easy~hard
slidertick 1
我覺得外加的音效不是太好聽耶,有點不太合曲子,一打的時候就聽出來了 XD

<Normal>
01:08:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感覺排的不是很好看 XD

Colin`s diff <3

音效想推倒重做 但是大三还要WoW于是没时间了...

Alace wrote:

easy~hard
slidertick 1
我覺得外加的音效不是太好聽耶,有點不太合曲子,一打的時候就聽出來了 XD

<Normal>
01:08:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感覺排的不是很好看 XD

Colin`s diff <3

Done ^^

ji

哇2kd位

-Overall-
没用到的mp3部分似乎有些长 不过35%这些似乎是卡在要求附近 切了比较好就是了
统一Previewtime, E和N的Previewtime和另2个难度不一样

-Easy-
没特殊必要的话 像00:32:634 (3) - 这种小距离调整没什么必要 建议重新检查一下
01:19:113 (2,3,4) - 建议这种都去掉一个repeat 减少难度

-Hard-
01:02:000 (5) - 有点近了._.

-科林-
换张壁纸吧 左下角有你作者名字的水印
加一些leadin?

基本上也就是这些 把这几个适当改改应该没什么问题了

EDIT:Previewtime要在记事本里改 现在差的更多了D:

- add Colin Hou to tag?
- cut about 40% of the song that is not mapped?
- both diffs Normal and Easy have different Offset from Hard and guest diff. i don't know what'd you prefer, but please, make them all the same, and don't forget to resnap all notes and stuff.

[Easy]
- add some new combo, please. make those combo a bit shorter, some of them is too long for Normal, imo.

[Normal]
- add some new combo, please. make those combo a bit shorter, some of them is too long for Normal, imo.
01:08:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hmm.. look a bit hard, maybe make some of them into slider or something?

[Hard]: next time please make a combo on note to not be confusing
00:41:719 (8) - spacing please, too close. or add new combo on 00:40:874 (6) or something to make it more look easer.
00:54:183 (5) - new combo for spacing changed or add new combo on (4) instead or something that for spacing changed to jump on the next slider.
01:00:310 (7) - new combo, please. look hard to read.
01:01:366 (10) - hard to read at first try seriously, like a hidden slider.
01:13:831 (7) - new combo? or make those notes a bit closer, like make 01:14:043 (8) closer to (7), 01:14:465 (10) closer to (9), 01:14:888 (12) closer to (11). like 00:47:212 (4,5) between those notes are just like 1grid.
01:20:592 (7) - add some new combo?
01:22:493 (1) - a bit hidden slider though but still can see, becaise it's not whole hiddening. just want to suggest you to make it a bit easy to read if you could.
02:07:916 (5) - new combo? suddenly spacing changed.

[Colin's]
- look good

you did a pretty good for first map, but next time maybe make note a bit easer to read or easer to follow more then this a bit.
try to not use an unnecessary hidden or jump note too much for the first time, then you can use or be good at it later, don't be hurry and overuse them.
Good luck.

orioncomet wrote:

- add Colin Hou to tag?
- cut about 40% of the song that is not mapped?
- both diffs Normal and Easy have different Offset from Hard and guest diff. i don't know what'd you prefer, but please, make them all the same, and don't forget to resnap all notes and stuff.

[Easy]
- add some new combo, please. make those combo a bit shorter, some of them is too long for Normal, imo.

[Normal]
- add some new combo, please. make those combo a bit shorter, some of them is too long for Normal, imo.
01:08:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hmm.. look a bit hard, maybe make some of them into slider or something?

[Hard]: next time please make a combo on note to not be confusing
00:41:719 (8) - spacing please, too close. or add new combo on 00:40:874 (6) or something to make it more look easer.
00:54:183 (5) - new combo for spacing changed or add new combo on (4) instead or something that for spacing changed to jump on the next slider.
01:00:310 (7) - new combo, please. look hard to read.
01:01:366 (10) - hard to read at first try seriously, like a hidden slider.
01:13:831 (7) - new combo? or make those notes a bit closer, like make 01:14:043 (8) closer to (7), 01:14:465 (10) closer to (9), 01:14:888 (12) closer to (11). like 00:47:212 (4,5) between those notes are just like 1grid.
01:20:592 (7) - add some new combo?
01:22:493 (1) - a bit hidden slider though but still can see, becaise it's not whole hiddening. just want to suggest you to make it a bit easy to read if you could.
02:07:916 (5) - new combo? suddenly spacing changed.

[Colin's]
- look good

you did a pretty good for first map, but next time maybe make note a bit easer to read or easer to follow more then this a bit.
try to not use an unnecessary hidden or jump note too much for the first time, then you can use or be good at it later, don't be hurry and overuse them.
Good luck.

nice. thank you orion.

xierbaliti wrote:

哇2kd位

-Overall-
没用到的mp3部分似乎有些长 不过35%这些似乎是卡在要求附近 切了比较好就是了
统一Previewtime, E和N的Previewtime和另2个难度不一样

-Easy-
没特殊必要的话 像00:32:634 (3) - 这种小距离调整没什么必要 建议重新检查一下
01:19:113 (2,3,4) - 建议这种都去掉一个repeat 减少难度

-Hard-
01:02:000 (5) - 有点近了._.

-科林-
换张壁纸吧 左下角有你作者名字的水印
加一些leadin?

基本上也就是这些 把这几个适当改改应该没什么问题了

EDIT:Previewtime要在记事本里改 现在差的更多了D:

Fixed.

既然又发现了其他东西就写些建议好了

-Overall-
TAGs: add "Colin Hou" to all diffs plz. 想+"Colin"的话也可以 不过也是要全难度+上而且"Colin Hou"是必须要有
前3个diff的kiai最好是统一一下,现在这样有些蛋疼.

-Easy-
既然没改我就写出来吧:O
00:32:634 (3) - 小跳 Easy最好别放跳:>
00:40:874 (3) - 也是小跳 这么放会好些 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/73334
01:48:479 (3) - 跳

-Hard-
00:54:183 (1) - 取消newcombo 然后把newcombo加到后面的(2)上会好读许多 另外我还有个想法是这样放:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/73338
01:02:000 (5) - 不太理解放得这么不远不近是什么意图 求解答
01:17:212 (4) - 前面01:16:366 (2)弄了跳这里为啥不弄了:O

xierbaliti wrote:

既然又发现了其他东西就写些建议好了

-Overall-
TAGs: add "Colin Hou" to all diffs plz. 想+"Colin"的话也可以 不过也是要全难度+上而且"Colin Hou"是必须要有
前3个diff的kiai最好是统一一下,现在这样有些蛋疼.

-Easy-
既然没改我就写出来吧:O
00:32:634 (3) - 小跳 Easy最好别放跳:>
00:40:874 (3) - 也是小跳 这么放会好些 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/73334
01:48:479 (3) - 跳

-Hard-
00:54:183 (1) - 取消newcombo 然后把newcombo加到后面的(2)上会好读许多 另外我还有个想法是这样放:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/73338
01:02:000 (5) - 不太理解放得这么不远不近是什么意图 求解答
01:17:212 (4) - 前面01:16:366 (2)弄了跳这里为啥不弄了:O

感谢 。。
除了KIAI TIME蛋疼未止疼以外 其余都已改。

[Hard]:

1. 00:52:071 (1) - 这个减速不太合
2. 00:41:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing
3. 01:01:366 (2) - 右移3~4格
4. 01:15:733 (1,2,3) - spacing
5. 01:34:958 (10) - new combo
6. 01:53:127 (2) - 这个要是跟vocal的话 应该是在01:53:233
7. 01:58:197 (6) - 加一次折返
8. 02:07:705 (4) - 这个时间上在02:07:493会好点 然后给(3)一个new combo
9. 02:23:338 (1) - 下移两格看起来工整点
10. 02:43:620 (1) - whistle取消 倒是可以在02:42:141 (1)末尾加个whistle
11. KIAI感觉没什么必要..

[Normal]:

1. 00:31:789 (1,2) - 这个速度变换很蛋疼...
2. 00:33:690 (2,1) - spacing
3. 00:58:831 (7) - new combo
4. 01:55:451 (6) - 上移一格

[Easy]:

1. 00:31:789 (1,2,3) - spacing
2. 01:19:113 (2,3,4,5) - 这个在easy里有点...
3. 01:22:493 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
4. 01:47:634 (2,3) - easy里不要出现这样的pattern...
5. 01:54:606 (3,4) - ^
6. 02:03:268 (1) - 作为spinner后紧跟的note, 尽量起点在圆心附近
7. 02:07:705 (8,9) - easy里太难
8. 02:18:480 (2) - 02:18:690这里一个note足够
9. 02:26:719 (2,3,4,5) - orz
10. 02:30:099 (1,2,3,4) - copy&paste? D:

仍需努力 ^^

Colin Hou wrote:

[Hard]:

1. 00:52:071 (1) - 这个减速不太合
2. 00:41:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing
3. 01:01:366 (2) - 右移3~4格
4. 01:15:733 (1,2,3) - spacing
5. 01:34:958 (10) - new combo
6. 01:53:127 (2) - 这个要是跟vocal的话 应该是在01:53:233
7. 01:58:197 (6) - 加一次折返
8. 02:07:705 (4) - 这个时间上在02:07:493会好点 然后给(3)一个new combo
9. 02:23:338 (1) - 下移两格看起来工整点
10. 02:43:620 (1) - whistle取消 倒是可以在02:42:141 (1)末尾加个whistle
11. KIAI感觉没什么必要..

[Normal]:

1. 00:31:789 (1,2) - 这个速度变换很蛋疼...
2. 00:33:690 (2,1) - spacing
3. 00:58:831 (7) - new combo
4. 01:55:451 (6) - 上移一格

[Easy]:

1. 00:31:789 (1,2,3) - spacing
2. 01:19:113 (2,3,4,5) - 这个在easy里有点...
3. 01:22:493 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
4. 01:47:634 (2,3) - easy里不要出现这样的pattern...
5. 01:54:606 (3,4) - ^
6. 02:03:268 (1) - 作为spinner后紧跟的note, 尽量起点在圆心附近
7. 02:07:705 (8,9) - easy里太难
8. 02:18:480 (2) - 02:18:690这里一个note足够
9. 02:26:719 (2,3,4,5) - orz
10. 02:30:099 (1,2,3,4) - copy&paste? D:

仍需努力 ^^

All fixed

[Colin's]
00:31:789 (1) - 这里怎么听都是3/8折返...

[Hard]
00:34:641 (1) - 这个clap听起来比其他声音都要大..要么移掉要么在这里降低音量
00:41:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - 弄对称来比较好看

whistle有点加多了 可以适当加点finish
00:28:409 (2) - finish
00:41:930 (1) - ^
00:55:451 (4) - ^
01:13:831 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这误导性太强了 我觉得12 67还是放开点比较好
01:34:641 (9) - 这个挺突然的..删了或者在01:34:852 这里加note
01:53:550 (1) - 取消new combo比较好
02:07:916 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这之间的间距应该一致

[Normal]
00:57:564 (5) - 后移1/4
01:19:113 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 感觉作为一个normal稍微有点难
02:19:113 (6) - new combo

[Easy]
00:47:423 (2,3) - spacing

我觉得音效加最好的是easy...其他难度有点wh太多的感觉

加油

fixed

Download: BoA - soundscape (S_h_i_a) [Colin's].osu

Colin Hou wrote:

fixed

added

[Hard]
- hitsound are too loud
01:13:831 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - could you please fix there spacing, really hard to tell between 1/2 and 1/4.
02:21:859 (7) - [suggestion] add new combo?

[Normal]
01:10:028 (4) - fix spacing please, too far from (3)
01:54:606 (4) - ^
02:03:268 (1) - this note is coming a bit too fast after spinner for Normal, please make a spinner shorter or delete the note.
02:07:704 (8) - add new combo? combo is just a bit getting too long.

[Easy]
02:03:268 (1) - this note is coming a bit too fast after spinner for Easy, please make a spinner shorter or delete the note.

[Colin's]
02:11:719 (6) - [suggestion] add new combo?

that is all for me.

orioncomet wrote:

[Hard]
- hitsound are too loud
01:13:831 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - could you please fix there spacing, really hard to tell between 1/2 and 1/4.
02:21:859 (7) - [suggestion] add new combo?

[Normal]
01:10:028 (4) - fix spacing please, too far from (3)
01:54:606 (4) - ^
02:03:268 (1) - this note is coming a bit too fast after spinner for Normal, please make a spinner shorter or delete the note.
02:07:704 (8) - add new combo? combo is just a bit getting too long.

[Easy]
02:03:268 (1) - this note is coming a bit too fast after spinner for Easy, please make a spinner shorter or delete the note.

[Colin's]
02:11:719 (6) - [suggestion] add new combo?

that is all for me.

All fixed

Is it ok if I'm going to bubbles this map, Bubbled.


Good luck!

<easy+hard>
綠線都偏離拍子一些,用手動幫他們整好吧

其他都沒問題了

tags 改成 Colin_Hou? Orz

Alace wrote:

<easy+hard>
綠線都偏離拍子一些,用手動幫他們整好吧

其他都沒問題了

改掉了。 Colin的TAG问题也改了

ok time to rank

congrats!

grats~

^ - ^ 回想当年你找我看这图的时候...岁月如梭啊