1. Average Joe (2.46 stars, 128 notes)
2. Rough and Tough (4.73 stars, 237 notes)
3. Supreme Master (5 stars, 369 notes)

animask wrote:

Here~

I was supposed to call it Yin; right?

CheeseWarlock wrote:

This is pretty great.

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

Hey.

- Add Rukarioman in the Tags (for all diffs)
- Add a Preview Point for all Diffs
- Delete the osb file & fully submit

^All fixed.

[Average Joe]
Seems fine. (Maybe lower Slider Velocity?)


[Rough and Tough]
Seems fine.

[Supreme Master]
I'd fix the "Double Speed" ...Its kinda hard to notice it...Change the color/make it brighter... I'll consider it
Seems fine.

Its a good map

~STAR

Leorda wrote:

[Rough and Tough]
00:20:868 (5) - Allign with 00:20:414 (3)? no
00:21:096 (6) - Allign with 00:19:959 (1)? ^
00:38:382 (1) - Finish at end is too loud, maybe replace with clap? yes
00:38:837 (2) - ^ ^
00:39:291 (3) - ^ ^
01:30:239 (2) - Can you lower the volume for this object? It's way too loud
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Leorda wrote:

Aloha!

[General]
1) All SB Elements is over 640x480, you have to resize them Fixed.
2) Rukarioman SB.png is unused? D: Its fine? D;

[Average Joe]
Please double-check the keyframe, there's some lots of unused keyframe. You have to delete the unused keyframe, otherwise this beatmap is run poorly for bad PC. You have to remove it, like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/28365.
Remember what FAQ said. "Moving your object while the music is playing will make the path very ugly". Other than that, it's fine
^Fixed.

[Supreme Master]
Same SB issue at [Average Joe] Fixed.

Great song
STAR

animask wrote:

[Supreme Master]
00:06:994 (5) - Align Horizontally with 2 or 3? Its already there. its align with 2.
00:11:088 (6) - Align Horizontally with 3? Fixed.
00:40:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Clap pattern is backwards...(should be every half-beat) Fixed.
01:02:718 (5,6,7,8) - idk...just seems sloppy with the positioning. Leaving it like that.

James2250 wrote:

Ignore whatever you disagree with~

Delete empty osb file in folder Fixed.
Remove countdown on every difficulty Fixed.
I almost want to say make the "Double Time" a different color as it kind of blends into the red background behind it, but up to you on that one Fixed.

Supreme Master:
Re-arrange so 00:02:218 (2,3,4,6,8) - are all aligned? Fixed.
00:06:994 (5,6) - align? Nah.
00:10:633 (5,6) - ^ Fixed from previous mod.
00:16:547 (1,2,3,4,5) - redo this so it is in more or a star shape? Close enough?
00:20:186 (1,5) - align to make shape look nicer Fixed.
00:28:374 (5,6,7,8) - could fit into the pattern before it more Fixed.
00:39:746 (7,8,9) - would look better if didn't go under previous notes Fixed.
00:59:307 (9,10) - add whistles to these ones, same as ones before it I forgot to do that. Fixed.
01:02:718 (5,6,7,8) - odd pattern, I would align 6 and 7, and 5 and 8 Its a different pattern now
01:13:636 (2,3,4,6) - align? I align 6 only.
01:21:369 (6,7,8) - move more to the left so spacing looks more equal? Fixed.

Nice song/maps
*star*

DiamondCrash wrote:

Rough And Tough;

00:11:316 (7,1) - Spacing. it's a ew combo and was meant as anti-jump, put it now at the horizontal flip position of (5)
01:09:997 (2,3,4) - Horizontally flip. okay
01:30:239 (2) - I really don't think this is suitable for anything easier than the hardest difficulty. Will keep it though

DiamondCrash wrote:

General;

Delete dat .osb Done.

Supreme Master;

Those 2x sections are silly silly silly use 1.5 or something and delete the warning image and stuff rarrrgh I'll consider it.

IceBeam wrote:

[Average Boy]
00:31:077 (x) - As I've asked in irc,fix the timing sections,change offset to 00:31:103.Anyway,this Kiai fountain confused me a bit,and I was near to missclick.I'm not sure if you could add a note right here(sounds weird in currently pattern,yes),but think of it,maybe you could solve this out.
01:31:128 (x) - ^ Same.Change to 01:31:149.

^All fixed.

[Supreme Master]
I'm not sure if using 2x is necessary... Your the second person that asked me that. I will do something about that if another person says the same thing
Also,maybe reduce HP Drain Rate/OD a little? Nah.

00:09:041 (10) - Add clap,sounds catchy. Done.
00:09:269 (1) - Finish. No.
00:12:680 (10) - Clap. Done.
00:12:908 (1) - Finish. No.
Well,you could use these hitsounds for same moments through all the map,or experiment by yourself.
Try this also:
00:42:703 - Clap. No. ._.
00:42:476 (2,4) - Claps. No. ._.
01:19:322 (3) - Um,maybe mirror from 01:19:777 (4)? Or stack instead. Fixed.

Thanks, Sadka....Ice.
Nice mapset,sounds great and nothing technically wrong.
Star~

Haneii wrote:

~General~
Not too sure if it even matters but Rough and Tough has a different preview time than the other 2 difficulties. Fixed.
Kai time is currently not the same in all difficulties. They look fine to me.
Average Joe difficulty uses a combo colour of white instead of yellow like the other 2 difficulties + doesn't look nice during kiai time I'll fix that.

Maps play great, love this set <3 Yes.


Twinkle twinkle little star

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[Average Joe]
HP-1, AR+1?
00:45:433 (4) - change to a 1/2 slider (with finish at the end?)
01:31:376 (1) - this part has a different new combo set from the first kiai... maybe you want to make them the same?
...so many copy&pastes.

That's for animask to decided.

[Rough and Tough]
00:12:680 (4,1) - spacing.
00:15:182 (1) - i suggest only clap on the last beat but not all the slider.
00:19:959 (1) - just 1/2 from the last spinner... emm though ok but i'd like to delete this note.
01:16:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - really need to do this jumps..? as i see it's the only part use such a spacing...
01:34:788 (1,2,3) - not a good "parallel" shape...

That's for Rukarioman to decided.

[Supreme Master]
...tbh i don't think 2x bpm slider make sense. Okay, I'll get rid of it. xD
00:32:923 (1,2) - whistle at the beginning? Done.
00:34:743 (1,2) - ^ Done.
01:23:871 (1,3) - whistle Done.

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Rough and Tough]
00:12:680 (4,1) - spacing. fixed
00:15:182 (1) - i suggest only clap on the last beat but not all the slider. done
00:19:959 (1) - just 1/2 from the last spinner... emm though ok but i'd like to delete this note. hmmmm okay
01:16:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - really need to do this jumps..? as i see it's the only part use such a spacing... I wanna keep it this way
01:34:788 (1,2,3) - not a good "parallel" shape... changed it a bit

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Average Joe]
HP-1, AR+1? Changed
00:45:433 (4) - change to a 1/2 slider (with finish at the end?) Changed
01:31:376 (1) - this part has a different new combo set from the first kiai... maybe you want to make them the same? Changed
...so many copy&pastes. It's pretty copypasta~

• 01:24:780 (3) - Remove new combo?
  01:28:420 (1) - ^
  01:45:705 (1) - Spinner?01:44:113 (4) - Add finish at the end, and remove the spinner after this? (Same end as other 2 diff?)

• 00:57:715 (5,5) - hmm, remove clap at the slider end?
  01:07:040 (5) - Clap-Finish-Whistle?

• 00:36:562 (1) - Whistle
  00:37:927 (5) - Clap
  00:38:382 (1) - Whistle
  00:39:291 (5,6) - ^
  00:40:201 (1) - ^
  00:41:111 (5,6) - ^
  00:42:021 (1) - ^
  01:02:718 (5,6,7,8) - Make a symmetry like this?
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:03:856 (9,1,2,3) - move these up for 3~5 grid? (distance between 01:04:310 (3,4) is like 1.7x, 01:04:765 (6,7) and 01:05:220 (9,10) are 1.9x)01:42:976 (5,6) - Whistle?

Selee wrote:

Just some suggestions..mapsets are fine

[Average Joe]

• 01:24:780 (3) - Remove new combo? Fixed
  01:28:420 (1) - ^ Fixed
  01:45:705 (1) - Spinner? ?
  01:44:113 (4) - Add finish at the end, and remove the spinner after this? (Same end as other 2 diff?) No

Selee wrote:

Just some suggestions..mapsets are fine

[Average Joe]

• 01:24:780 (3) - Remove new combo?
  01:28:420 (1) - ^
  01:45:705 (1) - Spinner?01:44:113 (4) - Add finish at the end, and remove the spinner after this? (Same end as other 2 diff?)

[Rough and Tough]

I got this covered.

• 00:57:715 (5,5) - hmm, remove clap at the slider end? Done.
  01:07:040 (5) - Clap-Finish-Whistle? Done.

[Supreme Master]

Based on 00:31:331 (1,2,3,4,5,6) pattern

• 00:36:562 (1) - Whistle Done.
  00:37:927 (5) - Clap Done.
  00:38:382 (1) - Whistle Done.
  00:39:291 (5,6) - ^ Done.
  00:40:201 (1) - ^ Done.
  00:41:111 (5,6) - ^ Done.
  00:42:021 (1) - ^ Done.
  01:02:718 (5,6,7,8) - Make a symmetry like this? Okay. o:
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:03:856 (9,1,2,3) - move these up for 3~5 grid? I'm going to leave 9 on top (distance between 01:04:310 (3,4) is like 1.7x, Fixed the spacing on that one 01:04:765 (6,7) and 01:05:220 (9,10) are 1.9x) Those too.01:42:976 (5,6) - Whistle?

Done.

animask wrote:

I'll give your mod a 7/10. (Based on how appropriate the suggestions were and if they were useful.)

1. Preview Time is different on [Average Joe]

1. 00:42:248 (3) - New Combo.
2. 00:44:068 (1) - Remove New Combo.
3. 01:23:871 (1,2,3) - Uh this looks bad and might be too confusin for new players, Try to change it.
4. 01:27:510 (1,2) - ^
5. 01:42:294 (3) - New Combo.
6. 01:45:705 - The other diffs end here, and you placed here a very long slider, consider ending the diff here.
7. Seems fine while playing.

1. 00:11:316 (1) - This "Finish" doesn't fit here imo.
2. 00:12:680 (4,1) - I'd suggest to unstack this, Color stacking looks ugly.
3. 00:21:437 (7,1) - ^
4. 01:27:055 (3,1) - ^
5. 01:40:019 (6,1) - ^

1. Cool~

Gonzvlo wrote:

General:

1. Preview Time is different on [Average Joe]

Average J.: I got this covered for animask.

1. 00:42:248 (3) - New Combo. Okay.
2. 00:44:068 (1) - Remove New Combo. ^
3. 01:23:871 (1,2,3) - Uh this looks bad and might be too confusin for new players, Try to change it. I'll take that as a consideration.
4. 01:27:510 (1,2) - ^ ^
5. 01:42:294 (3) - New Combo. Okay.
6. 01:45:705 - The other diffs end here, and you placed here a very long slider, consider ending the diff here. Alright then.
7. Seems fine while playing.

R&T: I got this covered for Rukarioman.

1. 00:11:316 (1) - This "Finish" doesn't fit here imo. Okay removed.
2. 00:12:680 (4,1) - I'd suggest to unstack this, Color stacking looks ugly. Hm. Your right.
3. 00:21:437 (7,1) - ^ Nah.
4. 01:27:055 (3,1) - ^ ^
5. 01:40:019 (6,1) - ^ Fixed.

Supreme Master:

1. Cool~

Nice Mapset, Nice Guests, Star.

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[Average Joe]
00:58:397 (1) - Maybe add a repeat to this slider so you don't have that tiny break afterward? Done.

[Rough and Tough]
00:25:872 (1,2,3) - These offbeats feel weird against the on-beat strings going on in the song. Meh. Seems alright to me.
01:18:639 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:31:376 (1) - Suddenly so much quieter for the kiai section. Odd. I checked the previous Kiai section. Seems that both the volumes are the same.

[Supreme Master]
There are some holes in your clap usage near the end, if you want to comb through that. Thanks for pointing that out.

Good stuff. <3