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ZUN - The Youkai Mountain ~ Mysterious Mountain

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Topic Starter
Deif
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martes, 03 de mayo de 2011 at 0:27:35

Artist: ZUN
Title: The Youkai Mountain ~ Mysterious Mountain
Source: Touhou
Tags: mountain of faith aya shameimaru Tenshi-nyan Numbers 596108
BPM: 168
Filesize: 4044kb
Play Time: 02:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. 596108's Taiko (4,83 stars, 794 notes)
  2. Easy (1,07 stars, 115 notes)
  3. Lunatic (4,98 stars, 436 notes)
  4. Normal (3,05 stars, 200 notes)
  5. Tenshi's Hard (4,73 stars, 363 notes)
Download: ZUN - The Youkai Mountain ~ Mysterious Mountain
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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1st beatmap. This is Aya's Theme from Touhou 10 - Mountain of Faith. Enjoy =)

Easy
Normal
Hard -> Tenshi-nyan
Lunatic

Taiko -> Numbers 596108

Please, redownload if you downloaded it before Feb 13th, 2011 (GMT+1)
mitsu___xx
Very cool!
SiyouYuki_old
Jumps are tricky, but the BM is great =)
Topic Starter
Deif
On insane level, drain is too high... should I reduce it?
MoodyRPG
muy bien deif,esta muy bueno tu beatmap,ojala que sigas haciendo buenos maps men

saludos y felicidades
SiyouYuki_old
I think drain is perfect for insane difficulty ^^
Topic Starter
Deif
Anyway, it has to be modded... I haven't introduced claps, whistles, etc...
Cuuuuri
Hi hi(ノ゚ω゚)ノ

[General]
offset..? 611
Note the shift. start at 00:04:896

[Insane]
00:15:567 (1) - [end at 00:17:352] better

i like this song.
LesTrucsRoses
Normal
SPOILER
Because of sliders like 00:23:781 (1), this is a normal/hard map. This means you should consider making an easy.
00:52:571 (2,3,4,1,2) - too hard for a normal. Maybe you should rename this to hard, increase the difficulty, and follow the above mod's suggestions.
01:09:893 (8) - Make this slider end at 01:12:036

02:02:035 (7) - New combo
02:12:749 (5) - 02:14:892

Insane
SPOILER
! Increase the hitcircle size by 1 tick.
00:19:852 (1) - This slider is under the HP Drain bar.

00:32:353 (1,2,3,4,5) - These jumps might be too far apart.
00:45:031 (4,5,6,7) - I don't think 1/16th notes are rankable at this bpm.
00:49:852 (9,1) - This jump might be too far apart.
02:11:142 (8,9) - This jump might be too far apart.
Senobe
Huhu.

Interesting beatmap!
It will get ranked for sure, just hang in there.
Well. I wish you good luck and all the best. ;)

Ad astra~ ヾ(>ω< ヾ)
[milky]
[General]:
Offset 62 -> resnap all notes.
Fix Timing Sections.
Reduce volume by 3 levels.

[Normal]:
00:33:812 - end at 00:34:883, add hit finish
01:13:821 (1,2,3,4) - move left 1 grid
01:15:071 - hit finish
01:49:178 - add note + hit finish
02:09:178 - remove slider, place a note
02:09:535 - place a note
02:09:892 - ^
02:10:249 - ^
02:10:606 - place a Slider, end at 02:11:142
02:11:321 - place a note
02:17:035 (2,3) - 1 grid left, 1 grid down
02:29:356 - add hit finish

[Insane]:
Lower HP Drain and Overall difficulty by 1.

00:08:990 - fix distance
00:12:874 - move right to white stick
00:12:963 (5,6) - 1/8 divisor, move right 1 stick, fix spacing
00:15:597 - spinner end at 00:17:026
01:04:402 - 1/4 divisor, move right to a blue stick
01:04:491 - move right to white stick, fix spacing.
01:15:071 - add hit finish
01:59:446 - 1 grid left
01:59:491 - fix spacing
01:59:535 - ^
02:03:732 - 1 grid right
02:03:776 - fix spacing
02:03:821 - ^
02:08:910 (6,7,8) - move to same line with 5
02:18:776 - move right on white stick, fix spacing
02:20:338 (6,7,8) - move to same line with 5
02:29:356 - add hit finish


Suggestions:

[General]:
make hard difficulty.

[Insane]
00:12:919 (4,5,6,7) -
00:45:061 (4,5,6,7) -
01:06:053 (5,6,7,8) -
and everything similar to it, replace by slider or make it 3 notes with 1/4 divisor!
Jumping spacing looks ugly, try to make it more accurate..

Good luck
+ Star...
Topic Starter
Deif
[General]
Offset: Changed to 611, it fits better than 62.
Volume: Reduced by 3 levels.

[Normal]
Cut some sliders.
Included finish sounds.
And more slight changes.

[Insane]
Lowed HP Drain and Overall difficulty by 1 (yeah, easier to pass).
Replaced 1/6 and 1/8 by sliders.
Made deadly jumps less deadly :P

I'm now working on Easy and Hard level, and maybe i'll make a CTB level... to those who love jumpy and tricky maps ;)

Thanks specially to milky way, Qrool and LesTrucsRose. Your tips are helping me to improve this song.
And thanks to the rest of you, you're cheering me up to finish it ^^

EDIT:
Easy level completed: Feel free to express your opinion =)
Tenshi-nyan
Gonna try n mod a bit...

EASY
------
Resnap 2:12:032 to 2:29:353, better resnap all notes.

NORMAL
------

0:17:753 Make spinner 1 beat longer and replace note.
0:52 Remove note right after the spinner
2:07 - 2:11 I think that's too difficult for normal. Maybe remap that part?

INSANE
-------

Seems fine to me. All the jumps make my mouse go nuts though.


Star~ because this map feels so much better than my map. ( http://osu.ppy.sh/s/22033 )
Maybe you'd consider adding my map to yours. As a guest diff you know.
Topic Starter
Deif
Recent modifications:

[Easy]
Resnapped some notes.

[Normal]
Changed spinners a little bit.
Remapped some parts, I think this is a REAL Normal difficulty :P

Added guest difficulty, thanks to Tenshi-nyan ^^. I'll make some slight changes on your map, but don't worry... it'll look like the original map.

Should I make a CTB-only difficulty?
James2250
I realize its your first map so don't get overwhelmed by list here, just some suggestions :D

-The maximum allowed size for a background is 1024x768 (yours is 1085x768) resize it
-Use inherited timing sections for the kiai not un-inherited (check on timing section panel)
-Remove everything from tags that is already in the title/artist/source
-Add Tenshi-nyan to tags on all difficulties
-Make sure that every difficulty has a preview point (plays 10 seconds into the map when people click on it on the website) under timing
-Don't forget to add hitsounds to everything

Easy:
Go on timing - resnap all notes (check AIMod to see which ones are unsnapped)
Press ctrl+shift+A to see AIMod and try and correct all spacing mistakes on easier difficulties
Make sure all the ends of the sliders are snapped too (look at 00:52:571 (1) and 00:56:857 (4) etc)
OD + 1, AR + 1
00:08:111 (4,5,6,1) - keep spacing equal
00:12:396 (4,5,6,1) - ^
00:19:539 (2) - add note (same for all the ones after this between the sliders) it follows song more and is still fairly easy
01:09:893 (2) - sliders like this would look nicer if they were more symmtrecal
01:09:893 (2) - add notes for all the ones here too
I would go through and make some of the sliders look slightly nicer too

Normal:
Try not to use too much copy/paste
Again for a Normal check spacing on AIMod for the most part and try and keep do the entire map using 1 distance snap
Pretty low stats for a Normal, I would say +2 to HP/AR/OD

Hard:
AR -1?
00:04:776 (1) - snap to white tick
00:07:307 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - don't have this on blue ticks
00:25:611 (1) - bad idea to have spinner here
00:39:182 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - don't have any of this on blue ticks
From what I can tell pretty much everything should be on white/red ticks on this map so go through and check it all, and remove almost everything from blue ticks

Insane:
00:05:968 (7,1) - switch new combo
00:09:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - keep spacing of jumps equal
00:20:611 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:54:893 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - spacing
Basically I see alot of odd spacing, it is fine to have jumps but they need to have some organization and make sense in general
Go through and try and make spacing work more (jumps are fine but keep some consistent spacing when doing them)

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Deif
Recent changes:

- Changed names: Insane is now Lunatic.
- Compressed background image a little bit.
- Inherited timing sections in every difficulty.
- Changed tags.
- Settled a preview point.
- Changed notes' custom colors.

[Easy]
- Added some notes between sliders.
- Resnapped every notes.
- Changed spaces between notes.
- HP: 1.
- CS: 0.
- AR: 2 (added 1).
- OD: 1 (added 1).

[Normal]
- Resnapped every notes.
- Changed spaces between notes.
- HP: 4 (added 2).
- CS: 0.
- AR: 4 (added 2).
- OD: 4 (added 2).

[Tenshi-nyan's Hard] (Should I consider this map as an Insane, and make another Hard map?)
- Resnapped every notes.
- Changed spaces between notes.
- Resynced every notes.
- HP: 6.
- CS: 1.
- AR: 6 (reduced 1).
- OD: 6.

[Lunatic] (WIP)
- Resnapped every notes.
- HP: 7.
- CS: 2 (should I reduce it to 1?).
- AR: 7.
- OD: 8.

Still WIP:
- Have to add hitsounds to many notes.
- Lunatic: Fix spaces, make easier jumps, etc.

Thanks to James2250 for every advices ^^.
Phew... that's a lot of job to do =)
Tenshi-nyan
Some nice changes on my map. I guess I'm just not cut out for mapping? Well I'm getting a little bit more experience with time ^^
Another modding run:

My Hard (well it basically still is my map :p )
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SPOILER
[Timing + Sample set]
Change things according to the picture


0:42 Add break
1:56 Add break

EASY
------
SPOILER
[Timings]
1 Change hitsounds to soft
2 no change
3 Soft hitsounds
4 no change
5 no change


HP Drain Rate + 2

NORMAL
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SPOILER
TIMINGS
1 Soft Hitsounds
2 no change
3 Time 125.253 , soft hitsounds
4 no change
5 no change

Maybe circle size + 1 ?

INSANE
--------
SPOILER
TIMINGS
1 Soft Hitsounds
2 no change
3 Time 125.253 , soft hitsounds
4 no change
5 no change

I'd like to see some more sliders. It's fine it stays that way but I just think it'd be a little better that way.

Don't forget to give people their kudosu - especially for James2250.
Tonoko
:D

[Tenshi-nyan's Hard]
00:36:593 (5) - a little weird here
00:40:878 (4) - ^
00:45:164 (6) - ^
01:27:307 (4) - ^
01:50:879 (5) - ^
01:55:164 (4) - ^
01:59:450 (6) - ^
00:55:968 (5) - should be put at 00:55:878 and add a note at 00:56:146 like 00:59:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
02:10:254 (5) - ^

[lun]
suggestion:try to use sliders to replace some note,for example: 1 111 1 (all note) could be 1-111-1 (1-1 means sliders)
00:49:896 (7) - i think the slider end at 00:50:610 sound better

try to play this one ><
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/7084

fighting ><
Topic Starter
Deif
Recent changes:

- Softened hitsounds at non-kiai parts.

[Hard]
- Added some breaks.
- Changed those weird sliders.

[Lunatic]
- Replaced many notes to sliders.
- Not so many jumps.

I have to add those noisy hitsounds xD.

Thanks again to Tenshi-nyan, and Tonoko. It's even better than before ^^
Louis Cyphre
I suggest to increase distance, because they are stucky =/
more hitsounds and less crooked sliders like this: 01:01:325 01:12:753
Make them smooth, perfectly round, or like bow. pretty good construction 01:42:753
More symmetry please =

[Easy]
00:30:253 - hidden note, replace this.
Topic Starter
Deif
[Easy]
- Changed some odd sliders.
- Replace that hidden note. Thanks Louis, I hadn't realised of this =)

Still have to add hitsounds~
I wonder why maps have to be so symmetrical xD
Mokka_old
Awesome :D hope it get ranked ^_^
Revengexsoyah
Star (Y)

buen mapa :D
Jinxy
[Easy]
Obvious lack of hitsounds, apart from 2 finishes. The kiai areas using the Normal sampleset sounds the most plain. A beginner's way of hitsounding is one Clap orWhistle per 4 white ticks, and a Finish at a part where it sounds louder, e.g. 00:52:039, 00:53:468 (end of slider only, not the entire slider. you can do it by clicking the slider then clicking the end of the slider on the screen.
Generally, just follow these beginner guidelines to your liking. Nothing is set in stone, but remember that no one likes a long stack of beats which are all claps or whistles, it just sounds annoying.

00:17:753 (1) - Too close to the spinner, making it hard for slower players to click. Either remove the spinner or make this slider start later.
00:52:575 (1) - Still not far enough, but acceptable for me, unless said by other modders.


[Normal]
Nazi: 01:14:539 (3) - One grid right


[Hard]
00:19:897 (3) - Definitely remove clap or change to finish. This just sounds plain weird, as the music on this beat is completely different from the previous 3 {00:18:825 (5,1,2)} beats.
00:28:468 (3) - ^
01:34:183 (3) - ^
01:42:754 (3) - ^

The spacing at kiai seems a little too packed, imo.

[Lunatic]
I think I know where all your hitsounds in [Easy] went. I mean, seriously?

00:04:896 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Bad whistle spam. Alternate between Whistled slider and Non-whistled slider?
00:09:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Bad clap spam. Remove claps from either (2,3,5,6,8,9) or (1,4,7).
00:18:289 (2,3) - Make (2) clap, and then remove clap from (3). Do this for the rest of these kind of combos until 00:31:682.
00:19:539 (5) - Add Finish
00:21:325 (4,5) - Remove clap.
00:28:111 (5) - Add Finish
00:29:897 (4,5) - Remove clap.
00:32:396 (1,2,3,4,5) - Remove clap.
00:33:467 (6) - Remove whistle
00:44:539 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too much claps. Remove claps on every beat that's not on a white tick, then change (8) to a finish.
00:48:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

Kiai time!:
1/8 repeat sliders followed by a 1/4 is just annoying. You can keep it if you want, just keep that in mind.
00:57:753 (1) - Remove whistle.
00:59:003 (4,6,8) - Remove whistles. Maybe make only the end of all the sliders clap?
01:09:182 (1) - Remove whistle.
01:10:431 (4,6,8) - Remove whistles. Maybe make only the end of all the sliders clap?

01:32:575 (2,3) - Make (2) clap, and then remove clap from (3). Do this for the rest of these kind of combos until 01:45:432.
01:46:682 (1,2,3,4,5) - Remove clap.
01:47:753 (6) - Remove whistle
01:58:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too much claps. Remove claps on every beat that's not on a white tick, then change (8) to a finish.
02:03:111 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

Kiai time again!:
1/8 repeat sliders followed by a 1/4 is just annoying. You can keep it if you want, just keep that in mind.
02:12:039 (1) - Remove whistle.
02:13:289 (4,6,8) - Remove whistles. Maybe make only the end of all the sliders clap?
02:23:468 (1) - Remove whistle.
02:24:717 (4,6,8) - Remove whistles. Maybe make only the end of all the sliders clap?
Tenshi-nyan
I did some adjustments to my guest diff map. The changes by Deif were nice, but there were still some things that bugged me, so here's a little overhauled version.

Changes:
-Adjusted timings for sample set
- Changed quite a lot of hitsounds... don't wanna list em all up here.
- At 0:49:450 + 2:03:646 , replaced 3rd slider with with a quick triplet slider and a finishing circle (I hope you understand what I mean)
- In both Kiai parts: slightly increased distance between the circles, therefore I had to adjust their placement.
- 0:50:253 + 2:04:539 removed spinners

I also updated your maps with hitsounds. I'll have to make a second post for the last attachment, I hope that's OK.
Tenshi-nyan
-----Additional post for the 4th attachment ----

DO NOT KUDOSO THIS POST! If you wanna give kuduso than do it my large pos.
Topic Starter
Deif
Thank you very much, Tenshi-nyan ^^. I was a little lazy to put every hitsound xDD.

Also revised your chart, and made some slight changes:
- 0.50.968: Moved 4 grids right, 2 up
- 1.14.539: Moved 1 grid right
- 2.06.011: Moved 4 grids left, 2 up
- 2.28.825: Moved 1 grid right
- From 0.54.896 to 1.14.896: It is exactly the same as from 2.09.182 to 2.29.182... Change it, and the kudosu is all yours xD

I'll revise the hitsounds patterns that you said later.

JInxyjem wrote:

[Easy]
00:17:753 (1) - Too close to the spinner, making it hard for slower players to click. Either remove the spinner or make this slider start later.
00:52:575 (1) - Still not far enough, but acceptable for me, unless said by other modders.

[Normal]
Nazi: 01:14:539 (3) - One grid right (didn't realised of this)
Tenshi-nyan

Deif wrote:

- From 0.54.896 to 1.14.896: It is exactly the same as from 2.09.182 to 2.29.182... Change it, and the kudosu is all yours xD
Changed. Hope it's enough for ya.
Mok
Hiiii =P

[General]
BG makes me so proud :D
Symmetrycal or cuter sliders will be make cuter your own map :P
[Easy]
I don't like the way it is spaced, try keep it up to 1x
00:26:324 (1) - This is covered while playing, try putting it like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/36224
01:09:896 (2) - Try to do it more S-Kind :D

[Normal]
00:14:539 (2) - 3 grids right.

[Tenshi's]
Distance Spacing: 0,8x and not 1,2x. Fix it.

That's all! Cool :P
Topic Starter
Deif

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Deif wrote:

- From 0.54.896 to 1.14.896: It is exactly the same as from 2.09.182 to 2.29.182... Change it, and the kudosu is all yours xD
Changed. Hope it's enough for ya. (You deserved that kudosu ^^)

Mok wrote:

Hiiii =P

[General]
BG makes me so proud :D
Symmetrycal or cuter sliders will be make cuter your own map :P (smoothed some sliders :P)
[Easy]
I don't like the way it is spaced, try keep it up to 1x (i think it's ok for an Easy level, or not?)
00:26:324 (1) - This is covered while playing, try putting it like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/36224 (changed it not the same way you told me, but now it's not covered)
01:09:896 (2) - Try to do it more S-Kind :D (OMG it looks like a REAL S now!! xD)

[Normal]
00:14:539 (2) - 3 grids right.

[Tenshi's]
Distance Spacing: 0,8x and not 1,2x. Fix it. (did you mean slider velocity or what? Spacing is ok for me o.O)

That's all! Cool :P
Tenshi-nyan
1,2x spacing is used in the Kiai parts. 0,8x is used in the normal parts. So that's OK.

A little fix for my map:

2:04:093 (4) Resnap to white tick - missed that one.


And maybe...

LUNATIC
---------
AR +1
HP Drain +1
Jinxy
This is better now. Starred.
Reiji-RJ
[Easy]

00:47:753 (4) - too close

[Normal]

00:21:325 (4) - spacing, or maybe extend previous slider?
00:52:575 (1) - Too hard to read for a normal (?)
00:54:003 (1) - ^
01:04:003 (1) - ^
01:05:432 (4) - ^
02:06:860 (5) - ^
02:08:289 (1) - ^
02:18:289 (1) - ^
02:19:718 (4) - ^

[Tenshi-nyan's Hard]

02:03:021 (1) - move to 02:03:110
02:03:378 (2) - remove slider, make a circle on 02:03:468
02:04:003 (x) - add a note
02:04:093 (4) - move to 02:04:182
02:06:771 (1) - move to 02:06:860
02:07:039 (2) - remove note

Good map! Star~
Lanttu
[Lunatic]
00:08:111 (1) - Nazi, but one grid left would make it straight when looking at the slider and next notes. :3
00:13:289 (4) - Again slight nazi, but this being parallel to the prevous notes would look much better, that's one grid right and two grids up.
00:25:253 (7) - Ugly slider. >: It looks so square-like.
00:32:396 (6) - Confusing spacing because of the previous notes. Move this much more lower?
01:47:753 (6) - ^

Tenshi-nyan
00:25:253 (5) - Add finish to end
00:52:575 (5) - New combo
00:58:468 (2,3,4) - What is this spacing?
01:39:539 (5) - Add finish to end
02:03:021 (1,2,4) - Why are these on a blue tick?
02:07:039 (2) - Again wtf-spacing
02:08:289 (5) - New combo

[Normal]
00:18:111 (1) - This starts pretty quickly after the spinner..
00:18:111 (1) - This doesn't work when it's ending at red tick, just shorten it to the white one?
00:46:682 (5) - New combo
00:47:753 (3) - ^
00:52:575 (1,2) - Pretty hard pattern for normal
00:54:003 (1,2) - ^
01:04:003 (1,2, 4,5) -^
02:00:968 (5) - New combo
02:02:039 (3) - ^
02:06:860 (5,6) - Pretty hard pattern for normal
02:08:289 (1,2,3) - ^
02:18:289 (1,2) - ^
02:19:718 (4,5) - ^

[Easy]
00:22:039 (5) - New combo
00:30:610 (5) - ^
00:47:753 (4) - ^
01:36:325 (5) - ^
01:44:896 (5) - ^
02:02:039 (4) - ^

Other than that it's fine, good luck~ o/
Topic Starter
Deif

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

A little fix for my map:

2:04:093 (4) Resnap to white tick - missed that one.


And maybe...

LUNATIC
---------
AR +1
HP Drain +1 (now it is a real insane? :P)

Reiji-RJ wrote:

[Easy]

00:47:753 (4) - too close (fixed)

[Normal]

00:21:325 (4) - spacing, or maybe extend previous slider? (spacing problem ;))
00:52:575 (1) - Too hard to read for a normal (?) (all fixed)
00:54:003 (1) - ^
01:04:003 (1) - ^
01:05:432 (4) - ^
02:06:860 (5) - ^
02:08:289 (1) - ^
02:18:289 (1) - ^
02:19:718 (4) - ^

[Tenshi-nyan's Hard]

02:03:021 (1) - move to 02:03:110
02:03:378 (2) - remove slider, make a circle on 02:03:468
02:04:003 (x) - add a note
02:04:093 (4) - move to 02:04:182
02:06:771 (1) - move to 02:06:860
02:07:039 (2) - remove note

Good map! Star~

Lanttu wrote:

[Lunatic]
00:08:111 (1) - Nazi, but one grid left would make it straight when looking at the slider and next notes. :3 (dat spacing <3)
00:13:289 (4) - Again slight nazi, but this being parallel to the prevous notes would look much better, that's one grid right and two grids up.
00:25:253 (7) - Ugly slider. >: It looks so square-like. (now it's sexy)
00:32:396 (6) - Confusing spacing because of the previous notes. Move this much more lower? (5 grids down)
01:47:753 (6) - ^ (5 grids up)

Tenshi-nyan
00:25:253 (5) - Add finish to end
00:52:575 (5) - New combo
00:58:468 (2,3,4) - What is this spacing?
01:39:539 (5) - Add finish to end
02:03:021 (1,2,4) - Why are these on a blue tick?
02:07:039 (2) - Again wtf-spacing
02:08:289 (5) - New combo

[Normal]
00:18:111 (1) - This starts pretty quickly after the spinner..
00:18:111 (1) - This doesn't work when it's ending at red tick, just shorten it to the white one? (it was already at white tick)
00:46:682 (5) - New combo
00:47:753 (3) - ^
00:52:575 (1,2) - Pretty hard pattern for normal
00:54:003 (1,2) - ^
01:04:003 (1,2, 4,5) -^
02:00:968 (5) - New combo
02:02:039 (3) - ^
02:06:860 (5,6) - Pretty hard pattern for normal
02:08:289 (1,2,3) - ^
02:18:289 (1,2) - ^
02:19:718 (4,5) - ^

[Easy]
00:22:039 (5) - New combo (all fixed)
00:30:610 (5) - ^
00:47:753 (4) - ^
01:36:325 (5) - ^
01:44:896 (5) - ^
02:02:039 (4) - ^

Other than that it's fine, good luck~ o/
Thanks to all of you ^^
Revengexsoyah
Hola Deif , que tal ?

empezemos (recuerda que yo modeo solo sugerencias)

~Easy~

00:48:825 : fea la forma del slider , haz algo mas neutro (lineal)

~Normal~
00:30:253 (5,6) : muevelos para que sea mas simetrico el spacing.
00:52:575 (1,2,1) : mmm nose pero podrias probar otra cosa , a mi parecer no suena muy bien asi.

~Tenshi-nyan's Hard~
00:41:593 : insert break
01:55:878 : ^

~Lunatic~
podrias poneler mejor "Insane" porke de Lunatic no tiene nada :D
Exelente diffie



mucha suerte la estrella ya te la di xD
Topic Starter
Deif

Revengexsoyah wrote:

Hola Deif , que tal ?

empezemos (recuerda que yo modeo solo sugerencias)

~Easy~

00:48:825 : fea la forma del slider , haz algo mas neutro (lineal) (que manía con que los sliders son feos jejeje)

~Normal~
00:30:253 (5,6) : muevelos para que sea mas simetrico el spacing.
00:52:575 (1,2,1) : mmm nose pero podrias probar otra cosa , a mi parecer no suena muy bien asi. (cambiado, creo que ahora está mejor)

~Tenshi-nyan's Hard~
00:41:593 : insert break
01:55:878 : ^

~Lunatic~
podrias poneler mejor "Insane" porke de Lunatic no tiene nada :D (el nombre lo puse de acuerdo a la saga Touhou, donde lo niveles se llaman: Easy, Normal, Hard, Lunatic... sólo por eso xD)
Exelente diffie



mucha suerte la estrella ya te la di xD
Gracias por tu ayuda, Soyah =)
poisonchan
Hi hi :3
Moding your map as your request (#modReqs)

I'm not really god modding Easy/normal so..
Remember, I'm only giving you suggestions :3

[General]
Your combo number 3 (gray) can be a bit confusing in tag play, consider changing it.

[Tenshi-nyan's Hard]
00:24:182 (3) - Move this to 00:24:003 and add a beat here: 00:24:539 (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/37461 maybe?)
00:30:969 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hm, position is a bit 'weird'. (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/37466)
00:32:754 (3) - Move this to 00:32:575 and add a beat here: 00:33:110 (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/37463 ? D:)
00:35:254 (1) - If you follow this ^ you should move it a bit down.
00:59:003 - Add a beat here.
01:04:360 (5) - This reverse is a bit out of rythym I guess, move this to 01:04:539, finish reverse here 01:04:896 and add a single beat here: 01:04:360.
01:38:289 - add a beat here
01:46:860 - ^
02:13:289 - ^

[Lunatic]
didn't find anything wrong here ^-~ Just.. recheck the spacing, sometimes looks a bit odd. ^^


Hope it helps.
star!
Shana
star :)
Tenshi-nyan
After talking a bit to Deif we decided that I'd mod my map from now on myself - So I took the changes suggested by poisonchan and upload the updated map here.

SPOILER

poisonchan wrote:

[Tenshi-nyan's Hard]
00:24:182 (3) - Move this to 00:24:003 and add a beat here: 00:24:539 (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/37461 maybe?) sounds good.
00:30:969 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hm, position is a bit 'weird'. (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/37466) I think it's fine.
00:32:754 (3) - Move this to 00:32:575 and add a beat here: 00:33:110 (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/37463 ? D:) k
00:35:254 (1) - If you follow this ^ you should move it a bit down.
00:59:003 - Add a beat here. k
01:04:360 (5) - This reverse is a bit out of rythym I guess, move this to 01:04:539, finish reverse here 01:04:896 and add a single beat here: 01:04:360. k
01:38:289 - add a beat here k
01:46:860 - ^ k
02:13:289 - ^ k
Topic Starter
Deif
I've made some recent changes on Timing:

Due to new Osu! release, I won't use the inherit option (unless it's obligatory to get the map ranked) because it'd change every Time Siganture into 3/4, which is the one that has 0.00.61 - 0.52.03.

So, after resnapping every notes, the final Timing Points are:
- 0.00.61 - 3/4 - 168,00 BPM - S
- 0.52.03 - 4/4 - 168,00 BPM - N - Ki
- 1.14.89 - 3/4 - 168,00 BPM - S
- 2.06.32 - 4/4 - 168,00 BPM - N - Ki
- 2.29.18 - 3/4 - 168,00 BPM - S

I hope you understand =)

poisonchan wrote:

[General]
Your combo number 3 (gray) can be a bit confusing in tag play, consider changing it. (Every Combo Colours are based on background image, I'll see if I change #3 later =P)

[Lunatic]
didn't find anything wrong here ^-~ Just.. recheck the spacing, sometimes looks a bit odd. ^^ (Changed some of them, and added some notes too. The song is jumpy sometimes because it is an Insane level lol)
[quote="Tenshi-nyan"]After talking a bit to Deif we decided that I'd mod my map from now on myself - So I took the changes suggested by poisonchan and upload the updated map here.

Thanks for your help ^^ And thanks for your update, Tenshi :P
MoonShade
Nice map. Here is what could be improved:

[Easy]
00:15:610 (3) - you could make the slider symmetrical
01:09:892 (2,3) - overlapping doesn't look so nice

Apart from that, everything seems fine to me :3
Star~
Topic Starter
Deif

MoonShade wrote:

Nice map. Here is what could be improved:

[Easy]
00:15:610 (3) - you could make the slider symmetrical
SPOILER
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01:09:892 (2,3) - overlapping doesn't look so nice (modified)

Apart from that, everything seems fine to me :3
Star~
Thanks for your help =)
ouranhshc
Lunatic:
lower the stack leniecy 1 tick

Easy:
tiny spacing D:

Overall:
good map, but
Sliders still need some work.
Topic Starter
Deif
New update: I've made a new Lunatic level, so feel free to try it.

Spacing is set to 1.0x (unless some jumps) and sliders are better imo. I need you to tell me if I have to replace old Lunatic level with the new one.

For the next update, I'll increase spacing of Easy and Normal levels :D

Mod it gogogo ^^
banvi
Hi~ :D

General
resize BG 800*600 or 1024*768
uncheck enable countdown?
check inherit previous timing settings in some timing point

Easy
02:06:856 (1) I think better put center for easy after spinner. can you change position or pattern?

Normal
fine

Hard
00:06:325 (1) 1 grid up?
00:22:396 (1) remove new combo
00:30:968 (1) ^
01:02:396 (3,4) I like better separate them. :/
01:36:681 (1) remove new combo
01:45:253 (1) ^
02:16:681 (3,4) I like better separate them. :/

Lunatic v3.0
I think fine.
I testplayed & cleared.(but I'm not pro player :o ) I think okay.

Lunatic
I think okay too.
but I like better than v3.0 :oops:

Overall nice map! :)
al2e10
[Lunatic]
- Sound
00:23:825 (1,3,5) - Remove wistle
00:25:253 (7,1st) - Finsih
00:33:825 (7) - ^
00:31:146 (2) - Remove wistle
00:32:396 (1,3,5) - ^
00:44:718 (2,3) - ^
00:49:003 (2,3) - ^
01:02:396 (1,3) - ^
01:05:431 (1,2,3) - ^
SHIT ! Can you stop hurt my ear... It is too annoy for your wistle...

[All]
can you inprove your sound skill/ And post to my queue again ;_;
Topic Starter
Deif

banvi wrote:

Hi~ :D

General
resize BG 800*600 or 1024*768 (Changed to 1024x768)
uncheck enable countdown? (Removed it)
check inherit previous timing settings in some timing point (That was explained on a preview post. I won't use the inherit option because non kiai parts are 3/4, and kiai parts are 4/4. If i use it, all song would be 3/4, what doesn't really fit to the melody)

Easy
02:06:856 (1) I think better put center for easy after spinner. can you change position or pattern? (Changed)

Normal
fine

Hard (Tenshi, you've got to upload you diff =P)
00:06:325 (1) 1 grid up?
00:22:396 (1) remove new combo
00:30:968 (1) ^
01:02:396 (3,4) I like better separate them. :/
01:36:681 (1) remove new combo
01:45:253 (1) ^
02:16:681 (3,4) I like better separate them. :/

Lunatic v3.0
I think fine.
I testplayed & cleared.(but I'm not pro player :o ) I think okay.

Lunatic
I think okay too.
but I like better than v3.0 :oops:

Overall nice map! :)

al2e10 wrote:

[Lunatic]
- Sound
00:23:825 (1,3,5) - Remove wistle
00:25:253 (7,1st) - Finsih
00:33:825 (7) - ^
00:31:146 (2) - Remove wistle
00:32:396 (1,3,5) - ^
00:44:718 (2,3) - ^
00:49:003 (2,3) - ^
01:02:396 (1,3) - ^
01:05:431 (1,2,3) - ^
SHIT ! Can you stop hurt my ear... It is too annoy for your wistle... (Removed all those noisy wistles, I'll revise every diff hitsounds though)

[All]
can you inprove your sound skill/ And post to my queue again ;_;
Thanks for your help ^^

Also added Tenshi's original BG image to his diff (hope you don't mind, I really <3 that image)

Keep choosing between Lunatic and Lunatic v3.0, please =)
Kyonko Hizara
:)
Weez
Easy
00:50:253 Make it start at 00:50:968
00:52:571 To me this sounds weird. Here's my saying

00:58:464 (2) Weird slider to me, this looks better:
01:14:535 (2) move this slider somewhere else, it would be too hard for the noobs :P
02:05:250 Make it start at 02:05:250
02:07:035 Just like the first link
02:28:821 (2) Move this slider somewhere else

Normal
Generally this seems way too similar to easy
00:52:571 (1) Make it start at the following white tick 00:52:750
02:06:859 (1) ^same

Tenchi-nyan's Hard
Seems fine to me

Lunatic v3.0
00:29:360 (4) move it one grid up
00:30:253 (6) ^

Lunatic
Seems fine but to me v3.0 is waaaaaaay better!

Awesome map and its your first one too :D and you should sooooo make a CTB map for it if you won't I will :D
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