Krisom wrote:

· The HP Bar seems to be cut badly :<! Can't you fix that to make it look less ugly? It kills the magic Hmm, you mean the background or the actual bar itself? Will look at this
· Set the preferred skin to user's preference? This looks even better with MM sliders No clue what these are, but OK o_O

lepidopodus wrote:

Hey, you've already got quite lots of modding orz

Calm
00:37:536 (2) - Yeah, a bit strict but how about moving the first middle point of the slider a grid left and a grid up? OK fixed
01:29:921 (3) - How about remove whistle from the start point of the slider? I think this is good with whistle there :S
01:50:025 (2) - Remove whistle from the slider body? I think this fits actually :S
01:52:665 (5) - whistle? Added
02:23:145 (3) - Remove whistle from the slider body? OK

Chill
00:50:229 (6) - Although AI mod said it's snapped, the end of this slider isn't snapped properly. Oh noes! Fixed :S
02:27:705 (1) - Moving the middle point of the slider one or two grid up? Moved one grid up

Cool
- Uh... How about put some mild jumps? I'm ... not very good with jumps orz sorry >_<

Maybe it's not helpful mod at all orz

Oh well, nice, stared~

Krisom wrote:

Bar Background.
Prefered skin is the skin that forces itself into the map when you play it. You have the default one forced. Since you have enough skin elements, switching to user's preference would not hurt anyone~

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Chill

SPOILER

00:33:382 (1,2) - Remove 1, and make 2 start at where 1 was. I like it how it is, sorry :S
Lower the volume on the timing point at 1:45:70 by 2 ticks. This feels too quiet to me ... but did make it go down less

Excellent.

Cool

SPOILER

no problems found

James2250 wrote:

Include a cursor trail in the folder (from the template skin if nothing else) Seeing as it is no longer on "default" OK, done
Is the hitcircle overlay blanked out? (and why) Well because I designed the hitcircle w/o overlay in mind, and it looks funny with it. I tried to add kind of a soft glow of the combo colour but it just turned out really ugly lol XD
(Looking at earlier comments 256kbps is allowed for a map this old) Yippeeee XD

Calm:
Maybe hp -1 for the easiest difficulty but I think this can pass for it otherwise? Sure
Looks good

Chill:
Nice

Cool:
Nice

Nice map/song/sb
PM me after fixes for bubble

ZLOdeuka wrote:

Hello~

This second your map DJ Okawari ~ I really like

Storyboard ~ excellent ...

I can`t even see the mistake, I really like the map

STAR~ *_*

1. blue.png
2. colour pulse.png
3. green.png
4. red.png
5. yellow.png

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi!~

Remember these are just suggestions that you can always ignore

~All Diffs~
Skin:
- Did you make your hitcircles basing on LuigiHann's Technologic hitcircles? They're the same except that the color ring is bigger. If you did, please make sure you have LH's permission to modify/use them, if you already have it, please give credits to him on the description of your map :3

Storyboard:
- Crop the unnecessary transparency on the following images:

1. blue.png
2. colour pulse.png
3. green.png
4. red.png
5. yellow.png

- About the colour flashes at the bottom of the screen, why don't you just use a white flash and use the Coloring function to make it the color you want? Check this thread, it will help you :3 This seems ... complicated ... OTL lol
- Not sure if it's intentional but when you use images like "double colour pulse", "blue pulse" or "double pulse" you also have the single pulse behind them, so you actually have two pulses at the same time. The most noticeable point of this is when you use "blue pulse", which has a transparency, so having the pulse behind it makes the image lose its "meaning" because you could just use "triple pulse" instead of that. Nice catch. I'll fix this

~Calm~
No problems here!

~Chill~
No problems here!

~Cool~
No problems here!

Beautiful and calm map, an example of how can a map be good without overmapping it with jumps or streams every 3 notes.
Good luck with this <3 *star*

animask wrote:

10 MB seems like a lot o_o"

Add a Source if you can? I don't think there is one

A 5ms earlier offset might be better. I'm not very good with these ... I'm going to go with Doomsday on this, sorry (also I don't want to snap SB lol XD)

[Calm]
Good.

[Chill]
Good.

[Cool]
Good.
00:30:152 (3,4) - Move (3) right 1, Move (4) 1 right and 1 up (Level 3 Grid) Looks way better, fixed

Overall, the beatmaps look correctly structured but some of the sliders felt a little off.
Work on your sliders a little more next time and your next map will be perfect~ OK

I think everyone covered the SB files things so...guess I'm done for now.

Starr'd ★

JInxyjem wrote:

Nothing wrong for me. Starred.

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

This seems ready for bubble, but I'm not comfy bubbling anything with skin elements So if a MAT or BAT comes by, from a standard play point of view this map is A-OK.

EvianBubble wrote:

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

This seems ready for bubble, but I'm not comfy bubbling anything with skin elements So if a MAT or BAT comes by, from a standard play point of view this map is A-OK.

All right, thanks ^_^
Time to go PM James I suppose

(enough bubbles for today but had to do this one first )

kiddly wrote:

It seems that your map is ready for a bubble,so maybe I don't have to mod?

I didn't find any problem in this mapset,well done!

oops,I forget one thing:
it's about the file size.it's 10.6MB,so...you know it.

James2250 wrote:

And here I am
Doomsday handled timing, Beuchi handled all sb problems, maps are awesome
The only thing I wonder about is "blank" hitcircle overlay but it shouldn't cause any problems to my knowledge? It won't cause any skin conflicts
As for filesize I am ok with it (fairly long mp3 + skin + sb)

What else do I need to say
Bubbled~

(enough bubbles for today but had to do this one first )

narakucrimson wrote:

No issues at all Seriously. I loved the map, it's just fantastic.

There's no place for doubts here, you have my star~~

DeathxShinigami wrote:

Dx-Star

Larto wrote:

Simple and beautiful! Well done!

James2250 wrote:

Wow the day I tell you to go bug BATs it gets ranked. Good job!

I mean erm erm congrats on rank