216)
00:59:025 (7) - change dis plz
02:54:418 (1) - exchange the begin & end (ctrl+alt+r)

smooth song
star
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-
Hard[/b]:

00:45:668 (4,5): Just saying but instead of

I'd make it:
~you are right, so much better~thx
It follows the flow of the song better and sounds less harsh methinks. But whatever you do, it'll still be fine.
03:21:569 (1): remove new combo~corrected
03:28:576 (1): ^ ~corrected

Well, I don't really know what else needs modding, everything looks fine to me in both diffs + it's a nice song.
Go harass some MATs, maybe they've got a lot to say.[/quote]


Thx~
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-
Hard

00:23:991 (5,6) - spacing. the distance here should be the same as that between 00:22:896 (1,2) ~ok
00:27:713 (1,2) - it feels not good that player wait such a long time before hitting the next note. and I think note 2 should be 1/4 earlier. I recommand you using the note 2 as end of a slider and changing 1 into a single circle. ~ok
00:31:655 (5,6) - spacing. make them not touch each other. ~ok
00:45:011 (1) - new combo? ~ok
00:50:485 (1) - remove new combo ~ok
00:50:923 (2) - add new combo ~ok
00:59:025 (7) - new combo? or make it farther away from 00:58:149 (6) ~ok
01:14:790 (9) - new combo ~ok
01:15:009 (1) - remove new combo ~ok
01:39:423 (4) - this note hears bad. remove it. ~ok


nice song and good sb 8-)[/quote]


Thx~
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

Crazy Jay wrote:

[Hard]
00:45:778 (5) - move the end(00:46:325) to (00:46:216) I'm confused by this ... Leaving aside the so
00:59:025 (7) - change dis plz o.o no
02:54:418 (1) - exchange the begin & end (ctrl+alt+r) ~no

smooth song
star
Thx
Hitomi May
STAR
думаю модинг попробую сделать
хоть не особо умею)
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

Hitomi May wrote:

STAR
думаю модинг попробую сделать
хоть не особо умею)

просто хотябы просмотри что тебе не нрав?
мб подправлю)
Vass_Bass
Привет
В след. раз пиши Mod4mod пожалуйста

Odaril's Normal
00:44:135 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - look through this combos
01:52:452 (1,2,3) - ^ same problem
01:58:801 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

В остальном вроде хорошая мапа, интересный Сб
стар~
Shiro
A mod for the Hard... You should add another diff imo. My Normal isn't much beginner-friendly, so add an Easy.
A few things to fix beforehand:
- no preview point is set
- the high speed warning also displays on my diff, although there's no speed change then. Make it difficulty specific.

Anyway:
The hitsounds are too low. Make them louder. Right now it's hard to play because there's no sound to base one's timing on.
Generally, avoid slow downs to match notes held by the singer (like 00:24:648 (6) - or 00:32:092 (6) - or 00:38:880 (5) - etc) because it is always surprising, especially when the speed is cut by half (like here), and stops the movement of the mouse. Moreover, if there are notes after said slider, the spacing still is the same, and so is the mouse movement: you go from fast to slow to fast again, and it's really confusing.
00:24:648 (6,1) - This overlap is easily avoidable (you'd need to change the shape of the slider to keep the spacing consistent, maybe a circle that goes to the right, and the circle placed on the left), and that particular pattern would look a lot better.
00:30:779 (3,4,5) - Spacing here is inconsistent (the notes aren't spaced evenly and there is the same time difference) and the overlap makes the pattern look bad.
01:20:374 (5,6) - Although it is nice, the overlap with (3) makes it pretty much not possible to see.
01:20:483 (6,7) - This jump is unexpected because the spacing was regular so far. Remove it ?


I'm adding a fixed version of my dff, too:
Download: Nusha - Moy Zaychik (ZLOdeuka) [Odaril's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

Vass_Bass wrote:

Привет
В след. раз пиши Mod4mod пожалуйста

Odaril's Normal
00:44:135 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - look through this combos
01:52:452 (1,2,3) - ^ same problem
01:58:801 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

В остальном вроде хорошая мапа, интересный Сб
стар~
спасибо :)учту
Leorda
Privet my friend!

Sorry for delay :(

[General]
1) If you make a fade in/out, you should open OSB and find "0.0" like 0.002917588. you should change this, otherwise the the frame will be lost.
2) I have 2 OSB, delete the wrong one
3) All diff are not set the preview point

[Oda-chan's Normal]
00:44:135 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This thingy are disaster. The problem is the notes in timeline, not at beat placement. You should re-arrange the circle and slider at timeline, otherwise, the player will be chaos to play this, especially there's some two notes at same tick and wrong sound
01:52:452 (1,2,3) - ^
01:58:801 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

03:10:840 (2) - Stack with 03:09:088 (4)?

[Hard]
On design mode, warning.png should enable the Diff. Specific in this diff. Otherwise warning.png will display on Oda-chan's Normal.

01:00:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These pattern are uncomfortable for me, maybe?
01:14:790 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:43:693 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^


Not Bad
STAR
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

Leorda wrote:

Privet my friend!

Sorry for delay :(

[General]
1) If you make a fade in/out, you should open OSB and find "0.0" like 0.002917588. you should change this, otherwise the the frame will be lost.
2) I have 2 OSB, delete the wrong one
3) All diff are not set the preview point



[Hard]
On design mode, warning.png should enable the Diff. Specific in this diff. Otherwise warning.png will display on Oda-chan's Normal. ups~ Thx ^^

01:00:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These pattern are uncomfortable for me, maybe?
01:14:790 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:43:693 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^


^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
left as is

Not Bad
STAR
thx =*
Tonoko
:oops: hi

pretty good

not too much thing I can say

but remenbe to put the timing point before the note, especially in the volume-changing timing point.

hmm I dont really feel the x2 part is necessary, but, that's your choice. and it's not too hard.><

nice map.star
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

Tonoko wrote:

:oops: hi

pretty good

not too much thing I can say

but remenbe to put the timing point before the note, especially in the volume-changing timing point.

hmm I dont really feel the x2 part is necessary, but, that's your choice. and it's not too hard.><

nice map.star
Thx Tonoko ;)
Fight69
Hello there :)

[Odaril's Normal]

WORST DIFF EVAR DELETE IT DELETE IT !!!!!

I'll do it in french for him (too lazy to write everything in english =w=)

00:26:180 (1) - Un 'tit peu caché par le slider précédant IMO
00:40:413 (4) - 1 grid a gauche (nazi ftw)
01:41:503 (3) - Spacing volontaire ?
02:30:770 (3) - New combo ?

T'as oublié un preview point crétin !

[Hard]

I don't like very much the 2x part, don't fit very well with the song IMO

02:34:492 - Move the blue break at 02:34:492
03:28:576 (9) - New combo
03:29:452 (1) - No new combo
03:30:328 (5) - New combo ((5),(6) and (7) have a different spacing, that's why you should add a new combo)

Nice mapset !
~Starz'd !

(Odaril will kill me when he'll see this mod, but well... =w=)
Shiro
Leorda, you didn't mod the latest version. I checked your mod and you pointed out things that didnt' exist. :V


Fight69 wrote:

Hello there :)

[Odaril's Normal]

WORST DIFF EVAR DELETE IT DELETE IT !!!!! no u

I'll do it in french for him (too lazy to write everything in english =w=) feignasse

00:26:180 (1) - Un 'tit peu caché par le slider précédaent IMO hm, ok
00:40:413 (4) - 1 grid a gauche (nazi ftw) ok
01:41:503 (3) - Spacing volontaire ? non :/
02:30:770 (3) - New combo ? Pourquoi pas ?

T'as oublié un preview point crétin ! Si tu avais regardé mon mod quelques posts avant, tu aurais vu que je l'avais vu, sous-être !!!

(Odaril will kill me when he'll sees this mod, but well... =w=)
Volontiers. :D
Bah tu vois t'as pas été complètement inutile ! o/

Download: Nusha - Moy Zaychik (ZLOdeuka) [Odaril's Normal].osu
_llkey_18
:)
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

_llkey_18 wrote:

:)
:-* _llkey_18
larch
star)
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

larch wrote:

star)

Спасипа смешарик)
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. how about translate 'normal/hard' to russian as the diffs' names? (idk whether osu support it or not)
[Hard]:
  1. 00:54:865 (T) - too short, not neccessary imo
  2. 02:05:151 (T) - ^
  3. 01:06:032 (1) - feels out of music, not suggest using a spinner here, well, only a suggestion. (i think 01:48:948 (1) this is a good spinner, for example)
  4. 01:55:736 (1) - ^
  5. 02:02:743 (1) - ^
  6. 02:16:099 (1) - ^
  7. 03:12:154 (1) - ^
  8. 01:24:424 (T) - a note here? just the same place of 7
  9. 02:33:397 (T) - ended too early for this section?
  10. this diff playes well, the spinners are maybe my personal taste, so you don't need to care too much, I'm only writting something after i played your map :P
[Normal]:
  1. hey your preview point, Odaril
that's all, nice one and star~
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
  1. how about translate 'normal/hard' to russian as the diffs' names? (idk whether osu support it or not)
hmm, that's interesting, I think

[Hard]:
  1. 00:54:865 (T) - too short, not neccessary imook~
  2. 02:05:151 (T) - ^ok~
  3. 01:06:032 (1) - feels out of music, not suggest using a spinner here, well, only a suggestion. (i think 01:48:948 (1) this is a good spinner, for example)not corrected
  4. 01:55:736 (1) - ^not corrected
  5. 02:02:743 (1) - ^not corrected
  6. 02:16:099 (1) - ^not corrected
  7. 03:12:154 (1) - ^not corrected
  8. 01:24:424 (T) - a note here? just the same place of 7ok~
  9. 02:33:397 (T) - ended too early for this section?ok~
  10. this diff playes well, the spinners are maybe my personal taste, so you don't need to care too much, I'm only writting something after i played your map :P
[Normal]:
  1. hey your preview point, Odaril
ok ~

that's all, nice one and star~
Thx ~ ^^
Thite
Nicemap :)
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

Thite wrote:

Nicemap :)
thx my friend ^^
y u c a
hi :3

Nomal

01:24:643~add rhythm
01:42:379~start spiner
01:49:824 (2) remove whistle
01:50:262 (3) add whistle
01:55:736~start spiner
02:24:639^
02:31:208^


Hard

you use many spiner D:
i think you should add rhythm

main volume is small
nomal's volume is 5
so your diff's volume should change 5

01:24:424~add rhythem
02:33:835 add note?
03:11:935 ^?


good song~:3
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

y u c a wrote:

hi :3 Hello~ ^^


Hard

you use many spiner D: I will try
i think you should add rhythm

main volume is small
nomal's volume is 5
so your diff's volume should change 5
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
ok~

01:24:424~add rhythem no
02:33:835 add note? no
03:11:935 ^? no


good song~:3
Thx~ :3
Astom
Nice to me :3

Star~
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-
^_^
La Cataline
irc stuff
seems alright
song makes me sick
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

La Cataline wrote:

irc stuff
seems alright
song makes me sick

very helpful Thx ~
An-Don
Its really good O.O' better than mine anyway~
Star :D
rust45
[Hard]
Your spacing seems to be rather inconsistent, but it's not too bad as you do have new combos when the spacing drastically changes and I'm able to read it.
00:25:962 (2) - This note is kinda hard to see as it is hidden under the slider.
01:06:907 (1) - Need a New Combo on this.
01:48:948 (1) - ^
01:56:393 (1) - ^
02:03:400 (1) - ^
02:09:969 (1) - ^
02:16:975 (1) - ^
03:06:023 (1) - ^
03:13:030 (1) - ^
Your spinners were like that due to a glitch, but they should have new combos on them.
I don't really think the fast section fits, but it's playable so, it's your choice.

Seems fine, I guess I can shoot a star.
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

AnGelL wrote:

Its really good O.O' better than mine anyway~
Star :D

wow... Thx :)
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

rust45 wrote:

[Hard]
Your spacing seems to be rather inconsistent, but it's not too bad as you do have new combos when the spacing drastically changes and I'm able to read it.
00:25:962 (2) - This note is kinda hard to see as it is hidden under the slider.
01:06:907 (1) - Need a New Combo on this.
01:48:948 (1) - ^
01:56:393 (1) - ^
02:03:400 (1) - ^
02:09:969 (1) - ^
02:16:975 (1) - ^
03:06:023 (1) - ^
03:13:030 (1) - ^
Your spinners were like that due to a glitch, but they should have new combos on them.
I don't really think the fast section fits, but it's playable so, it's your choice.

Seems fine, I guess I can shoot a star.

corrected~

Thx rust
Shiro

y u c a wrote:

Nomal

01:24:643~add rhythm いいえ
01:42:379~start spiner いいえ too soon
01:49:824 (2) remove whistle やだ
01:50:262 (3) add whistle やだ
01:55:736~start spiner いいえ
02:24:639^ いいえ
02:31:208^ いいえ
:<
NoHitter
General
The .mp3 fades out at a part with lyrics? Is this intentional or a mistake in cropping? If it's the second then please fix it.

Odaril's Normal
All good.

Hard
Could you make the Warning SB more visible?
00:44:573 (1,2) - Spacing here could be confusing because it's part of the same 1/2 stream and there's no real indication in the song for a spacing change.
00:49:828 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:40:847 (3) - Don't stack this on (2). Looks horrible.
01:59:896 (7,8) - Spacing here could be confusing because it's part of the same 1/2 stream and there's no real indication in the song for a spacing change.
02:28:142 (3) - ^
02:56:597 (x) - Map this part.
03:00:768 (x) - ^
karlaeda
прикольненько звездую
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

NoHItter wrote:

General
The .mp3 fades out at a part with lyrics? Is this intentional or a mistake in cropping? If it's the second then please fix it. So deep in thought

Hard
Could you make the Warning SB more visible?
00:44:573 (1,2) - Spacing here could be confusing because it's part of the same 1/2 stream and there's no real indication in the song for a spacing change.
00:49:828 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:40:847 (3) - Don't stack this on (2). Looks horrible.
01:59:896 (7,8) - Spacing here could be confusing because it's part of the same 1/2 stream and there's no real indication in the song for a spacing change.
02:28:142 (3) - ^
02:56:597 (x) - Map this part.
03:00:768 (x) - ^
Thanks but I did not change anything except SB
Garven
Recheck~

[Hard]
00:58:149 (6,1) - Not digging this anti-jump right after the slider jump.

Let me know if you want to change it or not and I'll bubble.

Edit: k

:U
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-
[Hard]
00:58:149 (6,1) - Not digging this anti-jump right after the slider jump. ~OK
Andrea
Let's go.

Ranked~
Fight69
Congrats for your first ranked map ! :)
Louis Cyphre
Мои поздравления ^_~
Shiro
woah shit, nice :)
Leorda
Gratz Deuka-san :D
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-
WoW

thx ^^ <3
galvenize
Good job on getting this ranked ;) .
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

galvenize wrote:

Good job on getting this ranked ;) .


Yeah. thx )
Andrea
Heart fixed.
Rost94
ну почему делают только русский поп ))
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

Rost94 wrote:

ну почему делают только русский поп ))
делай русский рок или что ты хочешь?

нравится мне
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