Hi from request~
General01:17:794 - You should put the end of the kiai time here, unless you had a good reason for it being on 01:17:679.
01:47:331 - idk, but I think hits should be coming up to here.
Also, AiMod said that the Preview times are different for some of the difficulties.
Kantan00:09:490 - Add a hit here. It feels a bit odd having a gap here at a large white tick; it is quite rare to see no hit on a large white tick in Kantans.
00:10:874 - Add a hit here to match vocals (kamehamehameha lol)
00:22:412 (25) - Remove finisher. It's definitely possible to have it here, but there is no finisher on 00:20:566 (22) which has a very similar sound.
00:24:258 (28,29) - Change to
k k would match the pitch of the vocals better.
00:26:104 (31) - You could change this to a spinner or a slider that goes until 00:27:489 to match the ahhhh Also forgot to mention this at 00:03:952 (4).
00:31:643 - Add a hit here for the same reason as the first suggestion.
00:40:873 (50) - Remove finisher. This sounds similar to 00:37:181 (45).
00:55:641 (71,72) - You could match these to be the same colour. Also, finishers would sound good on these hits
Similar to 01:03:026 (82,83).
01:37:178 (127) - You could also change this to a spinner/slider that goes up to 01:38:562.
Futsuu00:03:952 (9) - As said in the Kantan, you could change this to a spinner/slider.
00:10:874 - You could add a hit here to match the kamehamehameha again.
00:24:258 (47,48,49) - Switch the colours of these hits? I think it would match the vocals better.
00:40:873 (80) - Remove finisher if you accepted the finisher removal on this hit in the Kantan.
00:55:641 (109,110) - Same thing about finishers and changing these two hits to be the same.
01:03:026 (123,124) - Make these the same? I liked it the way you had it in the Kantan.
01:06:718 (129,130) - ^
Muzukashii MuzuCA$Hii - That's just a swaggy diff name. Too bad you had to remove it :/
00:22:412 (80) - Again, remove this finisher.
00:24:720 (88) - Change to
k. The pitch of the vocals is the same as the previous hit.
00:26:104 (1) - Maybe end the spinner at 00:27:489? Like you had it in the Oni.
00:40:181 (43) - This slider is a bit short. Remove? It's also inconsistent with the rest of the difficulties.
00:40:873 (44) - Once again about the finisher.
00:55:641 (101,102) - Also again about matching the hits to each other and adding finishers. Do this in Oni too if you accept this suggestion.
00:58:410 (107) - Change to
k? It would match vocals better imo.
01:02:103 (118,119) - Ctrl + G these two hits. They sound similar to 01:05:795 (127,128).
01:03:026 (120,121) - Match these two to each other, like in the Kantan. Same in Oni.
01:06:718 (129,130) - ^ Same thing in Oni.
01:16:871 (160) - You should probably have your 1/3 rhythm that you used here for rhythmical consistency.
01:34:639 (207) - Remove for a break. This may be too long of a 1/2 pattern although the song is low BPM.
Swagg OniI'm not sure, but I've been seeing posts where they're suggesting to change the difficulty name to just Oni because Ono doesn't allow custom difficulty names now. Not sure about how that works, but just an fyi.
Also, this difficulty is pretty hard compared to the Muzukashii, so maybe reduce hits where you think you can.
00:01:029 (6,7) - Change to
kk, like you had it at 00:15:797 (73,74). This sounded better imo.
00:01:952 (13,14) - ^
00:06:721 (37) - Remove finisher? Maybe this was accidental.
00:23:912 - You can add a hit here, like you did for most parts that sounded like this.
00:25:297 - ^
00:32:681 - ^
00:34:412 (33,34) - Change to
kkd or
ddk. Same at 00:39:258 (61,62,63).
00:36:373 (45,46,47) - Remove these three hits. No instrumentals or vocals are present here.
00:47:334 (106,107,108,109,110,111,112) - I personally don't like this rhythm how about just this?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/394190500:49:411 - You can add a hit here if you're not too strict on matching to the vocals.
01:10:641 (7,8,9,10,11) - Switch the colours of these hits to match vocals better.
01:16:871 (38,39,40,41) - Change to
kddk for consistency with 00:03:029 (20,21,22,23).
01:18:717 (47,48,49,50) - This 1/3 rhythm doesn't match the instrumentals like the other do. How about something like this?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/394191501:20:102 (54,55,56,57,58) - ^ Except maybe a kkd instead of a ddk at the end.
lol this song XD Hopefully you can M4M one of my maps that I told you about.
Good luck on rank~