This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年5月19日 at 23:47:44

Artist: BoA
Title: soundscape
Tags: Everlasting Colin_Hou
BPM: 71
Filesize: 3196kb
Play Time: 02:43
Difficulties Available:

1. Colin's (4.6 stars, 370 notes)
2. Easy (2.11 stars, 155 notes)
3. Hard (4.59 stars, 328 notes)
4. Normal (3.76 stars, 204 notes)

Download: BoA - soundscape
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My first beatmap.
BoA Soundscape.
Mapped by S h i a.

special thanks to Alace` Colin Hou` Heatherfield` xierbaliti ` orioncomet and AngelHoney

BPM:71
Offset:1347
t`s more easy to map

[General]:

1. Normal不够简单啊 需要一个Easy难度了

[Normal]:

1. 00:55:017 (T) - 加note
2. 00:55:439 (T) - ^ 这个放在00:55:650 (1) 起始点同样的地方 所以1的位置可能也需要改动还符合spacing
3. 00:59:876 (2,3,4) - spacing issue, 让间距看上去自然点
4. 02:29:453 (9) - 这个放在02:29:664这里会好点
5. 02:36:214 (7) - ^同理 时间上后移
6. 01:00:298 (4) - 加长 到01:00:826结束
7. 01:10:650 (T) - 加note
8. 01:11:073 (T) - ^
9. 01:14:664 (6) - 换slider 到01:15:298结束
10. 01:21:002 (6) - 移除
11. 01:21:636 (8) - 换slider 到01:22:059结束 (9)的话移除
12. 01:44:242 (5,6) - 这里修一下位置 和前面一样的规律
13. 01:51:214 (4) - 01:51:848结束 然后01:52:059加note 位置在slider结末
14. 02:19:101 (1,2) - 合体成1个slider会好点
15. 02:29:242 (8) - 换slider 02:29:664结束 (9)的话移除
16. 02:35:369 (4) - 删掉
17. 02:36:002 (6) - 换slider 到02:36:425 02:36:214 (7) 删掉
18. hitsounds严重缺乏... 几乎每根长白线下一个clap就可以 但是有的地方需要提前 背景里的架鼓很明显 也就是那里需要下clap 可以先试一下

[Hard]:

1. Slider Velocity 太低了...最好改掉之后重新map一下 1.8~2.0会好很多 注意背景里的鼓点处最好压一下音 这样打起来感觉会好很多.
2. Approach Rate 6或者7
3. Overall difficulty 建议+2
4. 其他的就先不看了...因为SV的问题...嘻嘻

抱歉拖了这么久 *_*

如果是第一次做图很不错了 :3 再完成之后记得再通知下 BoA的歌蛮喜欢的~

[General]:

1. tags: Everlasting
2. 建议再做一个Easy
3. 把320kbps转码成128kbps~256kbps之间的码率 然后full submit一下 否则会很麻烦 越早弄越好

[Hard]:

1. 不知道其他人如何认为 按照我的习惯 overall difficulty和approch rate都需要+1才比较好读
2. 01:34:516 (8) - 这里不太合 可以尝试一下这样:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:42:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这样放在OD低的情况下不好读, 建议换个方式排放
4. 02:29:445 (9) - 删掉
5. 02:29:656 (T) - 加note或者是一个到02:29:868处的短slider
6. 02:29:868 (10) - 删
7. 02:36:206 (7,8) - 同上面的问题...感觉不太合音乐
8. 02:42:121 (1) - 把x0.5的timing section删掉
9. 02:43:600 (T) - 加个note 和slider的末尾处重合

[Normal]:

1. 这个难度的背景图片在设置下 我这里看是黑底
2. 01:52:481 (1,2,3) - 间距
3. hitsounds几乎没有啊这个难度...

没什么大问题了 可以找其他人看看 kudosu的话上一个回复或这个回复随便给一个就够了 :P

star
edit:囧" 你可以不用给我kd的。。总之说明下好了。。modded in irc

All

2個難度的offset不一樣 , 而且貌似都偏快了 ? (用1375ms試試? (換過mp3文件的話 offset會有所改變的...
沒有Priview point(點Timing 選 最後一項就是了 ,加在這01:08:952 ?
感覺棕色combo color有些看不清o.o(和背景太接近了?
文件夾里的OSB文件,,,怎麼寫了一段奇怪的SB lol
有問題的話 再來問我吧>~<

Hard

有8個unsnap note o.o (按ctrl+shift+a選Snapping 一項 就知道了 , unsnap是指沒對準綫的note
一開始的音量 可以適當降一些吧 , 還有就是滑條的聲音有點吵 加個無聲檔吧

01:00:521 (7,9) - 這2個slider疊一起...有點難讀o.o

01:21:859 (14,1) - 去掉 , 然後在這2個中間01:22:071 放個note ?

01:42:564 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 一開始沒讀懂...(換種排列吧:3

01:52:705 (1,2,3) - ^

02:40:028 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 這組排列很奇怪啊..(你test玩的時候 沒發覺么..

Normal

fine :3

offset:1367 resnap all notes
想下音效的話,跟著音樂下拍手是個方法
利用softwhistle打一些自己的節奏

Hi,稍微看了下给点意见

[Easy]
Distance太大了，不如参考下现在的Ranked Map的Distance设计
01:08:974(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 你认真的吗@_@ Easy这么难，剩下的如01:32:636也很难
正常来说，Easy应该是开着1/1(这张图BPM除了2的话是开1/2)来做的。而且同一节奏，放Circle比放Slider玩起来必定难得多，很多mapper在低难都是选用折返slider打紧密节奏来减低难度，这个在控制难度的时候要注意

有很多Normal或者Hard的痕迹，被人觉得偷懒可不好哦

[Normal]
同Distance太大了，如果不想remap，可以试下改圈圈大小

[Hard]
00:51:867(8) - New Combo
01:43:417(4,7) - New Combo,很难读
01:55:882(x) - 这里增加一个note可以增加连贯性，但是考虑到要重排这只是个建议
02:06:445(5) - New Combo
02:42:149(1) - Ugly slider

New Combo的作用是从节奏上或形状上分割notes，增加美观性，还有暗示距离变换，用好New Combo你的图会变得更好看

BPM除了2看起来很吃力..

很好的第一张图，控制难度上面要下点功夫，学会做点简单的节奏会更好
至于hitsound和ranked规则的方面没有看请见谅

yeah, finished

Download: BoA - soundscape (S_h_i_a) [Colin's].osu

Colin Hou wrote:

yeah, finished

thanks

revived

All finished

easy~hard
slidertick 1
我覺得外加的音效不是太好聽耶,有點不太合曲子,一打的時候就聽出來了 XD

<Normal>
01:08:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感覺排的不是很好看 XD

Colin`s diff <3

音效想推倒重做 但是大三还要WoW于是没时间了...

Alace wrote:

easy~hard
slidertick 1
我覺得外加的音效不是太好聽耶,有點不太合曲子,一打的時候就聽出來了 XD

<Normal>
01:08:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感覺排的不是很好看 XD

Colin`s diff <3

Done ^^

ji

哇2kd位

-Overall-
没用到的mp3部分似乎有些长 不过35%这些似乎是卡在要求附近 切了比较好就是了
统一Previewtime, E和N的Previewtime和另2个难度不一样

-Easy-
没特殊必要的话 像00:32:634 (3) - 这种小距离调整没什么必要 建议重新检查一下
01:19:113 (2,3,4) - 建议这种都去掉一个repeat 减少难度

-Hard-
01:02:000 (5) - 有点近了._.

-科林-
换张壁纸吧 左下角有你作者名字的水印
加一些leadin?

基本上也就是这些 把这几个适当改改应该没什么问题了

EDIT:Previewtime要在记事本里改 现在差的更多了D:

- add Colin Hou to tag?
- cut about 40% of the song that is not mapped?
- both diffs Normal and Easy have different Offset from Hard and guest diff. i don't know what'd you prefer, but please, make them all the same, and don't forget to resnap all notes and stuff.

[Easy]
- add some new combo, please. make those combo a bit shorter, some of them is too long for Normal, imo.

[Normal]
- add some new combo, please. make those combo a bit shorter, some of them is too long for Normal, imo.
01:08:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hmm.. look a bit hard, maybe make some of them into slider or something?

[Hard]: next time please make a combo on note to not be confusing
00:41:719 (8) - spacing please, too close. or add new combo on 00:40:874 (6) or something to make it more look easer.
00:54:183 (5) - new combo for spacing changed or add new combo on (4) instead or something that for spacing changed to jump on the next slider.
01:00:310 (7) - new combo, please. look hard to read.
01:01:366 (10) - hard to read at first try seriously, like a hidden slider.
01:13:831 (7) - new combo? or make those notes a bit closer, like make 01:14:043 (8) closer to (7), 01:14:465 (10) closer to (9), 01:14:888 (12) closer to (11). like 00:47:212 (4,5) between those notes are just like 1grid.
01:20:592 (7) - add some new combo?
01:22:493 (1) - a bit hidden slider though but still can see, becaise it's not whole hiddening. just want to suggest you to make it a bit easy to read if you could.
02:07:916 (5) - new combo? suddenly spacing changed.

[Colin's]
- look good

you did a pretty good for first map, but next time maybe make note a bit easer to read or easer to follow more then this a bit.
try to not use an unnecessary hidden or jump note too much for the first time, then you can use or be good at it later, don't be hurry and overuse them.
Good luck.

orioncomet wrote:

- add Colin Hou to tag?
- cut about 40% of the song that is not mapped?
- both diffs Normal and Easy have different Offset from Hard and guest diff. i don't know what'd you prefer, but please, make them all the same, and don't forget to resnap all notes and stuff.

[Easy]
- add some new combo, please. make those combo a bit shorter, some of them is too long for Normal, imo.

[Normal]
- add some new combo, please. make those combo a bit shorter, some of them is too long for Normal, imo.
01:08:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hmm.. look a bit hard, maybe make some of them into slider or something?

[Hard]: next time please make a combo on note to not be confusing
00:41:719 (8) - spacing please, too close. or add new combo on 00:40:874 (6) or something to make it more look easer.
00:54:183 (5) - new combo for spacing changed or add new combo on (4) instead or something that for spacing changed to jump on the next slider.
01:00:310 (7) - new combo, please. look hard to read.
01:01:366 (10) - hard to read at first try seriously, like a hidden slider.
01:13:831 (7) - new combo? or make those notes a bit closer, like make 01:14:043 (8) closer to (7), 01:14:465 (10) closer to (9), 01:14:888 (12) closer to (11). like 00:47:212 (4,5) between those notes are just like 1grid.
01:20:592 (7) - add some new combo?
01:22:493 (1) - a bit hidden slider though but still can see, becaise it's not whole hiddening. just want to suggest you to make it a bit easy to read if you could.
02:07:916 (5) - new combo? suddenly spacing changed.

[Colin's]
- look good

you did a pretty good for first map, but next time maybe make note a bit easer to read or easer to follow more then this a bit.
try to not use an unnecessary hidden or jump note too much for the first time, then you can use or be good at it later, don't be hurry and overuse them.
Good luck.

nice. thank you orion.

xierbaliti wrote:

哇2kd位

-Overall-
没用到的mp3部分似乎有些长 不过35%这些似乎是卡在要求附近 切了比较好就是了
统一Previewtime, E和N的Previewtime和另2个难度不一样

-Easy-
没特殊必要的话 像00:32:634 (3) - 这种小距离调整没什么必要 建议重新检查一下
01:19:113 (2,3,4) - 建议这种都去掉一个repeat 减少难度

-Hard-
01:02:000 (5) - 有点近了._.

-科林-
换张壁纸吧 左下角有你作者名字的水印
加一些leadin?

基本上也就是这些 把这几个适当改改应该没什么问题了

EDIT:Previewtime要在记事本里改 现在差的更多了D:

Fixed.

既然又发现了其他东西就写些建议好了

-Overall-
TAGs: add "Colin Hou" to all diffs plz. 想+"Colin"的话也可以 不过也是要全难度+上而且"Colin Hou"是必须要有
前3个diff的kiai最好是统一一下,现在这样有些蛋疼.

-Easy-
既然没改我就写出来吧:O
00:32:634 (3) - 小跳 Easy最好别放跳:>
00:40:874 (3) - 也是小跳 这么放会好些 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/73334
01:48:479 (3) - 跳

-Hard-
00:54:183 (1) - 取消newcombo 然后把newcombo加到后面的(2)上会好读许多 另外我还有个想法是这样放:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/73338
01:02:000 (5) - 不太理解放得这么不远不近是什么意图 求解答
01:17:212 (4) - 前面01:16:366 (2)弄了跳这里为啥不弄了:O

xierbaliti wrote:

既然又发现了其他东西就写些建议好了

-Overall-
TAGs: add "Colin Hou" to all diffs plz. 想+"Colin"的话也可以 不过也是要全难度+上而且"Colin Hou"是必须要有
前3个diff的kiai最好是统一一下,现在这样有些蛋疼.

-Easy-
既然没改我就写出来吧:O
00:32:634 (3) - 小跳 Easy最好别放跳:>
00:40:874 (3) - 也是小跳 这么放会好些 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/73334
01:48:479 (3) - 跳

-Hard-
00:54:183 (1) - 取消newcombo 然后把newcombo加到后面的(2)上会好读许多 另外我还有个想法是这样放:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/73338
01:02:000 (5) - 不太理解放得这么不远不近是什么意图 求解答
01:17:212 (4) - 前面01:16:366 (2)弄了跳这里为啥不弄了:O

感谢 。。
除了KIAI TIME蛋疼未止疼以外 其余都已改。

[Hard]:

1. 00:52:071 (1) - 这个减速不太合
2. 00:41:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing
3. 01:01:366 (2) - 右移3~4格
4. 01:15:733 (1,2,3) - spacing
5. 01:34:958 (10) - new combo
6. 01:53:127 (2) - 这个要是跟vocal的话 应该是在01:53:233
7. 01:58:197 (6) - 加一次折返
8. 02:07:705 (4) - 这个时间上在02:07:493会好点 然后给(3)一个new combo
9. 02:23:338 (1) - 下移两格看起来工整点
10. 02:43:620 (1) - whistle取消 倒是可以在02:42:141 (1)末尾加个whistle
11. KIAI感觉没什么必要..

[Normal]:

1. 00:31:789 (1,2) - 这个速度变换很蛋疼...
2. 00:33:690 (2,1) - spacing
3. 00:58:831 (7) - new combo
4. 01:55:451 (6) - 上移一格

[Easy]:

1. 00:31:789 (1,2,3) - spacing
2. 01:19:113 (2,3,4,5) - 这个在easy里有点...
3. 01:22:493 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
4. 01:47:634 (2,3) - easy里不要出现这样的pattern...
5. 01:54:606 (3,4) - ^
6. 02:03:268 (1) - 作为spinner后紧跟的note, 尽量起点在圆心附近
7. 02:07:705 (8,9) - easy里太难
8. 02:18:480 (2) - 02:18:690这里一个note足够
9. 02:26:719 (2,3,4,5) - orz
10. 02:30:099 (1,2,3,4) - copy&paste? D:

仍需努力 ^^

Colin Hou wrote:

[Hard]:

1. 00:52:071 (1) - 这个减速不太合
2. 00:41:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing
3. 01:01:366 (2) - 右移3~4格
4. 01:15:733 (1,2,3) - spacing
5. 01:34:958 (10) - new combo
6. 01:53:127 (2) - 这个要是跟vocal的话 应该是在01:53:233
7. 01:58:197 (6) - 加一次折返
8. 02:07:705 (4) - 这个时间上在02:07:493会好点 然后给(3)一个new combo
9. 02:23:338 (1) - 下移两格看起来工整点
10. 02:43:620 (1) - whistle取消 倒是可以在02:42:141 (1)末尾加个whistle
11. KIAI感觉没什么必要..

[Normal]:

1. 00:31:789 (1,2) - 这个速度变换很蛋疼...
2. 00:33:690 (2,1) - spacing
3. 00:58:831 (7) - new combo
4. 01:55:451 (6) - 上移一格

[Easy]:

1. 00:31:789 (1,2,3) - spacing
2. 01:19:113 (2,3,4,5) - 这个在easy里有点...
3. 01:22:493 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
4. 01:47:634 (2,3) - easy里不要出现这样的pattern...
5. 01:54:606 (3,4) - ^
6. 02:03:268 (1) - 作为spinner后紧跟的note, 尽量起点在圆心附近
7. 02:07:705 (8,9) - easy里太难
8. 02:18:480 (2) - 02:18:690这里一个note足够
9. 02:26:719 (2,3,4,5) - orz
10. 02:30:099 (1,2,3,4) - copy&paste? D:

仍需努力 ^^

All fixed

[Colin's]
00:31:789 (1) - 这里怎么听都是3/8折返...

[Hard]
00:34:641 (1) - 这个clap听起来比其他声音都要大..要么移掉要么在这里降低音量
00:41:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - 弄对称来比较好看

whistle有点加多了 可以适当加点finish
00:28:409 (2) - finish
00:41:930 (1) - ^
00:55:451 (4) - ^
01:13:831 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这误导性太强了 我觉得12 67还是放开点比较好
01:34:641 (9) - 这个挺突然的..删了或者在01:34:852 这里加note
01:53:550 (1) - 取消new combo比较好
02:07:916 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这之间的间距应该一致

[Normal]
00:57:564 (5) - 后移1/4
01:19:113 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 感觉作为一个normal稍微有点难
02:19:113 (6) - new combo

[Easy]
00:47:423 (2,3) - spacing

我觉得音效加最好的是easy...其他难度有点wh太多的感觉

加油

fixed

Download: BoA - soundscape (S_h_i_a) [Colin's].osu

Colin Hou wrote:

fixed

added

[Hard]
- hitsound are too loud
01:13:831 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - could you please fix there spacing, really hard to tell between 1/2 and 1/4.
02:21:859 (7) - [suggestion] add new combo?

[Normal]
01:10:028 (4) - fix spacing please, too far from (3)
01:54:606 (4) - ^
02:03:268 (1) - this note is coming a bit too fast after spinner for Normal, please make a spinner shorter or delete the note.
02:07:704 (8) - add new combo? combo is just a bit getting too long.

[Easy]
02:03:268 (1) - this note is coming a bit too fast after spinner for Easy, please make a spinner shorter or delete the note.

[Colin's]
02:11:719 (6) - [suggestion] add new combo?

that is all for me.

orioncomet wrote:

[Hard]
- hitsound are too loud
01:13:831 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - could you please fix there spacing, really hard to tell between 1/2 and 1/4.
02:21:859 (7) - [suggestion] add new combo?

[Normal]
01:10:028 (4) - fix spacing please, too far from (3)
01:54:606 (4) - ^
02:03:268 (1) - this note is coming a bit too fast after spinner for Normal, please make a spinner shorter or delete the note.
02:07:704 (8) - add new combo? combo is just a bit getting too long.

[Easy]
02:03:268 (1) - this note is coming a bit too fast after spinner for Easy, please make a spinner shorter or delete the note.

[Colin's]
02:11:719 (6) - [suggestion] add new combo?

that is all for me.

All fixed

Is it ok if I'm going to bubbles this map, Bubbled.


Good luck!

<easy+hard>
綠線都偏離拍子一些,用手動幫他們整好吧

其他都沒問題了

tags 改成 Colin_Hou? Orz

Alace wrote:

<easy+hard>
綠線都偏離拍子一些,用手動幫他們整好吧

其他都沒問題了

改掉了。 Colin的TAG问题也改了

ok time to rank

congrats!

grats~

^ - ^ 回想当年你找我看这图的时候...岁月如梭啊